Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Scent of the past (Sorenbarrett) I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The...
  April 11th, 2025 07:55
• Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence) This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have...
  April 11th, 2025 07:45
• Anton Ego (Arqios) And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on...
  April 11th, 2025 07:42
• Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes) Chortleability (A word now?) is a blessing in such times. Chortle on, my...
  April 11th, 2025 07:39
• He pulls the trigger (Tony36) Powerful message in this dark poem. Wonderfully written, my friend....
  April 10th, 2025 17:48
• Driving Dangerously (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth.
  April 10th, 2025 16:23
• Flower (Sorenbarrett) Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use...
  April 10th, 2025 16:21
• Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey) Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost...
  April 10th, 2025 16:16
• d a n c e (Arqios) Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words...
  April 10th, 2025 16:14
• The broken heart cafe (Tony36) Wonderful Tony. I have been at that café, and the coffee is thick and...
  April 9th, 2025 10:15
• Disconnect (Caring dove) Indeed. I have been and sometimes currently am there. I so relate to this...
  April 9th, 2025 10:11
• How odd is odd (Sorenbarrett) Indeed. How much difference rattles our bones...and yet, how different are...
  April 9th, 2025 10:09
• Reckoning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well done, Shaun. It\'s hard to believe after all the warning novels and...
  April 9th, 2025 09:53
• Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence) 💯 Truth. Over you, behind you, around you...and you will be blind, like...
  April 9th, 2025 08:57
• the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey) The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the...
  April 9th, 2025 08:54
• windswept smiles (Arqios) Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my...
  April 9th, 2025 08:51
• Inversion (Mutley Ravishes) Wow. Profound, powerful, true. Indeed, for me, substance abuse was...
  April 9th, 2025 08:46
• Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) It is Tuesday, April 8...5 days later after you wrote the last sonnet in...
  April 8th, 2025 19:20
• Rejoice.... (Orchidee) Ooh. A choir anthem. Nice! This is so beautiful and one of my all time...
  April 8th, 2025 19:15
• Higher Powers (Kurt Philip Behm) Profound and wise in its simplicity. Beautiful poem. Another fave!
  April 8th, 2025 19:12
• I\'m Sorry (Tony36) Very touching, Tony. I never presume to know whether a poet is writing...
  April 8th, 2025 19:10
• On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence) Wow, I’m honored, my friend—truly. You didn’t “nick” a thing;...
  April 8th, 2025 19:01
• Why Is Nine Upside Down? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Subversive much in the same way Floyd\'s The Wall is. Brilliant my friend....
  April 8th, 2025 18:37
• nautical compass (Mourgana of the Fey) I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the...
  April 8th, 2025 18:33
• AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!! (Demar Desu) Followed by: Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse Oh no! Not...
  April 8th, 2025 18:29
• Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios) Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I...
  April 8th, 2025 18:23
• How soon we forget (Sorenbarrett) One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my...
  April 8th, 2025 09:39
• Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes) Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Plenty of twists in this tremendously short...
  April 7th, 2025 21:36
• When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy) Well done, Missy! I can\'t believe it\'s Monday...well, okay, almost...
  April 7th, 2025 21:33
• Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case) Great write, Thomas! I had snakes on my mind recently and so I it brought...
  April 7th, 2025 21:30
• Successfully Failed Again. (Poetic Licence) I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and...
  April 7th, 2025 15:41
• Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9) (Poetic Licence) How I am two days behind reading my regular dose of Wisdom from Tobani is...
  April 7th, 2025 15:33
• Just a Waste of F------ Time (Poetic Licence) Language is nothing to apologize for when well used! And, my friend, you...
  April 7th, 2025 15:30
• You Are (Lewisgale mental hospital) \"Out of your mind\" indeed! Powerful write! 🌹👏
  April 7th, 2025 15:25
• Spoken Tide (Kurt Philip Behm) Absolutely beautiful, stunning and profound. Wonderful job, Kurt. 🌹👏
  April 7th, 2025 15:19
• Personal Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow, friend, this is powerful and I love the image that accompanies it....
