Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Bruce Willis — A Tribute  (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this is a powerful tribute…you carry Bruce’s presence with a...
  March 19th, 2026 10:16
• Solar Veil (Freyaaa) Freyaaa, this is beautiful…there’s such a calm, luminous quality to it...
  March 19th, 2026 10:14
• waiting room of purgatory (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, I’ve brushed up against that kind of inner noise...
  March 19th, 2026 10:14
• Soon It Will Be Spring Again (Teddy.15) Teddy, I’ve sat in that kind of silence before…where words stop making...
  March 19th, 2026 10:11
• Prosperous Praise (Orchidee) Orchi, “We triumph in you, not fore\'er sad” really holds the center...
  March 19th, 2026 10:08
• Attack Of The Clones (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, that line about “brainwashed goldfish in a spellbound bowl”...
  March 19th, 2026 10:03
• Wednesday Musing (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, “the crossroads of tomorrow — to enter or stay” is the line...
  March 18th, 2026 09:40
• Microcosmic Melodies (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, I love when something mythic gets handled this way…not...
  March 18th, 2026 09:35
• Search (2781) Valiantstar, this made me smile…there’s a playful frustration here...
  March 18th, 2026 09:34
• \"and now it\'s my fault\" (Arqios) arqios, this carries that quiet, looping ache…each vignette building on...
  March 18th, 2026 09:33
• Enlightenment (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this carries a deep, steady weight…each line building on the last...
  March 18th, 2026 09:32
• \'At (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this has such a fun swagger to it…that polished image built up...
  March 18th, 2026 09:31
• -$1.00 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, this carries a quiet strength…laying out the nothing so plainly,...
  March 18th, 2026 09:30
• Clash of Strength (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this pulls you straight into the dust and doesn’t let go…that...
  March 18th, 2026 09:27
• Narc, Narc, Who\'s There? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this feels sharp and immediate…there’s a real bite to the way...
  March 18th, 2026 09:25
• Sleep Well My Love (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, that first piece hits hard…there’s a quiet devastation in the...
  March 18th, 2026 09:23
• My Grandfathers Hydrangeas (Neville) Neville, that line about “fired up…full of ferrous iron filings”...
  March 17th, 2026 08:39
• After the Fire, Road Home (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries real weight…it feels like a long road walked with...
  March 17th, 2026 08:34
• What is your religious beliefs? (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Demar, I appreciate you asking this directly… it invites something real....
  March 17th, 2026 08:33
• Microcosmic Miseries (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, I’ve had moments that feel just as chaotic internally…not...
  March 17th, 2026 08:30
• \"she orders me about\" (Arqios) My friend, this brings me back to those kinds of dynamics we don’t...
  March 17th, 2026 08:28
• Not The Only One (Orchidee) Orchi, thank you for this, my friend… always appreciate you sharing...
  March 17th, 2026 08:27
• Here\'s to St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan) Tom, this is a warm, grounded piece…there’s a real sense of pride and...
  March 17th, 2026 08:21
• Adrift (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hit me hard...there’s a quiet loneliness here that just...
  March 17th, 2026 08:21
• Saint Patrick— The Day and the Man (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this is a powerful piece… t carries a steady, almost reverent...
  March 17th, 2026 08:16
• half-life, half-light (Freyaaa) My friend, I’ve felt that kind of pressure before…where everything...
  March 17th, 2026 08:15
• কবিতার সঙ্গে: অনুভূতির পথচলা (Shah Alam Al Mujahid) My friend, this speaks to something many of us who write understand…that...
  March 16th, 2026 10:48
• Soundbites 3-16-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is beautifully put…you captured the smoky, late-night feel of...
  March 16th, 2026 10:47
• Smolder (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this carries a powerful voice…gritty, smoky, and full of...
  March 16th, 2026 10:46
• hotHotHOT (2781) My friend, this is a fun one…starting with chili and heat, then slowly...
  March 16th, 2026 08:52
• Dismissed (Katie B.) Katie, this hit me hard…there’s such raw honesty in the way you move...
  March 16th, 2026 08:50
• लगता  है   अब  तुम  आओगी (Waiting for Silence) My friend, this feels deeply tender…there’s such quiet longing running...
  March 16th, 2026 08:50
• You Are Not Chaos (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this carries a powerful emotional arc. The shifting waves of the...
