Comments on community poems by Augustus
- when you love another (Mylittleheart)
Neat way to jab at the unfaithful lover. Love the sarcasm at the end.
June 2nd, 2017 10:11 - Tree (Jabberwocky)
Definitely not self deprecation . You have live rich and full. Love the...
June 2nd, 2017 07:19 - BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
In s. Louisiana we have screech owls that make an eerie sound. Their bones...
June 2nd, 2017 07:09 - Untitled (MaddieJ)
Welcome to MPS. There is excitement about plans for the future. We obscess...
June 2nd, 2017 06:49 - Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60)
Mañana. As we age it seems not a bad concept.
June 2nd, 2017 06:46 - Thirty Years Later (Swingline)
Sorry you had this kind of loss early in you life. Must have devastating....
June 2nd, 2017 06:44 - SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1 (Michael Edwards)
When I was a kid the \"little rat\" that brought you a penny or a nickel...
June 2nd, 2017 06:37 - Young Love.... (P.H.Rose)
Our young bodies were so alive and responsive. Gettin to know one another....
June 1st, 2017 21:47 - Half-Sparked Nomads (Whisperingquill)
You continue to amaze me. So nicely done.
June 1st, 2017 21:45 - Missing You (Mandi)
Lovely poem.
June 1st, 2017 21:42 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine tribute to its magestry. I have been fortunate enough to witness...
June 1st, 2017 12:27 - Beast (IDiedLastNight)
Awesome.
June 1st, 2017 12:21 - The Old Home (Swingline)
Could be a metaphor for,our aging bodies so full of fun in earlier years,...
June 1st, 2017 12:20 - Dating Plan (Jabberwocky)
I have just the gal for you. Heh, heh. Thanks for,the laugh. Yet a bit on...
June 1st, 2017 12:15 - PEACE (Louis Gibbs)
Excellent. Love the surprise ending and the repeat of a phrase.
June 1st, 2017 12:09 - Hope (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Only someone in tune with the earth could appreciate blades of grass,...
June 1st, 2017 12:03 - Vials Vicissitudes* (Orchidee)
\"Noisome grievous sore\"---great.
June 1st, 2017 11:53 - What If? (Hidden.shine)
I could easily be buried at sea. Many of the old movies depicted such when...
June 1st, 2017 11:45 - My Own Bestfriend (Confused kid)
I\'ve only become friends with myself late in life. Prior to that the...
June 1st, 2017 11:29 - HONEY BEES ~ BEAUTIFUL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Bees are threatened today by defoliants. Honey can simply be stored at...
June 1st, 2017 08:17 - The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
Great tribute. I lived in New Orleans for a while. There were a number of...
June 1st, 2017 08:11 - LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards)
Sniffer mouse-- giggle.
Small screen-- bucking the trend for larger and...
June 1st, 2017 08:05 - Inflicted (Baylee)
Love? Prelude to \"leave\". Scathing words are abusive. Decision time....
May 31st, 2017 20:56 - Light of Dawn (A perspective) (J.D. Treick)
Love the poem. I have been on to more interested in results rather than...
May 31st, 2017 20:53 - Grave (Wordbyrdwriting)
Great way to put yourself into someone mind who may be ambivalent,...
May 31st, 2017 20:50 - Stygian Brilliance (Whisperingquill)
Epididimal transgression, Anubis, black synapse, cryptic,ligaments,...
May 31st, 2017 20:30 - Austin Texas (Rosetintedview)
The poem is \"unclassified\" but I sense the unconditional love. Enjoyed.
May 31st, 2017 20:12 - A Single Rose (Tony36)
Follow the fragrance of the Rose to your true love. Enjoyed.
May 31st, 2017 17:53 - I Don’t Give a Fuck (Stephanie Showers)
Wow. Let em have it with both barrels! Nice rant. Hugs.
May 31st, 2017 17:03 - Through The Years Swiftly (Seeker)
Nice rhyme and meter. For me I could hear lament for wasted time and could...
May 31st, 2017 13:09 - Available Access (Orchidee)
I just became aware of a guitar app, (ultimate guitar) that helps with...
May 31st, 2017 12:38 - One Choice (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Visits by the Great Spirit are few and far between. When they come they...
