Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Social Conditioning (Demar Desu) Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short...
  May 26th, 2025 08:51
• Redemption in deception (Sorenbarrett) Indeed. Nothing...and I mean nothing...is BLACK & WHITE. That\'s just faux...
  May 26th, 2025 08:48
• Wise Man Say (13). (Poetic Licence) Another excellent Sunday offering of wisdom! Love that last stanza tons!...
  May 26th, 2025 08:47
• con un beso (with a kiss) (Arqios) It did indeed! Understood the Spanish. ¡Mucho Gracias, mi amigo! Well...
  May 25th, 2025 20:25
• Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon (Salvia.S) Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\"...
  May 18th, 2025 09:40
• In The Name of a Rose (Teddy.15) Wonderful Senryu, Teddy. The beauty and allure of a rose in 17 syllables...
  May 17th, 2025 05:53
• Preservation (Teddy.15) Beautiful, Teddy. Spot on. Wonderful poetic reflection. 🌹👏
  May 17th, 2025 05:52
• to be mixed in the USA! (Demar Desu) Truth! Sad, but very true. Well done, Demar! 🌹👏
  May 16th, 2025 20:53
• What a Fucking Mess (Thomas W Case) Amen. Looking for that pool! Wonderful write, my friend. Powerful!
  May 16th, 2025 20:37
• Inkwells (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth. Powerful, my friend! 🌹👏
  May 16th, 2025 20:36
• 1 day left to live (Demar Desu) Sleeping! 💤 They say it is the best way to go! 🤣 Then again, no one...
  May 16th, 2025 20:35
• A check up! (Orchidee) General Kenobi, calling General Kenobi, a couple of guinea pigs are...
  May 16th, 2025 20:33
• love (Dimpy) Very thought-provoking. Self-care is extremely important. If you can\'t...
  May 16th, 2025 20:31
• Soccer Rains (Damaso) Great metaphor! A most powerful write, my friend! 🌹👏
  May 16th, 2025 20:29
• Unbreakable Spirit (Tony36) Amen! Hear hear! Right there with you! Rock on, my friend! 🌹👏
  May 16th, 2025 20:28
• sleep on it (Arqios) Indeed. The sun does always return, though it can feel like it won\'t. You...
  May 16th, 2025 20:27
• Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett) Yes. Many who post don\'t end up reading, which is sad to me. Reading is...
  May 16th, 2025 20:23
• The Return of Mrs Muse (Tom Dylan) I believe her too! Keep rockin\' your writes! Love this one, my friend!...
  May 16th, 2025 20:20
• Mess age (Victor Bolshov) Just on the word play alone, this gets a fave. Yes, I still send postcards...
  May 16th, 2025 20:18
• Would You Call Me God?. (Poetic Licence) Actually, I would call you human! 🤣 Ever notice gods turn out to be as...
  May 16th, 2025 20:05
• May 15th (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Sounds like it was a great show! Rock on!
  May 16th, 2025 20:01
• Too Little — Too Late (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done. I totally related with this, Kurt. Very relatable indeed....
  May 16th, 2025 20:00
• The Golden Trio (NafisaSB) Wise, positive advice, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  May 16th, 2025 19:58
• Relaxation (Mutley Ravishes) I love the word play. This poem carries much emotional weight and is...
  May 16th, 2025 19:57
• Look In The Mirror. (Poetic Licence) NO. Yes. Yes and No. Both/and, as well as neither, depending. My...
  May 15th, 2025 07:57
• Child Care (Doggerel Dave) Excellent write, my friend. It\'s been so long since my kids were in day...
  May 15th, 2025 07:55
• Not Sure I\'m Human! (Orchidee) Perhaps you are Jedi, Obi Wan? But that last full stanza made it sound...
  May 15th, 2025 06:01
• Numb (MatPie) Powerful and sad. Well done, and welcome to MPS! 🌹👏
  May 14th, 2025 13:17
• Today I saw a tree fall (Demar Desu) A wonderful poem that is devastating both literally and metaphorically....
  May 14th, 2025 11:31
• Only the Heart Knows the Soul (Salvia.S) It is true. Only we can truly know what we\'ve been through. Advice may...
  May 14th, 2025 11:30
• The Foundling (Kurt Philip Behm) Well done, Kurt. Another powerful and thought-provoking write. 🌹👏
  May 14th, 2025 11:28
• The Great War? (Tony Grannell) Never had family, to my knowledge, in WWI. My grandfather served in WWII...
  May 14th, 2025 11:27
• to be real (Arqios) Ah, my friend…what you’ve done here is more than revisit a childhood...
  May 14th, 2025 11:25
• Give and take (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful poem, everything in life is a give and take. Sometimes there is...
