Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- There is no perfect time to say goodbye so this will be my last poem… thank you to those who read and enjoy my work. I’m going to hone in on my trade skills now… poetry has helped me become the man I am today. Thank you God. Thank you God’s creations… I am nothing without you… (Demar Desu)
Demar, this genuinely saddens me. It has been an honor getting to know you...
August 28th, 2026 17:18 - Unspoken so loud (Poetic Dan)
Dan, this captures the pressure of everything carried internally but never...
August 27th, 2026 17:02 - Simulacrum (Lorenz)
Lorenz, I deeply relate to the tension between the self presented to the...
August 27th, 2026 17:02 - Debted Bliss (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, what a powerful portrayal of concealment as an accumulating...
August 27th, 2026 17:00 - This will offend you - sort of (Orchidee)
Orchi, the entire glugging crew is scandalized! Ol’ Tomas is especially...
August 27th, 2026 16:59 - American Executor: Grover Cleveland - Part 2 (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a fascinating portrait of principle colliding with...
August 27th, 2026 16:56 - YHWH (2781)
Valiantstar, this carries an earnest sense of spiritual discovery. I...
August 27th, 2026 16:54 - 99 names, ten thousand things, the whole damn enchilada.. (Demar Desu)
Demar, what a spiritually immense piece in such a small space. The playful...
August 27th, 2026 16:30 - cost of love (Arqios)
My friend, this hit me hard. The collision of childhood innocence and...
August 27th, 2026 16:29 - Magic (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, what a wonderfully strange journey. The beauty keeps drawing us...
August 27th, 2026 16:28 - TRAPPED IN TIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, what a haunting and atmospheric piece. The old structures remain,...
August 27th, 2026 16:27 - What if we could change this world today? (Delusions)
My friend, what a thoughtful piece. The desire to move humanity forward is...
August 27th, 2026 16:01 - Frenzy (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, what a powerful and relatable piece. I know that desperate...
August 27th, 2026 15:54 - I gave you all my best, and yet I still failed you. God, why? (Friendship)
My friend, this is a psalm of lament in its rawest form. The prayer...
August 27th, 2026 08:34 - The great divide (Micah Finchley)
Micah, this is fiercely devoted. The natural world becomes evidence that...
August 26th, 2026 16:11 - Soul Teacher (Syd)
Syd, this is one hell of a tribute to psychedelic wisdom. Science,...
August 26th, 2026 16:10 - Poetic galaxy (Lorenz)
Lorenz, this is a ferocious descent into the torment of creation....
August 26th, 2026 16:07 - The Dark Path (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this carries a relentless sense of entrapment. The movement from...
August 26th, 2026 16:06 - I had a thought (Orchidee)
My friend, I knew I should never have joined this investigation. Scooby...
August 26th, 2026 16:04 - -$225.57 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
Demar, I get this. The crisis remains painfully real, yet it does not...
August 26th, 2026 16:00 - The World Will Always Love Her (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a deeply moving tribute. You hold the dazzling public...
August 26th, 2026 15:58 - neo-priesthood (Arqios)
My friend, this is chillingly perceptive. Nothing is violently seized, yet...
August 26th, 2026 15:56 - Traitor (Sorenbarrett)
My friend, I often wonder where moral collapse truly begins. One decision...
August 26th, 2026 15:55 - PATRIOTISM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this hits with brutal clarity. Political power manufactures the...
August 26th, 2026 15:53 - A Black Cloud (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this carries a lot of grit. There’s weariness, suspicion, and...
August 26th, 2026 14:54 - For Dolly. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, what a touching tribute. The grief is present, but so is tremendous...
August 26th, 2026 14:53 - The Little Girl who learned to love Lightning. (David Wakeling)
Wow, David, I really enjoyed this one. Watching courage begin so young and...
August 26th, 2026 14:52 - Fiery clouds (Lorenz)
My friend, I know the longing to sever oneself from inherited darkness and...
August 25th, 2026 19:04 - Heaven\'s Refrain (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this speaks deeply to the purpose of creating. The work matters most...
August 25th, 2026 19:03 - One-third to go (Orchidee)
🤣 Orchi, this had me laughing! The Baters already filmed the festive...
August 25th, 2026 19:02 - ᴅɪꜱᴘᴏꜱᴀʙʟᴇ (ᴍᴏᴏɴ)
My friend, this is brutal. The escalating physical destruction makes the...
August 25th, 2026 19:01 - 5:56 in the Morning (Demar Desu)
Demar, this lands hard. That final question turns the entire struggle...
August 25th, 2026 19:00 - Calendars (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, this hit me hard. Time accelerates so quietly that the ordinary...
