Comments on community poems by Quemis

• Webs of words (Sorenbarrett) Such a narrative, punchy opening. Bravo!
  March 21st, 2025 19:36
• Half A Bag Of S... !!! (Poetic Licence) Agony carried in turns. Pains a part of love, and the trend these...
  March 21st, 2025 19:29
• The derbate (2781) I don\'t even like RFK much, but he wants to gut the Military Industrial...
  June 29th, 2024 20:16
• Love in Friends and Steam (Anabella Aiyanna) I love youuuuu
  February 29th, 2024 02:21
• Thunder Hunger (Kieron) I like the consistency of the metaphor. : )
  February 10th, 2024 12:26
• Apologies (Parisab) Raw, and honest. You are strong.
  October 19th, 2023 23:38
• Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54) Awesome! Really love this one. The flow is perfect. Reminds me of a...
  October 19th, 2023 19:40
• The Small Space (Jarcher54) I know it is well made, As It made me sad. Very to the point. ...
  February 13th, 2023 13:37
• Each Way Endlessly (Quemis) Thank you. Was pretty drunk and depressed last night when i wrote this. I...
  October 1st, 2020 09:45
• Homage to Stephen Crane (Trenz Pruca) This is simple and true. Love it.
  September 25th, 2020 17:19
• A Fragment (Jarcher54) Perfect.
  September 24th, 2020 11:58
• Rearview (Clarissavibes) This is so relatable. Gah. Too close to home.
  April 16th, 2020 22:01
• Star-light Surgery (Quemis) Thanks everyone! Can\'t say too much about it myself... Wrote it...
  March 12th, 2020 18:08
• The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy (Saxon Crow) This is awesome!!! You are so talented.
  March 9th, 2020 15:34
• Slowly, Surely (Tom Wood) I love this - especially the first half of this poem. Such power.
  October 14th, 2019 12:05
• Transient (Quemis) Thank you!
  January 16th, 2019 01:36
• Self Ruin (Jabberwocky) I love this.
  October 6th, 2018 12:03
• Bees Love Haze And A\'s Love B\'s (Pldabbs) Cute. Simple, silly, successful.
  October 4th, 2018 18:52
• treasure chest (LiterateLesbian) This is simple, honest and perfect. Hopeful even. This is great.
  October 4th, 2018 18:50
• the talking of it is over (Jon Nakapalau) This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand. Simple, visual,...
  October 4th, 2018 15:23
• Shoot It All In Red (Edthepoet) I like this one, and its word choice. : )
  October 3rd, 2018 12:37
• WITH TIME (Michael Edwards) Cute and visceral.
  March 2nd, 2018 01:52
• Exodus (Noah) Seriously awesome. Love it.
  September 13th, 2017 14:52
• A Bride Adorned with Inverted Flesh (Bryen Kurdst) A clever and horrid infrastructure, holding up a boiled, tortured...
  August 29th, 2017 23:55
• Another Autumn Comes (Alex Arnot) fall is the best. hands down. well done.
  August 25th, 2017 13:47
• Hippocampus Photography (Abora) \"Who is this guy\" \"Holy shit, seriously. Thanks for showing me...
  August 24th, 2017 10:17
• I Feel Better (WriteBeLight) Good to see your standing up for yourself, and glad to see you back. ...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:11
• Food Fight (WriteBeLight) Cute. : P
  August 3rd, 2017 14:09
• A Hat For That (WriteBeLight) Shes back! Fun! As always.
  August 3rd, 2017 14:06
• My Father Instilled (Kurt Philip Behm) gosh. Beautiful.
  August 3rd, 2017 14:04
• Charmed (Whisperingquill) jesus. Moar.
  July 17th, 2017 21:47
• Symbiotic Stigmata (Whisperingquill) Holy shit. 10/10 would shiver again. Seriously though, good work.
  July 17th, 2017 21:43
• God of Chaos (Alex Arnot) Your imagery is always great. Always like a double tap on the nose...
