Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Fire In My Soul (Teddy.15) My dear, dear Teddy. I could feel this in me as I read it. It hit me deep...
  August 16th, 2025 17:00
• Ukiah At Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! Just wow! An easy fave. Short but a sublime poem. Well done!...
  August 16th, 2025 16:56
• You Recall that Childhood Game? (Cheeky Missy) Missy, you’ve woven everyday chaos and weariness into your sonnets with...
  August 16th, 2025 16:54
• Children (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Strong, powerful, and every decent human with a heart will certainly stand...
  August 16th, 2025 16:51
• Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know (Neville) Tell me about it! I literally got ID\'d for buying a trippy mushroom...
  August 16th, 2025 08:08
• 8-days in a gum-leaf blur (Arqios) The kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, or something like that! Rik, this...
  August 16th, 2025 07:28
• Poetic lightning (Sorenbarrett) If people don\'t get this, they probably don\'t belong on this site. They...
  August 16th, 2025 07:24
• Choc`O`Holic. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, these are playful and lighthearted…a sweet tooth and a twist of...
  August 16th, 2025 07:14
• Death Wrapped (Tony Grannell) I completely get this. Having worked with senior adults with dementia, I...
  August 16th, 2025 07:11
• Oh, You Know (Cheeky Missy) You had me at Bricohe! Love it! LOL! Loved these sonnets too, my dear...
  August 15th, 2025 20:34
• To The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful job with this poem, Kurt, that says more than what it seems to...
  August 15th, 2025 20:32
• Sweet Forgiveness (Tony Grannell) First comment! Yay! Tony, this carries a gentle light breaking...
  August 15th, 2025 10:16
• Do You Belong? (Rebellion_in_sanity) This felt to me like a drifting meditation between belonging and...
  August 15th, 2025 10:14
• Let it go (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is steady moral clarity…a call to drop the weight of blame...
  August 15th, 2025 10:09
• Expectations (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Great job, Hayleigh! Boys seem to play \"men\" more oft\' than not. Is...
  August 15th, 2025 10:07
• the cupboard light (Arqios) This is so tender and quietly cinematic (a quality I truly...
  August 15th, 2025 10:03
• Heart of Relief. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, this is raw and visceral…you don’t hold back on the imagery or...
  August 15th, 2025 10:01
• The Keys Of Christ? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful flow to this, my friend. Jesus sure was not soft. You didn\'t...
  August 15th, 2025 09:58
• Under a Real Sunset (Teddy.15) Teddy, your poem has such a tender, nostalgic glow…first love painted...
  August 15th, 2025 09:55
• A Forever Friend (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This is so warm and uplifting…a gentle reminder of where true friendship...
  August 15th, 2025 09:53
• Feeling Turned Around (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt!
  August 15th, 2025 09:52
• What could have been (NinjaGirl) 🥷 poet , this is quiet but devastating…each “maybe” pulling me...
  August 15th, 2025 09:51
• Cabbages Rule OK? (Orchidee) Wait, I thought this was about Spinach...😮‍💨 \"Never mind,...
  August 14th, 2025 12:17
• The Best Sparrow Is a Dead Sparrow (Rebellion_in_sanity) A political fable sharpened to a blade…dark, unflinching, and unwilling...
  August 14th, 2025 12:15
• On the Flip Side It\'s Definitely Adventure (Cheeky Missy) More scrumptious sonnets from the serene sonnet sovereign herself! I am...
  August 14th, 2025 12:12
• Blood in the Snow (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Love this Senryu, Hayleigh! I can feel the emotions in this and its...
  August 14th, 2025 12:10
• Three the Hard Way (Demar Desu) Oooh. Last poem? Why stop? I will miss reading them, for what it is worth,...
  August 14th, 2025 12:07
• \"a former dream\" (Arqios) The reckoning settled in as a read, for real…you really capture what’s...
  August 14th, 2025 12:02
• Sky vine (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a quiet parable…two lives twining upward toward the light...
  August 14th, 2025 11:53
• Aspersions. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, this is a measured weighing of scales, my dear firend…turning...
  August 14th, 2025 11:45
• Falling for Icarus #2 (Neville) Neville, I love your wry, knowing touch…turning myth into a moment we...
  August 14th, 2025 11:43
• Of Dogs and Cats and Other Things (Cheeky Missy) These three have your signature scrumptious-sonnet energy you do so well,...
  August 13th, 2025 12:06
• One Final Bow (Kurt Philip Behm) This graceful farewell feels like a quiet triumph…a final bow that’s...
