Comments on community poems by Neville
- Survive Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
How extraordinarily bloomin true sir... I have always believed that a...
November 2nd, 2020 03:54 - The Queens Gambit (FineB)
I have often wondered why we tend to associate chess with males when...
November 1st, 2020 17:03 - UNRELATED (1, 2, 3) (Michael Edwards)
three of the best Michael .. and like GF60, I too like the last one an...
November 1st, 2020 16:58 - Saints Splendorous (Orchidee)
a splendid hymn poem if ever there woz ......................
November 1st, 2020 09:24 - april (Dusk arising)
there be beauty here sir and an abundance of it too ... simply gurt lush...
November 1st, 2020 08:54 - Heydays (Fay Slimm.)
In days of yore when men were men ... ah\' how I just love to be...
November 1st, 2020 08:50 - And So the Waves Whispered... (Dove)
what a beautiful title and followed closely by three perfectly precise...
October 30th, 2020 04:09 - Unruly (L. B. Mek)
I am write there beside you my friend ... this art, this craft of ours...
October 29th, 2020 04:57 - Language and Music. (Goldfinch60)
indeed, music does have the capacity to communicate across language,...
October 29th, 2020 03:35 - Death Destroyed - Isaiah Series (13) (Orchidee)
when you say spiritual, you aint been on the pop again have you ..
I...
October 28th, 2020 07:32 - bored through overkill (Dusk arising)
No one aint gonna argue with none of it ................ dont they .. ...
October 28th, 2020 05:13 - Remainers (Fay Slimm.)
Delicious aint the word... made me order another bottle of Ribena for...
October 28th, 2020 05:09 - Tides of Fortune. (Goldfinch60)
it\'s life Goldie.. and just as we know it ...
well captured sir ...
October 28th, 2020 02:33 - One with Nature (Dove)
some just dont get it .. tis their loss.. what could possibly be better...
October 27th, 2020 14:16 - Changing (Fay Slimm.)
some folk\'ll stop at nowt just to get a bit o what they fancy...
October 27th, 2020 12:23 - Endeavouring Elucidations (Orchidee)
I\'m gonna give you top marks for your title alone ...
October 27th, 2020 09:25 - Tall Tales (Fay Slimm.)
I would have given nigh on a months pension to have written \'Tall Tales\'...
October 27th, 2020 08:22 - becalmed beyond escape (Dusk arising)
...this is quite simply magnificent DA.. brevity at its very best and no...
October 27th, 2020 07:16 - you ask me why? (Dusk arising)
beautiful words indeed DA .. there will be many out here that will...
October 25th, 2020 03:20 - Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
in a world of contrasts, there is a unity of opposites .. it is very...
October 25th, 2020 03:12 - Borrowed Time (BoxMyHeart)
I think a song with the melody built around your words would probably...
October 25th, 2020 03:03 - Commitment (Fay Slimm.)
wow... now let this be a lesson to all you would be philanderers and...
October 24th, 2020 12:27 - Just a second, or an hour...... (Orchidee)
a change is as good as a rest isn\'t it ... I like it when you take a...
October 24th, 2020 11:46 - Chemistry of Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Love it
Over and over
Very well said
Einsteinium, indeed...
October 21st, 2020 00:36 - go then (Dusk arising)
There is nothing I could say that has not already been written about...
October 20th, 2020 15:48 - Lonely River Song (MendedFences27)
its not over until the fat lady sings ..
I imagine this to have been...
October 20th, 2020 15:37 - Nebulous (Fay Slimm.)
I can not imagine or think of a more fitting image to accompany these...
October 20th, 2020 08:28 - Holistic Heart-Spring (Orchidee)
Best be sober when going to prayer .. you never know who might be...
October 20th, 2020 08:24 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
I have visited each of your two current posted poems here before and on...
October 17th, 2020 04:37 - Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
Driving into daylight would make a great title .. bugga .. would you...
October 17th, 2020 04:32 - Hopeful Help - Isaiah Series (8) (Orchidee)
A fine write O.
October 16th, 2020 08:47 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
No one that can hold a pen, or tap a keyboard key .. and certainly not...
October 16th, 2020 06:45 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
November ... aargh, and arguably my least favourite of all the months .....
