Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy



  • My Reason (StormyDay) Oooh, lala! Luck Daryn! Looks like the spoiled Valentine's Day didn't...
    March 22nd, 2011 22:13
  • Being first and last. (Lifewellspoken) Ah, Monseigneur Jason Humble, what fascinatingly incomprehensible morsel...
    March 22nd, 2011 22:07
  • EARTHQUAKE! (Emilou G.) Excellent haiku in tribute to the horrendous calamity.
    March 21st, 2011 23:47
  • Masquerade (Emi) Beautifully expressed and very, very sad. Your symbolism and metaphors of...
    March 20th, 2011 22:02
  • tears on smiling face (Rajat mahaych) The repetition of tears on a smiling face effectively communicates the...
    March 20th, 2011 21:42
  • DELAYED ANGER (Nexuscjt) Delightfully fascinating as usual, a self-discussion evaluating the...
    March 20th, 2011 21:32
  • Without A Beating Heart (Emi) Very good for "just throwing something together"! This depicts the...
    March 20th, 2011 21:15
  • A Dandelion Love (Phylock) Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. ...
    March 19th, 2011 22:04
  • Everytime (Lonelykaren) It is very sorrowful and bitter. A very grievous situation, aptly...
    March 19th, 2011 22:01
  • Another time. (Lifewellspoken) Ah, but Monsieur Jason, you have accidentally scribed yet another budding...
    March 19th, 2011 21:48
  • rain walk (Marius) Fascinating metaphorical representation. Excellent! A tad intriguing, but...
    March 19th, 2011 21:35
  • H1 ’N Then Some (Dead Crow) Marvelous! But you are excellently good with your loaded metaphors! ...
    March 19th, 2011 21:32
  • Farewell (Shyam) This is excellent, I think! How very well and poignantly you've depicted...
    March 19th, 2011 21:28
  • The Voiceless (Any) Fascinating and excellently expressed. I think unless the speaker is...
    March 17th, 2011 22:22
  • Messenger of truth (Licia) Beautiful, fascinating, excellent! Reminiscent of when the Lord gave His...
    March 17th, 2011 22:10
  • My lil Darlin ... a country song! (original) (Huzaidi Hashim) Wow. Excellent! Fascinating and beautiful. So perfect and delightful. I...
    March 17th, 2011 22:05
  • How I Really Feel, AKA Politically F’ing Correct (Dead Crow) Vulgar, but excellently expressed. Marvelously good point. Delightfully...
    March 17th, 2011 22:03
  • Because Butterscotch Bullets Taste Better (Dead Crow) Nasty, vile piece of poetry, but these days it has a place. Taking the...
    March 17th, 2011 21:50
  • Times (Belinda AMeharry) Fascinating, beautiful, interesting. There is indeed a time and season...
    March 17th, 2011 21:44
  • Luna Lunera (A Peruvian Lullaby) (Huzaidi Hashim) Beautiful, bittersweet, fascinating. Thank you for sharing it.
    March 17th, 2011 21:41
  • Eventually, I hope. (Brennan) Very fascinating and intriguing. Definitely determined. What is the...
    March 17th, 2011 21:38
  • Just anything (SauravRHS) Hahaha! But this one WAS humorous! Fun and funny! I enjoyed it!
    March 16th, 2011 13:20
  • THE PET CAT (Sudarshan) Hmm. Fascinating, humorous little anecdote about...an imaginary pussy,...
    March 15th, 2011 23:50
  • Tradgey, Indiffernce. (Brennan) Impressive! So excellently depicted with metaphors, and outright, the...
    March 15th, 2011 23:47
  • Secret Key (Huzaidi Hashim) Wow. I love it! So beautifully depicting that exact thing....excellently...
    March 15th, 2011 23:43
  • Who took my heart? (SauravRHS) Indeed! I like it VERY well,....excepting for taking the Lord's name in...
    March 15th, 2011 23:36
  • THE HEART OF MY HEART (Sarah) Wow. You write very well! Excellent, heart-wrenching dilemma! La, I...
    March 12th, 2011 23:18
  • silent whispers (Erica) Wow, an acute sense of hearing....sounds miserable! You depicted it...
    March 12th, 2011 23:02
  • Larger then life (Lifewellspoken) Ze vonterfull image, Monsieur Jason, sets ze tone fer de entire experience...
    March 12th, 2011 22:57
  • Waiting (Any) Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no...
    March 12th, 2011 22:39
  • Up (Emi) Marvelous! What an eerie, chilling, horrifying depiction of dying! Wow. ...
    March 12th, 2011 22:36
  • A BEAUTIFUL DAY (Meigh) Wow. What a sweet poem from a loving father to his precious twins. Glad...
    March 12th, 2011 22:32
  • Poetry (Huzaidi Hashim) Cool! I like it, not only for the content, but also for the sweet fact of...
