Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- The Eternal Time (Rajat)
The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem...
February 6th, 2011 21:05 - Please come (Hidan)
Aw, simple and rather sweet. Your end-rhyming was nice, and your...
February 6th, 2011 20:35 - Make Up Your Mind (Emi)
Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How...
February 6th, 2011 20:32 - The Girl who Boasted (Sudarshan)
Jolly good funny! I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating, the first half/three...
February 6th, 2011 20:09 - Congruence (Marius)
Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring,...
February 6th, 2011 18:40 - Take My Heart (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't...
February 6th, 2011 18:33 - A Black Place (DOGG)
If I dare guess, will you tell me the answer? Is it the...
February 6th, 2011 18:28 - my life (Erin wynette)
"....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do...
February 6th, 2011 18:25 - Drained (Erin wynette)
Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in...
February 6th, 2011 18:19 - money (Leroyblackwoodjnr)
Ah, excellent reminder! And too, God's Word says truly "the love of money...
February 5th, 2011 23:00 - A PLEA TO GOD (Jvl narasimha rao)
Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you...
February 5th, 2011 22:46 - Cherry and Valentine (Hidan)
Well-written, bittersweet and simplistic yet with such feeling....I am...
February 5th, 2011 22:40 - The Republic Day Comes (Sudarshan)
It's a beautiful tribute to your Republic Day....I especially loved the...
February 5th, 2011 22:36 - mommy (Bluesyzygy)
Too sweet....a delightful tribute to our precious, inestimable darling...
February 5th, 2011 16:26 - My Own Reflection (Dbremner)
Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the...
February 5th, 2011 16:14 - Forbidden Love (Marius)
Intriguing, fascinating, enticing, provocative,....rather fearful in that...
February 5th, 2011 12:20 - My guardian angel (Rajat)
Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is...
February 5th, 2011 12:14 - total passion. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, I get the luxury of the first look-see at this passionate avowal of...
February 4th, 2011 18:00 - The Offer (Marius)
Aw. This is soo good...and still 10/9 days 'til the lover's holiday of...
February 4th, 2011 17:45 - Saint-Malo - A Tribute (Dbremner)
Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this...
February 4th, 2011 17:40 - Space (Monsters)
Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with...
February 4th, 2011 14:35 - The Story of a depressed kid (DOGG)
Aw. Short and bittersweet. Excellent!
February 4th, 2011 14:30 - THE RETURN OF THE WORLD CUP: MY DREAM (Sudarshan)
Loved it. Could almost see and hear it too. Thanks, this was enjoyable.
February 4th, 2011 14:28 - Tick Tock (Emi)
Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when...
February 4th, 2011 14:25 - never ending nightmare (Tshi-tshi)
Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my...
February 4th, 2011 14:20 - Looking back (Hidan)
Fascinating, especially since it can allude to something deeper....like,...
February 4th, 2011 14:04 - My Friends Your Poems (Leonard Dabydeen)
Fascinating. I like it! Though your second stanza seems to rule out some...
February 4th, 2011 10:46 - Far Far Away (but not too far) (John)
Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded...
February 4th, 2011 10:37 - Life's A Game (Monsters)
Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title...
February 3rd, 2011 23:55 - The road full of promises (Gerrylegister)
Very fascinating, and interesting poetic perspective on life/love and your...
February 3rd, 2011 23:46 - FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH (Jvl narasimha rao)
Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic...
February 3rd, 2011 14:47 - You fill my life. (Lifewellspoken)
Superb! Excellent, Monsieur Jason! How delightfully tender and...
February 3rd, 2011 14:37 - Carousel (Dbremner)
Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a...
February 3rd, 2011 14:34 - The Cockroach (Zojinjo)
The image made me gasp in horror when it burst on my sight, and the poem...
February 3rd, 2011 14:28 - flipped script (Boricuamami222)
Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider...
February 3rd, 2011 12:14 - Tears (Ashley)
Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me...
February 3rd, 2011 12:09 - Or So They Say (Emi)
Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet...
February 3rd, 2011 12:02 - I can’t give you more (Marius)
This is so very beautiful, enticing, alluring....and yet....is it wrong...
