Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• ℌ𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this shines with love and humor encrypted in your style. From the...
  September 27th, 2025 07:55
• residue map (Arqios) This is quiet testimony...rings, stains, and silence all becoming proof of...
  September 27th, 2025 07:54
• Gently (Sorenbarrett) This is both haunting and merciful...death crawling in padded shadows,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:53
• I Need To Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) AI Poetry? Not that I\'ve seen! 🤣 Some may try, but AI is the worst at...
  September 27th, 2025 07:50
• The Pretty Pea (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is soft, playful, and warm all at once. The pea bonding at the...
  September 27th, 2025 07:47
• The Room (Lore) A tragic poem and a parent\'s worst nightmare. Well done on this, my...
  September 27th, 2025 07:46
• My Mind\'s Been Hijacked! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Excellent wording, as always, my friend. Fun read!...
  September 27th, 2025 07:44
• The Wait (Kurt Philip Behm) This is layered and resonant...the girl waiting in cold, the poem...
  September 27th, 2025 07:43
• The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell) This is war in its most savage truth. The vultures circling, the screams...
  September 26th, 2025 09:13
• Bad Week Breakdown (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is comic timing at its finest. The bad week, the shame, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:12
• P.E.A.C.E (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this is spiritual through and through. From silence as a doorway...
  September 26th, 2025 09:11
• LIMERICKS 151, 152 & 153 (Michael Edwards) Michael, these are pure comic release. From tea leaves gone rogue to...
  September 26th, 2025 09:09
• the crooked compass (Arqios) Rock on, Rik! This feels alive in its quiet defiance. The clock, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:06
• Nuts (Sorenbarrett) Reading this felt like sitting in a late-night debate where the lines...
  September 26th, 2025 09:05
• Echoes and Empty Spaces (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is scarred yet unbroken. The quiet echoes, the silence chosen...
  September 26th, 2025 09:03
• On the level (2781) Wow, this is both proclamation and poem. The sickle at harvest, the call...
  September 26th, 2025 09:02
• Heading Home (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is dream and warning at once. The slow steps past forever, the...
  September 26th, 2025 09:00
• The Toys (Lore) Lore, this is devastating in its quietness. The toys waiting, the...
  September 26th, 2025 08:59
• the fountain (Arqios) Arqios, this is haunting…the fountain folding into itself feels like...
  September 26th, 2025 08:56
• Therapy Helps Me Breathe (William Hromada) William, this poem breathes with truth…the storm, the chains, the keys...
  September 25th, 2025 16:29
• 𝒟ℯ𝓋ℴ𝓉𝒾ℴ𝓃𝒶𝓁𝓈 (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this piece moves with strength…the surrender, the boldness, the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:27
• Night images (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece floats between dream and shadow…the rainbow shards,...
  September 25th, 2025 16:25
• Cold and Raw (Thomas W Case) Excellent poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 25th, 2025 16:23
• Complete (2781) Reading this felt like a ride through both satire and scripture…the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:22
• Cactus (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Reading this felt like holding something sharp in one hand and soft in the...
  September 25th, 2025 16:07
• Remembering Plato (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this piece circles with elegance…the freedom into leisure, leisure...
  September 24th, 2025 07:28
• I Look for You in My Dreams (Lore) This folds memory and dream together so well…the child who learned loss...
  September 24th, 2025 07:27
• rusted edges, burning gears (Arqios) Rik, this piece gnashes and rusts in equal measure…the soot, the...
  September 24th, 2025 07:23
• The Whispers, The Shadows (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this carries the fire of intimacy and the warmth of...
  September 24th, 2025 07:20
• Degrees (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this spins with sharp tension…the questions stack until they...
  September 24th, 2025 07:18
• Rotting Alive (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Reading this felt like standing in a room with the lights off…I know...
  September 24th, 2025 07:15
• life\'s a journey. (Friendship) This piece carries river and memory together, my friend…your dad’s...
  September 24th, 2025 07:12
• White Car (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this caught me hard…the plainness of “White car, white car.”...
