Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy

• The Perfect Irony (SWD1992) This is beautiful. I love how you drew the scene of falling in love with...
  February 12th, 2011 15:42
• LOVE YOU (Euphorianmuse) While rather long, the story was well told. You appear to have perhaps a...
  February 12th, 2011 15:37
• my sweetest dream (Rajat mahaych) Ah, I love your sweetest dream! And you expressed it so beautifully with...
  February 12th, 2011 15:26
• Spirit Fierce! (BattleChrist) Rather nasty, yet almost fittingly devilish? If we will stand by...
  February 12th, 2011 15:22
• Inquisition (BattleChrist) Hmmm. If reminiscent of other experiences in life, which provoke such...
  February 12th, 2011 15:04
• ~~Irksome Exams!!~~ (Rajat) Ugh....very well expressed...you remind me again of it. And the image is...
  February 12th, 2011 14:50
• ~~Never leave me. . .~~ (Rajat) Wow. It is a beautiful description of love and the desire for true...
  February 12th, 2011 14:45
• I Can See (Lonelykaren) Didn't your teacher tell you what you were doing wrong and what you needed...
  February 12th, 2011 14:27
• Fall Out (StormyDay) Oh, lalala. It is very sad, and so perfectly descriptive of falling out...
  February 12th, 2011 14:20
• Falling For You (Alexandre Landsley) Aw, fascinating and very sweet. The images, by similes and metaphors were...
  February 12th, 2011 14:16
• Swan Song (Emi) Wow. Impressive....this is excellent. I love how you presented it as a...
  February 12th, 2011 14:04
• Siren (Of lust and invited consequence) (Bourbonjon) Excellently depicted, and beautifully done....the enticement and allure of...
  February 12th, 2011 13:59
• THE COMPETITION (Sudarshan) Excellently and beautifully depicted! Your conclusion was perfect! I...
  February 12th, 2011 13:00
• HAPPINESS (Sudarshan) It's an interesting discussion of happiness, especially concluding as you...
  February 12th, 2011 12:32
• How to cook pizza??? (Maryam Altaf) So....did the pizza taste good after it came out of the oven? Delightful...
  February 12th, 2011 12:28
• My new video on Youtube (Lifewellspoken) The dawgie is adorable...and the poem fascinating....rather cleverly done,...
  February 10th, 2011 13:36
• Relationships (Patriots) Fascinating....realistic look at nonbinding relationships....your...
  February 8th, 2011 22:51
• A Smile (Cora Virginia Warner) Aw...too sweet! I love your smiling picture depicting only too perfectly...
  February 8th, 2011 22:45
• addicted (Erin wynette) Wonderful! I am very happy for you two! This is a delightful and...
  February 8th, 2011 22:42
• at night (Breexbaby) Your usage of end-rhyming is pleasant. The scenario you presented is a...
  February 8th, 2011 22:39
• Why do we dream? (Dolphine29) Your image is very nicely fitting. As I am something of an incurable...
  February 8th, 2011 22:30
• Shy (StormyDay) Aw, so perfectly expressed! The image is cute and fitting, and the...
  February 8th, 2011 22:17
• Snow (StormyDay) Beautifully done, and delightful itself! I love the image you paired with...
  February 8th, 2011 22:14
• Despair (Ashley) Very well-written, depicting rather poignantly the very real despair and...
  February 8th, 2011 21:24
• Shhhhhh it's a secret. (Lifewellspoken) La, Jase, but you do write such romantic pieces...She reads and applauds...
  February 8th, 2011 18:49
• Surfacing Past (BattleChrist) I would love to hear it set to music....for even without lyrics, music is...
  February 8th, 2011 18:44
• Our Garden (Emi) Very beautiful! What a lovely depiction of your romantic love, and of...
  February 8th, 2011 18:19
• ~~Saving the planet~~ (Rajat) Beautifully done! Your end-rhyming is very good, and the rythm fairly...
  February 8th, 2011 15:43
• my last wish (Rajat mahaych) Beautiful, fascinating, sweet. Your author's comment was complementary,...
  February 8th, 2011 15:23
• THE HIDDEN FEELINGS (Tamm13) Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've...
  February 8th, 2011 15:13
• THE WORLD OF TELEVISION THROUGH MY EYES (Sudarshan) Fun....interesting, enjoyable expression of the television's significance....
  February 8th, 2011 15:05
• Who you are (Marius) Wow. Marvelous the enticing description you've given to express your...
