Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Attention (2781) Hahaha, Valiantstar! 😂 The clarification at the end got me. There’s...
  August 9th, 2026 05:51
• LIBRES / FREE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Damn, Carlos...there’s a fighter’s spirit running through this....
  August 9th, 2026 05:51
• unprinted dots (Arqios) I love the restraint here, Rik...nothing dramatic needs to happen because...
  August 9th, 2026 05:49
• THAT HAUNTING QUOTE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Damn, Norman...this is wonderfully Gothic! 🖤 I love how the dread keeps...
  August 9th, 2026 05:49
• In a breath (Sorenbarrett) Whew, Soren...this creates an awful kind of suspended terror. Everything...
  August 9th, 2026 05:48
• Reverie (Cellinic) Beautiful translation, cellinic...knowing this carries another poet’s...
  August 9th, 2026 05:47
• sex, sex, sex! (Demar Desu) Hahaha, Demar! 😂 Nothing like deploying the oldest attention-grabber in...
  August 9th, 2026 05:44
• Nothing’s changed (Allie561) Damn, Allie...I can relate. Sometimes the hardest cages to recognize are...
  August 9th, 2026 05:44
• Model Citizens (Fränz Müller) This raises some fascinating questions, Fränz...we’re all born without...
  August 9th, 2026 05:42
• THE ROCK STAR WALKS AWAY (David Welch) Damn, David...this reads like the morning after an entire way of life. The...
  August 9th, 2026 05:41
• # Twistin the Night Away # (Kevin Hulme) Oh, Kevin! 😂 I was already amused by the costume choice, and then that...
  August 9th, 2026 05:40
• Age (索纳尔·蒙亨) Thought-provoking, Monhyung...there’s something poignant about looking...
  August 9th, 2026 05:19
• And if I ever leave America (Demar Desu) Demar, what a powerful little declaration. There’s devotion here, but...
  August 8th, 2026 20:35
• LIFEBEAT (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this has such infectious energy! I especially enjoyed how the...
  August 8th, 2026 20:34
• wild sarabande (Lorenz) That collision of Mondrian and Kandinsky really grabbed me, Lorenz. Order...
  August 8th, 2026 20:31
• Reclamation (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this one carries a hell of a sting. That moment when an unwanted...
  August 8th, 2026 20:30
• Can\'t say no long words (Orchidee) Orchi, you and Fido have done it again! 🤣 Poor Fido is pleading for...
  August 8th, 2026 20:29
• It’s All Yours Lord (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, what a beautiful expression of surrender and faith. There’s...
  August 8th, 2026 08:46
• American Executor: Andrew Jackson (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what a strong addition to the series. Jackson’s sheer force of...
  August 8th, 2026 08:46
• August winds (Arqios) Arqios, this is beautifully reflective. I love that quiet anticipation...
  August 8th, 2026 08:45
• Betrayal (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this has some serious bite! The violence fits the emotional...
  August 8th, 2026 08:44
• Fading away (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Sylva, what a beautifully bittersweet piece. All those wonderfully...
  August 8th, 2026 08:44
• Love, loss and light (Poetic Dan) Dan, this hit me hard. There’s a lifetime being carried...
  August 8th, 2026 08:43
• FIRST LIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this is absolutely beautiful. There’s such warmth and intimacy...
  August 8th, 2026 08:42
• Dave\'s (2781) This put a smile on my face, my friend! 😂 A whole collection of Daves,...
  August 8th, 2026 08:41
• A Day In The Life Of A Hopeless Romantic (Nerd) Nerd, what a tender piece. The romantic dreaming is lovely, but it’s...
  August 8th, 2026 08:41
• A NATURAL STATE OF TENSION (David Welch) David, what a thought-provoking piece! I really connect with the idea that...
  August 8th, 2026 08:40
• Pussy spy\'s 👅🌻🤌🏿♂️ (Ms.divine) ms.divine, this is wild, uninhibited, and completely unapologetic! You...
  August 8th, 2026 08:39
• Imagine 🌹🌶️💋 (GoddessEYES) GoddessEYES, this is wonderfully intimate and sensual. There’s a...
  August 8th, 2026 08:39
• And if I stay alive tomorrow (Demar Desu) Demar, this really moved me. So little said, yet it carries gratitude,...
  August 8th, 2026 08:38
• Mr Zippy (Syd) Syd, what a gloriously fucked-up ride this is! 😂 Dark, grotesque,...
  August 8th, 2026 08:37
• Last Reprieve (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with such stark simplicity. Three words of experience...
  August 8th, 2026 08:34
• American Executor: John Quincy Adams (Matthew R. Callies) Another fascinating installment, Matthew! John Quincy Adams is such an...
