Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Release (NafisaSB) Wonderfully rendered poem that flows beautifully. Its message is a much...
  April 20th, 2025 07:46
• The Light (Lewisgale mental hospital) A most wonderful poem in time for Easter. Not sure if it was intended for...
  April 20th, 2025 07:42
• Texas Queen (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Wow! A hauntingly beautiful dark poem, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 19th, 2025 09:55
• Cry (Tony36) Crying and laughing are both healing medicine. Well done, Tony! 🌹👏
  April 19th, 2025 09:52
• Words (Teardrop) Very relatable to this poet, my friend. Loved this. A fave! 🌹👏
  April 19th, 2025 09:51
• Scratches Galore (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Reads like a rap, my friend. Though I don\'t have any problem with what...
  April 19th, 2025 09:47
• can’t sleep! (Demar Desu) No cannabis to smoke, that will not do, bro! That really helps me sleep at...
  April 19th, 2025 09:24
• Not what it seems (Sorenbarrett) Metaphors are hidden, no doubt—and that’s what rewards close readings....
  April 19th, 2025 09:00
• purity (Dimpy) Beautiful poem of love. This one sings, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 19th, 2025 08:49
• w o r d s (Arqios) Ah. Your title and your note speak of the a power words brought together,...
  April 19th, 2025 08:45
• Harrys Easter Egg for Mary (Poetic Licence) That Harry, my goodness. LOL! I love this series, my friend. 🌹👏
  April 19th, 2025 08:30
• twilight trek (Arqios) Hope endures. Amen! Excellent my friend! 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 21:35
• ACUPUNCTURE (Michael Edwards) Now THAT is a twist! Great job, Michael. 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 21:17
• New Emperor (Damaso) A wonderful metaphor, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 21:16
• Pro Tem (Kurt Philip Behm) Another profound and philosophical poem, my friend! Really enjoyed this!...
  April 18th, 2025 21:15
• Standing Eight Count (Thomas W Case) This is dark and poetic with teeth. I love this Thomas! Well done!
  April 18th, 2025 21:13
• The Eve Of Easter (Orchidee) Wonderfully rendered, my friend! A fave! 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 21:12
• Ahem, Don\'t Look At Me (Cheeky Missy) Wonderful write, my friend. Oooh. Porridge and French Toast...be right...
  April 18th, 2025 21:11
• Graves (Tony36) Well done on this, Tony! Bravo! 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 21:08
• In some African cultures there is no roles of mom dad sister brother grandma grandpa etc. (Demar Desu) Wow a wonderful cross-cultural poetic musing, bro! Love this! 🌹👏 A...
  April 18th, 2025 21:07
• Whispers (Teardrop) Excellent, teardrop. This one sings like a beautifully haunted song. Well...
  April 18th, 2025 21:04
• Chocolate (Mutley Ravishes) Beautiful, brief write that points to a great cause. Wonderful job, my...
  April 18th, 2025 21:01
• Ēostre Or Easter? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Def a conversation starter, my friend! 🤯 And you’re right—Easter...
  April 18th, 2025 16:38
• sleeping pills (Dimpy) I could feel this one, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 18th, 2025 16:14
• Acts (Sorenbarrett) An excellent poem that acknowledges the reality that the very animals we...
  April 18th, 2025 16:12
• The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee) A great write highlighting why Good Friday is actually \"good\". Also,...
  April 17th, 2025 15:17
• Forever Lost (Kurt Philip Behm) A feeling I have had before. Disconcerting. Well written, Kurt. 🌹👏
  April 17th, 2025 15:15
• Sometimes (Caring dove) It is. I know the feeling well, sadly; though, I\'d imagine for you, the...
  April 17th, 2025 08:46
• The Streets (Tony36) Well done, Tony. It shows how harsh life can be and conveys the urgency of...
  April 17th, 2025 08:43
• in darkness... (Dimpy) Wow. Erotic, sensual, mysterious. Love the use of nature to describe the...
  April 17th, 2025 08:39
• Muse\'s blood (Sorenbarrett) Writing has been my life, my saving grace, the way I get to process my...
  April 17th, 2025 08:37
• The things you can’t buy… (Demar Desu) In this world, nothing is without price. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
  April 17th, 2025 08:34
• I Got Burned. (Poetic Licence) I am not fan of the death penalty. It gives the power to kill/murder to...
