Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Freeing The Circle (Kurt Philip Behm) There’s a beautiful stillness in this, Kurt—like breathing inside a...
  July 11th, 2025 16:50
• An Angler\'s Morn (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is breathtaking. I’ve read a lot of poetry on this site, but...
  July 11th, 2025 16:49
• drive on by (Arqios) I love your form here—the bold first lines anchor each stanza like mile...
  July 11th, 2025 16:46
• Depression (Tony36) All of that and how! Well written, Tony! A fave for the truth alone!...
  July 11th, 2025 16:44
• Well, Wouldn\'t You Like to Know? (Cheeky Missy) Well, of course we would, now that you ask! 🤣 Dearest friend, this...
  July 11th, 2025 16:42
• Not too smart (Sorenbarrett) Haha—this was a wild ride, Soren! You had me grinning the whole way...
  July 11th, 2025 16:39
• Arm Art. (Poetic Licence) Wow, my friend! You captured the quiet ritual and ache of those moments...
  July 11th, 2025 16:36
• There Was No Epstein List? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
  July 11th, 2025 09:33
• There Was No Epstein List? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Preach it, mate! 🌹👏
  July 11th, 2025 09:33
• And the Story Goes (Thomas W Case) Excellent, Thomas! This one aches in quiet, steady beats—like the rain...
  July 11th, 2025 09:32
• Parts of Love (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Chilling in its restraint, Hayleigh. You let the quiet horror do its own...
  July 11th, 2025 09:31
• If Only I Were Dumpster Diving, Is It?! (Cheeky Missy) My dear Missy, this whole arc is a whirlwind of sacred absurdity—tender,...
  July 11th, 2025 09:29
• Terrorbred (Kurt Philip Behm) Whoa, Kurt! Talk about a thrilling, wicked ride! This gave me chills—in...
  July 11th, 2025 09:02
• Hyenas (Damaso) Wow, my friend—there is something sharply raw yet oddly comforting here....
  July 11th, 2025 09:00
• Fraternity (Doggerel Dave) Ha! Dave, this hits home more than you know. I genuinely laughed at your...
  July 11th, 2025 08:59
• Stop Judging me (Tony36) Great write, Tony! A fave from me! 🌹👏
  July 10th, 2025 09:00
• starfall, freefall (Arqios) Oh my friend (OMF 🤣)…this is one of those poems that appears and...
  July 10th, 2025 08:58
• Lost art (Sorenbarrett) This one strikes like a kiln-fired truth, dear poet and friend. 🔥 The...
  July 10th, 2025 08:56
• Access Denied. (Poetic Licence) Tobani…this one tore right through me. 😔 The pacing—line by...
  July 10th, 2025 08:53
• Chilling out (2781) Yikes! 30 minutes. Yesterday I tried to edit a poem and kept getting...
  July 10th, 2025 08:51
• Raging Sea (Tony Grannell) Tony…this is thunderous, confessional, and masterfully carved. 🌊 That...
  July 9th, 2025 19:51
• Towering Above (Kurt Philip Behm) A stirring call to valor here—rooted in that classical sense of honor...
  July 9th, 2025 19:45
• Pink and Grey Hearts (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh…this one tugs on the heartstrings! The gray within the...
  July 9th, 2025 19:42
• Mum\'s Replacement Knee (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Now that’s what I call a bionic comeback! My mum went through one too....
  July 9th, 2025 11:00
• nev (Arqios) My friend…this was exactly the right kind of poem, at the right kind of...
  July 9th, 2025 10:58
• Let the bells of peace sound (Tony36) TONY. You did a shape poem—and I saw it before I even read it. 👀🔥...
  July 9th, 2025 10:47
• A vision (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one reads like a haunted descent—layered with ache, hunger,...
  July 9th, 2025 10:43
• Half a Heart. (Poetic Licence) Damn, Tobani…this one cut clean. ✂️ The rhythm pulled me in, but...
  July 9th, 2025 10:42
• Meanwhile (Orchidee) Oh Orchi…the Meanwhile Maestro! 🤣🤪 This had me grinning from line...
  July 9th, 2025 10:36
• Forever Been (Teddy.15) Oh Tink…there you\'ve been! This one glides with grace, even under the...
  July 9th, 2025 10:31
• I forgot...... (Orchidee) Oh Orchi…this is classic you! 😂 Twisting time, tangled sticks, and...
  July 9th, 2025 10:28
• I understand, don’t I? (Georgia Watson) Oh Georgia…this one hit that quiet ache so many know but rarely name....
  July 9th, 2025 10:25
• Heads Or Tails (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt! 🌹👏
  July 9th, 2025 10:24
• Vampyre (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Ooh. Now this one is hot 🔥, seductive 🫦, and bloody 🩸 brilliant...
