Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Too full for dessert (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this speaks to that moment when love and pleasure become memory...
  January 15th, 2026 10:29
• Productive Praise (Orchidee) Beautiful Orchi! I love Psalm 67 and you render it not only faithfully but...
  January 15th, 2026 10:16
• Top Cat (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is playful and quietly pointed. Practical wisdom, imaginative...
  January 15th, 2026 10:13
• Excuses Set Sail (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is stark and unsettling in the absolute best way. The moral...
  January 14th, 2026 16:12
• Gravity Lesson (Nev) Nev, this is raw and exacting. Desire as gravity, restraint as injury, and...
  January 14th, 2026 16:11
• A Sky of Whispers (Katie B.) Katie, this feels hushed and luminous. The way light and darkness meet...
  January 14th, 2026 10:48
• Man Of Steel vs Superman (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I liked the 2025 film, but I am kinda with you on this. Man of Steel for...
  January 14th, 2026 10:48
• Smooth things (2781) My friend, this is searching and uncompromising. Gentle words, hard...
  January 14th, 2026 07:13
• mason (Arqios) Arios, this resonates with how often we mistake posture for purpose. The...
  January 14th, 2026 07:01
• Seconds age (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is precise and philosophical. Time bends through memory and...
  January 14th, 2026 06:53
• Dwelling Delight (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! Dwelling delight is better than a swelling sight!...
  January 14th, 2026 06:51
• Apostrophes (Doggerel Dave) Dave, clever and self-mocking in the best way. Craft anxiety, rebellion,...
  January 13th, 2026 20:33
• Eurydice (Cellinic) My friend, this is rich with myth, tenderness, and becoming. Shadow and...
  January 13th, 2026 20:31
• Eluding The Cries (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is lean and incisive. Observation, intention, and avoidance...
  January 13th, 2026 20:29
• Sunday Aches (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this hurts in a quiet, honest way. The loneliness doesn’t...
  January 13th, 2026 20:08
• con-flakes (Arqios) arqios, clever and unsettling. The flakes preach, the labels bless, and we...
  January 13th, 2026 20:06
• Have you ever felt ethereal? (Sorenbarrett) Love this, Soren! That image of holding back time with a Möbius band...
  January 13th, 2026 20:05
• Hear and Help (Orchidee) In other words, the hymn in the video is sometimes played like a DIRGE!...
  January 13th, 2026 20:04
• Musings About Mortality (Dominic Windram) Dominic, this feels heavy with compassion. The fragility you name settles...
  January 13th, 2026 19:31
• Cedar Tree Odyssey (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this lands with a quiet philosophical punch. The question hums...
  January 13th, 2026 19:30
• Trumped (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is sharp and satisfying. The wordplay lands clean, and the bite...
  January 13th, 2026 19:24
• Dissolve (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is subtle and heavy at the same time. Color fading, movement...
  January 13th, 2026 19:22
• \'Hallelujah In The Wind\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels quietly expansive. The poem opens a thin place where...
  January 13th, 2026 19:21
• Tap it out (2781) My friend, this carries a restless urgency. The thoughts don’t...
  January 13th, 2026 19:20
• Your Past Belongs in the Trash (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is thoughtful and grounded. The everyday images make grace...
  January 13th, 2026 11:20
• Charlotte. Part 1 (Paul Bell) Paul, this is razor-sharp. The repetition builds a deadpan rhythm that...
  January 12th, 2026 22:00
• but you are still here (Arqios) My friend, this feels ancient and steady in the best way. The poem holds...
  January 12th, 2026 21:58
• Human Weather Systems (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this feels like grief processed gently rather than...
  January 12th, 2026 21:48
• Glad for Graces (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! Glad for gluggers is be he, and you know who he...
  January 12th, 2026 21:45
• Night Rain (Dominic Windram) Dominic, the image of car lights punctuating the rain really holds this...
  January 12th, 2026 21:42
• Samba (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the way nature becomes an orchestra here is just beautiful. Rhythm,...
  January 12th, 2026 21:28
• A Short Walk Around The Block (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I like how this captures mental noise against a perfectly ordinary...
  January 12th, 2026 10:04
• Realization (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is brave writing. The way you trace manipulation from confusion...
  January 12th, 2026 10:01
• Haiku of my Love (Kevin Hulme) Yes it is. And this poem\'s structure and restraint convey that perfectly!...
