Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• A thought on love (NinjaGirl) 🥷, the way you repeat “the hours I’ve spent” hits deep… it...
  November 13th, 2025 15:24
• Football Fan Philosophy (Tom Dylan) Tom, what a metaphor filled with hope…where stadiums and real life meet...
  November 13th, 2025 15:22
• The Soaring Bird of Time (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas!
  November 13th, 2025 15:20
• \'Pumping Irony\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Love this, Kurt. Well done!
  November 13th, 2025 15:19
• 𝒮𝓁ℴ𝓌 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒴ℯ𝓉 ℐ 𝒯𝓇𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this one feels like someone standing in a doorway…half...
  November 13th, 2025 15:18
• Companionship (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this one blends humor, memory, and heartbreak so...
  November 13th, 2025 15:17
• unhinged (Arqios) Unhinged? Who? Me? 🤪 My friend, this feels like a scroll...
  November 13th, 2025 15:16
• Walking in the Way (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem Orchi...i really love the... What was that? Shh...
  November 13th, 2025 15:14
• Dust (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like memory weather…leaves scattering, voices...
  November 13th, 2025 15:11
• What death would say to me (NinjaGirl) Dark...and been there! I love the format too! It really conveys the...
  November 13th, 2025 15:10
• Cute (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this reads like a small confession…loneliness softened by...
  November 13th, 2025 08:21
• Your Tour De Force (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, both pieces cut clean…heartbreak in the first, unmasked arrogance...
  November 13th, 2025 08:16
• The Rose (Paul Bell) Paul, you move from gutter to garden in one steady sweep…street-tough...
  November 13th, 2025 08:15
• star black out (Arqios) Arqios, the way you link stars, cells, memory, and music creates a whole...
  November 12th, 2025 21:10
• 𝔇𝔬𝔢𝔰 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔱𝔯𝔶 ℌ𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔇𝔢𝔭𝔱𝔥? 𝔇𝔢𝔭𝔱𝔥 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this carries your signature...fluttery, bold, a little risky, a...
  November 12th, 2025 21:09
• The Smell of Absence  (Rebellion_in_sanity) Reading this, I felt that familiar ache…how loss can make silence louder...
  November 12th, 2025 21:08
• Deep slumber (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a gorgeous descent into the subconscious...melting time,...
  November 12th, 2025 21:06
• Message Received (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is honest and quietly powerful…the kind of true story that...
  November 12th, 2025 18:03
• Diamonds Delights (Orchidee) Orchi, this is luminous work—diamonds, grace, and devotion woven...
  November 12th, 2025 17:29
• PROBLEM SOLVED (Michael Edwards) Michael, this one’s sharp and wickedly funny—political satire done...
  November 12th, 2025 17:27
• Truth? (Jerry Reynolds) A beautiful poem on its own, and a wonderful reflection on another poem!...
  November 11th, 2025 09:38
• Chad on his soapbox (Arqios) Rik, this one preaches without sermonizing...clever, convicting, and...
  November 11th, 2025 09:37
• Behind The Wire (Paul Bell) Paul, this one chills me…raw, solemn, and stripped of sentiment....
  November 11th, 2025 09:36
• Remembrance At Eleven (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows with reverence and melody...Scripture, memory, and music...
  November 11th, 2025 09:34
• Spinoza\'s god (Sorenbarrett) Reading this, Soren, I felt that deep calm of dissolving into something...
  November 11th, 2025 09:32
• 𝒥ℴ𝓊𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓁𝒾𝓃ℊ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you’ve written something deeply human here...a diary that slips...
  November 11th, 2025 09:31
• Just no Justice (NinjaGirl) Reading this, 🥷, I felt the ache of legacy…the fear that what we...
  November 10th, 2025 21:17
• A Few Days (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this reads like a love note to language…succinct, sensual, and...
  November 10th, 2025 21:16
• End of Day One (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) GenXer, this piece shines with simple humanity. You gave us burnt...
  November 10th, 2025 21:14
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) Excellent write, Jerry! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 10th, 2025 21:12
• eleventh hour remembrance (Arqios) Arqios, this is beautifully reverent…you’ve woven faith and...
  November 10th, 2025 21:10
• Glow (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is the art within the art…a poem about the breath that keeps...
  November 10th, 2025 21:09
• A Sober Life Is A Peaceful Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Glad to hear sober, myself! Good one, friend!
  November 10th, 2025 21:07
• Omniscient Omnipresence (Orchidee) Great write, Orchi! By the way, P is screaming that the omniscient...
  November 10th, 2025 21:05
• A Nature Poem… (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you turned serenity into satire in four short stanzas. Beauty,...