  July 9th, 2025 10:22
• The Party\'s...In...The...Trash (Cheeky Missy) Ahh, my dearest Missy—the Sage of Sonnets, the Panera Prophet, the...
  July 9th, 2025 10:18
• I am proud (Tony36) And you damn well should be! Good for you and anyone heeding your wisdom...
  July 9th, 2025 10:15
• Some Kind of African Life (Neville) Neville…my dear poetic friend—it’s so good to see your voice again....
  July 9th, 2025 10:13
• Be the Light (Thomas W Case) Damn this is good, mate! Love it! The best literary device indeed! Can\'t...
  July 9th, 2025 10:10
• Between the Lines (Tristan Robert Lange) Minor update in progress. Final version coming soon once the server stops...
  July 9th, 2025 10:00
• vestibule (Arqios) Oh my friend…this one breathed. That fire line at the top already lit...
  July 9th, 2025 08:46
• Cycles (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one hits with that heavy, grim rhythm—like boots trudging...
  July 9th, 2025 08:43
• Grace and Dignity. (Poetic Licence) On another note and another read through, the opening to this very much...
  July 9th, 2025 08:34
• Grace and Dignity. (Poetic Licence) A-fucking-men. That is all that I can say to this. THIS...right here...is...
  July 9th, 2025 08:31
• Demons and MK Ultra (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Powerful poem on brainwashing. Wow. Scary but profound stuff, my friend!...
  July 9th, 2025 08:28
• Disaster Relief (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Oh hayleigh…my gothic friend, this one burned. 🔥 The ache, the edge,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:24
• A Prayer Away (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Always and evermore! Truth, my friend! Beautifully written! 🌹👏 A...
  July 7th, 2025 09:15
• Killing Clowns (Tony36) Oh no! Where\'s Grimace when one needs him! It must be that Hamburglar!...
  July 7th, 2025 09:15
• At what point? (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this one lands with weight. 😔 The questions here aren’t...
  July 7th, 2025 09:13
• The Influencer (Doggerel Dave) Oh Dave…this had me chuckling from the jump. 🤭 That closing line,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:11
• Butterfly. (Poetic Licence) Tobani…this one touched something deep. 🦋 That first half? Felt like...
  July 7th, 2025 09:07
• to the forgotten poet (Arqios) Oh, my dear poet and friend…this felt like it was speaking through me,...
  July 7th, 2025 09:05
• Doctor Doctor (2781) Oh this was cheeky in the best way! 😆 That punchline? Totally earned....
  July 7th, 2025 08:54
• may be (Isa kemmy) Isa…this flows like a mind on the edge of thought and thunder....
  July 7th, 2025 08:53
• Lost Cause for Love (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh…this one drips with that beautiful ache—so raw, so haunted....
  July 7th, 2025 08:51
• Rotten (Damaso) Damaso—this buzzes with ache and frequency...and that bridge stanza? It...
  July 7th, 2025 08:47
• Listening To Patsy ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt! 🌹👏
  July 7th, 2025 08:43
• Whipped Cream and Friday Night Strangers... (Cheeky Missy) Oh my goodness, my dear friend—this spread had me grinning, blinking,...
  July 7th, 2025 08:43
• Home Again (Bella Shepard) Yay! This is a great poem that can be taken literally or metaphorically!...
  July 7th, 2025 08:39
• The Jackalope (Tony36) Love it, Tony! Keep that Jackalope hopping! 🌹👏
  July 7th, 2025 08:38
• Butterfly Reflections (Teddy.15) Teddy…this one truly landed soft, like the wings it speaks of. 😌...
  July 7th, 2025 08:36
• Why me? (Sorenbarrett) Soren, my friend…you are either divinely protected or running on...
  July 7th, 2025 08:34
• feasting you (Arqios) Oh this…this was exquisite, my friend. Just sumptuous in tone and...
  July 7th, 2025 08:29
• Wise Man Say (19) (Poetic Licence) All of these are wise, of course...for you are wise man who say! LOL! That...
  July 7th, 2025 08:22
• Fireworks fun (Tony36) This, my friend, is effing brilliant! LOVE IT! A total fave!
  July 5th, 2025 08:48
• part savage, part human (Arqios) Aye, salty be the right term, matey! Arg! Like a salt dog, yer poem really...
  July 5th, 2025 08:46
• What were they thinking? (Sorenbarrett) Very fun way to treat an otherwise horrifying reality for some. Parents...
  July 5th, 2025 08:42
• Gaza (Help). (Poetic Licence) No...you are not antiSemitic. And in this scenario YOU CANNOT BE as both...
