Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Righteous Ruler (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem, Ochi. You really do have a knack for these, my...
  February 11th, 2026 13:23
• For Wednesday ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, there’s a stark clarity running through these. Each piece feels...
  February 11th, 2026 13:22
• Born to Life (Katie B.) Katie, this holds life and death in the same open palm. The spare...
  February 11th, 2026 13:21
• Dumb founded (2781) Valiantstar, the ring imagery gives this bite and rhythm, but it’s the...
  February 11th, 2026 13:20
• Useless, Useless (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this dismantles myth without ever raising its voice. Theatrical...
  February 11th, 2026 13:19
• Standards Double (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Yes. I love the title, I love the depth...and I love the interplay between...
  February 11th, 2026 13:18
• He Lifts Her Up (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this speaks with calm certainty. The acknowledgment that people...
  February 11th, 2026 13:16
• Management, Drones And Energy Vampires In The Office (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this carries real heat. The prison-like office imagery grounds the...
  February 11th, 2026 13:00
• Bonding (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a riot from start to finish…sharp, chaotic, and...
  February 11th, 2026 12:57
• north & south (Arqios) My friend, I had to laugh at myself first. As an American, “North &...
  February 11th, 2026 12:55
• Pests (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I’ve felt that kind of inner drone…the noise that won’t quiet...
  February 11th, 2026 12:50
• another name for me (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this hit me hard…there’s something suffocating and electric...
  February 11th, 2026 12:49
• Gracious Goodness (Orchidee) Gracious glugging goodness, that was a wonderful poem, Popeye says. I say...
  February 10th, 2026 13:09
• Tuesday Musing (Kurt Philip Behm) These speak to a tension I know well…between unity and fracture, letter...
  February 10th, 2026 13:08
• Sore Throat (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this made me smile…there’s an easy, grounded honesty here. It...
  February 10th, 2026 13:07
• The Ballad of Banjo Paterson (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is a warm, confident tribute…it reads like a toast spoken...
  February 10th, 2026 13:06
• Double Standards (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) The king of concise has returned and the verdict: 🤯 Powerful and true!...
  February 10th, 2026 13:05
• Just A While Longer (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) This resonates with seasons I know well…the slow reshaping, the...
  February 10th, 2026 13:03
• Goodnight (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is a powerful reckoning. The litany of places, damage, and...
  February 10th, 2026 13:02
• a solitary room (Arqios) My friend, this is beautifully restrained. The room widens, becomes...
  February 10th, 2026 13:01
• And There’s The Rub (Neville) That contrast between honey-colored hair and clover on one side, and...
  February 10th, 2026 12:59
• Uncle Dave (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is beautifully done. The litany of privilege and access never...
  February 10th, 2026 12:58
• Blank (Mutley Ravishes) Reading this pulls me into that old metaphysical vertigo…the moment you...
  February 10th, 2026 12:57
• When Home and Therapy No Longer Hold (Friendship) My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet hurt here that feels...
  February 10th, 2026 12:54
• To Forever And Then (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I feel this. That space where love still exists but no longer speaks...
  February 9th, 2026 21:01
• Autopsy (Paul Bell) Love it! That refrain about letting the blood out does heavy lifting here,...
  February 9th, 2026 21:00
• My Dearest Dad—My World Has Crumbled Around Me. (Friendship) Friendship, this is a deeply moving tribute. From the unmoored grief to...
  February 9th, 2026 20:57
• Seven Words (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is thoughtful and sharp, my friend. You carry humor and...
  February 9th, 2026 20:54
• unknown quantity (Arqios) arqios, this is beautifully pared down, my friend. From quantity to...
  February 9th, 2026 20:52
• It\'s Too Much For Most (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That phrase “kill the spirit” anchors everything here, Shaun. It...
  February 9th, 2026 20:42
• SIMPLY EXPLAINED (Michael Edwards) Michael, this made me smile, my friend. The light touch works, and the...
  February 9th, 2026 20:36
• Misty eye (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a haunting piece, my friend. From the sealed sky to the...
  February 9th, 2026 20:27
• The Eases of Living (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this is tender and honest, my friend. From the simple act of...
  February 9th, 2026 01:25
• You think you’ve got troubles? (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this made me smile, my friend. There’s warmth and self-awareness...
  February 9th, 2026 01:23
• The Sun Always Shines Again (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this is a gentle and faithful reflection, my friend. The way you...
