Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• be brave... (NafisaSB) And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my...
  April 15th, 2025 08:11
• Go to sleep (Tony36) A wonderful lullaby, Tony. I could see myself reading this to my children...
  April 15th, 2025 08:08
• $0.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu) It\'s now 9:05 AM. good morning, sir! May your day rock and your funds...
  April 15th, 2025 08:05
• Who died and made you God (Sorenbarrett) \"Beauty is more than just skin deep\", or so the saying goes. And it is...
  April 15th, 2025 08:02
• Mental Breakdown To Spiritual Awakening (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I live in the state of Hershey! LOL|! A wonderful poem, my friend. Indeed,...
  April 15th, 2025 07:57
• Our day (2781) Wow! What a poem and what an ending. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
  April 15th, 2025 07:53
• Change of Heart (Poetic Licence) Understood. I have been there. You think you\'ve finally figured things...
  April 15th, 2025 07:52
• letting go: Anton Ego (Arqios) Chef\'s kiss! Wonderful narrative poem, one that I could taste, that had a...
  April 15th, 2025 07:48
• Don\'t Look Back (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful and most thought-provoking poem, my friend. For me, those are...
  April 14th, 2025 16:23
• Rage-filled Turns (NinjaGirl) So verrrry cathartic, my friend. Dance...no...not just dance or...
  April 14th, 2025 15:33
• Cockerel Crowing (Orchidee) Those dang cock(erel)s. They ruin it for the conscience every time, I tell...
  April 14th, 2025 15:25
• Paper Flowers (KTay) The use of colors as an expression of emotions is brilliant, my friend. I...
  April 14th, 2025 15:18
• Put On the Kettle and Your Feet Up? (Cheeky Missy) How can Shredded Wheat, in any form, be too much fun?!?! My tummy is...
  April 14th, 2025 15:15
• Abuse (Tony36) A true and urgent write, Tony. Indeed, abuse happens most by those who are...
  April 14th, 2025 15:12
• Blossom falls (Caring dove) Do not blame you for changing location. What a beautiful poem and metaphor...
  April 14th, 2025 07:42
• Differences (Sorenbarrett) \"We don\'t make love, we feel it.\" On the surface, a literal translation...
  April 14th, 2025 07:39
• On A Sunday Morning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth. People often drone on and don\'t give a shit. What else is there to...
  April 14th, 2025 07:35
• midnight courage (Arqios) This is often where I exist, my friend. That liminal space between life an...
  April 14th, 2025 07:32
• Pleasing Everyone Else (Poetic Licence) So true, my friend! So very true! Individually we are all unique and that...
  April 14th, 2025 07:26
• Abstract journey (Mourgana of the Fey) Wonderful and profoundly deep. The short, brief lines almost give the poem...
  April 14th, 2025 07:20
• Weeping (2781) Ooh. I feel the pain in your words my friend. I had a crying/praying...
  April 14th, 2025 07:17
• TEETOTAL (Michael Edwards) Ooh. I am feeling sorry for you too. That\'s no fun. This poem speaks much...
  April 14th, 2025 07:13
• Watch Out (Thomas W Case) This poem hits raw and real. A wonderful write, Thomas!
  April 13th, 2025 19:06
• Jailers (NinjaGirl) And how...they totally are! Well done on this. Loved this! What a...
  April 13th, 2025 19:05
• Now, Don\'t Get Any Ideas (Cheeky Missy) For those with seasonal allergies like mine, forsythia yellow is a warning...
  April 13th, 2025 13:38
• Butterfly\'s Wander (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done. Paints a haunting truth many are in denial of! Well done, Kurt!...
  April 13th, 2025 13:35
• Anointing Memorial (Orchidee) I love this scene as it is presented in Jesus Christ Superstar. Well done...
  April 13th, 2025 13:33
• Boogers on paper (Demar Desu) 🤧🤣 This, um, really sticks! Glad everything checked out, bro! Thank...
  April 13th, 2025 13:30
• Jousting With The Devil (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That last part...I concur! Well done, my friend. Wonderful poem with a fun...
  April 13th, 2025 13:27
• Passing on (Sorenbarrett) In this I see the course of one\'s life with, perhaps, death being the...
  April 13th, 2025 13:25
• Gallows (Tony36) Wow! Haunting poem, Tony! Well done!
  April 13th, 2025 09:51
• song to the stars (Arqios) Love the blending of nursery rhyme and metaphor. This feels like a lullaby...