  August 8th, 2026 08:33
• Coffee (Fränz Müller) What a wonderfully free little piece, Fränz! There’s such an...
  August 7th, 2026 08:41
• Diamonds are a Man\'s Best Friend (Mutley Ravishes) LOL, Mutley...😂 Anatomy, yoga, inner fire, and Yogi Bear somehow...
  August 7th, 2026 08:39
• Great Personality (Paul Bell) Oh Paul...😂 This guy doesn’t merely put his foot in his mouth, he...
  August 7th, 2026 08:38
• THE LAPPING OF THE WAVES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Wow, Norman...what a powerful piece. You take us right to that terrible...
  August 7th, 2026 08:37
• kindle it with care (Arqios) Beautiful, Rik...hope here isn’t some passive expectation that...
  August 7th, 2026 08:36
• SOUL (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Beautiful, Carlos...there’s an entire lifetime carried here, from...
  August 7th, 2026 08:35
• Corrosion (Sorenbarrett) Damn, Soren...what a beautifully painted piece. Everything feels textured...
  August 7th, 2026 08:34
• See (2781) Wonderful, Valiantstar...brief, inviting, and quietly joyful. There’s...
  August 7th, 2026 08:33
• A moment (NinjaGirl) Oh, 🥷...I cannot tell you how good it is to see you again, my friend!...
  August 7th, 2026 08:32
• And if I die today (Demar Desu) Damn, Demar...so much life packed into so few words. Messy, contradictory,...
  August 7th, 2026 08:30
• Synesthaesia in love (Lorenz) Beautiful, Lorenz...there’s something wonderfully spectral about this...
  August 7th, 2026 08:28
• Grifter\'s Stew (Kurt Philip Behm) Damn, Kurt...this has teeth. There’s something deliciously sinister...
  August 7th, 2026 08:27
• Cliché Laden Navel Gaze at Poetry (Doggerel Dave) Well…damn…Dave, how the hell did I miss this one? The irony is not...
  August 6th, 2026 13:27
• THE TEXAS TREASURE TRAGEDY (David Welch) David, what an ambitious and thoroughly engaging tale! I was drawn into...
  August 6th, 2026 08:18
• Sins of the Flesh (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this is such a joyful and liberating poem! You confront body shame...
  August 6th, 2026 08:17
• LIFE IN TECCHICOLOR / LA VIDA EN TECNICOLOR (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this really moved me…there is wonder here, but also profound...
  August 6th, 2026 08:16
• Three in the morning (Paul Bell) Paul, this is one heck of a devastating poem! An entire relationship...
  August 6th, 2026 08:15
• laureled youth (Arqios) My friend, this really moved me…celebration and grief exist together...
  August 6th, 2026 08:14
• BY THE WAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really moved me. There is a profound weariness throughout, as...
  August 6th, 2026 08:13
• Candyland Of Delicious Desires. Part 1 (Nerd) Nerd, this is wildly sensual and delightfully shameless! The playful...
  August 6th, 2026 08:12
• It really happened (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this had me laughing! I felt the frustration of getting trapped...
  August 6th, 2026 08:12
• American Executor: James Monroe (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is another impressive addition to the series! Monroe emerges...
  August 6th, 2026 08:10
• One Feather (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a beautifully spiritual piece! The quiet vastness drew me in,...
  August 6th, 2026 08:07
• WHAT\'S MINE (David Welch) David, what a fiercely charged piece! I felt the speaker’s fear and...
  August 6th, 2026 08:04
• SANDS / ARENAS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a beautifully haunting piece. I felt the yearning for relief...
  August 6th, 2026 08:02
• why am I still angry? (Demar Desu) Demar, what a powerful senryu! I know the anger of watching cruelty...
  August 6th, 2026 08:00
• Sexual Archaeology (Fränz Müller) Fränz, what a brilliant mixture of lust, loneliness, and self-deprecating...
  August 6th, 2026 07:58
• American Executor: James Madison (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, what an impressive continuation of this series! The disciplined...
  August 6th, 2026 07:57
• Pool comp (2781) Valiantsstar, this speaks to me. I’ve had moments where an unexpected...
  August 5th, 2026 23:00
• The dune across from Dover (Arqios) Arqios, this really moved me…there’s such a deep sense of stillness...
  August 5th, 2026 22:59
• Aging (Boot) James, what a relatable piece. The humor keeps it light, but underneath is...
  August 5th, 2026 22:58
• THE RELUCTANT SOLDIER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this speaks to me. I’ve always been drawn to poems that remember...
  August 5th, 2026 22:57
• Freedom (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this really made me stop and think…I like how you contrast...