  February 9th, 2026 01:21
• There Once Was [Nevermind] (Cheeky Missy) This actually made me laugh hard, Missy! 🤣
  February 9th, 2026 01:19
• Random thoughts (Orchidee) Sorry to hear that, Orchi! Keeping you and family in my prayers. It sounds...
  February 9th, 2026 01:18
• Sunday Triumvirate (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a thoughtful triad, my friend. From wandering wisdom to moral...
  February 9th, 2026 01:13
• Alien Nation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wait, Mick Jagger was on Alien Nation? LOL! Just kidding, of course. (He...
  February 8th, 2026 09:52
• Woke, but Not Awake (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this lands cleanly. It doesn’t reject awareness…it challenges...
  February 8th, 2026 09:51
• The Things a Drunk will Doo (Thomas W Case) The title drew me in immediately, Thomas…I could write volumes from...
  February 8th, 2026 09:49
• of thunder and fire (Arqios) A subtle, affecting piece, arqios. Light and pain move together here,...
  February 8th, 2026 09:44
• Gotcha! (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is unsettling in a quiet way. The voice of belief as...
  February 8th, 2026 09:43
• History of an old wound (Sorenbarrett) A harrowing piece, Soren. The language turns memory into anatomy, and the...
  February 8th, 2026 09:42
• Predator (NafisaSB) Safina, this is thoughtfully constructed. The movement from predator and...
  February 8th, 2026 00:23
• Divorcing Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is beautifully measured. The way you let language hover between...
  February 8th, 2026 00:22
• The Problems of Living (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, it’s genuinely good to have you back, bro. This reads like a...
  February 8th, 2026 00:21
• Termination of a Promise (Friendship) This resonated deeply. There’s a particular hurt in realizing a promise...
  February 7th, 2026 10:17
• Acceleration (Mutley Ravishes) A concise, thoughtful piece, Mutley. The river, the acceleration, and that...
  February 7th, 2026 10:16
• the promise of mourning (Arqios) This resonated, my dear friend. Learning to let sorrow sit beside us...
  February 7th, 2026 10:15
• Baby (Sorenbarrett) A lovely metaphor, Soren. It reads as innocence, yes, but also as presence...
  February 7th, 2026 10:14
• I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A tense piece, Shaun. It reads as a snapshot of cultural anxiety more than...
  February 7th, 2026 10:12
• BLOCKED (Doggerel Dave) Yikes. Yeah...poem is proof you are no longer blocked. But, yikes! I have...
  February 7th, 2026 10:09
• Monitoring Spirits (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This reminded me how paranoia and perception can blur when trust erodes....
  February 6th, 2026 15:08
• Lances & A Mace (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is stark and cutting. The compression gives it force…every...
  February 6th, 2026 15:08
• \"mirrored hatred\" (Kylie_love) Kylie, this is raw and unsettling in the most honest way. The...
  February 6th, 2026 15:07
• Crazy (Rebellion_in_sanity) This felt familiar in a human way. How often care is misunderstood until...
  February 6th, 2026 15:05
• My Damaged Brain (Friendship) I relate to this more than I’d like to admit. The way doubt starts...
  February 6th, 2026 15:05
• The Mantra (Paul Bell) This is clever, Paul. The mantra structure lulls the reader even as the...
  February 6th, 2026 15:01
• Friendly response (Arqios) Love it, dear friend. Reading this felt familiar in the best way. That...
  February 6th, 2026 14:58
• Numenorian Telepathy (Mutley Ravishes) You got me with this, Mutley. The imagery invites fear, then undercuts it...
  February 6th, 2026 14:57
• Cereal killers (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits hard. It’s relentless…name after name after name,...
  February 6th, 2026 14:54
• \"Everybody Knows Dave\" (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is playful storytelling with a knowing wink. The rhyme keeps it...
  February 5th, 2026 19:10
• Table For One (Tonya Titus) Tonya, this reads like an intimate moment of choosing to stay present. The...
  February 5th, 2026 19:03
• Unto Ash (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this pairing works powerfully. The first poem races with consequence...
  February 5th, 2026 19:01
• Occam’s Razor (Arqios) Wow! You had me from the title, and that turn on Occam’s Razor caught...
  February 5th, 2026 18:57
• Hopeful of Help (Orchidee) Excellent, Orchi! I have to say, all the damn glugs aside, I am finding...
