Comments on community poems by Garth Rakumakoe
- Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab)
God forgot to bless the child.
The hearts under rubble.
It tears me...
April 6th, 2025 02:44 - Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab)
I read it more than once. A heart wrenching reality, in high definition....
April 6th, 2025 02:41 - She yearns (Meikie Kodisang)
No amount of comprehension can swim the depth of these words, and to...
March 28th, 2025 08:21 - You bring it out. (Meikie Kodisang)
So heartfelt and filled with intense meaning... You weave a mighty pen,...
November 30th, 2024 14:11 - I Am (Tony36)
Loaded with intent and purpose... Respect!
November 13th, 2024 07:20 - Scarlet Skirts (Cassie58)
So relatable to life. To time. The passing of it, and the value we place...
November 12th, 2024 09:12 - Naked People (Garth Rakumakoe)
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October 12th, 2024 09:25 - Time (Tony36)
Well said.
October 3rd, 2024 09:11 - Bonfire (Tony36)
This pen is woven with the black night sky, filled with stars....
October 3rd, 2024 09:10 - Comfort Place (Tony36)
Seamless. Honest. Profound. This piece is a warm fireplace in its own...
October 3rd, 2024 09:05 - Reading (Tony36)
The mind of a reader really is a wondrous thing! - Superbly written!
October 3rd, 2024 09:04 - Yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
With every sentence one can feel how the hammer drives the nail home on...
August 17th, 2024 12:17 - A rotting poem (Sorenbarrett)
The poetic integrity here is solid. I love it.
July 26th, 2024 07:46 - Hope (Sorenbarrett)
Loaded, loaded, loaded!!!!! - The pinpoint accuracy - I bow...
July 26th, 2024 07:28 - The Hands Behind the Wheel (Rocky Lagou)
The duality of love, acceptance and desire screams so loud in this piece...
March 2nd, 2024 09:24 - From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15)
Loaded with meaning and poetic mastery... A heavy piece, delivered just...
February 23rd, 2024 04:41 - Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful!
February 23rd, 2024 04:38 - Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab)
This mysteriously takes me to the Middle East affair for some reason, and...
February 20th, 2024 06:16 - The Clear-Out (Tom Dylan)
When the beginning was the end and the end is the beginning - Wishing your...
February 13th, 2024 07:00 - Prophets and Losses (Tom Dylan)
I love the storyline... Delivered with such candid humor and just poetic...
February 13th, 2024 06:56 - Famine (Neville)
When famine walks the land. Brought to life so vividly, by your pen sir. A...
February 5th, 2024 08:32 - Shooting Stars (Garth Rakumakoe)
You have it spot on sir. Very good analysis applied there. Thank you.
February 5th, 2024 08:17 - I could never (Alan R)
If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument....
February 2nd, 2024 05:13 - Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab)
I love how it ends so openly, and continuously as though that end never...
February 2nd, 2024 05:04 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
This is the stuff timeless books are written of... It\'s such a \"touch,...
February 2nd, 2024 04:57 - Connectivity (Garth Rakumakoe)
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November 5th, 2023 06:56 - Daddy\'s Little Girl (GiftedT17)
Endearing and honest... I feel the humbling spirit flowing through this...
November 4th, 2023 00:22 - The Ponder Of It All (Garth Rakumakoe)
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November 4th, 2023 00:15 - In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15)
Compelling title, seminal lines, loaded message - Blissful!
November 3rd, 2023 04:28 - Empty Nest (GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ)
A life truth in the raw. Very very real and relatable.
November 3rd, 2023 04:01 - I was too happy (Caz84)
A love trepidation. Very well depicted.
November 3rd, 2023 03:57 - Smokes and Love (Pacifique Niyitanga)
We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to...
November 3rd, 2023 03:47 - This is Us .. (Neville)
I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and...
October 28th, 2023 13:26 - Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case)
We are but collective grains of sand, aren\'t we? And the result of our...
October 28th, 2023 13:19 - Sailing (Peto)
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it...
October 27th, 2023 14:04 - Forever Losses (Parisab)
What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light,...
October 25th, 2023 12:28 - Connectivity (Garth Rakumakoe)
Thank you fellow Poet. Much appreciated. ππΌ
October 25th, 2023 12:03 - Back Again. (Goldfinch60)
A cocoon amid untamed beauty! - I love the vivid picture it paints for me.
October 25th, 2023 08:13 - POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ)
Telling the untold and unsaid Liz... Lovely lines, too sublime... This is...
October 25th, 2023 08:03 - Lost Love (Pacifique Niyitanga)
These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such...
October 24th, 2023 10:07 - Pebbles (Chris Duffy)
I love the expression and relativity to life itself... Well crafter dear...
October 24th, 2023 08:53 - The Light Went Out (Peter Gates)
A beautiful life recoil, Mr Gates, and a necessary one too... Finding...
October 24th, 2023 08:50 - I Have You (Christina8)
Reads like a dream, dear poet, and has the allure of a beautiful flower.
October 24th, 2023 08:47 - Afternoon Love. (Goldfinch60)
Timeless love. A classic theme, that you did justice to so well, gifted...
October 24th, 2023 08:45 - The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab)
There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life...
October 24th, 2023 08:17 - Words Unspoken (Garth Rakumakoe)
Accept my gratitude, fellow writer. β€ππΌ
October 16th, 2023 13:44 - Blue (Novaa)
I feel a sense of loss at the surface of your words, anchored by a deep...
October 16th, 2023 13:26 - My Best Mate (Novaa)
What a touching kinship. That human sense of belonging really should be...
October 16th, 2023 13:22 - To The Weird Ones (Garth Rakumakoe)
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October 5th, 2023 15:05 - Social Media Whore (Parisab)
This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love...