  January 12th, 2026 09:58
• Fascism – Yes! (Doggerel Dave) Dave, I appreciate how you follow the thread backward. You’re not...
  January 11th, 2026 17:54
• Midlife Horror Recollection (A piece of luggage) Friend, this poem is heavy. The numbness is palpable, and the honesty of...
  January 11th, 2026 17:47
• Cicada Asks a Favor (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this reads like a fable for makers. Imagination over will, brevity...
  January 11th, 2026 17:45
• Rich (2781) Valiantstar, this reads like a hymn of reversal. You confront power,...
  January 11th, 2026 10:33
• slowly turning (Arqios) That image of May pressing over June, a birthday leaning on a funeral, is...
  January 11th, 2026 09:41
• Ricky Gervais Has No Faith? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hey, you can like someone and disagree with them on stuff. Otherwise, who...
  January 11th, 2026 09:33
• Gestation (Sorenbarrett) I’m struck by how you braid ritual, violence, and renewal without...
  January 11th, 2026 09:26
• Sure Seeking (Orchidee) Orchi, this is prayer anchored in endurance. It doesn’t rush God, it...
  January 11th, 2026 09:25
• Where Hides My Fallen Autumn Leaves (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this reads like a ruminative chant where memory, desire, culture,...
  January 11th, 2026 09:20
• Leaders (NafisaSB) Safina, this is clear-eyed and urgent. The moral weight of it comes...
  January 11th, 2026 09:18
• Where one learns to endure (Lore) Lore, this is a portrait of invisibility rendered with deep compassion....
  January 11th, 2026 09:17
• FASCISM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) What can be said but amen…not in the “hallelujah, everything’s...
  January 11th, 2026 08:59
• Finally A Full Sleeve (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hell yes! Congrats, My full sleeve was completed by 2022ish I believe!...
  January 10th, 2026 10:57
• He Lights the Way (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is faith offered as companionship, not correction. You...
  January 10th, 2026 10:55
• I can\'t forget, I cannot come back either... (Cellinic) Cellinic...well...I won\'t tell anyone! 🤐🤣 Thank you for the...
  January 10th, 2026 10:54
• the reckoning of verse (Arqios) My friend, this is ferocious in its clarity. It doesn’t romanticize the...
  January 10th, 2026 10:52
• Something Wants the Fire in the Water (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this reads like a voice questioning its own embodiment. Power,...
  January 10th, 2026 10:49
• Tiller of heart\'s soil (Sorenbarrett) Wow! That image of a savior in farmer’s pants, crucified on his hoe, is...
  January 10th, 2026 10:48
• Character Considered (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem my friend! Jeesh, they really were glugging original...
  January 10th, 2026 10:45
• Paying with my Time (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this is raw and unflinching. It doesn’t moralize from a distance,...
  January 10th, 2026 10:41
• This Wasn’t the Plan (Lore) I know that state of functioning without being present, where the body...
  January 9th, 2026 10:56
• HOME SWEET HOME (Jerry Reynolds) Jerry, this is stark and confrontational. The bluntness leaves no room to...
  January 9th, 2026 10:54
• Help (2781) ValiantStar, this reads like a soul wrestling and refusing to give up....
  January 9th, 2026 10:53
• It Doesn’t Work (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I connect with the recognition that doing everything alone only takes us...
  January 9th, 2026 10:52
• Journey to the Guts of the Earth (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, what a sly and unsettling poem, my friend. It feels like a descent...
  January 9th, 2026 10:50
• descent (Arqios) Wow! Powerful metaphor, my friend. It is interesting the way we view...
  January 9th, 2026 10:48
• The EX (Paul Bell) Paul, this is laugh out loud sharp. The timing, the back and forth, the...
  January 9th, 2026 10:39
• Judgment of Joy (Orchidee) Orchi, this starts solemn and lands joyful…then my brain does a funny...
  January 9th, 2026 10:38
• Big mouth (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is brutal in the best way. It feels corroded, loud, and...
  January 9th, 2026 10:36
• Obsession (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this balances irony and honesty well. The voice disarms, then admits...
  January 9th, 2026 10:35
• The New Year (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this reads like a life seen from both ends at once. Youth,...
  January 8th, 2026 14:14
• Memory (Cellinic) Cellinic, this feels reflective and immersive. It moves gently through...