  August 13th, 2025 12:04
• why so poetic? (Demar Desu) Another excellent, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Keep \'em...
  August 13th, 2025 12:02
• No, Mr. Science Guy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shawn, I’ve never believed science and faith cancel each other...
  August 13th, 2025 11:23
• Watermarks (Sorenbarrett) What struck me here, Soren, is how the rain you describe doesn’t just...
  August 13th, 2025 11:14
• The Maiden\'s Plight (Tony Grannell) Tony, I love how you can write a ballad that feels passed down in through...
  August 13th, 2025 11:12
• \"unspoken storms\" (Arqios) Rik, this holds such quiet power…like a steady hand over deep waters....
  August 13th, 2025 11:08
• The Comedown. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, these hit like quick jolts…sharp and stripped to the bone. The...
  August 13th, 2025 11:04
• Rubbish? (Orchidee) Pure Orchiliciousness (now a word, soon to be found in Oxford\'s...
  August 13th, 2025 10:29
• So Damn Bright and Above it All (Teddy.15) Wow! Amen. Hell yes. Damn I am feeling very humbled and, quite...
  August 13th, 2025 10:19
• All He’s Done For Me (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, this feels like an open-heart testimony poured straight from lived...
  August 12th, 2025 17:21
• Low End of Middle-class (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this poem walks a fine, painful line between self-awareness and...
  August 12th, 2025 17:19
• Anything for a Drink (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this is a raw, lived-in honesty that doesn’t flinch or tidy the...
  August 12th, 2025 17:17
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) My friend, this one feels like holding a firefly in cupped...
  August 12th, 2025 10:10
• Ask Me Tomorrow (Cheeky Missy) Missy, your trio here is a playful stroll through three very different...
  August 12th, 2025 10:08
• Sunrise (Damaso) Damaso, this feels like catching a wild, fleeting dream in your...
  August 12th, 2025 10:06
• \"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me.\" (Violet_Writes) 💯💯 Yup. That\'s 200% true! Well done, my friend! A fave!
  August 12th, 2025 10:04
• The Sweet Track (Neville) Neville, you’ve given this piece the feel of a guided walk through...
  August 12th, 2025 10:03
• Glass (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this one cuts sharp and clean—just like the glass in its...
  August 12th, 2025 10:02
• \"our poetic sides\" (Arqios) Arqios, this is like tracing the constellations of our little poetic...
  August 12th, 2025 09:57
• \'Twas Always Thus (Tony Grannell) Tony, I think you know my love of poetic mirrors, and this is a grim...
  August 12th, 2025 09:55
• The poet (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one rides (pun intended) hard and true. You’ve caught the...
  August 12th, 2025 09:53
• Peace or Revenge. (Poetic Licence) 💯 Tobani…this holds nothing back. You’ve given us the sights,...
  August 12th, 2025 09:52
• Alchemy Of The Answers (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, this is a full sweep of the world in motion...war and peace,...
  August 12th, 2025 09:50
• Fido Ruling The Roost? (Orchidee) Orchi, Fido’s got you right where he wants you…pipe, slippers, and...
  August 12th, 2025 09:47
• The light within us (Demar Desu) `Amen. A profoundly powerful witness to a universal spiritual truth. Well...
  August 12th, 2025 09:43
• Life With Trash (Teddy.15) Powerful, pointed, and purely true. Well done, dear Teddy!...
  August 12th, 2025 09:36
• Harmless (NinjaGirl) My friend, this is raw and stripped of any false comfort, which you do so...
  August 11th, 2025 20:01
• His Gift (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderfully written Kurt. Well done!
  August 11th, 2025 19:59
• If I Knew The Answer to That... (Cheeky Missy) Missy, only you could weave wreckage, cabbage, spicy sausage, and Panera...
  August 11th, 2025 19:58
• Is it all true? (Orchidee) Orchi, KP, Fido, Botox Land…but no Popeye! Let me guess, he’s eating...
  August 11th, 2025 19:56
• His Love Is Deep (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, you’ve captured the persistence of God’s love so well...
  August 11th, 2025 19:52
• Ode to Your Memory (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this carries the weight of love and loss in every stanza. The...
  August 11th, 2025 19:50
• Today (NafisaSB) My friend, this is warm and overflowing with care. Each wish feels like a...
  August 11th, 2025 19:38
• The Colour Rhyme (Priya Tomar) Priya, this reads like a fable wrapped in vivid threads. The colors pull...
