Comments on community poems by Garth Rakumakoe
- Dusty paths (Poetic Dan)
\"Woven in the fabric that covers the heart, to live like you own it from...
December 21st, 2021 15:42 - still waters (Dusk arising)
The changing situational phrases for lack of a better description here are...
December 21st, 2021 15:38 - To the cheers I hold (Spilleronsheet)
Flames, flames, flames! - It speaks so much to so many of us. Defiance is...
December 21st, 2021 15:23 - Signing Out (Neville)
A carving out of the self. This leaves a mark on any reader/writer. When...
December 21st, 2021 15:20 - Karma (Kitty the naughty poet)
She never forgets an address hey 😇
December 18th, 2021 03:58 - Nigh (Eugene S.)
You took a picture of twilight\'s soul with your words there, fellow...
December 12th, 2021 22:05 - Gordon the Gnome (Woundedheart)
What a beam of light! A beautiful story told so delicately well! :-) It...
December 12th, 2021 13:15 - come on in (Dusk arising)
I love the flow of this piece, so beautifully woven! I love it!
December 12th, 2021 13:12 - Skewed (SureshG)
Wise words, wise questions. Very thought provoking. Thank you fellow...
December 12th, 2021 13:08 - Dolour (Draven)
I love the expressed intrigue and tug of emotion clearly articulated here....
December 12th, 2021 13:06 - The Night Dancer (Paul Bell)
A paradox of beauty and tragedy, interrupted by death. Powerful writing...
December 12th, 2021 12:42 - Taken Into Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Through your words, I was there with you Andy, and boy, what a fine day it...
December 12th, 2021 12:39 - Gale (Draven)
Wow... This piece is very alive, with very strong vibrations and a lasting...
December 12th, 2021 12:33 - Blue (Lorna)
My favorite color. You brought it out so well. Thank you, gifted one.
December 12th, 2021 12:28 - Bereft souls (Spilleronsheet)
Not all gifts come wrapped in a box. Some are just words that speak to...
December 12th, 2021 12:26 - Yellow (Lorna)
The radiance of sunlight! Things we take for granted till they\'re no
December 12th, 2021 12:15 - The Final Rehearsal. (Goldfinch60)
A piece of eloquent splendor. Speaks directly to the heart.
December 12th, 2021 12:09 - Dead Fox (Saxon Crow)
There\'s a lot of meaning depth here. I also love how some of it appears...
December 2nd, 2021 08:49 - No Home (Lorna)
Loaded with so many unasked questions, mainly though, how we live with...
December 2nd, 2021 08:31 - Hold On (Ishwari394)
\"Hold on to yourself, even if you are slipping away\" When all is said...
December 2nd, 2021 08:22 - Weary (Hurtbutterfly)
Your words build a fort dear poet, and weave refuge and self-comfort....
December 2nd, 2021 08:18 - The Boots (Paul Bell)
Highlights the things money can and cannot buy, give, or take even,...
December 2nd, 2021 08:04 - Spankings. (Kitty the naughty poet)
OMW, I couln\'t stop laughing at the glowing bums part! :-)... Jokes...
December 2nd, 2021 07:56 - The Lone Man Humble (Nicholas Browning)
\"And when it\'s down to you and me,
I\'m in love with possibility.\" -...
December 2nd, 2021 07:39 - Tenderness (James Alexander)
The stuff powerful love songs are made of. Your words restore faith sir...
December 2nd, 2021 07:33 - Living with a scar (Spilleronsheet)
You tell the story so well, dear poet, that one does not need to have had...
December 2nd, 2021 07:29 - Making Rainbows Blindly (Neville)
Sounds to me like the start of what is to be a happy ending, or a very sad...
December 2nd, 2021 07:23 - Faking (Fay Slimm.)
All is fair in love and war they say. This piece points out just how...
December 2nd, 2021 07:17 - First Snow (Lorna)
What a beautiful picture to get lot in! :-)
December 2nd, 2021 07:12 - We Never Know. (Goldfinch60)
Some puppets on a string we are. Talks of a new world order are heard...
December 2nd, 2021 07:10 - promise me (Dusk arising)
A story of lives shattered from pain, trauma, and loss, told achingly too...
December 2nd, 2021 07:06 - Looking. (Goldfinch60)
A truth of life. The half full/empty glass. Very true Andy.
December 1st, 2021 13:44 - Exchange (Fay Slimm.)
An heated exchange definitely. I love how you mold the unseen into clear...