  July 17th, 2017 00:10
• Stars And The Bright. (Kevin browne) Very visual, and visceral.
  June 21st, 2017 14:38
• Salt (Velvetlascivious) 10/10
  April 19th, 2017 20:05
• Mother Nature\'s Broom (WriteBeLight) One of my favorites. I always liked the idea of the planet being...
  April 9th, 2017 11:22
• Life Behind a Shade (Alex Arnot) really good. : ) Keep it up! the first two stanzas I like alot.
  April 8th, 2017 18:36
• Tribute (JJCooke) Slimey. I like it.
  March 21st, 2017 01:28
• The Visit (JJCooke) Hey! Some other dark stuff on MPS. Awesome!
  March 21st, 2017 01:26
• My Last Etesian (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm) Yea, lets hope not yet. Content is too good.
  March 7th, 2017 04:19
• Validation (WriteBeLight) It has been my experience that the need for outward validation is the most...
  March 6th, 2017 00:30
• Reality A Twin (+8) (Kurt Philip Behm) As above, so below.
  March 6th, 2017 00:04
• My Past Returns (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful.
  March 2nd, 2017 11:29
• Remand (Quemis) also: slakajuster.deviantart.com
  February 22nd, 2017 10:17
• Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight) Thats weird, I wrote alot more than that. Strange. I am drunk...
  February 18th, 2017 03:57
• Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight) Clicked on your latest piece because I had been quiet of late. Was...
  February 18th, 2017 03:56
• Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight) Clicked on your latest piece because I had been quiet of late. Was...
  February 18th, 2017 03:56
• The Eighth Gone Astray (Kurt Philip Behm) So good.
  January 18th, 2017 23:21
• Messing With The Messenger (WriteBeLight) Very true. Good form and rhyme as always. Always the champion of...
  January 17th, 2017 20:11
• Fire Still Burns (Kurt Philip Behm) : )
  January 12th, 2017 11:29
• Man Flu (Daniel) This to me has the best rhythm out of any of your last four or five...
  January 11th, 2017 15:31
• vive la difference (Daniel) Great idea, although I feel like there was some slightly different word...
  January 11th, 2017 15:26
• Coping (HarveyDent) Relateable. Short, to the point, powerful. Keep up the good...
  January 11th, 2017 15:20
• The Seamlessness of True Life (Thumping Heart) All of your work goes way over my head. I hope that saying so is a...
  January 11th, 2017 13:00
• Fossil Fool (Yorke) Relevant and poignant. Very well done. : )
  January 11th, 2017 11:04
• T.M.I. (WriteBeLight) Ha!
  January 11th, 2017 05:25
• One Fell Into The Woodstove (WriteBeLight) : )
  December 31st, 2016 12:28
• blue traveler (Willyweed) strait, to the point, true. Good bounce. The whole shebang. Very...
  December 31st, 2016 12:26
• The Liars Fjord (Kurt Philip Behm) Fucking eh. I really don\'t know how you do it. Such short little...
  December 23rd, 2016 17:56
• The F Bomb (WriteBeLight) Ha! I must admit I am guilt of this, from time to time, and have...
  December 23rd, 2016 06:07
• Hysteria (Augustus) Individuality is important. Gj.
  December 22nd, 2016 12:18
• Willow Tree (111bigdaddy111) Good rhyming and rhythm and all the rest. What she said ^ : ) ...
  December 20th, 2016 23:34
• Night Moves (JustABird) : ( Wow.
  December 20th, 2016 00:05
• Nomadic hearts (Molly Walsh) The exact rift in modern love.
  December 19th, 2016 14:06
• All Movement Stopped (Kurt Philip Behm) Ouch. Writers block? the certain inevitability of family turmoil...
  December 19th, 2016 13:44
• Courting Agony (Myinnervoice) I find that it is one of the hardest things in life, Keeping the...
  December 17th, 2016 04:08
• My Reflection (Jennas) really good bounce, haunting and beautiful and terrible and slick. ...
