Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Honey and Cigarettes (ADarkerMind) Melvin, this poem moves like a fevered liturgy. Images of devotion, decay,...
  January 25th, 2026 10:15
• Retendered (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this reads like a modern lamentation. Each conditional names a...
  January 24th, 2026 16:14
• At what point will you stop judging me. (Friendship) First off, hell yes on that image. I won\'t be unseeing that for a while!...
  January 24th, 2026 10:32
• The Bet (Paul Bell) That pivot from color prediction to “skinny jeans” is the masterstroke...
  January 24th, 2026 10:30
• at first light (Arqios) I love the line, “Tomorrow’s whispers guide us\". It\'s really stayed...
  January 24th, 2026 10:29
• HE WEARS A PLASTER (Michael Edwards) Michael, this made me laugh outright. It’s blunt, cheeky, and...
  January 24th, 2026 10:26
• Assault and Battery 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this feels like a survival kit distilled to its essence. Each line...
  January 24th, 2026 10:24
• Conserving Caretakers (Orchidee) Orchi… Popeye, Obi, Tom, and Company stumble in first. Popeye is...
  January 24th, 2026 10:19
• Poems from the mist (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a strong piece, my friend. The ebb between clarity and...
  January 24th, 2026 10:10
• Poems (Jerry Reynolds) Beautiful in it\'s brevity...and true. Great write, Jerry!...
  January 23rd, 2026 17:56
• Somewhere Inside (ADarkerMind) Melvin, the refrain of “cold as beer in a never ending song” anchors...
  January 23rd, 2026 17:33
• Perfidy\'s Haze (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this poem captures disillusionment with precision—machinery,...
  January 23rd, 2026 17:31
• \"The painted goodbye\" (Kylie_love) Kylie, this poem holds grief and anger in the same breath. The way you...
  January 23rd, 2026 13:39
• birdie I love you (Lilly OvO) Lilly, this hurts to read in the way honest things do. The loneliness here...
  January 23rd, 2026 13:34
• Familiar (Nev) nev, this is painfully observant. The domestic details, the historical...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:51
• I Closed My Eyes (Teardrop) My friend, this is raw and heartbreaking. The swing between refuge and...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:49
• Time (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this reads like lived wisdom spoken plainly. There’s a steady,...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:48
• When the Heart Races the Clock (Friendship) Friendship, this is vividly rendered and emotionally exact. The storm...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:47
• Spinning Top (Paul Bell) Paul, this is brutally effective. The radio exchanges build dread without...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:46
• Ascent (Arqios) arqios, this is a wonderful write, my friend. The mythic frame, the...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:45
• PLAY YOUR PART (Michael Edwards) Michael Edwards, this is sharp, light, and perfectly mischievous. The...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:44
• Fragile Empires (Dominic Windram) Dominic, this carries real weight. The language dismantles power without...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:43
• Flatulence (Doggerel Dave) My friend, this cracked me up. The mock-formal tone paired with the...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:40
• Demockracy (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is wonderfully ridiculous. The rhythm sets expectation, the...
  January 23rd, 2026 09:37
• Barometric Weather (Nev) nev, this is sharply observed and deeply uncomfortable in the best way....
  January 23rd, 2026 09:34
• Butterflies Fly Free (Friendship) Dearest friend, and I feel honored to call you that, reading this feels...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:46
• musings on winter’s nights (Arqios) Indeed it does! arqios, this feels hushed and deeply felt. The stillness...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:39
• Worthy Worship (Orchidee) Ochi, this is layered and quietly sharp. There’s real depth here, even...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:30
• There\'s a fly in your dirty ice (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Soren, this carries real bite, my friend. The weatherman mask, the...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:27
• Aunt Elanor (Katie B.) My friend, this is a stunning use of form and voice. Experimental free...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:25
• At The Headland In Springtime: ( April, 2025) (Dominic Windram) Dominic, this feels expansive and grounding all at once. There’s a calm...
  January 22nd, 2026 09:23
• Bound to be Found (Ffin Tee) This is intense and immersive, my friend It pulls the reader into a...
  January 21st, 2026 20:01
• Biological ID (Mutley Ravishes) This feels stark and clarifying, Mutley. It lands like a moment of waking...
  January 21st, 2026 19:59
• Flannel (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is sharp and economical. You make a case for honesty without...
