Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Got My Kefir Gut Drink (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is playful and sharp in its own lane. The build from colors to...
  March 1st, 2026 08:30
• The Shell of Fulk Lake (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is beautifully crafted. The rhythm carries that old ballad...
  March 1st, 2026 08:15
• We Meet Again... (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is tight and deliberate. The clipped lines give it urgency, and...
  March 1st, 2026 08:13
• Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this hit me hard…especially the shift from four-letter words to...
  March 1st, 2026 08:11
• What does freedom mean to you? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this hits hard…you ask a question that refuses to sit quietly. It...
  March 1st, 2026 08:09
• Wordplay (Dan Williams) My friend, this is a powerful lineup of human traits all jostling for...
  March 1st, 2026 08:07
• And the wind (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this carries such a quiet ache… the repetition of love never...
  February 28th, 2026 18:55
• My new love 🌹 (Gumdrop) Gumdrop, welcome to MPS… this is a confident and thoughtful.. The...
  February 28th, 2026 18:55
• The Prodigal (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this captures that divided self with precision… two rooms, one...
  February 28th, 2026 12:47
• Do you hate violence? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Yes. War never seems to even the score, does it? Woke up to the same news...
  February 28th, 2026 12:43
• Perception – Am I Coming or Going? (Friendship) Friendship, this feels expansive… like standing inside a thought as it...
  February 28th, 2026 12:37
• Clever (2781) Valiantstar, this bites… short, sharp, and confident. The warning lands...
  February 28th, 2026 12:36
• Reluctant Hero (Paul Bell) Paul, I’ve always found stories about displaced identity powerful…...
  February 28th, 2026 12:36
• \"dramatic monologue from Arthur Ross\" (Arqios) arqios, I’ve always loved a good dramatic monologue when it fully...
  February 28th, 2026 12:34
• iBlock (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity”...
  February 28th, 2026 12:33
• Not A Religious Fanatic (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I appreciate when someone can explore belief without sliding into...
  February 28th, 2026 12:29
• Cooooeee!!! (Orchidee) Not sure if that is a yellow lab or an English Cream Golden, but my...
  February 28th, 2026 12:27
• Us (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is brutal… and even more so knowing it’s grounded in...
  February 28th, 2026 12:23
• Wear and tear (NafisaSB) Safina, this carries such a calm reassurance…like sitting in quiet...
  February 28th, 2026 12:19
• Accordion Skies (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this truly breathes… dusty, rhythmic, alive. That weaving of...
  February 28th, 2026 12:16
• sadist dreamscape (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is dark and unapologetic…it doesn’t flinch. My kind of...
  February 28th, 2026 12:14
• Proud to be an American (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this carries such a strong, shared pride… that “we did it”...
  February 28th, 2026 12:13
• Little caterpillar (Caring dove) Caring Dove, this is gentle in a way that feels sincere… not forced, not...
  February 28th, 2026 12:10
• Lifeboats (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, that line “eternal shipwreck of hope” stays with me… it’s...
  February 28th, 2026 12:08
• Life (2781) Valiantstar, this reads like a condensed testimony arc…creation,...
  February 27th, 2026 11:05
• Life\'s Very Complexity (Teddy.15) Teddy, this balances vulnerability and counsel well. It begins in personal...
  February 27th, 2026 11:04
• Living On The Wrong Side Of Time? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this reads like a cultural inventory that crescendos into...
  February 27th, 2026 11:02
• What is your favorite color? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Since black is technically not a color in light, I will say purple. LOL!...
  February 27th, 2026 10:57
• “snake eating its tale” (Arqios) Rik, this balances mythic imagery with meta-poetic reflection. The serpent...
  February 27th, 2026 10:56
• A FLY IN THE MASH (Michael Edwards) Michael, this made me laugh out loud…classic setup and clean punchline....
  February 27th, 2026 10:54
• Ghost (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this moves from grand elements to intimate particles with grace....
  February 27th, 2026 10:53
• Intermittent (Orchidee) Don\'t think you can escape the glugs. They follow...just an FYI! 🤣...