  August 5th, 2026 22:55
• Exploring my breasts and find hate (Nerd) My friend, “I envy your arousal when you see me bare” is the line that...
  August 5th, 2026 22:55
• Off a little (Boot) My friend, “Nothing scary…haunt’s be…” is the turn that grabbed...
  August 5th, 2026 22:53
• Spirited Away (Fränz Müller) Fränz, this really moved me…there’s such a strong sense of liberation...
  August 5th, 2026 22:52
• I see the reason in all your eyes (Demar Desu) Demar, what a thoughtful senryu. I especially love the movement from...
  August 5th, 2026 22:51
• Angelchen (Isa kemmy) Isa, this really moved me…what stayed with me is that you never reduce...
  August 5th, 2026 22:47
• Draft 6 pt. 2 (Never be) My friend, this is one wild ride…it feels like stepping into a mind...
  August 5th, 2026 22:46
• Pearl (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what struck me most here is how each of these says so much with so...
  August 5th, 2026 20:19
• A bittersweet stroll (Lorenz) Lorenz, this really pulled me in…it feels like wandering through memory...
  August 5th, 2026 20:18
• The secrets that consume your mind, that never go away. (Friendship) My friend, this hit me hard…there’s a heartbreaking honesty here that...
  August 5th, 2026 20:16
• Thrown Away Things (Neville) Neville, what a thoughtful and quietly cutting piece. I know the need to...
  August 4th, 2026 08:46
• WHO WAS THAT GUY? (David Welch) David, this really moved me. Looking across the distance between each...
  August 4th, 2026 08:45
• American Executor: Thomas Jefferson (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is an ambitious and commanding portrait of a presidency...
  August 4th, 2026 08:44
• Vampire Delight (Paul Bell) Paul, this is wickedly funny…shameless, filthy, and completely committed...
  August 4th, 2026 08:40
• Carpe Diem - Nope! (Orchidee) Orchi, this is hilarious! Popeye has chartered a boat, SpongeBob has...
  August 4th, 2026 08:39
• The Abyss (Teddy.15) Brilliant little poem, Teddy. This made me laugh while simultaneously...
  August 4th, 2026 08:29
• The Uncomfortable Silence (Thomas W Case) What a deeply meaningful poem, Thomas. The struggle to embrace Sabbath...
  August 4th, 2026 08:27
• search box reflection (Arqios) What a wonderfully clever piece, Rik. The unusual spacing delivers the...
  August 4th, 2026 08:26
• UNDER THE WATERS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Wonderful poem, Carlos. The gradually shortening form heightens the...
  August 4th, 2026 08:25
• NIGHTMARES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) What a haunting piece, Norman. The gradual descent from vague unease into...
  August 4th, 2026 08:15
• A throat cut by a shadow\'s edge (Sorenbarrett) What a dark and visceral piece, Soren. The devastation reaches far beyond...
  August 4th, 2026 08:13
• Wake Up (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is an energetic portrait of a mind attempting to sort genuine...
  August 4th, 2026 08:04
• DEATH GIVES HIS WORD (David Welch) What a powerful meditation, David. The speaker begins as something...
  August 4th, 2026 08:02
• Draft 6 pt. 1 (Never be) My friend, what a wildly uninhibited venture beyond your familiar...
  August 4th, 2026 08:00
• Why am I afraid? (Demar Desu) What a quietly devastating piece, Demar. The weariness feels...
  August 4th, 2026 07:49
• Life is Worth the Ride (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this really encouraged me. I appreciate how each hardship is met...
  August 3rd, 2026 18:12
• Chrysalis (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a thoughtful piece. The movement from perspective and...
  August 3rd, 2026 18:12
• Nudism: A Senryū (Fränz Müller) Fränz, you got me with this one. There’s such a playful freedom packed...
  August 3rd, 2026 18:09
• American Executor: John Adams (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this one was a treat for me. Adams has always been one of my...
  August 3rd, 2026 18:07
• The past (Paul Bell) Paul, what a haunting piece. The changing seasons, the faithful presence...
  August 3rd, 2026 18:04
• on a park bench (Arqios) Arqios, what a beautiful piece. The imagery is delicate throughout, and...
  August 3rd, 2026 17:48
• ALL LOVE / Todo amor (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, what a heartfelt piece. The thread of love flows through every...
  August 3rd, 2026 17:46
• The past (Paul Bell) What stayed with me most was the image of the crow lying beside her. It...
  August 3rd, 2026 17:45
• Living power (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a thought-provoking piece. I love the progression through...
  August 3rd, 2026 17:42
• THE UNKNOWN NAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Norman, this really drew me in. It has that dreamlike atmosphere you do so...
  August 3rd, 2026 17:41