  March 16th, 2026 08:48
• of witnesses (Arqios) My friend, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, almost meditative rhythm...
  March 16th, 2026 08:47
• Of Profound Knowledge (Teddy.15) Teddy, reading this reminded me how dreams can feel like bridges…moments...
  March 16th, 2026 08:46
• Vengeance (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a wickedly clever piece…part dark fairy tale, part...
  March 16th, 2026 08:45
• A Light Beyond Saturn (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, that moment where the light “did not quite belong among / the...
  March 16th, 2026 08:44
• Sometimes I hate myself (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) That ending! Yes, bro! It reminds me of the Rastafarian concept of I and...
  March 16th, 2026 08:43
• Nothing (Vanna) Vanna, this hit me hard…that sense of emotional exhaustion where even...
  March 16th, 2026 08:41
• Affirmations (Freyaaa) Freyaaa, this hit me hard…that tension between knowing your worth and...
  March 16th, 2026 08:40
• A Shrine (Katie B.) Happy Sunday, Katie. This carries a powerful honesty…moving from the...
  March 15th, 2026 18:46
• The Instant Upon Us (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, the phrase “the present eternal” caught my attention right away....
  March 15th, 2026 18:45
• The horns (2781) Valiantstar, this unfolds as a prophetic spiritual call to...
  March 15th, 2026 18:44
• One for Scotty (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this brought back that feeling of remembering people who filled a...
  March 15th, 2026 18:44
• \"she cares\" (Arqios) arqios, the image of “her smile felt like sunlight sneaking past...
  March 15th, 2026 18:42
• Miricale (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this reads like a poetic anatomy of a tree…from roots to breath...
  March 15th, 2026 18:42
• Ring Over Net (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this is wonderfully vivid…you can feel the motion of the game...
  March 15th, 2026 18:41
• The Warning of March (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this unfolds like a classical narrative poem…Rome waking, the...
  March 15th, 2026 18:39
• Clarity (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, these feel like small philosophical snapshots…clarity arriving...
  March 15th, 2026 18:37
• SHORT THOUGHT (Serhat Doğan) Serhat, this reads as a brief philosophical reflection…warning against...
  March 14th, 2026 09:00
• All Things White (Katie B.) Katie, the image of the pond becoming glass and reflecting the tree...
  March 14th, 2026 08:53
• The Making of An Appetite (Neville) Neville, there’s a playful sensuality running through this…mirror...
  March 14th, 2026 08:51
• Lonely Isle Files (Mutley Ravishes) Mutley, what a scene...almost like it\'s out of some strange midnight...
  March 14th, 2026 08:48
• \"she” poem number 8 (Arqios) Arqios, this reads like a snapshot from another time…Walkman humming,...
  March 14th, 2026 08:46
• Remembering PG (Orchidee) Orchi, this is a tender tribute…you can feel the sincerity in the...
  March 14th, 2026 08:36
• Spilt criticism (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this carries a sharp honesty about the cost of putting real life...
  March 14th, 2026 08:31
• Prioritize yourself (NafisaSB) Safina, this reminds me how many people eventually reach that realization...
  March 14th, 2026 08:28
• Sinsiesta (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this gave me a good laugh…such a perfect snapshot of that...
  March 14th, 2026 08:27
• The Voice of the Sea (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this feels vast from the very first stanza…like standing at the...
  March 14th, 2026 08:26
• No More Visitors (Doggerel Dave) Dave, this reminded me of how every home seems to have its own strange...
  March 14th, 2026 08:25
• Dental Hygiene (Freyaaa) Freyaaa, the line where you say “Okay stop now / I can’t” is what...
  March 14th, 2026 08:22
• Lolita (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this feels like a thoughtful reckoning with a book that refuses...
  March 14th, 2026 08:20
• The Last Song (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this hit me hard…there’s such tenderness in the way you...
  March 14th, 2026 08:19
• The Time to Cherish Everlasting Dream... (Cellinic) Cellinic, this carries a heavy, reflective atmosphere. The references to...
  March 14th, 2026 08:18
• Searching For Leonardo (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries a quiet weight that lingers. The palette fading into...
  March 14th, 2026 08:16
• ONE MORE DAY (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, I really appreciate the calm tone running through this poem…...
  March 13th, 2026 09:11
• Stories (2781) Valiantstar, there’s a quiet searching spirit in this piece… it moves...
