Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• interlude (Arqios) My friend, this spoke to me deeply...the way beauty insists on existing...
  October 8th, 2025 14:33
• Perfume of war (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like a gothic prayer to decomposition...graphic,...
  October 8th, 2025 14:31
• When will I catch a win? (NinjaGirl) Lol! i totally relate my dear 🥷🪶 friend! Lately especially! That...
  October 7th, 2025 13:11
• Your smile brings joy (William Hromada) Short, sweet and certainly special to the one who receives it, no doubt!...
  October 7th, 2025 07:52
• a hearth gone cold (Arqios) My friend, this breathes with quiet grief...the fire gone, yet its ghost...
  October 7th, 2025 07:51
• Relationships, everything has a price (Sorenbarrett) Soren, like a dealership of desire...slick talk, smart rhythm, and hard...
  October 7th, 2025 07:49
• God\'s Connections (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Amen!!! Well done, Shawn!
  October 7th, 2025 07:47
• Prom Night (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Wonderful poem! As for prom, yay! And I concur with Soren. Carpe diem!...
  October 6th, 2025 20:44
• Prayer Petitions (Orchidee) Wonderful job, my friend! A hymn-poem that even Popeye, bless his heart,...
  October 6th, 2025 20:40
• . . . . . . . B.T.F.U. (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this moves like dream logic in motion…surreal, rhythmic, and...
  October 6th, 2025 11:56
• the unfinished kiss (Arqios) My friend, this reminds me how some moments never end…they just keep...
  October 6th, 2025 11:53
• A Day with You (William Hromada) Very beautiful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
  October 6th, 2025 11:11
• Dark Thoughts (Paul Bell) Paul, this unfolds like a moral autopsy—each stanza a heartbeat fading...
  October 6th, 2025 11:09
• Some day (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this moves from cosmic collapse to quiet human irony…the light...
  October 6th, 2025 10:57
• 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔚𝔢𝔢𝔨 𝔈𝔫𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this piece beats like a mixtape of memory—song, soul, and spark...
  October 6th, 2025 10:52
• The Church of depopulation, (Friendship) My friend, this is revelation through shadow...ritual and ruin...
  October 5th, 2025 08:01
• contagion of kindness (Arqios) My friend, this shines with quiet defiance…the venom, the cure, the...
  October 5th, 2025 08:00
• BUTTERED SIDE DOWN (Michael Edwards) Wise. Innit true that the simplest things are the ones rarely come by!...
  October 5th, 2025 07:59
• Fire, earth, air and water (Sorenbarrett) Elemental! Love it! Soren, this breathes like an ancient incantation —...
  October 5th, 2025 07:57
• Storm Amy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I so get this! Storms...ugh! LOL! Well done, my friend! 🌀
  October 5th, 2025 07:55
• Breakfast in Krakow (Neville) Neville...yay, glad you posted another! I was thinking of you only...
  October 5th, 2025 07:54
• One Year Older (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this glows with yearning and faith…the climb, the rise, the...
  October 5th, 2025 07:51
• Wise Man Say (26) (Poetic Licence) Now this is a sight for majorly sore eyes! And part 26, totally delivers!...
  October 4th, 2025 19:02
• You bounder, you cad, you....! (Orchidee) Who lives in some rubbish under the sea...KP Botox! 😂 Hey Popeye,...
  October 4th, 2025 09:11
• Halloween is in the air and if you dare! (Friendship) My friend, what a ride of memory and mayhem. That counter stacked...
  October 4th, 2025 09:02
• 𝔓𝔯𝔬𝔪𝔭𝔱 𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔪 \"𝔓𝔬𝔢𝔱𝔯𝔶 𝔖𝔩𝔞𝔪𝔰\" (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you lit the stage with this…a prompt that becomes a pulse, a poem...
  October 4th, 2025 08:53
• I have Faith She Will Stay (William Hromada) Yay! First comment! 🥰 William, this is tender and heartfelt. The...
  October 4th, 2025 08:49
• Marie (Paul Bell)
  October 4th, 2025 08:48
• Marie (Paul Bell) Paul, this is powerful. The refrain of “no one won,” the flashes of...
  October 4th, 2025 08:48
• lights turned inward (Arqios) Arqios, this is beautifully wrought. From polishing empty mirrors to...
  October 4th, 2025 08:45
• Indoctrinated (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indoctrination is the name of the human game. Whether it is religion (and...
  October 4th, 2025 08:37
• To an old dog (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a lovely piece. Loyal dog, misunderstood friend, poetic...
  October 4th, 2025 08:34
• Darkness Runs (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautiful Kurt! That closing...“a poem born as darkness runs”...really...
  October 4th, 2025 07:38
• Middle Leg ( Fun ) (Poetic Licence) Tobani, these are a riot. The cricket innuendo and the torch gag both hit...