August 25th, 2026 18:58 - No pill but poetry (Poetic Dan)
Dan, this really spoke to me. Writing does not erase our wounds, but it...
August 25th, 2026 18:56 - durable measure (Arqios)
My friend, this reminds me of people who flourish without attention,...
August 25th, 2026 18:55 - American Executor: Benjamin Harrison (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a strong historical portrait. The recurring declaration...
August 25th, 2026 18:55 - STARSTRUCK / ESTRELLADO (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is beautifully hopeful. The cosmic imagery transforms human...
August 25th, 2026 18:54 - To Thee, My Heart. (Delusions)
My friend, this is beautifully romantic. The classical voice gives it the...
August 25th, 2026 18:53 - Closed door (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is quietly devastating. The hope of reunion slowly gives way...
August 25th, 2026 18:52 - OLD MEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this hit me hard. Every farewell among lifelong friends carries...
August 25th, 2026 18:51 - Life (2781)
My friend, this carries a quiet sadness. One brief encounter opens onto an...
August 25th, 2026 18:50 - Toast and Jam (Jabberwocky)
Jabberwocky, this is delightfully cheeky! The innocent rhythm makes the...
August 25th, 2026 18:48 - I can’t breathe (the actual words of Former Slaves). (David Wakeling)
David, this is devastating. The historical testimony makes the persistence...
August 25th, 2026 18:47 - If you know better do even more tremendously better (Demar Desu)
Demar, this gave me a smile! That playful opening leads into a gentle...
August 25th, 2026 18:46 - Trees (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this is wonderfully dark and brutally effective. That reversal...
August 25th, 2026 15:22 - Unto Each Life (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this carries a hard-earned wisdom. The pairing of opposites gives...
August 25th, 2026 15:21 - Did he fall or was he pushed? (Orchidee)
Orchi, this is a deeply moving remembrance. The uncertainty makes the loss...
August 25th, 2026 15:20 - American Executor: Grover Cleveland - Part 1 (Matthew R. Callies)
What a compelling historical portrait, Matthew. Cleveland’s stubborn...
August 24th, 2026 08:19 - NOCTURNAL HUNTER 🧛♂️ (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this is dark, sensual, and wonderfully dangerous. Desire becomes...
August 24th, 2026 08:17 - Two For One (Paul Bell)
What a hilarious double feature, Paul! The first punctures the authority...
August 24th, 2026 08:17 - terminal lights (Arqios)
What a powerful little piece, my friend. We awaken to existence already in...
August 24th, 2026 08:16 - You will be offended (Sorenbarrett)
What a relentless and cleverly constructed piece, Soren. The accumulated...
August 24th, 2026 08:08 - WHEN THE WAR IS OVER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this hit hard. You confront the invisible aftermath carried by...
August 24th, 2026 08:07 - If I have to ask. (Delusions)
My friend, this hit me deeply. Wanting someone to recognize your inner...
August 24th, 2026 08:06 - Antipsychotics For 18 Months (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
What a raw and honest piece, my friend. You capture the brutal...
August 24th, 2026 08:06 - What\'s it all about (Boot)
What a dark and powerful piece, my friend. You confront a society where...
August 24th, 2026 08:04 - The Soft Prayer (David Wakeling)
David, this is deeply moving and unsettling. Sacred language becomes a...
August 24th, 2026 08:02 - Was it something I did ? (Kevin Hulme)
Kevin, I was already laughing throughout this escalating disaster, but...
August 24th, 2026 07:58 - Feelings Die (Kurt Philip Behm)
What a powerful piece, Kurt. You locate damnation within separation,...
August 24th, 2026 07:55 - American Executor: Chester A. Arthur (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is an excellent portrait of an often-overlooked president....
August 23rd, 2026 13:03 - ᴄᴏʟʟᴇɢᴇ ᴋɪᴅ (ᴍᴏᴏɴ)
My friend, what a powerful and painfully honest piece. The repetition...
August 23rd, 2026 13:02 - I hold you in thought (Lorenz)
What an extraordinary piece, Lorenz. Love and absence dissolve into a...
August 23rd, 2026 13:01 - Dim wit (2781)
My friend, I feel personally attacked by this one! 🤣 A wonderfully...
August 23rd, 2026 13:00 - SLUT (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, this hit me hard. The rage, exhaustion, and humiliation of being...
August 23rd, 2026 12:58 - Gemini Rising (Arqios)
What a beautiful piece, my friend. You capture that sacred stillness...
August 23rd, 2026 12:57 - The Priest (Paul Bell)
Paul, this is wickedly funny. The narrator’s shameless rationalizing...
August 23rd, 2026 12:56 - Fire Water (Mutley Ravishes)
What a vivid little burst, my friend. The movement feels wild, yet the...