  August 11th, 2025 19:37
• Poems of Passion (Demar Desu) Another wise one my friend. Beautiful job! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 11th, 2025 19:35
• a poetic lullaby (Arqios) Rik, this is gorgeous in its honesty. You’ve caught that restless space...
  August 11th, 2025 19:33
• Glimpses (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this moves like a slow turn toward the sun. The light feels earned...
  August 11th, 2025 19:30
• GRATIAS (GAME OVER) (Poetic Licence) Exactly, Tobani! You’ve boiled it down to that blunt finality that hits...
  August 11th, 2025 19:29
• Prayer 🙏 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this speaks straight to the heart. You’ve put into words what...
  August 10th, 2025 08:12
• Sunday Fun-Day: \"Dawn\" (Arqios) Arqios, this breathes fresh air right through the screen to a guy in need...
  August 10th, 2025 08:09
• Sand in a bottle (Sorenbarrett) This gem is stripped to the bone…lean, direct, and all the stronger for...
  August 10th, 2025 08:08
• Wise Man Say (24) (Poetic Licence) Exactly, Tobani! You know I love these in their entirety.This one is just...
  August 10th, 2025 07:56
• Intelligence (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, this is chilling in its precision. You’ve built the tension...
  August 10th, 2025 07:53
• Love Is (Tony36) Wonderful poem, Tony!!! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 10th, 2025 07:50
• Convoluted Reflections of Possibility (ElizabethMoroz) My dear friend, Elizabeth, this ebbs and flows like a tide...pulling...
  August 10th, 2025 07:49
• Writing through Storms (Thomas W Case) Excellent Thomas! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  August 8th, 2025 20:22
• Painted On (Teddy.15) Teddy, this one is will linger. The wings, the softness—they make you...
  August 8th, 2025 20:21
• Anthem for the Apocalypse (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this has major urgency. You’ve caught both the scale of...
  August 8th, 2025 20:15
• The Fall of the Raj (Tony Grannell) Tony, the timing and dry wit of this is perfect. It reads like a...
  August 8th, 2025 19:58
• Beatify (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautifully true in it\'s brevity! Wonderful write, my friend....
  August 8th, 2025 19:56
• Where Did I Leave Myself? (Cheeky Missy) Missy, you rocked another sonnet saga. The way you weave in life’s...
  August 8th, 2025 19:54
• Making Life More Difficult (Orchidee) Orchi, you’ve got that perfect balance of wit and self-deprecation down...
  August 8th, 2025 19:50
• alive again (Demar Desu) Aint\' that the truth bro! And yay! I can comment again! Woohoo! Hope all...
  August 8th, 2025 19:44
• Nothing anymore (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this feels like brushing the dust off history itself. 😏 Each...
  August 8th, 2025 19:43
• \"where we come from\" (Arqios) Rik, this is rich with nostalgia...but sharpened by truth. You’ve caught...
  August 8th, 2025 19:38
• Blank Expression. (Poetic Licence) Nataiella, this hits with truth...and that’s always hard to shake. The...
  August 8th, 2025 19:36
• Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville) Neville, there’s more weight in this than the title lets on, mate! The...
  August 8th, 2025 19:34
• Raven Came He Came a\'Tapping (Teddy.15) Beautiful! Another one of my faves! What a wise raven indeed! Stately and...
  July 31st, 2025 12:39
• Well Inclined (Neville) Neville, this is beautifully layered...what starts as simplicity reveals a...
  July 29th, 2025 18:56
• Another thing I can\'t find! (Orchidee) Orchi, this is delightful and unhinged, making it even more delightful!...
  July 29th, 2025 18:52
• Cognitive Orphans (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful and true write, Kurt. Well done! 🌹🙏
  July 29th, 2025 18:48
• Nothing Cuter (Cheeky Missy) Missy, your sonnets always feel like a peek into a tender moment...faith,...
  July 29th, 2025 18:47
• Balance (Damaso) My friend, a beautiful poem…ritual and riddle...almost trance-like. ...
  July 29th, 2025 16:13
• Rise up (Tony36) Great job, Tony!!! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  July 29th, 2025 07:10
• Memories (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this starts with absurdity and ends in tragedy…like a punchline...
  July 29th, 2025 06:24
• Masking. (Senryu). (Poetic Licence) The beautiful thing about the Senryu form is that, in its brevity when...
  July 29th, 2025 06:23
• right here, right now (Arqios) My friend, this is soft but certain...like a hand held out in the rain....
  July 29th, 2025 06:21
• So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Cancel culture sucks. I cannot stand it. I would rather be offended (of...
  July 29th, 2025 06:11