Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Giving Up (Dbremner)
If you were inclined you might classify it as reflection or else sad. A...
December 10th, 2011 22:50 - For A Polish Girl in Hyde Park (Dbremner)
Poignant and bittersweet, with wonderful imagery painting that seeming...
December 7th, 2011 00:12 - What Events Are Made Worse By Whiskey, Really? (Luke timms)
The main problem with my commenting on this is my ignorance of that realm...
November 27th, 2011 22:40 - Lily Allen on Vinyl (Dbremner)
Ah, long time no see! I like that "be real" admonition. This has a...
November 26th, 2011 19:00 - Looking for Pawo (Bokononsense)
Wow. I love all the imagery, it is captivating! The reader travels along...
November 3rd, 2011 16:55 - Stupidity (Broken_dreams23)
Brimful of regret and remorse, the author's note adds to the poignancy of...
October 29th, 2011 10:12 - Live free (Touch)
Hmm. The basic questions thinking folk ponder....and then we conclude to...
October 28th, 2011 14:21 - Waiting Dreams (Dolphine29)
It is particularly fascinating to me, seeing I am an incurable dreamer and...
October 23rd, 2011 20:43 - Reflection (Sammy4ever1995)
Excellent plea and beautifully rhymed. It'd look better with the lines...
October 22nd, 2011 22:56 - INAGAW (Shubert)
Unfortunately it does not appear to be in English.
October 21st, 2011 22:58 - In Your Arms (BabiiGurl13)
So wonderfully in love, definitely. Makes one wonder what happened to...
October 18th, 2011 23:34 - always believe (Lifewellspoken)
Hmm. Exquisite image. Lovely admonition. Rarely if ever am I not...
October 18th, 2011 14:30 - Your love.. Your passion. (Lifewellspoken)
How perfect for "tax" day.....taxing for the utmost passion and love to...
October 18th, 2011 14:28 - A beautiful Fairytale. (Lifewellspoken)
Your personal variety of spelling is fascinating. Classifying this as...
October 18th, 2011 14:25 - first love is like playing with fire (Sammy4ever1995)
Excellent tribute to romantic love and that precious first love! Romantic...
October 18th, 2011 14:18 - Soldiers (BabiiGurl13)
Your own brothers! La, what precious treasures to hand to the enemy. Oh,...
October 17th, 2011 17:35 - Memory Path (Dolphine29)
Wow. I love the image paired with this interesting contemplation on...
October 16th, 2011 19:47 - Fantasy And Reality (Anna)
Does your author's note mean you do not desire comments after all? I...
October 16th, 2011 19:35 - time (Jalso)
No thank you, please. It did not look rosy but rather grey, yet this is...
October 13th, 2011 11:01 - This Feeling (Broken_dreams23)
Beautiful and so bittersweet, excellently and poignantly expressing the...
October 7th, 2011 10:44 - My Only Bonsai Tree (Paul Price)
Wow! Awesome, poignant ballad of your beloved passions and the dog that...
October 7th, 2011 10:41 - sonetimes i miss you (Star)
Sometimes indeed! The natural, common sentiments are simply expressed,...
October 2nd, 2011 23:40 - get out of my mind (Jennysheart911)
Sad indeed; the struggle to climb out of the pit of heartbroken love is...
October 1st, 2011 21:56 - early autumn (Sarah)
Excellent imagery expressing the mental state of many, in the perfect...
October 1st, 2011 21:44 - Face down in the dirt , she says it doesnt hurt. (Kelseyroy)
Eerie, haunting, chilling. Something almost like a familiar story. ...
September 26th, 2011 21:28 - On Her Eighth Birthday (MBJ Pancras)
Very interesting religious depiction of your darling daughter's creation...
September 21st, 2011 13:37 - today (Sammy4ever1995)
What very sweet declaration of love! How delightful. It beautifully...
September 21st, 2011 13:32 - No title (Hiandbye)
La, and from "Hi...and....bye!" it seems quite fitting. The concluding...
September 19th, 2011 19:59 - UNTITLED (Tamm13)
Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I...
September 19th, 2011 19:55 - When you went away (Huzaidi Hashim)
The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for...
September 18th, 2011 20:09 - Never absolute (Nexuscjt)
It is a reflection indeed, and yet it seems most of your postings are...
September 18th, 2011 20:01 - Give A Little Love (Nexuscjt)
Very interesting and thought-provoking meditation, more especially so to...
September 18th, 2011 19:51 - YOU AND ONLY YOU (If_you are a women_kiss me)
It is beautifully romantic! The overwhelming desire poignantly calls to...
September 13th, 2011 21:08 - the box (Jalso)
Intriguing. Since the television has aptly been termed "the idiot box"...