  February 27th, 2026 10:51
• Bright Future Stolen (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this balances reportage and remembrance carefully. The early...
  February 27th, 2026 10:50
• I Confess of Poetry (Kevin Hulme) Kevin, this balances ornate language with real doubt. The opening nod to...
  February 27th, 2026 10:49
• Opossum Operations (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is absurd and insightful at the same time. The opossum...
  February 27th, 2026 10:48
• Childhood Chained Coward (Marissa) “The questions i ask-when you slam the door” is the hinge for me. That...
  February 27th, 2026 10:47
• Way Up There (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is simple in the best way…an invitation to pause and...
  February 27th, 2026 10:45
• WHISPERING (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this feels gentle and intimate…like a quiet confession set to...
  February 26th, 2026 11:08
• When we don’t try (Allie561) Allie, this feels raw and unfiltered…like a list of small defeats that...
  February 26th, 2026 10:47
• 3-Part Thursday (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this triptych has range…philosophical, reflective, then sharply...
  February 26th, 2026 10:43
• What\'s your favorite season? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) I prefer Spring and Summer. I love the fall\'s beauty, but Seasonal...
  February 26th, 2026 10:42
• Ripples in Champlain (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, I love when folklore gets this kind of quiet treatment. It...
  February 26th, 2026 10:37
• Changing Days (Paul Bell) Paul, there’s something painfully real in the way you move from the...
  February 26th, 2026 10:36
• A Pyramid Prison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is confrontational in a purposeful way. The pyramid metaphor...
  February 26th, 2026 10:34
• five characters (Arqios) Rick, my friend, this is sharp and satisfying…there’s bite in the...
  February 26th, 2026 10:33
• We are His Handiwork! (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, I can feel the encouragement woven through this. It reads like...
  February 26th, 2026 10:32
• Wrong write (2781) My friend, I love the wordplay in the title right out of the gate....
  February 26th, 2026 10:31
• The great illusion (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this comes out like a political lament wrapped in rhythm…sharp,...
  February 26th, 2026 10:30
• I don’t know (Caring dove) Caring Dove, this is quiet vulnerability. The questions loop...
  February 25th, 2026 19:15
• Do you drink? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Nope. Not anymore. But thank you for offering! Shirley Temple, with...
  February 25th, 2026 19:14
• For Light To Shine (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this balances philosophy and clarity well. The structure keeps it...
  February 25th, 2026 19:12
• The journey of the plant (Marissa) Marissa, this feels like a turning point on paper/screen…raw,...
  February 25th, 2026 19:11
• When the Cipher Fades (Friendship) Reading this feels uncomfortably familiar…that moment when something...
  February 25th, 2026 19:10
• Blown Across the Table (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is crafted with real care…classic sonnet form wrapped...
  February 25th, 2026 19:05
• Touloungeaphobia (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this rides the line between parody and confession. The jabs, the...
  February 25th, 2026 19:02
• another done (Arqios) Reading this took me straight back to my own rough-and-tumble days…the...
  February 25th, 2026 18:58
• Residue for vultures (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is visceral from the first line…no filter, no apology. The...
  February 25th, 2026 18:57
• Our Daily Bread (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hit me in its stillness…there’s something steady and...
  February 25th, 2026 18:53
• Debating the Sky (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is vivid and deeply human. It moves from fear to humor to...
  February 24th, 2026 10:05
• Elegy for Francis Thompson (Arqios) arqios, what works most is the arc. From fragile beginnings to artistic...
  February 24th, 2026 10:04
• Steel and Stream (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what works here is the structure. Gears, hammers, steam,...
  February 24th, 2026 08:22
• How much money do you have? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this works because of its tone shift. Bold demand…quick...
  February 24th, 2026 08:20
• Angels Touch (Paul Bell) It’s the line “If you had met Ricky, you’d definitely be touched by...
  February 24th, 2026 08:19
• If (Neville) Truth! Powerful, quick nudge...love it, my friend!...
  February 24th, 2026 08:15
• To big (2781) Valiantstar, what works here is the shift from charm to consequence. Cute...