February 3rd, 2011 11:43 - SOCCER WORLDCUP (Sudarshan)
Very fascinating assessment and tribute to the world cup! Your...
February 3rd, 2011 11:31 - Change You Wish (Leonard Dabydeen)
Fascinating! I like how you ordered the stanzas to taper....fascinating...
February 3rd, 2011 00:29 - My World (Patriots)
The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly...
February 3rd, 2011 00:13 - Polyamor (Haiku) (Zojinjo)
What is a "polyamour"? I couldn't find the word in my dictionary....seems...
February 2nd, 2011 20:50 - LOVE HURTS! (Sadia Ismail)
Very fascinating.....in response to your author's comment....we seriously...
February 2nd, 2011 20:34 - Deeper and Deeper (Emi)
Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What...
February 2nd, 2011 20:24 - Always beautiful (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, Monsieur Jason....but your poetry is sometimes so intriguing,...
February 2nd, 2011 19:00 - Broken (Marius)
Very fascinating. Delightful. Beautiful, bitterSWEET. Heartbroken with...
February 2nd, 2011 18:57 - Yes It Is True (Alexandre Landsley)
Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's...
February 2nd, 2011 18:49 - ONCE I ...................... (Sudarshan)
Beautiful almost simplistic description of the creation/nature in its...
February 2nd, 2011 18:22 - Poetic Baptisms (JamaicaMeCrayZ)
Very fascinating....interesting, intriguing, enjoyable flowing...
February 2nd, 2011 18:18 - Anarkali in Motion (Leonard Dabydeen)
Wow. Very fascinating, and rather intriguing....delightful romantic...
February 2nd, 2011 18:10 - My Life!! (Lonelykaren)
Editing is work I'd rather not do myself, but sometimes our stuff looks...
February 2nd, 2011 18:06 - I Hate The World (Alexandre Landsley)
Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love...
February 2nd, 2011 01:07 - Raped (Zojinjo)
Oh, la. But you are crafting this eerily! Depicting the horrible scene...
February 1st, 2011 15:47 - Black and White (Emi)
Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world...
February 1st, 2011 15:42 - Enigma (Belinda AMeharry)
Delightfully sweet romantic poem of love....with the loving and longing,...
February 1st, 2011 15:38 - Nikki (JoshuaConklin)
It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and...
February 1st, 2011 15:28 - Control (Marius)
"Control Freaks." La, but you described the ugly character so...
February 1st, 2011 15:24 - BLIGHTY DOG (Sudarshan)
Delightful....I enjoyed this humorous look at....not a real dog, surely? ...
February 1st, 2011 15:15 - Lost it all (Patriots)
Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's...
February 1st, 2011 15:12 - Spring Flowers (Dbremner)
Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in...
February 1st, 2011 13:30 - Inseparable love (Gerrylegister)
Very fascinating contemplation, interesting...
January 31st, 2011 23:39 - life (Leroyblackwoodjnr)
Very interesting...fascinating meditation, contemplation.
January 31st, 2011 23:33 - As Long as Forever (Emi)
Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding...
January 31st, 2011 23:28 - Your Girl (StormyDay)
Yes, a very nice love poem...fascinating, since she feels herself not good...
January 31st, 2011 23:20 - Here are the Aliens! (Sudarshan)
Even so....you should not speak so disrespectfully of your teachers. I do...
January 31st, 2011 23:12 - FRIENDSHIP LIKE THE SUN (Jvl narasimha rao)
Fascinating analogy. I agree, you are calling for true friends not the...
January 31st, 2011 22:59 - Please forgive me (JoshuaConklin)
Well-written. You hint at the reason she needs to forgive, and if she...
January 31st, 2011 22:53 - Suicide (Zojinjo)
La, but what an imagination to draw this story line from the...
January 31st, 2011 22:45 - My Last Riddle (John)
Not funny. Cold, deadly, and dreadfully chilling! La, and reading it, am...
January 31st, 2011 21:52 - Solitary Tree (Marius)
Fascinating...and for all it is sad, yet even so, delightful! Your...
