Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- A Brand New Me (Alexandre Landsley)
A tad intriguing, very interesting, thought-provoking and laden with...
August 8th, 2011 22:04 - My Best Friends (Anna)
You're kidding! You are dead-serious????!!! La, what a bunch of girls! ...
August 5th, 2011 22:35 - It is not Love (Theresa)
Excellently expressing the reality of "being in love". "Love" is used to...
August 5th, 2011 22:32 - Unsaid (Emi)
Excellent! And the initial assessment that she should just keep silent is...
August 5th, 2011 22:23 - Ode to Lucifer!! (BattleChrist)
Excellent ode, and yet, perishing is no laughing matter, the Lord speaks...
August 3rd, 2011 21:14 - Always a decision (Barbara)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. A sorry saviour and impossible...
August 2nd, 2011 20:13 - Standing Before The Grave (Skylar)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. Good imagery portraying the case...
August 2nd, 2011 20:10 - CHESS EXPLAINED (Sudarshan)
Fun, simplistic explanation of chess! I enjoyed it, a lovely reminder.
August 2nd, 2011 20:06 - wish (Aliakbar)
Very interesting. The sun actually wished to be the...
August 2nd, 2011 19:02 - THE PATRIOT !!! (Nikhilps)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. Good imagery. Excellent that...
August 2nd, 2011 19:00 - Tears on Your Wedding Day (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. I wish them all the best. This is a beautiful, slightly intriguing...
August 2nd, 2011 18:57 - 15 Amendments to the Constitution of our minds (SauravRHS)
Very interesting contemplation, amusing and thought-provoking! I enjoyed...
July 31st, 2011 20:32 - Survivor in Solitude (Dolphine29)
Very interesting and thought-provoking. The surrounding madness of the...
July 31st, 2011 20:28 - Mom, it’s for you! (Rajat)
Aw, such a sweet tribute to loving mothers! How very lovely. It aptly...
July 23rd, 2011 10:31 - Partey Time! (Skylar)
Very interesting and fascinating! It poignantly evoked the excitement...
July 22nd, 2011 21:23 - Time and Life (JayFace21)
Fascinating, familiar contemplation, especially the interesting successful...
July 22nd, 2011 21:18 - Rain (Jazmine zillmer)
Fascinating metaphors you've associated with rain! Excellent imagery....
July 22nd, 2011 21:14 - Just To Make You Happy (Broken_dreams23)
This conveys the hopeless, rather defiant sentiment effectively, by...
July 22nd, 2011 21:10 - Titless (Byllis)
Fascinating and intriguing with excellent imagery, seeming almost...
July 19th, 2011 19:48 - Out In The Open (Katrina)
It's very like a terribly true bold-faced acknowledgment of wrong-doing. ...
July 19th, 2011 19:45 - Can't Do Anything Right (Emi)
Sorrowful, indeed. It seems, though, an excellent acknowledgment of our...
July 19th, 2011 19:39 - Far Behind (Emi)
Almost virulent, passionately fierce and definitely dangerous. A vengeful...
July 19th, 2011 19:36 - MOTHER EARTH (Sudarshan)
Very well done, the repeating emphasis of the first line effectively...
July 19th, 2011 19:29 - No use regretting now! (a song written by my late father) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Thank you very much for taking the time to translate it for those of us...
July 17th, 2011 21:18 - If Only I Had Known (Emi)
Thought-provoking and again, very fascinating. It expresses the...
July 17th, 2011 21:08 - Never (Emi)
The conclusion is brilliant for many cannot disagree, never realizing how...
July 17th, 2011 20:45 - Memories (Emi)
For mere random contemplations in miserable moments, this is...
July 16th, 2011 09:53 - Change (Nexuscjt)
Indeed, an excellent example of thinking "aloud!" Fascinating and...
July 14th, 2011 21:52 - INSIDE & OUT ASSESSMENT (Nexuscjt)
I love your author's note in particular because it lends perspective on...
May 12th, 2011 14:57 - Its you (Holly Miller)
Very good! This excellently depicts that age-old wonder of falling in...
May 12th, 2011 13:51 - Could this be love? (Hoween94)
Alas, and how very well and perfectly you've depicted it here! Wonderful!...
May 12th, 2011 13:46 - Lights on a broken window (Zojinjo)
Ah, how poignantly and perfectly depicted! You scare me! Tell me this is...
May 9th, 2011 22:43 - Coming of the Antichrist (Zojinjo)
Ugh! How awful! La, but you exercise quite the imagination of devilish...
May 6th, 2011 20:16 - Hell... attack! (Zojinjo)
And thus the devils stoke the fire and encourage themselves against their...
