Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- Jolly Fun!!! (Poetic Licence)
A lot of fun! Thanks for the laugh! Good to see Mary out on her own, and...
May 31st, 2025 07:26 - God Please, Save Me From Myself (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Brilliantly written and true! Amen! ๐๐น
May 30th, 2025 20:30 - Act now (NafisaSB)
AMEN! Such wisdom! โค๏ธ
May 30th, 2025 20:29 - In My Defense (Mutley Ravishes)
OMG! I freaking love this! โค๏ธ
May 30th, 2025 20:27 - Sound Bites: 5-30-2025 (Kurt Philip Behm)
These are as stunning as the fjords themselves. Well done, my friend!...
May 30th, 2025 20:25 - Surgery (Tony36)
Holy shit Tony. For real. Cannot imagine how that even feels, not for...
May 30th, 2025 16:27 - The forge (Sorenbarrett)
I so get this. A Shamanic rite, passage through fire ๐ฅ Purged....
May 30th, 2025 16:21 - Convert To Peace. (Poetic Licence)
Amen! Amen! Amen! Faved! โค๏ธ
May 30th, 2025 15:50 - Light (Across_world_with_u)
Love the message and the flow. Beautiful, my friend.๐น๐
May 30th, 2025 06:46 - The Heart of a Caregiver (GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ)
Love it, my friend. You really do get to the heart of who a caregiver is....
May 29th, 2025 20:55 - But I Won, You Know. (Cheeky Missy)
Isn\'t that always the case about the best art? It is yet is not what it...
May 29th, 2025 20:52 - Beasts (Damaso)
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in....
May 29th, 2025 20:47 - Hey Funny man (Tony36)
Never judge a book by its cover or a clown by his/her makeup. Wonderful...
May 29th, 2025 20:43 - Starting All Over Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Excellent poem I totally relate with. Cheer, Shawn! A fave! ๐๐น
May 29th, 2025 20:42 - flight ready (Arqios)
Love this poem and the what you did with Icarus myth. That said, this also...
May 29th, 2025 20:40 - Dance with the wind (Sorenbarrett)
Love the wind and love to dance. Love this metaphor even more...though...
May 29th, 2025 20:37 - Ascension Amblings (Orchidee)
I feel like you just got done watching part 1 of the movie Wicked! LOL!...
May 29th, 2025 08:44 - Success Of Lies. (Poetic Licence)
Man, I have read this three times now. This is so subversive, I LOVE IT...
May 29th, 2025 08:21 - Success Of Lies. (Poetic Licence)
Spoken like a prophet of plainness! And the funny thing is, even now, the...
May 29th, 2025 08:20 - This Is Us (Virelle)
Wonderful poem. Welcome to MPS! Looking forward to more!
May 28th, 2025 22:15 - Full (Thomas W Case)
Powerful poetry, as always, Thomas. A fan and a fave! ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 20:04 - Saving Voice (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful poem, Kurt. Totally true and relatable. ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 20:02 - Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having Too Much Fun? (Cheeky Missy)
Enjoyed, I did. M\'hmm, that is no lie! Loved these as always, my dear...
May 28th, 2025 20:00 - Ruined (Damaso)
Indeed. I get this message to its core...personally. Thank you for this....
May 28th, 2025 19:57 - $403.35 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
Well praise Jesus! I did a double take when I saw the title! Woohoo! And a...
May 28th, 2025 19:56 - Day by day (Tony36)
Wonderful, Tony! ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 19:53 - The Heart Needs Dashes (Salvia.S)
I will not kill this with over explanation. I will simply fave it, like...
May 28th, 2025 19:49 - Just old (Sorenbarrett)
What can be say that you haven\'t said here, Soren? So, I am just going to...
May 28th, 2025 19:41 - Broken Mirror (Poetic Licence)
Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We\'re...
May 28th, 2025 19:39 - Life Lessons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Truth! A fave. Well done, my friend! ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 19:36 - A Dam in the Evening (Mutley Ravishes)
Signs. Damn it. Actually, no. God bless it! LOL! The signs are everywhere....
May 28th, 2025 19:28 - I\'m Back from the Dead (Thomas W Case)
Fuck yes! I am feeling this both in the poem\'s tone, as well as deep...
May 28th, 2025 19:25 - Parents (Tony36)
Sad poem, Tony. Thank you for sharing! ๐น๐
May 28th, 2025 12:40 - Let It Fade (Salvia.S)
Wise words in brevity, my friend. Profound and powerfully wise advice!...
