Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• How is it....? (Orchidee) It\'s great,\" Popeye, says. \"How\'s it with you? You know, this reminds...
  September 10th, 2025 09:42
• the old home (Arqios) My friend, this is powerful…each detail...the oaken door, the empty...
  September 10th, 2025 09:39
• To spill one\'s guts (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is powerful…madness and truth mingling, bitter and sweet in...
  September 10th, 2025 09:34
• Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan) Yes, Tom…I’ve walked that same way myself, choosing meadows and words...
  September 10th, 2025 09:32
• \'Free Bird\' (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem of paradox makes this a poem of profound truth! Well done here,...
  September 10th, 2025 09:30
• Thar She Blows (Tony Grannell) Tony, this rolls like a true sea song...oars beating, harpoons ready, and...
  September 10th, 2025 09:28
• Valiant Thor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Calling Shawn from Area 51 (not the State for Lovers 🤣), This poem has...
  September 10th, 2025 09:24
• The Broken Mirror (Rebellion_in_sanity) Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut...
  September 10th, 2025 09:17
• Nobody is mine (Priya Tomar) Priya, this carries such strength…solitude turned into sanctuary, self...
  September 9th, 2025 09:23
• He is a Star ⭐️ (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Yes, Petra…I’ve known people whose light keeps burning no matter the...
  September 9th, 2025 09:22
• Stay Glowed Up (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, this radiates encouragement…the rhythm pushes forward like a...
  September 9th, 2025 09:21
• Breathe (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Another fave! That volcano image is what struck me most, Petra. It’s...
  September 9th, 2025 09:20
• Lord, Fix Me (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) I\'ve been here and have prayed this. Powerful, Petra!...
  September 9th, 2025 09:19
• I Love You (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, beautifully written…each image widens the horizon until love...
  September 9th, 2025 09:18
• One Day (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Wow! Really glad you found me, my friend, because in turn I am glad I have...
  September 9th, 2025 09:17
• Day One (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, yes…I’ve been in that place of trying, crying, and reaching for...
  September 9th, 2025 09:12
• Footsteps in the Night (Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice) Petra, this hit me with suspense…the pounding heart, the frozen moment....
  September 9th, 2025 09:11
• The Perfect Wife (Teddy.15) A-freaking-men. Congregation, you can now go home! Enjoy the rest of your...
  September 8th, 2025 07:17
• The Elated Confessant (My First Holy Confession) (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is ecstatic chaos. From phosphorescent holiness to angels...
  September 8th, 2025 07:12
• Child, ONE CHILD (Arqios) Wow! I’ve walked this tension myself—the in-between, the...
  September 8th, 2025 07:09
• No worries (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands with biting humor and bitter truth. The rhymes cut...
  September 8th, 2025 07:06
• 𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this breathes calm and renewal. Each line unfolds like morning...
  September 8th, 2025 07:02
• A Piece of Paper (NinjaGirl) Wow! I’ve felt life fold in on itself the way you describe here, 🥷....
  September 7th, 2025 18:50
• When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone. (Friendship) My friend, this is fierce and freeing…each line strikes like a hammer...
  September 7th, 2025 18:48
• God Was There (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this is heartfelt. You trace the hard places with such honesty,...
  September 7th, 2025 18:42
• Tree and umbrella (Caring dove) Caring Dove, this is tender and beautifully written. The tree whispering,...
  September 7th, 2025 18:41
• Don\'t Look Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Great write, Kurt!
  September 7th, 2025 18:39
• The Boogie Woogie Lovers (Tony Grannell) Tony, this one’s a delight. The rhythm and dialect carry so much...
  September 7th, 2025 18:39
• The Tangerine Sky (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is uplifting. The image of the robin catching that gentle...
  September 7th, 2025 18:36
• “south of the equator” (Arqios) Wow, this is immense. From the Southern Cross above the sinks to the tide...
  September 7th, 2025 18:35
• Night spells (Sorenbarrett) Beautifully done, my friend. The rhythm drives each line like an...
  September 7th, 2025 18:33
• This also has to stop (Orchidee) A horse is a horse of course of course...wait, did Mr. Ed eat spinach too?...
  September 7th, 2025 18:29
• Catatonia (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in...