May 6th, 2011 19:44 - The human infection (Zojinjo)
On the one hand, I tend to agree, if you examine what sinful mankind does....
May 6th, 2011 19:35 - NBF (NATURAL BORN FIGHTER) (Nexuscjt)
It's so delightfully characteristically you! The pep talk for when you're...
May 6th, 2011 19:29 - The North Star (Shawnj2609)
Wow. And very beautifully written it is too! It has a sweet painful...
April 23rd, 2011 17:57 - I Am Stupid (Alexandre Landsley)
Hahaha, indeed. And "s" being my middle initial, "'S' stands for...
April 23rd, 2011 10:05 - Always walking beside you. (Lifewellspoken)
Well, Monseigneur Humble, the committee confesses that this was so very...
April 12th, 2011 23:20 - Eric, the Evil Emu (Sudarshan)
Wow. Thank you! Quite a fascinating tale! I much enjoyed reading it,...
April 7th, 2011 23:40 - MAINTAIN FOR THE GAME (Nexuscjt)
La dee dah! Well, and that is the attitude of the proud? Seems so. Very...
April 7th, 2011 23:31 - Who Broke the Looking Glass? A Question for Alice. (Dead Crow)
La dee dah. But you do write well! What an awful but perfect depiction! ...
March 31st, 2011 15:30 - Take what you will. (Brennan)
You seem to have excellently expressed it dividing the lines as you have, ...
March 22nd, 2011 22:57 - My Reason (StormyDay)
Oooh, lala! Luck Daryn! Looks like the spoiled Valentine's Day didn't...
March 22nd, 2011 22:13 - Being first and last. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, Monseigneur Jason Humble, what fascinatingly incomprehensible morsel...
March 22nd, 2011 22:07 - EARTHQUAKE! (Emilou G.)
Excellent haiku in tribute to the horrendous calamity.
March 21st, 2011 23:47 - Masquerade (Emi)
Beautifully expressed and very, very sad. Your symbolism and metaphors of...
March 20th, 2011 22:02 - tears on smiling face (Rajat mahaych)
The repetition of tears on a smiling face effectively communicates the...
March 20th, 2011 21:42 - DELAYED ANGER (Nexuscjt)
Delightfully fascinating as usual, a self-discussion evaluating the...
March 20th, 2011 21:32 - Without A Beating Heart (Emi)
Very good for "just throwing something together"! This depicts the...
March 20th, 2011 21:15 - A Dandelion Love (Phylock)
Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. ...
March 19th, 2011 22:04 - Everytime (Lonelykaren)
It is very sorrowful and bitter. A very grievous situation, aptly...
March 19th, 2011 22:01 - Another time. (Lifewellspoken)
Ah, but Monsieur Jason, you have accidentally scribed yet another budding...
March 19th, 2011 21:48 - rain walk (Marius)
Fascinating metaphorical representation. Excellent! A tad intriguing, but...
March 19th, 2011 21:35 - H1 ’N Then Some (Dead Crow)
Marvelous! But you are excellently good with your loaded metaphors! ...
March 19th, 2011 21:32 - Farewell (Shyam)
This is excellent, I think! How very well and poignantly you've depicted...
March 19th, 2011 21:28 - The Voiceless (Any)
Fascinating and excellently expressed. I think unless the speaker is...
March 17th, 2011 22:22 - Messenger of truth (Licia)
Beautiful, fascinating, excellent! Reminiscent of when the Lord gave His...
March 17th, 2011 22:10 - My lil Darlin ... a country song! (original) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. Excellent! Fascinating and beautiful. So perfect and delightful. I...
March 17th, 2011 22:05 - How I Really Feel, AKA Politically F’ing Correct (Dead Crow)
Vulgar, but excellently expressed. Marvelously good point. Delightfully...
March 17th, 2011 22:03 - Because Butterscotch Bullets Taste Better (Dead Crow)
Nasty, vile piece of poetry, but these days it has a place. Taking the...
March 17th, 2011 21:50 - Times (Belinda AMeharry)
Fascinating, beautiful, interesting. There is indeed a time and season...
March 17th, 2011 21:44 - Luna Lunera (A Peruvian Lullaby) (Huzaidi Hashim)
Beautiful, bittersweet, fascinating. Thank you for sharing it.
March 17th, 2011 21:41 - Eventually, I hope. (Brennan)
Very fascinating and intriguing. Definitely determined. What is the...
March 17th, 2011 21:38 - Just anything (SauravRHS)
Hahaha! But this one WAS humorous! Fun and funny! I enjoyed it!
March 16th, 2011 13:20 - THE PET CAT (Sudarshan)
Hmm. Fascinating, humorous little anecdote about...an imaginary pussy,...
