Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Pleasure & Pain (Mutley Ravishes) Yes, I can. But this poem…not mental at all. Brilliant in its brevity!...
  March 2nd, 2025 12:15
• Listen Loud Just One More Time (Neville) Layers this poem has…and the more one peels away, the more one gets the...
  March 2nd, 2025 12:14
• The River of Thought (Salvia.S) Brief, beautiful, and true. This poem speaks wisdom. Well done.
  March 2nd, 2025 12:10
• People Praise (Orchidee) Indeed. What I love about the Bible is that it is a compilation of our...
  March 2nd, 2025 08:04
• Canned expression (Sorenbarrett) The futility of it all, no? But still, here we are and here we keep...
  March 2nd, 2025 07:22
• Fun in (Sun)Day (Poetic Licence) That last one. TRUTH! Well, they all are! Another wonderful series of...
  March 2nd, 2025 07:18
• No5 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) Please do. Section on and away. LOL! 😂 Well done, my friend. This one...
  March 2nd, 2025 07:16
• Eclipse (Arqios) Yes. I hear you hear. Not sure when your hiatus was. I started on...
  March 2nd, 2025 07:09
• Prince of the Private School (Thomas W Case) This was great. Misadventures that ended up with a love for literature....
  March 2nd, 2025 06:53
• [Even Open Mic Wouldn\'t Cut It] (Cheeky Missy) Open mic, you say? Ooh, I am so dying to find one. As for your sonnets, I...
  March 1st, 2025 21:29
• Faithful Eyes (Whats write for me) Indeed. The miracle of each day followed by the miracle of each night....
  March 1st, 2025 21:26
• hard to do (Demar Desu) The last line sums it up brilliantly.
  March 1st, 2025 21:25
• Lament for Life (Rebellion_in_sanity) Your poem and your note convey much wisdom and truth. Sad it is, for be...
  March 1st, 2025 10:15
• Intelligent Design (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Ooh. Hello Saturday morning serenity...presenting Aquinas in such a way...
  March 1st, 2025 10:14
• The Lone Cucumber (Tony36) LOL! Tony, I believe you may have just revived a new season of Veggie...
  March 1st, 2025 08:40
• Luminous Lunar (Salvia.S) Faved. I love the luminous moon (well I love the moon regardless), so this...
  March 1st, 2025 08:37
• Space pirate speed demons (Sorenbarrett) 🤯 So, there\'s science fiction...which definitely is imaginative. This,...
  March 1st, 2025 08:34
• Creation Praise (Orchidee) Interesting. A little tune history I did not know. Now I know why it is...
  March 1st, 2025 08:29
• Castle Keep (Arqios) Indeed. Sandcastles, and our lives, are temporal. The tide carries the...
  March 1st, 2025 08:27
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (2) (Poetic Licence) This was a lot of fun, Tobani. I good follow up to your last go \'round...
  March 1st, 2025 08:24
• NBA 2k25 (Demar Desu) All statements of facts from the poem to the note. 🤣 Well done bro!
  February 28th, 2025 21:22
• ...Where Tomorrow Never Truly Comes (Cheeky Missy) No food references and yet these sonnets are still tasty! Thoroughly...
  February 28th, 2025 21:20
• Death\'s Indenture (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow on both of these! Having lived next to an old Cemetery once, the...
  February 28th, 2025 21:17
• Plan Éternel (Whats write for me) Wonderfully written…Biblically inspired. Beautiful all around, my...
  February 28th, 2025 21:11
• Race night (Tony36) Wonderful write, Tony!
  February 28th, 2025 08:41
• Lament of the Last Leaf (Salvia.S) Wow! Powerful use of the leaf and nature as a metaphor. Well done. Loved...
  February 28th, 2025 07:29
• Too much (Sorenbarrett) Flows and rings beautifully. A wonderful expression of time, struggle, and...
  February 28th, 2025 07:28
• To Be Alone (Poetic Licence) Love it. The truth of what we wish for and what we ultimately come to long...
  February 28th, 2025 07:21
• untitled 575 ( what lingers on ) (Arqios) \'Tis True. We are but dust. Here one minute, floating off in the breeze...
  February 28th, 2025 07:19
• Deep Water Harbor (Mutley Ravishes) Love this metaphor-rich poem and the Greek mythological reference! Well...
  February 28th, 2025 07:15
• Goodbye Gene Hackman (Randyjohnson71) Saw this today! So sad. Seemingly not \"foul play\", but as your poem...
  February 27th, 2025 19:00
• The Tide Pool (Thomas W Case) Wow! This is profound, my friend. Well done. A fave for sure!
  February 27th, 2025 18:34
• internet! What have you done! (Demar Desu) Makes some less ignorant...but also puts many others\' ignorance on full...
