Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• The Shoes (Thomas W Case) I concur with Kevin! A poem with Sole! Wonderful job, my friend!...
  November 27th, 2025 07:08
• My Actions (NinjaGirl) 🥷, my friend… the innocence, the accident, the sudden grief… you...
  November 27th, 2025 07:07
• The Immeasurable Want {Lust} (Friendship) First comment! Yay!!! Friendship, this burns hot… the bigger meaning,...
  November 26th, 2025 11:30
• forever keep silent (Arqios) My friend, this reads like memory carved into stone… restrained, brutal,...
  November 26th, 2025 11:29
• Love Smoke (Paul Bell) Paul, you balance humor, heartbreak, and resignation in one clean sweep…...
  November 26th, 2025 11:28
• Ambiguous (2781) LOL! Loved this!
  November 26th, 2025 11:25
• The Living And The Lifeless (Orchidee) Great job Orchi! By the title, I thought you were differentiating between...
  November 26th, 2025 11:24
• The Fastest Man Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love, love, love The Flash...a fave from me, mate!
  November 26th, 2025 11:23
• America (Sorenbarrett) My friend, you blend prophecy, satire, and lament in a way only you...
  November 26th, 2025 11:22
• Fearing God (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) 😳 Whoa! Glad you did. There really are psychos out there...and I don\'t...
  November 26th, 2025 11:06
• Young love is silly (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Well done. Indeed, it feels less parents are, well, parenting nowadays. As...
  November 26th, 2025 08:11
• A Magnificent Day (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, you turned a cultural fracture into a clean, steady...
  November 25th, 2025 23:32
• Pass The Turkey You S.O.B. (Kurt Philip Behm) To think that the root word of politics is \"polite\". Does one 🤣 or...
  November 25th, 2025 23:31
• 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔖𝔢𝔢 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔐𝔶 𝔏𝔦𝔣𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Dearest Kiki, this moves like an opened window… soft, honest, a little...
  November 25th, 2025 23:29
• river’s ardent flame (Arqios) Rik, the way you let memory flicker through Argand flame… the way the...
  November 25th, 2025 23:20
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) Great hymn poem too. Whew...snuck that in before ....do you hear that...
  November 25th, 2025 23:15
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) Plenty is temporary...Ah-gah-gah-gah-glug-glug.... Sadly, that is not...
  November 25th, 2025 23:07
• There is no love (Sorenbarrett) My friend… the metaphors cut deep… the priest, the teacher, the poet,...
  November 25th, 2025 23:06
• True Civilisation (Rebellion_in_sanity) My friend… the way you move from celebration to the cold streets… from...
  November 25th, 2025 23:04
• Urania (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend… this is warm, grounded, and full of spark. The way you frame...
  November 25th, 2025 23:03
• 𝒜𝒹𝓋𝒾𝓈ℯ 𝓂ℯ 𝒩ℴ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you got me with this one… the softness, the switch-ups, the little...
  November 25th, 2025 15:43
• Get off the Bus (Thomas W Case) Excellent job, Thomas! And I ever do so concur with our good friends...
  November 25th, 2025 15:40
• Lucifer Resents Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I mean...true story! LOL! Short, sweet, to the point. Well done, friend!
  November 24th, 2025 08:54
• Brenda (Paul Bell) Paul, this is pure unhinged brilliance…a whole sitcom squeezed into a...
  November 24th, 2025 08:53
• self-deprecation (Arqios) My friend, this one cracks like a whip…the grit, the bite, the full-on...
  November 24th, 2025 08:52
• Seek And Find (Orchidee) There was a sailor named P, He ate spinach till he was green. Cause he...
  November 24th, 2025 08:51
• Sleep (Sorenbarrett) My friend, this reminds me of those mornings where everything feels muted...
  November 24th, 2025 08:47
• LIMERICK 146  (Michael Edwards) Bwahahahaha! Yikes 😳🤣 Another great laugh had, my friend! Love your...
  November 24th, 2025 08:46
• funny little thing (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this one hits with a soft ache…the tug-of-war between affection...
  November 24th, 2025 08:45
• Creation (Bella Shepard) Ignorance is a cancer, no? Amen. Come, Lord Jesus. A straightforward,...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:17
• Am I what if (2781) My friend, there’s a tenderness in this…a heart reaching through doubt...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:15
• Wings In Song (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt…this pairing is luminous…voice becoming flight, wisdom becoming...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:13
• The Two Faces Of War (Paul Bell) Paul…this hits like shrapnel…the way you braid tenderness and horror...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:09
• tu me manques (what Fox says) (Arqios) Arqios…that line “not grammar but ache” is stunning…it says...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:08
• The wine cellar (Sorenbarrett) Soren…this hits like a door cracking open in the dark…I feel the...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:06
• ℑ 𝔇𝔬 𝔚𝔞𝔫𝔱 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔊𝔬 𝔅𝔶 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki…this feels like frozen time cracking open into sugar, shadow, and...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:05
• TAINTED EMOTION (David Welch) Well written, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 16:02
• Summer \'67 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Wow! No marginal error (sorry, couldn\'t help the pun)...this is cute and...
