Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Why me? (Sorenbarrett) You wrote a poem with long, sharp fangs, Soren. My kind of poem! Each line...
  July 21st, 2025 08:33
• Glad She Survived!!!. (Poetic Licence) Tobani… this poem demands reflection. “At least you survived”…...
  July 21st, 2025 08:29
• My Dream Dress (Priya Tomar) Beautiful sonnet, my friend! “I like the color of character and...
  July 21st, 2025 08:26
• Amanda Taylor (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this one’s brutal in its restraint. The repetition stabs in...
  July 21st, 2025 08:20
• It doesn\'t Make Sense (Thomas W Case) Excellent write, Thomas! 🌹👏
  July 21st, 2025 08:14
• Lost (Bella Shepard) Bella, this one delivers in a slow collapse…each line peeling away...
  July 21st, 2025 08:13
• A fable (Mourgana of the Fey) Riann…this is both myth-breath and dream-root. I love that about your...
  July 21st, 2025 08:09
• Tango in Durango (Tony Grannell) Who doesn\'t love the Tango, whether watching or dancing? But to Tango in...
  July 21st, 2025 07:59
• Go (Tony36) Great job, Tony! 🌹👏
  July 20th, 2025 07:36
• weekend unleashed (Arqios) My friend, this is great fun indeed…sun-splashed, cheeky, and low-key...
  July 20th, 2025 07:35
• Dispensations of Grace (ElizabethMoroz) This gets a fave just for the Baudelaire (one of my faves, of course)...
  July 20th, 2025 07:32
• Wise Man Say (21) (Poetic Licence) Totally Tobani! I love this series so much. Please never stop writing...
  July 20th, 2025 07:22
• Is it funny? (Orchidee) Orchi, this cracked a grin…but I also hear a well thought out...
  July 20th, 2025 07:17
• Be my june (Nandu sri) My friend, this has such a soft, steady grace to it. The images move like...
  July 18th, 2025 17:04
• Fantasia (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful job, There\'s something enigmatic about this...it is quiet,...
  July 18th, 2025 17:02
• Pretzel Man (Joan Reese) Joan, this is so vivid and full of heart. The rhythm of the city moves...
  July 18th, 2025 16:39
• Fishers of Men (Tony Grannell) Tony, what a beautifully woven piece. The rhythm holds steady like the sea...
  July 18th, 2025 06:59
• where hermits go to shop (Arqios) My friend, this is soft, surreal, and glows. The hush, the lyric...
  July 18th, 2025 06:57
• Convoluted Reflections of Possibility (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, this moves like a storm...steady rhythm, relentless drive....
  July 18th, 2025 06:49
• Sound Investment. (Senryu) (Poetic Licence) Tobani, this is wisdom spoken over morning coffee, my friend. Gentle,...
  July 18th, 2025 06:43
• To My Dream Queen (Priya Tomar) Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream...
  July 18th, 2025 06:40
• To Build Again (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, there’s real strength in this. The rhythm of surrender and...
  July 18th, 2025 06:32
• Built this city (Georgia Watson) Georgia, what a beautifully honest piece. The repetition gives it this...
  July 18th, 2025 06:30
• Second Chances (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, what a powerful piece. The simplicity gives it weight...each line...
  July 18th, 2025 06:17
• Let\'s Blame the \"Ghosts,\" Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) Missy, I swear your kitchen should get a writing credit. From midnight...
  July 18th, 2025 06:14
• SNG2 (Damaso) Damaso, this reads like a transmission from another plane...part prophecy,...
  July 18th, 2025 06:12
• Hopelessly (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) The grief is palpable, my friend. Beautifully written. This is a very...
  July 17th, 2025 07:57
• Fly (Friendship) 🪰
  July 17th, 2025 07:52
• Alchemy Of The Answers (ElizabethMoroz) Elizabeth, your poem is a tidal wave of thought and truth...equal parts...
  July 17th, 2025 06:12
• Monarch of Morning (Priya Tomar) There’s a rich sense of ceremony in this...pageantry woven into every...
  July 17th, 2025 06:02
• The Morning Lark (Tony Grannell) And good morning to thee, my dear Tony. What a lovely poem to wake up to...
  July 17th, 2025 05:59
• Insignificant (Sorenbarrett) 🤯 Wow. I mean, I am not going to even add anything to this other than....
  July 17th, 2025 05:56
• 2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie (Arqios) Friend, this feels like toast at the edge of ruin...the way Madame sips...
  July 17th, 2025 05:53
• Introspection (Teddy.15) YESSSS! This is mystical. The introspective person is always examining...
