Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Christ for Jews and Gentiles - OT/NT Series 8 (Orchidee) Well good for the Jews and the Gentiles, but a certain P (we knows who he...
  December 6th, 2025 10:58
• Sex has a leak (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this cracked me up…the whole comparison is wild and somehow makes...
  December 6th, 2025 10:56
• Christmas. (Friendship) Friendship, this whole piece carries the hush and glow of winter… the...
  December 6th, 2025 10:55
• Cobalt (Katie B.) Nothing like having coffee out of a special mug. Well done, my friend!...
  December 6th, 2025 10:51
• Critics (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Well done, my friend!
  December 5th, 2025 11:09
• Recognize. (Friendship) Friendship, the whole poem carries this gentle grief…the way memory and...
  December 5th, 2025 11:09
• When Sorrow Comes to Call (Katie B.) Katie, this one hit me hard…the way sorrow becomes a visitor in that...
  December 5th, 2025 11:08
• cerulean chasm (Arqios) Arqios, you move so smoothly from dismissal to revelation…from seeing...
  December 5th, 2025 11:07
• 𝒢ℯ𝓉 ℴ𝓃 ℐ𝓉 (𝒯ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇ℯ𝒹 ℱ𝓁ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇𝒾𝓃ℊ ℱ𝓁ℴ𝓌ℯ𝓇𝓈) (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, that moment where the words “start writing” shift into this...
  December 5th, 2025 11:04
• Days Of Division - OT/NT Series 7 (Orchidee) Good write, Orchi! Powerful representation of the Scripture. I do love...
  December 5th, 2025 11:00
• An Open Letter To Jay-Z (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I wish these creeps would just leave poor Baphomet alone. It\'s bad enough...
  December 5th, 2025 10:56
• Silent Tears (Teardrop) Teardrop…I am not sure how I missed this when you posted it, but the...
  December 5th, 2025 10:46
• It\'s all smoke (Sorenbarrett) My friend…the pipe becomes a portrait here…embers, fog, scent, all...
  December 5th, 2025 10:45
• Ocean Breeze and Theme (Thomas W Case) The ocean is in my blood, too, living here on the Atlantic side of things....
  December 4th, 2025 18:30
• running into the mirror (Arqios) Rik, the chase, the mirror, the night… you weave them into a truth...
  December 4th, 2025 18:28
• Nature (Katie B.) Agree with Soren, this can be taken both literally or metaphorically. This...
  December 4th, 2025 18:22
• Jack (Paul Bell) Paul, I’m struck by how you hold grief, grit, and wit in the same space....
  December 4th, 2025 18:19
• Hope Of Healing - OT/NT Series 6 (Orchidee) Jesus gave everyone...well almost everyone...the hope of healing. Who\'d...
  December 4th, 2025 17:23
• Random Rhyming (Part.6) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love Tron...but would not want to be stuck in its world! LOL! Well done on...
  December 4th, 2025 17:19
• Sandy claws (Sorenbarrett) How did I miss this earlier? And, my dear friend, the title alone should...
  December 4th, 2025 17:17
• An Ode to Our True Ancestors (Overlords of All Creation) (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) My friend, this whole epic breathes. The science, the spirituality, the...
  December 4th, 2025 11:02
• Searchers Take Flight (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes, yes, yes! Simple and true! Ever new beginning is some other...
  December 4th, 2025 10:52
• ℛℯ𝒻𝓁ℯ𝒸𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki… your words rise like a simple offering…steady and heartfelt....
  December 4th, 2025 10:50
• Eye Contact (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Who is that guy staring at me. No, I\'m not seeing things I tell you!...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:47
• A Multitude Of Notions (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, this piece is an intellectual cyclone…philosophy, science,...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:45
• Tribute To Alex Honnold (Kurt Philip Behm) Been to El Capitan...and ain\'t it the truth! Wonderful poem, my friend!...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:43
• You\'re just not worth it. (Friendship) My friend, the strength here is quiet but undeniable…the reclaiming of...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:42
• Miss Strang (Paul Bell) Paul, this is comedy carnage…the glass eye, the vicar disguise, the...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:41
• call it survival (Arqios) My friend, this piece is soft but piercing…the “small sun” on the...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:39
• Thanksgiving (Teddy.15) Indeed. Everyday should be! Another fine selection from your Raven...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:08
• Imprisoned (Sorenbarrett) Soren…the loneliness in this piece is palpable. That move from nature as...