  November 9th, 2025 22:54
• ℋℯ𝓇ℯ\'𝓈 𝒴ℴ𝓊𝓇 ℰ𝓋ℯ𝓇ℊ𝓇ℯℯ𝓃. (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is pure serenity...love entwined with earth, sky, and renewal....
  November 9th, 2025 22:51
• Lest We Should Ever Forget (Neville) Neville, this balances reverence and realism with care. The clouds, the...
  November 9th, 2025 22:50
• Old Soldier (Paul Bell) Paul, you wrote this with restraint that makes it devastating. No...
  November 9th, 2025 22:49
• farcical bloomery (Arqios) Arqios, this is delight and depth all at once…nature laughing through...
  November 9th, 2025 22:45
• Boogie (Sorenbarrett) Heck yes!!! I concur! I love to dance...it\'s so damn defiant and...
  November 9th, 2025 22:42
• Little Mo (Paul Bell) Paul, this is brilliant…biblical parody at its sweetest and strangest....
  November 8th, 2025 13:08
• after-image (Arqios) Arqios, you framed loneliness through light, glass, and movement until the...
  November 8th, 2025 13:07
• It\'s no poem...just telling that It\'s good to be back on the platform again! (Nayak) Welcome back!
  November 8th, 2025 13:06
• Wasn\'t then but guilty now (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is dark alchemy...love, hunger, and guilt all mirrored in rose...
  November 8th, 2025 13:05
• It\'s Getting Dark (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful monorhyme my friend. And indeed, as in the pic, the brightness...
  November 8th, 2025 13:04
• Grace Given (Orchidee) Orchi, your hymnic heart always shines through. Reading this, I could...
  November 8th, 2025 13:01
• 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this reads like a vow whispered to the self...honest, stripped down,...
  November 8th, 2025 08:50
• Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds) Jerry, short but sharp, alchemy and warning in six lines. The mix of hope...
  November 7th, 2025 08:46
• England\'s Falling (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It ain\'t just England! Spot on! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 7th, 2025 08:45
• ......... 𝒮ℴ 𝒾𝓉 𝒾𝓈......... 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒲ℯ𝒷𝓈𝒾𝓉ℯ ℛ𝓊𝓃𝓈 ℐ𝓃𝓉ℴ 𝒜𝓃 ℰ𝓇𝓇ℴ𝓇 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this made me smile…you turned technical chaos into art. Even your...
  November 7th, 2025 08:44
• a moment turning (Arqios) Rik, this unfolds with such grace and grief…every line a slow step down...
  November 7th, 2025 08:43
• I\'m Listening (Paul Bell) Paul, this is classic you...deadpan, escalating, and wickedly funny. From...
  November 7th, 2025 08:42
• Comforting Cheer (Orchidee) P says to St. F, this sounds nothing like my theme song, see? I just...
  November 7th, 2025 08:41
• Awakening (Sorenbarrett) Wow. I get this and this certainly is speaking to me right now, my friend....
  November 7th, 2025 08:39
• 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 𝒮𝓉ℴ𝓇𝓎 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Reading this, Kiki, I felt the ache of needing to keep moving just to stay...
  November 6th, 2025 22:06
• 1 View (NinjaGirl) If you don\'t love and advocate for yourself, who will! Also, I have...
  November 6th, 2025 22:04
• Walking Into Yesterday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nicely done, Kurt! I can relate, for sure! Well done!...
  November 6th, 2025 09:55
• Elevations and Invocations (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, welcome back, my friend…what a return. This piece soars with...
  November 6th, 2025 09:54
• Getting to know each other (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Taliah\'s back! My friend, this reads wonderfully—warm, genuine, and...
  November 6th, 2025 09:51
• pears in a moonlit orchard (Arqios) It’s classical, textured, and hauntingly calm. You’ve written a living...
  November 6th, 2025 09:50
• Protocol (Paul Bell) My friend, this is comedy gold…deadpan and perfectly timed. The circular...
  November 6th, 2025 09:48
• THE NOT SO SAD STORY OF THE RABBITS (Michael Edwards) And how! For sure! This is another great one, Michael!
  November 6th, 2025 09:47
• Bright Blessings (Orchidee) Beautiful hymn-poem my friend. I\'d put on some sunscreen, but turns out...
  November 6th, 2025 09:45
• Once (Sorenbarrett) It’s irreverent, philosophical, and a little unhinged....the holy...
  November 6th, 2025 09:43
• The Best Quality One Can Possess (Keyara S Trotman) A digital confessional wrapped in aesthetic armor…fun, fierce, and...
