Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy
- Catching up (child’s play) (Jazmine zillmer)
Fascinating.....and a perceptive perspective on growing up, seems to...
January 25th, 2011 23:50 - FOR ANYTHING (Satishverma)
Weird, Intriguing poetic description of......life?.....??
January 25th, 2011 23:38 - The day you left (Happy feet)
Yikes! She was only 18! It is a very beautiful, tender and sweet tribute...
January 25th, 2011 23:33 - lies (Skyerain)
Wow. Creepy! It begins as if tenderly promising but ends almost...
January 25th, 2011 20:32 - True Love (JoshuaConklin)
That is very sweet she is with you and can be a comfort and help to you...
January 25th, 2011 09:11 - Do not bury me (Hidan)
Even though you finish gracefully as you say, on the battlefield, shall...
January 25th, 2011 09:07 - Can You? (StormyDay)
Hmm. La, and now I shall sound stupid...what is being experienced? For I...
January 24th, 2011 16:37 - Superhero (Alexandre Landsley)
Sweet! You so aptly described the effect of your love for her! ...
January 24th, 2011 13:53 - True friendship. (Lifewellspoken)
Very interesting assessment and contemplation. Fascinating. The puppies...
January 24th, 2011 13:41 - You Are (Marius)
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic love poem! And yet she is...
January 24th, 2011 12:57 - no hope (Boricuamami222)
If it is merely a poem....excellent! The title is so fitting for the...
January 24th, 2011 00:48 - Demons and Angels of Us (Jazmine zillmer)
Well, actually, seeing your title included the demons, I think the...
January 23rd, 2011 18:44 - I am sorry (Hidan)
It is very nicely written, too. If I may dare make a suggestion, it seems...
January 23rd, 2011 18:19 - Forgive Me (Marius)
Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I...
January 23rd, 2011 18:11 - my regret (Melodik46)
Excellent!!!!! The end-ryming is pleasant and it flows fairly well...
January 23rd, 2011 17:46 - Goodbye (Alexandre Landsley)
Wow. Delightfully sweet and romantic! And the image is so cute! I love...
January 23rd, 2011 13:42 - Colors of love (Exquiste1)
Very fascinating perspective of friendship in light of and with thus an...
January 22nd, 2011 23:00 - If You Did Not Exist (Alexandre Landsley)
Delightful. It's romantically sweet. I love how you expressed the...
January 22nd, 2011 22:49 - A Sad Conclusion (SWD1992)
Your end-rhyming is excellent and your rhythm fairly good as well. By...
January 22nd, 2011 12:25 - Heaven is a butter star (Gerrylegister)
Fascinating, very....especially considered in light of your...
January 22nd, 2011 11:34 - JUST WORDS (Nexuscjt)
I love the title....sufficiently reminiscent of the Boyzone song "Words"...
January 22nd, 2011 11:21 - This is life :( (Lulu)
It is so cute how you express it, almost amusing, and yet your miserably...
January 21st, 2011 22:12 - love u (Lulu)
For your FIRST poem I think it is very good! Short and sweet and so...
January 21st, 2011 22:03 - school days (Lulu)
I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful...
January 21st, 2011 21:57 - lonely i feel (Aladrond)
Very fascinating and intriguing story. Concluding with "Together we...
January 21st, 2011 21:23 - My Breakup (Happy feet)
Fascinating, intriguing, sad.....in the miserable age-old theme of...
January 21st, 2011 16:15 - ONCE WHEN I SAW YOU.... (Nikhilps)
Hey! 14 lines....great! Now you need to make it iambic...
January 21st, 2011 16:00 - Not Again!! (Lonelykaren)
You and the majority of us? So very much the same...when we thought we...
January 21st, 2011 15:18 - Stay (StormyDay)
Ya, it reminded me of some of Dido's music as well as a Sugerland(?) song....
January 21st, 2011 15:04 - The Eternity Urge (Qudrat)
A fascinating ecstasy over whom? Vaguely almost reminiscent of RN...
January 21st, 2011 14:51 - I miss you Paul (Vanessa.ramsey)
And tasting the loss so intensely you have poignantly presented it,...
January 21st, 2011 09:56 - BACK IN THE CORNER (SOLO)
Wow. Poignant. Excellent! I loved it, but it made me almost want to...
January 20th, 2011 23:14 - DANCING ON LEASH (Satishverma)
As usual, a fascinating and intriguing foray into metaphors...
January 20th, 2011 22:15 - I'll miss you (Gerrylegister)
The picture with this is so sweet and fitting. It's a very sweet tribute...
January 20th, 2011 22:11 - know yourself (Fateonfire)
It is very fascinating for all the images your metaphors create....a very...