  November 23rd, 2025 16:01
• Bats in the belfry (2781) Bats out of hell friggin\' yes!!! Excellent, my friend! A fave!...
  November 23rd, 2025 15:45
• The Money Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, hello handsome! Can you give me INSURANCE...erm...ASSURANCE that I...
  November 23rd, 2025 15:37
• Letters from Heaven (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) And...God calls...still! Amen, dearest friend and sister in Christ. Amen....
  November 23rd, 2025 15:18
• Blood On The Toll Booth (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent job, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 15:15
• That Damn Vagabond Wind (Thomas W Case) Excellent, Thomas! Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 23rd, 2025 15:14
• senior formal (prom) (Arqios) arqios, this feels like nostalgia with a pulse… the shimmer, the ache,...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:32
• Walk (NafisaSB) My friend, the graveyard, the shadows, the aging body… then the gentler...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:30
• At end of day (Sorenbarrett) My friend, that line about being a sharecropper of death… that one...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:27
• 𝔄𝔭𝔭𝔯𝔢𝔠𝔦𝔞𝔱𝔢 𝔜𝔢𝔱 𝔑𝔢𝔳𝔢𝔯 𝔉𝔬𝔯𝔤𝔬𝔱𝔱𝔢𝔫 (Keyara S Trotman) My dearest Kiki, the ornate script and the raw confession make a striking...
  November 22nd, 2025 08:25
• Adieu (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this lands like a quiet letting go…heavy body, free spirit…and...
  November 21st, 2025 11:33
• Listened to Boone Self Meditation (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this whole piece feels like someone trying to steady their own pulse...
  November 21st, 2025 11:31
• more than scribbles (Arqios) Rik, this lands with a calm sort of inevitability… the moment the line...
  November 21st, 2025 11:31
• Remember Reliance (Orchidee) Orchi, you shape this passage into something that feels sung… steady...
  November 21st, 2025 11:28
• A thousand (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this one feels gentle and reflective the whole way through… like...
  November 21st, 2025 11:24
• Nervosa (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, I know that thinning-out feeling… the slow wearing down...
  November 21st, 2025 11:23
• Forgive the Pug (Thomas W Case) Love the shameless plug! Good luck, Thomas! Rock on!...
  November 21st, 2025 11:18
• Cop that (2781) Valiantstar, reading this felt like listening to someone finally say...
  November 20th, 2025 12:16
• Tomorrow\'s Child (Kurt Philip Behm) Yesterday\'s troll, indeed. Well done on this....
  November 20th, 2025 12:14
• 𝒜𝒹𝓂𝒾𝓇ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, reading this felt like listening to someone talk in the...
  November 20th, 2025 12:14
• Lost without a soul (Paul Bell) Paul, this whole piece moves like a hard march through trauma...jungle,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:12
• my only hymn (Arqios) Arqios, this is a slow descent through grief’s waterline…salt, spear,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:11
• Resting And Relying (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows like sung history…battle, prayer, trust, triumph. You...
  November 20th, 2025 12:09
• Vine (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is gorgeous…old-world cadence with a sharp emotional bite....
  November 20th, 2025 12:06
• Siren caught the Sailor (NinjaGirl) Every damn time, too! Don\'t they learn...they being men in general! LOL!...
  November 20th, 2025 12:05
• It\'s you (2781) My friend, this carries a strong devotional pulse…raw faith, longing,...
  November 20th, 2025 12:04
• New Moments (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent writes, both of them are, Kurt!
  November 20th, 2025 12:02
• ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE (David Welch) David, this piece carries grit and truth…the music, the characters, the...
  November 19th, 2025 10:30
• Put It Back (Bella Shepard) Bella, not sure how I missed this...but here I am! This whole piece moves...
  November 19th, 2025 10:24
• the road ahead (Arqios) Arqios, this whole piece moves with quiet wisdom…loss, realism,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:55
• Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee) Orchi, this flows like a sung prayer…faithful, rooted, anchored in the...