  January 21st, 2026 19:58
• Nightmare\'s Amend (Kurt Philip Behm) This is a compact indictment, Kurt. War isn’t resolved…it’s...
  January 21st, 2026 19:54
• A Shared Gift (Katie B.) Katie, this is beautifully balanced. Affection flows both ways, neither...
  January 21st, 2026 19:52
• \"Voices Unbound\" (Friendship) Reading this reminds me how often we confuse volume with voice. The way...
  January 21st, 2026 19:49
• dust to defiance (Arqios) ariqos, this is a grounded defiance, my friend. Dust, death, and doubt are...
  January 21st, 2026 19:44
• Second bow (Sorenbarrett) Second bow, indeed. Powerful write, my friend. That image of the audience...
  January 21st, 2026 19:43
• Eternal Exaltation (Orchidee) Beautiful, my hymnodic friend! Another wonderful hymn-poem that inspires...
  January 21st, 2026 19:37
• Tonight... (Dominic Windram) This is beautiful, Dominic. There’s a stillness here that doesn’t...
  January 21st, 2026 19:24
• Trust in me (Mutley Ravishes) This made me smile first…then sit with it, Mutley. There’s a sly...
  January 21st, 2026 19:21
• Amongst The Water (A piece of luggage) I connect with this deeply. The slipping, the loss of feeling, and the...
  January 20th, 2026 15:54
• Bespoken (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels measured and unflinching. The repetition builds a steady...
  January 20th, 2026 15:30
• Remember Dialup? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I connect with this more than I expected. I remember that...
  January 20th, 2026 15:29
• Assisted Dying (Paul Bell) Paul, this is a moving meditation on loss and continuity and it all feels...
  January 20th, 2026 15:22
• Nipper (Arqios) arqios, this is a tender meditation on memory, devotion, and stillness....
  January 20th, 2026 15:20
• Mind The Clouds (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is a gentle meditation on thought and presence. The...
  January 20th, 2026 15:17
• Salvation Security (Orchidee) Well done, and another fantastic tune you set it to! 🎼🎶...
  January 20th, 2026 15:14
• And it rains (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a powerful meditation on endurance. The rain becomes more...
  January 20th, 2026 15:09
• Your Eyes... (Cellinic) cellinic, this is a gentle meditation on love as witness and endurance....
  January 20th, 2026 15:08
• No One Bleeds for Attention (Lore) Lore, this poem is a refusal in the best sense. You expose how survival is...
  January 19th, 2026 18:06
• I Can\'t Stand Liars (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I mean...💯...you and me both! Well put and love the word play, as...
  January 19th, 2026 18:03
• Darkness Blackens (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is clean and incisive. The restraint sharpens the truth rather...
  January 19th, 2026 10:54
• The checkout (Isa kemmy) Isa, this is quietly electric. The tension builds in such an ordinary...
  January 19th, 2026 10:53
• The Inevitable Truth (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this reads like a hard-earned confession. There’s sincerity...
  January 19th, 2026 10:51
• Crow\'s Gambit (Friendship) Friendship, this is rich and mesmerizing. It feels intelligent, patient,...
  January 19th, 2026 10:51
• motion obsessed (Arqios) My friend, I connect with this deeply. The pressure to keep moving can...
  January 19th, 2026 10:49
• Rashomon (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits like a siren. The immediacy, the noise, the moral...
  January 19th, 2026 10:31
• Merciful Missive (Orchidee) Excellent on this...and I know of the tune, and its author too. An...
  January 19th, 2026 10:30
• Enlightenment (Teddy.15) Dear Teddy, I connect deeply with this. Learning when to hold on and when...
  January 19th, 2026 10:27
• Drive (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this hit close for me. I’ve often wondered whether struggle is...
  January 19th, 2026 10:24
• Nobel peace prize (NafisaSB) Safina, this poem asks the right questions and refuses to look away. The...
  January 19th, 2026 10:22
• Childhood...( Inspired By Dylan Thomas) (Dominic Windram) Dominic, this is a luminous meditation on memory and time. The imagery...
  January 19th, 2026 10:20
• Echoes of a Fading Light (Friendship) Friendship, I connect deeply with this landscape you’ve drawn. That...
  January 18th, 2026 19:38
• Interruption. (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is thoughtful and gently profound. The conversational ease...
  January 18th, 2026 19:36
• As Ancestors Cry (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits, my friend. The restraint makes the loss feel heavier, not...
