Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Hinton, Pt. II (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) I feel the pain, the longing, the grief in this poem. I understand it...
  April 28th, 2025 14:57
• Sleep on (Sorenbarrett) Been there, and get it entirely! The problem is when the sleeping on halts...
  April 28th, 2025 14:51
• wedding bells... (Dimpy) What a wonderful poem filled with anticipation and hope for a life filled...
  April 28th, 2025 14:47
• Goodbye Little Friend (Orchidee) All Guinea Pigs go to heaven. I have it from good authority! ☝️...
  April 28th, 2025 14:44
• Raven (Mourgana of the Fey) Seriously beautiful, Rian. You have a way of weaving together scene and...
  April 28th, 2025 14:40
• Just Beats (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hear hear! This is my reality! Love me my Beats! 🎧🤣 Well done, my...
  April 28th, 2025 14:37
• roaring tides (Arqios) Wow, this poem is not only brilliant, but I learned something new! The...
  April 28th, 2025 09:31
• All the Difference (Thomas W Case) A moth that escapes the flame. Now that is hope, flying fierce! Well done,...
  April 28th, 2025 09:29
• Confessions of a Bodybuilder (Mutley Ravishes) Ain\'t it the truth, though? Like monster trucks, I don\'t quite get it....
  April 28th, 2025 09:28
• I Couldn\'t Do It (Damaso) Wow. Powerful poem with a powerful note. \"I crawl and crash into...
  April 28th, 2025 09:26
• Daily route (Victor Bolshov) Well done. Welcome to MPS, my friend! 🌹👏
  April 28th, 2025 09:24
• i wish i always knew (Tristan Robert Lange) Hey Orchi, I turned the lights on, mate! 😏
  April 28th, 2025 08:44
• How We Are Remembered (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Yessss! Faved because, aside from being well written, it is much needed....
  April 27th, 2025 17:40
• An unexceptional turning point in our marriage... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) This is quite the poem. Enjoyed it immensely. A serious write, but written...
  April 27th, 2025 17:38
• No Beauty Here (Tony Grannell) Wow! This is a powerful poetic expression that immediately brought to mind...
  April 27th, 2025 13:14
• Of Starbucks, Messes, and Songs from Childhood... (Cheeky Missy) It was fun getting to chill with you and your Palm Sunday and Holy Monday...
  April 27th, 2025 13:05
• Faith in Fate (Salvia.S) I am tracking right with you, Salvia. Believe and trust. It is the way....
  April 27th, 2025 07:51
• America should annex Canada (Demar Desu) The title brings one in...and let\'s them stew on the reality of what is...
  April 27th, 2025 07:49
• . (Sorenbarrett) Well, if the note doesn\'t count (and it doesn\'t in my book), this IS the...
  April 27th, 2025 07:48
• M Very Own Greek Philosophy  (Teddy.15) This poem immediately gave me the image of Kintsugi. A wonderful metaphor...
  April 27th, 2025 07:41
• hymn of the exiles (Arqios) Hell yes! A hymn I know well and sing loudly, my friend. Well done on...
  April 27th, 2025 07:38
• Growth (NafisaSB) Very wise and true, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 27th, 2025 07:36
• Unravel me (Muse of Calliope) A wonderful read filled with animals galore. This fine piece, my friend,...
  April 26th, 2025 20:07
• Autumn\'s Sonneteer (Tony Grannell) Wow! Masterfully written. Classically lyrical and the seasonal progression...
  April 26th, 2025 20:00
• financially stable is the goal (Demar Desu) I am in the same dream zone as you, my friend. You have my vote!...
  April 26th, 2025 19:56
• \'All You Can Eat\' (Kurt Philip Behm) My kind of meal...a poetic mystery, to be revealed throughout the courses....
  April 26th, 2025 12:40
• Shades of Cool (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) And songs are a great way to block writer\'s block. Whatever inspires,...
  April 26th, 2025 12:39
• Good taste (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful poem. Loved the humor in it. The shark gets a meal and a floss....
  April 26th, 2025 12:37
• Tell me (Isa kemmy) I feel the pain and frustration in this, my friend. If he says those...
  April 26th, 2025 12:33
• A Grand Photo of Matrimony (Teddy.15) Well, the muse has spoken to you and hit home for me my friend! This must...
  April 26th, 2025 12:31
• printed word (Arqios) When I started writing, I wrote in long hand. Pencil (usually) and a...
  April 26th, 2025 12:29
• Through the Noise, My Love I won’t let go! (Accross_world_with_u) Great write, creatively presented. God bless you and your boys, my friend!...