  February 8th, 2011 15:00
• If Colour Matters Not (Leonard Dabydeen) Very intriguing and fascinating....I stupidly am struggling to understand...
  February 8th, 2011 14:47
• Thoughts on a Girls Self Portrait (Dbremner) The portrait is an image momentarily(?) indelibly etched in your mind's...
  February 7th, 2011 18:02
• Sunday Gathering (Dbremner) Excellently written....are you genuinely expressing your beliefs? While...
  February 6th, 2011 22:00
• awake...... (Tshi-tshi) Horrendous. You've depicted it rather too graphically....it is awful. I...
  February 6th, 2011 21:24
• Hope! (Sadia Ismail) The image is so perfect...is it for real? Ya, we need hope to keep going...
  February 6th, 2011 21:15
• The Eternal Time (Rajat) The image is delightfully fitting, beautiful reminder of time...the poem...
  February 6th, 2011 21:05
• Please come (Hidan) Aw, simple and rather sweet. Your end-rhyming was nice, and your...
  February 6th, 2011 20:35
• Make Up Your Mind (Emi) Sounds like he doesn't really love you but is using you....yuck! How...
  February 6th, 2011 20:32
• The Girl who Boasted (Sudarshan) Jolly good funny! I quite enjoyed it. Fascinating, the first half/three...
  February 6th, 2011 20:09
• Congruence (Marius) Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring,...
  February 6th, 2011 18:40
• Take My Heart (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. Very sweet, yet bittersweet, a plea for love....I hope she doesn't...
  February 6th, 2011 18:33
• A Black Place (DOGG) If I dare guess, will you tell me the answer? Is it the...
  February 6th, 2011 18:28
• my life (Erin wynette) "....thanks to poetry" If we can just get it out, written down, we do...
  February 6th, 2011 18:25
• Drained (Erin wynette) Well-written, excellently described.....and of course you're not alone in...
  February 6th, 2011 18:19
• money (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Ah, excellent reminder! And too, God's Word says truly "the love of money...
  February 5th, 2011 23:00
• A PLEA TO GOD (Jvl narasimha rao) Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you...
  February 5th, 2011 22:46
• Cherry and Valentine (Hidan) Well-written, bittersweet and simplistic yet with such feeling....I am...
  February 5th, 2011 22:40
• The Republic Day Comes (Sudarshan) It's a beautiful tribute to your Republic Day....I especially loved the...
  February 5th, 2011 22:36
• mommy (Bluesyzygy) Too sweet....a delightful tribute to our precious, inestimable darling...
  February 5th, 2011 16:26
• My Own Reflection (Dbremner) Fascinating...alluring. But as once hopeful "WE"....the reflection of the...
  February 5th, 2011 16:14
• Forbidden Love (Marius) Intriguing, fascinating, enticing, provocative,....rather fearful in that...
  February 5th, 2011 12:20
• My guardian angel (Rajat) Very fascinating! Rather intriguing. Beautiful. Sweet. The image is...
  February 5th, 2011 12:14
• total passion. (Lifewellspoken) Ah, I get the luxury of the first look-see at this passionate avowal of...
  February 4th, 2011 18:00
• The Offer (Marius) Aw. This is soo good...and still 10/9 days 'til the lover's holiday of...
  February 4th, 2011 17:45
• Saint-Malo - A Tribute (Dbremner) Wow....and thank you so very much for taking the reader there in this...
  February 4th, 2011 17:40
• Space (Monsters) Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with...
  February 4th, 2011 14:35
• The Story of a depressed kid (DOGG) Aw. Short and bittersweet. Excellent!
  February 4th, 2011 14:30
• THE RETURN OF THE WORLD CUP: MY DREAM (Sudarshan) Loved it. Could almost see and hear it too. Thanks, this was enjoyable.
  February 4th, 2011 14:28
• Tick Tock (Emi) Excellent. Beautifully done! You aptly portrayed the speeding time...when...
  February 4th, 2011 14:25
• never ending nightmare (Tshi-tshi) Reminds me of how I really felt when my dreams were dashed in my...
  February 4th, 2011 14:20
• Looking back (Hidan) Fascinating, especially since it can allude to something deeper....like,...
  February 4th, 2011 14:04
• My Friends Your Poems (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating. I like it! Though your second stanza seems to rule out some...
  February 4th, 2011 10:46
• Far Far Away (but not too far) (John) Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded...