November 28th, 2021 14:12 - Hymn of Apparatus (Nicholas Browning)
Wizardry. Mystique. Urban legend like almost even. Dark figures in trench...
November 28th, 2021 13:50 - Heaven and Hell (Paul Bell)
Being a writer is truly something special isn\'t it? As special as writing...
November 28th, 2021 13:43 - bear faced lies (Dusk arising)
The creativity angle is so pleasantly unexpected. For some reason I do...
November 28th, 2021 13:39 - Lovely Rainbows (Dove)
Lovely piece. Admirable! Thank you for sharing.
November 28th, 2021 13:35 - Why I love her🥰 (Job Welime)
\"I think forever should be our best man...\" - Very original. I love this...
November 28th, 2021 13:33 - Summer 19.. (Neville)
Like the summer of \'69... Beautiful sir, absolutely beautiful! Classic,...
November 28th, 2021 13:30 - On My Mind (Lorna)
When two are one, timelessly. This is a stunner!
November 27th, 2021 15:55 - From Experience. (Goldfinch60)
No better teacher, than experience herself. A life truth there Andy....
November 27th, 2021 14:00 - upon midnight (Dusk arising)
It leaves a residue hey. It does, in its mystery of sorts. I am moved,...
November 27th, 2021 13:35 - Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning)
Braveheart, King Arthur, Hercules... and even Scorpion King all in one. A...
November 27th, 2021 13:20 - I wonder (Spilleronsheet)
The wonder of wonders... What lies beyond... Don\'t we all wish we could...
November 27th, 2021 13:13 - Down With Everything (Neville)
When one does not even flinch anymore. It\'s the oddest thing that in love...
November 27th, 2021 13:08 - Dip Your Brush Into Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
I love love love Jazz Andy. To learn this beautiful hue was Jazz inspired...
November 27th, 2021 12:52 - Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville)
I heard voices sing. That\'s how good this is. It\'s almost a stairway to...
November 27th, 2021 12:22 - Only if (Spilleronsheet)
A beautiful write, dear Poet. I love it. Thank you.
November 26th, 2021 05:05 - Voiceless (Fay Slimm.)
I think you moved the earth\'s crust with this one here Fay. It is very...
November 26th, 2021 03:54 - Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
An acquired delight, solitude is. Not for everyone. I\'m quite certain...
November 25th, 2021 05:21 - An Unmistakable She (Neville)
A thing of splendor. Magnetic, even. Well written sir.
November 25th, 2021 05:13 - The Last Waltz (Paul Bell)
Your brush strokes Mr Bell, are quite something. A picture worth a...
November 25th, 2021 04:53 - Ma Petit Serviette (Neville)
He was a man with secrets of his own, parading as views hidden in plain...
November 24th, 2021 09:45 - The Reunion (Paul Bell)
It\'s visual art in words. Motion picture even. Brilliant, Paul....
November 24th, 2021 06:13 - Lost Worries. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely. I couldnt agree more with the sentiment expressed. A mind...
November 24th, 2021 06:11 - One Of Our Favourites. (Goldfinch60)
The last line stings, and turns everything on its head. Well written. A...
November 24th, 2021 06:09 - Dreams of Life Unlived (Nicholas Browning)
The windmills of the mind, so perfectly articulated. It\'s a beautiful...
November 24th, 2021 06:07 - First meeting (Spilleronsheet)
So their love stayed strong and stayed there, in their hearts, always......
November 24th, 2021 06:02 - Linger (Neville)
It is poignant in its own way, Neville, and as usual its emotion is quite...
November 24th, 2021 06:00 - Be To Me (Fay Slimm.)
A timeless write this, dear Fay. Timeless!
November 24th, 2021 05:41 - An All Too Certain Falsity (Neville)
How at times you say so much about a theme or subject without saying much...
November 23rd, 2021 06:13 - Adorned: with their petals of Thorns (L. B. Mek)
\"fickle those Bystanders, like me
that share their heart’s...
November 23rd, 2021 05:21 - The Sun, Sky and Sea. (Jayasree)
A breathtaking canvass! - Definitely a fave.
November 22nd, 2021 02:47 - afraid (Dusk arising)
Those words just erase everything, and question whether anything was real...
November 22nd, 2021 02:45 - An All Too Familiar Modus (Neville)
The praying mantis lover. Apparently their kind are the most irresistible....
November 22nd, 2021 02:42 - Spellbound (Fay Slimm.)
I think the question is how real or how virtual is virtual reality,...