  September 7th, 2025 18:28
• On life (NafisaSB) Dear friend, this is so warm and uplifting. Each metaphor opens a window...
  September 7th, 2025 18:26
• Fear of Word Blindness (Neville) Neville, this is striking. The fragility in your images...the shattered...
  September 7th, 2025 18:22
• Before I Became Me (Teddy.15) Did I mention I also love the image you paired? Because I do! 🥰
  September 7th, 2025 18:17
• Before I Became Me (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is another powerful one from your Raven Collection....
  September 7th, 2025 18:16
• Scarred but Not Broken (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this is heartfelt. The way you turn scars from marks of pain...
  September 7th, 2025 18:13
• an ill-fitting halo (Arqios) Arqios, this one hit. That crooked grace, the coin spinning between light...
  September 6th, 2025 10:17
• Why? (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is intimate and beautifully written. The way you place soul,...
  September 6th, 2025 10:14
• Role Model (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is raw and powerful. Moving from the little girl to the teen to...
  September 6th, 2025 10:07
• A Whole Heart or Half? (Teddy.15) My friend, this is powerful. The devotion in your lines shines, but that...
  September 6th, 2025 10:05
• Life is a Gift (RSM0812) Beautifully written, my friend. The rhythm of seasons here becomes a...
  September 5th, 2025 10:23
• The Call of The Calling (Rebellion_in_sanity) Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in...
  September 5th, 2025 10:18
• Forever Now (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Well written Kurt! Enjoyed! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 5th, 2025 10:16
• My words are consistently misconstrued? (Friendship) My friend, this is powerful. The strength in your voice comes through...
  September 5th, 2025 10:09
• Cleaver of Devil’s Kitchen (Arqios) Wow! Dear poet and friend, this is immense. The Cleaver speaks with the...
  September 5th, 2025 10:00
• Styles (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I like how each line puts on a different “style” and then...
  September 5th, 2025 09:52
• If Money Didn\'t Exist (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth...though, whether it is paper...or goods (barter/trade)...humans...
  September 5th, 2025 09:42
• Iambic Wotsit (Orchidee) Whosits, whatsits, nowsits, there... Pent-up pentameter\'s growling...
  September 5th, 2025 09:36
• Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence) Missing you, my dear friend!
  September 4th, 2025 19:24
• Handprints (NinjaGirl) Powerful piece, 🥷. You turned something simple into a timeline of...
  September 4th, 2025 17:18
• Feathered Stone (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 4th, 2025 17:15
• A Father\'s Lesson on Trust (Friendship) My friend, this is heartfelt. A father’s wisdom passed down with love...
  September 4th, 2025 17:12
• Love It Or Lose It (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt! And ain\'t it near impossible, though?...
  September 4th, 2025 17:11
• “Lovin’ where I live” (Arqios) My friend, this is luminous and I love it. The parched wind, cracked soil,...
  September 4th, 2025 17:09
• Fear myths of the unknown (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one is stark. The cage, the beaten dog, the tyrant we still...
  September 4th, 2025 17:06
• Devil’s Medical Plan (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues...
  September 4th, 2025 17:03
• my world. (Friendship) My friend, this is haunting. The loneliness breathes through every line,...
  September 4th, 2025 16:28
• The Blood of a Self-Sacrifice (NinjaGirl) Beautifully done, 🥷. The repetition works like an echo of...
  September 4th, 2025 16:27
• This has to stop (Orchidee) Does Fido like spinach? 🤮🤪 Me suggests you feed \'im bones! 🦴
  September 4th, 2025 16:22
• The Perfect Meet-Cute (Teddy.15) Wow! Stunning photo, Teddy...paired with a stunning Senryu! Powerfully...
  September 4th, 2025 11:15
• Firewall (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries weight. The spark, the flame, the blaze...all stack...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:38
• we met again, mid-sentence (Arqios) My friend, this is luminous. The pause becomes punctuation, silence agreed...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:36
• Read till your eyes bleed (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one sparkles with bite. The pearls, the roses, the hoarded...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:31
• On This Special Day (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is tender. The love comes through in the small rituals...bad...
  September 3rd, 2025 11:27
• Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave) My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:57
• My Morning Routine (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, wonderful write. The ritual and the mirror build to that...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:53
• Callous Contemplation (NinjaGirl) Dearest 🥷, this one hit me deep. The stillness around those thoughts...