  July 5th, 2025 08:33
• I\'m back (Rainbow 1) Welcome back!
  July 5th, 2025 08:28
• Excremental (Doggerel Dave) My favorite! Seriously...I am not sure a poem will top this today! Like,...
  July 5th, 2025 08:03
• It\'s Over There (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! I know the place! 🤣 Well done on this!
  July 5th, 2025 07:49
• Omnipresent (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Agreed with Soren. This is epic in its brevity...epic as in the first...
  July 4th, 2025 12:28
• Happy July 4th (Tony36) Happy Birthday America! Happy 4th Tony. 🌹👏 A most touching poem with...
  July 4th, 2025 12:24
• time\'s door (Arqios) This is quietly stunning, dear poet and friend. Every detail feels...
  July 4th, 2025 12:23
• Turn out the lights (Sorenbarrett) This is brilliant, Soren. Truly. The depth packed into each line caught me...
  July 4th, 2025 12:21
• Fondly Remembered. (Poetic Licence) EXCELLENT! SO MUCH SO I HAVE TO SHOUT IN ALL CAPS! 🤣 Seriously, and...
  July 4th, 2025 12:15
• Good For God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) There is so much truth to this. It ain\'t easy, is it? But we were never...
  July 4th, 2025 12:14
• Trusted Adult (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Excellent lines and right their with you, my friend! And you are more than...
  July 4th, 2025 12:11
• Redux - Child Care 14/5/25 (Doggerel Dave) Wait, did this happen in the USA? I heard you mention the best country in...
  July 4th, 2025 12:06
• \"China\" (Damaso) A wonderful, very deeply reflective write, not uncommon for you my friend....
  July 4th, 2025 12:00
• I Stand (Tony36) YES!!!! And we can be the voice for the voiceless, like prophets in the...
  July 4th, 2025 11:57
• Get One Over (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Was just seeing a song I wrote about one such person. Hit the spot, my...
  July 4th, 2025 11:53
• I don’t like me (Georgia Watson) Been here said these words, maybe not exactly...but yeah. I am finally,...
  July 4th, 2025 11:52
• closed windows (Arqios) Indeed. Patience no longer seems to be a virtue in this culture of...
  July 3rd, 2025 20:19
• Slumbering light (Sorenbarrett) Oh where oh where did that little hope go? Along with with truth, of...
  July 3rd, 2025 20:12
• Hello or Goodbye. (Poetic Licence) Love this my friend! Always love juxtaposition and you do it masterfully...
  July 3rd, 2025 14:19
• Earth Shaking (Mutley Ravishes) Love this and totally relate! Well done! A fave! 🌹👏
  July 3rd, 2025 14:12
• Seed You Sow (Senryu). (Poetic Licence) How did I miss this? Great Senryu, my friend! 🌹👏
  July 2nd, 2025 14:12
• We were the Aluminum Cowboys (Thomas W Case) Excited for your tour, Thomas! Best of luck on it. And what a excellent...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:48
• Sacred Melody (Kurt Philip Behm) Amen. Indeed. And so music fills, nourishes, heals and guides the soul....
  July 2nd, 2025 12:46
• Meow and Don\'t Follow The Pink Trend (Cheeky Missy) Yes. Love that song! Those were the days indeed. And a nice pairing with...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:44
• I cry (Tony36) I cry with you, Tony. I cry right along with you. Bless you, my friend!...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:41
• baker’s gift (Arqios) 🤯 Step right up folks. Check this poem out. This is how a poem ought to...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:40
• When The Bluebird Finally Sings (Teddy.15) Pure emotional perfection! Seriously! This is one of my favorites I have...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:34
• A nuisent (2781) Oh dang! I am so glad I came across this! Truth! 💯🌹👏 Well done,...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:31
• I love roses (Sorenbarrett) Sensual and natural. Naturally sensual. This poem sings to the soul and I...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:28
• Capitalist Crusts (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) And how they are. The red pill, it\'s a bitch, but it opens the damn eyes,...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:26
• Yesteryear, Blame Games and FUN (Cheeky Missy) Fun fact. Eclipse is stellar closer to Pink Floyd\'s Dark Side of the...
  July 2nd, 2025 12:22
• The True Power of A Soul (Teddy.15) Pure beauty, dear Teddy. Something my soul needed to read. You are...
  July 2nd, 2025 11:46
• Slaying Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful musing on time! Love it! 🌹👏
  July 2nd, 2025 11:44
• Design Flaw (Rebellion_in_sanity) First. Wow! I say these were very serious. Very profound and deep,...
  July 2nd, 2025 11:39