Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange
- Not of Dark but Light (Teddy.15)
That moment of offering him tea struck me, Teddy…intimate and strangely...
August 30th, 2025 09:16 - Embers (Sorenbarrett)
That closing image of dreams drifting away on smoke stayed with me, Soren....
August 30th, 2025 09:09 - Repost – Roll Up (2022) (Doggerel Dave)
That callback to polio really struck me, Dave. It grounds the urgency in...
August 30th, 2025 09:07 - The Price of War (It Makes Me Rich) (Alex Arnot)
My friend, this hit me hard…a visceral march of words that bleed...
August 29th, 2025 18:05 - Apollo’s call (Georgia Watson)
Beautifully crafted, Georgia. You’ve captured the weight of myth and...
August 29th, 2025 18:02 - Fate\'s Niagara (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Both are excellent, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2025 18:00 - Rose (Teddy.15)
Beautifully done, Teddy. You’ve captured the fragility and grace of life...
August 29th, 2025 17:54 - dogfight interlude (Arqios)
Arqios, this is pure joy, my friend. Whimsical and sharp all at once…the...
August 29th, 2025 17:51 - Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett)
Beautifully crafted, my friend. You’ve captured how desire can wound...
August 29th, 2025 17:49 - 28 August 2025 (Arqios)
Beautifully written, Rik. You’ve captured the grace of walking through...
August 28th, 2025 07:06 - The Heart of A Caregiver 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
This is heartfelt and moving, my friend…the honesty of the struggle and...
August 28th, 2025 07:04 - After the fall (Sorenbarrett)
Winter is definitely not my favorite season and, even now, as I feel the...
August 28th, 2025 07:02 - The Light Blushed and the Lashes Dreamed (Salvia.S)
Ooh...published right after mine, I am not sure how I missed this, dearest...
August 27th, 2025 20:42 - Tapped Out (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well done! Read while sitting atop Little Round Top in Gettysburg!...
August 27th, 2025 14:13 - Words of destiny. (Friendship)
This is luminous, my friend. Every stanza glows with purpose and...
August 27th, 2025 14:12 - a poem is a verb (Arqios)
3. Affirmation First
Beautifully crafted, my friend. You captured poetry...
August 27th, 2025 14:10 - Colours of the Great Oak (Teddy.15)
Teddy, this reads with such warmth…like sitting in that very glow you...
August 27th, 2025 14:07 - Avocado (Sorenbarrett)
Reading this felt like standing in an orchard of truths…growth, care,...
August 27th, 2025 13:05 - A Robot Worker, In The Gym (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Fun poem, my friend! What’s next…right?
August 27th, 2025 13:03 - Fake Nudes (Neville)
Neville, this is raw and striking…brief but full of longing, memory, and...
August 26th, 2025 14:34 - Skirting The Downside (Kurt Philip Behm)
The contrast is well presented here, my friend. Well done!...
August 26th, 2025 14:32 - In Times of Doubt (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Powerful. That line...“for each pain has its own purpose, which can be...
August 26th, 2025 14:28 - WISH GRANTED (Rebellion_in_sanity)
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into...
August 26th, 2025 14:20 - At harmony with the rain. (Friendship)
Reading this felt like being right there...eyes closed, rain soaking,...
August 26th, 2025 08:23 - So, You\'re Telling Me...? (Cheeky Missy)
That moment with Tigger in your lap and Peter at your side...pure love....
August 26th, 2025 08:22 - The band (Sorenbarrett)
Wow, reading this felt like listening in on nature’s secret...
August 26th, 2025 08:17 - gated folds (Arqios)
This is haunting…gate-light, wounds, fog folding a name. It feels like...
August 26th, 2025 08:15 - Wind of Verses (Priya Tomar)
Priya, this is lovely…the way you thread subjects and languages into a...
August 26th, 2025 08:09 - Oh, I Dunno. (Cheeky Missy)
Missy, I love how these capture the texture of your days—cats and brie...
August 25th, 2025 19:32 - Borderless (Kurt Philip Behm)
Great job on this!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 25th, 2025 19:27 - Where Are the Swallowed Clocks That Held Back Our Morning? (Gaias Soothing Haven)
Wonderful write, form and all. No easy feat. Well done!...
August 25th, 2025 19:26 - Slow it Down (Thomas W Case)
Aren’t we though?!?! 🥜🌰🤣 Great write, Thomas!!!...
August 25th, 2025 19:24 - The Storms of Life (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
That line—“for every storm runs out of rain”—stood out. Simple and...
August 25th, 2025 07:58 - a clockwork orangerie (Arqios)
Arqios, this is mesmerizing…the fusion of gears, vines, and suns feels...