  July 17th, 2025 05:49
• I Thought I`d Prepared. (Poetic Licence) Tobani, this is one of the most honest pieces I’ve read from you, and...
  July 17th, 2025 05:46
• hair in the wind (Arqios) Ah. I was away when you posted this and some how missed it. BUT NOT...
  July 16th, 2025 20:57
• When I flew too close to the sun. (Georgia Watson) Georgia, what an unflinching poem. I totes dig and respect that, my...
  July 16th, 2025 20:44
• Spiraling out of Control (Thomas W Case) Great job, my friend. Love it! 🌹👏
  July 16th, 2025 20:40
• Chasing Rainbows (Teddy.15) Teddy, there’s an honesty here and in all your work that I really...
  July 16th, 2025 20:33
• An Odd Twist on Xmas In July (Cheeky Missy) Missy, you’ve outdone yourself with this culinary canon. The ghost of...
  July 16th, 2025 09:02
• The Taj Mahal (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is a sculpted homage in its own right...each stanza as...
  July 16th, 2025 08:48
• The Rainbow Chase (Kurt Philip Behm) Another Dreamsleep hit for me, Kurt. This feels like a meditation...
  July 16th, 2025 08:42
• Lost time! (Friendship) Friendship, this reads like Aesop had a nervous breakdown in a watch shop...
  July 16th, 2025 08:40
• Dance (Tony36) I\'m up and ready, my friend! 🕺💃 Dancing always gets a fave from me!...
  July 16th, 2025 08:36
• grocery aisle poetry (Arqios) Dear poet and friend, this is utterly spell-spun. The secret life of the...
  July 16th, 2025 08:35
• A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This is raw and real here, Shawn...and I know you\'ve lived through the...
  July 16th, 2025 08:31
• Synchronicity (Sorenbarrett) Soren, you’ve taken the blender blade to chronology and somehow blended...
  July 16th, 2025 08:02
• Cereal To Eat. (Poetic Licence) This is heartbreaking, Nataiella. You’ve captured a child’s voice with...
  July 16th, 2025 07:58
• A Silent Soul (Priya Tomar) Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of...
  July 16th, 2025 07:55
• trust ! (Friendship) My dear friend, there’s something beautifully nostalgic and metaphysical...
  July 16th, 2025 07:52
• Oracle (Doggerel Dave) Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never...
  July 15th, 2025 19:03
• Beyond these walls (Betty Miller) Betty, this is breathtaking in its bravery and craft. The clarity with...
  July 15th, 2025 14:53
• Morning Dew (Priya Tomar) This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what...
  July 15th, 2025 14:51
• Locked Away (Kurt Philip Behm) This one struck a nerve. There’s a real sorrow in those winds, and that...
  July 15th, 2025 14:49
• Raven on the Road (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, you know my profound love for your Raven series. There’s...
  July 15th, 2025 14:46
• I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell) Absolutely brilliant. I was bracing for daggers and lust...then bam! Hit...
  July 15th, 2025 14:39
• Shine (Damaso) This wonderful poem feels like a vision walking itself into language, each...
  July 15th, 2025 14:35
• Some only see the outside (Tony36) A-friggin-men! You are on 🔥 Tony! Keep \'em coming, bro! I know you...
  July 15th, 2025 14:33
• an orchard’s lament (Arqios) This, my friend, is an elegy on the edge of collapse. That...
  July 15th, 2025 14:31
• Equal but not the same (Sorenbarrett) Wow! Soren, this is quite clever and complex...riddled with paradox and...
  July 15th, 2025 14:26
• (Re)lapse (DontSleepOnTheBoy) Great poem, my friend. The imagery is brutal in the best wa...those...
  July 15th, 2025 14:23
• Standing Alone. (Poetic Licence) This poem cuts right through the noise...no pretense, just truth. The...
  July 15th, 2025 14:21
• Nothing.... (Orchidee) Pure literary genius! I laughed so hard I nearly choked on all 4,583...
  July 15th, 2025 14:17
• Alien Visitations (Mutley Ravishes) This feels like signal in the dark—brief, cryptic, and oddly comforting....
  July 15th, 2025 14:08
• Put on your happy face (Georgia Watson) Love this, Georgia. A fave. That last line wraps around you like a...
  July 15th, 2025 14:05
• Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) And there you go again, my dear friend, folding the sacred into the scent...
  July 15th, 2025 14:01
• Can we talk (Tony36) I sadly know this feeling all too well. Well done, Tony, on conveying it....