  December 3rd, 2025 18:06
• Dawning Day - OT/NT Series 5 (Orchidee) Whew! I almost forgot where I am. I swear I must have blacked out for a...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:56
• Dawning Day - OT/NT Series 5 (Orchidee) Dawning day 337\'s light as dusked and is now well...dark. That\'s how it...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:52
• 𝔉𝔬𝔯 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 ℑ 𝔖𝔥𝔞𝔩𝔩 ℌ𝔞𝔳𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this carries fire, longing, and strength all at once… you bring...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:50
• Dark Trophy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with real weight…the predator becoming his own final...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:51
• The First Time (Thomas W Case) My friend, this is raw and beautifully unfiltered…the neon wandering,...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:50
• 𝒜𝒻𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒪𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝓂ℴ𝓇ℯ ℰ𝓋ℯ𝓇 𝒮𝒾𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝒪𝓃𝒸ℯ 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, my friend, this is vibrant and full of heart…the angel...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:48
• Ignorance! (Friendship) My friend, this is beautifully crafted…the velvet dark, the planned...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:47
• benign maleficense (Arqios) arqios, I’ve felt this kind of institutional sleight of hand…the...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:46
• Hurt (Katie B.) I know the pain of depression all too well. Excellent write, Katie! Thank...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:44
• Santas Dilemma (Paul Bell) Paul, this one had me laughing…the sheer chaos of this “letter” and...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:43
• Cold truth (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits with a cold ache…the night bird’s loneliness really...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:42
• Our Fates (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This reads and rhymes like rap, my friend., Absolutely love the flow of...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:40
• Voluminous Voice - OT/NT Series 4 (Orchidee) Well, we know one who has a voluminous laugh...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug!...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:38
• Magikali (Mutley Ravishes) #Truth! LOL! Well done, my friend. A fave from me!...
  December 2nd, 2025 10:35
• Faulted Lines (Kurt Philip Behm) As a poet among other things, I deeply, profoundly get this. Powerful...
  December 1st, 2025 18:14
• 𝒯𝒾𝓉𝓁ℯ 𝒜𝒻𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒲𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this is vibrant…the symbols, the soft confessions, the little...
  December 1st, 2025 18:12
• Quieting stress (Friendship) My friend, this is soothing in the deepest way…the frantic hum settling...
  December 1st, 2025 18:10
• A (Katie B.) A wonderful love poem, Katie! Well written and a fave....
  December 1st, 2025 18:08
• outstaring a blank wall (Arqios) arqios, this hits with quiet honesty…the dread of the blank wall turning...
  December 1st, 2025 18:07
• Mysteries of the mato (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is rich…the forest as mother, spirit, keeper of old...
  December 1st, 2025 18:06
• Sparrow that flies /Gorrión que vuela (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Very well done, my friend! Joy is endless for those who have it, despite...
  December 1st, 2025 18:04
• Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee) Love this, my friend! All jokes aside, keep the lights off, it suits...
  December 1st, 2025 18:00
• Horror Of Herod - OT/NT Series 3 (Orchidee) Hey Orchi! Turn the lights on! It\'s kinda dark in here, with...💡 😱...
  December 1st, 2025 17:58
• Industry Plants (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this lands clean and honest…the Babel line, the shrinking...
  December 1st, 2025 17:54
• Who is I am Addicted? (Mutley Ravishes) I\'ll answer that question if you tell me where I Am Insane went, he took...
  December 1st, 2025 17:47
• Film Critic (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) It really is a great novel..and me too on Monday...of course, no Monday is...
  December 1st, 2025 17:38
• Impenetrable Sky (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Yes, an impenetrable sky indeed. There\'s so much that seems impenetrable...
  December 1st, 2025 17:34
• 𝔼𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕪 𝕄𝕠𝕣𝕟𝕚𝕟𝕘𝕤: 𝒯𝒽ℯ ℬℯ𝓉𝓉ℯ𝓇 𝒯𝒽ℯ 𝒯𝒾𝓂ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, I know this feeling…the swirl of early-morning words, the rush,...
  November 30th, 2025 08:51
• Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) Brilliant, Thomas! 🌹
  November 30th, 2025 08:50
• Off to the races? (2781) My friend, this is warm and witty…the saved coins, the thousand-percent...
  November 30th, 2025 08:49
• I Partake in Joy (Katie B.) My friend, this shines with soft depth…the red-velvet throne, the...
  November 30th, 2025 08:48
• Wynken, Blynken, and Nod (reprise) (Arqios) arqios, this lands with quiet grace…the sun-gold hair, the recollection...
  November 30th, 2025 08:47
• Reunited (Paul Bell) My friend, I’ve seen echoes of this kind of heartbreak up close…the...
  November 30th, 2025 08:45
• Leave Me Here to Dream (song lyrics) (Teddy.15) Beautiful lyrics and even more touching knowing the reason it was written....
  November 30th, 2025 08:41
• Letting go. (Friendship) Friendship, this lands with a gentle strength…the unclenching fingers,...