  March 13th, 2026 09:10
• Birthing (Katie B.) Katie, this resonates with me… that feeling of bringing a poem into the...
  March 13th, 2026 09:09
• God\'s Conspiracy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) My friend, this piece has a real rebellious energy… cultural reference,...
  March 13th, 2026 09:06
• More Than Just A Contented Man (Neville) Neville, this made me smile… sensual and cheeky, yet written with that...
  March 13th, 2026 09:03
• letting you go (Arqios) My friend, what a tender piece… the small objects, the quiet goodbye,...
  March 13th, 2026 09:01
• Delicious seeds (Sorenbarrett) My friend, reading this stirred that strange feeling when memory turns...
  March 13th, 2026 09:00
• Aquamarine (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this hit me with a quiet kind of awe…the whole poem feels like...
  March 13th, 2026 08:59
• Dog Days (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this has a really effective slow burn to it…each day quietly...
  March 12th, 2026 10:10
• Abducted (Katie B.) Katie, the idea of a perfectly arranged space that still feels empty or...
  March 12th, 2026 10:09
• Before the Bark, the Howl (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this has a strong mythic feel to it… the movement from wild...
  March 12th, 2026 10:08
• DANTE\'S IN-FOR-BORE (DeadRose) DeadRose, I smiled when I read your note about terza rima. One thing worth...
  March 12th, 2026 10:01
• In the Midst of Trials (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon, the line about life not being perfect but continuing to pray and...
  March 12th, 2026 09:56
• an architect’s aperture (Arqios) Arqios, this has a quiet sense of release running through it…the...
  March 12th, 2026 09:53
• The Multifidus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this made me smile… only you could turn anatomy into a tidy...
  March 12th, 2026 09:42
• Remembrance Requests (Orchidee) Bear with me, Orchi, this is going to take some concentration... I...
  March 12th, 2026 09:31
• Able (Sorenbarrett) Soren, I like how this acknowledges that people can endure and adapt to...
  March 12th, 2026 09:16
• The Quiet Flame (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this reads like a spiritual journey unfolding through nature,...
  March 12th, 2026 09:14
• Where silence weighs (Lore) Lore, this poem captures something many people feel but struggle to say…...
  March 12th, 2026 09:13
• Hedgehog (Caring dove) Caring Dove, this is very gentle and comforting… the image of a hedgehog...
  March 12th, 2026 09:12
• Life lessons From The Track (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this has real racing energy in it… short lines that hit like...
  March 12th, 2026 09:11
• white / Blanco (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos, this is a beautiful meditation on purity and stillness…the...
  March 12th, 2026 09:10
• Alright (2781) Valiantstar, the poem nicely balances excitement with the chaos that comes...
  March 11th, 2026 08:09
• Sun and Moon (Katie B.) Katie, I like how this poem moves through the cycle of day and night as if...
  March 11th, 2026 08:08
• drifter’s melody (Arqios) My friend, this reminded me how some relationships remain quietly present...
  March 11th, 2026 08:08
• I Will Press to Your Hand Soft and Kind (Cellinic) My friend, this reads like a meditation on love that persists through...
  March 11th, 2026 08:07
• Salvation Secured (Orchidee) Orchi, this captures the heart of Romans beautifully… the emphasis on...
  March 11th, 2026 08:04
• Society a hitcher (Sorenbarrett) Soren, there’s a compelling tension here between comfort and...
  March 11th, 2026 08:00
• The Lazy Student’s Grand Strategy (Efrain Cajar) Efrain, this was a delight to read… Tom feels like the kind of character...
  March 11th, 2026 07:58
• When Words Are Feared (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew, this resonates with the feeling that books carry more than...
  March 11th, 2026 07:56
• Hope (Katie B.) Amen. Indeed, it does. Profound in its simplicity, my friend....
  March 11th, 2026 07:52
• The Tragedy Of Fall (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this carries a beautiful melancholy… the way September begins in...
  March 11th, 2026 07:51
• Bypass The Passive Aggressive People (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this comes across with real clarity… that moment where patience...
  March 11th, 2026 07:50
• Arrival in Nod (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this one stayed with me…there’s a long road running through...
  March 10th, 2026 09:55
• Taking It Back (Tom Dylan) Tom, there’s real resolve in this piece. The memories start...
  March 10th, 2026 09:54