August 23rd, 2026 12:56 - it’s okay when they do it, but it’s a problem when I do it (Demar Desu)
Demar, what a compact and provocative piece. It exposes the selective...
August 23rd, 2026 12:55 - Barter (Jabberwocky)
My friend, this one has teeth! Sharp, clever, and painfully true about two...
August 23rd, 2026 12:54 - Invested (Thomas W Case)
What a moving piece, Thomas. The humor keeps it wonderfully grounded, but...
August 23rd, 2026 12:54 - Cracks of reality (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, what an eerie and powerful piece. It pulled me into a world where...
August 23rd, 2026 12:53 - I TELL MYSELF (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Such a haunting write, Norman. Denial offers no real refuge here; absence...
August 23rd, 2026 12:51 - Some of us (Poetic Dan)
Such a warm and heartfelt piece, Poetic Dan. A sibling’s faithful...
August 23rd, 2026 12:50 - The search for tomorrow (Orchidee)
This cracked me up, Orchi. Tomorrow heard you singing and has kept one...
August 23rd, 2026 12:49 - Through The Eyes Of God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this captures the anxiety many people carry when imagining how God...
August 23rd, 2026 12:46 - Sleep takes my hand.. (David Wakeling)
David, this carries the peaceful freedom of surrendering to a dream and...
August 23rd, 2026 12:45 - The Fawn Response (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this hit me deeply. You reveal how apparent warmth and composure...
August 23rd, 2026 12:44 - The language of Fido (Orchidee)
Fido speaks 3,682 languages, yet mysteriously understands none whenever...
August 23rd, 2026 12:43 - Just give me something (Allie561)
What a deeply affecting piece, Allie. Beneath all the uncertainty is...
August 22nd, 2026 12:14 - and why should I be rude, angry or upset? (Demar Desu)
A lovely moment of perspective, my friend. Gratitude quiets the inner...
August 22nd, 2026 11:55 - Hayden Panettiere (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Hayden deserved far better from an industry that placed her before cameras...
August 22nd, 2026 11:13 - la monde d\'jour (Arqios)
What a beautiful piece, my friend. The ordinary becomes cosmic, every...
August 22nd, 2026 11:06 - Richter Scale (Teddy.15)
What a powerful addition to your raven collection, Teddy. Grief first...
August 22nd, 2026 11:05 - Fruit (Syd)
Syd, what a wonderfully strange existential ride. This moves through...
August 22nd, 2026 11:04 - INK STAINS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a beautifully sorrowful piece, Norman. The writing space becomes both...
August 22nd, 2026 11:03 - Lie in (Jabberwocky)
This cracked me up, my friend. A questionable forecast, a comfortable...
August 22nd, 2026 11:03 - Cradled (Sorenbarrett)
What a beautiful escape, Soren. The scenery, solitude, and passing hours...
August 22nd, 2026 11:01 - Fosh (Butter)
Butter, this is wonderfully strange and playful. You’ve created a...
August 22nd, 2026 11:01 - American Executor: James A. Garfield (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, what a powerful historical portrait. You give Garfield’s...
August 22nd, 2026 10:16 - It Has Always Been You (Teddy.15)
What a beautifully intimate poem, dearest Teddy! That first moment of...
August 21st, 2026 16:55 - thank you God for libraries! (Demar Desu)
Powerful and concise poem, Demar! When a library disappears, a community...
August 21st, 2026 16:54 - When the The Time is Right (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Beautiful and encouraging reflection, Sharon! God’s timing does not call...
August 21st, 2026 16:53 - Inspiration (Lorenz)
What a darkly sensual portrait of inspiration, Lorenz! You transform the...
August 21st, 2026 16:52 - The Damndest of Curses (Neville)
Damn, Neville...this carries such quiet desperation. The effort to...
August 21st, 2026 16:51 - Lo Que Es Real (Kurt Philip Behm)
What a beautifully distilled poem, Kurt! Each seeming contradiction...
August 21st, 2026 16:48 - Rest ,sweet child. (Friendship)
Oh, Friendship...I am so deeply sorry. Sixteen is heartbreakingly young,...
August 21st, 2026 16:46 - Friends / Amigos (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a haunting exploration of isolation, Carlos! The closed door protects...
August 21st, 2026 16:44 - Worship (Jabberwocky)
Damn, Jabberwocky...four lines, and every one of them lands. Dark, sharp,...
August 21st, 2026 16:42 - You\'ve Always Got What It Takes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Powerful and candid poem, Shaun! Owning mistakes, accepting help,...
August 21st, 2026 16:41 - watching costs rise (Arqios)
What a wonderfully biting piece, arqios! The supposed budget cuts that...
August 21st, 2026 16:39
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