January 20th, 2011 21:58 - Lonely (Kelly)
Pathos excellently depicted poignantly. Loneliness dogging without...
January 20th, 2011 16:08 - The Hollow (Jalso)
Fascinating....intriguing. The hollow...isn't it so like the phenomenon...
January 20th, 2011 15:47 - A World Gone Awry (StormyDay)
The perpetual question....you captured it nicely in your concluding line,...
January 20th, 2011 15:31 - Rain. (IElmo)
It is a delightful love poem....I quite enjoyed how you drew the picture...
January 20th, 2011 15:06 - SHE IS A POETIC MUSE (Jvl narasimha rao)
Ah, my dear elder brother, and with the exulting blonde beginning the poem...
January 20th, 2011 14:59 - sometimes (Paul kordahi)
It IS very sad. And your black and white image of desolation and...
January 20th, 2011 14:50 - ... (Thinfatman)
Fascinating. I love how you've poetically depicted the dismal melancholy...
January 20th, 2011 14:23 - Signs of hopeful measures (Exquiste1)
Fascinating, serious meditation, consideration. I enjoyed this poetic...
January 20th, 2011 09:59 - La Chamade - A Tribute (Dbremner)
Too bad I am totally unfamiliar with the novel inspiring this beautifully...
January 20th, 2011 09:54 - Santa Monica beach as a little girl (Downinit)
Wow. This is cool. I love the picture you created! I love your poetic...
January 20th, 2011 01:09 - Soft Smile (Dbremner)
Wow. It is so lovely and romantic! You perfectly captured it all in a...
January 19th, 2011 15:59 - Cherry Blossoms (StormyDay)
Wow. Excellent tribute!!!! And VERY sweet too! Perfecto! I love it!
January 19th, 2011 15:16 - Classroom (Peggi)
Wow! Excellent!!!! I LOVE this one! Oh, this is an absolute favourite...
January 19th, 2011 10:24 - YOU ARE THE GREATEST KING (Jvl narasimha rao)
I love the image with it...and all the description...the image it painted...
January 19th, 2011 10:18 - Sight (StormyDay)
Fascinating. The clever thing is that you captured the old "love is...
January 18th, 2011 23:19 - Praises to God (Gerrylegister)
Wow. I love your comment....Amen...the Lord be magnified! Fascinating.
January 18th, 2011 23:01 - daddy (Downinit)
Is this diatribe genuine or just in tribute to that segment of society...
January 18th, 2011 20:34 - Having you. (Lifewellspoken)
Wow. You can write very romantic "love" poems! Beautiful...BE! It is...
January 18th, 2011 17:45 - It mite help me (Jalso)
Fascinating.....very. The tormented soul crying in vain for deliverance...
January 18th, 2011 14:53 - Breed of Life (Gopinath)
Very interesting and deep.
January 18th, 2011 14:48 - Friends (Peggi)
Fascinating the image you began it with that "lie" is buried in "believe."...
January 18th, 2011 14:46 - Just another rock´n´roll crap (ES)
Excellent. Nasty. Please don't find me there. Great rock'n'roll...
January 18th, 2011 14:37 - MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME (Jvl narasimha rao)
Wild. I like it not. You've excellently drawn the adulterous scene. The...
January 18th, 2011 14:32 - Heavy Swell (Dbremner)
Fascinating! I love it! You've described it so perfectly....both it's...
January 18th, 2011 14:28 - x (Thinfatman)
Pieces like this are so deep in pain and feeling that it seems dangerous...
January 17th, 2011 23:44 - Spellbound (Bernard franklin)
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic tribute to the lucky girl you...
January 17th, 2011 21:05 - Communication (Gerrylegister)
Fascinating. Wonderful admonition...to be communicative. And thus we...
January 17th, 2011 20:54 - Fire (Ilovecupcakes34)
Sweet! I LOVE it! Reminded me of watching the fire blaze...which I love...
January 17th, 2011 20:38 - Growing Up (Nexuscjt)
Very interesting. Fascinating because it expresses your struggles as a...
January 17th, 2011 20:26 - She (untold story) (Peggi)
Anime! Wow. It is a very sweet poem expressing your affections for her! ...
January 17th, 2011 20:16 - The apple of my eye. (Lifewellspoken)
Oh, too cute! The image is so delightfully perfect! It's a delightfully...
January 17th, 2011 13:39 - Peaceful River (Dbremner)
Very beautiful and succinct. I love the picture you've so delightfully...
January 17th, 2011 13:34 - GOD'S MUSIC AND MAGIC (Jvl narasimha rao)
Ah, you've touched on the truth of how very effective music is! How very...