  November 19th, 2025 09:54
• Genesis (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this hits hard…mythic, modern, and brutal. You wrapped Genesis,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:52
• 𝒲𝒶𝓉𝒸𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈... (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this one is wild in the best way…the swirl, the glitch, the myth,...
  November 19th, 2025 09:52
• Chef-Shocked (Mutley Ravishes) Profound and though-provoking. And yeah...the Matrix is real friend. You...
  November 19th, 2025 09:50
• Symbiotic Fratricide (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this hits with a sharp clarity…the way you frame truth and falsity...
  November 19th, 2025 09:49
• This is a Mess (Thomas W Case) Wow! Spiritually profound and deeply human, as your work is Thomas...this...
  November 19th, 2025 09:47
• The Fog and the Fever (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh… the permanent daze… the dream that feels safer than...
  November 18th, 2025 20:56
• Three the Hard Way (Demar Desu) Still missing your work, my man. One can hope for a return, right? Hope...
  November 18th, 2025 09:52
• Empty (Sorenbarrett) Soren… I know that feeling of something once alive now standing still....
  November 18th, 2025 09:51
• The Book Of Shaun Matthew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well, I\'ve written The Book of Tittu and now the Book of Shaun Matthew...
  November 18th, 2025 09:45
• \'Seasons Go Round ...\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Truth! Have not been on the Tappan Zee Bridge in some time. Well done,...
  November 17th, 2025 18:16
• hello poetry (Arqios) My friend, this moves with such reverence…ink as breath, pauses as...
  November 17th, 2025 13:35
• A Renewed Prescence (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Everything Soren said. Well done, my friend!
  November 17th, 2025 12:55
• Rose (Sorenbarrett) Soren, that moment where “seeds of fornication slip from your...
  November 17th, 2025 12:52
• ODD AND ODDER (5) (Michael Edwards) And how! 🤣💨. Loved this Michael!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  November 17th, 2025 12:42
• 𝔄𝔫𝔡 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱\'𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔄𝔟𝔬𝔲𝔱 ℑ𝔱 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this feels like one of those days where thoughts loop and you just...
  November 17th, 2025 12:40
• Coming Home (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this hit with real tenderness…you carried Henry’s final...
  November 17th, 2025 12:34
• The Sand and the Sea (Paul Bell) Paul, this piece carries such quiet bravery…the struggle, the fear, the...
  November 17th, 2025 12:33
• ℜ𝔢𝔠𝔦𝔱𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, you’ve got this wild, swirling way of writing…soft edges, hidden...
  November 17th, 2025 11:31
• in the kitchen drawer (Arqios) My friend, this whole piece moves with such controlled intimacy...the...
  November 17th, 2025 11:29
• random inaccess (Arqios) Arqios, the whole piece breathes like someone moving through exile inside...
  November 15th, 2025 08:09
• Assumptions (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the way you link the natural world to our treatment of children is...
  November 15th, 2025 08:06
• The merry-go-round (NafisaSB) Safina, the shifts from storm to sunlight, from fear to song, make this...
  November 15th, 2025 08:05
• ℱ𝒾ℯ𝓇𝓎 𝒢ℴℴ𝒹𝓃ℯ𝓈𝓈 ℰ𝓃𝒿ℴ𝓎 ℐ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) My friend, this moves with your signature mix of beauty and warning…soft...
  November 15th, 2025 08:04
• Continuance of Submission (Rebellion_in_sanity) Amen to your comment! 🤣 My friend, this carries the weight of loss and...
  November 15th, 2025 07:48
• A Common Ground (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) My friend, this chapter carries heart, timing, and a bit of destiny woven...
  November 15th, 2025 07:44
• Contradicting Thoughts (NinjaGirl) 🥷, this hits like two voices wrestling in the same chest…hope and...
  November 14th, 2025 14:50
• Safely Surrounded (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi….no one is safely surrounded…but surrounded...
  November 14th, 2025 14:49
• November Witchery (Jerry Reynolds) Any kind of witchery is wonderful to me! But, yes, that November Witchery...
  November 14th, 2025 14:46
• signals (Arqios) My friend, the whole piece hangs on that fragile line between hope and...
  November 14th, 2025 14:43
• The Village of Trill (Paul Bell) My friend, this had me cracking up…absolute chaos from start to finish....
  November 14th, 2025 14:42
• Crickets and frogs (Sorenbarrett) My friend, the whole piece settles in like warm dusk…the jasmine, the...
  November 14th, 2025 14:40
• 𝔄 𝔪𝔬𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱 𝔬𝔣 𝔖𝔬𝔩𝔦𝔱𝔲𝔡𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) Kiki, this has such a gentle quiet to it…like the kind of solitude that...
  November 14th, 2025 14:30