November 22nd, 2021 02:37 - Don\'t Think Too Much. (Goldfinch60)
Overthinking breeds worry, and half the things we worry about never happen...
November 22nd, 2021 02:29 - I’m the problem (Hurtbyherdad0316)
Definitely an emotional outpour and exhale. I guess writing is a form of...
November 21st, 2021 03:01 - Plodding A Path (Orchidee)
Amen, and Amen. Thank you for the blessing.
November 21st, 2021 02:54 - Today. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Something we all need to preserve from time to time. Nobody can pour from...
November 21st, 2021 02:53 - Brenda (Paul Bell)
The understanding between these two certainly has a life and unique...
November 21st, 2021 02:34 - The Guy Who Wasn\'t There (Coyote)
Revealing those invisible figures we all know exist, but seldom make...
November 21st, 2021 02:14 - tide has turned (Dusk arising)
This is a beautiful poem and a compelling read. Well written. I love it.
November 20th, 2021 18:29 - Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
I felt every sway and movement there, Fay. A silhouette-like flow to your...
November 20th, 2021 18:02 - What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60)
Made me smile and chuckle! :-) Humorous and funny! - I like!
November 20th, 2021 14:41 - The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville)
I must say you bring her out in all her grandeur. I see her clearly. An...
November 20th, 2021 14:36 - Have you ever wondered? (Belladonna)
The articulation is marvelous, the poetic language is very sounding and...
November 19th, 2021 08:55 - Shadows. (Kitty the naughty poet)
I love how the first and last parts of the poem mirror each other, very...
November 19th, 2021 08:41 - deceiving the dark (Rebmasters)
I am moved. Thank you, very much.
November 19th, 2021 08:14 - Freedom Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
A sad story with a beautiful ending, Andy. One can tell this is told from...
November 19th, 2021 06:01 - Freedom (Ameljor)
The freedom of being free... Spot on!
November 19th, 2021 05:52 - Narcissistically Speaking (Neville)
An invisible enigma of sorts, narcissism. I read somewhere that we all...
November 18th, 2021 09:09 - The Greatest Gift. (Goldfinch60)
If only we could all adopt this life truth hey, the world would be a much...
November 18th, 2021 08:54 - Who (Fay Slimm.)
Loaded with admirable beauty and sentiment. I love it Fay. It\'s quite...
November 18th, 2021 08:37 - Jack. (Paul Bell)
A beautiful story with wondorous twists Paul. I love the lease of life you...
November 18th, 2021 08:34 - To be, just be (SharonMoemise)
It does not get more genuine than this. So handcrafted, so out of the...
November 17th, 2021 02:02 - A letter to God (SharonMoemise)
Truly amazing. Written with such sincerity, and from the heart. It fills...
November 17th, 2021 01:57 - I\'m that Woman (SharonMoemise)
A phenomenal work of art from a phenomenal pen. This poem swallows the...
November 17th, 2021 01:53 - Just breathe, a little less (Depressionofbecca)
An almost lethal affliction, I can only imagine, when one has no desire to...
November 16th, 2021 10:01 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
Poetry in motion. Absolutely beautiful and vividly descriptive! It\'s an...
November 16th, 2021 09:09 - Ice (James Alexander)
Poignant. Vivid. Honest. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
November 15th, 2021 07:05 - Dolly (Paul Bell)
Gripping clarity. These stories need to be told, and you told it well here...
November 15th, 2021 07:02 - Cherry-Blossom Suicide (Nicholas Browning)
Striking originality. A story hardly ever told as well, told so vividly in...
November 15th, 2021 06:48 - I shall not tether my heart to sorrow (Jeremy Leach)
Wow! - Good sir, the way these words weave with the scenery though... It...
November 12th, 2021 15:03 - Sea Story (Orchidee)
For man shall not live on bread alone. He is the refuge and fortress. Well...
November 12th, 2021 14:54 - Mind, Body & Soul. (Kitty the naughty poet)
How you captured emotion here, is really admirable. I reads like a dream....
November 12th, 2021 14:50 - No Such Thing as Empty Space (Neville)
Miles Davis once said even the silence between the notes is musical. I can...
November 12th, 2021 14:35 - Letting Fade (Fay Slimm.)
The truth of learning to live a life of fulfilment. Learning to dance in...
November 12th, 2021 14:23 - The Brother Hood (Beary1112)
An honest friend giving honest good advice. A friend who would rather be...
November 10th, 2021 09:41 - Metamorphosis (John Prophet)
Evolving evolution. Very smart!
November 10th, 2021 08:36
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