  February 27th, 2025 18:31
• sleepless nights (NinjaGirl) Wow! This sings! Beautiful job, my friend! An easy fave! 🌹👏
  February 27th, 2025 18:29
• On The Other Side Of Something (ADarkerMind) Sitting here feeling left in the desert of nothing, I was happy to peer...
  February 27th, 2025 18:28
• Remind Me of Satin and Blushing, Will You? (Cheeky Missy) I love satin. There. I got that out. It is now out in the open. I love...
  February 27th, 2025 18:20
• Calling The Future (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) I am searching around some darkened halls in a piece I am currently...
  February 27th, 2025 18:18
• Pop Tarts at Night (Whats write for me) 🤣 This made me laugh and laughter is the best medicine. It gets a fave,...
  February 27th, 2025 18:15
• You (Tony36) Love. When you have it, it makes the world go round, no? Beautiful, Tony!...
  February 27th, 2025 18:14
• It doesn\'t matter anymore (Sorenbarrett) Great job, Soren. This is a deep exploration of time, disillusionment, and...
  February 27th, 2025 18:10
• If i Were Made Off Glass (Poetic Licence) Great question that causes each reader to reflect on how they look at and...
  February 27th, 2025 17:54
• when echo lost its shadow (Arqios) Sorry it took me all day to get to read this. Been one of those days. Wow,...
  February 27th, 2025 17:52
• Distance (Caring dove) I would imagine it does, my friend. Hoping better days and feelings are...
  February 26th, 2025 22:40
• looking like crap (NinjaGirl) It really was one of those days. Hence my rabbit hole adventure this...
  February 26th, 2025 22:05
• Confused? (Orchidee) Wait, now I am confused! LOL! Not really, tell Fido I said hi and pat KP...
  February 26th, 2025 22:00
• Footnotes (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth. What more can be said. Profound truth, beautifully expressed in...
  February 26th, 2025 11:21
• Aide-Mémoire’s (Neville) Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a...
  February 26th, 2025 11:19
• Falls Relief (Whats write for me) 🤣 Poo-phoria sounds like it might hold even more meaning than just the...
  February 26th, 2025 11:17
• Pages not written (Sorenbarrett) Yes!!! Love this! The white pages of Colonial and American history bleed...
  February 26th, 2025 11:14
• ( weighing in ) (Arqios) Yes, no matter what...poetry is... Wonderful, friend. A very beautiful...
  February 26th, 2025 11:05
• commodifying myself (Demar Desu) Count me in bro. Purchased! Broke artists support broke artists. It\'s a...
  February 26th, 2025 11:00
• goodbye (NinjaGirl) This was painful to read, beautiful and painful. Well done, my dear...
  February 25th, 2025 20:14
• Jazz in Hell (Thomas W Case) Wonderful poem, Thomas! 🙏❤️
  February 25th, 2025 18:27
• HaHa, It Won\'t Be Long Now (Cheeky Missy) It\'s 50s where I am...I am so with you, Missy. The countdown is a...
  February 25th, 2025 15:10
• Whetting The Stone (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow. Love this. Easy fave!
  February 25th, 2025 15:08
• Taco Tuesday (Tony36) Taco Tuesday, Taco Thursday, heck Taco anyday! LOL! Well done on this, my...
  February 25th, 2025 15:07
• The Lies (Poetic Licence) Brief but very effective. A brlliant use of word economy. You paint a true...
  February 25th, 2025 15:06
• Some Kind of Curious Something (Neville) For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd...
  February 25th, 2025 15:01
• Forgiveness Found (Orchidee) Oh my! After the past couple of days, I thought maybe this was Mrs. KP...
  February 25th, 2025 14:56
• True story (to be or not to be) (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful write, my friend. A piece that feels humorous on the surface,...
  February 25th, 2025 14:54
• Blossoming (2017) (Arqios) I love me my cherry blossoms. Growing up in NJ which has its imported...
  February 25th, 2025 14:27
• No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) Love it. The humor and the pic is stunning! Well done, Michael!
  February 25th, 2025 14:21
• directions to love (NinjaGirl) Awww! You deserve that love too. If you haven\'t found it yet, I have...
  February 24th, 2025 20:27
• Flammable (Mutley Ravishes) They burn both ways, methinks! A hellavu job indeed. Well done, my friend.
  February 24th, 2025 20:25
• Okay, Okay, Just Pat My Silly Head (Cheeky Missy) Enjoyed, for sure, Missy. Well done! 🌹👏
  February 24th, 2025 20:23
• VooDoo\'s Grasp (Lil_Bit0912) Loved this. Right up my alley! Welcome to MPS, btw! Glad you\'re here and...