May 31st, 2017 12:34 - Soul River (Jabberwocky)
Sorry, was that the one I walked on when I was out fishing, washed up on...
May 31st, 2017 12:15 - Never....Not....Ever......Afraid (P.H.Rose)
I can see how you respond to such. Remember the news organizations tend to...
May 31st, 2017 12:11 - C U B A ~ An Island Paradise ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great music, great food and conversation. Jealous of your Spanish though I...
May 31st, 2017 12:02 - My Society (Nifty90)
Change is difficult. I sense a certain amount of frustration with the...
May 31st, 2017 11:59 - Which Path? (Goldfinch60)
Wish I had been more confident and adventurous.
May 31st, 2017 11:54 - MEN IN SHORTS (Michael Edwards)
I agree. But a 300 pound woman in spandex is what gets to me
May 31st, 2017 11:52 - I Pick Dandelions (Swingline)
Lovely.
May 31st, 2017 11:49 - I Believed You (Hali)
Without trust what is there? Nicely done.
May 30th, 2017 18:02 - Shut The Front Door (Edthepoet)
Great rant to get it off your chest.
May 30th, 2017 17:59 - Don\'t Give Up (Confused kid)
Kids from those homes really do start with nothing. Nicely done.
May 30th, 2017 17:57 - Unanswered Answers (Tony Jr)
Questions that many of us have. Hard to accept on faith.
May 30th, 2017 17:52 - My grave (ShannonXx)
Wise beyond your years.
May 30th, 2017 15:37 - Catching attention, delivering effective messages that make the difference (Avigail)
Persistence and determination, goal setting helped me. Niclly done. Good...
May 30th, 2017 14:03 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
This is special.
May 30th, 2017 13:56 - Destiny Marked (Kurt Philip Behm)
In stead of breadcrumbs we\'ll follow the verses.
May 30th, 2017 13:22 - Hug It Out (WriteBeLight)
Will miss you whilst your gone. In again out again relations while the...
May 30th, 2017 13:15 - Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose)
238 pounds of sensitive sweetness. Kudos.
May 30th, 2017 11:04 - Winds of love (IAmBeu)
The movement and touch of a woman makes a man weak kneed. Well done.
May 30th, 2017 11:02 - Why? (Liam Lawless)
What can I say, this is just terrific.
May 30th, 2017 10:55 - Colors ! (Swingline)
Delightful except for the blue truck. White, beige, or red. Heh, heh.
May 30th, 2017 10:50 - PEACE OF THE DOVE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
How is it that billions of people pray for pease and still it eludes us?...
May 30th, 2017 10:48 - Romeo is Dead (Jabberwocky)
Perhaps Romeo needs a rest to return for true love consummated in the...
May 30th, 2017 10:36 - Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.)
Damaged soul said it like it is. I might add dreamy exquisite...
May 30th, 2017 10:32 - Lunatics Mind (Dawn Von Rue)
What a delightful poem about depression, feeling distant, ambivalent, and...
May 30th, 2017 10:29 - All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60)
I love the beautiful simplicity of the narrative describing cherished...
May 30th, 2017 09:25 - WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards)
\"Sentences of rising hills\" great visual metaphor. I had to look up...
May 30th, 2017 09:21 - Sierra (Dan)
True love never ends. Let\'s hope this is the case. Welcome to my poetic...
May 29th, 2017 22:40 - Scathing (Baylee)
I really like this, great meter, and alliteration, out loud it reads...
May 29th, 2017 21:33 - LIMERICK 31 (Michael Edwards)
Haha.
May 29th, 2017 19:56 - The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60)
That hurts. My heart goes out to you.
May 29th, 2017 19:54 - THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
In the states the trucks drive around playing asilly tune over and over...
May 29th, 2017 19:52 - Somewhat Burn (No Worries) (AuburnScribbler)
A poem to which we all can relate. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:49 - Wild Beauty.. (Fay Slimm.)
Not a brochure but I want to pick up the phone and make reservations....
May 29th, 2017 19:47 - Joy of Desolation (Swingline)
Line em up bartender, I have a lot of hurt. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:43 - come on to the morning (Efthimios William Cornelius)
Dreams help to resolve conflicts. Dream on brave soul. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:40 - The Parade (WriteBeLight)
Parade for those who paid. Kudos.
