Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Unchanged (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) My friend, I know that tug-of-war between needing help and needing to...
  October 21st, 2025 07:11
• 𝒟ℯ𝓈𝒸𝒾𝓅𝓁ℯ𝓈𝒽𝒾𝓅 (Keyara S Trotman) This feels both prayer and commission...steady, heartfelt, and true. You...
  October 21st, 2025 07:10
• Answer me! (NinjaGirl) This piece is prayer stripped to bone. No artifice, no sermon…just the...
  October 20th, 2025 21:40
• Until Heaven (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This is devotion wrapped in dread, a prayer that doesn’t flinch. You...
  October 20th, 2025 10:57
• dance in the wake (Arqios) Arqios, this is breathtaking…grief and grace woven together until...
  October 20th, 2025 10:55
• Meet Tucker! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) That line about Henry teaching Tucker to grow food and build a home stands...
  October 20th, 2025 10:54
• Blue tit (Caring dove) Reading this, I’m reminded of those small, grace-filled pauses in my own...
  October 20th, 2025 10:51
• Sonnet to war (Sorenbarrett) This is conscience turned into craft. Each rhyme lands like a tolling...
  October 20th, 2025 10:50
• Is There Fire in Love? (Salvia.S) Wow! Short and spectacular in it’s potency! Glad to see a poem from you,...
  October 20th, 2025 10:48
• Prayer Plea (Orchidee) Nice write Orchi! Praying that Popeye will finally not make it to anymore...
  October 20th, 2025 10:46
• Death of a Boxer (Tom Dylan) My friend, I’ve seen moments like that…when a community gathers,...
  October 20th, 2025 10:43
• Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this one hits with quiet rebellion…a refusal to buy into the...
  October 20th, 2025 10:42
• Sometimes (Caring dove) Caring Dove, this is compassion laid bare. You let imperfection...
  October 20th, 2025 10:40
• Tweaking Mona Lisa (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth and a fave!
  October 19th, 2025 11:25
• The uneven pact (Isa kemmy) Reclamation after a relationship ruined. Powerful and I love the form and...
  October 19th, 2025 11:24
• What is Forgiveness? (Friendship) Reading this, I think of the times I’ve had to forgive without...
  October 19th, 2025 11:21
• This Road is Not Easy (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I’ve walked roads like this...ones that twist and test you until faith...
  October 19th, 2025 11:20
• Listened to Chosen One ꨄ➶︎∞︎︎ (Keyara S Trotman) This piece moves like a spell...champagne bubbles over tears. It’s a...
  October 19th, 2025 11:16
• Population explosion (Sorenbarrett) That moment...“Too many rats in a cage”...it’s where everything...
  October 19th, 2025 11:15
• Wise Man Say (28) (Poetic Licence) Tobani, you know I love this series! I was jonesing in your absence...like...
  October 18th, 2025 16:19
• consolation in the kitchen (Arqios) Arqios, this poem glows from the inside out. The everyday turned sacred,...
  October 18th, 2025 08:09
• TO you the Unbowed: final conversation (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is powerful…a thunderous elegy that still manages to kneel in...
  October 18th, 2025 08:08
• Calligraphy (Priya Tomar) Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies!...
  October 18th, 2025 08:07
• Destiny (Paul Bell) This one hit like a back-alley sermon, my friend. The voices, the...
  October 18th, 2025 08:05
• Balance of nature (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like creation’s own reflection—poetic, reverent, and...
  October 18th, 2025 08:04
• 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔄𝔱𝔱𝔯𝔞𝔠𝔱𝔦𝔬𝔫𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔇𝔞𝔯𝔨 𝔚𝔢𝔞𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is tender and true. You turned stormlight into solace, finding...
  October 18th, 2025 08:03
• THE IRONY OF THE FULL HAND (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is exquisite…a parable dressed as a poem. The rhythm, the...
  October 17th, 2025 10:58
• With No Hint of An End (Neville) Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing...
  October 17th, 2025 10:55
• The Drake Havens 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this one crackles with that trademark mischief of yours…heat,...
  October 17th, 2025 10:53
• drinking hemlock (Arqios) Et tu Socrates? 🤣 This one speaks from the gallows of creation...where...
  October 17th, 2025 10:48
• The Price of Instruction. (Friendship) My friend, this piece holds power in its poise. You dissect pride and...
  October 17th, 2025 10:45
• What you want (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is grounded inspiration done right. No fluff...just the call...
  October 17th, 2025 10:43
• Just A Kiss Away🥰 (Keyara S Trotman) Poetry vibez back to you, my friend, who has one of the coolest vibez...