  May 14th, 2025 11:19
• Community Guidelines Violation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Yeah. Supposed \"free speech\" ain\'t so free in a world order that wants...
  May 14th, 2025 11:17
• In My Heart I Cry. (Poetic Licence) My heart has been broken so many times, I think I have lost some the...
  May 14th, 2025 11:15
• Could Be (Mutley Ravishes) Hmmm. Yes. Usually through the guise of division. Satan has that divide...
  May 14th, 2025 11:13
• Enamored by the Dormouse (Thomas W Case) Powerful write, Thomas. Another fave. 🌹👏
  May 14th, 2025 11:11
• Benito (Damaso) Food for thought, my friend. Excellent poem. 🌹👏
  May 14th, 2025 11:10
• The White Room (NinjaGirl) An instant fave. Wow! Clinical, psychological, and deeply liminal. This...
  May 14th, 2025 11:09
• Waste In The Fire (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent write, Kurt! 🌹👏
  May 14th, 2025 11:03
• Mors Vincit Omnia (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) 🤣 Murder most fowl indeed! LOL! Wonderful poem, hanleigh! Yeah, it is...
  May 14th, 2025 11:02
• What Happens? (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Indeed. Trust and prayer are the keys that gets us and others to hope from...
  May 14th, 2025 11:00
• Tycoon to be (Demar Desu) Preach it brother! Another reality check from the King of Concise! Bravo!...
  May 14th, 2025 10:58
• The Lone Apostle (Tony Grannell) Well done, Tony. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy reading your work....
  May 14th, 2025 10:57
• Let peace ring (Tony36) I can hear it my friend. Loved the form and the message. This gets a bong...
  May 14th, 2025 10:55
• What (Sorenbarrett) The darkness shines in this poem my friend. Having slept in the woods many...
  May 14th, 2025 10:53
• soul of time (Arqios) Excellent, my friend. Love the word play, how they connect and progress...
  May 14th, 2025 10:50
• Death of an alien (Victor Bolshov) Friend, I have lived my entire life an alien in one form or another....
  May 14th, 2025 10:48
• Feathered Wings (Teddy.15) Great metaphor and a lovely poem that gives hope, my friend. Well done,...
  May 14th, 2025 10:47
• How Does it Feel?. (Poetic Licence) Wow! A powerful poem, Natiella! You and I clearly had the same way of...
  May 14th, 2025 10:46
• The Blaskets (Tony Grannell) There is a pattern here. You write and publish, I read, I am amazed, I...
  May 12th, 2025 08:50
• Shorty (Sorenbarrett) Quite the goddess, Aphrodite. This is a powerful poem that, as I read it,...
  May 12th, 2025 08:48
• Look In The Eye. (Poetic Licence) Powerful poem, my friend. Brutal and powerful...and quite the metaphor....
  May 12th, 2025 08:44
• Politically Speaking (Demar Desu) Hear hear! Me too. LOL!
  May 12th, 2025 08:41
• velveteen quietude (Arqios) This title reminded me of the \"Velveteen Rabbit.\" Used to love that...
  May 12th, 2025 08:40
• Surrender (Mutley Ravishes) Powerful metaphor. Divinely true. Well done! Bravo! 🌹👏
  May 12th, 2025 08:39
• Ah, Yes, That Was Precisely the Question (Cheeky Missy) Failure is the roadway to success. Cliché, absolutely. But, sometimes...
  May 11th, 2025 07:49
• A Craze, Not a Dream (Salvia.S) Salvia, dearest poet and friend, have I told you how brilliant you are? I...
  May 11th, 2025 07:46
• My best friend (Demar Desu) The only way marriage truly works. Rock on, bro! You\'re a lucky man....
  May 11th, 2025 07:44
• Weeds grow (Sorenbarrett) This, my friend, is both true literally and a brilliant metaphor for the...
  May 11th, 2025 07:42
• momEntary deEp (Arqios) Wonderful poem, my friend. That last stanza reminded me last night staring...
  May 11th, 2025 07:41
• Wise Man Say (11). (Poetic Licence) That last one is a mystery! 🤣 Round 11 rocked, my friend. Can\'t wait...
  May 11th, 2025 07:39
• First Chord (Kurt Philip Behm) Powerful, Kurt. Well done! 🌹👏
  May 10th, 2025 22:09
• Whiskey Hearts (Tony Grannell) Honest. This poem is a journey through life and, as always Tony, you\'ve...
  May 10th, 2025 15:39
• Treasure (Damaso) Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power....
  May 10th, 2025 15:37
• Lady Iris (Teddy.15) Just as an Iris should, indeed. As beautiful as the flower itself....
  May 10th, 2025 15:35
• Forks/Spoons/Knives (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) I agree with both Soren and Tobani (Poetic License) below. This is a...