  April 13th, 2025 07:41
• Wise Man Say (10). (Poetic Licence) Much wisdom here, but the latter...many unsolicited \"advisers\" need to...
  April 13th, 2025 07:31
• Elphin (Mourgana of the Fey) This is quite lyrical/musical and feels like a dance as one reads it. The...
  April 13th, 2025 07:29
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) Okay, I have to revisit this, and I am glad I did I never ended up...
  April 13th, 2025 07:25
• Till The Music Stops (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful poem with a poignant message! Live your life, while you are...
  April 12th, 2025 21:46
• Jerusalem Journey (Orchidee) A lovely write! Happy Palm Sunday, my friend! 🌹👏
  April 12th, 2025 21:43
• Love bounded (Demar Desu) Hm. Other things as well...indeed. Is love conditional? In some senses...
  April 12th, 2025 09:30
• Dear Heart (Tony36) A constant, never-ending message that some have to give to their hearts to...
  April 12th, 2025 08:15
• the killing of a conifer (Mourgana of the Fey) We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and...
  April 12th, 2025 08:12
• Daredevil: Born Again (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Thank you for the poetic review. I was kind of wondering how it was. Much...
  April 12th, 2025 08:08
• Echos (Teardrop) I can relate to this. Well done on this expression, my friend. It hit...
  April 12th, 2025 08:06
• Seasons pass (Sorenbarrett) A most excellent and beautiful write on the passing of the seasons....
  April 12th, 2025 08:05
• celestial threads (Arqios) Celestial imagery mixed with the craft of writing verse, the metaphor is...
  April 12th, 2025 08:01
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (3) (Poetic Licence) LOL! These were totally fun...and funny! Well done, my friend. Enjoy the...
  April 12th, 2025 07:58
• Lost in the Mud (Thomas W Case) This is brilliant, Thomas. A fave! Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 20:11
• Storm Ports (Kurt Philip Behm) A poem about couplets written in couplets, and the message...profoundly...
  April 11th, 2025 20:08
• Great Is The Lord (Orchidee) Amen. Wonderful write, my friend. Love the song you shared too. 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 20:04
• Big boys don\'t cry (Tony36) What a lie indeed. More men need to be reading your poetry, Tony! Thanks...
  April 11th, 2025 08:20
• Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey) Love this. A beautiful poem rich in imagery in and metaphor. Well done, my...
  April 11th, 2025 08:20
• Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indeed. I love the violin. Powerful instrument. Excellent write! 🌹👏
  April 11th, 2025 07:59
• Scent of the past (Sorenbarrett) I love your use of the sense of smell in this poem, particularly, \"The...
  April 11th, 2025 07:55
• Liquid Cope (KTay) I can relate to this, having had my own battle with demon alcohol and its...
  April 11th, 2025 07:52
• Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence) This is so true, Tobani. No child asked to be born and those who have...
  April 11th, 2025 07:45
• Anton Ego (Arqios) And I was hungry going into this brilliant metaphor. 🤣 Well done on...
  April 11th, 2025 07:42
• Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes) Chortleability (A word now?) is a blessing in such times. Chortle on, my...
  April 11th, 2025 07:39
• RIP (KTay) The short lines make the emotion really come through, as if gasping while...
  April 10th, 2025 17:51
• He pulls the trigger (Tony36) Powerful message in this dark poem. Wonderfully written, my friend....
  April 10th, 2025 17:48
• Driving Dangerously (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth.
  April 10th, 2025 16:23
• Flower (Sorenbarrett) Love the font, which really works well for this poem, as well as your use...
  April 10th, 2025 16:21
• Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey) Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost...
  April 10th, 2025 16:16
• d a n c e (Arqios) Love it my friend...the form and the poem, executed flawlessly. The words...
  April 10th, 2025 16:14
• Hate Me (KTay) Mmmm. I can feel the hurt, the pain...the defiance. Well done on this,...
  April 9th, 2025 10:34
• The broken heart cafe (Tony36) Wonderful Tony. I have been at that café, and the coffee is thick and...
  April 9th, 2025 10:15
• Disconnect (Caring dove) Indeed. I have been and sometimes currently am there. I so relate to this...
  April 9th, 2025 10:11
• How odd is odd (Sorenbarrett) Indeed. How much difference rattles our bones...and yet, how different are...
  April 9th, 2025 10:09
• Reckoning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well done, Shaun. It\'s hard to believe after all the warning novels and...
