Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• DISTANT STRANGERS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow, Norman...this is restrained and deeply sad. The routine is still...
  August 15th, 2026 08:10
• My people? (Antra.coree) Antra, I connect with the ache behind this...that moment when the title...
  August 15th, 2026 08:09
• Testing 1 – 2 – 3 (Doggerel Dave) Haha, Dave...with the author’s note, this becomes less manifesto and...
  August 15th, 2026 08:08
• Before I Step into the Dark (Sassy Lou) Cassie, this really hit me. There’s such a painful tension between...
  August 15th, 2026 08:00
• To Gander at Harmas (Never be) Wow, my friend...this is delightfully off-kilter. It starts with curiosity...
  August 15th, 2026 07:57
• The Reframe (Kayla Jackson) Wow, Kayla...this is brief but uplifting. It turns regret toward...
  August 15th, 2026 07:56
• INSIGHT (David Welch) David, this really lands. There’s a strong reminder here that ambition...
  August 15th, 2026 07:55
• I Am Lost (Sassy Lou) My friend, what struck me most is how emptiness and longing keep circling...
  August 15th, 2026 07:54
• How the world sounds at 2 AM (Allie561) Allie, I connect with this deeply...there’s something almost sacred...
  August 15th, 2026 07:53
• THE LEAP (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Wow, Carlos...this is intense and deeply unsettling. The whole piece feels...
  August 15th, 2026 07:52
• Hooligan (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this one has real fire. There’s a strong refusal to shrink...
  August 15th, 2026 07:52
• Ambivalence (Lorenz) Wow, Lorenz...this is dark, theatrical, and psychologically charged. It...
  August 15th, 2026 07:51
• Round pegs, Square pegs (Paul Bell) Wow, Paul...this is creepy, funny, and increasingly wicked as it goes. The...
  August 15th, 2026 07:50
• Hiding In Plain Sight (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this really hit me. There’s something powerful in the idea that...
  August 14th, 2026 09:53
• Fear (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Wow, Carlos...this is raw and painfully relatable. There’s such a strong...
  August 14th, 2026 09:52
• Yesterday I blamed the sun for my problems (Demar Desu) Demar, this made me laugh and think at the same time. There’s something...
  August 14th, 2026 09:51
• dreams can wait (Arqios) Wow, Arqios...this is quietly devastating. The years move forward, the...
  August 14th, 2026 09:51
• A BURNING PAGE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow, Norman...this is heavy and deeply reflective. The sense of old pain...
  August 14th, 2026 09:50
• Trash to ash (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I connect with the way this looks at transformation without making...
  August 14th, 2026 09:41
• Conspiracies Now Come True (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) haun, this one comes in swinging. There’s a real sense of distrust and...
  August 14th, 2026 09:41
• That Four Letter Words Again. (Goldfinch60) Haha, Andy...this is exactly the kind of bait-and-switch humor I enjoy....
  August 14th, 2026 09:40
• Horizonless departure (Butter) Wow, my friend...this is haunting. There’s something almost mythic in...
  August 14th, 2026 09:39
• American Executor: Millard Fillmore (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is a strong historical piece. There’s a real sense of...
  August 14th, 2026 09:38
• Dear future me (Antra.coree) Antra, I connect with this deeply. There’s something powerful about...
  August 14th, 2026 09:06
• Lost winner... (Antra.coree) Wow, Antra...this is deeply moving. The contrast between public victory...
  August 14th, 2026 09:05
• She didn\'t want to die when the Skies were Blue (Kevin Hulme) Wow, Kevin…this is tender and heartbreaking. The beauty of the natural...
  August 13th, 2026 20:34
• You’ll see me (Micah Finchley) Wow, Micah…this one starts almost tenderly and then turns the knife....
  August 13th, 2026 20:03
• Do what I say 🤌🏿 (Ms.divine) Wow, Ms. Divine…this has fire. It moves from patience and accommodation...
  August 13th, 2026 20:02
• Things you whispered while asleep (Allie561) Wow, Allie…this is so gentle and intimate. There’s something deeply...
  August 13th, 2026 19:56
• See Viewed (Neville) My friend, what caught me most is that balance between pose and ease. She...
  August 13th, 2026 19:55
• the saint is simply the sinner who keeps on trying (Demar Desu) Wow, Demar…this is brief, but it carries real weight. There’s...
  August 13th, 2026 19:54
• Veracity Waits (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow, Kurt…this is sharp and timely. There’s something deeply...
  August 13th, 2026 19:53
• That’s What They’ll Remember (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, I connect with this deeply…that experience of growing beyond who...
  August 13th, 2026 19:52
• Forgive me? (Butter) Wow, Butter…this carries a lot of pain in a very compact space....