August 25th, 2025 07:56 - Blood and bone (Sorenbarrett)
Whoa! That scene with the ants crawling...ruthless, impossible to...
August 25th, 2025 07:53 - Disillusioned (NafisaSB)
Buyer\'s shock or remorse should not be a thing after reading this poem....
August 25th, 2025 07:36 - in my bed, all alone (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
My friend, this is raw and powerful and, sadly for me, all too relatable....
August 25th, 2025 07:34 - The Crying Tree (Friendship)
Reading this felt like standing beneath that tree myself…where sorrow...
August 25th, 2025 07:31 - Racism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
💯 This…yes!!!! Now for the 🤡 🤡 who keep insisting their...
August 25th, 2025 04:59 - Just Three (Kurt Philip Behm)
Reading this felt like sitting in that liminal space…between sleep and...
August 24th, 2025 18:35 - George Committed Suicide (Rebellion_in_sanity)
That moment where debt is called “a blessing of the country and not a...
August 24th, 2025 18:33 - Believe Me: I Made a List (Cheeky Missy)
Exactly, Missy…those strawberry and basil lines stayed with me...in...
August 24th, 2025 18:32 - \"the question\" (Arqios)
Rik, this is beautiful. The imagery is alive...the shy bird, the rain...
August 24th, 2025 18:30 - All Items Numbered 204 (Neville)
Dearest Neville, reading this felt like being handed keepsakes...smells,...
August 24th, 2025 18:28 - A Hole Lot Of Light (Teddy.15)
Teddy, I loved this. The wordplay in the title makes the whole poem...
August 24th, 2025 18:27 - Bearded sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this is strong…your beard as chainmail, each strand carrying...
August 24th, 2025 18:24 - I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember (NinjaGirl)
Oh, my dear friend. I could already feel your pain in the title and the...
August 24th, 2025 17:51 - Girlhood (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Excellent! That moment under the sprinkler stopped me. The casual “oh,...
August 24th, 2025 17:39 - To Sergei (Kurt Philip Behm)
Excellent job, Kurt!
August 23rd, 2025 16:44 - Dazzled (Damaso)
Damaso, this is 🔥. The Master and the Savage tearing at the same...
August 23rd, 2025 16:43 - Porlock (Neville)
Neville, this paints peace…the boats, the fields, the quiet broken only...
August 23rd, 2025 16:40 - Before It\'s Too Late (Teddy.15)
Reading this, I felt the weight of what we’re up against. Like you, I...
August 23rd, 2025 16:39 - Mirrored pool of Hermes (Sorenbarrett)
That image of “letters fall in drops of words forming streams into...
August 23rd, 2025 16:37 - Allures in Illusions (Salvia.S)
Wow! This haiku-like poem is brilliant, dearest Salvia. It is a simple yet...
August 23rd, 2025 05:49 - Untouchable, Unlovable (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Reading this, I felt the pull between desire and inability…the kind of...
August 21st, 2025 13:18 - Taste Buds (Teddy.15)
Truth. Poetic, poised, philosophical. A truly wonderful poem, my friend!...
August 21st, 2025 13:16 - Tropic Of Capricorn (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
It was the pairing of “killing time without wounding eternity” that...
August 21st, 2025 13:11 - Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy)
My friend, what a span of sonnets you’ve shared here. Each one breathes...
August 21st, 2025 13:10 - In The Stillness of His Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
This piece feels like an invitation to lay our restless striving down and...
August 21st, 2025 08:13 - This Planet / God Commands It (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Again...TRUTH TRUTH TRUTH! You are on a roll, my friend. Then again, you...
August 21st, 2025 08:11 - The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell)
I heard someone call me. Grave digger has arrived! 🪦 🤣 My silliness...
August 21st, 2025 08:09 - Wind (Sorenbarrett)
Mariah named, and Mariah sung...your wind becomes voice, lament, and...
August 21st, 2025 08:07 - eye of the beholder (Arqios)
Arqios, this is stunning...technical language woven into living poetry....
August 21st, 2025 08:05 - New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes)
I really like how you framed the left and right as the winning combo,...
August 21st, 2025 08:04 - Don\'t Stand so Close (Thomas W Case)
This was a fun ride, my friend…threading titles and lyrics into...
August 20th, 2025 20:08 - Where love turns to sighs. (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
A strong and haunting piece, my friend. You gave voice to wounds too often...
August 20th, 2025 20:07 - The Mirror Says Aye (Rebellion_in_sanity)
That title grabbed me right away, my friend…and the poem more than lived...
