Comments on community poems by Neville
- Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.)
this is so good.. it lit up my day...
I went to Iceland specifically...
June 30th, 2020 02:42 - Depression is.... (MelissaJA)
it seems you just nailed it my friend... well penned
Neville
June 30th, 2020 01:59 - Do You Tread the New Path? (Goldfinch60)
I personally try to tread the middle path.. it works for me although...
June 30th, 2020 01:26 - The Artistic Arrogance of Impeccable Poetry (DesertWords)
You write like an Englishman sir,
decidedly well, if you ask me..
June 29th, 2020 14:03 - a different way (Dusk arising)
there is always more than one way of skinning a cat.. unless you happen...
June 29th, 2020 07:38 - Lovebirds (Benevolentbluebabe)
they dont call em lovebirds for nothing, do they... nicely poemed if I...
June 29th, 2020 04:02 - Justification Joys (Orchidee)
your stated justification for using the term \'stilt\' for the purpose you...
June 29th, 2020 04:00 - Twin-Flamed (Fay Slimm.)
those opening words that make up that first line are sure gonna melt the...
June 29th, 2020 03:55 - untitled no.3 (Moyu Aoki)
although very much enjoyed at face value.. I am sure this is far cleverer...
June 29th, 2020 03:52 - Just For Me. (Goldfinch60)
True love has no boundaries, or borders and time and distance change it...
June 29th, 2020 02:05 - As born..... (Suresh)
we would ne\'er allow such a thing to happen..
a dark but...
June 28th, 2020 08:12 - Acrostic for Helena. (Goldfinch60)
when they both want and need to fly.. ya just got to let them..
this...
June 28th, 2020 08:09 - Communion Continuing 2 (Orchidee)
Where would we be without communication sir ..... as soon as it breaks...
June 28th, 2020 05:27 - ...and then it rained (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Now dont say I never told ya so... you old so and so you... started off...
June 28th, 2020 05:23 - Would I (Fay Slimm.)
You dont really want me to answer that do ya...
Simply understated...
June 28th, 2020 05:20 - for Julie-Ann (Dusk arising)
Oh\' wow.. the world must surely be filled to overflowing with Julie...
June 28th, 2020 05:14 - Untitled - XXVIII (Suresh)
splendid... timeless and true
...................Neville
June 27th, 2020 17:38 - Practical People (Orchidee)
I like this.. reads a bit kinda like \'Common People\' by Pulp... :)
June 27th, 2020 12:20 - messing with the clock (Dusk arising)
Now ya messin with me head so you are... I am not sure whether I would...
June 27th, 2020 12:16 - Made-Over. (Fay Slimm.)
I wish we could bottle these words too...
and if that were possible, I...
June 27th, 2020 10:20 - In Answer To Your Question #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I think you have penned a little belter here sir..
a good honest, no...
June 27th, 2020 09:18 - Insomniac Dreams (Bragee)
Pretty cool in a hot kinda way..
June 27th, 2020 01:52 - YET SLEEP ALONE (Michael Edwards)
cant beat a bit of abstract to kick the day off...
love ya colour...
June 27th, 2020 00:42 - What is in Your Life? (Goldfinch60)
Not everything is obvious, is it.. some things, precious as they might...
June 27th, 2020 00:39 - Anorexia (WildMoonChild)
Anorexia sure sucks doesn\'t it WMC..
but it seems you have made a...
June 26th, 2020 23:47 - Untitled - XXVII (Suresh)
and of course disciples...
I have a thing about your untitled series...
June 26th, 2020 23:40 - Fucking Friends (Bragee)
wish I could say .. it happens.. but that would be a lie... truth is...
June 26th, 2020 17:12 - Selflessness (Laura🌻)
I\'m with them other guys & gall of course... must just add..
although...
June 26th, 2020 10:51 - my breath (Dusk arising)
this has a really nice dreamy romantic feel and loads of poetic charm n...
June 26th, 2020 10:45 - autumnal beauty (Dusk arising)
A bloomin good out of season seasonal poem sir.. and I like it.. I like...
June 26th, 2020 10:39 - ON SUMMER NIGHTS LIKE THESE (Michael Edwards)
I\'m with the rest of the gang Michael...
an excellent poem and a very...
June 26th, 2020 07:16 - Strong To Save (Orchidee)
The world is in a very sorry state at the present time and needs all the...