  April 9th, 2025 09:53
• Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence) 💯 Truth. Over you, behind you, around you...and you will be blind, like...
  April 9th, 2025 08:57
• the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey) The norse gods and goddesses summoned in a poem that most captivates the...
  April 9th, 2025 08:54
• windswept smiles (Arqios) Indeed. I remember these days myself...and they do bring a smile to my...
  April 9th, 2025 08:51
• Inversion (Mutley Ravishes) Wow. Profound, powerful, true. Indeed, for me, substance abuse was...
  April 9th, 2025 08:46
• Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) It is Tuesday, April 8...5 days later after you wrote the last sonnet in...
  April 8th, 2025 19:20
• PoV (KTay) I can feel the loss and the deep grief in this poem. Well expressed in raw...
  April 8th, 2025 19:17
• Rejoice.... (Orchidee) Ooh. A choir anthem. Nice! This is so beautiful and one of my all time...
  April 8th, 2025 19:15
• Higher Powers (Kurt Philip Behm) Profound and wise in its simplicity. Beautiful poem. Another fave!
  April 8th, 2025 19:12
• I\'m Sorry (Tony36) Very touching, Tony. I never presume to know whether a poet is writing...
  April 8th, 2025 19:10
• On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence) Wow, I’m honored, my friend—truly. You didn’t “nick” a thing;...
  April 8th, 2025 19:01
• Why Is Nine Upside Down? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Subversive much in the same way Floyd\'s The Wall is. Brilliant my friend....
  April 8th, 2025 18:37
• nautical compass (Mourgana of the Fey) I can see that bird, seagull maybe?, barely escaping the swell of the...
  April 8th, 2025 18:33
• AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!! (Demar Desu) Followed by: Shit I\'m Broke Again, Except Worse Oh no! Not...
  April 8th, 2025 18:29
• Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios) Excellent write that demands multiple reads and is layered in metaphor. I...
  April 8th, 2025 18:23
• How soon we forget (Sorenbarrett) One prefers to burn \"under a cold blanketing heaven.\" Marvelous, my...
  April 8th, 2025 09:39
• Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes) Well done, my friend! 🌹👏 Plenty of twists in this tremendously short...
  April 7th, 2025 21:36
• When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy) Well done, Missy! I can\'t believe it\'s Monday...well, okay, almost...
  April 7th, 2025 21:33
• Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case) Great write, Thomas! I had snakes on my mind recently and so I it brought...
  April 7th, 2025 21:30
• Successfully Failed Again. (Poetic Licence) I wrote in my poem, \"Frozen Solid\", \"Failing to being a winner / and...
  April 7th, 2025 15:41
• Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9) (Poetic Licence) How I am two days behind reading my regular dose of Wisdom from Tobani is...
  April 7th, 2025 15:33
• Just a Waste of F------ Time (Poetic Licence) Language is nothing to apologize for when well used! And, my friend, you...
  April 7th, 2025 15:30
• You Are (Lewisgale mental hospital) \"Out of your mind\" indeed! Powerful write! 🌹👏
  April 7th, 2025 15:25
• Spoken Tide (Kurt Philip Behm) Absolutely beautiful, stunning and profound. Wonderful job, Kurt. 🌹👏
  April 7th, 2025 15:19
• Personal Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wow, friend, this is powerful and I love the image that accompanies it....
  April 7th, 2025 15:17
• Roller Skating Dreams (Demar Desu) Motion is the only way across the ocean...so to speak. Though in that...
  April 7th, 2025 09:26
• React (Tony36) Great write, Tony!
  April 7th, 2025 09:24
• You will argue (Sorenbarrett) In a world that keeps insisting on the supposed reality of \"black and...
  April 7th, 2025 09:23
• Mystery..... (Orchidee) Wait...this was awfully mysterious and I am not sure I comprehend....
  April 7th, 2025 09:19
• eye on the road (Arqios) When asked what he would want to be remembered for, Jim Morrison said,...
  April 7th, 2025 09:12
• Blush of the moon (Kaz) Beautiful dusk scene. Excellent job. 🌹
  April 6th, 2025 08:09
• Unknot the not (Sorenbarrett) Powerful, my friend! Amen. I was just saying that to someone...I don\'t...
  April 6th, 2025 08:01
• Impermanence (Rebellion_in_sanity) Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly...
  April 6th, 2025 07:59
• puppeteering farewell (Arqios) Oh this is metaphor rich for sure. \"parchment scribbles and niceties / do...
  April 6th, 2025 07:56