  February 5th, 2026 18:52
• A thirsty muse (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like an inventory of absence. Wells emptied, springs...
  February 5th, 2026 18:38
• \"A Hollow Heart\" (Friendship) Friendship, this is heavy in a quiet, unflinching that image of the heart...
  February 5th, 2026 18:31
• The Obscurity  (Rebellion_in_sanity) Reading this, I felt that familiar sickness that comes when accountability...
  February 5th, 2026 18:29
• Clown Worlds 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Well done, Mutley! That phrase “ground-dweller” really caught me. It...
  February 5th, 2026 18:27
• Will to Power (Mutley Ravishes) 🤯 This is SPOT ON, my friend. 💯 Such profound, paradoxical truth in...
  February 5th, 2026 18:21
• They Lied (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this is compassionate and steady. You name the lies plainly, then...
  February 5th, 2026 18:18
• Epiphany Of Time (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this lands with quiet force. It feels like a pause that resets...
  February 4th, 2026 10:40
• In Gratitude I Weep (Katie B.) Excellent job, Katie! This poem holds suffering and gratitude in the same...
  February 4th, 2026 10:39
• Deworming (Rebellion_in_sanity) Great job, my friend. This poem weaponizes form and tone to expose...
  February 4th, 2026 10:38
• A tribute (2781) Valiantstar, this poem moves like a pilgrimage of questions. Ancient...
  February 4th, 2026 10:36
• A Friend (Friendship) Wonderful job, Friendship. That image of the lighthouse keeping the light...
  February 4th, 2026 10:34
• Broken Biscuit People (Paul Bell) Paul, this is devastating in its quietness. I love the title. The humor...
  February 4th, 2026 10:32
• let poem\'s arise (Arqios) arqios, this is gentle and affirming. It carries a quiet confidence about...
  February 4th, 2026 10:30
• Ocean of love (Cellinic) cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage through love. Depth,...
  February 4th, 2026 10:28
• I am (Sorenbarrett) Great job. my friend. Reading this feels familiar. The way you stack...
  February 4th, 2026 10:27
• Poetess and The Pussy (Teddy.15) Love the dark humor, Teddy. That exchange with the cat stays with me. The...
  February 4th, 2026 10:26
• Power and Awe (Orchidee) You, dear friend, are a hymn-poem tour de force. We know a few others who...
  February 4th, 2026 10:24
• Tuesday Triumvirate (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this triumvirate feels intentional and exacting. Love, deception,...
  February 4th, 2026 10:22
• Missing Her (Lilly OvO) That detail of kissing twice before leaving really stays with me. It’s...
  February 4th, 2026 10:21
• \"Us\" (Kylie_love) Kylie, this is a tender reckoning with timing, fear, and self-doubt. The...
  February 4th, 2026 10:19
• The miles (Isa kemmy) Isa, this feels tender and vulnerable. There’s a quiet ache beneath the...
  February 4th, 2026 10:18
• she rides the wind (Arqios) Dearest friend, this reads like an unfolding myth...in real time. Nature,...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:38
• The Perfect Marriage (Teddy.15) Love the image and the limerick, my friend. Not only a shot at it, you...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:35
• An Appeal (Rebellion_in_sanity) This lands hard, my friend. It’s darkly funny and deeply unsettling at...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:32
• Birth (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is dense (in the right way) and intoxicating. It feels like...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:30
• EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Oh...damn! This is powerful, my friend! On so many different levels! Love...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:26
• Moving Forward (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is about movement that isn’t triumphant, just necessary....
  February 3rd, 2026 10:23
• Temple Sounds 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Powerful write. Your restraint here does the heavy lifting, the poem\'s...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:21
• weed (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Flowers all the same. It\'s amazing what we deem disposable, no? Powerful...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:18
• Always and Forever (Lilly OvO) Lilly, this is pure tenderness. It feels open, unguarded, and deeply lived...
  February 3rd, 2026 10:17
• Candlemas Celebration (Orchidee) A beautiful hymn-poem, my friend. So beautiful, it almost escaped a glug....
  February 2nd, 2026 14:24
• The Words Demand (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels exhilarating and defiant. There’s a joy in outrunning...
  February 2nd, 2026 14:22
• Creation groans (2781) Valiantstar, this poem moves between Scripture and soul with intention....
  February 2nd, 2026 14:21