Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Only God Can (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this poem reads like a statement of trust. Pain is not denied, but...
  February 2nd, 2026 14:05
• Montgomery Slyde (Arqios) Arqios, Montgomery Slyde is a study in performed confidence. Bravado,...
  February 2nd, 2026 13:43
• Poetry For The Unemployed (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this resonates as a voice from inside the grind rather than...
  February 2nd, 2026 13:24
• Black spot (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is satire rooted in rot. Shakespearean ghosts, martial...
  February 2nd, 2026 13:22
• Palestin (Lilly OvO) This poem isn’t trying to aestheticize tragedy…it insists on...
  February 1st, 2026 23:35
• Go forth and not tell all (Orchidee) Go forth and not tell, for many will swoon! Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-gluggity...
  February 1st, 2026 23:34
• The One To Embrace (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is a disciplined trio. The artist who unsettles, the memory...
  February 1st, 2026 23:31
• No Medication (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this resonates as a cry from the space between help and harm. The...
  February 1st, 2026 23:28
• Rat Holes and Absinthe (Thomas W Case) Excellent! That absinthe bottle threading the scenes together really...
  February 1st, 2026 15:32
• Heading North (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a hard, necessary piece. By stripping the violence of drama...
  February 1st, 2026 15:30
• observance (Arqios) Arqios, this is stark and contemplative. It feels stripped down to...
  February 1st, 2026 15:28
• Homing Pigeon (Mutley Ravishes) Wonderful write with a Tolkien, Middle Earth reference. Love it, my
  February 1st, 2026 15:26
• Philosophy of Time (Teddy.15) Teddy, this resonates. Staying in today isn’t denial…it’s...
  February 1st, 2026 15:24
• Capitalization no longer warranted (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is smart wordplay with teeth. Ice melting, value shrinking,...
  February 1st, 2026 14:02
• Queen Democracy (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion, this is satire with poise, which I absolutely love. Democracy...
  February 1st, 2026 13:55
• parts (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is a tight, searching piece. Body as machinery, mind as...
  February 1st, 2026 13:51
• The Covenant of Love (Cellinic) Cellinic, this speaks to the longing for steadiness in unsettled times....
  February 1st, 2026 13:49
• Whatcha Waiting For? (Cheeky Missy) 😂 This made me laugh, Missy! Good to see you post, my friend.
  January 31st, 2026 13:52
• Sound Bites 1-31-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is a disciplined body of work. From memory and absence to...
  January 31st, 2026 13:50
• Me And You (Lilly OvO) Lilly, this poem is a promise spoken out loud. It moves from first meeting...
  January 31st, 2026 13:48
• the rubber plant (Arqios) Arqios, this poem feels like a quiet companion. Its strength is in not...
  January 31st, 2026 12:48
• The Gospel According to the Ballot (Brian Otucho) 💯 The truth! Well done on this satire, my friend!
  January 31st, 2026 12:45
• Orange Juice (Mutley Ravishes) Muley, this is minimalism with teeth. Belief becomes currency, attention...
  January 31st, 2026 12:42
• Birth and death sun and moon (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this poem moves as if light were a pendulum. Dawn to dusk, blaze to...
  January 31st, 2026 12:37
• I Feel Powerful When Birds Fly Away (FallingAwake2) FallingAwake, this feels kinetic and alive. There’s a pulse of agency...
  January 31st, 2026 12:35
• Big Bird Tweets (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this hits with sharp irony. It’s compact, unsettling, and...
  January 31st, 2026 00:37
• Autumn Shadows (Cellinic) Great job, my friend. That image of “hand-carved shadows, cast by the...
  January 30th, 2026 21:00
• You’re Still Here (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this speaks to moments I know well…when endurance feels like the...
  January 30th, 2026 20:55
• The Culprit Hides (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these poems speak to each other across registers…one exposes the...
  January 30th, 2026 20:51
• The Treaty of Scatterings (Arqios) arqios, this is playful world-building with a beating heart. The language...
  January 30th, 2026 10:04
• Freedom (Paul Bell) Paul, this is devastating in its quietness. It doesn’t dramatize...
  January 30th, 2026 10:03
• Invisible (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is excellent, my friend. It feels like standing inside a...
  January 30th, 2026 10:00
• Unpolitically Correct (Teddy.15) Teddy, well…that escalated fast. 😂 It’s crude, pointed, and clearly...
  January 30th, 2026 09:57
• Fly high (NafisaSB) Safina, this poem balances empathy and exhortation beautifully. You honor...
