Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Women Hating Men (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this captures the feeling of being reduced to a category instead of...
  February 20th, 2026 11:24
• There’s Purpose in the Rain (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, this carries a consistent, radiant faith throughout. The movement...
  February 20th, 2026 11:23
• Burning Effigy\'s Of Baal (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this is direct and unfiltered…apocalyptic imagery meeting...
  February 20th, 2026 11:22
• My Independent Little Girl (Friendship) My friend, this captures the sacred ache of watching independence bloom....
  February 20th, 2026 11:21
• To Forgive, Divine (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this balances theology and humanity without tipping into lecture....
  February 20th, 2026 11:19
• There`s No Other Way (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is absurd theology at its finest…straight-faced cosmic...
  February 20th, 2026 11:14
• Hopeful Homes (Orchidee) Orchi, this moves with such calm assurance that it lulls you…then...
  February 20th, 2026 11:13
• Butterfly (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is rich in image and layered in meaning. You weave night sky,...
  February 20th, 2026 11:06
• \"a love too deep, the love i couldnt keep\" (Kylie_love) Kylie, this is vulnerable and reflective in a grounded way. You trace the...
  February 20th, 2026 11:02
• Esmeralda 1969 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is bold…what begins as a simple encounter turns quickly into...
  February 20th, 2026 11:01
• waking up groggy (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Yessss! Bro! Title? Will totally support!
  February 20th, 2026 11:01
• Between the Fracture and the Dawn (Friendship) My friend, this moves from fracture to invitation with such quiet...
  February 20th, 2026 02:43
• To Err Is Human (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, that image of history as a hallway marked by wet paint is what...
  February 20th, 2026 02:41
• The Face In The Crowd (Paul Bell) Paul, this unfolds like a quiet psychological thriller…measured,...
  February 20th, 2026 02:40
• Rodent Resources (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is clever and biting all at once. The smallness of the...
  February 20th, 2026 02:38
• Letters from the Sanctuary (Arqios) 4️⃣ Fusion My friend, this balances wit and weight in a really...
  February 20th, 2026 01:20
• What is The Point of Such Beauty (Neville) Neville, this hit me hard…there’s something devastating about beauty...
  February 20th, 2026 01:16
• Favourable Families (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi, but I am just glad you didn’t bring up the...
  February 20th, 2026 01:14
• Wonderland becomes Neverland (Sorenbarrett) Soren… this is satire turned carnival mirror. The Pied Piper, Bo Peep,...
  February 19th, 2026 14:57
• Rationality (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion, the progression from “(I received claps)” to “(thunderous...
  February 19th, 2026 14:53
• THE   WINTER INCUBATION (Isa kemmy) Isa… the repetition of cold layered with coffee, kakao, campfire, and...
  February 19th, 2026 14:51
• Life’s Journey (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon… this reads like a map drawn from experience. Grief, pruning,...
  February 19th, 2026 14:49
• Appreciate you (Marissa) Marissa… I resonate with that call to remember our ghosts and stay...
  February 19th, 2026 13:30
• Imprisoned Grooms (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this blends abstraction and confinement with precision. The geometry...
  February 18th, 2026 11:44
• Poetic Lesson  (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion, this balances wit and critique beautifully. The flower without...
  February 18th, 2026 11:43
• Elegy for Jesse Jackson (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is dignified and intentional. The flicker to flame image...
  February 18th, 2026 11:41
• Distraction and Other Games Politicians Play (Neville) Neville, this is a blunt call to stop taking the bait. You frame the...
  February 18th, 2026 11:30
• waking up with a boner (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Healthy and/or annoying...which one, depends on who you wake up next to, I...
  February 18th, 2026 11:27
• 22 Again! (Orchidee) Rock on Orchi! Fossils at Hastings, moon landings, half-human guinea pigs...
  February 18th, 2026 11:24
• alone (Arqios) My friend, this is quiet and reverent. It feels like standing in a...
  February 18th, 2026 11:19
• The gardener (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a vivid portrait. The whale-like girth and sunshine...
  February 18th, 2026 11:17
• Fly Free! (Orchidee) Great hymn-glug, my friend!
  February 17th, 2026 20:22
• i can’t be You (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Beautiful. Love it, bro!
  February 17th, 2026 20:21
• Ensuring Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, I resonate with the idea that curiosity demands skill…that...