  February 24th, 2025 20:21
• Awakened by His Call (Whats write for me) Powerful poem about the power of the resurrection through Jesus Christ....
  February 24th, 2025 11:44
• Cursed To Repeat (Kurt Philip Behm) There\'s much truth in this, for sure. Well done, Kurt!
  February 24th, 2025 11:42
• Individual (Tony36) Hear hear! Amen! 💯 Absolutely! Love this message! An easy fave, Tony!...
  February 24th, 2025 11:41
• Figment of Your Imagination (Poetic Licence) What can be said other than Truth 💯🌹👏 Well done on this brief...
  February 24th, 2025 11:38
• Morning Walk (Orchidee) 🤣😂😜 Another funny one. yay! Loved it, Orchi!
  February 24th, 2025 10:50
• Roll of the dice (Sorenbarrett) Yes. It certainly is. What else can be said. Great metaphor that speaks...
  February 24th, 2025 10:48
• Bleak House: The Fog (Arqios) Actually, the same song and scene came to mind. Good ol\' burth. Indeed,...
  February 24th, 2025 10:46
• My Dante Lives (ADarkerMind) Nicely done. Funny thing is I have been working on my own visitation to...
  February 23rd, 2025 23:16
• distort (NinjaGirl) Distorted soup sounds like my mental space! 😂 Your poem is brilliant...
  February 23rd, 2025 23:12
• No More Mr. Blue Skies (Neville) Powerful, true, and offers a sobering vantagepoint of human nature. Well...
  February 23rd, 2025 22:35
• Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun (Poetic Licence) Wow! Loving this series, my friend. 🌹👏
  February 23rd, 2025 22:29
• Word Wholeness (Orchidee) Great hymn poem with a very insightful note. Well done, Orchi! 🌹
  February 23rd, 2025 22:27
• Night of dream dust (Sorenbarrett) \"comfort, the enemy of poetry, a sleepiness without a dream\". Indeed!...
  February 23rd, 2025 19:33
• Share with me (Tony36) Here\'s looking at you, kid 👁️ 👁️ 👃 ...
  February 23rd, 2025 18:32
• … how to get to there (Arqios) Man, I am still wishing I could find and never leave Sesame Place! Loved...
  February 23rd, 2025 08:36
• assaulted (NinjaGirl) People say lots of things, and then show what side they are talking out of...
  February 23rd, 2025 07:36
• being poor (Demar Desu) Truth! The American Dream should really be called American Proapaganda!...
  February 23rd, 2025 07:12
• Peace (Tony36) Well done, Tony! Have a great weekend!
  February 22nd, 2025 10:00
• Gypsy Tart (Mutley Ravishes) This gets a fave! I don\'t need to analyze this, it speaks for itself!...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:58
• The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence) A lot of fun. These are great! Happy weekend, my friend!
  February 22nd, 2025 09:55
• Why So Horrid? (Orchidee) I\'ve kinda missed catching up with you and KP! Another fun one, Orchi!...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:54
• Tho I\'m lost I shall grow. (Poems_From_Emotions) Great message and so this gets a fave from me. Well done and welcome to...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:51
• Reeling one in (Sorenbarrett) Ah fishing...and what a metaphor for writing too...often feels like...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:49
• Melbourne mosaic (Arqios) Would love to visit Melbourne and Australia as a whole. Thanks for the...
  February 22nd, 2025 09:44
• desperation (NinjaGirl) Wow! I get this for sure! Well expressed! Loved the word play and depth!...
  February 21st, 2025 21:15
• Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58) A wonderful poem, Cassie! Well done! I felt like I was on the walk with...
  February 21st, 2025 21:14
• To David (Kurt Philip Behm) A fitting tribute to your friend! Well done, Kurt! ❤️🙏
  February 21st, 2025 12:01
• Believe in yourself (Tony36) Great message, Tony! ❤️🙏
  February 21st, 2025 11:59
• Smoked (Mutley Ravishes) The last line makes it sound like we might already know. A well-written...
  February 21st, 2025 11:55
• Trapped (Caring dove) Butterflies will never be without caterpillars...but do all caterpillars...
  February 21st, 2025 11:25
• Flies (Sorenbarrett) Well, this one 🪰 would make for a great read at the start of fasting!...
  February 21st, 2025 11:17
• I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence) The question for me is, why hide it? Of course, there are reasons for...
  February 21st, 2025 11:13
• beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios) Such a tragic yet juicy tale, Philopela\'s is. A wonderful homage to her,...
  February 21st, 2025 11:08
• Unending Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A wonderful prose poem, my friend! 🌹👏
  February 20th, 2025 21:26