  September 24th, 2025 07:08
• Otherness (Boot) James, this piece hums with an otherworldly ache. The dreamlike drift, the...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:56
• Make a Wish (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, such an honest and moving piece. The raw goodbye, the stark...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:54
• The Night Dancer (Paul Bell) Paul, what a piece. The beauty, the longing, the repetition...all...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:53
• between the hours (Arqios) My friend, you’ve bottled that in-between hour beautifully. The...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:52
• But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan) Tom, this captures the restless mind so vividly, my friend. It feels like...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:47
• Ghosts (Sorenbarrett) Ghosts we are, indeed. Like wisps of clouds remnants...here one moment,...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:46
• Fresh Breeze (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A walked out on a sunny day To feel the gentle, fall breeze, It was...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:39
• Bloody Foreigners… (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this cracked me up and stung at the same time. The satire’s sharp,...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:31
• Untitled #3 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Yay on your A\'s! Rock on Hayleigh!!! As for your poem, Ii sucks to...
  September 23rd, 2025 07:27
• Beloved & Enough (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is tender and steady, the dove image gives the poem its calm...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:59
• ℌ𝔢𝔯𝔢 𝔦𝔰 \"𝔬𝔫𝔢\'𝔰 𝔴𝔬𝔯𝔡𝔰❤️‍🔥 (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this lands as truth. The opening advice reads like a card, but...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:56
• What would it be no siblings to talk too! (Friendship) My friend, this is raw and lived...it is honest. That image of “absent...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:53
• For All who Are Lost (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this reads like testimony turned into poetry. Worn roads,...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:48
• undertow (Arqios) Arqios, this pulled me under right away. The salt as memory…as...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:44
• Heaven\'s rain (Sorenbarrett) Soren, what a piece. It reads like a hymn to the inexplicable…a reminder...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:42
• You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee) How hot does a poem get before it scorches your, eyes? O\'l Tom want\'s to...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:14
• LIMERICKS 148, 149 &150 (Michael Edwards) Great limericks, my friend. And thank you too, Teddy!...
  September 22nd, 2025 20:12
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is razor-sharp. You frame patriotism not as pride but as...
  September 21st, 2025 22:05
• Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You and me both. In fact, all of Matthew 5-7. That Sermon on the Mount is...
  September 21st, 2025 18:55
• Poet (Teddy.15) Ooh...Is it named Teddy Lane? I guess that would be a bit too identifying!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:53
• Yard work. (Friendship) Friendship, this one is pure delight. You carry the strain straight...
  September 21st, 2025 18:50
• Vagabond Kings (Kurt Philip Behm) Profoundly thought-provoking and true. Well done!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:46
• 𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒶 𝒸𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 ℋ.ℰ.ℛ (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, I’ve sat with conversations like this ...where you name...
  September 21st, 2025 18:44
• the saga in the hall (Arqios) Arqios, this is remarkable. You turn the concourse into living text...the...
  September 21st, 2025 18:42
• A Rose for You (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is honest and sharp. You frame love as growth...needing daily...
  September 21st, 2025 18:37
• Greater love hath no man (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is weighty and profound. The layers of sacrifice you...
  September 21st, 2025 18:36
• Try To.... (Orchidee) I know who can get you through, Orchi...Ah-gah-gah-gah-gah-gah!...
  September 21st, 2025 18:32
• Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case) Sometimes we slip indeed! A wonderful write and all too true....
  September 21st, 2025 18:29
• Las Vegas & The Morning Blues (Teddy.15) I guess Senryus don\'t stay in Vegas! 🤣 Love this, dearest Teddy! Your...
  September 20th, 2025 19:48
• Short Stories Rated 18 + (Keyara S Trotman) Reading this felt like sitting with a story told straight — no soft...
  September 20th, 2025 19:42
• One Step (Kurt Philip Behm) Great one, Kurt.
  September 20th, 2025 19:41
• Just being happy with age. (Friendship) My friend, I love how you’ve turned the aches and silver hairs into...
  September 20th, 2025 19:26
• of silences (Arqios) Arqios, this tribute carries both weight and light. You frame silence not...
  September 20th, 2025 19:24
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) I have missed your Limerick\'s, Michael. These did their job delightfully!...
  September 20th, 2025 19:20
• The Devil\'s Daughter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Oooh...devilish is she? LOL! Fun poem, mate!
  September 20th, 2025 19:18
• Catinga was his name (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece is unforgettable. You build him from stench, stagger,...