  October 17th, 2025 10:29
• 𝔊𝔞𝔪𝔢𝔯\'𝔰 𝔏𝔬𝔳𝔢 𝓍𝓍𝓍 𝔓𝔩𝔞𝔶𝔢𝔯𝔰 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one shines...half vow, half vibe. The gothic flair, the emojis,...
  October 17th, 2025 10:23
• I Wanna Be a Princess. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, your satire walks that fine line perfectly…provocative but...
  October 17th, 2025 10:17
• The majestic images in a fire. (Friendship) My friend, this glows with mystic reverence. The witch in the fire feels...
  October 17th, 2025 10:12
• Ignorance (Priya Tomar) Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The...
  October 17th, 2025 10:09
• God Bless The Readers (Kurt Philip Behm) To be read. Ah. That is the highest achievement. Even studying is...
  October 17th, 2025 10:07
• Oh God (Paul Bell) Paul, this one’s cheeky as hell…irreverent but self-aware enough to...
  October 17th, 2025 10:04
• beneath black tides (Arqios) My friend, this one breathes from the deep…myth and marrow intertwined....
  October 17th, 2025 10:02
• No give in forgive, no get in forget (Sorenbarrett) Brilliant wordplay in the title alone. That closing image...“Let the...
  October 17th, 2025 10:01
• Thoughts Of Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt. A wonderful love poem.
  October 15th, 2025 14:11
• Golf is Life (After Charles Bukowski) (Thomas W Case) Beautifully written, witty, true. Love it, my friend!...
  October 15th, 2025 13:55
• The Fierce Decree (Friendship) This is powerful, my friend...a manifesto of endurance. You blend strength...
  October 15th, 2025 13:53
• Title (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is chaotic brilliance, my friend…a meltdown turned manifesto....
  October 15th, 2025 13:51
• but words keep rising... (Arqios) Arqios, this is a quiet masterpiece…self-erasure turned confession. The...
  October 15th, 2025 13:42
• Done (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is modern prophecy...our plastic paradise built on ashes.You...
  October 15th, 2025 13:40
• A mad interlude (Orchidee) This maade me laugh, Orchi!...
  October 15th, 2025 13:19
• _ underscore _ (Arqios) Arqios, this is breathtaking craftsmanship____the underscore____as symbol,...
  October 14th, 2025 08:22
• Critical thinking (2781) That phrase “algorithmic dilemma” caught me...it perfectly captures...
  October 14th, 2025 08:21
• Goodbye (Paul Bell) Paul, this piece feels like a requiem whispered through memory. You held...
  October 14th, 2025 08:18
• Missing you (William Hromada) Totally get this. Well done, my friend!
  October 14th, 2025 08:12
• AUTUMN RETURN (Michael Edwards) A beauty and a cutie wrapped in one post! Love it, Michael! Give Stanley a...
  October 14th, 2025 08:12
• Masquerade (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve worn that same mask before...clown’s grin on the...
  October 14th, 2025 08:11
• 𝔚𝔯𝔦𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔫 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this radiates your signature...the mix of mystery, sensuality, and...
  October 14th, 2025 08:09
• Escape (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is quiet devastation…the kind that doesn’t shout, just...
  October 14th, 2025 08:04
• A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions (Neville) Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding...
  October 14th, 2025 08:00
• Migräne (Isa kemmy) Well written, Isa, and described as the beast a migraine is. Well done!
  October 14th, 2025 07:58
• El Gran Canon (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is haunting…a litany that feels like scripture turned inside...
  October 13th, 2025 09:45
• Cock Soft Days (Thomas W Case) Yay! First comment! Very well done, Thomas! Loved this!
  October 13th, 2025 09:45
• Lessons learned in Grief (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, this piece carries grief’s weight with tenderness and light. The...
  October 13th, 2025 09:43
• gather your fragments (Arqios) Friend, this is sacred in its quiet…a prayer stitched in fragments. The...
  October 13th, 2025 09:42
• Good friends (William Hromada) A touching poem, my friend. Well done!
  October 13th, 2025 09:41
• Two Teeth (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Everyone\'s fave trip...the Dentist! LOL! Well done, mate!
  October 13th, 2025 09:40
• Opposites attract (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is searing…nature becomes metaphor for us all, where need...
  October 13th, 2025 09:38
• STORY OF MY LIFE (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this reads like a love spell caught between dream and...
  October 13th, 2025 09:35
• It stole my breath. (Friendship) My friend, this is breathtaking…a painting that turns itself inside out....
  October 13th, 2025 09:34
• Torture (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is haunting…so human in its breaking. And no...they just...