June 26th, 2020 05:17 - Authentic. (Fay Slimm.)
amazing how one can find perfection after only eight rows of words so...
June 26th, 2020 03:57 - WW1 - They were all Related (Suresh)
Excellent Suresh & so deserving of more attention than your pearl of a...
June 26th, 2020 03:47 - Where Music Takes Me (Goldfinch60)
Tis indeed a hauntingly beautiful rendition Andy and your poem is a credit...
June 26th, 2020 03:40 - Temporal Time (Orchidee)
a hymn hardly ever sung... but oft hummed may bee ..... :)
June 25th, 2020 06:22 - Legacy (Suresh)
This is fundamentally perfect... and true ..
June 25th, 2020 04:39 - Beauty Within. (Goldfinch60)
You have penned a whole heap of truth here and wrapped it in a poem..
June 25th, 2020 03:53 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
who could possibly want for anything more... these words are perfectly...
June 25th, 2020 03:47 - The Clique (Sylviasearcher)
Your opening line says it all.. Nice one :)
Neville
June 25th, 2020 03:41 - Trust Today (Orchidee)
I can understand the shock and outrage that folk will experience not just...
June 24th, 2020 12:02 - A Special Shout-Out to All Dads (Laura🌻)
Posting these words clearly demonstrates how thoughtful you are Laura...
June 24th, 2020 11:55 - Handels Music Flows Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
...
June 24th, 2020 03:47 - Ethereal Music. (Fay Slimm.)
Everything about this page is ethereal Fay and then some...
June 24th, 2020 03:41 - Fahrenheit (Suresh)
in the heat of the moment, who would want to be anywhere else......
June 24th, 2020 03:39 - DON’T YOU? (Laura🌻)
eloquently espoused & perfectly penned..
June 20th, 2020 10:47 - Human Wrath (Suresh)
unfortunately, nothing lasts for ever...
it would be nice to think...
June 13th, 2020 23:22 - when life comes around (Dusk arising)
the very first line of your poem today just about say\'s it all my...
June 11th, 2020 12:55 - Out Beyond the Ideas. (Goldfinch60)
there is beauty out there.. one only has to look hard enough... I think...
June 11th, 2020 12:40 - * YOU THOUGHT WRONG * (Flamingo)
It is hard to see anything from some one else\'s point of view,...
June 11th, 2020 12:38 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
feel it, read it, live it.. who needs a voice anyway
Neville
June 11th, 2020 12:35 - The Thieves have descended (Suresh)
but you are not the only one... and they continue to get away with...
June 11th, 2020 12:25 - How do I....... (Suresh)
an age old conundrum and maybe for ever destined to remain unanswered .. ...
June 10th, 2020 16:29 - Shown the Way. (Goldfinch60)
I could not agree more sir.... nice one.. Oh\' and a little bird told me...
June 10th, 2020 04:15 - Easing (Peto)
I thoroughly enjoyed this timely post
and your last stanza is to die...
June 9th, 2020 11:15 - Stench (Sylviasearcher)
I dont suppose there is any point in saying things can only get better...
June 9th, 2020 04:54 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
there aint nothin ya can\'t do in a good dream is there...
this is...
June 9th, 2020 04:50 - Loyalties of Love (Orchidee)
its what makes the world go round... nice touch here Orchidee
Neville
June 9th, 2020 02:44 - Star Spangled Soul. (Goldfinch60)
true love transcends both time and space.... and you have an abundance...
June 9th, 2020 02:43 - in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising)
I rarely pop back here once I have done my all too infrequent rounds......
June 9th, 2020 02:40 - Abiding Assurances (Orchidee)
I was in the Lebanon and Syria a few years ago both of which have the...
June 9th, 2020 02:03 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have...
June 9th, 2020 01:23 - The Art of Giving a F*ck (SerenWise)
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have...
June 9th, 2020 01:23 - The New Day - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Bloomin heck Andy.. you are not going to believe this.. well I can...
June 9th, 2020 01:19 - Errant. (Fay Slimm.)
there is something about the word errant that makes even the hardest of...
June 8th, 2020 16:19 - the great healer (Dusk arising)
We should meet one day my friend... if indeed there is yet still time......
June 8th, 2020 15:32 - Climax (Neville)
I am more than honoured by your late evening visit sir... thank you for...