  April 7th, 2025 15:17
• Roller Skating Dreams (Demar Desu) Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that...
  April 7th, 2025 09:26
• React (Tony36) Great write, Tony!
  April 7th, 2025 09:24
• You will argue (Sorenbarrett) In a world that keeps insisting on the supposed reality of \"black and...
  April 7th, 2025 09:23
• Mystery..... (Orchidee) Wait...this was awfully mysterious and I am not sure I comprehend....
  April 7th, 2025 09:19
• eye on the road (Arqios) When asked what he would want to be remembered for, Jim Morrison said,...
  April 7th, 2025 09:12
• Blush of the moon (Kaz) Beautiful dusk scene. Excellent job. 🌹
  April 6th, 2025 08:09
• Unknot the not (Sorenbarrett) Powerful, my friend! Amen. I was just saying that to someone...I don\'t...
  April 6th, 2025 08:01
• Impermanence (Rebellion_in_sanity) Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly...
  April 6th, 2025 07:59
• puppeteering farewell (Arqios) Oh this is metaphor rich for sure. \"parchment scribbles and niceties / do...
  April 6th, 2025 07:56
• You (Ocean Blue) Beautifully rendered with tender care. This was wonderful, my friend....
  April 5th, 2025 12:48
• Saturday Musing ... (Kurt Philip Behm) \"Get your kicks on Route 66!\" Well done, Kurt. Lots of wisdom in the...
  April 5th, 2025 12:47
• The Two Madmen (Damaso) Wonderful running metaphor. Well done on this, Damaso! Hope your weekend...
  April 5th, 2025 12:34
• Weeping (Sorenbarrett) This speaks of grief and uses what I imagined to be a Weeping Willow Tree...
  April 5th, 2025 12:32
• heartbeat (Arqios) Very true, my friend. Well done. Poetry is our heart\'s beat. Beautifully...
  April 5th, 2025 12:26
• Waking Up From Winter (Courtnie McKern) Ah. Spring is in the air and I am smiling and...well...sniffling. But...
  April 4th, 2025 18:12
• in bloom (Alex TheHueman) Wow! Profound and powerful. Well done on this friend. Welcome to MPS! A...
  April 4th, 2025 18:10
• the fade haircut (Demar Desu) Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro!...
  April 4th, 2025 18:08
• Because I am the Eldest (Isabella Morgan) I, too, am the eldest and can relate. Well done, my friend. Welcome to
  April 4th, 2025 18:03
• She Visits on the Cold Wind (Thomas W Case) Love the \"colorful\" emotion in here. Brilliant use of orange and a very...
  April 4th, 2025 18:01
• Poetry Is (Tony36) Indeed. Nailed it Tony. Well done. Faved! 🌹👏🕯️🖤
  April 4th, 2025 18:00
• ever onward (Arqios) Icy streams indeed, so icy one might remain frozen in place should they...
  April 4th, 2025 17:58
• Sterling and Saoirse part 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I love this continuation. That question at the end? Leaves me wondering...
  April 4th, 2025 17:56
• Science in a Nazarene\'s hair (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Profound, my friend. In this I see a wisdom often absent from most...
  April 4th, 2025 17:50
• The flight of love (Kaz) Ooh! Nice! I love the structure of this. Very creative, my friend! Welcome...
  April 3rd, 2025 13:35
• Justice In Judgement (Orchidee) Yesss! I have been waiting for one and one has arrived! A great hymn-poem....
  April 3rd, 2025 12:57
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes!!! Philosphically deep in brevity. This one is so true. There is no...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:55
• Violence vs Non-Violence (Demar Desu) Indeed. Totally relate!
  April 3rd, 2025 12:43
• Rockets of life (Tony36) Great write, Tony, Well done!
  April 3rd, 2025 12:42
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love this! It almost raps, let alone rings. Wonderfully penned, my friend!...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:41
• The Lost Key (Arqios) This poem is told through the POV of a child, eyes wide with imagination,...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:39
• Child innocence (Sorenbarrett) The metaphor of the \"fruit of the tree of the knowledge of good and...