October 5th, 2023 07:51 - Old Men of Steel (Parisab)
One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I...
October 5th, 2023 07:41 - Young Moon Killers (Parisab)
Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things...
October 5th, 2023 07:38 - Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab)
Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation...
October 5th, 2023 07:19 - Things I want to remember (Anabasova)
This poem says it all, and personifies all the things we admire about our...
August 28th, 2023 05:44 - When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe)
Very kind words vb... Thank you so much. ππΌ
August 22nd, 2023 14:01 - When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe)
Accept my gratitude, dear Nev... This piece wrote itself in many ways. To...
August 19th, 2023 02:11 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
We are blessed to be blessings. A poem that captures the message in its...
August 18th, 2023 09:03 - Us. (Murph)
Penned from the heart, going straight to another. An honest, heartfelt...
August 18th, 2023 09:00 - The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60)
Very musical at the same time. I can almost hear the music!
August 18th, 2023 08:58 - Fear Silence Not (Neville)
Silence is the most understanding and accepting, of all friends. Silence...
August 18th, 2023 08:56 - Requiem For a Lost Cause (Neville)
These words bridge many more gaps than the ones on benches my friend. Be...
July 21st, 2023 09:47 - Grief (2781)
Quite an apt descript in title, and wise in content... Honest in every...
July 19th, 2023 15:15 - WHY (Ayve)
I applaud. A magnificent write this is. How it encapsulates all pain and...
July 19th, 2023 14:34 - Two Ants One Question (Neville)
It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! π€π½
July 19th, 2023 14:20 - break of dawn (Arqios)
Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A...
July 19th, 2023 14:10 - Eternal Serenade (Jennifer George)
Bravo, dear Poet. Penned with style down to a tee. β€
July 19th, 2023 13:59 - A LETTER TO YOU (LIZ)
These words give freely out of an overflowing heart. Though the tinge that...
July 14th, 2023 04:17 - I Remember (Bella Shepard)
I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer,...
July 14th, 2023 04:13 - I\'m A Woman (Rebecca Langley Jensen)
Such opulence of sensory write deserves only top marks... Compelling and...
July 11th, 2023 09:27 - Drunken tears (Natalie Heisey)
The plight of the challenged human spirit, faced with regressive obstacles...
July 11th, 2023 09:22 - My Nevada (Teddy.15)
Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and...
July 11th, 2023 09:13 - Man Eater (Neville)
It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me,...
July 11th, 2023 09:11 - Words fail me. (Job Welime)
This made my heart melt, especially the last stanza... That powerful...
July 11th, 2023 09:02 - I am not (2781)
Nice one! - it\'s got sass!
July 11th, 2023 08:50 - Just Me. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful message about true authenticity! - I love it!
July 11th, 2023 08:38 - The Way Only You Can (Garth Rakumakoe)
Absence and the fondness of heart, definitely sir. Thank you so much for...
July 7th, 2023 14:00 - Emotions (GlitteryTurd)
An honest write hey. Beautifully woven.
July 5th, 2023 09:31 - Eyes (Saxon Crow)
Legendary!
July 5th, 2023 09:26 - Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15)
The magnanimity of love! - Beautifully captured Teddy.
July 5th, 2023 06:07 - Radiate (Peto)
Beautiful piece, Peto... Loved every line!
July 5th, 2023 06:05 - When One is No Longer (Neville)
This poems literally turns inside out in meaning and metaphor. A brilliant...
July 5th, 2023 05:49 - Late Night Thoughts (Spookystargirl)
So much said without too many words. I have a feeling I shall be passing...
July 2nd, 2023 23:49 - as the days pass (Spookystargirl)
Sad. Reflective. Charged and Powerful. Thank you for sharing. β€
July 2nd, 2023 23:47 - If You Leave (Roselyn)
The words touch so gently, and the honesty is so vulnerable. Written from...
July 2nd, 2023 03:09 - Bread (2781)
The bread of life! β€
July 2nd, 2023 03:06 - In Crevice (Garth Rakumakoe)
Profound and wise words, Neville. Thank you, kindly.
July 2nd, 2023 03:04 - The Power of Being While Doing (Sophenia)
The power these words carry makes this piece more than just a once off...
July 2nd, 2023 03:01 - Writers block (Peto)
An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.ππΌ
July 2nd, 2023 02:57 - When the Limelight Sucks (Neville)
Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from...
July 2nd, 2023 02:54 - Love Is (Saxon Crow)
A thing of beauty! ππΌ
July 2nd, 2023 02:47 - Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe)
Noted sir, very much so. I concur completely. Perhaps I err on the side of...
July 1st, 2023 20:20 - Pomegranate (Parisab)
So the title caught my attention, and the content justified and exonerated...
July 1st, 2023 17:19 - Jazz Liberation (Parisab)
\"Like a cat making love to Jazz in the alley...\" \' Wow! - Killer...
July 1st, 2023 17:11 - Carrying Water (Garth Rakumakoe)
I have no words to show my gratitude for such a moving response. May...
June 30th, 2023 07:28 - Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe)
Cherished words, L.B - Never to lose significance. Humbly yours sir. β€
June 30th, 2023 07:21 - I hate (Ekh)
This piece says it all breaks it all down into edible pieces, the reality...
June 29th, 2023 15:14 - My Giant (Teddy.15)
For man shall not live on bread alone... A true reminder of who and what...
June 29th, 2023 14:51 - Death\'s wings (Star hunter)
A magnificent way to describe death, as a vulture in the night, unseen,...
June 29th, 2023 14:49 - I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER (Bobby O)
Love the lingo, love the expression and stance of the piece. The truth...
June 29th, 2023 14:46 - Note (Peto)
Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An...
June 29th, 2023 14:43
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