  January 8th, 2026 14:13
• Woman with Shadows (Katie B.) I know that moment of realizing you don’t belong to the theater you’re...
  January 8th, 2026 10:09
• Stopping To Ponder (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this reads like a ledger of hard-earned lessons. Each example builds...
  January 8th, 2026 09:57
• into stillness (Arqios) My friend, this is hushed and luminous. It settles into the moment without...
  January 8th, 2026 09:55
• Problems of a Prophet (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi. We know the prophet\'s problems, but do...
  January 8th, 2026 09:44
• Shades (Sorenbarrett) Excellent, my friend! I relate to how landscapes change while still...
  January 8th, 2026 09:41
• Harakiri (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this reads like a quiet internal coup. Authority questioned,...
  January 8th, 2026 09:40
• Stardust (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this reads like wonder paired with acceptance. Stardust, awareness,...
  January 8th, 2026 09:36
• Eager in Isolation (Katie B.) I connect with that surrender to being alone long enough for words to...
  January 7th, 2026 09:31
• snake incident, 3:14pm (Arqios) My friend, this is sharp and perfectly observed. The humor never blinks,...
  January 7th, 2026 09:30
• Final Goodbye (Paul Bell) Paul, this is chilling in its restraint. The quiet tone makes the turn hit...
  January 7th, 2026 09:25
• Light And Dark (Orchidee) Orchi, this feels reverent and steady. The cadence carries Scripture with...
  January 7th, 2026 09:24
• Perfection (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this feels quietly true. It names that ache every writer knows, the...
  January 7th, 2026 09:22
• Trying To Be Good (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this feels grounded and unapologetic. It owns imperfection without...
  January 7th, 2026 09:21
• There’s Purpose in Everything (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I’ve had seasons where being still was harder than doing anything else,...
  January 7th, 2026 09:20
• Walk Me Home (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this is feral and unfiltered. It moves like memory without brakes,...
  January 7th, 2026 09:18
• The Third Neutron (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels charged and inward. It moves like a thought waking itself...
  January 7th, 2026 09:17
• The Confession (NinjaGirl) I know that fear of being less loved once the truth is spoken. The hope...
  January 7th, 2026 09:16
• As If My Lips Were Peaches (Katie B.) Great write, Katie! That image of being held as if you’d blow away is...
  January 7th, 2026 09:15
• Back in the Game (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this grabbed me immediately. It’s hungry, loud, and alive with...
  January 7th, 2026 09:13
• It will be Ok (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this reads like a steady hand on the shoulder. It speaks calm...
  January 7th, 2026 09:13
• small print of prophecy (Arqios) Powerful!! There’s a calm defiance here I really admire. The hermit’s...
  January 6th, 2026 14:44
• Totally Free (Friendship) Friendship, this poem moves with grace. You strip away obligation and...
  January 6th, 2026 13:43
• Where is Santa? Does God know? (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Powerful, my friend! This confronts guilt and loss head-on. It’s...
  January 6th, 2026 13:36
• The Little Soldiers (Paul Bell) Paul, this poem walks a difficult line between guilt and grace. The...
  January 6th, 2026 13:25
• Epiphany Enlightening (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! On the 12th day of Glugmas, no less! 😂
  January 6th, 2026 13:17
• Debt Slavery (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is raw and angry in the right way. It doesn’t posture or...
  January 6th, 2026 13:13
• Name It! (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this poem understands that love doesn’t always announce itself. It...
  January 5th, 2026 22:57
• Darkness Emboldens (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these pieces work together beautifully. The first summons the night...
  January 5th, 2026 18:58
• Self‑Portrait in Motion (Friendship) Friendship, this poem walks the line between reflection and becoming with...
  January 5th, 2026 16:17
• Amid The Echo of Doves (Neville) Reading this feels like walking through memory rather than space. The...
  January 5th, 2026 16:16
• What I Don’t Say (Lore) Lore, this poem doesn’t seek relief, and that’s its power. It gives...
  January 5th, 2026 16:14
• on being pulled back (Arqios) My friend, this poem understands the cost of listening. The words don’t...
  January 5th, 2026 16:12
• The Bottle (Paul Bell) Paul, this piece thrives on escalation. What starts as mock therapy turns...
  January 5th, 2026 16:10
• Magi (Mutley Ravishes) When you come up with the definitive answer for this...do let me know!...
  January 5th, 2026 16:09