  April 3rd, 2025 11:49
• Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence) Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real...
  April 3rd, 2025 11:43
• Okay, March, Our Affair is Officially OVER. (Cheeky Missy) Yeah, nothing new with my head spinning either. These sonnets are...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:43
• KFC Cannibals? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) More reason to join me over on the vegetarian side, my friend! LOL! All...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:39
• Devils\' Breath (Kurt Philip Behm) A demon vortex. That phrase alone is worth a thousand images. Wow! This is...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:35
• Undo the Darkness (Thomas W Case) Beautiful. It felt as if I as there. Your blending of description and...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:33
• Divided (NinjaGirl) Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely...
  April 2nd, 2025 09:21
• His guitar (Tony36) I know and am friends with such a person. Very talented soul, professional...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:44
• Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I enjoyed both versions actually, though I admittedly read your rework of...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:41
• One Busy Day!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This captured me and I really enjoyed it. You have a gift, my friend. Well...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:38
• I MISS YOU RIN! (Demar Desu) Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:34
• Thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Boy...and that makes all the difference! Wow. Love this rhyme scheme, the...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:30
• Smile (Poetic Licence) Truth. Faved! Well done, my friend. Much needed insight for a world too...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:27
• a future\'s horizon (Arqios) Ooh. I like the dissipating rhyming scheme. As for the poem, well...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:22
• Free Diver (Mutley Ravishes) Leagues deep, my friend! This is profound. Again, 🤯 as I said on your...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:18
• The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare (NinjaGirl) Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death...
  April 2nd, 2025 00:02
• ...On April Fool\'s THIS Year!!! (Cheeky Missy) Wait? Where are the sonnets? All of the delicious dishes and coffee? All I...
  April 1st, 2025 23:57
• hurt (Patriciapicciocchi) Indeed. I have had to ask others the same question. Well done! 🌹
  April 1st, 2025 11:34
• What A Fool Believes (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth, driven into the heart of society like a worded stake! Well done,...
  April 1st, 2025 11:33
• Congo\'s Christian Killers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ironically, I actually first learned of this on the news. Terrible evil...
  April 1st, 2025 11:29
• Music (Tony36) Music is what keeps me going. I virtually have it playing all the time....
  April 1st, 2025 11:25
• $38.58 in my bank account (Demar Desu) OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you...
  April 1st, 2025 11:24
• Broken toys (Sorenbarrett) Man if I could return to my early childhood...but then I would have to go...
  April 1st, 2025 11:21
• Help or Not? (Orchidee) As a ground to stand on. Amen. That is what my faith has become for me....
  April 1st, 2025 11:17
• The Voices Have Gone (Poetic Licence) Wow. Profound, vulnerable, raw, honest...and wise. Of course, coming from...
  April 1st, 2025 11:15
• waxing witless (Arqios) The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking...
  April 1st, 2025 11:04
• Epidermiss (Mutley Ravishes) Wow, this one demands and rewards a few reads. The title and the clues...
  March 31st, 2025 20:32
• 10 stories (NinjaGirl) This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like...
  March 31st, 2025 12:49
• BBQ (Tony36) Really enjoyed this Tony. And you made me hungry again. 🌹👏🤣
  March 31st, 2025 12:47
• Dead Or Alive (Kurt Philip Behm) 💯 Truth! Instant fave! Brevity brilliantly penned! 🌹👏
  March 31st, 2025 12:46
• The looking glass (Patriciapicciocchi) A very perceptive write on perceptions. Well done, friend!
  March 31st, 2025 12:45
• I Never \"Promised\" Anything.... (Cheeky Missy) Wonderful fun, Missy! Enjoyed this night quartet of sonnets! 🌹👏
  March 31st, 2025 12:44
• Tribute to a Life of Service (Salvia.S) What a lovely and beautiful tribute for your relative, Salvia! Excellent...
  March 31st, 2025 12:37
• Locutus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Loved this, my friend! Well done!
  March 31st, 2025 12:36