Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Line-Dancing (Fay Slimm.)
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging...
June 10th, 2017 10:08 - The evil of drink (Jooles)
Light and fun. You certainly pegged the alcoholic to a tee.
June 10th, 2017 09:53 - Breakfast. (Garry)
Not familiar with bacon butty. Sounds decadent. Here\'s to your health!
June 10th, 2017 09:49 - Broken Country. (Goldfinch60)
Same here in the USA. Our last administration spent a trillion dollars on...
June 10th, 2017 09:44 - Stands Death There At My Door (Swingline)
Deliously haunting.
June 10th, 2017 09:33 - LOST IN THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Lovely.
June 10th, 2017 09:31 - I think about you. (Fluatist)
Soulful.
June 10th, 2017 09:28 - Thessalonians Testimony (Orchidee)
Hugs
June 9th, 2017 11:39 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
So true.
June 9th, 2017 11:35 - I’M (Tony36)
I\'ll take it. Hugs.
June 9th, 2017 11:34 - Twins We Pray (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love the twins. I need wings to make burdens lighter. Hugs.
June 9th, 2017 10:11 - Simpatico Giggles (Whisperingquill)
At first I was lost. Reread it again and it made perfect sense. Nice.
June 9th, 2017 10:07 - My Memories (Fluatist)
They never leave. Well done.
June 9th, 2017 10:03 - Answered. (Fay Slimm.)
Having milked many a cow, you captured it well. Love the photo.
June 9th, 2017 10:01 - Scary Night. (Goldfinch60)
Spilled my coffee. Ha,ha. Hugs.
June 9th, 2017 09:58 - Antidote (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Hurting and slowly picking yourself up. Enjoyed.
June 9th, 2017 09:57 - What Makes A Poet (Swingline)
Oh, this is just terrific. Very thoughtful.
June 9th, 2017 09:52 - SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6 (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the chuckle.
June 9th, 2017 09:49 - The start was the end (Mylittleheart)
Love the flare of confidence at the end, and telling it like it is, no...
June 8th, 2017 22:11 - Poems From Formal Prayers Series - 4 (Orchidee)
I see your writings as prayers I can read daily for comfort. Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 11:15 - Droplets Of Etiquette (Whisperingquill)
To \"kiss the ovum of celestial consequence\", well I won\'t go there,...
June 8th, 2017 11:09 - DO YOU COME (Tony36)
Full of surprises. Hugs.
June 8th, 2017 11:06 - Maybe (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
So many don\'t realize they can choose how they feel,. Enjoyed. I just...
June 8th, 2017 11:01 - Happenings. (Fay Slimm.)
Things we attribute as beautiful or as painful to watch, nature is...
June 8th, 2017 10:25 - Uplifting Sounds. (Goldfinch60)
Uplifting. Thanks.
June 8th, 2017 10:19 - Falling for you (Fluatist)
Betrayal hurts. Nicely done.
June 8th, 2017 10:15 - A Bird without A Nest (Swingline)
Sweet, sad, poetic rant. Nice.
June 8th, 2017 10:09 - SUSPICION (Michael Edwards)
Suspicion plus a woman\'s intuition,
Lethal combination. Love the water...
June 8th, 2017 10:07 - Thoughts (Fluatist)
Sweet longing. Hugs.
June 7th, 2017 20:10 - Crown On Loan (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Aberrant can also mean exceptional, like your poetic jewels on loan from...
June 7th, 2017 18:42 - COURAGEOUS LOVE (Louis Gibbs)
Sorry for your lost. The snippet at the end of his life you captured...
June 7th, 2017 18:26 - 7 June 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
I am reminded of what a college classroom of today many of whom demand a...
June 7th, 2017 18:15 - Presiding Presence (Orchidee)
Fun to try to sing along.
June 7th, 2017 16:51 - Little one (ShannonXx)
Nicely done.
June 7th, 2017 16:45 - In the Depths (P.X. Vexxus)
I read it as eventually we choose between good and evil. Sometimes there...