September 9th, 2011 22:38 - Witchcraft (Zojinjo)
Haunting, chilling, and eerie, to say the least. And yet I almost think...
September 7th, 2011 16:59 - the drains and faith (Jalso)
Almost subtly powerful and nearly intriguing. Interesting diatribe with...
September 7th, 2011 16:46 - All Forgotten (Alexandre Landsley)
Hmm. Thought-provoking. The imagery aptly expresses the crushing reality...
September 6th, 2011 22:31 - keep the lights on (Jalso)
It is eerie, chilling and haunting, not to mention reminiscent of a...
September 6th, 2011 18:07 - Daydreaming (Alexandre Landsley)
Very interesting daydreaming, laden with delightful imagery, and...
September 5th, 2011 22:09 - awake (Jalso)
Eerie and intriguing. The mono-rhyme in the first and final stanzas is...
September 2nd, 2011 20:17 - your my otther half (Taia edwards)
This beautifully conveys the reality of "being in love." Short and sweet....
August 31st, 2011 21:57 - I'm Poetic (Alexandre Landsley)
Ah, but I really like this! Wonderful depiction of the writer and...
August 31st, 2011 21:55 - Hero or Villain (Alexandre Landsley)
Creepy! Presented rather humbly, sorrowful in the speaker's grief and...
August 31st, 2011 21:51 - spending my time (Jalso)
The conclusion is only too fitting and yet added a seeming touch of humor...
August 31st, 2011 21:42 - Timeline skip (Jalso)
Throwing in that reference to the Illuminati is not exactly a light...
August 31st, 2011 21:36 - stuff (Jalso)
For bored with nothing to do, this fits. The touch of rhyming is nice and...
August 31st, 2011 21:31 - nite (Jalso)
Interesting, and a tad engaging with good imagery conveying a sense of the...
August 31st, 2011 21:27 - Indigo children (Jalso)
Your author's note is helpful to little me. This is a very interesting...
August 31st, 2011 21:22 - Despair (Taia edwards)
The expression of total attachment and fulfillment perfectly expresses...
August 23rd, 2011 21:27 - ~My Rose~ (Taia edwards)
Great imagery, conveying via the helpful author's note, the reality of...
August 23rd, 2011 21:22 - My Angel (Nexuscjt)
So many fellows like to classify their sweethearts as "angels" and she...
August 23rd, 2011 21:18 - Better Paste (Nexuscjt)
Very interesting philosophic contemplation....childhood's carefree,...
August 23rd, 2011 21:15 - Lesson (Dolphine29)
Excellent imagery, laden with meaning, conveying the idea the author's...
August 23rd, 2011 20:52 - ~~A friend indeed~~ (Rajat)
Beautiful sentiments and delightful end-rhyming! He is half in-love...
August 18th, 2011 22:06 - Diary of a broken girl # 1 (Lonelykaren)
The speaker sounds just like a teenage girl. Her life is far from...
August 18th, 2011 22:02 - " cry not" (Micaila)
Beautiful and thought-provoking. Laden with advice to contemplate. If...
August 18th, 2011 21:29 - Last dash to the finish line! (Huzaidi Hashim)
Thank you for the very helpful author's note. Oh, how sweet and poignant...
August 11th, 2011 23:17 - A Brand New Me (Alexandre Landsley)
A tad intriguing, very interesting, thought-provoking and laden with...
August 8th, 2011 22:04 - My Best Friends (Anna)
You're kidding! You are dead-serious????!!! La, what a bunch of girls! ...
August 5th, 2011 22:35 - It is not Love (Theresa)
Excellently expressing the reality of "being in love". "Love" is used to...
August 5th, 2011 22:32 - Unsaid (Emi)
Excellent! And the initial assessment that she should just keep silent is...
August 5th, 2011 22:23 - Ode to Lucifer!! (BattleChrist)
Excellent ode, and yet, perishing is no laughing matter, the Lord speaks...
August 3rd, 2011 21:14 - Always a decision (Barbara)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. A sorry saviour and impossible...
August 2nd, 2011 20:13 - Standing Before The Grave (Skylar)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. Good imagery portraying the case...
August 2nd, 2011 20:10 - CHESS EXPLAINED (Sudarshan)
Fun, simplistic explanation of chess! I enjoyed it, a lovely reminder.
August 2nd, 2011 20:06 - wish (Aliakbar)
Very interesting. The sun actually wished to be the...
August 2nd, 2011 19:02 - THE PATRIOT !!! (Nikhilps)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. Good imagery. Excellent that...
August 2nd, 2011 19:00 - Tears on Your Wedding Day (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. I wish them all the best. This is a beautiful, slightly intriguing...
