Comments on community poems by Cheeky Missy



  • A DAWN OF DELIGHT (Naveen kandlapalli) Fascinating, rather intriguing.....very interesting....is it like the...
    January 28th, 2011 21:59
  • THE TREE IN MY GARDEN (Sudarshan) Very nice! Beautiful! You stated it all rather simplistically but...
    January 28th, 2011 21:53
  • Nightwalk (Marius) You drew the scene so very well that I was there, from the first stanza,...
    January 28th, 2011 21:49
  • Roof Top Memories (Jlmoreno9929) Interesting. Fascinating perspective on our lives from the vantage point...
    January 28th, 2011 21:22
  • Dreams (John) Oh, sweet! I love this one....short and sweet, and on one of my favourite...
    January 28th, 2011 18:51
  • Simply Me (Lonelykaren) It is a sad cry, which while almost begging to be loved, does not even...
    January 27th, 2011 14:53
  • The Crow (Zojinjo) Oh, dear, wish I could edit my comment...I do NOT wish to be identified...
    January 27th, 2011 14:45
  • for you (Jalso) But, the devil isn't wanting to be set free....since when? It's his prey...
    January 27th, 2011 14:40
  • THE SEASONAL HARVEST (Jvl narasimha rao) I love the picture with it, which reading it, seems so perfectly fitting,...
    January 27th, 2011 14:35
  • Kryptonite (Alexandre Landsley) Aw, sweet! The image so delightfully sets it off, next the title, and...
    January 27th, 2011 12:30
  • December Night (Hidan) Wow. I like how you presented it....you so aptly characterized the entire...
    January 27th, 2011 12:26
  • False Conceptions (StormyDay) Aw, sweet! I quite enjoyed this! You drew it all so delightfully,...
    January 27th, 2011 12:19
  • IT’S FUNNY (Nexuscjt) Oooh...hope that wasn't a dare for bold wee me...funny how it goes that...
    January 27th, 2011 12:15
  • Impossible (Marius) Wow. You very well depicted the situation of many so delightfully...
    January 27th, 2011 12:06
  • Find (Belinda AMeharry) Beautifully and excellently depicted! You aptly captured the sentiment. ...
    January 27th, 2011 12:00
  • blown (Boricuamami222) Fascinating...and unappetizingly, yet aptly, vulgar. I like how you so...
    January 27th, 2011 11:55
  • puddle of blood (Boricuamami222) You've expressed the depressed mentality very well in this imaginary...
    January 27th, 2011 11:50
  • Where I'm From (Patriots) Fascinating, beautiful, excellent! Reminiscent to me of Rodney Atkins'...
    January 27th, 2011 11:35
  • Extraordinary Love (Alexandre Landsley) The image is so romantically sweet and fitting.......and it's such a very...
    January 27th, 2011 00:52
  • Broken (John) Wow. It is very sad. You conveyed the heartbroken state very well. 'Tis...
    January 27th, 2011 00:47
  • The Scarecrow (Zojinjo) Wow. Excellent rhyming and fairly good rythm. Intriguing, fascinating,...
    January 27th, 2011 00:36
  • Stallion (StormyDay) Delightful! Fascinating delineation of a mighty stallion. I enjoyed this!...
    January 27th, 2011 00:33
  • such a loyal servent (Jalso) Hnnn. So, the title being so, is the speaker a loyal servant to sin? ...
    January 27th, 2011 00:28
  • MOTHER EARTH (Jvl narasimha rao) Now, for all the times I've heard the odious term "mother earth"...you...
    January 27th, 2011 00:24
  • Stopping my heart. (Lifewellspoken) Do you mean the heavenly object or the candy bar? I prefer snickers,...
    January 27th, 2011 00:01
  • A BOON AND A BANE !!! (Nikhilps) Your image is very interesting and fitting. Fascinating, rather...
    January 26th, 2011 23:43
  • Star (Belinda AMeharry) Very sweet and very nicely written. It is as gentle and sweetly simple as...
    January 26th, 2011 22:47
  • Sweet Torture (Marius) Alas...it is so bittersweet. You've excellently expressed the heart...
    January 26th, 2011 22:43
  • Hallucinate (Hidan) Fascinating! Beautiful. The title captured it all so perfectly. Wow. ...
    January 26th, 2011 22:37
  • Life At Last.. (Kelseyroy) Beautiful. I love how you expressed it. You built up to it with your...
    January 26th, 2011 22:33
  • A Final Dream (John) Aw. It is so sweet...bittersweet. And it seems a familiar scene....I...
    January 26th, 2011 22:23
  • Inside me is inside you. (Lifewellspoken) The image is fascinating. The poem itself is sweet, and so touchingly...