  November 6th, 2025 09:40
• in the end (Arqios) It’s spare, honest, and unflinching…a declaration without noise. The...
  November 6th, 2025 09:08
• Christ Crowned (Orchidee) Good write, Orchi. Popeye just said that he had wondered where his...
  November 5th, 2025 16:08
• The shoulders of giants (Georgia Watson) The whole piece glows with elegy and warning...nature, memory, and loss...
  November 4th, 2025 17:43
• Keys To The Kingdom (Kurt Philip Behm) It’s stark, hopeful, and honest. The rhythm of confession meets the...
  November 4th, 2025 15:41
• I Keep Listening (Applecherry) I know that feeling of not turning it off…of listening just to feel...
  November 4th, 2025 15:37
• Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell) The whole thing is a beautiful wreck...dark wit, loss, and release...
  November 4th, 2025 15:34
• the promise of morning (Arqios) The imagery breathes…each line a slow inhale of grace. “Both ache and...
  November 4th, 2025 15:31
• Be as (Sorenbarrett) “Transparent, invisible, it wets but leaves no stain”...what an...
  November 4th, 2025 15:25
• Inclusive Invitation (Orchidee) O most famous poet, No Li. I call to you from the great beyond the...
  November 4th, 2025 15:21
• Chaotic Classics (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The flows well and would make an excellent spoken word or slam poem! I...
  November 4th, 2025 15:16
• She Stared Back (NinjaGirl) My friend 🥷…this one creeps up quiet and cold. The stillness between...
  November 4th, 2025 15:13
• If the bugs (Georgia Watson) Equal parts unsettling and sublime, this turns death into devotion’s...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:33
• Monday, Monday (Kurt Philip Behm) Three poems, one echoing spirit. Each reads like a small prayer whispered...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:32
• Taliah (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, as someone who’s witnessed the beauty and exhaustion of...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:28
• the masked \'reader\' (Arqios) Arqios, “Make me hear the sound of grinding steel”...that line rings...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:25
• Sing (Victor Bolshov) Victor, I could feel every clash and tremor in this. The refrain binds it...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:04
• Access to an Advocate (Orchidee) Love it Orchi! What does Popeye’s advocate advocate for? Don’t answer...
  November 3rd, 2025 13:30
• Thief, priest and engineer (Sorenbarrett) This poem hums with gallows humor and precision craftsmanship. A parable,...
  November 3rd, 2025 13:27
• Put It Back (Bella Shepard) My friend, this speaks to me deeply. Letting go isn’t...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:29
• Freedom Awaits (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That closing line…“the brave and the strong”…lands with quiet...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:27
• I love you (2781) This feels tender and timeless…like a love note caught between...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:24
• trickster in fur (Arqios) Rik, this piece is pure charisma wrapped in fur…a satire, a portrait,...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:23
• 𝒲ℴ𝓇𝓇𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is elegant, raw, and celestial. The fonts and flow make it...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:20
• They came (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this piece walks the line between realism and nightmare so...
  November 2nd, 2025 09:01
• The Unseen (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) And there are MANY OF THEM out there! Well done, Shawn!...
  November 2nd, 2025 08:15
• An Extraordinary Journey (Teddy.15) And what a beautiful discovery that is, dearest Teddy! Glad you did and...
  November 1st, 2025 20:14
• Burnt Green Onions (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this poem burns with righteous precision…a mirror held to envy...
  November 1st, 2025 20:11
• Judgement (2781) My friend, I’ve wrestled with those same questions of justice and...
  November 1st, 2025 20:10
• should paths recross (Arqios) Arqios, this piece rests at the crossroads of longing and acceptance. You...
  November 1st, 2025 06:03
• A Walk Into Town (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Is that the pic? I want to walk there! LOL! Loved the poem, my friend!...
  November 1st, 2025 06:01
• Empty (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the hollow log becomes a living metaphor for us all...what time,...
  November 1st, 2025 05:59
• Listened to What An Awesome God (Keyara S Trotman) Know the song well and love it. My friend, I love how you fuse sacred awe...
  November 1st, 2025 05:58
• Autumn leaves (NafisaSB) My friend, this is an elegant hymn to transience...each verse gently...
  November 1st, 2025 05:56
• 𝕼𝔲𝔢𝔢𝔫 𝔅𝔢𝔢\'𝔰 𝔖𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, Queen Bee’s Sting is pure ritual glam...poison and perfume in...
  October 31st, 2025 20:16
• Let Me Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) LET ME WRITE. A-friggin\'-men! Man, I cannot tell you how much I needed to...
  October 31st, 2025 20:11