  April 26th, 2025 12:25
• No Deal (Kurt Philip Behm) Preach it bro! Wonderful! True! Faved! 🌹👏✊
  April 25th, 2025 18:43
• Read the Disclaimer if You\'re Balking (Cheeky Missy) My mouth\'s sealed on the last one! Scout\'s, well, not a scout...so...
  April 25th, 2025 18:41
• Happy Trails (Thomas W Case) Boom...here comes the Boom! This is a 1-2 KO poem, bro! I love it! Well...
  April 25th, 2025 18:33
• Following In Faith (Orchidee) Hmmm. Been sensing 21 at the root, shall we say, of your more recent,...
  April 25th, 2025 14:07
• The Song of the Unicorn (Muse of Calliope) Oh, how neat! A wonderful exercise leading to a most excellent poem....
  April 25th, 2025 14:05
• Runaways (Tony Grannell) This has such a wonderfully classic feel and it speaks profound truth....
  April 25th, 2025 08:22
• The Cry (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Great song. I actually read the poem to it and could almost imagine you...
  April 25th, 2025 08:19
• happiness (Dimpy) Indeed, the bee took some happiness and pollinated the other \"homes\"...
  April 25th, 2025 08:15
• Within a hair (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful poem that, as I read it, is sending the message that each of...
  April 25th, 2025 08:12
• Final Era (Accross_world_with_u) We\'re here, aren\'t we? A truthful poem my friend. Who knows when the...
  April 25th, 2025 08:07
• Ypres, lest we forget (Arqios) A beautiful tribute. Our \"Memorial Day\" is coming up at the end of May....
  April 25th, 2025 08:02
• My Mother Is A Fighter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful poem paying tribute to your mom. My mom is a fighter too and...
  April 25th, 2025 07:56
• Billionaire Goes Rogue (Mutley Ravishes) If ever being attacked by ladies, it is duly noted that living in a shack...
  April 24th, 2025 21:22
• Peter\'s Professing (Orchidee) Peter once asked how many times one should be forgiven, guessing seven...
  April 24th, 2025 17:10
• Soul (Tony36) Thank God for art. Well done, Tony. This is a true one, for sure! 🌹👏
  April 24th, 2025 17:05
• A Calling Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) Too true. Well done, Kurt. 🌹👏
  April 24th, 2025 17:04
• Never Again (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Wow! Powerful. I can feel the longing and the pain for a person who was...
  April 24th, 2025 09:18
• Hard Words (Sorenbarrett) Words have the power to bring life or destroy it. A powerful metaphor that...
  April 24th, 2025 09:08
• once again (Arqios) A powerful write. Writing has been a recorder and preserver of my soul, so...
  April 24th, 2025 09:06
• Pope 88 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Not that I am Roman Catholic, but Pope Francis was quite the unique pope,...
  April 24th, 2025 09:03
• Blues Through the Week (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas. A week in the life...love the progression of...
  April 24th, 2025 08:57
• If I Could. (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Wise words both in the poem and it\'s note. Wonderful job, my friend. So...
  April 23rd, 2025 20:53
• Deep Inside (Kurt Philip Behm) Deep inside the Satanic winds, indeed. This poem has teeth and speaks...
  April 23rd, 2025 20:49
• Lakeside Life (Orchidee) Been reflecting a bit on Jesus\' beach breakfast with his disciples. Makes...
  April 23rd, 2025 20:37
• Hallelujah Variations (Muse of Calliope) I love the original. Your sings well with tune and is very effective with...
  April 23rd, 2025 11:34
• My Heart (Tony36) Wonderful poem, Tony. Very authentic and sincere. Well done! 👏🌹
  April 23rd, 2025 07:30
• The Abortion (Tony Grannell) Wow. This is powerful—truly powerful. The graphic imagery isn’t...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:29
• Pen and Cob (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Love this, Hanleigh. So creative, and I really admire how you\'re...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:24
• a miscreant yearns (Arqios) Well done, dear poet and friend! This reads like a quiet revelation—the...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:17
• What\'s in a name (Sorenbarrett) Wow! This poem is both playful and rich with philosophical...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:14
• The Headphones And Red Woolly Hat (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love this, and yes, beats both feed music to the soul and provide cushiony...
  April 23rd, 2025 07:06
• Goodbye, Pope Francis! (Azeezah Khadeejah Awal) Beautiful tribute to a wonderful soul and Pope. Well done, my friend....