March 15th, 2011 23:50 - Tradgey, Indiffernce. (Brennan)
Impressive! So excellently depicted with metaphors, and outright, the...
March 15th, 2011 23:47 - Secret Key (Huzaidi Hashim)
Wow. I love it! So beautifully depicting that exact thing....excellently...
March 15th, 2011 23:43 - Who took my heart? (SauravRHS)
Indeed! I like it VERY well,....excepting for taking the Lord's name in...
March 15th, 2011 23:36 - THE HEART OF MY HEART (Sarah)
Wow. You write very well! Excellent, heart-wrenching dilemma! La, I...
March 12th, 2011 23:18 - silent whispers (Erica)
Wow, an acute sense of hearing....sounds miserable! You depicted it...
March 12th, 2011 23:02 - Larger then life (Lifewellspoken)
Ze vonterfull image, Monsieur Jason, sets ze tone fer de entire experience...
March 12th, 2011 22:57 - Waiting (Any)
Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no...
March 12th, 2011 22:39 - Up (Emi)
Marvelous! What an eerie, chilling, horrifying depiction of dying! Wow. ...
March 12th, 2011 22:36 - A BEAUTIFUL DAY (Meigh)
Wow. What a sweet poem from a loving father to his precious twins. Glad...
March 12th, 2011 22:32 - Poetry (Huzaidi Hashim)
Cool! I like it, not only for the content, but also for the sweet fact of...
March 12th, 2011 12:34 - ITS HEAT AND THE LUST (Sarah)
Lust has such vile connotations that I would far prefer to call it "love,"...
March 12th, 2011 00:46 - ~~In hard times...~~ (Rajat)
Beautiful and fascinating depiction of "hard times" and this "life." ...
March 12th, 2011 00:39 - My Secret (Meigh)
Wow. This is VERY sad. Very poignantly expressed as well. Left me...
March 12th, 2011 00:12 - Torn Between Two (Any)
You've depicted the struggle very well as aptly titled "torn between...
March 10th, 2011 21:59 - The Shallowest Place (Dolphine29)
Fascinating and intriguing, beginning hopefully and ending hopelessly. A...
March 10th, 2011 21:40 - My Erotic Love For You! (Briana)
Indeed, it is erotic. Very well done in that category. Bravo.
March 10th, 2011 21:33 - Sometimes (Emi)
Hmm. Delightful use of "sometimes" with all the depictions of freedom and...
March 10th, 2011 21:30 - faith (Rajat mahaych)
Hmm. Fascinating, intriguing, and bittersweet owing to the broken trust. ...
March 10th, 2011 21:26 - My Girl (Alex v)
Aw, sweet. Your end-rhyming is pleasant. You expressed the love and...
March 10th, 2011 21:23 - THE IMMEASURABLE YOU (Jvl narasimha rao)
Who is the "You"?
March 10th, 2011 21:20 - ADVENTURES IN A DREAM (Sudarshan)
Fun. You might want to make your rhyme scheme more consistent...it isn't...
March 10th, 2011 21:17 - Alone............. (Shyam)
Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. ...
March 10th, 2011 21:14 - Not Forgotten (Meigh)
Wow. It is very, very sad. What a horrible memory and great grief! You...
March 10th, 2011 21:09 - GIVE ME... (Sarah)
Fascinating, slightly intriguing, bittersweet. Rather poignant, it sounds...
March 10th, 2011 21:04 - Cracked and Crumpled (Emi)
Excellent and so poignantly expressed! Beautifully done! You depicted it...
March 10th, 2011 00:13 - The Beat of a Heart (Kristii7)
Beautiful and so lovely love poem, gently touching on/hinting of the...
March 10th, 2011 00:02 - Crucifiction (Zojinjo)
Wow. Fascinating! You seem to specialize lately in these pieces exposing...
March 9th, 2011 23:50 - A Heart's Plea (Dolphine29)
Beautiful and excellently depicted; perfectly expressed. I love how very...
March 9th, 2011 22:41 - never together i know (Sarah)
Wow. Very expressive, excellent depiction of a used woman and...
March 9th, 2011 22:36 - Funeral (Shyam)
Wow. What a thought-provoking consideration. Fascinating! I like how...
March 9th, 2011 22:27 - WIND (Sarah)
Excellent! This is impressive. Beautiful in its tender sentiments and...
March 9th, 2011 22:23 - Free me (Paullyna)
Fascinating and curious. Sweet and disturbing. Truth is not relative and...
March 9th, 2011 22:17 - soulmate (Meigh)
Wow. Eleven years is a while, yet with such deep love,....seems you might...
March 9th, 2011 22:13 - My oxygen (Lifewellspoken)
Congratulations!!! We are happy to inform you, Mr. Professional...
March 9th, 2011 22:04
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