  April 17th, 2025 08:31
• Do You Believe Katy Perry Went To Space? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) At least they didn\'t go up in SpaceX 💥 🤣 Ah...the rich and famous....
  April 17th, 2025 08:14
• but a flesh wound (Arqios) Well...now that you worked up my appetite again...I am, well, hungry for...
  April 17th, 2025 08:06
• Seeding The Palms (Kurt Philip Behm) A brief couplet that is deeply profound. Well done on this, Kurt. Hat\'s...
  April 16th, 2025 14:41
• Cut Me Some Slack...I Have a Crazy Streak (Cheeky Missy) My tummy is growling again. Why could that be? 🤣 Wonderful sonnets my...
  April 16th, 2025 13:51
• Passover Ponderings (Orchidee) Wonderfully rendered, Orchi! A most profound and sacred moment just before...
  April 16th, 2025 13:49
• Street Rat (Tony36) A wonderful poem that tells to common of a tale. Excellent write, Tony!...
  April 16th, 2025 13:44
• Never Saw it Coming (Thomas W Case) Raw. I could feel this Thomas. A wonderful write, my friend. 🌹👏
  April 16th, 2025 13:43
• faces of the mirrors (Skyler2) Beautiful rhyme scheme and a most unique form. A fave from me. Welcome to...
  April 16th, 2025 13:41
• Lost (Caring dove) Your poetry, my friend, is a window into an experience many people have...
  April 16th, 2025 13:37
• Redeemer pains through window panes (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful poem from you on Osiris. Another wonderful poem from Mourgana...
  April 16th, 2025 07:27
• pot plants (Arqios) The mind is a long-twisted path...and when one wanders...beware crushing...
  April 16th, 2025 07:24
• O (Mourgana of the Fey) \"o i am but / a dotted / line\". Wow. 🤯 I have never heard it...
  April 16th, 2025 07:22
• Tick Tock. (Poetic Licence) Great write, dear poet and friend. This one resonated deeply. Tick tock...
  April 16th, 2025 07:17
• Immortal Chortles (Mutley Ravishes) Wow! 🤯🤩 Au contraire, mon ami — je te remercie pour cette...
  April 15th, 2025 20:05
• Like, How On Earth? (Cheeky Missy) These were all a joy to read, Missy—but that last one truly moved me to...
  April 15th, 2025 16:27
• Stepford Ice (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful poem. \"Hope frozen— and canned\". Indeed. Love that closing...
  April 15th, 2025 16:23
• Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee) Wonderful rendering of Scripture, my friend—and I especially appreciate...
  April 15th, 2025 16:10
• be brave... (NafisaSB) And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my...
  April 15th, 2025 08:11
• Go to sleep (Tony36) A wonderful lullaby, Tony. I could see myself reading this to my children...
  April 15th, 2025 08:08
• $0.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu) It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds...
  April 15th, 2025 08:05
• Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett) \"Beauty is more than just skin deep\", or so the saying goes. And it is...
  April 15th, 2025 08:02
• Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I live in the state of Hershey! LOL|! A wonderful poem, my friend. Indeed,...
  April 15th, 2025 07:57
• Our day (2781) Wow! What a poem and what an ending. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
  April 15th, 2025 07:53
• Change of Heart (Poetic Licence) Understood. I have been there. You think you\'ve finally figured things...
  April 15th, 2025 07:52
• letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios) Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a...
  April 15th, 2025 07:48
• Don\'t Look Back (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful and most thought-provoking poem, my friend. For me, those are...
  April 14th, 2025 16:23
• Rage-filled Turns (NinjaGirl) So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or...
  April 14th, 2025 15:33
• Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee) Those dang cock(erel)s. They ruin it for the conscience every time, I tell...
  April 14th, 2025 15:25
• Put On the Kettle and Your Feet Up? (Cheeky Missy) How can Shredded Wheat, in any form, be too much fun?!?! My tummy is...
  April 14th, 2025 15:15
• Abuse (Tony36) A true and urgent write, Tony. Indeed, abuse happens most by those who are...
  April 14th, 2025 15:12
• Blossom falls (Caring dove) Do not blame you for changing location. What a beautiful poem and metaphor...