  January 30th, 2026 09:55
• From Dave with “Love” (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is witty, self-aware, and quietly principled. The rhyme...
  January 30th, 2026 09:53
• I don\'t love it (Cellinic) Cellinic, this is fierce and unflinching. It doesn’t hedge or...
  January 30th, 2026 09:52
• The Juke Joint (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries fire. It feels lean, deliberate, and...
  January 29th, 2026 11:08
• Rant (2781) Valiantstar, this carries a raw moral urgency. It feels restless,...
  January 29th, 2026 11:07
• be still (Arqios) Arqios, this is quiet wisdom shaped by impact. From hiding and deflection...
  January 29th, 2026 11:06
• And The Sea Still Churns (Katie B.) My friend, this is devastatingly beautiful. The repetition carries grief...
  January 29th, 2026 11:05
• The Truth About Apologies (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this feels grounded and sincere. There’s a calm wisdom...
  January 29th, 2026 11:03
• Elegy for the Empty Mirror (Friendship) Friendship, this is scathing in a quiet, controlled way. It doesn’t...
  January 29th, 2026 11:02
• The Lexicon of Shame (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this is sharp and perfectly brutal. Each authority offers a...
  January 29th, 2026 11:01
• Hope You Find (Mutley Ravishes) YES! When does the journey begin! 🚀 Well done, my friend! Totally...
  January 29th, 2026 11:00
• Up on the Roof (Teddy.15) LOL! Thank God nobody but her is walking up on that roof! LOL! 😂
  January 29th, 2026 10:58
• Disallowed Grief (Jenny.g) Jenny, I recognize this kind of grief all too well…the losses we’re...
  January 29th, 2026 10:57
• Never content (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is ruthless and precise. The sweep across climates sets the...
  January 29th, 2026 10:56
• Praying Before Sleep (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is quietly powerful. The move from sheep to prayer sets the...
  January 29th, 2026 10:54
• Clown Worlds (Mutley Ravishes) Taking your word for it! 🤣 This gave me a good laugh, my friend.
  January 29th, 2026 10:51
• LIMERICK 154 (Michael Edwards) LOL! Now, that is the quick way to clean! Everyone, clear the house!...
  January 29th, 2026 10:48
• Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party? (Doggerel Dave) Every one loves a good laughing limerick, no? 🤣 Let\'s see if this...
  January 29th, 2026 10:44
• an old woman called Kay (for Teddy) (ADarkerMind) LOL! I guess we could say that poor old Kay was one to avoid that day!...
  January 28th, 2026 16:11
• Mind your language! (Orchidee) Well...I minded my language...but it didn\'t stop the dry glugging! Sorry,...
  January 28th, 2026 16:07
• Her (Lilly OvO) lilly, this is openly tender. There’s a lot of courage in loving this...
  January 28th, 2026 16:03
• Death (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these two pieces speak to each other beautifully. One names death as...
  January 28th, 2026 16:00
• alluring moon (Katie B.) Reading this reminded me of those moments when day gives up without...
  January 28th, 2026 15:55
• The Beauty of Your Journey (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this is warm and encouraging. It reads like a steady hand on the...
  January 28th, 2026 15:54
• Florida\'s Cold Has Got Me Beaten (Friendship) Friendship, this made me grin and shiver at the same time. It’s...
  January 28th, 2026 15:53
• The Restoration (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a provocative exploration of faith, hypocrisy, loyalty, and...
  January 28th, 2026 15:50
• a celestial journey (Arqios) That image of stars as ancient runes really stays with me. It frames the...
  January 28th, 2026 10:59
• HIS SUPPORTERS (Michael Edwards) And this, my friend, is the truth! LOL! Well done, Michael! Thanks for the...
  January 28th, 2026 10:57
• Justice or magic show (Sorenbarrett) Reading this alongside your note brought back how often power hides behind...
  January 28th, 2026 10:55
• POSH or Posh (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion, this is sharp and unsettling in the best way. The poem builds...
  January 28th, 2026 10:53
• Collapsed Star (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this lands with a quiet punch. The compression is doing real work...
  January 28th, 2026 10:52
• To My Father. Winter\'s Winding Game (Cellinic) Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on inheritance and love....
  January 28th, 2026 10:51
• And a Pot Belly Laugh (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this is dense, unsettling, and fiercely embodied. Land, water,...
  January 28th, 2026 10:50
• Farting Heck (Teddy.15) Now that brings up a scene and scent that absolutely caused my to laugh...
