Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy



  • The Eternal Time (Rajat) The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem...
    February 6th, 2011 21:05
  • Please come (Hidan) Aw, simple and rather sweet. Your end-rhyming was nice, and your...
    February 6th, 2011 20:35
  • Make Up Your Mind (Emi) Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How...
    February 6th, 2011 20:32
  • The Girl who Boasted (Sudarshan) Jolly good funny! I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating, the first half/three...
    February 6th, 2011 20:09
  • Congruence (Marius) Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring,...
    February 6th, 2011 18:40
  • Take My Heart (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't...
    February 6th, 2011 18:33
  • A Black Place (DOGG) If I dare guess, will you tell me the answer? Is it the...
    February 6th, 2011 18:28
  • my life (Erin wynette) "....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do...
    February 6th, 2011 18:25
  • Drained (Erin wynette) Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in...
    February 6th, 2011 18:19
  • money (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Ah, excellent reminder! And too, God's Word says truly "the love of money...
    February 5th, 2011 23:00
  • A PLEA TO GOD (Jvl narasimha rao) Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you...
    February 5th, 2011 22:46
  • Cherry and Valentine (Hidan) Well-written, bittersweet and simplistic yet with such feeling....I am...
    February 5th, 2011 22:40
  • The Republic Day Comes (Sudarshan) It's a beautiful tribute to your Republic Day....I especially loved the...
    February 5th, 2011 22:36
  • mommy (Bluesyzygy) Too sweet....a delightful tribute to our precious, inestimable darling...
    February 5th, 2011 16:26
  • My Own Reflection (Dbremner) Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the...
    February 5th, 2011 16:14
  • Forbidden Love (Marius) Intriguing, fascinating, enticing, provocative,....rather fearful in that...
    February 5th, 2011 12:20
  • My guardian angel (Rajat) Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is...
    February 5th, 2011 12:14
  • total passion. (Lifewellspoken) Ah, I get the luxury of the first look-see at this passionate avowal of...
    February 4th, 2011 18:00
  • The Offer (Marius) Aw. This is soo good...and still 10/9 days 'til the lover's holiday of...
    February 4th, 2011 17:45
  • Saint-Malo - A Tribute (Dbremner) Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this...
    February 4th, 2011 17:40
  • Space (Monsters) Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with...
    February 4th, 2011 14:35
  • The Story of a depressed kid (DOGG) Aw. Short and bittersweet. Excellent!
    February 4th, 2011 14:30
  • THE RETURN OF THE WORLD CUP: MY DREAM (Sudarshan) Loved it. Could almost see and hear it too. Thanks, this was enjoyable.
    February 4th, 2011 14:28
  • Tick Tock (Emi) Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when...
    February 4th, 2011 14:25
  • never ending nightmare (Tshi-tshi) Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my...
    February 4th, 2011 14:20
  • Looking back (Hidan) Fascinating, especially since it can allude to something deeper....like,...
    February 4th, 2011 14:04
  • My Friends Your Poems (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating. I like it! Though your second stanza seems to rule out some...
    February 4th, 2011 10:46
  • Far Far Away (but not too far) (John) Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded...
    February 4th, 2011 10:37
  • Life's A Game (Monsters) Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title...
    February 3rd, 2011 23:55
  • The road full of promises (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating, and interesting poetic perspective on life/love and your...
    February 3rd, 2011 23:46
  • FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH (Jvl narasimha rao) Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic...
    February 3rd, 2011 14:47
  • You fill my life. (Lifewellspoken) Superb! Excellent, Monsieur Jason! How delightfully tender and...
    February 3rd, 2011 14:37
  • Carousel (Dbremner) Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a...
    February 3rd, 2011 14:34
  • The Cockroach (Zojinjo) The image made me gasp in horror when it burst on my sight, and the poem...
    February 3rd, 2011 14:28
  • flipped script (Boricuamami222) Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider...
    February 3rd, 2011 12:14
  • Tears (Ashley) Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me...
    February 3rd, 2011 12:09
  • Or So They Say (Emi) Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet...
    February 3rd, 2011 12:02
  • I can’t give you more (Marius) This is so very beautiful, enticing, alluring....and yet....is it wrong...