  July 15th, 2025 12:38
• Words of Encouragement! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) There’s such a steady truth in this, like a hand on the shoulder when...
  July 15th, 2025 12:36
• Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell) This one doesn’t flinch, and neither did I while reading. You walk us...
  July 15th, 2025 08:52
• “flight from self” (Arqios) There’s a sharp honesty in this, the kind I have come to really...
  July 15th, 2025 08:47
• Crazy sonnet (Sorenbarrett) This one stares straight into the abyss and doesn’t blink, my dear...
  July 15th, 2025 08:43
• Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Truth, truth, truth. Preach!
  July 14th, 2025 21:08
• Once More With Feeling… (Doggerel Dave) Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for...
  July 14th, 2025 21:07
• Favourites? (Orchidee) It costs you 50 quid and a pint for a fave! 😂 Though in your case,...
  July 14th, 2025 21:02
• Handing Over the Reins (Mutley Ravishes) Yes!!! This hits like a spark begging for ignition. The sheer scale of...
  July 14th, 2025 20:56
• The Quill of the Greats (Thomas W Case) Man, I love how you pull the veil back on the act itself…writing as...
  July 14th, 2025 20:52
• Waiting for Nora (Tony Grannell) This is the kind of poem that hikes the line between history and heartache...
  July 14th, 2025 10:10
• Hades Train (Kurt Philip Behm) This reads like the final boarding call etched in flame. That closing...
  July 14th, 2025 10:04
• Wassat? (Orchidee) Now that’s the kind of nonsense I’d pay exact Mars fare for. 😂...
  July 14th, 2025 10:03
• Vibrations in Equations: Where Science Meets Soul (Salvia.S) You have a most brilliant mind and a most beautiful soul, dearest Salvia!...
  July 14th, 2025 09:56
• Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy) Enjoy? I always do when it comes to your scrumptious sonnets! There’s...
  July 14th, 2025 09:52
• Line up the constellations (Georgia Watson) Wow, Georgia! Wow. That line...“my stars are shaped like...
  July 14th, 2025 06:36
• Put It Away (Bella Shepard) The restraint in this hits harder than shouting ever could. That quiet...
  July 13th, 2025 20:33
• Pirates (Tony36) Yo ho yo ho, more of your poems demands me! Hehe! Love this Tony, well...
  July 13th, 2025 08:21
• Memories of childhood. (Friendship) What a beautiful cascade of memory, love, and selfhood. This reads like a...
  July 13th, 2025 08:20
• from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios) Need I say this, but this pure brilliance, arqios. You take something as...
  July 13th, 2025 08:18
• Scraps given (Sorenbarrett) Beautifully said, Soren. There’s something deeply human in the way you...
  July 13th, 2025 08:15
• None Left (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) OOh. What a Sinner, indeed. Like literally, it\'s his name! LOL! My...
  July 13th, 2025 08:14
• The storm (NafisaSB) What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the...
  July 13th, 2025 08:05
• Aether Defends (Kurt Philip Behm) This is beautifully mythic, Kurt...airy and elemental, yet weighted with...
  July 12th, 2025 14:26
• Don\'t Give Me THAT Look (Cheeky Missy) I always adore how you blend the sacred and the everyday, Miss...and this...
  July 12th, 2025 14:24
• The First Flame (Leny) This is quietly powerful, Leny. I love how the flame becomes both comfort...
  July 12th, 2025 09:01
• The Queen of Dunes (Tony Grannell) Tony, this is utterly enchanting. Your command of rhythm and imagery here...
  July 12th, 2025 08:29
• Love yourself, (Friendship) My dear friend, this radiates with such sincere light. It reads like both...
  July 12th, 2025 08:27
• Not sure (Tony36) That inner storm...you’ve captured it with raw simplicity, Tony. The...
  July 12th, 2025 08:26
• crossings (Arqios) This is breathtaking, dear poet and friend. Every step feels like a rite...
  July 12th, 2025 08:24
• Probability (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this feels like a meditation unfolding in layers—time slipping...
  July 12th, 2025 08:20
• Roasted Turkey. (Poetic Licence) A day at the beach, my friend? Exactly how I feel out in the sun. This...
  July 12th, 2025 08:18
• I never knew.... (Orchidee) Who knew? We know Popeye, Obi and Tom were too busy to notice! Fun write,...
  July 12th, 2025 07:40
• I was always here, but now I\'m gone today! (Friendship) Wow. A fave friend. There’s a quiet power in this, a kind of elegy for...
  July 11th, 2025 16:56