  November 30th, 2025 08:37
• Amenable Andrew (Orchidee) Andrew was quite the character, no? And, much better to be amenable Andrew...
  November 30th, 2025 08:36
• Foolishness compounded (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is wild in the best way…a playful tumble of language that...
  November 30th, 2025 08:34
• Twilight on Sunday (NafisaSB) My friend, this lands with a calm clarity…the gentle pace, the bright...
  November 30th, 2025 08:33
• The Gift (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt! And truth!
  November 30th, 2025 08:31
• panels and tears (Arqios) Yay! First comment! My friend, I’ve seen this…people polishing their...
  November 29th, 2025 09:26
• Uriah (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this has a warm, steady pull to it…Uriah already feels like...
  November 29th, 2025 09:25
• 𝔈𝔫𝔡𝔩𝔢𝔰𝔰~ 𝔑𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯 𝔈𝔫𝔡𝔦𝔫𝔤 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like drifting…soft, dreamy, a little chaotic in that...
  November 29th, 2025 09:23
• Because I Write (Katie B.) A passion we all share on here for sure, and a wonderful poem at that!...
  November 29th, 2025 09:23
• Assumption (Friendship) My friend, I’ve lived this…having someone script who you are before...
  November 29th, 2025 09:22
• A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2 (Orchidee) Oh no, there\'s no ruler to reign! Why did she ever run away? Turns out...
  November 29th, 2025 09:18
• Falling apart (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this lands with a steady force…the falling petals, the dropped...
  November 29th, 2025 09:15
• Dollette (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Misery is EXCELLENT! Love King! And what a wonderful poem, Hayleigh! Great...
  November 29th, 2025 09:13
• The Joker Wild (Kurt Philip Behm) Hear hear! This one is VERY relatable for me right now! Love it, Kurt!...
  November 29th, 2025 09:12
• F-E-A-R (Friendship) Friendship, this is powerful…the “dust within the hand” moment names...
  November 28th, 2025 13:02
• Question of the Day (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is quietly steady…the “glimmer of hope” moment really...
  November 28th, 2025 11:06
• Rover (Paul Bell) Paul, this cracked me up…the chaos, the characters, the absurdity piling...
  November 28th, 2025 11:05
• hearth of language (Arqios) arqios, this lands softly but sure…the “small gestures put us back in...
  November 28th, 2025 10:46
• Poetic (Katie B.) Katie, this shines with a grounded joy…the “more I write, the more I...
  November 28th, 2025 10:45
• A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1 (Orchidee) On another note, the whole virgin vs. young woman debate is actually...
  November 28th, 2025 10:40
• A Son Brings Salvation - OT/NT Series 1 (Orchidee) Great Orchi. A fave! A Song brings Salvation, part 1. Spinoff: A sailor...
  November 28th, 2025 10:35
• Immortalised Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this hits with conviction…the Apocrypha reference nails a...
  November 28th, 2025 10:33
• Hard love (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits with real force…there’s no padding here, just the raw...
  November 28th, 2025 10:28
• Florida St. (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Me too and this just brought be back there! Rock on, Hayleigh!...
  November 28th, 2025 10:26
• The deal (2781) My friend, this hits hard…a bitter truth wrapped in a clean rhythm. The...
  November 28th, 2025 10:25
• 𝒮𝒽𝒽𝒽𝒽𝒽 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝒲ℯ𝓁𝓁 𝒦ℯ𝓅𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki… the frost, the encryption, the ache beneath the glyphs…This one...
  November 27th, 2025 10:38
• The Little Black Book (Paul Bell) My friend… the moment I saw that title, I heard that Manson lyric of his...
  November 27th, 2025 10:37
• Change (Friendship) My friend… you wrote Thanksgiving as transformation itself. The...
  November 27th, 2025 07:58
• ink on the Savannah (Arqios) arqios, this is such a vivid metaphor for creation itself…the teeth and...
  November 27th, 2025 07:56
• Taxation of Credulity (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion… this hits hard. The bite, the satire, the way you peel every...
  November 27th, 2025 07:39
• I\'m \'orrible! (Orchidee) In the wee hours of the mornin\' Where the cock crows so loudly, A poet,...
  November 27th, 2025 07:33
• Within (Sorenbarrett) Soren… the way you braid breath, power, and ruin… it’s stunning. You...
  November 27th, 2025 07:30
• Why Is Nobody Angry? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I am all for socially responsible policies, and sometimes such policies...
  November 27th, 2025 07:23
• Living In Fear (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Truth! Truth! Amen! Hallelujah! I am not sure what else I can say!...
  November 27th, 2025 07:12
• Dirty Postcards (Kevin Hulme) Kevin… the humor, the pacing, the soft turn of heart at the end… you...
  November 27th, 2025 07:10