October 16th, 2020 06:41 - One Summer’s Day (Dove)
A delightful little meander along the beach and prom ... thank you for...
October 14th, 2020 14:10 - Taste of Temptation (Dove)
I just had to come back for more ...... you could say tempted, but...
October 14th, 2020 13:59 - LIVERPOOL ~ SILENCED BY COVID 19 ~ AN ACROSTIC EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I sincerely hope things improve for Liverpool and indeed all those other...
October 14th, 2020 07:33 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
History re-writ ..
and I thought it was one of Orchidee\'s delusions...
October 14th, 2020 04:31 - Merry Mirth And Madness (Orchidee)
you can beat an egg.. but ya know that by now ... but you just cant beat...
October 14th, 2020 04:18 - Raptoring. (Fay Slimm.)
You nailed the un-nailable with this perfect depiction of a magnificent...
October 14th, 2020 04:16 - Sincere Servant - Isaiah Series (6) (Orchidee)
I consider myself more a smoking flax than a bruised reed ..
I guess...
October 13th, 2020 12:07 - upon midnight (Dusk arising)
I felt another visit here was well worth it DA ...
seriously...
October 13th, 2020 07:05 - The Arrows of Time (Lorna)
This is filled with an important and poignant message of truth for all...
October 13th, 2020 06:59 - Awayness (Fay Slimm.)
this is another one of them Fay Slimm poems that makes the reader suck...
October 13th, 2020 04:27 - Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60)
This is so very true Andy sir.. the trick is not to give up and to maybe...
October 13th, 2020 02:18 - Last one before sun (Poetic Dan)
You must keep writing .. you have a real and rare talent for expressing...
October 12th, 2020 14:59 - Peoples Praises (Orchidee)
I have never really thought about it before, but yes, I imagine working...
October 12th, 2020 07:20 - The Four Letter Word (Lorna)
tis my most favouritest of four letter words, in the whole widest world...
October 12th, 2020 06:59 - Tracks. (Fay Slimm.)
This has a special place in my heart ..
a perfectly poemed depiction of...
October 12th, 2020 04:11 - Taste of Temptation (Dove)
I was gonna ask for a double in the first place ...
This is very good...
October 11th, 2020 16:21 - Lunch at My House (Lorna)
God speed the lettuce.. all is well
You didn\'t happen to break a...
October 11th, 2020 05:02 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
scintillatingly sensual & here\'s a bloke that knows a thing or two...
October 11th, 2020 04:25 - Affectionate Attention (Orchidee)
we all like a bit of that from time to time dont we just ...
October 11th, 2020 02:49 - Was it just a Dream (Dove)
a re-visit .. just because I can .. and because I think these words are...
October 11th, 2020 02:06 - Missed With a Smile. (Goldfinch60)
these things are sent to try us ... and sometimes, they just make our...
October 11th, 2020 01:47 - Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60)
I note you have been thinking again GF60 .. well, for what its worth...
October 11th, 2020 01:09 - So dark, I can\'t find a smile (Poetic Dan)
Listen to the little golden bird Dan .. He is a wise old bird indeed &...
October 11th, 2020 01:03 - Sunshine (Dove)
I doubt anyone can read these words without feeling a little warm glow .....
October 11th, 2020 00:57 - Victory Vindicated (Orchidee)
I dont know how you can mention Trump like that in a hymn poem .. dont...
October 10th, 2020 12:35 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
I am more than happy you have re-posted ..
this is my single most...
October 10th, 2020 09:07 - Never Forget (Fay Slimm.)
these words, so perfectly laid, one after the other almost brought tears...
October 10th, 2020 08:01 - The Things They Do (Lorna)
said beautifully .... and I want some of it ...
October 10th, 2020 04:58 - Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely true ... a universal truth too ...
October 10th, 2020 03:08 - Boris (Dusk arising)
another visit .. just to say I agree with you entirely and to take...
October 9th, 2020 11:49 - Balaam\'s Oracles (4) (Orchidee)
Not completely forgotten though .. and maybe that is one of your major...
October 9th, 2020 11:17 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
I am always amazed at the sheer tenacity and drive to survive many of...
October 9th, 2020 11:06 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
I know where ya coming from my friend ... but make sure you keep ya eye...
October 9th, 2020 02:50 - arms trade (Dusk arising)
These words are certainly worthy of a second visit .... now dont that...