    February 3rd, 2011 11:43
  • SOCCER WORLDCUP (Sudarshan) Very fascinating assessment and tribute to the world cup! Your...
    February 3rd, 2011 11:31
  • Change You Wish (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating! I like how you ordered the stanzas to taper....fascinating...
    February 3rd, 2011 00:29
  • My World (Patriots) The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly...
    February 3rd, 2011 00:13
  • Polyamor (Haiku) (Zojinjo) What is a "polyamour"? I couldn't find the word in my dictionary....seems...
    February 2nd, 2011 20:50
  • LOVE HURTS! (Sadia Ismail) Very fascinating.....in response to your author's comment....we seriously...
    February 2nd, 2011 20:34
  • Deeper and Deeper (Emi) Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What...
    February 2nd, 2011 20:24
  • Always beautiful (Lifewellspoken) Ah, Monsieur Jason....but your poetry is sometimes so intriguing,...
    February 2nd, 2011 19:00
  • Broken (Marius) Very fascinating. Delightful. Beautiful, bitterSWEET. Heartbroken with...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:57
  • Yes It Is True (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:49
  • ONCE I ...................... (Sudarshan) Beautiful almost simplistic description of the creation/nature in its...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:22
  • Poetic Baptisms (JamaicaMeCrayZ) Very fascinating....interesting, intriguing, enjoyable flowing...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:18
  • Anarkali in Motion (Leonard Dabydeen) Wow. Very fascinating, and rather intriguing....delightful romantic...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:10
  • My Life!! (Lonelykaren) Editing is work I'd rather not do myself, but sometimes our stuff looks...
    February 2nd, 2011 18:06
  • I Hate The World (Alexandre Landsley) Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love...
    February 2nd, 2011 01:07
  • Raped (Zojinjo) Oh, la. But you are crafting this eerily! Depicting the horrible scene...
    February 1st, 2011 15:47
  • Black and White (Emi) Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world...
    February 1st, 2011 15:42
  • Enigma (Belinda AMeharry) Delightfully sweet romantic poem of love....with the loving and longing,...
    February 1st, 2011 15:38
  • Nikki (JoshuaConklin) It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and...
    February 1st, 2011 15:28
  • Control (Marius) "Control Freaks." La, but you described the ugly character so...
    February 1st, 2011 15:24
  • BLIGHTY DOG (Sudarshan) Delightful....I enjoyed this humorous look at....not a real dog, surely? ...
    February 1st, 2011 15:15
  • Lost it all (Patriots) Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's...
    February 1st, 2011 15:12
  • Spring Flowers (Dbremner) Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in...
    February 1st, 2011 13:30
  • Inseparable love (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating contemplation, interesting...
    January 31st, 2011 23:39
  • life (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Very interesting...fascinating meditation, contemplation.
    January 31st, 2011 23:33
  • As Long as Forever (Emi) Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding...
    January 31st, 2011 23:28
  • Your Girl (StormyDay) Yes, a very nice love poem...fascinating, since she feels herself not good...
    January 31st, 2011 23:20
  • Here are the Aliens! (Sudarshan) Even so....you should not speak so disrespectfully of your teachers. I do...
    January 31st, 2011 23:12
  • FRIENDSHIP LIKE THE SUN (Jvl narasimha rao) Fascinating analogy. I agree, you are calling for true friends not the...
    January 31st, 2011 22:59
  • Please forgive me (JoshuaConklin) Well-written. You hint at the reason she needs to forgive, and if she...
    January 31st, 2011 22:53
  • Suicide (Zojinjo) La, but what an imagination to draw this story line from the...
    January 31st, 2011 22:45
  • My Last Riddle (John) Not funny. Cold, deadly, and dreadfully chilling! La, and reading it, am...
    January 31st, 2011 21:52
  • Solitary Tree (Marius) Fascinating...and for all it is sad, yet even so, delightful! Your...
    January 31st, 2011 21:50
  • REMEDY (Nexuscjt) Fascinating...very. The image with it is likewise rather...
    January 31st, 2011 00:56
  • Alone (AngelKitty) Very nicely done! Your title sets the stage which your initial thoughts...
