Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Shyless Rose (Fay Slimm.)
I cherish your style, dear Fay, and now suddenly and too belatedly begin...
May 31st, 2023 13:36 - No Looking Back (Paul Bell)
I guess you\'ve a good point, albeit having ofttimes indulged in the...
October 9th, 2022 17:35 - -Unfinished Italian Sonnet- (Nair36)
It\'s a lovely beginning, yet both wants a finish and some editing to put...
October 9th, 2022 16:18 - The 49 Bus (Paul Bell)
[Having read this aloud to my close friend (poetry is, perforce, supposed...
October 8th, 2022 21:35 - No More. (Fay Slimm.)
To quote our esteemed Poe, \"...quoth the raven: Nevermore--\"
How you...
July 7th, 2022 05:56 - She is a missing person (Jenny1959)
La, that\'s quite the tale, tendered up as if on a silver platter, each...
February 13th, 2017 21:52 - Miles from my eyes (Efthimios William Cornelius)
Aw, this is prettily heart-wrenching with an excellent bit of a refrain. ...
February 13th, 2017 21:47 - 324 Level Road (Jitujpo78r)
La dee. If I were to begin by drawing a deep breath to ejaculate thus,...
February 13th, 2017 21:43 - Lost in Your Eyes (Prose Poem) (Notapoet)
La dee dah. You leave off with a string of dots and I am left pulling me...
February 13th, 2017 21:23 - You and I (BatSam)
Well, as long as you keep on loving, there need be no proper \"Goodbye.\" ...
February 13th, 2017 21:18 - Strike a Match (Edthepoet)
Ya, but playing with fire was ever too tantalizing. The grown-ups forbade...
February 13th, 2017 21:15 - Scared to love you (Dannirose)
It stinks but I\'ve begun a comment and erased the same several times now,...
February 13th, 2017 21:09 - Of A Feel Good Nature (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Beautifully inspirational, this half takes the reader\'s hand to lift the...
February 13th, 2017 21:02 - Always and Forever (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Dis is verra pritty, and tendered on Valentine\'s Eve, sae timely I...
February 13th, 2017 20:58 - Sight (Christina K)
This could well apply to more than simply the souls we know by face,...
February 13th, 2017 20:56 - Was It He ? (Fay Slimm.)
In the irresistible loss of my mother I\'ve talked with those closest to...
February 13th, 2017 20:53 - Leave Behind (NB)
Wowers! You forever have this way of taking the soul in hand to send us...
February 13th, 2017 20:48 - Building Blocks (Nair36)
Lovely, especially with that rich refrain hammering home the half elusive ...
April 25th, 2013 20:56 - Glass Man (Nair36)
Densely laden with excellent imagery and very thought-provoking, more...
April 23rd, 2013 22:34 - UV Rays (Nair36)
Because you are clever and witty enough to signify more than readily meets...
April 12th, 2013 19:19 - Illusion (Jalso)
Fascinating and with that repetition serving rather as a vividly poignant...
April 10th, 2013 22:17 - Ivory Combust (Nair36)
Villanelles are familiar as a term, should also be as the form itself...
April 10th, 2013 22:11 - The Huddled Person (Diamonddagger)
Lovely and wonderfully poignant, the drama unfolds deliciously riveting in...
April 10th, 2013 22:06 - I Whisper Your Name (Diamonddagger)
Haunting and riveting, the sweet size of the quatrain stanzas and your use...
April 9th, 2013 21:21 - Mask (Nair36)
Aye, is this a sonnet? If I may dare to try to assert anything, seems...
April 9th, 2013 21:01 - MY CASTLE IN THE SKY (Sokibgb)
Lovely and thought-provoking, all the more so for the delicate nature of...
April 9th, 2013 20:57 - Why Must You Whisper (Nair36)
Having chanced on this earlier when it was all slid together as MPS aka...
April 8th, 2013 23:37 - INTO THE SUNSHINE (Sokibgb)
Lovely and thought-provoking, poignant, with excellent imagery and a...
April 7th, 2013 23:20 - The Bluebird (Diamonddagger)
Ah, mine aren't blue, but a window at the kitchen sink is almost something...
April 7th, 2013 23:16 - The Wild Deer (Diamonddagger)
Wow.. That's childhood's dreamy sense coming to the fore to thrill afresh...
April 4th, 2013 21:59 - SOMEONE, SOMEWHERE (Sokibgb)
Very lovely and richly poignant, so beautifully rendered with delightful...
April 4th, 2013 19:40 - Tripped (Baj-a)
Rather intensely thought-provoking with excellent imagery, this...
April 4th, 2013 19:30 - You Are Gone (Senryu) (Bigwolf)
Death, rendered softly though In all its devastating bitterness, stares...
