Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

Shade (Sorenbarrett) Wow. Powerful poem, full of depth. This is a wonderful metaphor that can...
May 7th, 2025 11:02
A Longing For Freedom (Poetic Licence) Now here is both a brilliant poem and a sight for sore eyes. No. Mental...
May 7th, 2025 10:54
God, Universe and Nature (Demar Desu) Fuck yes! Bro, never thought of GUN through the lens of that acronym. This...
May 7th, 2025 10:50
an evening activity (NinjaGirl) Very heartbreaking and the feeling of isolation and loneliness,...
May 6th, 2025 20:51
Delerium in PA (Thomas W Case) I read the title and though, shit Thomas knows where I live. 🤣 Eastern...
May 6th, 2025 20:47
Ode To Michael Parks (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! Impressive, Kurt. Another fave! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:44
Of Lavendar, and...Candles (Cheeky Missy) Ooh, the way you tease the senses. I am hungry again, my friend. I\'ll be...
May 6th, 2025 20:42
Music and Poetry (Tony36) Wonderful Tony, and true! Well done. A fave! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:40
Trapped (Caring dove) Sorry you are feeling this way, Caring Dove. A haunting poem, hope seen...
May 6th, 2025 20:39
Tomorrow is my birthday (Demar Desu) Can\'t answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but...
May 6th, 2025 20:33
the thread between us (Arqios) Profound. Philosophical. Important. These questions get to the heart of...
May 6th, 2025 20:30
You and me (Victor Bolshov) Wow, Victor. Beautiful, both song and lyric. Well done, my friend!
May 6th, 2025 20:27
I thought I knew (Sorenbarrett) Oh, I know this experience well. Where I grew up, everything is different....
May 6th, 2025 20:24
Haltia, spirit (Mourgana of the Fey) Beautiful and enigmatic like the Baltic Finnic peoples themselves....
May 6th, 2025 20:22
Tick, Tock, Time Is Up (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love \"The Watchmen\" reference! Well done! 🌹👏
May 6th, 2025 20:18
Finding some freedom (Caring dove) Excellent metaphor. Indeed, there is no where else to be but stuck inside...
May 6th, 2025 06:26
Untitled (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Powerful poem. I could feel it. The pain, the hurt, the longing. And, as...
May 5th, 2025 19:25
Dump Nymphs (Tony Grannell) Oh my, dearest Tony! This is another brilliant work. I am, forever, a fan!...
May 5th, 2025 18:44
her death (NinjaGirl) Wow. Just wow! I mean it. Speechless. And my goodness,...
May 5th, 2025 18:38
The other Side of Pain (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Amen. May it be. Beautiful, my friend. Landing right where it needs to be...
May 5th, 2025 18:34
Well Versed in Delerium (Thomas W Case) Well-versed in delirium...sounds like me. 🤣🤪 I love the playing...
May 5th, 2025 18:31
The Truth That Is (Lewisgale mental hospital) This poem, my friend, speaks the cold, hard, stark truth. Well done in its...
May 5th, 2025 18:29
God But A Handmaiden (Kurt Philip Behm) Your poems are always deep and thought-provoking, Kurt. Love the flow of...
May 5th, 2025 11:35
Shakespearean / Poet (Muse of Calliope) Wow! Wholly relatable. The last line, pun not intended, took my breath...
May 5th, 2025 11:31
I\'ll Take Three of Those, Please (Cheeky Missy) My friend, I totally live in my head! 🤣 But hey, my arms and hands...
May 5th, 2025 11:28
I may be a Christian (Tony36) We aren\'t perfect, we\'re being perfected. Amen, Tony! Well done. The...
May 5th, 2025 11:25
My Wave (Mutley Ravishes) Powerful and brief. A wonderful poem, my friend! 🌹👏
May 5th, 2025 11:23
When Falling isn\'t Final (Salvia.S) In order to rise, one must fall. If one never falls, can one ever...
May 5th, 2025 11:22
there is no lack in you (Arqios) 💯 This is true. So well put, I will not spoil it with anymore words...
May 5th, 2025 11:21
Devil deeds angel thoughts (Sorenbarrett) An interesting concept that bears the question, whose the judge of...
May 5th, 2025 11:19
Blocking Out The Sun (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Maybe they took the phrase \"apply sunblock\" a little too literally,...
May 5th, 2025 11:12
From Grain To Glass (ADarkerMind) Yay, Melvin! Glad to see you back, my friend! Love this. From grain to...
May 5th, 2025 11:10
on a winter night (Dimpy) First, beautiful poem, my friend. Simply love the use of metaphor here and...
