Comments on community poems by Garth Rakumakoe

• The Hands Behind the Wheel (Rocky Lagou) The duality of love, acceptance and desire screams so loud in this piece...
  March 2nd, 2024 09:24
• From where the wild roses grow (Teddy.15) Loaded with meaning and poetic mastery... A heavy piece, delivered just...
  February 23rd, 2024 04:41
• Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful!
  February 23rd, 2024 04:38
• Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab) This mysteriously takes me to the Middle East affair for some reason, and...
  February 20th, 2024 06:16
• The Clear-Out (Tom Dylan) When the beginning was the end and the end is the beginning - Wishing your...
  February 13th, 2024 07:00
• Prophets and Losses (Tom Dylan) I love the storyline... Delivered with such candid humor and just poetic...
  February 13th, 2024 06:56
• Famine (Neville) When famine walks the land. Brought to life so vividly, by your pen sir. A...
  February 5th, 2024 08:32
• Shooting Stars (Garth Rakumakoe) You have it spot on sir. Very good analysis applied there. Thank you.
  February 5th, 2024 08:17
• Metaphors of change (Accidental Poet) So much said, with so much spared. A mature ink this is, from you. Kudos...
  February 5th, 2024 06:36
• I could never (Alan R) If this were a song, I\'d give it to a blues guitar as an instrument....
  February 2nd, 2024 05:13
• Heavy Hearts and Dandelions (Parisab) I love how it ends so openly, and continuously as though that end never...
  February 2nd, 2024 05:04
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) This is the stuff timeless books are written of... It\'s such a \"touch,...
  February 2nd, 2024 04:57
• Connectivity (Garth Rakumakoe) 🙏🏼❤
  November 5th, 2023 06:56
• Daddy\'s Little Girl (GiftedT17) Endearing and honest... I feel the humbling spirit flowing through this...
  November 4th, 2023 00:22
• The Ponder Of It All (Garth Rakumakoe) 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
  November 4th, 2023 00:15
• In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15) Compelling title, seminal lines, loaded message - Blissful!
  November 3rd, 2023 04:28
• Empty Nest (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A life truth in the raw. Very very real and relatable.
  November 3rd, 2023 04:01
• I was too happy (Caz84) A love trepidation. Very well depicted.
  November 3rd, 2023 03:57
• Smokes and Love (Pacifique Niyitanga) We don\'t always need a lot of words. This poem is living testimony to...
  November 3rd, 2023 03:47
• This is Us .. (Neville) I read this, Neville, and failing to find the words, I read it again, and...
  October 28th, 2023 13:26
• Will They Remember Me Well? (Thomas W Case) We are but collective grains of sand, aren\'t we? And the result of our...
  October 28th, 2023 13:19
• Sailing (Peto) These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it...
  October 27th, 2023 14:04
• Forever Losses (Parisab) What a compelling title to start with. This is how poetry shines a light,...
  October 25th, 2023 12:28
• Connectivity (Garth Rakumakoe) Thank you fellow Poet. Much appreciated. 🙏🏼
  October 25th, 2023 12:03
• Back Again. (Goldfinch60) A cocoon amid untamed beauty! - I love the vivid picture it paints for me.
  October 25th, 2023 08:13
• POETIC JUSTICE (LIZ) Telling the untold and unsaid Liz... Lovely lines, too sublime... This is...
  October 25th, 2023 08:03
• Lost Love (Pacifique Niyitanga) These words cross the plains of the now into the afterlife... A love such...
  October 24th, 2023 10:07
• Pebbles (Chris Duffy) I love the expression and relativity to life itself... Well crafter dear...
  October 24th, 2023 08:53
• The Light Went Out (Peter Gates) A beautiful life recoil, Mr Gates, and a necessary one too... Finding...
  October 24th, 2023 08:50
• I Have You (Christina8) Reads like a dream, dear poet, and has the allure of a beautiful flower.
  October 24th, 2023 08:47
• Afternoon Love. (Goldfinch60) Timeless love. A classic theme, that you did justice to so well, gifted...
  October 24th, 2023 08:45
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) There\'s just something about the reassurance trees exude to all life...
