Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy

• ~~Saving the planet~~ (Rajat) Beautifully done! Your end-rhyming is very good, and the rythm fairly...
  February 8th, 2011 15:43
• my last wish (Rajat mahaych) Beautiful, fascinating, sweet. Your author's comment was complementary,...
  February 8th, 2011 15:23
• THE HIDDEN FEELINGS (Tamm13) Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've...
  February 8th, 2011 15:13
• THE WORLD OF TELEVISION THROUGH MY EYES (Sudarshan) Fun....interesting, enjoyable expression of the television's significance....
  February 8th, 2011 15:05
• Who you are (Marius) Wow. Marvelous the enticing description you've given to express your...
  February 8th, 2011 15:00
• If Colour Matters Not (Leonard Dabydeen) Very intriguing and fascinating....I stupidly am struggling to understand...
  February 8th, 2011 14:47
• Thoughts on a Girls Self Portrait (Dbremner) The portrait is an image momentarily(?) indelibly etched in your mind's...
  February 7th, 2011 18:02
• Sunday Gathering (Dbremner) Excellently written....are you genuinely expressing your beliefs? While...
  February 6th, 2011 22:00
• awake...... (Tshi-tshi) Horrendous. You've depicted it rather too graphically....it is awful. I...
  February 6th, 2011 21:24
• Hope! (Sadia Ismail) The image is so perfect...is it for real? Ya, we need hope to keep going...
  February 6th, 2011 21:15
• The Eternal Time (Rajat) The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem...
  February 6th, 2011 21:05
• Please come (Hidan) Aw, simple and rather sweet. Your end-rhyming was nice, and your...
  February 6th, 2011 20:35
• Make Up Your Mind (Emi) Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How...
  February 6th, 2011 20:32
• The Girl who Boasted (Sudarshan) Jolly good funny! I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating, the first half/three...
  February 6th, 2011 20:09
• Congruence (Marius) Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring,...
  February 6th, 2011 18:40
• Take My Heart (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't...
  February 6th, 2011 18:33
• A Black Place (DOGG) If I dare guess, will you tell me the answer? Is it the...
  February 6th, 2011 18:28
• my life (Erin wynette) "....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do...
  February 6th, 2011 18:25
• Drained (Erin wynette) Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in...
  February 6th, 2011 18:19
• money (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Ah, excellent reminder! And too, God's Word says truly "the love of money...
  February 5th, 2011 23:00
• A PLEA TO GOD (Jvl narasimha rao) Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you...
  February 5th, 2011 22:46
• Cherry and Valentine (Hidan) Well-written, bittersweet and simplistic yet with such feeling....I am...
  February 5th, 2011 22:40
• The Republic Day Comes (Sudarshan) It's a beautiful tribute to your Republic Day....I especially loved the...
  February 5th, 2011 22:36
• mommy (Bluesyzygy) Too sweet....a delightful tribute to our precious, inestimable darling...
  February 5th, 2011 16:26
• My Own Reflection (Dbremner) Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the...
  February 5th, 2011 16:14
• Forbidden Love (Marius) Intriguing, fascinating, enticing, provocative,....rather fearful in that...
  February 5th, 2011 12:20
• My guardian angel (Rajat) Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is...
  February 5th, 2011 12:14
• total passion. (Lifewellspoken) Ah, I get the luxury of the first look-see at this passionate avowal of...
  February 4th, 2011 18:00
• The Offer (Marius) Aw. This is soo good...and still 10/9 days 'til the lover's holiday of...
  February 4th, 2011 17:45
• Saint-Malo - A Tribute (Dbremner) Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this...
  February 4th, 2011 17:40
• Space (Monsters) Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with...
  February 4th, 2011 14:35
• The Story of a depressed kid (DOGG) Aw. Short and bittersweet. Excellent!