  April 14th, 2025 07:42
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) \"We don\'t make love, we feel it.\" On the surface, a literal translation...
  April 14th, 2025 07:39
• On A Sunday Morning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth. People often drone on and don\'t give a shit. What else is there to...
  April 14th, 2025 07:35
• midnight courage (Arqios) This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an...
  April 14th, 2025 07:32
• Pleasing Everyone Else (Poetic Licence) So true, my friend! So very true! Individually we are all unique and that...
  April 14th, 2025 07:26
• Abstract journey (Mourgana of the Fey) Wonderful and profoundly deep. The short, brief lines almost give the poem...
  April 14th, 2025 07:20
• Weeping (2781) Ooh. I feel the pain in your words my friend. I had a crying/praying...
  April 14th, 2025 07:17
• TEETOTAL (Michael Edwards) Ooh. I am feeling sorry for you too. That\'s no fun. This poem speaks much...
  April 14th, 2025 07:13
• Watch Out (Thomas W Case) This poem hits raw and real. A wonderful write, Thomas!
  April 13th, 2025 19:06
• Jailers (NinjaGirl) And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a...
  April 13th, 2025 19:05
• Now, Don\'t Get Any Ideas (Cheeky Missy) For those with seasonal allergies like mine, forsythia yellow is a warning...
  April 13th, 2025 13:38
• Butterfly\'s Wander (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done. Paints a haunting truth many are in denial of! Well done, Kurt!...
  April 13th, 2025 13:35
• Anointing Memorial (Orchidee) I love this scene as it is presented in Jesus Christ Superstar. Well done...
  April 13th, 2025 13:33
• Boogers on paper (Demar Desu) 🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank...
  April 13th, 2025 13:30
• Jousting With The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That last part...I concur! Well done, my friend. Wonderful poem with a fun...
  April 13th, 2025 13:27
• Passing on (Sorenbarrett) In this I see the course of one\'s life with, perhaps, death being the...
  April 13th, 2025 13:25
• Gallows (Tony36) Wow! Haunting poem, Tony! Well done!
  April 13th, 2025 09:51
• song to the stars (Arqios) Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby...
  April 13th, 2025 07:41
• Wise Man Say (10). (Poetic Licence) Much wisdom here, but the latter...many unsolicited \"advisers\" need to...
  April 13th, 2025 07:31
• Elphin (Mourgana of the Fey) This is quite lyrical/musical and feels like a dance as one reads it. The...
  April 13th, 2025 07:29
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) Okay, I have to revisit this, and I am glad I did I never ended up...
  April 13th, 2025 07:25
• Till The Music Stops (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful poem with a poignant message! Live your life, while you are...
  April 12th, 2025 21:46
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) A lovely write! Happy Palm Sunday, my friend! 🌹👏
  April 12th, 2025 21:43
• Love bounded (Demar Desu) Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses...
  April 12th, 2025 09:30
• Dear Heart (Tony36) A constant, never-ending message that some have to give to their hearts to...
  April 12th, 2025 08:15
• the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey) We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and...
  April 12th, 2025 08:12
• Daredevil: Born Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Thank you for the poetic review. I was kind of wondering how it was. Much...
  April 12th, 2025 08:08
• Echos (Teardrop) I can relate to this. Well done on this expression, my friend. It hit...
  April 12th, 2025 08:06
• Seasons pass (Sorenbarrett) A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons....
  April 12th, 2025 08:05
• celestial threads (Arqios) Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is...
  April 12th, 2025 08:01
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence) LOL! These were totally fun...and funny! Well done, my friend. Enjoy the...
  April 12th, 2025 07:58
• Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case) This is brilliant, Thomas. A fave! Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 20:11
• Storm Ports (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem about couplets written in couplets, and the message...profoundly...
  April 11th, 2025 20:08
• Great Is The Lord (Orchidee) Amen. Wonderful write, my friend. Love the song you shared too. 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 20:04
• Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36) What a lie indeed. More men need to be reading your poetry, Tony! Thanks...
  April 11th, 2025 08:20
• Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey) Love this. A beautiful poem rich in imagery in and metaphor. Well done, my...
  April 11th, 2025 08:20
• Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indeed. I love the violin. Powerful instrument. Excellent write! 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 07:59