June 8th, 2020 15:28 - Seed Sowing (Orchidee)
I have been sowing seeds recently and have just started pricking out for...
June 7th, 2020 06:26 - bear faced lies (Dusk arising)
Ha... very good.. and yes.. we could all do with a little light hearted...
June 7th, 2020 04:17 - Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
now who in their write mind is gonna argue with ya here eh\' … no one,...
June 7th, 2020 03:42 - Extended Life. (Goldfinch60)
This is absolutely smile inducing .. I sincerely hope I can achieve the...
June 7th, 2020 01:40 - What broke your broken heart (MendedFences27)
Hey, I have absolutely no idea why any of the seventeen visiting viewers...
June 6th, 2020 17:45 - Trusting Theme (Orchidee)
Trust is a very special thing....
June 6th, 2020 07:16 - it matters (Dusk arising)
YES
June 6th, 2020 04:37 - apathy begat genocide (Dusk arising)
We clearly missed each other on the day in question.. but you now have a...
June 6th, 2020 04:34 - Listening to Ella. (Goldfinch60)
I am a fan myself and you make your point both clear and...
June 6th, 2020 02:25 - SO FAR SO GOOD (Michael Edwards)
I wish you well and the very very best of luck Michael..
Amazing...
June 5th, 2020 14:32 - May contain nuts! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Brilliant but is there really any doubt....
Neville
June 5th, 2020 12:23 - Endless sea (Saxon Crow)
This is possibly slightly deeper than the Atlantic Ocean but with...
June 5th, 2020 12:21 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
I read these words earlier but had to answer a wee call of nature.......
June 5th, 2020 04:53 - Trumpet Triumph (Orchidee)
Would it work with a tuba or a trombone... and besides that, you dont...
June 5th, 2020 04:08 - Wandering in the Wood. (Goldfinch60)
Another great observational poem that many of your readers will be able...
June 5th, 2020 01:10 - Penitent Pleas (Orchidee)
That\'s the way... belt it out
I reckon I recall this tune from my...
June 4th, 2020 12:57 - Wildlife Rescue (Poetic Dan)
Reads prose like... certainly a tale that needed to be told.... lesson...
June 4th, 2020 12:52 - Duet. (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds spectacular Fay and reads remarkable..
a duet crying out to be...
June 4th, 2020 12:47 - it was as if (Dusk arising)
The goldfinch got it write sir so he did.....
Neville
June 3rd, 2020 13:55 - Approach. (Fay Slimm.)
The way is clear
tis just so hard to achieve
but any way you look at...
June 3rd, 2020 07:23 - Lay down arms (ChippedNailPolish)
Ah\' …
properly poemed and penned to near perfection
the proof is...
June 3rd, 2020 05:20 - The Two Ladies. (Goldfinch60)
tis frightening how his fingers move like lightening....
I admire...
June 3rd, 2020 05:17 - Closed doors (ChippedNailPolish)
I thought you might like to know, I very much enjoyed \'Closed...
June 2nd, 2020 12:13 - alive in life (Dusk arising)
a very much enjoyed poem DA..
Not sure how I managed to miss it till...
June 2nd, 2020 06:33 - Untied.. (Fay Slimm.)
…. it seems to me she barely leaves your side dear Fay...
without a...
June 2nd, 2020 06:26 - Selfish - and don\'t care! (Orchidee)
there\'s nowt like a good rant... now dont you feel so much better..
I...
June 2nd, 2020 05:47 - If Only. (Goldfinch60)
Yes indeed, what if\'s tend to leave an awful lot to the imagination,...
June 2nd, 2020 03:17 - Unrest and The END (Sylviasearcher)
I have no doubt that one day I shall nourish your garden..
somethings...
June 1st, 2020 12:08 - the haunting fifty fives (Dusk arising)
pertinently penned and poignantly put
the verdana bold font rams home...
June 1st, 2020 06:37 - Past Passion. (Fay Slimm.)
this is outstanding Fay.. makes me feel quite dizzy and I have only...
June 1st, 2020 05:41 - Prayer Parable (Orchidee)
tis a good job I read the first stanza or verse twice.. otherwise Fido...
June 1st, 2020 05:36 - Blank (MendedFences27)
to put it blankly if one wants to understand the marriage between...
June 1st, 2020 02:17 - Skien (Neville)
Thank you kindly Dove me luv......
Neville ⭐️
May 31st, 2020 14:42
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