Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• You (Ocean Blue) Beautifully rendered with tender care. This was wonderful, my friend....
  April 5th, 2025 12:48
• Saturday Musing ... (Kurt Philip Behm) \"Get your kicks on Route 66!\" Well done, Kurt. Lots of wisdom in the...
  April 5th, 2025 12:47
• The Two Madmen (Damaso) Wonderful running metaphor. Well done on this, Damaso! Hope your weekend...
  April 5th, 2025 12:34
• Weeping (Sorenbarrett) This speaks of grief and uses what I imagined to be a Weeping Willow Tree...
  April 5th, 2025 12:32
• heartbeat (Arqios) Very true, my friend. Well done. Poetry is our heart\'s beat. Beautifully...
  April 5th, 2025 12:26
• Waking Up From Winter (Courtnie McKern) Ah. Spring is in the air and I am smiling and...well...sniffling. But...
  April 4th, 2025 18:12
• in bloom (Alex TheHueman) Wow! Profound and powerful. Well done on this friend. Welcome to MPS! A...
  April 4th, 2025 18:10
• the fade haircut (Demar Desu) Ha! I just do the close, clean shave, all across the dome. I\'m a pro!...
  April 4th, 2025 18:08
• Watchers (KTay) Wonderful poem which allows metaphor to unfold. Well done, my friend!...
  April 4th, 2025 18:05
• Because I am the Eldest (Isabella Morgan) I, too, am the eldest and can relate. Well done, my friend. Welcome to
  April 4th, 2025 18:03
• She Visits on the Cold Wind (Thomas W Case) Love the \"colorful\" emotion in here. Brilliant use of orange and a very...
  April 4th, 2025 18:01
• Poetry Is (Tony36) Indeed. Nailed it Tony. Well done. Faved! 🌹👏🕯️🖤
  April 4th, 2025 18:00
• ever onward (Arqios) Icy streams indeed, so icy one might remain frozen in place should they...
  April 4th, 2025 17:58
• Sterling and Saoirse part 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I love this continuation. That question at the end? Leaves me wondering...
  April 4th, 2025 17:56
• Science in a Nazarene\'s hair (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Profound, my friend. In this I see a wisdom often absent from most...
  April 4th, 2025 17:50
• Hard to Handle (KTay) Wonderful write. That ending is haunting and delivers well. Excellent job!...
  April 3rd, 2025 19:41
• The flight of love (Kaz) Ooh! Nice! I love the structure of this. Very creative, my friend! Welcome...
  April 3rd, 2025 13:35
• Justice In Judgement (Orchidee) Yesss! I have been waiting for one and one has arrived! A great hymn-poem....
  April 3rd, 2025 12:57
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes!!! Philosphically deep in brevity. This one is so true. There is no...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:55
• Violence vs Non-Violence (Demar Desu) Indeed. Totally relate!
  April 3rd, 2025 12:43
• Rockets of life (Tony36) Great write, Tony, Well done!
  April 3rd, 2025 12:42
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love this! It almost raps, let alone rings. Wonderfully penned, my friend!...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:41
• The Lost Key (Arqios) This poem is told through the POV of a child, eyes wide with imagination,...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:39
• Child innocence (Sorenbarrett) The metaphor of the \"fruit of the tree of the knowledge of good and...
  April 3rd, 2025 11:49
• Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence) Yesss! I love the fire in your childhood self and this describes a real...
  April 3rd, 2025 11:43
• Okay, March, Our Affair is Officially OVER. (Cheeky Missy) Yeah, nothing new with my head spinning either. These sonnets are...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:43
• KFC Cannibals? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) More reason to join me over on the vegetarian side, my friend! LOL! All...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:39
• Devils\' Breath (Kurt Philip Behm) A demon vortex. That phrase alone is worth a thousand images. Wow! This is...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:35
• Undo the Darkness (Thomas W Case) Beautiful. It felt as if I as there. Your blending of description and...
  April 2nd, 2025 22:33
• Divided (NinjaGirl) Preach it sister! Amen! 💯 You are wise and this poem is absolutely...
  April 2nd, 2025 09:21
• His guitar (Tony36) I know and am friends with such a person. Very talented soul, professional...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:44
• Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I enjoyed both versions actually, though I admittedly read your rework of...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:41
• One Busy Day!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This captured me and I really enjoyed it. You have a gift, my friend. Well...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:38
• I MISS YOU RIN! (Demar Desu) Yes!!! Where\'s rin? I was just thinking of her just the other day. I hope...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:34
• Thoughts (Sorenbarrett) Boy...and that makes all the difference! Wow. Love this rhyme scheme, the...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:30
• Smile (Poetic Licence) Truth. Faved! Well done, my friend. Much needed insight for a world too...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:27
• a future\'s horizon (Arqios) Ooh. I like the dissipating rhyming scheme. As for the poem, well...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:22
• Free Diver (Mutley Ravishes) Leagues deep, my friend! This is profound. Again, 🤯 as I said on your...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:18
• The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare (NinjaGirl) Wow! I am humbled and super excited to see this! Indeed, how just is death...