    March 12th, 2011 12:34
  • ITS HEAT AND THE LUST (Sarah) Lust has such vile connotations that I would far prefer to call it "love,"...
    March 12th, 2011 00:46
  • ~~In hard times...~~ (Rajat) Beautiful and fascinating depiction of "hard times" and this "life." ...
    March 12th, 2011 00:39
  • My Secret (Meigh) Wow. This is VERY sad. Very poignantly expressed as well. Left me...
    March 12th, 2011 00:12
  • Torn Between Two (Any) You've depicted the struggle very well as aptly titled "torn between...
    March 10th, 2011 21:59
  • The Shallowest Place (Dolphine29) Fascinating and intriguing, beginning hopefully and ending hopelessly. A...
    March 10th, 2011 21:40
  • My Erotic Love For You! (Briana) Indeed, it is erotic. Very well done in that category. Bravo.
    March 10th, 2011 21:33
  • Sometimes (Emi) Hmm. Delightful use of "sometimes" with all the depictions of freedom and...
    March 10th, 2011 21:30
  • faith (Rajat mahaych) Hmm. Fascinating, intriguing, and bittersweet owing to the broken trust. ...
    March 10th, 2011 21:26
  • My Girl (Alex v) Aw, sweet. Your end-rhyming is pleasant. You expressed the love and...
    March 10th, 2011 21:23
  • THE IMMEASURABLE YOU (Jvl narasimha rao) Who is the "You"?
    March 10th, 2011 21:20
  • ADVENTURES IN A DREAM (Sudarshan) Fun. You might want to make your rhyme scheme more consistent...it isn't...
    March 10th, 2011 21:17
  • Alone............. (Shyam) Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. ...
    March 10th, 2011 21:14
  • Not Forgotten (Meigh) Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You...
    March 10th, 2011 21:09
  • GIVE ME... (Sarah) Fascinating, slightly intriguing, bittersweet. Rather poignant, it sounds...
    March 10th, 2011 21:04
  • Cracked and Crumpled (Emi) Excellent and so poignantly expressed! Beautifully done! You depicted it...
    March 10th, 2011 00:13
  • The Beat of a Heart (Kristii7) Beautiful and so lovely love poem, gently touching on/hinting of the...
    March 10th, 2011 00:02
  • Crucifiction (Zojinjo) Wow. Fascinating! You seem to specialize lately in these pieces exposing...
    March 9th, 2011 23:50
  • A Heart's Plea (Dolphine29) Beautiful and excellently depicted; perfectly expressed. I love how very...
    March 9th, 2011 22:41
  • never together i know (Sarah) Wow. Very expressive, excellent depiction of a used woman and...
    March 9th, 2011 22:36
  • Funeral (Shyam) Wow. What a thought-provoking consideration. Fascinating! I like how...
    March 9th, 2011 22:27
  • WIND (Sarah) Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and...
    March 9th, 2011 22:23
  • Free me (Paullyna) Fascinating and curious. Sweet and disturbing. Truth is not relative and...
    March 9th, 2011 22:17
  • soulmate (Meigh) Wow. Eleven years is a while, yet with such deep love,....seems you might...
    March 9th, 2011 22:13
  • My oxygen (Lifewellspoken) Congratulations!!! We are happy to inform you, Mr. Professional...
    March 9th, 2011 22:04
  • MEANING OR FIENING (Nexuscjt) Very fascinating! Interesting contemplation.....the very real struggle...
    March 9th, 2011 00:57
  • Coming of the Black Marsh (Zojinjo) My word! What a vile contemplation! And 23:49 was not the best time for...
    March 9th, 2011 00:52
  • PASSING BY (Dolphine29) Fascinating, somewhat intriguing contemplation. So you are saying if we...
    March 9th, 2011 00:43
  • Help me (Paullyna) Sweet. A cry for the deliverance of love....finding all in love. I like...
    March 9th, 2011 00:33
  • Cancer (Meigh) Wow. Very sober, sorrowful, sweet, hopeful, poignant. The image is...
    March 8th, 2011 00:47
  • Try to move on (Any) Ah, very sad. You've expressed the heartbreaking loss very well.
    March 8th, 2011 00:37
  • FAKE... (Nikhilps) La, PS, but this is a sorrowful reflection. How very sad. I heartily...
    March 8th, 2011 00:13
  • Destroying (Paullyna) This is eerie and chilling....how awful! What is it referring to?
    March 8th, 2011 00:07
  • THE DRAWN BATTLE (Sudarshan) Sweet!!!! I love it!! Excellent! I'm very glad you won, sort...
    March 8th, 2011 00:04
  • This is my new "Life through my lens" video. (Lifewellspoken) Alas, you stinker! So why then did I get no notice in my email???? For...