  February 4th, 2011 14:30
• THE RETURN OF THE WORLD CUP: MY DREAM (Sudarshan) Loved it. Could almost see and hear it too. Thanks, this was enjoyable.
  February 4th, 2011 14:28
• Tick Tock (Emi) Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when...
  February 4th, 2011 14:25
• never ending nightmare (Tshi-tshi) Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my...
  February 4th, 2011 14:20
• Looking back (Hidan) Fascinating, especially since it can allude to something deeper....like,...
  February 4th, 2011 14:04
• My Friends Your Poems (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating. I like it! Though your second stanza seems to rule out some...
  February 4th, 2011 10:46
• Far Far Away (but not too far) (John) Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded...
  February 4th, 2011 10:37
• Life's A Game (Monsters) Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title...
  February 3rd, 2011 23:55
• The road full of promises (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating, and interesting poetic perspective on life/love and your...
  February 3rd, 2011 23:46
• FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH (Jvl narasimha rao) Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:47
• You fill my life. (Lifewellspoken) Superb! Excellent, Monsieur Jason! How delightfully tender and...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:37
• Carousel (Dbremner) Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:34
• The Cockroach (Zojinjo) The image made me gasp in horror when it burst on my sight, and the poem...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:28
• flipped script (Boricuamami222) Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:14
• Tears (Ashley) Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:09
• Or So They Say (Emi) Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:02
• I can’t give you more (Marius) This is so very beautiful, enticing, alluring....and yet....is it wrong...
  February 3rd, 2011 11:43
• SOCCER WORLDCUP (Sudarshan) Very fascinating assessment and tribute to the world cup! Your...
  February 3rd, 2011 11:31
• Change You Wish (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating! I like how you ordered the stanzas to taper....fascinating...
  February 3rd, 2011 00:29
• My World (Patriots) The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly...
  February 3rd, 2011 00:13
• Polyamor (Haiku) (Zojinjo) What is a "polyamour"? I couldn't find the word in my dictionary....seems...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:50
• LOVE HURTS! (Sadia Ismail) Very fascinating.....in response to your author's comment....we seriously...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:34
• Deeper and Deeper (Emi) Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:24
• Always beautiful (Lifewellspoken) Ah, Monsieur Jason....but your poetry is sometimes so intriguing,...
  February 2nd, 2011 19:00
• Broken (Marius) Very fascinating. Delightful. Beautiful, bitterSWEET. Heartbroken with...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:57
• Yes It Is True (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:49
• ONCE I ...................... (Sudarshan) Beautiful almost simplistic description of the creation/nature in its...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:22
• Poetic Baptisms (JamaicaMeCrayZ) Very fascinating....interesting, intriguing, enjoyable flowing...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:18
• Anarkali in Motion (Leonard Dabydeen) Wow. Very fascinating, and rather intriguing....delightful romantic...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:10
• My Life!! (Lonelykaren) Editing is work I'd rather not do myself, but sometimes our stuff looks...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:06
• I Hate The World (Alexandre Landsley) Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love...
  February 2nd, 2011 01:07
• Raped (Zojinjo) Oh, la. But you are crafting this eerily! Depicting the horrible scene...
  February 1st, 2011 15:47
• Black and White (Emi) Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world...
  February 1st, 2011 15:42
• Enigma (Belinda AMeharry) Delightfully sweet romantic poem of love....with the loving and longing,...
  February 1st, 2011 15:38
• Nikki (JoshuaConklin) It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and...
  February 1st, 2011 15:28
• Control (Marius) "Control Freaks." La, but you described the ugly character so...
  February 1st, 2011 15:24
• BLIGHTY DOG (Sudarshan) Delightful....I enjoyed this humorous look at....not a real dog, surely? ...
  February 1st, 2011 15:15
• Lost it all (Patriots) Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's...
  February 1st, 2011 15:12
• Spring Flowers (Dbremner) Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in...
  February 1st, 2011 13:30
• Inseparable love (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating contemplation, interesting...
