Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- TWILIGHT - Atardecer (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, I know what it is to write toward something I cannot physically...
September 17th, 2026 10:30 - Cracked (Sorenbarrett)
Brilliantly written, Soren. I love how the description shifts from...
September 17th, 2026 10:28 - Righteous Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Orchi, you’ve gathered humanity, rivers, mountains, oceans, and...
September 17th, 2026 10:25 - THE BOOKS I BORROW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, I have always believed books let us enter lives the world would...
September 17th, 2026 10:23 - They Celebrate A Broken System (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
And how, Shaun...and how. We have been taught to accept exhaustion as...
September 17th, 2026 10:22 - Y9 (Arqios)
Rik, this made me laugh far more than two characters have any right to. I...
September 17th, 2026 10:21 - American Executor: George W. Bush (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, I continue to respect the fairness you bring to this series. You...
September 17th, 2026 10:18 - Specimen (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, hell yes...there comes a point when living for approval costs more...
September 17th, 2026 10:15 - Important Exchange (Doggerel Dave)
Dave, you turned a simple purchase into a lifelong correspondence nobody...
September 17th, 2026 10:14 - The Scorpions inside (Micah Finchley)
Micah, this is visceral and unrelenting...the repeated return makes the...
September 17th, 2026 10:13 - Pawning Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, eight brief lines and suddenly mortality feels like a transaction...
September 17th, 2026 10:12 - Fire within (Caveman)
Caveman, this hurt to read...the speaker sees every consequence coming and...
September 17th, 2026 10:09 - The Fiends\' Within (Sassy Lou)
Cassie, that final turn stopped me cold...after all those threatening...
September 17th, 2026 10:08 - dancing for love (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry, so much warmth in so little space...a whole season, a whole...
September 17th, 2026 10:07 - American Executor: Bill Clinton (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, prosperity and personal failure sit uneasily beside each other...
September 17th, 2026 10:03 - FASCINATING ---- FASCINANTE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, I wanted to cheer as this unfolded...the hurt remains, but it no...
September 17th, 2026 09:22 - ☆ (ᴍᴏᴏɴ)
Sylva, damn...this is tiny, but it carries such a huge ache. That helpless...
September 17th, 2026 09:20 - Trust (Friendship)
Friendship, this is both beautifully crafted and emotionally wise. The...
September 17th, 2026 07:58 - over troubled water (Arqios)
arqios, this hit me hard. Two people can move toward one another with...
September 16th, 2026 22:27 - After ferien (Isa kemmy)
Isa, this captures the misery of returning after a break so vividly. The...
September 16th, 2026 22:25 - Black is not black (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is a fascinating meditation on how certainty dissolves under...
September 16th, 2026 22:24 - A PRICKLY PATH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, what a haunting piece. Weather, sleeplessness, violence, and...
September 16th, 2026 22:21 - Don\'t waste a moment (Orchidee)
Orchi, this is no waste at all! Fido supplies the brains, you supply the...
September 16th, 2026 22:20 - Watchmen Reality (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this is a wonderfully strange little snapshot. The ordinary morning...
September 16th, 2026 15:10 - :3 saddle’s don’t go rattle (Butter)
Butter, I have a soft spot for poems that let language misbehave simply...
September 16th, 2026 15:08 - Emergence (Fränz Müller)
Fränz, this is a powerful transformation captured in very few words. What...
September 16th, 2026 15:05 - The Moment Proud (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, this is concise, graceful, and full of creative hope. You capture...
September 16th, 2026 15:04 - A birds eye view (Caveman)
Caveman, what a charming shift in perspective. The little guardian claims...
September 16th, 2026 15:02 - ᴛʜɪꜱ ɪꜱ ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ, ᴛʜᴇɴ? (ᴍᴏᴏɴ)
Sylva, what a painfully honest farewell. You hold love, confusion,...
September 16th, 2026 15:01 - Just listen and look. (Friendship)
Friendship, what a peaceful and grounding poem. It gently draws us away...
September 16th, 2026 08:14 - Snapped (Paul Bell)
Paul, what a grotesquely funny descent into madness. Petty resentment...
September 15th, 2026 22:23 - something you had to earn (Arqios)
arqios, what a devastating and compassionate piece. You enter the...
September 15th, 2026 22:22 - All or nothing (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, the connection between responsibility and divine knowledge is what...
September 15th, 2026 22:20 - Confused (Orchidee)
Orchi, nothing confusing here at all! This is simply your usual household...