  February 17th, 2026 20:20
• The eyes of the sun (Marissa) Marissa, this burns with longing. It feels desperate in a beautiful...
  February 17th, 2026 20:19
• Love is a Stray Mutt (Thomas W Case) Thomas, “A love without muscle is just hunger” is a line that grips...
  February 17th, 2026 20:18
• Lines Written in Contemplation of Suicide (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries real weight without collapsing under it. The...
  February 17th, 2026 10:53
• looking glass (Arqios) My friend, this is piercing and beautifully controlled. It feels fragile...
  February 17th, 2026 10:50
• But of the Butts (Rebellion_in_sanity) Dearest friend, I’ve seen that exact kind of overconfident reasoning...
  February 17th, 2026 10:49
• Four letter words (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is deceptively simple. The four-letter pairings set the stakes...
  February 17th, 2026 10:47
• Sweet Nothings (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is tight and mischievous. The couplet delivers a clean...
  February 17th, 2026 10:46
• February (Cellinic) Cellinic, this holds the thaw beautifully. “Relinquishes its reins, yet...
  February 17th, 2026 10:43
• Six Months, 23 Days, 14 Hours, 33 Minutes (Friendship) My friend, this holds trauma and resilience in perfect tension. “The...
  February 17th, 2026 10:35
• His love is Real (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, I recognize that rhythm of leaning into something larger when life...
  February 17th, 2026 10:26
• Keeper Kindlings (Orchidee) The keeper kindles…ah…but the glugger…the glugger… don’t...
  February 17th, 2026 10:22
• Monday\'s Wander ... (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this collection moves from existential compression to heartfelt...
  February 17th, 2026 10:21
• You can’t be i (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Amen. Amen. Amen. Love this, bro! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  February 17th, 2026 10:18
• Just Another Beautiful Monday (Friendship) My friend, this breathes calm from the first line. There’s something...
  February 17th, 2026 10:14
• What is it? (Arqios) My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same impulse to name what can’t...
  February 17th, 2026 10:13
• The Twenty-Ninth That Would Never Die (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this balances wit and vulnerability beautifully. The auditor...
  February 17th, 2026 10:11
• Thigh Length Boots (Paul Bell) Paul, “Two strangers, heart-to-heart” is the line that anchors this...
  February 17th, 2026 10:08
• Let me have the life of a photon e=hf (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hit me hard…there’s a vastness in it that feels both...
  February 17th, 2026 10:07
• Green Mamba (Mutley Ravishes) Wow! Sharp and concise! Love this my friend!
  February 16th, 2026 08:25
• Life, Wow (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this feels expansive and intimate at once. The way you move from...
  February 15th, 2026 09:38
• Blind Man\'s Light (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend, the instrumentation imagery grounds the piece, but the inward...
  February 15th, 2026 09:38
• corkscrew, reprise (Arqios) arqios, this works on multiple levels…cellar as memory, cork as...
  February 15th, 2026 09:36
• Gratitude (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I’ve known that strange tension where helping isn’t met with...
  February 15th, 2026 09:35
• bloody valentine (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is dark, visceral, and emotionally charged. Beneath the...
  February 15th, 2026 09:34
• The Righteous Remembered (Orchidee) Amen. Beautiful hymn-poem, my friend! Now, if we could forget some...
  February 15th, 2026 09:33
• Sound Bites: February 14th, 2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is a constellation of thought and feeling. Each piece stands...
  February 15th, 2026 09:31
• A Valentine in Lead (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is chilling from the first stanza. The calm setup makes the...
  February 14th, 2026 10:53
• Happy Valentine\'s Day, my poetic friends (Friendship) My friend, this feels like a communal embrace. From coffee-warm hands to...
  February 14th, 2026 10:52
• Valentine Present (Paul Bell) Paul, this is pure farce wrapped in sharp social commentary. The...
  February 14th, 2026 10:47
• Leave Me Here To Dream (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, “A guitar without strings” is the image that caught me....
  February 14th, 2026 10:46
• Brugge ( September reverie ) (Arqios) arqios, this balances the mundane and the immense beautifully. Birdcalls,...
  February 14th, 2026 10:44
• Valentine Who? (Doggerel Dave) I know, right?!?! 🤣 I concur! What if we proposed that all Valentine\'s...