  October 24th, 2023 08:17
• Words Unspoken (Garth Rakumakoe) Accept my gratitude, fellow writer. ❤🙏🏼
  October 16th, 2023 13:44
• Blue (Novaa) I feel a sense of loss at the surface of your words, anchored by a deep...
  October 16th, 2023 13:26
• My Best Mate (Novaa) What a touching kinship. That human sense of belonging really should be...
  October 16th, 2023 13:22
• To The Weird Ones (Garth Rakumakoe) 🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
  October 5th, 2023 15:05
• Social Media Whore (Parisab) This piece says it all, with brutal clarity. Definitely a fave... I love...
  October 5th, 2023 07:51
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) One realizes many a times that it\'s because the same old faces, and I...
  October 5th, 2023 07:41
• Young Moon Killers (Parisab) Loaded with so much truth, also showing us, that there are certain things...
  October 5th, 2023 07:38
• Sunday Morning with Miss Etta James (Parisab) Splendid, splendid write dear poet! - I cannot express my appreciation...
  October 5th, 2023 07:19
• Things I want to remember (Anabasova) This poem says it all, and personifies all the things we admire about our...
  August 28th, 2023 05:44
• When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe) Very kind words vb... Thank you so much. 🙏🏼
  August 22nd, 2023 14:01
• When Love Dies (Garth Rakumakoe) Accept my gratitude, dear Nev... This piece wrote itself in many ways. To...
  August 19th, 2023 02:11
• The Long Walk to the Bath. (David Wakeling) Wow... A glorious display of poetic acumen here, delivered in a series of...
  August 18th, 2023 09:13
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) We are blessed to be blessings. A poem that captures the message in its...
  August 18th, 2023 09:03
• Us. (Murph) Penned from the heart, going straight to another. An honest, heartfelt...
  August 18th, 2023 09:00
• The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60) Very musical at the same time. I can almost hear the music!
  August 18th, 2023 08:58
• Fear Silence Not (Neville) Silence is the most understanding and accepting, of all friends. Silence...
  August 18th, 2023 08:56
• Requiem For a Lost Cause (Neville) These words bridge many more gaps than the ones on benches my friend. Be...
  July 21st, 2023 09:47
• Grief (2781) Quite an apt descript in title, and wise in content... Honest in every...
  July 19th, 2023 15:15
• WHY (Ayve) I applaud. A magnificent write this is. How it encapsulates all pain and...
  July 19th, 2023 14:34
• Two Ants One Question (Neville) It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
  July 19th, 2023 14:20
• break of dawn (Arqios) Sharply expressive writing. A lot said in a few. I love the style. A...
  July 19th, 2023 14:10
• Eternal Serenade (Jennifer George) Bravo, dear Poet. Penned with style down to a tee. ❤
  July 19th, 2023 13:59
• A LETTER TO YOU (LIZ) These words give freely out of an overflowing heart. Though the tinge that...
  July 14th, 2023 04:17
• I Remember (Bella Shepard) I love every fabric of this write. so much warmth! - Kudos, dear writer,...
  July 14th, 2023 04:13
• I\'m A Woman (Rebecca Langley Jensen) Such opulence of sensory write deserves only top marks... Compelling and...
  July 11th, 2023 09:27
• Drunken tears (Natalie Heisey) The plight of the challenged human spirit, faced with regressive obstacles...
  July 11th, 2023 09:22
• My Nevada (Teddy.15) Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and...
  July 11th, 2023 09:13
• Man Eater (Neville) It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me,...
  July 11th, 2023 09:11
• Words fail me. (Job Welime) This made my heart melt, especially the last stanza... That powerful...
  July 11th, 2023 09:02
• I am not (2781) Nice one! - it\'s got sass!
  July 11th, 2023 08:50
• Just Me. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful message about true authenticity! - I love it!
  July 11th, 2023 08:38
• The Way Only You Can (Garth Rakumakoe) Absence and the fondness of heart, definitely sir. Thank you so much for...
  July 7th, 2023 14:00
• Emotions (GlitteryTurd) An honest write hey. Beautifully woven.
  July 5th, 2023 09:31
• Eyes (Saxon Crow) Legendary!
  July 5th, 2023 09:26
• Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15) The magnanimity of love! - Beautifully captured Teddy.
  July 5th, 2023 06:07
• Radiate (Peto) Beautiful piece, Peto... Loved every line!