  January 27th, 2026 13:38
• Oh, To Be Gardner McKay (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is a lovely tribute to the power of boyhood heroes. The second...
  January 27th, 2026 13:35
• Under the 8-Track Night (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is a vivid meditation on youth, memory, and asymmetry…how...
  January 27th, 2026 09:08
• the plunge (Arqios) arqios, this is a thoughtful meditation on making meaning with limited...
  January 27th, 2026 09:06
• All Things New (Orchidee) Orchi, this is hymnody done right. Faithful to the text, clear in promise,...
  January 27th, 2026 09:04
• God Unplugged Me From Satan\'s Matrix (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this feels raw and exposed. There’s a sense of disorientation...
  January 27th, 2026 09:02
• One, two, three, four....five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten (Sorenbarrett) At three I stopped to maniacally laugh and expected lightning and...
  January 27th, 2026 09:00
• Your Footstep (Cellinic) Cellinic, this is a thoughtful meditation on creation and recognition....
  January 27th, 2026 08:57
• Under A Net Of Kisses (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this feels immersive…like being pulled under and held there by...
  January 27th, 2026 08:55
• Mike Wheeler & Studebaker John (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these feel lived-in. The blues piece aches without posturing, and...
  January 27th, 2026 08:53
• Mummy Daddy (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a sharp, uncomfortable exploration of desire colliding with...
  January 27th, 2026 08:52
• Painted Soul of My Heart (Katie B.) Katie, this poem reads like a farewell spoken softly but firmly. Memory...
  January 26th, 2026 09:12
• Exodus (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is a compact parable. A looming nemesis, an absurdly precise...
  January 26th, 2026 09:11
• Apology in the Language of Stars (Friendship) Dearest Friendship, that image of tracing a name in constellations really...
  January 26th, 2026 09:10
• Are Ya Done!? (Arqios) My friend, this took me straight back. The ritual of injury and...
  January 26th, 2026 09:07
• The way I like it (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is excellent, my friend. Food, land, neighbors, and time are...
  January 26th, 2026 09:02
• Marvellous Marriage (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! very beautiful. That said...I am not sure Olive...
  January 26th, 2026 08:59
• A HEALTH HAZARD (Michael Edwards) Michael, this is tight comic verse. The rhyme is playful, the premise is...
  January 26th, 2026 08:58
• Pick Your Poison (Control) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this resonates. The question of what actually makes us whole...
  January 26th, 2026 08:57
• \"My winter wonderland\" (Kylie_love) Kylie, this reads like a celebration of memory and presence at once. You...
  January 25th, 2026 18:30
• Poetry Poems (Doggerel Dave) Dave, I feel this tension between clarity and obscurity deeply. The...
  January 25th, 2026 18:27
• He Is Faithful to The End (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, the way you speak to loss, wrong turns, and beginnings feels...
  January 25th, 2026 18:23
• An Angel\'s Wings (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, that image of the angel’s wings buried within really struck me. It...
  January 25th, 2026 11:25
• Morning Snow (Jerry Reynolds) Sounds/looks the same here, my friend. And that deafening silence before...
  January 25th, 2026 11:23
• Hold Fast (Katie B.) Katie, this resonates. The way sorrow moves through short-lived peace, the...
  January 25th, 2026 11:22
• The World Is All But One Mile High (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this poem unfolds like a grim procession. Nature, memory, and...
  January 25th, 2026 11:20
• Covenant Bliss (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this poem captures desire suspended in time. The ticking clock,...
  January 25th, 2026 11:19
• A Father\'s Love (Friendship) My friend, this resonates deeply. The idea of love shown through presence,...
  January 25th, 2026 11:17
• Ice, Ice Lately (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Growing up in America I was taught to believe we were progressing toward...
  January 25th, 2026 11:16
• reflected light (Arqios) arqios, this poem feels like a resting place. The journey you describe...
  January 25th, 2026 11:00
• The Final Trumpet (Orchidee) You\'ve instructed us on the final Trumpet, and did very well in it,...
  January 25th, 2026 10:56
• From the veins of our fathers (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this poem weaves instinct, nature, and foresight into a single...
  January 25th, 2026 10:45
• Gimme Shelters (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this resonates. The idea that no amount of advancement or...
  January 25th, 2026 10:36
• Harmony of Peaks (Cellinic) My friend, I get this. The tension between pain remembered and harmony...
  January 25th, 2026 10:35