  October 12th, 2025 07:33
• Observational Patterns (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this one breathes with pain and brilliance...a confession, a...
  October 12th, 2025 07:26
• ℭ𝔬𝔫𝔰𝔦𝔰𝔱𝔢𝔫𝔠𝔶 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, “needless to say” but I’ll say it anyway...this one glows....
  October 12th, 2025 07:23
• Some People at Christmas (Poetic Licence) Yikes, I missed this one! But I love it! Next time! I love these fusions...
  October 11th, 2025 12:26
• 𝔚𝔥𝔢𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔦𝔰 𝔒𝔫𝔢 𝔓𝔯𝔬𝔟𝔩𝔢𝔪... 𝔓𝔬𝔴𝔢𝔯 𝔒𝔲𝔱𝔞𝔤𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is morning madness turned art...humor, exasperation, and that...
  October 11th, 2025 08:42
• My tools speak to me. (Friendship) Friendship, this piece shines with gratitude and devotion...the artist,...
  October 11th, 2025 08:40
• Milky Way ( Fun) (Poetic Licence) Tobani, this is delightful...sci-fi whimsy with a wink. You’ve blended...
  October 11th, 2025 08:38
• Near sighted (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is piercing truth wrapped in quiet rhyme...the dream of home...
  October 11th, 2025 08:37
• Your Voice (William Hromada) William, this reads like a serenade to the soul...each line a light in the...
  October 11th, 2025 08:32
• The Planets (Paul Bell) Paul, you’ve written cosmic comedy at its best...sex, astrology, and...
  October 11th, 2025 08:31
• thoughts on world homeless day (October 10) (Arqios) Honestly, on of my faves of yours. My friend, this is haunting and...
  October 11th, 2025 08:30
• Earth\'s Twisted Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shawn, this reads like an anthem for the tired mind...defiance, apathy,...
  October 11th, 2025 08:28
• Survival (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this reads like a mirror to the darker instincts of...
  October 11th, 2025 08:24
• Genocide (NafisaSB) Safina, this is both lament and mirror...each line demanding we look...
  October 11th, 2025 08:22
• Phones Roam (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you’ve done it again...wit, rhythm, and that sly glint of truth. A...
  October 11th, 2025 08:21
• Clipping My Nails (NinjaGirl) 🥷 my friend, this is quietly profound—an everyday ritual turned...
  October 11th, 2025 08:18
• Old Soul (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, I remember feeling that same strange age inside...like your...
  October 11th, 2025 08:17
• Short Putt (Thomas W Case) Gritty and excellent! Love it, Thomas! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 11th, 2025 08:15
• Peace Promise (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! Popeye promises peace pie peppers pop pretentiously....
  October 9th, 2025 20:08
• A Hard Rain (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this reads like a blues confession...Dylan’s ghost humming in the...
  October 9th, 2025 20:03
• Your smile talks (William Hromada) Well done, William!
  October 9th, 2025 20:02
• 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ \"𝒦𝓇𝒾𝓈𝒽𝓃𝒶\" *ℱ𝓇ℴ𝓂 𝒶 𝒫𝓇ℯ𝓋 ℬℴℴ𝓀* (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one hums with mystic passion...divine love rendered through...
  October 9th, 2025 20:01
• the wonder of self-emptying (Arqios) My friend, this is quietly transcendent…emptiness redefined as...
  October 9th, 2025 19:59
• Sometimes She Just Cries (Neville) Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands...
  October 9th, 2025 19:58
• Lighter (NinjaGirl) 🥷 my friend, I’ve felt that kind of fight...where the smallest act...
  October 9th, 2025 19:56
• Flowing Forward (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this moves with calm strength...the voice of someone who’s been...
  October 9th, 2025 19:54
• Eclipse (ThatsSoRaven) Raven, this bleeds with beauty and peril...every line a whisper between...
  October 9th, 2025 19:53
• The bed (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one aches quietly…the image of love’s decay wrapped in...
  October 9th, 2025 19:49
• B.U.T.T.E.R.F.L.Y (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this glows like sunlight through glass...each section fluttering in...
  October 8th, 2025 20:03
• Dwelling Delight (Orchidee) Orchi, this is wonderful…you’ve caught that old-world reverence and...
  October 8th, 2025 19:59
• Tick Tock Doom (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very thought-provoking, as always, my friend! Very well written and I love...
  October 8th, 2025 19:52
• I couldn’t save you. (Friendship) My friend, this one cuts deep…the grief is palpable, the love unhealed...
  October 8th, 2025 14:34
• Black Diamond (William Hromada) Powerful poem, William. Well done! 🌹
  October 8th, 2025 14:33