  April 2nd, 2025 00:02
• ...On April Fool\'s THIS Year!!! (Cheeky Missy) Wait? Where are the sonnets? All of the delicious dishes and coffee? All I...
  April 1st, 2025 23:57
• hurt (Patriciapicciocchi) Indeed. I have had to ask others the same question. Well done! 🌹
  April 1st, 2025 11:34
• What A Fool Believes (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth, driven into the heart of society like a worded stake! Well done,...
  April 1st, 2025 11:33
• Congo\'s Christian Killers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ironically, I actually first learned of this on the news. Terrible evil...
  April 1st, 2025 11:29
• Music (Tony36) Music is what keeps me going. I virtually have it playing all the time....
  April 1st, 2025 11:25
• $38.58 in my bank account (Demar Desu) OOh. A new direction. Out of the red and into the black. Whatever are you...
  April 1st, 2025 11:24
• Broken toys (Sorenbarrett) Man if I could return to my early childhood...but then I would have to go...
  April 1st, 2025 11:21
• Help or Not? (Orchidee) As a ground to stand on. Amen. That is what my faith has become for me....
  April 1st, 2025 11:17
• The Voices Have Gone (Poetic Licence) Wow. Profound, vulnerable, raw, honest...and wise. Of course, coming from...
  April 1st, 2025 11:15
• waxing witless (Arqios) The state of humanity should bring humility. Ah, but we are speaking...
  April 1st, 2025 11:04
• Epidermiss (Mutley Ravishes) Wow, this one demands and rewards a few reads. The title and the clues...
  March 31st, 2025 20:32
• 10 stories (NinjaGirl) This poem fall with impact, my friend! The creative structure felt like...
  March 31st, 2025 12:49
• BBQ (Tony36) Really enjoyed this Tony. And you made me hungry again. 🌹👏🤣
  March 31st, 2025 12:47
• Dead Or Alive (Kurt Philip Behm) 💯 Truth! Instant fave! Brevity brilliantly penned! 🌹👏
  March 31st, 2025 12:46
• The looking glass (Patriciapicciocchi) A very perceptive write on perceptions. Well done, friend!
  March 31st, 2025 12:45
• I Never \"Promised\" Anything.... (Cheeky Missy) Wonderful fun, Missy! Enjoyed this night quartet of sonnets! 🌹👏
  March 31st, 2025 12:44
• Tribute to a Life of Service (Salvia.S) What a lovely and beautiful tribute for your relative, Salvia! Excellent...
  March 31st, 2025 12:37
• Locutus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Loved this, my friend! Well done!
  March 31st, 2025 12:36
• WIP (Work In Progress) (Tom Dylan) Wow! Indeed, I have two works in progress, longer pieces that I am not...
  March 31st, 2025 12:34
• Fallen sand (Sorenbarrett) My imagination was captured and taken on a most fantastically beautiful...
  March 31st, 2025 12:29
• is it all over for city cat? (Arqios) That was purrrrfect, my friend! Enjoyed this, and I am pretty sure my...
  March 31st, 2025 12:27
• RLF Was Right (Kurt Philip Behm) Love the duality in this. Wonderful poem, Kurt!
  March 30th, 2025 20:11
• Red, White, and Drifting (Thomas W Case) Most excellent, Thomas!!! A fave from me!
  March 30th, 2025 20:09
• Sailing on The Flying Dutchman (Rebellion_in_sanity) I am familiar with the Flying Dutchman legend. This, my friend, makes for...
  March 30th, 2025 20:08
• God (Patriciapicciocchi) Truth! Wonderful job!
  March 30th, 2025 20:04
• 500,000 (Tony36) Indeed. A salute to all who have served and sacrificed. 🌹👏
  March 30th, 2025 08:00
• Poetry for Plants (Demar Desu) Amen! 💯
  March 30th, 2025 07:59
• Another Eclipse  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Understood and indeed. Well expressed, my friend! 🌹
  March 30th, 2025 07:58
• Two daughters (Sorenbarrett) Parental love is different, being a parent of two adult daughters, this...