  May 10th, 2025 15:34
• The Man (Tony36) It makes them feel more caveman, at least, but then again, that is really...
  May 10th, 2025 15:32
• I am afraid (Demar Desu) This is confessional and professional at the same time. Fragmented, but...
  May 10th, 2025 15:29
• Before we knew better (Sorenbarrett) Loved this. Brought me back to those innocent days and pondering exactly...
  May 10th, 2025 15:27
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (4) (Poetic Licence) Yay! The hairy...erm...Harry and Mary Saga continues! This made my...
  May 10th, 2025 15:23
• Heart On My Sleeve (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Confessional, honest, and true. A fave from me on all those accounts! Well...
  May 10th, 2025 15:21
• Of Friends and Porter (Tony Grannell) Wow! This is what I call a Pint o\' Poetry, my friend! Damn, this went...
  May 9th, 2025 12:29
• The End To Its Shouting (Kurt Philip Behm) Another brilliant poem, Kurt. I love this one. Well done, dear friend!...
  May 9th, 2025 12:05
• 0605025 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Bruce Lee was an immigrant who came over in a boat who benefited from...
  May 9th, 2025 12:00
• death to the past (NinjaGirl) 🌟💪🥷 This poem. Wow! Brilliant ninja poetry, my friend. The form...
  May 9th, 2025 11:42
• I want to be friends (Tony36) Meaningful, Tony. Well done! 🌹👏
  May 9th, 2025 09:30
• my taxes came! (Demar Desu) In that order. Though for some, it\'s death, money, taxes. Aka, you die...
  May 9th, 2025 09:28
• When the east wind cries (Sorenbarrett) I used to love learning about the Aztecs and remember Tezcaltipoca. A...
  May 9th, 2025 09:23
• A Caring Smile. (Poetic Licence) As true as it is short and simple. A powerful poem with a much needed...
  May 9th, 2025 09:21
• Because nothing hurts more than a \"Betrayal\" (Spring Sugar Bunny) And how! 💯 Indeed, I wrote about betrayal yesterday. Excellent poem! A...
  May 9th, 2025 09:20
• Living life (NafisaSB) Exactly. Live it up! Love the message, my friend. Excellent job! 🌹👏
  May 9th, 2025 09:19
• Attache\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed. Profound. Less profound, but neat: There is a hotel in Wildwood,...
  May 8th, 2025 16:17
• Try Telling Another Poet (Cheeky Missy) Love these sonnets, Missy! That last sonnet sounds like you were having a...
  May 8th, 2025 16:15
• Buttercups and daisies (Caring dove) Love both buttercups and daisies and this works well as a metaphor. What a...
  May 8th, 2025 16:12
• Dreaded Chores (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This made me laugh, my friend! That, Orchi, I tell you. 🤣 Thank you for...
  May 8th, 2025 16:11
• Designed To Individual Requirements (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) What do they say, piracy is not a victimless crime? Argh! Sadly, nor is...
  May 8th, 2025 16:05
• How to Get A Thousand Poet\'s to Think? (Teddy.15) Love the questions, Teddy. We all have our beliefs, but what good is a...
  May 8th, 2025 16:02
• Too many (Sorenbarrett) This is powerful and really gets one to think about the state of the...
  May 8th, 2025 15:58
• VE Day thoughts (Orchidee) Speak with truth, Orchi! Amen on this one! An instant fave! This poem...
  May 8th, 2025 15:54
• Pound In Your Hand. (Poetic Licence) Well written. I love how you put the reader into the shoes of the...
  May 8th, 2025 15:47
• the intoxication of love without sex - zero (Dimpy) Truth. It\'s a whole package. Sex without love. We all see where that gets...
  May 8th, 2025 15:45
• The Relentless Race – A Symphony of Life and Motion (Mottakeenur Rehman) Wow! Powerful poetry. This not only has a great message, it feels like a...
  May 7th, 2025 22:00
• Coco (Damaso) Wow! Haunting meet beautiful. A profoundly powerful poem, my friend!...
  May 7th, 2025 21:24
• Neither Presumption Nor Despair (Kurt Philip Behm) A-friggin-men. And wow! 8th grade! Bravo! 🌹👏
  May 7th, 2025 21:22
• Spring Cleaning! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Very true. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹👏
  May 7th, 2025 14:02
• Guess I Never Knew (Cheeky Missy) Never would I EVER tell you that. Would not want to stifle the fun you...
  May 7th, 2025 11:19
• Be who you are (Tony36) Tony, I really wish we had grown up and hung out together. I needed your...
  May 7th, 2025 11:16
• My Soul Belongs To God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Dang, your ads over the UK turn out to be...erm...saucier...than even some...
  May 7th, 2025 11:08