January 17th, 2011 00:38 - HEALED LANDSCAPE (Satishverma)
Very interesting, especially as usual with your curious metaphors. Again,...
January 17th, 2011 00:14 - Lenins Words (A Dream) (Dbremner)
Wow. Excellent! La. I think you've captured the spirit beautifully. ...
January 16th, 2011 15:38 - TIPS FOR BETTER LIVING!! (Nikhilps)
Very fascinating and intriguing, little brother. Interesting meditation. ...
January 16th, 2011 12:13 - INTEGRITY AT LARGE (Satishverma)
Fascinating. I like this one....seems more readily understandable than...
January 15th, 2011 22:23 - My Way (ES)
Fascinating, intriguing. Very interesting.....how can his advice be the...
January 15th, 2011 20:26 - drinking (Thinfatman)
Wow. Impressive. I suspect you described it only too perfectly, from the...
January 15th, 2011 12:22 - Pragya(My lover) (Peggi)
Very sweet....and delightfully expressed! Very enjoyable! The similes...
January 15th, 2011 12:17 - WHAT IS REAL HAPPINESS? (Jvl narasimha rao)
The image expressed it delightfully, and provoked a smile. It is an...
January 15th, 2011 12:13 - My Mind (Dbremner)
Sweet, in the succinctness of a haiku how excellently you've portrayed...
January 15th, 2011 11:58 - BURNING (Satishverma)
Very interesting....indeed....it is "deep" and unfortunately I do not...
January 14th, 2011 22:52 - times in harlem renaissance (Christopher321)
Fascinating....you've painted a picture with your "dialect" as it almost...
January 14th, 2011 22:48 - The Angel of Life (Dolphine29)
Very interesting....and your image is so perfect. I am unfamiliar with...
January 14th, 2011 22:35 - Holding your heart. (Lifewellspoken)
Oh Sweet! The image is so excellently fitting not only being alluded to...
January 14th, 2011 17:44 - The Spider's Web (StormyDay)
Fascinating...and the image is excellent! Great job...and yet you could...
January 14th, 2011 14:33 - Light (Gopinath)
Beautiful and succinct. A sweet reminder of the beauty of the...
January 14th, 2011 14:29 - WHAT IS REAL BEAUTY? (Jvl narasimha rao)
Excellent!!! Wow. That was quite the topic to tackle...and you managed...
January 14th, 2011 12:34 - “Let go u” (Peggi)
For your very first poem....and for all I suspect it is not in your mother...
January 14th, 2011 12:25 - Life (Dbremner)
It is such a bitter poem....and so hopeless too...ending defiantly at the...
January 14th, 2011 10:46 - THE PRESENCE (Satishverma)
Fascinating description.....I can't quite pinpoint exactly what of...but...
January 13th, 2011 22:46 - Oldest Friends (Jennifer Teresa Nunes)
Ya, true love in friends and family are treasures above so much else we...
January 13th, 2011 22:43 - Farewell (Gerrylegister)
Your image reminds me of the irises...clipped off....so perfect for this...
January 13th, 2011 21:38 - spark of life (Sharad pandey)
Fascinating....very. Intriguing, for I do not quite understand it.....you...
January 13th, 2011 15:15 - The Willow Tree (StormyDay)
Excellent! I absolutely LOVE this haiku of yours....from the perfect...
January 13th, 2011 14:58 - twelve (Jalso)
Wow.....as usual, it is very serious and rather deep....disturbing. It is...
January 13th, 2011 13:44 - Golden bird of prey (Lifewellspoken)
Wow. It is a very sweet and alluring romantic call. I love it...for...
January 13th, 2011 12:29 - Londons Flower (Dbremner)
Sweet tribute to "Lily"....I am unfamiliar with her....will you tell me...
January 13th, 2011 12:24 - Pull The Trigger (Deathinlove63)
The rhyming was enjoyable. It seems like it is about love....and she...
January 12th, 2011 22:02 - controversy (Sharad pandey)
Very interesting considerations.....serious. Since the "mice will play...
January 12th, 2011 21:58 - Espionage (Dbremner)
It is a fascinating perspective on a spy. I belong somewhere so horribly...
January 12th, 2011 14:56 - Stolen Identity (StormyDay)
And in it you've excellently expressed what love made of you.....a...
January 12th, 2011 14:52 - Life through my lens. (Lifewellspoken)
Way cool,...excepting my present PC won't allow me to look at it....when I...
January 12th, 2011 11:04 - Realizations (StormyDay)
Beautiful. I love it. Almost makes my heart beat faster with the...
January 11th, 2011 22:56
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