  October 3rd, 2025 21:14
• Lost In Babylon (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is powerful. From blindness in darkness to release in tomorrow,...
  October 3rd, 2025 21:11
• I Remained Unplugged  (Rebellion_in_sanity) Rebellion, this is sharp and playful. Beneath the humor and wordplay, you...
  October 3rd, 2025 21:10
• a slow alarm (Arqios) Haha, racy or not, Rik…you’ve nailed it. This burns with survival and...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:32
• Bad Choices (William Hromada) William, this is a striking piece. The shadows of regret, the light...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:30
• Untitled (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is pure you…bold, rhythmic, layered with play and punch. That...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:29
• The echo of the void (Lore) Lore, you captured the ache of silence turning heavier than words. It’s...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:27
• Holes in our day (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is beautifully layered. The cracks, roots, and worn paths...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:25
• Housing Crisis (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this is biting and brilliant. From shysters’ schemes to the...
  October 3rd, 2025 07:23
• I’m not there yet (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this is powerful. Fragmentation, sinking, glimpses of beauty amid...
  October 2nd, 2025 17:00
• Lost Tears (Kurt Philip Behm) Very true! Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 2nd, 2025 16:59
• 𝒟ℯ𝒻𝒾𝓃ℯ𝒹 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one breathes celebration of poetry itself...flowing,...
  October 2nd, 2025 16:58
• Incurable (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Petra, this is deeply moving...pain and resilience woven together....
  October 2nd, 2025 16:55
• when roses were too much (Arqios) Arqios, this is a beautiful piece. The fragile peace, the apparition of...
  October 2nd, 2025 16:54
• Eyes for you (William Hromada) Short, but sincere! The best way when it comes to love. Well done, my...
  October 2nd, 2025 16:52
• National Poetry Day 2025 (Tom Dylan) Happy National Poetry Day, Tom! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 2nd, 2025 16:51
• Lost music of the forest (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is powerful. You frame doubt and longing as a hymn in the...
  October 2nd, 2025 16:49
• On My Tombstone (Kurt Philip Behm) Well written, Kurt. Powerful. 🖤🙏
  October 1st, 2025 20:04
• Forgive me (2781) Valiantstar, this really moved me. The wrestling, the questions, the...
  October 1st, 2025 20:03
• Mother Nature tends to her own. (Friendship) This is a beautiful work, my friend…autumn’s cycle told with grace and...
  October 1st, 2025 20:01
• The last thirteen (Lore) Lore, this is devastating and beautifully written. Each reason lands like...
  October 1st, 2025 19:59
• sunflowers (Arqios) Arqios, this is powerful. Decapitated suns, fevered gold, prophets...
  October 1st, 2025 19:58
• I would do anything (William Hromada) Beautiful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  October 1st, 2025 19:56
• Shaping (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this breathes with renewal. The way you shape the day through...
  October 1st, 2025 19:53
• ℭ𝔬𝔪𝔭𝔩𝔦𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱𝔰 𝔞𝔩𝔩 𝔣𝔬𝔯 𝔑𝔬𝔱𝔥𝔦𝔫𝔤 ... 𝔦𝔱𝔰 𝔚𝔬𝔯𝔱𝔥 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this is wild and beautiful. The way you weave style, music, and...
  October 1st, 2025 19:50
• KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards) Beautiful pot. Love Kintsugi! A beautiful Senyru, my friend. Powerful...
  October 1st, 2025 06:57
• They killed his voice (Lore) This is stark and gothic, Lore...chains, blades, silence, and a rope...
  September 30th, 2025 18:13
• La Verite Triomphe (Kurt Philip Behm) Strong work, Kurt...truth rendered as firm, unlabeled, triumphant....
  September 30th, 2025 18:10
• Ice and Snowflakes ❄️ (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) This shines, Petra...snowflakes, crystal glow, the breathless leap of a...
  September 30th, 2025 18:09
• Stop saying the word I can\'t. (Friendship) This is powerful, Friendship...the “I can’t” as a fence, the tongue...
  September 30th, 2025 18:07
• To be Brave (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This is strong, GenXer...bravery defined as gospel truth, repentance,...
  September 30th, 2025 18:05
• Why Your Beautiful (William Hromada) Wonderful and tender write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 30th, 2025 18:02
• Vincent (Arqios) Ah. This Van Gogh makes me want to \"tip toe through the tulips\"! 🤣...
  September 30th, 2025 18:01
• Indigestion (Sorenbarrett) Soren, love this..I see the stolen fruit as metaphor for sin (does not...