May 5th, 2025 10:54
Hues of Hope (Salvia.S) Wow! The rainbow comes through, no matter the clouds trying to hide it....
May 4th, 2025 18:58
I Fear (Damaso) I know the feeling. I have been there and asked that. Powerful write, my...
May 4th, 2025 18:52
Neither Fresh Applesauce nor Races (Cheeky Missy) I wouldn\'t mind being 5 again, if I could skip being 6-18. Honestly, not...
May 4th, 2025 18:49
Here we go again (Tony36) Oh no, Tony! Oh no. Sorry to hear this...let alone that it is your third...
May 4th, 2025 18:34
$2.37 in my bank account (Demar Desu) Who invented money, anyway? 🤣 Like can we have Bill & Ted Save the...
May 4th, 2025 18:31
Penance for Imaginary (Rebellion_in_sanity) I have felt this. That last stanza, something I have literally wrestled...
May 4th, 2025 18:24
IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME! (Swarovski20) Philosophical to its core. Well done on this piece. What is beautiful?...
May 4th, 2025 18:22
from my experience... (Dimpy) Often the truth. Well done, friend! 🌹🙏
May 4th, 2025 15:52
Sacrifice, take the hit (Sorenbarrett) The metaphors for selfless sacrifice are excellent. I could feel the...
May 4th, 2025 15:49
Risen Rejoicings (Orchidee) If those guinea pigs ate all those sweets, their A1C levels would be risen...
May 4th, 2025 15:40
LIMERICK 142 (Michael Edwards) I have missed your Limericks, so this one is not only hilarious, but a...
May 4th, 2025 07:42
revelatory (Arqios) Wow...you and I are vibing a VERY similar themes today! Love this, my...
May 4th, 2025 07:40
real-rage-roar (Muse of Calliope) I love it!!! And yes, this would be fitting lyrics for many different...
May 4th, 2025 07:36
Three Kisses (Tony36) Beautiful, Tony. Most heartfelt! 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:29
all the birds are awake (Demar Desu) And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to...
May 3rd, 2025 08:28
waiting (Dimpy) Simple. Powerful. Profound. True. Well done. A fave, my friend. 🌹👏
May 3rd, 2025 08:26
Are We Creating Our Own Reality? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The earth, as in the world order, has always sucked. No doubt about that,...
May 3rd, 2025 08:24
Seasonal Secrets (Salvia.S) Perfection, my friend. There is not a single thing, that I can think of,...
May 3rd, 2025 08:22
Who said that? (Sorenbarrett) Now this made me laugh, dearest Soren, and that was much needed today....
May 3rd, 2025 08:20
the fury\'s chant (Arqios) Wow. This feels chillingly close to the rhetoric of certain political...
May 3rd, 2025 08:16
575s and 57577s (2) (Michael Edwards) Nothing wrong with some good, ol\' fashioned, archaic fun! Jousting...
May 3rd, 2025 07:59
Stay (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Hear hear! Me too! TGIF! Greater things are indeed to come! Rock on...
May 2nd, 2025 15:03
Finding (Z7 Softens) The note helps guide the reader to the poem\'s meaning; however, the poem...
May 2nd, 2025 11:30
Autistic Brother (Demar Desu) Amen, brother. I have a special needs family member, myself, and I would...
May 2nd, 2025 11:10
Of Dreams, Easter Eggs, and Bunnies (Cheeky Missy) Loved these Easter poems. It sounds like you had a wonderful one...or, at...
May 2nd, 2025 11:08
Truly Free (Tony36) A message much needed. This gets a fave. Excellent job, Tony! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:06
Love in Reverence (Salvia.S) Yessss! 💯 A fave. Brilliantly brief, but says it all! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:04
Rarity of a Rose (Salvia.S) Love this. This could be taken as a poem about human love and...
May 2nd, 2025 11:02
peace (Dimpy) Beautiful and eloquent. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
May 2nd, 2025 11:00
any answer ? (Dimpy) Society sucks, doesn\'t it? Judgment an awful reality that, in this case,...
May 2nd, 2025 10:58
While There is Time (Thomas W Case) \"Tomorrow is nebulous at best\", indeed. Nothing is ever guaranteed and...
May 2nd, 2025 10:55
All Is Suspect (Lewisgale mental hospital) Wow. Powerful, profound, purposeful. This poem hits hard and, I agree with...
May 2nd, 2025 10:52
Skimming Stones (Tony Grannell) Tony, you are a master with your words, your rhyming, your meter, and the...
May 2nd, 2025 10:49
A lot of wind (Sorenbarrett) I believe every family must have a great storyteller. Perhaps not, but...