  February 14th, 2026 10:42
• Stand On What\'s Sacred (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I’ve felt that frustration with systems and distractions pulling...
  February 14th, 2026 10:39
• Innocence (Sorenbarrett) Soren, there’s reflection here without bitterness. From Santa nights to...
  February 14th, 2026 10:38
• Twin Flames (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast....
  February 14th, 2026 10:37
• to make love in pain (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Truly wonderful, my friend. Happy Valentine\'s Day. May we all find the...
  February 14th, 2026 10:26
• Build (NafisaSB) Safina, “form a human Link / and from the cup of friendship,...
  February 14th, 2026 10:25
• only one (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this has bite. It feels controlled but simmering…like patience...
  February 14th, 2026 10:24
• Alone with God (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, my dear friend, this is heartfelt and steady from beginning to...
  February 14th, 2026 10:20
• Creation Celebrations (Orchidee) Orchi…glugs…spinach tin cracked…Popeye flex engaged. Alleluia...
  February 14th, 2026 10:19
• Thirteenth Comes to Town (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this reminds me of how easily we can be talked into fear… how a...
  February 13th, 2026 12:07
• Rock Bottom Awaits (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, “his curtain / a hard drive” is such a clean, modern twist. That...
  February 13th, 2026 12:06
• God (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, I appreciate how unapologetic this is. The repetition gives it that...
  February 13th, 2026 12:05
• For All Those Who Have Not Yet Known Hunger (Neville) Neville, this feels like a confession layered in metaphor. Hunger becomes...
  February 13th, 2026 11:48
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) Paul, this is pub-banter brilliance. The escalating absurdity from lovers...
  February 13th, 2026 11:47
• 10-01-2025 (Arqios) My friend, this feels like a quiet brushstroke. It’s compact but...
  February 13th, 2026 11:46
• Animal Magic (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is compact but incendiary in all the right ways. The...
  February 13th, 2026 11:45
• Un-stemmed (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is raw and openly grieving. The repetition of fading,...
  February 13th, 2026 11:37
• Tree and the lily (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads as fable wrapped in nature. The oak’s shadow becomes...
  February 13th, 2026 11:37
• Heaven Hates Me (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and...
  February 13th, 2026 11:35
• Dual-purpose poem (Friendship) Wow! Friendship, this has to be a fave. This reminds me, immediately, of...
  February 13th, 2026 11:34
• Forgiving Father (Orchidee) Wonderful, Orchi! I love how you are focusing on forgiveness in the Old...
  February 13th, 2026 11:27
• A Queer\'s Defense of J. K. Rowling (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this stands in the discomfort without collapsing into slogans....
  February 13th, 2026 11:12
• ankh (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is raw and unflinching. It doesn’t soften the question…...
  February 12th, 2026 17:42
• Forgiving Father (Orchidee) Very good poem, my friend! And we who know…know that forgiveness is very...
  February 12th, 2026 17:39
• Lost Verses (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this reads like a litany of reckoning. The honor in shame, the...
  February 12th, 2026 17:32
• Earth I love you (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Deep and thought provoking and true. Well done!
  February 12th, 2026 17:30
• James Bond 007egacy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this fires off like a rapid montage. Gadgets, explosions, franchise...
  February 12th, 2026 17:29
• Time (Katie B.) Katie, this reads like a philosophical pause. The questions about buying...
  February 12th, 2026 17:27
• Abandoned by humans. (Friendship) My friend, this is a hymn to small miracles. An abandoned can becomes a...
  February 12th, 2026 17:24
• Apex Predator (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this made me laugh out loud. The build-up is wild and...
  February 12th, 2026 17:21
• “I see You” (Arqios) arqios, this beautiful. There’s much restraint shown here and that makes...
  February 12th, 2026 17:13
• Poet\'s Heart (Teddy.15) Teddy, this radiates, my friend. The electricity, the embroidery of...
  February 12th, 2026 17:10
• Car of rust (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the layered deterioration reads like more than machinery…it feels...
  February 12th, 2026 17:09
• Concerning the Epstein Files - We are not angry enough. (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this reads like a moral pulse check. The repetition is relentless...
  February 12th, 2026 01:35
• When the Nickname Fades (Friendship) My friend, this is beautifully reflective. There’s such tenderness in...
  February 12th, 2026 01:27