May 29th, 2017 19:37 - Delightful Dwellings (Orchidee)
Like the use of unstealed.
May 29th, 2017 19:36 - Doubt to my Friend ? (Rajkumar)
I love the \"small thinking\".
May 29th, 2017 19:34 - When love was enough (IAmBeu)
Much longing. Hugs.
May 29th, 2017 19:32 - Nuance of sex dialogue (Avigail)
Kudos for writing giving an excellent perspective on this sensitive...
May 29th, 2017 19:29 - Continue (Poetboy123)
Of yes, I still feel the sun. Terrific.
May 29th, 2017 19:12 - HeartStrings (Jamminblu)
I am certain such incidents happened. You captured those moments, horrible...
May 29th, 2017 18:35 - False Limits (Kurt Philip Behm)
Just heard a navy seal say that when your mind tells you to quit, that...
May 29th, 2017 18:24 - Marriage (ShannonXx)
Enjoyed.
May 29th, 2017 18:16 - Beauty (Mocuisle)
Great message. Pity he only interested in the superficial.
May 29th, 2017 18:08 - 29 May 2017 (Severus Alexander)
I read it as our deeds we are not proud of coming back to haunt us. Well...
May 29th, 2017 18:03 - Cascading Silver Streams (Whisperingquill)
I need to catch my breath. Give me a moment. Master of alliteration.
May 29th, 2017 10:45 - Pit-A-Pat (Daniel Nolan)
Great story. Enjoyed.
May 28th, 2017 22:12 - The Aardwolf (KathrineWillows)
We all benefit from those who have come before us. Enjoyed.
May 28th, 2017 22:02 - How We Roll (Confused kid)
Rocky boat made it to port. Enjoyed.
May 28th, 2017 21:37 - Beautiful ideals (Mary73223)
One of those truths is fighting the devil. And you are sooo right he lives...
May 28th, 2017 15:42 - only someday we only know. (Efthimios William Cornelius)
\"I can feel the echo\'s breeze\"- terrific.
May 28th, 2017 14:38 - only someday we only know. (Efthimios William Cornelius)
\"I can feel the echo\'s breeze\"- terrific.
May 28th, 2017 14:38 - Gamble (ShannonXx)
Like daydreaming a relation. I like the meter. It reads effortlessly....
May 28th, 2017 14:35 - Inferior (Abpoet18)
Love? Enjoyed reading.
May 28th, 2017 14:18 - The Chaser (Wayne E)
I can relate to this. I am a human doing, only interested in the end...
May 28th, 2017 14:10 - Hi are you ready for change? (Avigail)
The best laid plans....nicely done.
May 28th, 2017 14:05 - From A Dying Ember (Poetboy123)
This is terrific. Love the meter.
May 28th, 2017 14:02 - Cluster Dust Bucolic Rust (Whisperingquill)
I love the alllteration. It has a Salvatore Dali quality of surreal...
May 28th, 2017 12:03 - Waiting For Okay (Naeners)
I believe it is a perfect little poem. It is consistent with a theme of...
May 28th, 2017 11:41 - Fear of God (Swingline)
Oh, how I dread that, my sins revealed. Great message.
May 28th, 2017 08:58 - Mercy (Mocuisle)
Surprised you are able to write so well during a hangover. Kudos.
May 28th, 2017 08:23 - START EACH DAY WITH SINGING ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh that hurts, so inciteful, well so obvious. All this time seeking the...
May 28th, 2017 08:20 - Destination (Mandi)
Love the way you pasted the photos. Photo shop? Driving can be fun but...
May 28th, 2017 08:14 - Something For Gregg (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
One of the great, perhaps the greatest rides of your life. May you always...
May 28th, 2017 08:10 - I LIKE SAID IT (Michael Edwards)
Like I said before, clever.
May 28th, 2017 08:05 - lived Life.... (P.H.Rose)
Don\'t you just love it when a jewel such as this just comes to you in its...
May 28th, 2017 08:03 - Double Edge (KLyman)
Touching
May 27th, 2017 21:09
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