May 2nd, 2025 10:46
against the age (Arqios) Remain true to one\'s self and principles and defy any person/entity that...
May 2nd, 2025 10:42
I’ve Probably Been Here Before (Teddy.15) Could be. Time will tell, but will you remember? 🤷‍♂️ I have had...
May 2nd, 2025 10:38
A Father\'s Pride (Teddy.15) Wonderful. As a father, this brief but powerful poem put me in that scene....
May 2nd, 2025 10:34
Jay the braven (Victor Bolshov) The message of the poem and the comment are powerful. The varied meter and...
May 2nd, 2025 10:32
Power Cuts (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Interesting stuff, for sure. Regardless of what caused the power outage,...
May 2nd, 2025 10:27
Bitterness and Resentment (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Your writings are bright and true my friend. Well done on this piece. Many...
April 30th, 2025 20:18
Blind (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) No pressure, my friend. We’ll be here to read when you do post. Life...
April 30th, 2025 20:15
A Silent Poem (Orchidee) I’m going with 47.63.4.82.7.49. Lol. If not, maybe I’ll play the...
April 30th, 2025 20:10
Tell the Easter Bunny I Lost My Basket (Cheeky Missy) Nature exudes in the first sonnets, while the last one feels The Fast and...
April 30th, 2025 11:01
Fall asleep (Tony36) A beautiful lullaby, Tony! Well done! 🌹
April 30th, 2025 10:57
My Running Days Are Now Over (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indeed, we may slow down a bit, but no stopping! Well done, friend!...
April 30th, 2025 10:15
Blackness\' light (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is cosmic poetry at its most refined—quantum physics woven...
April 30th, 2025 10:13
A Place (Arqios) Brilliant, my friend. And you put that \"place\" in the space between the...
April 30th, 2025 10:09
Honesty (Fauxsabotage) Wonderful job and a fantastic message. Well done, my friend. A fave....
April 29th, 2025 19:32
A Language of Scars (Philomena) A wonderful write and a fave. Welcome to MPS, my friend! 🌹👏
April 29th, 2025 19:31
Of John Clare, Blues, and the END of April[?!] (Cheeky Missy) Wonderful job, Missy. Cardinals and Robins are two of my more favorite of...
April 29th, 2025 19:30
Bubba (Thomas W Case) That lingering .........yet..........really closed the poem well. Exactly...
April 29th, 2025 19:26
Flowing Over (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed. The doors and window are always open. A wonderful and relatable...
April 29th, 2025 19:24
Caustic Double-Acrostic (Muse of Calliope) Dang, this gets a fave just for pulling the form off, brilliant poet. What...
April 29th, 2025 19:21
Hope (Tony36) \"Rebellions are built on hope\"—Cassian Andor and Jyn Erso in Rogue...
April 29th, 2025 19:18
Starlit Desires (Salvia.S) Beautiful. I wish that for you as well, my friend, and believe it will...
April 29th, 2025 19:14
Today is All We Have (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A wonderful message. Love is the ONLY answer that makes sense, even when...
April 29th, 2025 19:12
Enough\'s Enough (Tony Grannell) Flows wonderfully, and the rhyme scheme certainly adds to that. I could...
April 29th, 2025 19:11
Differ (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) This is a poem about being lost in uncertainty and desperately longing for...
April 29th, 2025 19:07
Escape (Victor Bolshov) Oh, I got this even before I read the comment. Well done, and all too true...
April 29th, 2025 19:03
Footprints on a beaten path (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful prose poem that actually addresses something I have been...
April 29th, 2025 19:01
O Frenzied Light! (Arqios) This is another WOW, poem. Love the reference to Dionysus, revelry and...
April 29th, 2025 18:46
Why Does Romanticism have to be Absurd? (Teddy.15) If we operated on logic alone, what a foreign and cold world that would...
April 29th, 2025 18:38
Forever Changed+ (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow! Profound. Deep. Spiritually raw, honest and...true. Well done, my...
April 29th, 2025 18:29
Windsbach (Isa kemmy) Aurach, Germany? I have been to Frankfurt, if being in an \"airport...
April 28th, 2025 23:03
Heart\'s Untold Tales (Salvia.S) Beautiful words that show the depths and mysteries of the heart. Well...
April 28th, 2025 22:39
Information Hoarders (Demar Desu) *Hides data down pants (is that a thing anymore?)* Who me? 🤷‍♂️ I...
April 28th, 2025 15:02
Fate At Its Limit (Kurt Philip Behm) Rings like excellent poetry, my friend. So beautiful. A wonderful poem....
April 28th, 2025 14:58

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