August 20th, 2025 20:06 - Mt. Zero-Sum (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
That line “its summit has a thousand fathers, whose abyss awaits the...
August 20th, 2025 20:04 - Who Had A Better Label? (Cheeky Missy)
That image of Tigger darting beneath your legs like a child seeking refuge...
August 20th, 2025 20:02 - To create something from scratch. (Friendship)
This is a beautiful vision, my friend…friendship crafted like starlight,...
August 20th, 2025 20:01 - The Making of the Dawn (Tony Grannell)
That phrase “born a light in its believing” really lingers in all the...
August 20th, 2025 20:00 - we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios)
Another superbly strong piece, my friend. Sparse, sharp, and human...it...
August 20th, 2025 19:58 - Solitude is Blessing (Priya Tomar)
Priya, this one carries such quiet strength…solitude painted as...
August 20th, 2025 19:57 - Seasons (Sorenbarrett)
A strong piece, my friend. You captured the cycle...death, rest, and...
August 20th, 2025 19:56 - Born To Be A Rebel (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Truth. Amen. Truth. Amen. You see the pattern in my response by now,...
August 20th, 2025 19:53 - Sculpture (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Wow! That line “if fear is the heart of love, you are most terrifying”...
August 20th, 2025 19:51 - Bet (Damaso)
A strong piece, my friend. Violent and visionary all at once, where abyss...
August 20th, 2025 19:50 - Of Eating, Growing Up, and Kissing Scenes (Cheeky Missy)
That touch about Strauss and Tales From the Vienna Woods really struck me,...
August 20th, 2025 19:49 - Oh, a child’s mind. (Georgia Watson)
Another strong poem, Georgia. That final turn...“Curiosity killed the...
August 19th, 2025 07:48 - To Them Who... (Tony Grannell)
A strong piece, my friend. Feels like a ballad of labor and life, lifting...
August 19th, 2025 07:45 - Service Suspended. (Poetic Licence)
Hell yeah (pun totally intended)! That closing...Room 666, God’s...
August 19th, 2025 07:39 - Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan)
Love Bruce Lee, so that line—“Be water my friend”...really sticks...
August 19th, 2025 07:37 - Elixir of life (Sorenbarrett)
Soren, this one breathes with primal force…void, fire, bone...all moving...
August 19th, 2025 07:35 - simple sample (Arqios)
A powerful piece, my friend. You captured the shift from quiet hope to...
August 19th, 2025 07:33 - Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville)
First, I have to get this out out of the way: OUCH! LOL! That aside...the...
August 19th, 2025 07:31 - Soup (Teddy.15)
Strong piece, Teddy. The Sylvia Plath shadow is right there...dear...
August 19th, 2025 07:28 - I’d let the world burn for you. (Georgia Watson)
Georgia, this poem blazes straight through…love and fire hand in hand....
August 19th, 2025 07:26 - Burning Letters (Priya Tomar)
A powerful piece, Priya. The bangles, anklets, and flute all carry such...
August 19th, 2025 07:23 - Occam Says ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Occam\'s razor is sharpened on this whetting stone of a poem, my dear...
August 19th, 2025 07:19 - What Would You Do For A Collar? (Cheeky Missy)
I think I\'ve shared my love of Tigger with you before, but that image of...
August 19th, 2025 07:18 - Top Drawer (Teddy.15)
I have several \"drawers\" that way. I know of the magic you speak! 🤣...
August 19th, 2025 07:14 - We Have All Been There (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
This hit me hard, my friend…the way faith and failure are woven together...
August 19th, 2025 07:12 - Dead-man\'s Chest (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s...
August 19th, 2025 07:10 - Missing Persons Report (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Beautifully crafted, Hayleigh. The stillness is unnerving…each line...
August 19th, 2025 07:09 - Trapped. (Friendship)
My friend, this carries a raw weight…the kind of truth you can’t just...
August 19th, 2025 07:05 - Pork Pies (Orchidee)
Oh boy. Pork pies. I know some of them had spinach, because well, Popeye...
August 19th, 2025 07:00 - Facing Empire (Tony Grannell)
Tony, my dear friend, this thunders with the cadence of old war...
August 19th, 2025 06:54 - What is greatness (Sorenbarrett)
What struck me here, Soren, is the sharp reminder that greatness doesn’t...
August 19th, 2025 06:51 - clarity (Arqios)
Love the poem text image my friend! Really fits well. Love the poem too. A...
August 19th, 2025 06:46 - Vlad (My Friend)!!. (Poetic Licence)
This is sharp satire, Tobani and I love it, my friend. I love that it is...
August 19th, 2025 06:43
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