  September 3rd, 2025 10:50
• One Time Only (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful poem, Kurt! The artist/poet should definitely get this. Well...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:11
• Our Story (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this is tender. The love of God woven into shared story and...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:07
• the quill\'s nocturne (Arqios) My friend, this is haunting. The orchard of ink, the moth on the...
  September 2nd, 2025 10:03
• Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is sharp. The images stack heavy...plastic plants, asphalt...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:24
• Driving Offence (Tom Dylan) Tom, this cracked me up. The chaos of traffic and swearing builds so...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:20
• An Ode To Grief (Teddy.15) My friend, I’ve walked with grief in its many forms too…and the way...
  September 2nd, 2025 09:19
• The Keeper of The Flame (KnightOfCups) Wonderfully written and a powerful metaphore. Love lighthouses too. So,...
  September 1st, 2025 14:21
• Scratching the Surface of a Woman\'s Smile (Teddy.15) Only the guilty would feel need to defend! LOL! Besides, being manly is...
  September 1st, 2025 14:20
• what else is there to say? (NinjaGirl) Oh.........my...........fucking............damn.. This poem deserves to...
  September 1st, 2025 14:06
• Three For Monday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Monday\'s triumphant triptych, that closing line in “Betwixt &...
  September 1st, 2025 14:01
• Fear of Falling (Neville) Yeah. Bummer, huh? I do love the fall, but..................🥺 As for...
  September 1st, 2025 13:58
• My Heavenly Father (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Beautifully done. The reminder that God wipes every tear and makes us...
  September 1st, 2025 13:48
• Review (Jerry Reynolds) Wow! Profound...just 🤯! Well done, Jerry!
  September 1st, 2025 13:46
• mythic greenhouse / hinge of words (Arqios) My friend, this is a marvel. Myth and mechanism breathing in the same...
  September 1st, 2025 13:43
• Too long (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hit me hard. The image of an old dog chained too long…now...
  September 1st, 2025 13:39
• Oh go on......! (Orchidee) He\'s strongs to the finish, because he easts his...pork pies....
  September 1st, 2025 09:50
• To the Light (Tony Grannell) My friend, you’ve practically bottled sunrise here. Each stanza feels...
  September 1st, 2025 09:48
• Ode to Tobin (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! Loved it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 1st, 2025 09:44
• The Man (NinjaGirl) That moment where she freezes before the bite…that image is chilling....
  August 31st, 2025 17:17
• When to Listen Lightly (Neville) Neville, this hit me straight on…tenderness and brutality braided...
  August 31st, 2025 17:15
• So, Ahem, I Have...House Cats (Cheeky Missy) That opening image…dawn rouged like a hag…really had me, Missy. You...
  August 31st, 2025 17:11
• Hell On Retainer (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Love them both, Kurt! Excellent job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 31st, 2025 17:08
• rose cycle (haiku set) (Arqios) This is great, Rik! Roses as survivors, truth-tellers, and quiet vanishing...
  August 31st, 2025 17:06
• Little armor (Sorenbarrett) Haha, Soren…you had me smiling with this one. Tough shell, snaggle-tooth...
  August 31st, 2025 17:03
• Layla (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Wow! So many u forgettable lines in this gem, Hayleigh. That contrast…...
  August 30th, 2025 19:19
• The Marching Poseur (Kurt Philip Behm) Ooh! Killer ending. Love this Kurt! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 30th, 2025 19:16
• Fusion - Nooooo! (Orchidee) A fusion of this, Atomic fission of that, Popeye sat stoned in...
  August 30th, 2025 19:11
• Be Present (Bella Shepard) Beautiful piece, Bella. It reads like a soft reminder to slow down and...
  August 30th, 2025 19:08
• Celestial Sanctuary (Poetic Dan) Beautifully done, Dan. This piece feels like a sanctuary rebuilt…not...
  August 30th, 2025 17:12
• Father\'s day (2781) Fun poem, my friend. Father’s Day is in June where I’m from, but then...
  August 30th, 2025 09:21
• the dam is breached (Arqios) That line — “twisting my words does not make you right”…stopped me...
  August 30th, 2025 09:19