  August 13th, 2026 19:51
• The Fight (Fränz Müller) Wow, Fränz…this is raw in the best way. There’s pain here, but also...
  August 13th, 2026 19:50
• The Sign (Paul Bell) Paul, this had me laughing all the way through. The whole thing keeps...
  August 13th, 2026 19:48
• choices, choices (Arqios) Rik, my friend, this is hilarious and ridiculously clever. You’ve taken...
  August 13th, 2026 19:47
• NOISE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) My friend, what really caught me here is the overwhelming atmosphere....
  August 13th, 2026 19:46
• Butterflies And Breadsticks (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow, Shaun…this is a loaded one. You take a swing at ego, manufactured...
  August 13th, 2026 19:45
• ᴇꜱᴄᴀᴘᴇ (ᴍᴏᴏɴ) Sylva, I’ve spent a lot of time with thoughts like these myself…that...
  August 13th, 2026 19:44
• The home (Sorenbarrett) What a wonderfully atmospheric piece, Soren. You make this forgotten...
  August 13th, 2026 19:42
• THE DAWN OF DAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow, what a beautiful poem, Norman. This carries such an easy sense of...
  August 13th, 2026 19:41
• Unsentenced (Kurt Philip Behm) few lines. Being imprisoned is one thing…being imprisoned without even...
  August 12th, 2026 21:43
• A shoplifted heart (Allie561) My friend, the whole idea of hearts becoming scarce because people keep...
  August 12th, 2026 21:42
• good morning beautiful people (Demar Desu) Demar, what a beautiful little morning thought. There’s something deeply...
  August 12th, 2026 21:39
• Harden My Heart (Fränz Müller) Fränz, you got me with the wicked double entendres in this one. 🤣 But...
  August 12th, 2026 21:37
• ECLIPSE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this one has some serious bite! Ancient omen meets political...
  August 12th, 2026 21:35
• prescience (Arqios) Arqios, this really got me thinking. There’s something almost merciful...
  August 12th, 2026 21:32
• Right off the shelf (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this is short but loaded. We manufacture substitutes for...
  August 12th, 2026 21:30
• Oh, Mister Starman! ⭑ (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ, I love this! There’s something wonderfully innocent and...
  August 12th, 2026 21:27
• X-Rated (Nerd) Nerd, this hits hard. There’s anger here, but also a fierce insistence...
  August 12th, 2026 21:24
• A Graphics Card Meltdown (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this cracked me up! 🤣 Nothing like spending money on an upgrade...
  August 12th, 2026 21:22
• SOMETIMES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) My friend, what a beautifully nostalgic piece. There are memories that...
  August 12th, 2026 21:22
• American Executor: James K. Polk (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a strong historical piece. I really appreciate that you...
  August 12th, 2026 21:19
• SUNSET CONUNDRUM (David Welch) David, as a writer, I absolutely know this battle. You encounter something...
  August 12th, 2026 21:18
• Insomnia street (Lorenz) My friend, this is wonderfully macabre. The jester, tarot, devil,...
  August 12th, 2026 21:17
• I apologize for my harshness, brashness, and foolishness… (Demar Desu) Demar, I’ve definitely had those moments where the mouth gets moving...
  August 12th, 2026 21:16
• DEAD ARBOREAL SPLENDOR (David Welch) David, what a vivid seasonal piece. I love how this captures that strange...
  August 12th, 2026 21:14
• The voice of an angel, in the hands of a jester (Micah Finchley) Micah, this really hit me. There’s such a painful conflict between...
  August 11th, 2026 20:43
• Echos of Forgotten Smiles (Sassy Lou) Cassie, this really moved me. Grief has such a strange way of keeping...
  August 11th, 2026 20:41
• Misery (Nerd) Nerd, this is incredibly heavy and vulnerable. Beneath the blood and...
  August 11th, 2026 20:40
• When I was afraid (Allie561) Allie, what a powerful journey through fear. What begins as protection...
  August 11th, 2026 20:39
• History Will Treasure (Kurt Philip Behm) That contrast between a smaller audience and a sharper point really caught...
  August 11th, 2026 20:38
• The Plan (Paul Bell) Paul, this is wickedly dark and funny as hell! 🤣 The casual way this...
  August 11th, 2026 20:37
• The Brothel (Fränz Müller) Wow, Fränz, this really hit me. The mind as a brothel of thoughts and...
  August 11th, 2026 20:36
• Twelve Seconds (Thomas W Case) Thomas, damn…this one hits home. We’ve gained the ability to put...
  August 11th, 2026 20:35
• Lustology (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this one gave me a grin…sexual energy showing up on the road to...