  March 30th, 2025 07:57
• Aving A Laugh Wise Man Say (8) (Poetic Licence) Great ones, my friend! You should publish these into a book. They are THAT...
  March 30th, 2025 07:55
• Antwerpen, 1995 (Arqios) Have no experience in Antwerp, but 1995 was a consequential year for me. I...
  March 30th, 2025 07:22
• Anger (Pamela) Really enjoyed this, Pamela! Though, I must confess, I have enough of my...
  March 30th, 2025 07:15
• Trice is Such a Fun Word, Isn\'t It Though? (Cheeky Missy) Trice really is a fun word and, lo!—what\'s this—not once, twice...but...
  March 29th, 2025 12:06
• Wall (Damaso) \"Promises of forgotten loves, rusted by rain, sun, and moon\". Wow! One...
  March 29th, 2025 12:03
• Hidden darkness (Patriciapicciocchi) Darkness bookends. I relate with this, my friend. Strange as it may seem,...
  March 29th, 2025 12:01
• Con-Flix (Mutley Ravishes) No more insane than it already is, my brother! An excellent poem posing an...
  March 29th, 2025 11:58
• Vortex of love (Tony36) Great poem, Tony!
  March 29th, 2025 11:50
• Pizza Parties (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow! This one definitely stirred some intense imagery. I\'m always...
  March 29th, 2025 11:48
• Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave (Rebellion_in_sanity) Wow! Even read literally...friend, this poem is profound! That said, there...
  March 29th, 2025 11:32
• Lines on the floor (Sorenbarrett) Indeed, the materials that go into all that been written and read. A...
  March 29th, 2025 11:21
• You Get Out What You Put In (Poetic Licence) Sardonic wit, sharp humor, a foot to a jerk\'s ass..whatever you want to...
  March 29th, 2025 11:08
• post-tempest chews (Arqios) Wow! Transformed and, while I thought the last one was masterful, you have...
  March 29th, 2025 11:04
• Consumerism Mind Control (Demar Desu) Truth in three words! Well done bro!
  March 29th, 2025 10:58
• sharp metal (NinjaGirl) Wow! I know you know I relate to this one! Well expressed, friend. A...
  March 28th, 2025 20:57
• Hooky (Mutley Ravishes) Wow! Yes. My body has given me that reminder before! So relatable!
  March 28th, 2025 20:31
• Pogo (Damaso) Wonderful metaphor and, not sure if intentional, but it almost looks like...
  March 28th, 2025 20:30
• Lost In A Dream (Kurt Philip Behm) The best questions lead to more questions. Well done here, Kurt. 🌹👏
  March 28th, 2025 20:28
• So Still The World (ADarkerMind) Wow! Profound, my friend! I love how it opens and basically closes with...
  March 28th, 2025 20:27
• Went the Wrong Way (Lewisgale mental hospital) Powerful poem, my friend. Well written! Love the repetition! Very...
  March 28th, 2025 20:23
• In the Merry Month of--Oops! (Cheeky Missy) Oh no! Not snow! I just saw my neighbor, Wally...the Woodchuck. He\'s been...
  March 28th, 2025 20:20
• Life\'s journey (Tony36) Wonderful poem that is as powerful as it is brief. Beautiful, Tony!...
  March 28th, 2025 08:07
• In Love You Thrive (Rebellion_in_sanity) Amen to this! This is quite a wonderful poem that asks the important...
  March 28th, 2025 08:05
• Blood Red (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Righteousness will one day be reality. And God\'s thirst for it will...
  March 28th, 2025 08:01
• It May Not Be Just Me (Orchidee) Thank you for the update! Indeed, prayers are songs and songs are prayers....
  March 28th, 2025 07:58
• Sweet and bitter (Sorenbarrett) Damn, Soren, this is a potent little poem that really packs a powerful...
  March 28th, 2025 07:46
• Denial, and friends (Arqios) As someone who has gone through my share of grief and walked alongside a...
  March 28th, 2025 07:33
• August is accused of murdering a child. (David Wakeling) \"Is this just an illusion of a dance? / Just two shadows flickering...
  March 28th, 2025 07:31
• My Friend (Patriciapicciocchi) Love the internal rhyme. Lovely dedication to your friend. Welcome to MPS....
  March 28th, 2025 07:27
• Sadness (Lewisgale mental hospital) Concise, but says a tremendous amount in its brevity. Well done, my...
  March 28th, 2025 07:26
• Cut Benefits (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well done, my friend. This poem rings true! 🌹👏
  March 28th, 2025 04:02
• Vortext (Mutley Ravishes) Excellent, my friend. Well, written! 🌹👏
  March 27th, 2025 21:16