September 15th, 2026 10:02 - Do you really give a fuck (GoddessEYES)
GoddessEYES, what a raw confrontation with theft, betrayal, and family...
September 15th, 2026 09:57 - I See Dark Demons Inside Of A Human Meat Suit (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this is powerful because I know the experience behind it. I have...
September 15th, 2026 09:53 - American Executor: George H. W. Bush (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a thoughtful and beautifully structured addition to the...
September 15th, 2026 09:39 - Don\'t forget your shine (Poetic Dan)
Dan, what a hopeful and grounding piece. You recognize the continuing...
September 15th, 2026 09:37 - Too bad (Boot)
James, what a delightfully macabre little tale. The tension builds like a...
September 15th, 2026 09:36 - The Weight Of Adam (Across_world_with_u)
My friend, this carries tremendous spiritual weight. The anguish of...
September 15th, 2026 09:26 - Golden Seers (Mutley Ravishes)
What a clever philosophical piece, Mutley. The broken language mirrors a...
September 15th, 2026 09:23 - Pieces of Me (Sassy Lou)
Cassie, what a raw and vulnerable piece. The shifting identities,...
September 15th, 2026 09:21 - POET’S WORDS / Letras de poeta (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos, what a beautiful tribute to the necessity of poetry. It transforms...
September 15th, 2026 09:19 - Cosmic agony (Lorenz)
What an intoxicating piece, Lorenz. Myth, desire, music, and mortality...
September 14th, 2026 11:28 - An empty shell (Caveman)
What a beautifully contemplative haiku, my friend. The life has departed,...
September 14th, 2026 11:27 - Canyons Of Anger (Kurt Philip Behm)
One heck of a poem, Kurt. The speaker refuses inherited blame and names...
September 14th, 2026 11:27 - Mumbo Jumbo (2781)
What a strange and compelling journey, Valiantstar. Social disorder gives...
September 14th, 2026 11:25 - American Executor: Ronald Reagan (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, Reagan remains difficult for me to encounter apart from the...
September 14th, 2026 11:24 - Man Without a Country (Michael A. McGuire)
What a powerful piece, Michael. You transform exile into liberation and...
September 14th, 2026 11:16 - old friend (Arqios)
What a tender and beautifully restrained piece, my friend. Memory becomes...
September 14th, 2026 11:14 - ALAS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a beautifully melancholy piece, Norman. The imagery is rich with...
September 14th, 2026 11:14 - Bullshit party (Sorenbarrett)
This hits hard, Soren...a lifetime of changing convictions becomes a...
September 14th, 2026 11:13 - A Kind thought on Karma (Teddy.15)
What a strong piece, Teddy. The boundary is absolute, but the humanity...
September 14th, 2026 11:12 - No shame (Poetic Dan)
A strong and empowering piece, Dan. You bring emotional openness,...
September 14th, 2026 11:11 - A Slice Of Poetry (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
What a clever piece, Shaun. Language becomes something delicious and...
September 14th, 2026 11:10 - OK, I will stay (Orchidee)
Haha, Orchi...first you refuse eviction, then commit equine fraud, and...
September 14th, 2026 11:08 - You’re Perfect (Freyaaa)
What a genuinely sweet exchange, freyaaa. The affection moves both ways,...
September 14th, 2026 10:56 - Fight or Flight (Sassy Lou)
This really moved me, Cassie. Neither choice is presented as weakness, and...
September 14th, 2026 10:54 - They say I\'m still in Love with you (Kevin Hulme)
What a clever piece, Kevin. Each new excuse is more incriminating than the...
September 13th, 2026 19:02 - ᴇʀʀᴏʀ (ᴍᴏᴏɴ)
What a powerful poem, Sylva. The fusion of biology, programming, and...
September 13th, 2026 19:01 - Primae Voces (Kurt Philip Behm)
What struck me most here, Kurt, is the reverence given to honest...
September 13th, 2026 19:01 - Earth Angel\'s 411 (Ms.divine)
What struck me most here, my friend, is the call to recognize manipulation...
September 13th, 2026 19:00 - In the Tulips (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, I came expecting Tiny Tim and instead found myself witnessing some...
September 13th, 2026 18:59 - What was that? (2781)
What a tender little poem, Valiantstar. The missed exchange becomes a...
September 13th, 2026 18:57 - third wheel (Arqios)
What struck me most here, my friend, is the journey from exclusion to...
September 13th, 2026 18:56 - Been here before yesterday (Sorenbarrett)
You got me with this one, Soren! What begins in melancholy quickly becomes...
September 13th, 2026 18:56 - Self-entitled (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
My friend, I know this particular struggle...trying to remain civilized...