  January 31st, 2011 23:39
• life (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Very interesting...fascinating meditation, contemplation.
  January 31st, 2011 23:33
• As Long as Forever (Emi) Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding...
  January 31st, 2011 23:28
• Your Girl (StormyDay) Yes, a very nice love poem...fascinating, since she feels herself not good...
  January 31st, 2011 23:20
• Here are the Aliens! (Sudarshan) Even so....you should not speak so disrespectfully of your teachers. I do...
  January 31st, 2011 23:12
• FRIENDSHIP LIKE THE SUN (Jvl narasimha rao) Fascinating analogy. I agree, you are calling for true friends not the...
  January 31st, 2011 22:59
• Please forgive me (JoshuaConklin) Well-written. You hint at the reason she needs to forgive, and if she...
  January 31st, 2011 22:53
• Suicide (Zojinjo) La, but what an imagination to draw this story line from the...
  January 31st, 2011 22:45
• My Last Riddle (John) Not funny. Cold, deadly, and dreadfully chilling! La, and reading it, am...
  January 31st, 2011 21:52
• Solitary Tree (Marius) Fascinating...and for all it is sad, yet even so, delightful! Your...
  January 31st, 2011 21:50
• REMEDY (Nexuscjt) Fascinating...very. The image with it is likewise rather...
  January 31st, 2011 00:56
• Alone (AngelKitty) Very nicely done! Your title sets the stage which your initial thoughts...
  January 31st, 2011 00:42
• LOVE it's you... (Murli.ilovemydreams) Wow. I LOVE the picture with it...such a nice fitting touch with the...
  January 31st, 2011 00:33
• The Toy Master (Zojinjo) La, but it has quite a nasty touch in his vile attitude. I wonder that he...
  January 31st, 2011 00:25
• Little by Little (Emi) It is very sweet, with a tinge of bittersweet, for the bitterness of your...
  January 31st, 2011 00:16
• OUT OF TIME (Sudarshan) Oh! But I LOVED this one! You wrote it very nicely, with a delightful...
  January 31st, 2011 00:05
• Died Young (Patriots) Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or...
  January 30th, 2011 23:55
• RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION (Jvl narasimha rao) The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while...
  January 30th, 2011 23:51
• A Kiss says it all (Gerrylegister) Oh, this is a delightfully sweet study of love and it's allure and sweet...
  January 30th, 2011 14:52
• Esto Perpetue (Mistoffelees) It is a very touching piece of heartbreak...rather moving in the way you...
  January 30th, 2011 01:01
• My World (Alexandre Landsley) Wow. This is excellent! Very sweetly put and so perfectly too in the...
  January 30th, 2011 00:50
• Seconds (Marius) Wow. You do write lovely romantic poems! Your girl could fall for you,...
  January 30th, 2011 00:20
• Cinderella (Emi) Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! ...
  January 30th, 2011 00:15
• The Gift of Love (Marius) Delightfully romantic call to your lady-love! I quite enjoyed it. You...
  January 29th, 2011 23:49
• Because of.... (Bluesyzygy) It is very sweet and loving....yet the affection seems to hinge on the...
  January 29th, 2011 23:40
• Vampiric Act (Zojinjo) Whoa....creepy! The image made me wonder and the poem explained it...how...
  January 29th, 2011 23:31
• Looking in the mirror (Kimmerz) Fascinating! Excellent observation! You stated it all so very well. As...
  January 29th, 2011 23:24
• Dreams (Hidan) Sweet....a delightful dream!....the world all to yourselves in love...
  January 29th, 2011 23:15
• CERTAIN TIMES (Sadia Ismail) Very interesting, fascinating, contemplative philosophical call to grab...
  January 29th, 2011 23:08
• My Dog's Road to Fame (Sudarshan) Amusing...made me chuckle. Delightful ,silly, imaginary (it's not true,...
  January 29th, 2011 22:51