  January 18th, 2026 19:31
• In The Pink (A piece of luggage) My friend, this poem moves gently between healing and remembrance. The...
  January 18th, 2026 10:20
• Dissolving (Cellinic) cellinic, this poem moves like a quiet pilgrimage. Breath, season, belief,...
  January 18th, 2026 10:19
• Drunk on Everything (Thomas W Case) Reading this felt familiar to me…the sense of knowing a moment won’t...
  January 18th, 2026 10:17
• Pincers (2781) Valiantstar, reading this stirred that familiar unease of watching belief,...
  January 18th, 2026 10:16
• Hissing At Jesus Christ (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this hits sharp and fast. It’s confrontational without...
  January 18th, 2026 10:14
• riddle of the two kin (Arqios) My friend, this riddle works because it refuses to answer itself. Motion,...
  January 18th, 2026 10:13
• Repaired (Katie B.) Katie, this poem understands repair as both physical and inward. The...
  January 18th, 2026 10:10
• Night wanderers (Sorenbarrett) Luminescent blinks, aren\'t we all? A fantabulous poem and your use of...
  January 18th, 2026 10:09
• Continue Courageously (Orchidee) Beautiful, my friend. Well done. Question, do you hear that? And, with...
  January 18th, 2026 10:00
• Lock With No Key (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, there’s a quiet courage in how you let the question stand. The...
  January 18th, 2026 09:48
• Through All of It (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) This is a steady declaration of trust shaped by time. The movement from...
  January 17th, 2026 09:30
• Bliss (Katie B.) Katie, this is immersive and unsettling in the best way. It moves from...
  January 17th, 2026 09:30
• The Sleepy Hollow (Paul Bell) Paul, this is deeply moving. It carries the quiet ache of memory without...
  January 17th, 2026 09:29
• Fire in One\'s Heart (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is clever and disarming. It walks right up to...
  January 17th, 2026 09:26
• crow, at the edge of the yard (Arqios) My friend, this is quietly stunning. It is patient, observant, and deeply...
  January 17th, 2026 09:25
• Prosperous Praise (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛ Prosperous praise...
  January 17th, 2026 09:23
• Steam engine (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is bold and unapologetic. The rhythm drives hard, relentless,...
  January 17th, 2026 09:19
• Pristine Designs... (Dominic Windram) Dominic, this is sharp and deeply reflective. The consumer imagery builds...
  January 17th, 2026 09:18
• We are All Waiting (Katie B.) Katie, this resonates deeply. Waiting for connection, for renewal, for...
  January 16th, 2026 23:27
• Instructions I Never Follow (Nev) Nev, this is quietly brutal. Potential as accusation, certainty as...
  January 16th, 2026 23:24
• We Try (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) GenXer, this resonates. Learning when to act and when to release someone...
  January 16th, 2026 23:18
• Exitement (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is compact and charged. Refinement, sanctity, breakdown, and...
  January 16th, 2026 23:17
• Tale of the Bucolic Buccaneer (Arqios) Dearest friend, this is playful, affectionate, and very moving. While I am...
  January 16th, 2026 23:14
• With Friends Like Me....... (Orchidee) Orchi, this is classic you. Self-roasting pessimism, Fido chiming in,...
  January 16th, 2026 22:16
• The train (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is powerful. Time as motion, memory as shadow, life as...
  January 16th, 2026 21:12
• A Collage (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is brave and unsanitized. The wall becomes a witness to...
  January 16th, 2026 00:15
• The Space That Stayed (Nev) Nev, this is restrained and deeply human. Absence, habit, anger, and...
  January 15th, 2026 11:51
• the silent bloom of winter (Isa kemmy) Isa, this spoke to that strange mix of wonder and loneliness winter can...
  January 15th, 2026 10:48
• Pieces (Rachel P) Rachel, this is tender and brave. The brokenness isn’t...
  January 15th, 2026 10:43
• False Witness (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these pieces talk to each other beautifully. One resists borrowed...
  January 15th, 2026 10:40
• A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through (Katie B.) Katie, this feels bright and unguarded. There’s a quiet happiness here...
  January 15th, 2026 10:39
• Shattered Pieces (Paul Bell) Paul, this is stark and effective. The build from quiet observation to...
  January 15th, 2026 10:38
• blisspoint (Arqios) Brilliant, arqios! (I feel like I jus screamed Eureka! 💡🤣)...
  January 15th, 2026 10:31