  July 5th, 2023 06:05
• When One is No Longer (Neville) This poems literally turns inside out in meaning and metaphor. A brilliant...
  July 5th, 2023 05:49
• Late Night Thoughts (Spookystargirl) So much said without too many words. I have a feeling I shall be passing...
  July 2nd, 2023 23:49
• as the days pass (Spookystargirl) Sad. Reflective. Charged and Powerful. Thank you for sharing. ❤
  July 2nd, 2023 23:47
• If You Leave (Roselyn) The words touch so gently, and the honesty is so vulnerable. Written from...
  July 2nd, 2023 03:09
• Bread (2781) The bread of life! ❤
  July 2nd, 2023 03:06
• In Crevice (Garth Rakumakoe) Profound and wise words, Neville. Thank you, kindly.
  July 2nd, 2023 03:04
• The Power of Being While Doing (Sophenia) The power these words carry makes this piece more than just a once off...
  July 2nd, 2023 03:01
• Writers block (Peto) An all too familiar feeling Peto. Well depicted sir.🙏🏼
  July 2nd, 2023 02:57
• When the Limelight Sucks (Neville) Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from...
  July 2nd, 2023 02:54
• Love Is (Saxon Crow) A thing of beauty! 👌🏼
  July 2nd, 2023 02:47
• Jazz State Of Mind (Garth Rakumakoe) Noted sir, very much so. I concur completely. Perhaps I err on the side of...
  July 1st, 2023 20:20
• Pomegranate (Parisab) So the title caught my attention, and the content justified and exonerated...
  July 1st, 2023 17:19
• Jazz Liberation (Parisab) \"Like a cat making love to Jazz in the alley...\" \' Wow! - Killer...
  July 1st, 2023 17:11
• Carrying Water (Garth Rakumakoe) I have no words to show my gratitude for such a moving response. May...
  June 30th, 2023 07:28
• Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe) Cherished words, L.B - Never to lose significance. Humbly yours sir. ❤
  June 30th, 2023 07:21
• I hate (Ekh) This piece says it all breaks it all down into edible pieces, the reality...
  June 29th, 2023 15:14
• My Giant (Teddy.15) For man shall not live on bread alone... A true reminder of who and what...
  June 29th, 2023 14:51
• Death\'s wings (Star hunter) A magnificent way to describe death, as a vulture in the night, unseen,...
  June 29th, 2023 14:49
• I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER (Bobby O) Love the lingo, love the expression and stance of the piece. The truth...
  June 29th, 2023 14:46
• Note (Peto) Intense and gripingly real with imagery. The metaphors are strong. An...
  June 29th, 2023 14:43
• Depression The longest journey (Michael Bandee) Poignant, with an uplifting end, that offers hope. A breakthrough in...
  June 29th, 2023 13:10
• Django Alive. (Goldfinch60) The nostalgia is so alive! 👌🏼
  June 29th, 2023 11:42
• Haunting (Christina8) Abstract yet clear in its own way... The emotion behind the lines comes...
  June 29th, 2023 08:20
• Where No Mirrors Are Required (Neville) I love the open ended finishing... it does not always have to be the full...
  June 29th, 2023 08:16
• I\'ve Been Lying (Kinsey Peterson) We all need someone on whose shoulders we can stand, at times. Grateful...
  June 29th, 2023 08:14
• Memories (Peto) A splendid read, musical almost, even. The closing is marvelous and...
  June 29th, 2023 02:59
• In Crevice (Garth Rakumakoe) Thank you vb... Much much appreciated. So much truth in everything you...
  June 28th, 2023 05:03
• Have you ever (Peto) I know the feeling. You called it by name. Literally. A moving piece,...
  June 27th, 2023 20:24
• Leading Light (Orchidee) A blessing to lay eyes upon, this write. Stay blessed. 🙏🏼
  June 27th, 2023 13:42
• Lone Purple (Garth Rakumakoe) Thank you so much... She took various shapes in molding and some...
  June 27th, 2023 11:13
• More (Peto) Abstract, compelling in the way it unfolds. Calls for another read, and...
  June 27th, 2023 10:07
• Obsession (Kathryn Amaka) Speaks of a far away longing, whence the heart feels it belongs, with a...
  June 27th, 2023 09:32