January 31st, 2011 21:50 - REMEDY (Nexuscjt)
Fascinating...very. The image with it is likewise rather...
January 31st, 2011 00:56 - Alone (AngelKitty)
Very nicely done! Your title sets the stage which your initial thoughts...
January 31st, 2011 00:42 - LOVE it's you... (Murli.ilovemydreams)
Wow. I LOVE the picture with it...such a nice fitting touch with the...
January 31st, 2011 00:33 - The Toy Master (Zojinjo)
La, but it has quite a nasty touch in his vile attitude. I wonder that he...
January 31st, 2011 00:25 - Little by Little (Emi)
It is very sweet, with a tinge of bittersweet, for the bitterness of your...
January 31st, 2011 00:16 - OUT OF TIME (Sudarshan)
Oh! But I LOVED this one! You wrote it very nicely, with a delightful...
January 31st, 2011 00:05 - Died Young (Patriots)
Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or...
January 30th, 2011 23:55 - RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION (Jvl narasimha rao)
The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while...
January 30th, 2011 23:51 - A Kiss says it all (Gerrylegister)
Oh, this is a delightfully sweet study of love and it's allure and sweet...
January 30th, 2011 14:52 - Esto Perpetue (Mistoffelees)
It is a very touching piece of heartbreak...rather moving in the way you...
January 30th, 2011 01:01 - My World (Alexandre Landsley)
Wow. This is excellent! Very sweetly put and so perfectly too in the...
January 30th, 2011 00:50 - Seconds (Marius)
Wow. You do write lovely romantic poems! Your girl could fall for you,...
January 30th, 2011 00:20 - Cinderella (Emi)
Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! ...
January 30th, 2011 00:15 - The Gift of Love (Marius)
Delightfully romantic call to your lady-love! I quite enjoyed it. You...
January 29th, 2011 23:49 - Because of.... (Bluesyzygy)
It is very sweet and loving....yet the affection seems to hinge on the...
January 29th, 2011 23:40 - Vampiric Act (Zojinjo)
Whoa....creepy! The image made me wonder and the poem explained it...how...
January 29th, 2011 23:31 - Looking in the mirror (Kimmerz)
Fascinating! Excellent observation! You stated it all so very well. As...
January 29th, 2011 23:24 - Dreams (Hidan)
Sweet....a delightful dream!....the world all to yourselves in love...
January 29th, 2011 23:15 - CERTAIN TIMES (Sadia Ismail)
Very interesting, fascinating, contemplative philosophical call to grab...
January 29th, 2011 23:08 - My Dog's Road to Fame (Sudarshan)
Amusing...made me chuckle. Delightful ,silly, imaginary (it's not true,...
January 29th, 2011 22:51 - Young Soldiers (Patriots)
Very interesting. Like going out to war....the "pep talk"/prep talk as...
January 29th, 2011 18:36 - OH! MY DEAR CHILD (Jvl narasimha rao)
Aw, the happy little nursing daughter is too adorably sweet! Perfect...
January 29th, 2011 00:46 - never ending nightmare (Boricuamami222)
Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? ...
January 29th, 2011 00:35 - To See Truth open your eyes. To be happy shut them. (John)
Oh, sweet! I love the title...makes me smile, so aptly stated. Your...
January 29th, 2011 00:27 - Still the one (Gerrylegister)
Wow. I love this romantic, tender love poem! You expressed true love so...
January 29th, 2011 00:16 - Dawn Chorus (Dbremner)
Beautiful. You succinctly captured the delight of the new day's trilling. ...
January 28th, 2011 23:46 - The loving measures of obscurities=) (Exquiste1)
Fascinating, intriguing, very interesting contemplation....the title gave...
January 28th, 2011 23:35 - how could you?? (Happy feet)
Very good. You've expressed it very well....ah, the horrid realization of...
January 28th, 2011 23:18 - Sorry (StormyDay)
I LOVE the image...the puppy is so perfectly fitting and so adorable! ...
January 28th, 2011 22:49 - Their Lifes together. (Zojinjo)
Ya, and it follows too. I love your "author's comment...."! I agree it...
January 28th, 2011 22:27
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