April 4th, 2013 19:26 - How can I be (Jalso)
Floundering for dear life, though apparently it is rather out of the line...
April 4th, 2013 19:24 - Her Eyes (Nair36)
Very different style than I am accustomed from you. That said, is it your...
April 4th, 2013 19:22 - The Gentle Touch (Diamonddagger)
Wow, I adore the delectable image paired with this, too charming and...
April 3rd, 2013 19:31 - Plumbs and Peaches (Nair36)
La, are you active elsewhere or only here? I rather miss you now that...
April 3rd, 2013 19:27 - ~ (Diamonddagger)
Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the...
April 3rd, 2013 19:20 - Walking The Sidewalks Of Brooklyn (Bigwolf)
Bravo and hurrah! You two made a lovely job of it. I enjoyed it. The...
April 1st, 2013 21:13 - The Morning (Bigwolf)
You rascals did a lovely job...excepting one thing: you all only...
April 1st, 2013 21:09 - Twister (a lento) (Diamonddagger)
A novel form I am presently entirely unfamiliar and utterly unacquainted...
April 1st, 2013 21:03 - Listen out at night (Dolphine29)
Lovely and paired with an apt image, this beautifully evokes those...
May 7th, 2012 21:03 - SIN... (Antonio Wright)
Interesting and thought-provoking, to say the least. Aye, we cannot save...
April 6th, 2012 21:17 - Unfinished (Nair36)
Wowers! I'm in love with this intriguing unfinished symphony (you know...
February 23rd, 2012 23:43 - Slow Dance (Lynn)
Subtly erotic and very romantic tribute to passion, love and dreams. ...
February 15th, 2012 15:00 - LOOKING BACK (Lynn)
Gently poignant musing on reality and dreams, concluding excellently. ...
February 15th, 2012 14:57 - PATH OF DESTRUCTION (Lynn)
Very thought-provoking and methinks all too relevant to this day and age. ...
February 15th, 2012 14:51 - Confusing Poems (Karen)
An interesting reflection, offered as a private little muse. After all,...
February 2nd, 2012 20:45 - What do I want to be? (Karen)
Ah, excellent tribute to the dilemma set before youngsters, presuming that...
February 1st, 2012 14:44 - Silence (Anna)
Well, having excused yourself for putting insufficient time and effort...
January 28th, 2012 23:05 - Know This (StormyDay)
While the graphic slang added the effective depth of cruelty and despite...
January 28th, 2012 22:43 - rainbow after the rain (Poeticmind17)
Seemingly simplistic, yet thought-provoking on further contemplation, a...
January 22nd, 2012 22:12 - Some text missing (SauravRHS)
Very interesting and enjoyable piece. An apt tribute to the joys of...
January 22nd, 2012 22:06 - Wise Mans Words (Poetinthebackroom)
Very interesting. This is spun together as if ethereally, in an abstract...
January 19th, 2012 23:09 - Engine Issues (Nair36)
Fascinating, it takes my imagination off into the countryside, careening...
January 19th, 2012 15:11 - I Wake and Have No Father (Skylar)
An excellent gentle exposition in tasteful story form of the modern...
January 8th, 2012 20:24 - Technozomb (Zojinjo)
The funny thing in thinking about it, is that we started in perfection,...
January 6th, 2012 23:11 - Knock On Wood (Alexandre Landsley)
Wow! I LOVE this one! Superb romantic tribute to love and the girl that...
January 4th, 2012 23:03 - life (Poeticmind17)
Interesting contemplation and nice admonition with beautiful images and...
December 21st, 2011 22:33 - I am done with your game (Poeticmind17)
This excellently expresses those familiar struggles of romance, when he...
December 17th, 2011 12:35 - Days End (Dbremner)
Ah, delightfully romantic! She is lucky, precious girl. How very sweet a...
December 13th, 2011 21:58 - LOVE (Belinda AMeharry)
Beautiful tinged bittersweet wistful song of longing, awakening love. ...
December 13th, 2011 00:32 - Giving Up (Dbremner)
If you were inclined you might classify it as reflection or else sad. A...
December 10th, 2011 22:50 - For A Polish Girl in Hyde Park (Dbremner)
Poignant and bittersweet, with wonderful imagery painting that seeming...
December 7th, 2011 00:12 - What Events Are Made Worse By Whiskey, Really? (Luke timms)
The main problem with my commenting on this is my ignorance of that realm...
November 27th, 2011 22:40 - Lily Allen on Vinyl (Dbremner)
Ah, long time no see! I like that "be real" admonition. This has a...
