Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy



  • Shyless Rose (Fay Slimm.) I cherish your style, dear Fay, and now suddenly and too belatedly begin...
    May 31st, 2023 13:36
  • No Looking Back (Paul Bell) I guess you\'ve a good point, albeit having ofttimes indulged in the...
    October 9th, 2022 17:35
  • -Unfinished Italian Sonnet- (Nair36) It\'s a lovely beginning, yet both wants a finish and some editing to put...
    October 9th, 2022 16:18
  • The 49 Bus (Paul Bell) [Having read this aloud to my close friend (poetry is, perforce, supposed...
    October 8th, 2022 21:35
  • No More. (Fay Slimm.) To quote our esteemed Poe, \"...quoth the raven: Nevermore--\" How you...
    July 7th, 2022 05:56
  • She is a missing person (Jenny1959) La, that\'s quite the tale, tendered up as if on a silver platter, each...
    February 13th, 2017 21:52
  • Miles from my eyes (Efthimios William Cornelius) Aw, this is prettily heart-wrenching with an excellent bit of a refrain. ...
    February 13th, 2017 21:47
  • 324 Level Road (Jitujpo78r) La dee. If I were to begin by drawing a deep breath to ejaculate thus,...
    February 13th, 2017 21:43
  • Lost in Your Eyes (Prose Poem) (Notapoet) La dee dah. You leave off with a string of dots and I am left pulling me...
    February 13th, 2017 21:23
  • You and I (BatSam) Well, as long as you keep on loving, there need be no proper \"Goodbye.\" ...
    February 13th, 2017 21:18
  • Strike a Match (Edthepoet) Ya, but playing with fire was ever too tantalizing. The grown-ups forbade...
    February 13th, 2017 21:15
  • Scared to love you (Dannirose) It stinks but I\'ve begun a comment and erased the same several times now,...
    February 13th, 2017 21:09
  • Of A Feel Good Nature (Brooklyn6timesplus) Beautifully inspirational, this half takes the reader\'s hand to lift the...
    February 13th, 2017 21:02
  • Always and Forever (Ron parrish aka wordman) Dis is verra pritty, and tendered on Valentine\'s Eve, sae timely I...
    February 13th, 2017 20:58
  • Sight (Christina K) This could well apply to more than simply the souls we know by face,...
    February 13th, 2017 20:56
  • Was It He ? (Fay Slimm.) In the irresistible loss of my mother I\'ve talked with those closest to...
    February 13th, 2017 20:53
  • Leave Behind (NB) Wowers! You forever have this way of taking the soul in hand to send us...
    February 13th, 2017 20:48
  • Building Blocks (Nair36) Lovely, especially with that rich refrain hammering home the half elusive ...
    April 25th, 2013 20:56
  • Glass Man (Nair36) Densely laden with excellent imagery and very thought-provoking, more...
    April 23rd, 2013 22:34
  • UV Rays (Nair36) Because you are clever and witty enough to signify more than readily meets...
    April 12th, 2013 19:19
  • Illusion (Jalso) Fascinating and with that repetition serving rather as a vividly poignant...
    April 10th, 2013 22:17
  • Ivory Combust (Nair36) Villanelles are familiar as a term, should also be as the form itself...
    April 10th, 2013 22:11
  • The Huddled Person (Diamonddagger) Lovely and wonderfully poignant, the drama unfolds deliciously riveting in...
    April 10th, 2013 22:06
  • I Whisper Your Name (Diamonddagger) Haunting and riveting, the sweet size of the quatrain stanzas and your use...
    April 9th, 2013 21:21
  • Mask (Nair36) Aye, is this a sonnet? If I may dare to try to assert anything, seems...
    April 9th, 2013 21:01
  • MY CASTLE IN THE SKY (Sokibgb) Lovely and thought-provoking, all the more so for the delicate nature of...
    April 9th, 2013 20:57
  • Why Must You Whisper (Nair36) Having chanced on this earlier when it was all slid together as MPS aka...
    April 8th, 2013 23:37
  • INTO THE SUNSHINE (Sokibgb) Lovely and thought-provoking, poignant, with excellent imagery and a...
    April 7th, 2013 23:20
  • The Bluebird (Diamonddagger) Ah, mine aren't blue, but a window at the kitchen sink is almost something...
    April 7th, 2013 23:16
  • The Wild Deer (Diamonddagger) Wow.. That's childhood's dreamy sense coming to the fore to thrill afresh...
    April 4th, 2013 21:59
  • SOMEONE, SOMEWHERE (Sokibgb) Very lovely and richly poignant, so beautifully rendered with delightful...
    April 4th, 2013 19:40
  • Tripped (Baj-a) Rather intensely thought-provoking with excellent imagery, this...