June 7th, 2017 15:13 - Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.)
We grow much more appreciative. Nice.
June 7th, 2017 14:50 - Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band (Swingline)
Could not help but think of the crescent city New Orleans on the river....
June 7th, 2017 14:48 - Max Richter. (Goldfinch60)
I can hear why.
June 7th, 2017 14:39 - Dear Derry (P.S)
Heart felt write
June 7th, 2017 14:35 - TWO IN HAIKU STYLE (Michael Edwards)
Good fun
June 7th, 2017 14:11 - The Green Abode (MaddieJ)
Nicely done. Nice visual.
June 7th, 2017 14:08 - The Dance (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
We do need to take advantage of the moment and not sit on our...
June 6th, 2017 15:35 - Mournful Memories (Orchidee)
This is truly beautiful and powerful. \" \"let my hand forget its skills....
June 6th, 2017 15:28 - Glory to his name (Tony36)
Prayerful.
June 6th, 2017 14:39 - Youth (Classicmister)
Beautifully written
June 6th, 2017 14:31 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
Tin and copper mines can go down pretty deep. We definitely need some...
June 6th, 2017 11:57 - Poems (Definition) (Swingline)
Love it.
June 6th, 2017 11:43 - Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60)
All successful people have that attitude.
June 6th, 2017 11:42 - MATURITY (Michael Edwards)
Perfect poem. You are a great water color artist. Even your quickies are...
June 6th, 2017 11:40 - Ashes Bemired (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Our world has turned topsy turvy. Enjoyed.
June 5th, 2017 22:32 - How I pray (Stephanie Showers)
Love it. Great idea.
June 5th, 2017 22:25 - Alarm Clock (Mandi)
Great visual!
June 5th, 2017 22:23 - Deja Vu (Louis Gibbs)
Thought I share with you my initial reaction: I have several friends with...
June 5th, 2017 22:19 - Buried Purity (Whisperingquill)
Lots of thought on this enigmatic piece. Like the brevity and rhyme.
June 5th, 2017 22:03 - Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
Biased cut priced ideas of winner-- great line. Hugs.
June 5th, 2017 21:58 - The Cook. (Goldfinch60)
Great hobby. Nice poem.
June 5th, 2017 21:53 - With This Old One I\'m Threw (Jmcg)
Smoking, dude, smoking. In all seriousness the writer just laid it all...
June 5th, 2017 21:52 - Sneha\'s Eyes (Swingline)
I know one by that name who wears a red dot on her forehead ---drop dead...
June 5th, 2017 21:41 - FIVE THIRTY PM (Michael Edwards)
I\'m in Houston to now. Talk about mass transit. We had black raindrops in...
June 5th, 2017 19:29 - As My Ink Wets The Paper. (Kevin browne)
Enjoyed.
June 4th, 2017 21:36 - Galleon (Poetae Opus)
Thought provoking. Enjoyed
June 4th, 2017 21:29 - Voices Call (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
So few address these issues
June 4th, 2017 21:23 - THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs)
4 lines packed.
June 4th, 2017 21:21 - Coffee brown eyes (ShannonXx)
She knows you care.
June 4th, 2017 21:19 - Dead Poets (Swingline)
I turned the page and found a picture of my x wife. Heh heh.nicely done.
June 4th, 2017 13:28 - Transformation. (Fay Slimm.)
Intricacies of enterwoven color as only could be done by Fay. This will be...
June 4th, 2017 12:56 - When Rodents Roam... (P.H.Rose)
Love it when ideas come like that, the sound of a car and the dog bark...
June 4th, 2017 12:44 - Cathartic Lacerations (Whisperingquill)
Takes on a life of its own like trying to reign in a run away horse....
June 4th, 2017 12:37 - DRINK (Mandi)
I\'ll drink to that. Clever.
June 4th, 2017 12:28 - SCRIPTURE FOR SUNDAY ~ PLEASE PRAY FOR LONDON (AGAIN) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I will pray for you but in several generations the whole of Europe will...