    January 31st, 2011 00:42
  • LOVE it's you... (Murli.ilovemydreams) Wow. I LOVE the picture with it...such a nice fitting touch with the...
    January 31st, 2011 00:33
  • The Toy Master (Zojinjo) La, but it has quite a nasty touch in his vile attitude. I wonder that he...
    January 31st, 2011 00:25
  • Little by Little (Emi) It is very sweet, with a tinge of bittersweet, for the bitterness of your...
    January 31st, 2011 00:16
  • OUT OF TIME (Sudarshan) Oh! But I LOVED this one! You wrote it very nicely, with a delightful...
    January 31st, 2011 00:05
  • Died Young (Patriots) Aw. This is a very sweet tribute to losing somebody...in their youth or...
    January 30th, 2011 23:55
  • RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION (Jvl narasimha rao) The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while...
    January 30th, 2011 23:51
  • A Kiss says it all (Gerrylegister) Oh, this is a delightfully sweet study of love and it's allure and sweet...
    January 30th, 2011 14:52
  • Esto Perpetue (Mistoffelees) It is a very touching piece of heartbreak...rather moving in the way you...
    January 30th, 2011 01:01
  • My World (Alexandre Landsley) Wow. This is excellent! Very sweetly put and so perfectly too in the...
    January 30th, 2011 00:50
  • Seconds (Marius) Wow. You do write lovely romantic poems! Your girl could fall for you,...
    January 30th, 2011 00:20
  • Cinderella (Emi) Hahaha! I quite enjoyed your alternate version to the old fairy tale! ...
    January 30th, 2011 00:15
  • The Gift of Love (Marius) Delightfully romantic call to your lady-love! I quite enjoyed it. You...
    January 29th, 2011 23:49
  • Because of.... (Bluesyzygy) It is very sweet and loving....yet the affection seems to hinge on the...
    January 29th, 2011 23:40
  • Vampiric Act (Zojinjo) Whoa....creepy! The image made me wonder and the poem explained it...how...
    January 29th, 2011 23:31
  • Looking in the mirror (Kimmerz) Fascinating! Excellent observation! You stated it all so very well. As...
    January 29th, 2011 23:24
  • Dreams (Hidan) Sweet....a delightful dream!....the world all to yourselves in love...
    January 29th, 2011 23:15
  • CERTAIN TIMES (Sadia Ismail) Very interesting, fascinating, contemplative philosophical call to grab...
    January 29th, 2011 23:08
  • My Dog's Road to Fame (Sudarshan) Amusing...made me chuckle. Delightful ,silly, imaginary (it's not true,...
    January 29th, 2011 22:51
  • Young Soldiers (Patriots) Very interesting. Like going out to war....the "pep talk"/prep talk as...
    January 29th, 2011 18:36
  • OH! MY DEAR CHILD (Jvl narasimha rao) Aw, the happy little nursing daughter is too adorably sweet! Perfect...
    January 29th, 2011 00:46
  • never ending nightmare (Boricuamami222) Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? ...
    January 29th, 2011 00:35
  • To See Truth open your eyes. To be happy shut them. (John) Oh, sweet! I love the title...makes me smile, so aptly stated. Your...
    January 29th, 2011 00:27
  • Still the one (Gerrylegister) Wow. I love this romantic, tender love poem! You expressed true love so...
    January 29th, 2011 00:16
  • Dawn Chorus (Dbremner) Beautiful. You succinctly captured the delight of the new day's trilling. ...
    January 28th, 2011 23:46
  • The loving measures of obscurities=) (Exquiste1) Fascinating, intriguing, very interesting contemplation....the title gave...
    January 28th, 2011 23:35
  • how could you?? (Happy feet) Very good. You've expressed it very well....ah, the horrid realization of...
    January 28th, 2011 23:18
  • Sorry (StormyDay) I LOVE the image...the puppy is so perfectly fitting and so adorable! ...
    January 28th, 2011 22:49
  • Their Lifes together. (Zojinjo) Ya, and it follows too. I love your "author's comment...."! I agree it...
    January 28th, 2011 22:27


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