May 28th, 2025 12:05 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
Freedom. If only we could all be free of the things that plague us, that...
May 28th, 2025 12:03 - in New York City (Demar Desu)
I get it. Leaving family should never have to be a reality, but in this...
May 28th, 2025 11:40 - Finding Tomorrow (Orchidee)
I am actually reading it the day after \"tomorrow\". Thankfully, hell has...
May 28th, 2025 08:31 - Blade In My Hand. (Poetic Licence)
Scary world we are in. I need not even begin to bring up the gun violence...
May 28th, 2025 08:28 - On Wings Of Deliverance (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well done, my friend. Very relatable! ๐น๐
May 26th, 2025 18:41 - On My Best Friend\'s Birthday... (Cheeky Missy)
Enjoyed! Glad you could...ehem...enjoy the day despite the foul odor...
May 26th, 2025 18:40 - Eternal Flame (Tony36)
Wonderful, Tony! Well done!
May 26th, 2025 18:38 - Thatโs Beautiful! (GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ)
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on...
May 26th, 2025 18:37 - Silent Whispers (Teardrop)
Powerful poem of loneliness and the hope for breaking the isolation. Love...
May 26th, 2025 18:35 - partner in marriage (Demar Desu)
\"We are the deal\" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn\'t it? Well done...
May 26th, 2025 15:23 - Pebbles (Sorenbarrett)
Love the metaphor, pebbles creating ripples, and have used it myself;...
May 26th, 2025 15:21 - If Raven Was to Come Today (Teddy.15)
Wonderful poem, Teddy. You know my affinity for Ravens and I what they...
May 26th, 2025 15:19 - The Dream I Wanted. (Poetic Licence)
Wow, Natiella! I love these throwbacks. Thank you for sharing. ๐น๐
May 26th, 2025 15:17 - beautiful regret (Arqios)
This poem hits me because I know it well. It is ๐ฏ relatable and true on...
May 26th, 2025 10:52 - In Loving Memory of Veteran (GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ)
A wonderful tribute to an outstanding human being. Wonderful job, my dear...
May 26th, 2025 09:07 - Iโm Here Todayโฆ (Doggerel Dave)
Now, all jokes aside, is this a question that can even be answered...
May 26th, 2025 09:01 - Iโm Here Todayโฆ (Doggerel Dave)
God. ๐คฃ
May 26th, 2025 08:58 - Heaven\'s Helpers (Bible Page) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
On many Bible pages, in fact. ๐ฏ Great poem, friend! ๐น๐
May 26th, 2025 08:55 - Social Conditioning (Demar Desu)
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short...
May 26th, 2025 08:51 - Redemption in deception (Sorenbarrett)
Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux...
May 26th, 2025 08:48 - Wise Man Say (13). (Poetic Licence)
Another excellent Sunday offering of wisdom! Love that last stanza tons!...
May 26th, 2025 08:47 - con un beso (with a kiss) (Arqios)
It did indeed! Understood the Spanish. ยกMucho Gracias, mi amigo! Well...
May 25th, 2025 20:25 - Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon (Salvia.S)
Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\"...
May 18th, 2025 09:40 - In The Name of a Rose (Teddy.15)
Wonderful Senryu, Teddy. The beauty and allure of a rose in 17 syllables...
May 17th, 2025 05:53 - Preservation (Teddy.15)
Beautiful, Teddy. Spot on. Wonderful poetic reflection. ๐น๐
May 17th, 2025 05:52 - to be mixed in the USA! (Demar Desu)
Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! ๐น๐
May 16th, 2025 20:53 - What a Fucking Mess (Thomas W Case)
Amen. Looking for that pool! Wonderful write, my friend. Powerful!
May 16th, 2025 20:37 - Inkwells (Kurt Philip Behm)
Truth. Powerful, my friend! ๐น๐
May 16th, 2025 20:36 - 1 day left to live (Demar Desu)
Sleeping! ๐ค They say it is the best way to go! ๐คฃ Then again, no one...
May 16th, 2025 20:35 - A check up! (Orchidee)
General Kenobi, calling General Kenobi, a couple of guinea pigs are...
May 16th, 2025 20:33 - love (Dimpy)
Very thought-provoking. Self-care is extremely important. If you can\'t...