October 8th, 2020 17:10 - Thirstless Times - Isaiah Series (5) (Orchidee)
Not quite sure what to make of this one Orchidee ..
I found it a...
October 8th, 2020 11:14 - Bucket List Senryu (Lorna)
superb ... how I wish I was your pen ..
October 8th, 2020 04:05 - Trenched. (Fay Slimm.)
said just as it was then, and as it needs to be said .. over and over...
October 8th, 2020 03:35 - Sedoka : Glow of Soft Moonlight (Dove)
I thought they made watches ....
.... actually this is not only very...
October 7th, 2020 11:34 - Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
I have a missing G string & Key on my bloomin uitar and PC .. now I\'m...
October 7th, 2020 08:27 - Praise Professions (Orchidee)
I kinda like this hymn ... and poem
October 7th, 2020 07:02 - Renzi (Dusk arising)
I dont know why I never came across this poem before now ... and a fine...
October 7th, 2020 06:50 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
well you got the sky covered & who is gonna argue with Phoebus eh\' ... ...
October 7th, 2020 06:43 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
Nice un GF60 .. and only people make us cry ......
October 7th, 2020 06:39 - ALPACA SOCKS (Michael Edwards)
Not only hilarious and very niftily clever sir ... but a mighty...
October 7th, 2020 02:18 - ESCAPE (Laura🌻)
It has been over a year now since I found these words .. and my word,...
October 7th, 2020 00:59 - Fear (Dove)
there is not a single thing that I knowingly fear .. I do dread the...
October 7th, 2020 00:53 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
This is so bloomin well structured and fits the page which frames it...
October 6th, 2020 11:43 - Seize Now (Fay Slimm.)
another perfect title to introduce the body of a poem that is itself...
October 6th, 2020 11:32 - Practising And Preaching (Orchidee)
I quite like drums and drummers and whilst the guy in the clip aint...
October 6th, 2020 11:28 - For A While (Lorna)
this is one of those that invokes a slow and steady sigh ...
filled...
October 6th, 2020 04:40 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
there will never be another year for you Goldie as bad as the one just...
October 6th, 2020 02:49 - Lost Loves Memories (Suresh)
there is indeed more than just a tinge of sadness here.... ...
October 5th, 2020 16:30 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
You can beat an egg can\'t ya .. but you just cant beat a really good...
October 5th, 2020 10:11 - Fearless Faith - Isaiah Series (4) (Orchidee)
I had an auntie Faith .. she was a missionary in Africa .. and she was ...
October 5th, 2020 09:56 - Beauty (Dove)
This appeals to me no end .. so well writ and of course timely .......
October 5th, 2020 05:15 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m with the guinea pig opposite Andy .. that\'s a fine list of joys...
October 5th, 2020 04:51 - I Want Her (To Be Mine) (Hpoetry)
this is really quite something .. it is clear to your reader that you...
October 4th, 2020 15:36 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
I read ya loud n clear .. in between chuckles that is...
October 4th, 2020 12:37 - the sea (Dusk arising)
this has got the ache I used to recognise in the faces of folk I used to...
October 4th, 2020 12:32 - Kites (Lorna)
this is more than just a little Sunday whimsey .... this is the making...
October 4th, 2020 12:21 - DON’T YOU? (Laura🌻)
these words are still applicable ... unfortunately, they are timeless...
October 4th, 2020 06:15 - Sweetness. (Fay Slimm.)
I was drawn not like a poultice or a pen might draw one ..
.. but by...
October 4th, 2020 06:12 - Creation Collaboration (Orchidee)
I like animals & the idea of St\' Frank appeals to me greatly .......
October 4th, 2020 05:50 - I’m Leaning Towards Insane (Dove)
Reads like a rainbow ..
Ya need to dive right in ... when ya surface...
October 3rd, 2020 12:50 - Woof, woof! (Orchidee)
I like your very occasional \'not hymn poems\' Orchidee .. this one...
October 3rd, 2020 05:10 - Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.)
DA just took the words outa my own mouth .. this is another fine example...
October 3rd, 2020 04:45 - The Winds on Which We Sail (Lorna)
You just made me wanna fly a kite .. or just fly maybe .... You can...
October 3rd, 2020 04:33
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