  September 20th, 2025 19:16
• When will it end? (NafisaSB) Safina, dear friend, this is raw and urgent. The broken promises, bleeding...
  September 20th, 2025 19:15
• The Friends Are Gone (Los Del Bohío) (Vogelfrei) That image...“Life is like a ripe fruit fallen / he who yesterday...
  September 20th, 2025 19:14
• Mud maybe. (Luis Alberto Spinneta) (Vogelfrei) My friend, I know that pressure to let the inside out...to sing or...
  September 20th, 2025 19:12
• When the Clock Strikes 12 (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) My friend, I’ve known that same tension between fear of being unseen and...
  September 20th, 2025 19:07
• Behind Closed Doors (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Wow, Petra, this glows with such hope. The missed stops and lost moments...
  September 20th, 2025 19:06
• Scientific Mind (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, even as a person of faith, I’ve had moments like...
  September 19th, 2025 15:55
• Aphrodite’s Fortune (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this one shines with devotion. Aphrodite’s fortune becomes the...
  September 19th, 2025 15:50
• Memories (Priya Tomar) Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred...
  September 19th, 2025 15:49
• Memories (Priya Tomar) When you were resting in the lap of silver nights The camera of my...
  September 19th, 2025 15:47
• A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away (Matthew R. Callies) This was quite the fun Friday frolic of a read! Loved it, my friend!...
  September 19th, 2025 15:46
• One Word (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful. Love the message of the first. A very strong grouping here,...
  September 19th, 2025 15:43
• It’s Completely Completed (Keyara S Trotman) Keyara, this one is both tender and mysterious. The way you weave...
  September 19th, 2025 15:41
• richer than old king Croesus (Arqios) Rik, this is powerful. You pit minted suns and vaults of tribute against...
  September 19th, 2025 15:39
• My Lord (2781) This reads like a worn prayer turned prophetic call…gratitude for...
  September 19th, 2025 15:35
• The Seed (Sorenbarrett) My friend, I’ve seen seeds like this grow…isolation spreading where...
  September 19th, 2025 15:31
• The One Who Questioned (Rebellion_in_sanity) Wow. Just 🤯! My friend, this is searing…a relentless build from the...
  September 19th, 2025 15:28
• Cuboid Face and The Mom (Rebellion_in_sanity) This is powerful, my friend. The fear you paint...cuboid face, snake...
  September 18th, 2025 18:22
• Coming Home (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very thought-provoking, Kurt! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 18th, 2025 18:18
• Signature Needed🔥 (Keyara S Trotman) I am a firm believer that humans are spiritual beings and, therefore, our...
  September 18th, 2025 18:17
• The Heart’s Spark (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this one glows with both ache and hope. The heart flickers like a...
  September 18th, 2025 18:09
• in the quiet tide (Arqios) My friend, I’ve carried unwritten lines like this myself…held tight in...
  September 18th, 2025 18:09
• Forgiveness (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one struck deep. Very powerful. The musty cloth and dirt feel...
  September 18th, 2025 18:07
• Made of Wood (Orchidee) Haha, Orchi, this one carries bite! The way you tore into the soaps while...
  September 18th, 2025 18:05
• Can You Take It With You? (Teddy.15) Haha, you got me with this one, Teddy. You set me up for philosophy and...
  September 18th, 2025 17:57
• We need to Stop the verbal abuse! (Friendship) This is strong and steady, Friendship…naming the abuse, drawing the...
  September 17th, 2025 13:24
• Bright Moon (Devender Kumar) Well done on this Devender! This short poem says so much with so few...
  September 17th, 2025 13:17
• A Thousand Miles (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) My friend, reading this felt like being right there ...the sun, the crowd,...
  September 17th, 2025 11:14
• Who I am (2781) Reading this felt like tracing my own wrestlings…the battlefield of the...
  September 17th, 2025 11:12
• 𝔊𝔬𝔬𝔡 ℜ𝔦𝔡𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this lingers…it’s raw and confessional, but yes, absolutely...
  September 17th, 2025 11:08
• over-shoulder weather (Arqios) Arqios, this lingers like a ghost at your shoulder…the pilgrim with a...
  September 17th, 2025 11:06
• The Unheard Spoken Word (Tom Dylan) Tom, this lingers…the sting of being unheard, the chatty crowd, that one...
  September 17th, 2025 11:04