  February 24th, 2026 08:14
• Prejudice (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what works here is the progression. From lima beans and jeans to...
  February 24th, 2026 08:13
• Apocalips Now (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is punchy and playful at the same time. The title alone sets...
  February 24th, 2026 08:11
• Letting It All Go (Friendship) Friendship, this breathes. From the first candle to the final surrender,...
  February 24th, 2026 08:10
• Winter Winds (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what holds this collection together is motion. Conflict turning...
  February 24th, 2026 08:08
• Stones (2781) Valiantstar, this has bite. It feels confrontational in the right...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:30
• What’s your favorite movie? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Wow! Not sure my fave but The Lord of the Rings Trilogy, The Witch (2015),...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:20
• Our Experiences (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, I’ve seen how someone’s past pain can become someone else’s...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:15
• she that rides with the wind (Arqios) arqios, this carries a cold edge from the first line. The mood settles in...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:15
• Wholesome Worship (Orchidee) Orchi, there’s something about Psalm settings that always brings me back...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:12
• THREE THREE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Michael, what works here is the variety. A cheeky observational joke, a...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:09
• Midas (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I’ve seen how fear can twist into the very thing it tries to...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:08
• Evolution of Sorts (Teddy.15) Teddy, what works here is the movement. The Raven on the sill, the...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:07
• Ode to the Biscuit Bringer (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this made me smile immediately. It’s playful, but there’s...
  February 23rd, 2026 10:05
• What’s your favorite food? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Ha! Yes! The same even in our differences. Well done, my friend!
  February 23rd, 2026 10:00
• The sacred tounge spell (Marissa) marissa, this comes in hot and unapologetic. There’s no hesitation in...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:59
• Comanche Moon (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is devastating in its restraint. The repetition of “I...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:58
• Bebop on the Board (Thomas W Case) Thomas, what grips me most is the layering. Coltrane coughing through the...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:57
• The liar (2781) Valiantstar, this is razor sharp. Three movements…and it cuts clean....
  February 23rd, 2026 09:54
• Preach Forgiveness (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this carries real urgency. The rhyme drives it forward like...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:54
• two eras in one land (Arqios) arqios, what I admire most here is the composure. Austen’s posture,...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:53
• I Don\'t Want to Wait for Our Lives to Be Over (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what moves me most here is the restraint. The imagery of tide,...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:52
• Freewill in determinism (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the propulsion of this is what grabbed me. “Physics spoke, forces...
  February 23rd, 2026 09:51
• Trickstar (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this hit me immediately…that sharp little jab lands hard....
  February 23rd, 2026 09:49
• Saturday Muse (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, there’s a starkness across these that hits immediately. “Still...
  February 21st, 2026 11:44
• Praise for Providings (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, my friend. Trust in God is vital. Trust in the cessation...
  February 21st, 2026 10:59
• an unveiling (Arqios) arqios, this reads like a manifesto for clarity. “Truth is a tree, its...
  February 21st, 2026 10:58
• The Graying Side of Life (Matthew R. Callies) This hits in that reflective way that only comes with time. The shift from...
  February 21st, 2026 10:57
• Glasya (Paul Bell) Paul, this feels mythic and cyclical… almost like watching a ritual...
  February 21st, 2026 10:56
• Where Would We Be Without.....? (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is absurd and I love it. You build this almost cosmic...
  February 21st, 2026 10:55
• James Van Der Beek (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Yes! RIP, James. So sad to hear. Wonderful tribute, my friend....
  February 21st, 2026 10:54
• Candy unwrapped (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this blends caricature, caution, and grotesque comedy into one...
  February 21st, 2026 10:41
• Men Hating Women (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, I love how you balance everything out. Yes, it is foolishness on...
  February 21st, 2026 10:40
• Divide and rule (NafisaSB) Safina, this is a pointed critique framed in steady rhyme. You balance...
  February 21st, 2026 10:38
• silent facade (Kylie_love) Kylie, this traces a convincing movement from repression to awakening. The...
  February 21st, 2026 10:36
• The Wasteland (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is concise but layered…inheritance turned into emotional...
  February 21st, 2026 10:35