  February 4th, 2011 10:37
• Life's A Game (Monsters) Short and succinct? Your image is very fitting, the title...
  February 3rd, 2011 23:55
• The road full of promises (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating, and interesting poetic perspective on life/love and your...
  February 3rd, 2011 23:46
• FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH (Jvl narasimha rao) Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:47
• You fill my life. (Lifewellspoken) Superb! Excellent, Monsieur Jason! How delightfully tender and...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:37
• Carousel (Dbremner) Excellent! Yet again, via the haiku you've succinctly snapshotted....a...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:34
• The Cockroach (Zojinjo) The image made me gasp in horror when it burst on my sight, and the poem...
  February 3rd, 2011 14:28
• flipped script (Boricuamami222) Doubtless the foul language was for effect, if we stand back and consider...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:14
• Tears (Ashley) Excellently expressed, beautiful depiction of the heartache! You remind me...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:09
• Or So They Say (Emi) Excellent! This is very sweet! I love how you presented this very sweet...
  February 3rd, 2011 12:02
• I can’t give you more (Marius) This is so very beautiful, enticing, alluring....and yet....is it wrong...
  February 3rd, 2011 11:43
• SOCCER WORLDCUP (Sudarshan) Very fascinating assessment and tribute to the world cup! Your...
  February 3rd, 2011 11:31
• Change You Wish (Leonard Dabydeen) Fascinating! I like how you ordered the stanzas to taper....fascinating...
  February 3rd, 2011 00:29
• My World (Patriots) The foul language makes your point, yet makes me wince. Your ugly...
  February 3rd, 2011 00:13
• Polyamor (Haiku) (Zojinjo) What is a "polyamour"? I couldn't find the word in my dictionary....seems...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:50
• LOVE HURTS! (Sadia Ismail) Very fascinating.....in response to your author's comment....we seriously...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:34
• Deeper and Deeper (Emi) Excellent depiction of a selfish and thereby miserable character! What...
  February 2nd, 2011 20:24
• Always beautiful (Lifewellspoken) Ah, Monsieur Jason....but your poetry is sometimes so intriguing,...
  February 2nd, 2011 19:00
• Broken (Marius) Very fascinating. Delightful. Beautiful, bitterSWEET. Heartbroken with...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:57
• Yes It Is True (Alexandre Landsley) Aw. The way it began was so almost erotic, but it ended so sorrily. It's...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:49
• ONCE I ...................... (Sudarshan) Beautiful almost simplistic description of the creation/nature in its...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:22
• Poetic Baptisms (JamaicaMeCrayZ) Very fascinating....interesting, intriguing, enjoyable flowing...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:18
• Anarkali in Motion (Leonard Dabydeen) Wow. Very fascinating, and rather intriguing....delightful romantic...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:10
• My Life!! (Lonelykaren) Editing is work I'd rather not do myself, but sometimes our stuff looks...
  February 2nd, 2011 18:06
• I Hate The World (Alexandre Landsley) Familiar tune...but, how did the world make you hate your brother? I love...
  February 2nd, 2011 01:07
• Raped (Zojinjo) Oh, la. But you are crafting this eerily! Depicting the horrible scene...
  February 1st, 2011 15:47
• Black and White (Emi) Perfect. You captured the sorrow and loss in those simple words...a world...
  February 1st, 2011 15:42
• Enigma (Belinda AMeharry) Delightfully sweet romantic poem of love....with the loving and longing,...
  February 1st, 2011 15:38
• Nikki (JoshuaConklin) It is a beautiful tribute to your relationship and her....sad, sweet, and...
  February 1st, 2011 15:28
• Control (Marius) "Control Freaks." La, but you described the ugly character so...
  February 1st, 2011 15:24
• BLIGHTY DOG (Sudarshan) Delightful....I enjoyed this humorous look at....not a real dog, surely? ...
  February 1st, 2011 15:15
• Lost it all (Patriots) Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's...
  February 1st, 2011 15:12
• Spring Flowers (Dbremner) Ah, too sweet....such a welcome picture you've so delightfully drawn in...
  February 1st, 2011 13:30
• Inseparable love (Gerrylegister) Very fascinating contemplation, interesting...
  January 31st, 2011 23:39
• life (Leroyblackwoodjnr) Very interesting...fascinating meditation, contemplation.
  January 31st, 2011 23:33
• As Long as Forever (Emi) Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding...
  January 31st, 2011 23:28