  August 11th, 2026 20:34
• hellopoetry (Arqios) Wow, Arqios, I absolutely love this. Poetry emerging from silence, words...
  August 11th, 2026 20:34
• ⋆｡𖦹°⭒˚｡⋆ (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Sylva, wow…this really speaks to me. Writing so often feels like...
  August 11th, 2026 20:33
• Out of style (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one has some bite, my friend! There’s something deeply sad...
  August 11th, 2026 20:32
• THE WATCHER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. Two figures carrying the same sorrow while...
  August 11th, 2026 20:31
• The end (Boot) James, this really hit me. Strip away the systems, accounts, markets, and...
  August 11th, 2026 20:30
• American Executor: John Tyler (Matthew R. Callies) What a fascinating historical piece, Matthew! I love how this captures...
  August 11th, 2026 20:29
• BETTER EYES (David Welch) David, I think many of us know what it is to fall for an image of someone...
  August 11th, 2026 20:28
• Never Shall We Part (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this speaks deeply to me. The thought that those we truly...
  August 11th, 2026 20:27
• All I am (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Wow, Sylva, this really moved me. The dreams of moons, stars, wings, and...
  August 11th, 2026 20:26
• Oh Look, a book ver. 2 (Never be) LOL! Never Be, this is wonderfully concise…poems, short stories, throw...
  August 11th, 2026 20:24
• It’s Never too Late (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) What a hopeful and encouraging piece, Sharon! I love the reminder that...
  August 11th, 2026 20:21
• Alphabet Soup (Allie561) Allie, this is such a sweet, hopeful little piece. I love the idea of...
  August 11th, 2026 20:20
• Tomorrow Calls (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a powerful piece. This has that philosophical bite I always...
  August 11th, 2026 20:19
• Swoon (Fränz Müller) Well damn, Fränz! 🤣 This is playful, unabashedly horny, and delivered...
  August 11th, 2026 20:18
• LIMITLESS / SIN LIMITES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) This is delightfully unrestrained, Carlos! The physical world gradually...
  August 10th, 2026 10:56
• American Executor: William Henry Harrison (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this may be one of the more difficult presidents to tackle in the...
  August 10th, 2026 10:55
• Can we really achieve what we put our mind to? (Demar Desu) Hahaha, Demar...apparently gratitude didn’t get the memo that it was...
  August 10th, 2026 10:54
• Going on (2781) There’s a searching quality to this, Valiantstar...question after...
  August 10th, 2026 10:53
• across the ether (Arqios) This grabbed me, arqios...especially the suggestion that our connection to...
  August 10th, 2026 10:52
• Echoes of your goodbyes 🐾 (Shirly castellon) Heartbreaking, Shirly...there’s such an emptiness when the little soul...
  August 10th, 2026 10:41
• Building character (Poetic Dan) Damn, Dan...that opening immediately got me. 😂 “It builds...
  August 10th, 2026 10:40
• INVISIBLE SCARS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There’s a lovely progression here, Norman...the midnight solitude begins...
  August 10th, 2026 10:40
• What to believe (Sorenbarrett) Hahaha, Soren! 😂 At this point I’m beginning to think the healthiest...
  August 10th, 2026 10:39
• Mother Earth Is Dying (Nerd) Beautifully sorrowful, Nerd. There’s such tenderness in the way you...
  August 10th, 2026 10:37
• Have you yet? (Orchidee) Hahaha, Orchi! 😂 I think the real conundrum is why anyone continues...
  August 10th, 2026 10:36
• Frightful creature (Nerd) This one stops you cold, Nerd. There’s no elaborate explanation, no...
  August 10th, 2026 10:34
• My Only Advice To A Writer (Kurt Philip Behm) Damn right, Kurt! 😂 Beauty and craft absolutely matter, but neither...
  August 10th, 2026 10:33
• Oh Look, a Book. (Never be) Short, sweet, and wonderfully writerly, never be! There’s something...
  August 10th, 2026 10:32
• You choose what you want to hear (Allie561) Beautifully ominous, Allie...I love how something as gentle as wind...
  August 10th, 2026 10:28
• Clothed Minded (Fränz Müller) Great job, Fränz! Thouhg, I’m beginning to suspect you may have a...
  August 10th, 2026 10:26
• WHAT HAPPENED TO CODY HAHN (David Welch) Holy hell, David...what begins almost like a Hollywood murder mystery...
  August 10th, 2026 10:24
• The Work (Thomas W Case) Beautiful, Thomas...there’s something profound in recognizing that...
  August 10th, 2026 10:23
• American Executor: Martin Van Buren (Matthew R. Callies) nother fascinating entry in the series, Matthew! Van Buren inheriting...
  August 10th, 2026 10:22