    April 4th, 2013 19:30
  • You Are Gone (Senryu) (Bigwolf) Death, rendered softly though In all its devastating bitterness, stares...
    April 4th, 2013 19:26
  • How can I be (Jalso) Floundering for dear life, though apparently it is rather out of the line...
    April 4th, 2013 19:24
  • Her Eyes (Nair36) Very different style than I am accustomed from you. That said, is it your...
    April 4th, 2013 19:22
  • The Gentle Touch (Diamonddagger) Wow, I adore the delectable image paired with this, too charming and...
    April 3rd, 2013 19:31
  • Plumbs and Peaches (Nair36) La, are you active elsewhere or only here? I rather miss you now that...
    April 3rd, 2013 19:27
  • ~ (Diamonddagger) Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the...
    April 3rd, 2013 19:20
  • Walking The Sidewalks Of Brooklyn (Bigwolf) Bravo and hurrah! You two made a lovely job of it. I enjoyed it. The...
    April 1st, 2013 21:13
  • The Morning (Bigwolf) You rascals did a lovely job...excepting one thing: you all only...
    April 1st, 2013 21:09
  • Twister (a lento) (Diamonddagger) A novel form I am presently entirely unfamiliar and utterly unacquainted...
    April 1st, 2013 21:03
  • Listen out at night (Dolphine29) Lovely and paired with an apt image, this beautifully evokes those...
    May 7th, 2012 21:03
  • SIN... (Antonio Wright) Interesting and thought-provoking, to say the least. Aye, we cannot save...
    April 6th, 2012 21:17
  • Unfinished (Nair36) Wowers! I'm in love with this intriguing unfinished symphony (you know...
    February 23rd, 2012 23:43
  • Slow Dance (Lynn) Subtly erotic and very romantic tribute to passion, love and dreams. ...
    February 15th, 2012 15:00
  • LOOKING BACK (Lynn) Gently poignant musing on reality and dreams, concluding excellently. ...
    February 15th, 2012 14:57
  • PATH OF DESTRUCTION (Lynn) Very thought-provoking and methinks all too relevant to this day and age. ...
    February 15th, 2012 14:51
  • Confusing Poems (Karen) An interesting reflection, offered as a private little muse. After all,...
    February 2nd, 2012 20:45
  • What do I want to be? (Karen) Ah, excellent tribute to the dilemma set before youngsters, presuming that...
    February 1st, 2012 14:44
  • Silence (Anna) Well, having excused yourself for putting insufficient time and effort...
    January 28th, 2012 23:05
  • Know This (StormyDay) While the graphic slang added the effective depth of cruelty and despite...
    January 28th, 2012 22:43
  • rainbow after the rain (Poeticmind17) Seemingly simplistic, yet thought-provoking on further contemplation, a...
    January 22nd, 2012 22:12
  • Some text missing (SauravRHS) Very interesting and enjoyable piece. An apt tribute to the joys of...
    January 22nd, 2012 22:06
  • Wise Mans Words (Poetinthebackroom) Very interesting. This is spun together as if ethereally, in an abstract...
    January 19th, 2012 23:09
  • Engine Issues (Nair36) Fascinating, it takes my imagination off into the countryside, careening...
    January 19th, 2012 15:11
  • I Wake and Have No Father (Skylar) An excellent gentle exposition in tasteful story form of the modern...
    January 8th, 2012 20:24
  • Technozomb (Zojinjo) The funny thing in thinking about it, is that we started in perfection,...
    January 6th, 2012 23:11
  • Knock On Wood (Alexandre Landsley) Wow! I LOVE this one! Superb romantic tribute to love and the girl that...
    January 4th, 2012 23:03
  • life (Poeticmind17) Interesting contemplation and nice admonition with beautiful images and...
    December 21st, 2011 22:33
  • I am done with your game (Poeticmind17) This excellently expresses those familiar struggles of romance, when he...
    December 17th, 2011 12:35
  • Days End (Dbremner) Ah, delightfully romantic! She is lucky, precious girl. How very sweet a...
    December 13th, 2011 21:58
  • LOVE (Belinda AMeharry) Beautiful tinged bittersweet wistful song of longing, awakening love. ...
    December 13th, 2011 00:32
  • Giving Up (Dbremner) If you were inclined you might classify it as reflection or else sad. A...
    December 10th, 2011 22:50
  • For A Polish Girl in Hyde Park (Dbremner) Poignant and bittersweet, with wonderful imagery painting that seeming...
    December 7th, 2011 00:12
  • What Events Are Made Worse By Whiskey, Really? (Luke timms) The main problem with my commenting on this is my ignorance of that realm...
    November 27th, 2011 22:40
  • Lily Allen on Vinyl (Dbremner) Ah, long time no see! I like that "be real" admonition. This has a...