  April 23rd, 2025 07:03
• Possession (Mutley Ravishes) Brilliantly crafted. The metaphor, crystal clear in so very few words! The...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:19
• Listening to birds (Caring dove) Singing birds are a blessing, no matter when. A crowing rooster might be a...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:17
• Naked Ashes (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! Now that\'s quite the dream...and an awesome poem! It comes off as an...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:13
• Seen Or Not Seen (Orchidee) Ah, Thomas. He gets such a bad rap. All the disciples doubted until they...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:11
• New Moon (Damaso) Wow! A traumatizing moment that would endure in one\'s psyche for life. A...
  April 22nd, 2025 20:06
• Express Yourself (Tony36) Very nicely done, Tony! Indeed! Great message! 👏🌹
  April 22nd, 2025 08:11
• Love Story (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Au contraire, mon ami, this is quite powerful! Seriously, sometimes...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:09
• middle of the night (Dimpy) Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: \"the stars...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:07
• Overdone romance sonnet (Sorenbarrett) And how. The truth, Shakespearean style. Wonderful sonnet, friend. And I...
  April 22nd, 2025 08:02
• ableism is the foundation for fascism (Demar Desu) Isms suck and racism really sucks. For sure dumb. Truth, brother! 🌹👏
  April 22nd, 2025 08:01
• Letter to a narcissist (Mourgana of the Fey) I truly love your imagery, Rian! It is second to none, really....
  April 22nd, 2025 07:59
• Sipping On Lemonade In Wigan Wetherspoons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Banging indeed. Loved this, my friend! 👏🌹
  April 22nd, 2025 07:57
• EAT CAKE (Michael Edwards) Hear hear! Me too, Michael! Eat on! LOL! 😂 Well done on this. Love it!...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:54
• cavernous (Arqios) Wonderful shape poem, the shape cleverly mirroring its content. Profoundly...
  April 22nd, 2025 07:52
• Canned Meat is a Bad Idea (Thomas W Case) Wow! Dark, stark, and image-rich. This one\'s effect travels down to the...
  April 21st, 2025 14:13
• Whispering Still (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow! Love the pastoral and season imagery to show change, progress and...
  April 21st, 2025 14:11
• Commission Call (Orchidee) Excellent, my friend. A wonderful hymn-poem telling of the Easter account!...
  April 21st, 2025 14:08
• Will o\' the Wisp (Muse of Calliope) Too late indeed. Wonderful write. And in relation to your poem and your...
  April 21st, 2025 13:38
• The Lovecats (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) That last stanza is the chef\'s kiss. Wow, powerful expression of...
  April 21st, 2025 13:35
• In the garge (Tony36) I was a man once in that man\'s garage, singing, screaming, and carrying...
  April 21st, 2025 13:32
• Reflections (Teardrop) Oooh, this is dark, haunting, alluring and eloquent like a great Gothic...
  April 21st, 2025 13:30
• Foggy morning (Sorenbarrett) This one brings you there in terms of the imagery, and it is a wonderful...
  April 21st, 2025 13:24
• Grateful For it All (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Amen, sister! Happy Easter! ✝️🌅
  April 20th, 2025 18:29
• For things not done (2781) Beautiful, my friend. Happy Easter! ✝️🌅
  April 20th, 2025 18:28
• Emmaus Enlightening (Orchidee) I was thinking about taking a long walk this morning. I was going to walk...
  April 20th, 2025 18:27
• No Candy This Year (Kurt Philip Behm) This brought up many memories of Easter egg hunts as a child, and also...
  April 20th, 2025 18:20
• Yes (Damaso) Deep, dark, desperate, raw and most importantly real. This, my friend, is...
  April 20th, 2025 18:17
• The Poems (Thomas W Case) Bukowski but also Poe. This confronts the grit and grime in existence as...
  April 20th, 2025 18:02
• Gravel Road (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Wow! This reads like a noir thriller unfolding, raw, dark, gritty, real!...
  April 20th, 2025 17:51
• Hold out your hamd (Tony36) Amen, my brother. What a friend we have, indeed. Happy Easter, Tony!...
  April 20th, 2025 17:45
• Death (Teardrop) Oh, dear friend, I am so sorry to hear that! What a terrible tragedy, and...
  April 20th, 2025 15:55
• Left Jab Right Hook (Mutley Ravishes) Love this. Aren’t we all my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
  April 20th, 2025 15:06
• Lies of romance (Sorenbarrett) Ah, intuition is a much needed ingredient, like rich, Belgian...
  April 20th, 2025 15:04
• Thank You (Poetic Licence) Oh no, my friend! What will I do without our ongoing interactions, reading...
  April 20th, 2025 07:58
• handbag (Dimpy) A powerful poem on trust and the consequences when it is lacking....
  April 20th, 2025 07:53
• see you there (Arqios) Excellent poem. Internal, cerebral cosmic beauty meets poetic eloquence. A...
  April 20th, 2025 07:49