June 4th, 2017 12:27 - Stay Gold (The 2 A.M Writer)
Slipping indeed, but such a neat slide through the ages. May kindred...
June 4th, 2017 12:10 - Nan. (Goldfinch60)
It moved three times since my mom\'s death and dig up and carrry with me...
June 4th, 2017 11:14 - Begin Again (IDiedLastNight)
Kudos
June 4th, 2017 11:10 - For the Singles (MaddieJ)
Where did a 20 year old come up with the word \"dreamboat\" that is from...
June 4th, 2017 11:08 - LIMERICK 33 (Michael Edwards)
You crack me up
June 4th, 2017 11:05 - Murky Waters For Crow Eaters (Whisperingquill)
God forbid your sick adulterated sperm dribble on to a menaged egg. We\'ll...
June 3rd, 2017 14:39 - Last Bridge (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I\'m on that cot in the next room. We\'ll share dreams as we sleep....
June 3rd, 2017 14:23 - On a way back (Poetae Opus)
Dante\'s inferno. Enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2017 14:20 - Rope Don\'t Break (David De La Cruz)
\"Creamed in a guitar\" cool
June 3rd, 2017 14:16 - Word Wisdom. (Fay Slimm.)
I hope you can forgive the analogy : Willy Wonca in the intro is...
June 3rd, 2017 14:14 - Waiting A While (Orchidee)
Judea, kings, babtism and restoring Israel are all very biblical
June 3rd, 2017 14:01 - Salisbury City (ShannonXx)
Great visual. I had a buddy I used to hang ou with when I was single....
June 3rd, 2017 13:56 - C A R B O N D I O X I D E S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nicely done. Flatulance from the cattle industry. Let\'s cut down all the...
June 3rd, 2017 13:47 - The Swan\'s Diversity. (Goldfinch60)
Great visuals.
June 3rd, 2017 13:10 - AS YET UNWRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
Nicely done.
Sir I\'d be honored to serve on your next voyage. I have a...
June 3rd, 2017 13:08 - 3:10 A M (Swingline)
Oh, a fried balonney sandwich, heaven. Some times we need to be alone....
June 3rd, 2017 09:38 - To My Future Self (MaddieJ)
All that turmoil takes one out of the present. Yet there are important...
June 3rd, 2017 09:35 - For Your Eyes Only (HeartfullyFallen)
\"Play fighting and ending up doing the waltz\" I liked a lot.The surprise...
June 2nd, 2017 23:58 - Her Kiss Might Kill Me (Mandi)
I take it you really dig this lady. Heh,heh. This is so beautifully done....
June 2nd, 2017 23:48 - Growth (J.D. Treick)
Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 23:45 - Where We Will Land (Stephanie Showers)
Women are much better at communicating. Sometimes you have to insist that...
June 2nd, 2017 17:17 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
If I am away from my lover I am sad. You make awayness into something...
June 2nd, 2017 17:13 - Eternity Set Free (Kurt Philip Behm)
That really makes sense. Never thought of it that way.
June 2nd, 2017 17:09 - you & who? (Mocuisle)
Great poem, great message. Inspiring
June 2nd, 2017 17:01 - My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose)
I love the appreciation of nature to love it,so much as to be inspired to...
June 2nd, 2017 16:58 - Breathe (ShannonXx)
Breathing can be very therapeutic. Breathe in the goodness and breathe out...
June 2nd, 2017 16:28 - Hope (IDiedLastNight)
Especially on a ship we need hope. So evasive at times. Well done.
June 2nd, 2017 16:26 - LUCKY TIGER (Rajkumar)
Precious. Human Resources person first to go eh? Heh, heh. He/she is in...
June 2nd, 2017 16:22 - A Soldier\'s Life (Ternic73)
You did a good job of getting into a soldiers mind. Like the canine. For...
June 2nd, 2017 16:12 - Back of School. (Garry)
Adolescence is a disease, from which we eventual overcome. Nicely done.
June 2nd, 2017 10:17
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