  December 15th, 2016 01:05
• The Journey of a moment. (ChaoticGood) The idea is great.
  December 14th, 2016 13:46
• sore noses and muddle tums (Isituorme) Good rhythm and bounce!
  December 14th, 2016 13:45
• Little Comfort in the past (Voicesecho88) This font is hard to read. Emotional piece though.
  December 14th, 2016 13:44
• water on rocks (Daniel) No offence to anyone, but I find it hard on this website to find too much...
  December 14th, 2016 13:44
• To Shout Divine (Kurt Philip Behm) Mastery, as usual.
  December 14th, 2016 11:44
• Me (K.T Williams) What if the best romantic love you could possibly find was not the most...
  December 14th, 2016 11:43
• Navel (ver. 2) (The big red chair) This is awesome. Love bouncy, fun rhymes like this. Good for kids,...
  December 14th, 2016 11:37
• Spies in Red Felt: Effen Elves (WriteBeLight) Anyone who argues for the gentler touch is ok in my books, - even if they...
  December 14th, 2016 11:35
• A Dual Birth (Kurt Philip Behm) Woah!
  December 14th, 2016 11:30
• Tempest Of Temptation (SabreLi) Great poem, I feel like the lines could be shorter for a better bounce,...
  December 13th, 2016 13:13
• Deep Down (JustABird)
  December 13th, 2016 13:12
• Winter World Weary (Reivax Camlost) Very, very well written. Great word choice, great rhymes. Perfect...
  December 13th, 2016 13:11
• Condescension (SilverXball) Family stuff like this is so, so hard. Stay brave and creative....
  December 10th, 2016 01:45
• destiny or illusion (K.T Williams) The most relatable feeling ever felt.
  December 10th, 2016 00:49
• Townsfolk (Augustus) This is a fun one. : )
  December 10th, 2016 00:37
• Rugged Frontiers (Satishverma) This is mysterious and amazing.
  December 10th, 2016 00:32
• Give me a reason (Aa Harvey) : ) awesome! that is alot of poems. You can do it!
  December 9th, 2016 10:45
• One More (JWoods) Bounce and rhythm are what I like to see. Top notch. : )
  December 9th, 2016 10:30
• An Active Ass (WriteBeLight) haha. XD
  December 9th, 2016 10:27
• Come into the jungle (Tony36) Awesome. : )
  December 9th, 2016 10:25
• S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) haha! Yes, this photo is a much better smile then the corporate stock...
  December 9th, 2016 10:18
• Old man in a modern world (Daniel) People said the same thing when newspapers became a huge thing. Im not...
  December 9th, 2016 01:43
• The Fall (Kurt Philip Behm) You have better rhythm then anyone I have discovered on here yet. I...
  December 9th, 2016 01:37
• The Jester On The Throne (Kurt Philip Behm) This is seriously awesome.
  December 9th, 2016 01:35
• Adventure in the Winter Storm (AlanLikesToWrite) Keep on keeping on. This is the kind of content I like to see - and I\'m...
  December 9th, 2016 01:28
• S M I L I N G ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Is it ok that I read this as a horror story? The stock photo is...
  December 9th, 2016 01:23
• Plant a thought (Aa Harvey) I like the first two blocks a tonnnn. The first two lines of the...
  December 9th, 2016 01:20
• The poet condemned (Aa Harvey) If the fact that the rhythm is so much more pronounced early in piece is...
  December 9th, 2016 01:10
• The Evil Within (SabreLi) I love some of this bounce. Too fun. Despite the subject matter and...
  December 9th, 2016 01:04
• Threatening Kobold (Kurt Philip Behm) Um, fucking awesome. Seriously.
  December 9th, 2016 00:57
• Untitled (JunusScarin) Love the word choice and the order in any specific line, although some of...
  December 9th, 2016 00:55
• Nice Guys Don\'t Finish Last (Doll in Wonderland) Wow. Call the wrath of the entire literary community down on my head for...
  December 9th, 2016 00:46