  September 30th, 2025 17:57
• 𝔐𝔞𝔰𝔱𝔢𝔯 𝔄𝔱 𝔖𝔲𝔯𝔤𝔢𝔯𝔶 (Keyara S Trotman) Thank you for this blessing, Kiki...heart-surgery grace, angels watching,...
  September 30th, 2025 17:47
• Point Taken (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is quietly powerful...the denied pound turning into a mirror of...
  September 30th, 2025 17:45
• Sober Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shawn, this is a strong piece...sober honesty, candid lines, and a prayer...
  September 30th, 2025 17:42
• Man not yet free (Georgia Watson) Georgia, this is stark and unrelenting...iron fist, empty words, walls...
  September 30th, 2025 17:40
• Cheated on a test or exam edition (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you blended forms here—poetic reflection laced with advice,...
  September 30th, 2025 17:37
• \"All Damn Thee Who Enter Here\" (Kurt Philip Behm) Ooh! Great question and...excellent flow and rhyme! A fave, my friend!...
  September 30th, 2025 17:34
• Opened mind. (Friendship) My friend, this flows with clarity…the open mind here feels less like...
  September 29th, 2025 15:21
• Fire & Smoke (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) This piece sears…the fire, the poison, the suffocation, and the belated...
  September 29th, 2025 15:19
• We Know (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) You write with such conviction, my dear friend.…naming the doubts,...
  September 29th, 2025 15:18
• Where my childhood died (Lore) Lore, this is quietly heartbreaking…the empty swing, the lost laughter,...
  September 29th, 2025 15:15
• The Answer Machine (Paul Bell) Paul, this is hilarious…the chaos of messages stacks up until it’s...
  September 29th, 2025 15:13
• parallel universe in truth (Arqios) Reading this felt like walking through ruins myself…each small step...
  September 29th, 2025 15:11
• No reason (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this piece is filled with quiet joy…rejecting the cages of...
  September 29th, 2025 15:09
• Destructo Mode (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ooh so do I get Destructo Mode. Well done, mate!
  September 29th, 2025 15:03
• When will you............? (Orchidee) Who live in a Pineapple Down on the Sea?…Don’t answer that or we’ll...
  September 29th, 2025 15:02
• Love Fishing (Thomas W Case) Very relatable. Well done, Thomas. Powerful! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  September 29th, 2025 14:57
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) You know you want to! LOL! Popeye made me say that! LOL!
  September 28th, 2025 16:49
• Through the Darkest Nights (Lore) Not just a poem but a testimony…childhood as war, scars as map,...
  September 28th, 2025 16:48
• Destiny Forks (Kurt Philip Behm) All too true…and we all know where the wrong turns can lead! Well done,...
  September 28th, 2025 16:43
• Angels Among Us (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) This is tender and honest…light and shadow both carried in your lines....
  September 28th, 2025 16:42
• Waiting Patiently (William Hromada) William, this is serene and grounding. The slow drip of time, the...
  September 28th, 2025 16:40
• Honeytrap (Paul Bell) This is sharp and cinematicflirtation, tension, the reveal of Mojenta....
  September 28th, 2025 16:38
• 𝔈𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔠𝔢𝔡 𝔟𝔶 𝔱𝔥𝔦𝔰 \"𝔒𝔫𝔢\" 𝔍𝔢𝔰𝔲𝔰~ 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔇𝔦𝔰𝔤𝔲𝔦𝔰𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) A Jesusaholic, now that is the kind of “aholic” I can dig being! This...
  September 28th, 2025 16:34
• My Mother. (Friendship) My mother is my rock too. This is so relatable and can only imagine...
  September 28th, 2025 16:32
• Nature (Sorenbarrett) This is raw and unflinching. The imagery of taking from the earth…her...
  September 28th, 2025 16:25
• graduated cylinder (Arqios) This is quiet brilliance, Arqios…memory aching in drops, silence...
  September 28th, 2025 16:24
• Is There a Fix?. (Poetic Licence) Thanks for bringing us all together in this, Tobani! A pleasure to...
  September 27th, 2025 22:29
• Eternal Fire (Lore) This is dark and apocalyptic, yet it glows with defiance. The abyss...
  September 27th, 2025 21:18
• Let The Dogs Out (Kurt Philip Behm) This is both raw and liberating...A call to stop performing and simply let...
  September 27th, 2025 21:15
• A fatal mistake - or con-fusion? (Orchidee) Con-Fucian? As in Confucius? Wait, the Fucians were cons? And, most...
  September 27th, 2025 21:10
• I\'m just finished. (Friendship) This lands with a haunting stillness. Every line exhales...like the final...
  September 27th, 2025 07:58
• Truth Hurts (William Hromada) Reading this felt like my own brushes with hard truths...painful,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:56
• Act (NafisaSB) This comes across as sharp and motivating. No fluff, just a call to act,...
  September 27th, 2025 07:55