    January 26th, 2011 20:59
  • Metamorphosis (Marius) Wow. Makes me smile. Sarah is lucky. This is a very sweet story. I...
    January 26th, 2011 20:45
  • If i could only (Happy feet) Wow. This is VERY sweet! The love you express in it is so...
    January 26th, 2011 20:39
  • Desire (StormyDay) Oooh. I think it's like the songs I don' t listen to....I 'spect you...
    January 26th, 2011 19:53
  • No Answer (Lonelykaren) It is excellently expressed...except that you seem to bounce from one...
    January 26th, 2011 19:47
  • The Passing Fire in the Sky (Jlmoreno9929) Fascinating...curious. What is the passing fire in the sky representing? ...
    January 26th, 2011 00:40
  • Crushing On You (Alexandre Landsley) Sweet. The image is so perfect! This is rather...
    January 26th, 2011 00:22
  • Death (JoshuaConklin) Wow. You've excellently depicted the feelings, sentiments, condition. ...
    January 26th, 2011 00:17
  • confused (Tamm13) Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? ...
    January 26th, 2011 00:11
  • pain (Boricuamami222) Again, you've excellently depicted the misery and hopelessness at all the...
    January 26th, 2011 00:07
  • Birth (Gerrylegister) Fascinating....you've touched on and depicted this existence, including...
    January 26th, 2011 00:04
  • coldness (Boricuamami222) It is VERY sad.....horribly so. You excellently depicted the miserable...
    January 25th, 2011 23:58
  • Catching up (child’s play) (Jazmine zillmer) Fascinating.....and a perceptive perspective on growing up, seems to...
    January 25th, 2011 23:50
  • FOR ANYTHING (Satishverma) Weird, Intriguing poetic description of......life?.....??
    January 25th, 2011 23:38
  • The day you left (Happy feet) Yikes! She was only 18! It is a very beautiful, tender and sweet tribute...
    January 25th, 2011 23:33
  • lies (Skyerain) Wow. Creepy! It begins as if tenderly promising but ends almost...
    January 25th, 2011 20:32
  • True Love (JoshuaConklin) That is very sweet she is with you and can be a comfort and help to you...
    January 25th, 2011 09:11
  • Do not bury me (Hidan) Even though you finish gracefully as you say, on the battlefield, shall...
    January 25th, 2011 09:07
  • Can You? (StormyDay) Hmm. La, and now I shall sound stupid...what is being experienced? For I...
    January 24th, 2011 16:37
  • Superhero (Alexandre Landsley) Sweet! You so aptly described the effect of your love for her! ...
    January 24th, 2011 13:53
  • True friendship. (Lifewellspoken) Very interesting assessment and contemplation. Fascinating. The puppies...
    January 24th, 2011 13:41
  • You Are (Marius) Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic love poem! And yet she is...
    January 24th, 2011 12:57
  • no hope (Boricuamami222) If it is merely a poem....excellent! The title is so fitting for the...
    January 24th, 2011 00:48
  • Demons and Angels of Us (Jazmine zillmer) Well, actually, seeing your title included the demons, I think the...
    January 23rd, 2011 18:44
  • I am sorry (Hidan) It is very nicely written, too. If I may dare make a suggestion, it seems...
    January 23rd, 2011 18:19
  • Forgive Me (Marius) Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I...
    January 23rd, 2011 18:11
  • my regret (Melodik46) Excellent!!!!! The end-ryming is pleasant and it flows fairly well...
    January 23rd, 2011 17:46
  • Goodbye (Alexandre Landsley) Wow. Delightfully sweet and romantic! And the image is so cute! I love...
    January 23rd, 2011 13:42
  • Colors of love (Exquiste1) Very fascinating perspective of friendship in light of and with thus an...
    January 22nd, 2011 23:00
  • If You Did Not Exist (Alexandre Landsley) Delightful. It's romantically sweet. I love how you expressed the...
    January 22nd, 2011 22:49
  • A Sad Conclusion (SWD1992) Your end-rhyming is excellent and your rhythm fairly good as well. By...
    January 22nd, 2011 12:25
  • Heaven is a butter star (Gerrylegister) Fascinating, very....especially considered in light of your...
    January 22nd, 2011 11:34
  • JUST WORDS (Nexuscjt) I love the title....sufficiently reminiscent of the Boyzone song "Words"...
    January 22nd, 2011 11:21
  • This is life :( (Lulu) It is so cute how you express it, almost amusing, and yet your miserably...
    January 21st, 2011 22:12
  • love u (Lulu) For your FIRST poem I think it is very good! Short and sweet and so...
    January 21st, 2011 22:03
  • school days (Lulu) I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful...