September 13th, 2026 18:55 - MY TIN ANGEL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this one carries such a lonely, late-night ache. It feels worn...
September 13th, 2026 18:54 - American Executor: Jimmy Carter (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, what a thoughtful and measured portrait. The repeating refrain...
September 13th, 2026 18:53 - I can’t write now (Butter)
My friend, this carries such a vulnerable uncertainty. Creativity wants to...
September 12th, 2026 23:23 - False Pander (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, what a concise and cutting piece! Money may attract praise and...
September 12th, 2026 23:16 - Scars... (Antra.coree)
My friend, I carry marks that others will never see, and I understand how...
September 12th, 2026 09:23 - Discover your Own Path (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Sharon, I especially appreciate the equal dignity you give to such...
September 12th, 2026 09:22 - American Executor: Gerald Ford (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is a strong and thoughtfully structured portrait of an...
September 12th, 2026 09:22 - angling angler angled (Arqios)
My friend, I know that feeling of recognizing the danger in someone’s...
September 12th, 2026 09:20 - Sonya (Paul Bell)
Paul, what a wonderfully dysfunctional courtship! 😂 He talks himself...
September 12th, 2026 09:20 - XO-Dus (Mutley Ravishes)
My friend, this is one wild philosophical ride! The Monkey King becomes a...
September 12th, 2026 09:19 - UNKNOWN POET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Norman, this hit hard! The anger is raw, justified, and aimed squarely at...
September 12th, 2026 09:18 - Gilded cage (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, what a haunting portrayal of conditional care. She repairs what was...
September 12th, 2026 09:18 - Life Is A Learning Curve (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Shaun, this is one hell of a ride! 😂 Health problems, delayed...
September 12th, 2026 09:17 - New Islands (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, what a beautiful reflection on refusing limitation! Once we release...
September 12th, 2026 09:15 - unformal jazz (Lorenz)
Lorenz, music has always felt like one of the ways the dead remain present...
September 12th, 2026 09:14 - Eat it like a vulture 🦅 (Ms.divine)
My friend, what a wicked reversal! The would-be hunter becomes so focused...
September 12th, 2026 09:13 - Don\'t Ask (Cheeky Missy)
My friend, what a sharp and unsettling piece! Being allowed a voice means...
September 12th, 2026 09:13 - for the birds (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh, hell, I cannot resist:
HAIL CORMORANT!...
September 11th, 2026 13:36 - What if? (Isa kemmy)
You got me with this one, my friend! The nervous imagination keeps...
September 11th, 2026 09:19 - My Hope Today (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
What a heartfelt prayer, Sharon. You remember not only those who died, but...
September 11th, 2026 09:17 - Goddamnit! (Doggerel Dave)
Dave, four lines and nowhere to hide. The anger cuts straight through the...
September 11th, 2026 09:16 - All Poets go to Heaven (Michael A. McGuire)
Haha, what a devilishly clever piece, Michael! Poets endure the torment,...
September 11th, 2026 09:15 - Front Desk 9-11 (Arqios)
What a powerful piece, my friend. The familiar workplace becomes strange...
September 11th, 2026 09:13 - Framed (Sorenbarrett)
What a clever and poignant piece, my friend. Those photographs preserve...
September 11th, 2026 09:12 - THE CANDLES FLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
What a tender and haunting poem, Norman. Memory, longing, and everything...
September 11th, 2026 09:11 - Different Gods (Jabberwocky)
Wow, my friend...this is devastating. Love becomes betrayal, but...
September 11th, 2026 09:10 - A Spiritual Cost (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A strong, necessary piece, my friend. Character is revealed in how we...
September 11th, 2026 09:09 - American Executive: Richard Nixon (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew, this is one heck of a historical portrait. Nixon emerges as...
September 11th, 2026 09:08 - Sparks (Fränz Müller)
Wow, Fränz! This carries both beauty and danger...building through...
September 11th, 2026 09:06 - MALE SPACE (David Welch)
David, this is a well-written poem, and I certainly understand the value...
September 11th, 2026 08:23 - Ring o’ ring (Micah Finchley)
Dark and vivid, Micah! The repetition keeps tightening the dread until...
September 11th, 2026 08:13 - Blues Brothers (Kevin Hulme)
Haha, you got me good with this one, Kevin! I followed the misery right...
September 11th, 2026 08:12 - PATHWAYS / SENDEROS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a deeply moving poem, my friend. The grief feels heavy and immediate,...
September 11th, 2026 08:11
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