    March 6th, 2011 15:35
  • When You Happened (Camilla) La, dee dah. But such an answer is too much for the little ones to...
    March 6th, 2011 00:33
  • flash back (Rajat mahaych) Wow. It is so very sad! You poignantly expressed it, and excellently! ...
    March 6th, 2011 00:30
  • ~~The downpour~~ (Rajat) Beautiful tribute to those delightful downpours! I began imagining some...
    March 6th, 2011 00:18
  • Something up there (Paullyna) Hmm. Interesting and intriguing reflection. What is the title referring...
    March 5th, 2011 21:51
  • FORBIDDEN!! (Sarah) You've depicted the fellow who uses and abuses girls and the girl who is...
    March 5th, 2011 21:47
  • THE LOST TREES (Sudarshan) Ah, indeed! You've excellently pictured the modern disaster...the...
    March 5th, 2011 21:42
  • WHY (Satishverma) Eerie, and excellently titled.
    March 5th, 2011 21:31
  • Candy (HollyBorz234815) Ah, what a tender, poignant tribute to your dear lost friend! Beautiful...
    March 5th, 2011 21:29
  • Distraught (Any) If only you would arrange it differently, for it verily appears you are...
    March 5th, 2011 21:23
  • Sharina Rae Wilson (JayFace21) Aw, sweet. What a lovely romantic poem! I quite like it. Yet, why will...
    March 5th, 2011 21:16
  • COVID 19 MYTH OR MANTRA? 🧡ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hmm. You are everywhere these days, excepting PF. Interesting. ...
    March 5th, 2011 21:13
  • You and me (Paullyna) Your last line seems to hang, breathlessly awaiting its conclusion, since...
    March 5th, 2011 21:05
  • BROWN (Sarah) Oh, thank you very much for saying so. Yes, this is a delightful and...
    March 5th, 2011 21:00
  • TODAY IS MY BIRTH DAY (Jvl narasimha rao) A very nice reflective poem in tribute to your half-century mark. We love...
    March 4th, 2011 16:29
  • From here and there (Lifewellspoken) Fascinating! The place in the image is....where? (ya, stupid wee me!) And...
    March 3rd, 2011 15:53
  • My Ocean's breeze. (Lifewellspoken) Fascinating for all the colours you expressed, how very black and blue the...
    March 2nd, 2011 00:06
  • What Keeps Me Here? (Phylock) Wow. Something like persistent "love" keeps you there, and displays...
    March 1st, 2011 23:59
  • Promises (Emi) Wow. So very sweet! So girlishly spoken, yet such a dear promise and...
    March 1st, 2011 23:54
  • MACHINE VS MAN (Nexuscjt) Ah, excellently fitting image....so very chilling...a living machine,...
    March 1st, 2011 23:51
  • SACRIFICES IN DEMOCRACY (Jvl narasimha rao) Fascinating satirical dream. Quite a correct assessment of the two, I...
    March 1st, 2011 23:42
  • NATURE'S GREATNESS (Sudarshan) A beautiful simple discussion on "nature"...which I agree and disagree...
    March 1st, 2011 23:38
  • Lost (Paullyna) Wow. What a fascinating, and somewhat intriguing piece....so beautifully...
    March 1st, 2011 23:29
  • Cure (Phylock) Aw. I love how beautifully you expressed it. Excellent. It seems such a...
    March 1st, 2011 23:24
  • the fight (Marius) Sweet! I love how you used the heavenly rulers to depict the situation...
    March 1st, 2011 23:20
  • confession's of the heart (Erin wynette) Very sweet impassioned confession of an ardent lover....may the promise of...
    March 1st, 2011 23:11
  • HEAT (Sudarshan) Fascinating little lesson on heat and it's conduction, with that amusing...
    March 1st, 2011 23:07
  • AN OLD MAN IN MY DREAM (Jvl narasimha rao) Bravo! Excellent! I loved this one! How delightfully...
    March 1st, 2011 23:04
  • Free Write(Forever) (DE016) Wow. I like it. Your metaphorical expression of this miserable existence...
    March 1st, 2011 22:59
  • I Am Blind (Briana) Excellent! Blind and deaf to it all indeed. And if you truly are blind...
    March 1st, 2011 22:54
  • where are you going? (Rajat mahaych) Wow. What a picture you poignantly expressed! Your "author's comment"...
    March 1st, 2011 22:47
  • Waiting (Paullyna) Fascinating, for your allusion to heaven in concluding, in the context of...
    March 1st, 2011 22:40
  • WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO? (Geminigurl1372) Ya, it is indeed an ugly picture you've painted....what IS this world...
    March 1st, 2011 22:33
  • The End (Emi) Excellently sad! Very beautiful progression from bad to worst...in the...
    March 1st, 2011 00:28


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