May 16th, 2025 20:31 - Soccer Rains (Damaso)
Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! ๐น๐
May 16th, 2025 20:29 - Unbreakable Spirit (Tony36)
Amen! Hear hear! Right there with you! Rock on, my friend! ๐น๐
May 16th, 2025 20:28 - sleep on it (Arqios)
Indeed. The sun does always return, though it can feel like it won\'t. You...
May 16th, 2025 20:27 - Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett)
Yes. Many who post don\'t end up reading, which is sad to me. Reading is...
May 16th, 2025 20:23 - The Return of Mrs Muse (Tom Dylan)
I believe her too! Keep rockin\' your writes! Love this one, my friend!...
May 16th, 2025 20:20 - Mess age (Victor Bolshov)
Just on the word play alone, this gets a fave. Yes, I still send postcards...
May 16th, 2025 20:18 - Would You Call Me God?. (Poetic Licence)
Actually, I would call you human! ๐คฃ Ever notice gods turn out to be as...
May 16th, 2025 20:05 - May 15th (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Sounds like it was a great show! Rock on!
May 16th, 2025 20:01 - Too Little โ Too Late (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well done. I totally related with this, Kurt. Very relatable indeed....
May 16th, 2025 20:00 - The Golden Trio (NafisaSB)
Wise, positive advice, my friend. Well done! ๐น๐
May 16th, 2025 19:58 - Relaxation (Mutley Ravishes)
I love the word play. This poem carries much emotional weight and is...
May 16th, 2025 19:57 - Look In The Mirror. (Poetic Licence)
NO. Yes. Yes and No. Both/and, as well as neither, depending. My...
May 15th, 2025 07:57 - Child Care (Doggerel Dave)
Excellent write, my friend. It\'s been so long since my kids were in day...
May 15th, 2025 07:55 - Not Sure I\'m Human! (Orchidee)
Perhaps you are Jedi, Obi Wan? But that last full stanza made it sound...
May 15th, 2025 06:01 - Numb (MatPie)
Powerful and sad. Well done, and welcome to MPS! ๐น๐
May 14th, 2025 13:17 - Today I saw a tree fall (Demar Desu)
A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically....
May 14th, 2025 11:31 - Only the Heart Knows the Soul (Salvia.S)
It is true. Only we can truly know what we\'ve been through. Advice may...
May 14th, 2025 11:30 - The Foundling (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well done, Kurt. Another powerful and thought-provoking write. ๐น๐
May 14th, 2025 11:28 - The Great War? (Tony Grannell)
Never had family, to my knowledge, in WWI. My grandfather served in WWII...
May 14th, 2025 11:27 - to be real (Arqios)
Ah, my friendโฆwhat youโve done here is more than revisit a childhood...
May 14th, 2025 11:25 - Give and take (Sorenbarrett)
Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is...
May 14th, 2025 11:19 - Community Guidelines Violation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Yeah. Supposed \"free speech\" ain\'t so free in a world order that wants...
May 14th, 2025 11:17 - In My Heart I Cry. (Poetic Licence)
My heart has been broken so many times, I think I have lost some the...
May 14th, 2025 11:15 - Could Be (Mutley Ravishes)
Hmmm. Yes. Usually through the guise of division. Satan has that divide...
May 14th, 2025 11:13 - Enamored by the Dormouse (Thomas W Case)
Powerful write, Thomas. Another fave. ๐น๐
May 14th, 2025 11:11 - Benito (Damaso)
Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. ๐น๐
May 14th, 2025 11:10 - The White Room (NinjaGirl)
An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This...
May 14th, 2025 11:09 - Waste In The Fire (Kurt Philip Behm)
Excellent write, Kurt! ๐น๐
May 14th, 2025 11:03 - Mors Vincit Omnia (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
๐คฃ Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is...
May 14th, 2025 11:02 - What Happens? (GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ)
Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from...
May 14th, 2025 11:00 - Tycoon to be (Demar Desu)
Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo!...
May 14th, 2025 10:58 - The Lone Apostle (Tony Grannell)
Well done, Tony. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your work....
May 14th, 2025 10:57 - Let peace ring (Tony36)
I can hear it my friend. Loved the form and the message. This gets a bong...
May 14th, 2025 10:55 - What (Sorenbarrett)
The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many...
May 14th, 2025 10:53 - soul of time (Arqios)
Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress...
May 14th, 2025 10:50
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