November 26th, 2011 19:00 - Looking for Pawo (Bokononsense)
Wow. I love all the imagery, it is captivating! The reader travels along...
November 3rd, 2011 16:55 - Stupidity (Broken_dreams23)
Brimful of regret and remorse, the author's note adds to the poignancy of...
October 29th, 2011 10:12 - Live free (Touch)
Hmm. The basic questions thinking folk ponder....and then we conclude to...
October 28th, 2011 14:21 - Waiting Dreams (Dolphine29)
It is particularly fascinating to me, seeing I am an incurable dreamer and...
October 23rd, 2011 20:43 - Reflection (Sammy4ever1995)
Excellent plea and beautifully rhymed. It'd look better with the lines...
October 22nd, 2011 22:56 - INAGAW (Shubert)
Unfortunately it does not appear to be in English.
October 21st, 2011 22:58 - mood swings, angel wings and puppet strings (Nair36)
Awesome! Wow. I've never seen this one ere now, and it is impressive. ...
October 20th, 2011 09:36 - In Your Arms (BabiiGurl13)
So wonderfully in love, definitely. Makes one wonder what happened to...
October 18th, 2011 23:34 - always believe (Lifewellspoken)
Hmm. Exquisite image. Lovely admonition. Rarely if ever am I not...
October 18th, 2011 14:30 - Your love.. Your passion. (Lifewellspoken)
How perfect for "tax" day.....taxing for the utmost passion and love to...
October 18th, 2011 14:28 - A beautiful Fairytale. (Lifewellspoken)
Your personal variety of spelling is fascinating. Classifying this as...
October 18th, 2011 14:25 - first love is like playing with fire (Sammy4ever1995)
Excellent tribute to romantic love and that precious first love! Romantic...
October 18th, 2011 14:18 - Soldiers (BabiiGurl13)
Your own brothers! La, what precious treasures to hand to the enemy. Oh,...
October 17th, 2011 17:35 - Memory Path (Dolphine29)
Wow. I love the image paired with this interesting contemplation on...
October 16th, 2011 19:47 - Fantasy And Reality (Anna)
Does your author's note mean you do not desire comments after all? I...
October 16th, 2011 19:35 - time (Jalso)
No thank you, please. It did not look rosy but rather grey, yet this is...
October 13th, 2011 11:01 - This Feeling (Broken_dreams23)
Beautiful and so bittersweet, excellently and poignantly expressing the...
October 7th, 2011 10:44 - My Only Bonsai Tree (Paul Price)
Wow! Awesome, poignant ballad of your beloved passions and the dog that...
October 7th, 2011 10:41 - sonetimes i miss you (Star)
Sometimes indeed! The natural, common sentiments are simply expressed,...
October 2nd, 2011 23:40 - get out of my mind (Jennysheart911)
Sad indeed; the struggle to climb out of the pit of heartbroken love is...
October 1st, 2011 21:56 - early autumn (Sarah)
Excellent imagery expressing the mental state of many, in the perfect...
October 1st, 2011 21:44 - Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt. (Kelseyroy)
Eerie, haunting, chilling. Something almost like a familiar story. ...
September 26th, 2011 21:28 - On Her Eighth Birthday (MBJ Pancras)
Very interesting religious depiction of your darling daughter's creation...
September 21st, 2011 13:37 - today (Sammy4ever1995)
What very sweet declaration of love! How delightful. It beautifully...
September 21st, 2011 13:32 - No title (Hiandbye)
La, and from "Hi...and....bye!" it seems quite fitting. The concluding...
September 19th, 2011 19:59 - UNTITLED (Tamm13)
Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I...
September 19th, 2011 19:55 - When you went away (Huzaidi Hashim)
The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for...
September 18th, 2011 20:09 - Never absolute (Nexuscjt)
It is a reflection indeed, and yet it seems most of your postings are...
September 18th, 2011 20:01 - Give A Little Love (Nexuscjt)
Very interesting and thought-provoking meditation, more especially so to...
September 18th, 2011 19:51 - YOU AND ONLY YOU (If_you are a women_kiss me)
It is beautifully romantic! The overwhelming desire poignantly calls to...
September 13th, 2011 21:08 - the box (Jalso)
Intriguing. Since the television has aptly been termed "the idiot box"...
September 9th, 2011 22:38 - Witchcraft (Zojinjo)
Haunting, chilling, and eerie, to say the least. And yet I almost think...
September 7th, 2011 16:59 - the drains and faith (Jalso)
Almost subtly powerful and nearly intriguing. Interesting diatribe with...
September 7th, 2011 16:46 - All Forgotten (Alexandre Landsley)
Hmm. Thought-provoking. The imagery aptly expresses the crushing reality...
September 6th, 2011 22:31
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