August 2nd, 2011 18:57 - 15 Amendments to the Constitution of our minds (SauravRHS)
Very interesting contemplation, amusing and thought-provoking! I enjoyed...
July 31st, 2011 20:32 - Survivor in Solitude (Dolphine29)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. The surrounding madness of the...
July 31st, 2011 20:28 - Mom, it’s for you! (Rajat)
Aw, such a sweet tribute to loving mothers! How very lovely. It aptly...
July 23rd, 2011 10:31 - Partey Time! (Skylar)
Very interesting and fascinating! It poignantly evoked the excitement...
July 22nd, 2011 21:23 - Time and Life (JayFace21)
Fascinating, familiar contemplation, especially the interesting successful...
July 22nd, 2011 21:18 - Rain (Jazmine zillmer)
Fascinating metaphors you've associated with rain! Excellent imagery....
July 22nd, 2011 21:14 - Just To Make You Happy (Broken_dreams23)
This conveys the hopeless, rather defiant sentiment effectively, by...
July 22nd, 2011 21:10 - Titless (Byllis)
Fascinating and intriguing with excellent imagery, seeming almost...
July 19th, 2011 19:48 - Out In The Open (Katrina)
It's very like a terribly true bold-faced acknowledgment of wrong-doing. ...
July 19th, 2011 19:45 - Can't Do Anything Right (Emi)
Sorrowful, indeed. It seems, though, an excellent acknowledgment of our...
July 19th, 2011 19:39 - Far Behind (Emi)
Almost virulent, passionately fierce and definitely dangerous. A vengeful...
July 19th, 2011 19:36 - MOTHER EARTH (Sudarshan)
Very well done, the repeating emphasis of the first line effectively...
July 19th, 2011 19:29 - No use regretting now! (a song written by my late father) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Thank you very much for taking the time to translate it for those of us...
July 17th, 2011 21:18 - If Only I Had Known (Emi)
Thought-provoking and again, very fascinating. It expresses the...
July 17th, 2011 21:08 - Never (Emi)
The conclusion is brilliant for many cannot disagree, never realizing how...
July 17th, 2011 20:45 - Memories (Emi)
For mere random contemplations in miserable moments, this is...
July 16th, 2011 09:53 - Change (Nexuscjt)
Indeed, an excellent example of thinking "aloud!" Fascinating and...
July 14th, 2011 21:52 - INSIDE & OUT ASSESSMENT (Nexuscjt)
I love your author's note in particular because it lends perspective on...
May 12th, 2011 14:57 - Its you (Holly Miller)
Very good! This excellently depicts that age-old wonder of falling in...
May 12th, 2011 13:51 - Could this be love? (Hoween94)
Alas, and how very well and perfectly you've depicted it here! Wonderful!...
May 12th, 2011 13:46 - Lights on a broken window (Zojinjo)
Ah, how poignantly and perfectly depicted! You scare me! Tell me this is...
May 9th, 2011 22:43 - Coming of the Antichrist (Zojinjo)
Ugh! How awful! La, but you exercise quite the imagination of devilish...
May 6th, 2011 20:16 - Hell... attack! (Zojinjo)
And thus the devils stoke the fire and encourage themselves against their...
May 6th, 2011 19:44 - The human infection (Zojinjo)
On the one hand, I tend to agree, if you examine what sinful mankind does....
May 6th, 2011 19:35 - NBF (NATURAL BORN FIGHTER) (Nexuscjt)
It's so delightfully characteristically you! The pep talk for when you're...
May 6th, 2011 19:29 - The North Star (Shawnj2609)
Wow. And very beautifully written it is too! It has a sweet painful...
April 23rd, 2011 17:57 - I Am Stupid (Alexandre Landsley)
Hahaha, indeed. And "s" being my middle initial, "'S' stands for...
April 23rd, 2011 10:05 - Always walking beside you. (Lifewellspoken)
Well, Monseigneur Humble, the committee confesses that this was so very...
April 12th, 2011 23:20 - Eric, the Evil Emu (Sudarshan)
Wow. Thank you! Quite a fascinating tale! I much enjoyed reading it,...
April 7th, 2011 23:40 - MAINTAIN FOR THE GAME (Nexuscjt)
La dee dah! Well, and that is the attitude of the proud? Seems so. Very...
April 7th, 2011 23:31 - Who Broke the Looking Glass? A Question for Alice. (Dead Crow)
La dee dah. But you do write well! What an awful but perfect depiction! ...
March 31st, 2011 15:30 - Take what you will. (Brennan)
You seem to have excellently expressed it dividing the lines as you have, ...
March 22nd, 2011 22:57
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