    January 21st, 2011 21:57
  • lonely i feel (Aladrond) Very fascinating and intriguing story. Concluding with "Together we...
    January 21st, 2011 21:23
  • My Breakup (Happy feet) Fascinating, intriguing, sad.....in the miserable age-old theme of...
    January 21st, 2011 16:15
  • ONCE WHEN I SAW YOU.... (Nikhilps) Hey! 14 lines....great! Now you need to make it iambic...
    January 21st, 2011 16:00
  • Not Again!! (Lonelykaren) You and the majority of us? So very much the same...when we thought we...
    January 21st, 2011 15:18
  • Stay (StormyDay) Ya, it reminded me of some of Dido's music as well as a Sugerland(?) song....
    January 21st, 2011 15:04
  • The Eternity Urge (Qudrat) A fascinating ecstasy over whom? Vaguely almost reminiscent of RN...
    January 21st, 2011 14:51
  • I miss you Paul (Vanessa.ramsey) And tasting the loss so intensely you have poignantly presented it,...
    January 21st, 2011 09:56
  • BACK IN THE CORNER (SOLO) Wow. Poignant. Excellent! I loved it, but it made me almost want to...
    January 20th, 2011 23:14
  • DANCING ON LEASH (Satishverma) As usual, a fascinating and intriguing foray into metaphors...
    January 20th, 2011 22:15
  • I'll miss you (Gerrylegister) The picture with this is so sweet and fitting. It's a very sweet tribute...
    January 20th, 2011 22:11
  • know yourself (Fateonfire) It is very fascinating for all the images your metaphors create....a very...
    January 20th, 2011 21:58
  • Lonely (Kelly) Pathos excellently depicted poignantly. Loneliness dogging without...
    January 20th, 2011 16:08
  • The Hollow (Jalso) Fascinating....intriguing. The hollow...isn't it so like the phenomenon...
    January 20th, 2011 15:47
  • A World Gone Awry (StormyDay) The perpetual question....you captured it nicely in your concluding line,...
    January 20th, 2011 15:31
  • Rain. (IElmo) It is a delightful love poem....I quite enjoyed how you drew the picture...
    January 20th, 2011 15:06
  • SHE IS A POETIC MUSE (Jvl narasimha rao) Ah, my dear elder brother, and with the exulting blonde beginning the poem...
    January 20th, 2011 14:59
  • sometimes (Paul kordahi) It IS very sad. And your black and white image of desolation and...
    January 20th, 2011 14:50
  • ... (Thinfatman) Fascinating. I love how you've poetically depicted the dismal melancholy...
    January 20th, 2011 14:23
  • Signs of hopeful measures (Exquiste1) Fascinating, serious meditation, consideration. I enjoyed this poetic...
    January 20th, 2011 09:59
  • La Chamade - A Tribute (Dbremner) Too bad I am totally unfamiliar with the novel inspiring this beautifully...
    January 20th, 2011 09:54
  • Santa Monica beach as a little girl (Downinit) Wow. This is cool. I love the picture you created! I love your poetic...
    January 20th, 2011 01:09
  • Soft Smile (Dbremner) Wow. It is so lovely and romantic! You perfectly captured it all in a...
    January 19th, 2011 15:59
  • Cherry Blossoms (StormyDay) Wow. Excellent tribute!!!! And VERY sweet too! Perfecto! I love it!
    January 19th, 2011 15:16
  • Classroom (Peggi) Wow! Excellent!!!! I LOVE this one! Oh, this is an absolute favourite...
    January 19th, 2011 10:24
  • YOU ARE THE GREATEST KING (Jvl narasimha rao) I love the image with it...and all the description...the image it painted...
    January 19th, 2011 10:18
  • Sight (StormyDay) Fascinating. The clever thing is that you captured the old "love is...
    January 18th, 2011 23:19
  • Praises to God (Gerrylegister) Wow. I love your comment....Amen...the Lord be magnified! Fascinating.
    January 18th, 2011 23:01
  • daddy (Downinit) Is this diatribe genuine or just in tribute to that segment of society...
    January 18th, 2011 20:34
  • Having you. (Lifewellspoken) Wow. You can write very romantic "love" poems! Beautiful...BE! It is...
    January 18th, 2011 17:45
  • It mite help me (Jalso) Fascinating.....very. The tormented soul crying in vain for deliverance...
    January 18th, 2011 14:53
  • Breed of Life (Gopinath) Very interesting and deep.
    January 18th, 2011 14:48
  • Friends (Peggi) Fascinating the image you began it with that "lie" is buried in "believe."...
    January 18th, 2011 14:46
  • Just another rock´n´roll crap (ES) Excellent. Nasty. Please don't find me there. Great rock'n'roll...
    January 18th, 2011 14:37


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