    November 26th, 2011 19:00
  • Looking for Pawo (Bokononsense) Wow. I love all the imagery, it is captivating! The reader travels along...
    November 3rd, 2011 16:55
  • Stupidity (Broken_dreams23) Brimful of regret and remorse, the author's note adds to the poignancy of...
    October 29th, 2011 10:12
  • Live free (Touch) Hmm. The basic questions thinking folk ponder....and then we conclude to...
    October 28th, 2011 14:21
  • Waiting Dreams (Dolphine29) It is particularly fascinating to me, seeing I am an incurable dreamer and...
    October 23rd, 2011 20:43
  • Reflection (Sammy4ever1995) Excellent plea and beautifully rhymed. It'd look better with the lines...
    October 22nd, 2011 22:56
  • INAGAW (Shubert) Unfortunately it does not appear to be in English.
    October 21st, 2011 22:58
  • mood swings, angel wings and puppet strings (Nair36) Awesome! Wow. I've never seen this one ere now, and it is impressive. ...
    October 20th, 2011 09:36
  • In Your Arms (BabiiGurl13) So wonderfully in love, definitely. Makes one wonder what happened to...
    October 18th, 2011 23:34
  • always believe (Lifewellspoken) Hmm. Exquisite image. Lovely admonition. Rarely if ever am I not...
    October 18th, 2011 14:30
  • Your love.. Your passion. (Lifewellspoken) How perfect for "tax" day.....taxing for the utmost passion and love to...
    October 18th, 2011 14:28
  • A beautiful Fairytale. (Lifewellspoken) Your personal variety of spelling is fascinating. Classifying this as...
    October 18th, 2011 14:25
  • first love is like playing with fire (Sammy4ever1995) Excellent tribute to romantic love and that precious first love! Romantic...
    October 18th, 2011 14:18
  • Soldiers (BabiiGurl13) Your own brothers! La, what precious treasures to hand to the enemy. Oh,...
    October 17th, 2011 17:35
  • Memory Path (Dolphine29) Wow. I love the image paired with this interesting contemplation on...
    October 16th, 2011 19:47
  • Fantasy And Reality (Anna) Does your author's note mean you do not desire comments after all? I...
    October 16th, 2011 19:35
  • time (Jalso) No thank you, please. It did not look rosy but rather grey, yet this is...
    October 13th, 2011 11:01
  • This Feeling (Broken_dreams23) Beautiful and so bittersweet, excellently and poignantly expressing the...
    October 7th, 2011 10:44
  • My Only Bonsai Tree (Paul Price) Wow! Awesome, poignant ballad of your beloved passions and the dog that...
    October 7th, 2011 10:41
  • sonetimes i miss you (Star) Sometimes indeed! The natural, common sentiments are simply expressed,...
    October 2nd, 2011 23:40
  • get out of my mind (Jennysheart911) Sad indeed; the struggle to climb out of the pit of heartbroken love is...
    October 1st, 2011 21:56
  • early autumn (Sarah) Excellent imagery expressing the mental state of many, in the perfect...
    October 1st, 2011 21:44
  • Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt. (Kelseyroy) Eerie, haunting, chilling. Something almost like a familiar story. ...
    September 26th, 2011 21:28
  • On Her Eighth Birthday (MBJ Pancras) Very interesting religious depiction of your darling daughter's creation...
    September 21st, 2011 13:37
  • today (Sammy4ever1995) What very sweet declaration of love! How delightful. It beautifully...
    September 21st, 2011 13:32
  • No title (Hiandbye) La, and from "Hi...and....bye!" it seems quite fitting. The concluding...
    September 19th, 2011 19:59
  • UNTITLED (Tamm13) Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I...
    September 19th, 2011 19:55
  • When you went away (Huzaidi Hashim) The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for...
    September 18th, 2011 20:09
  • Never absolute (Nexuscjt) It is a reflection indeed, and yet it seems most of your postings are...
    September 18th, 2011 20:01
  • Give A Little Love (Nexuscjt) Very interesting and thought-provoking meditation, more especially so to...
    September 18th, 2011 19:51
  • YOU AND ONLY YOU (If_you are a women_kiss me) It is beautifully romantic! The overwhelming desire poignantly calls to...
    September 13th, 2011 21:08
  • the box (Jalso) Intriguing. Since the television has aptly been termed "the idiot box"...
    September 9th, 2011 22:38
  • Witchcraft (Zojinjo) Haunting, chilling, and eerie, to say the least. And yet I almost think...
    September 7th, 2011 16:59
  • the drains and faith (Jalso) Almost subtly powerful and nearly intriguing. Interesting diatribe with...
    September 7th, 2011 16:46
  • All Forgotten (Alexandre Landsley) Hmm. Thought-provoking. The imagery aptly expresses the crushing reality...
    September 6th, 2011 22:31
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