Comments on community poems by Tristan Robert Lange

• Pentecost Proclamation (Orchidee) Glug job, Orchi! Good job! Wait...P\'s proclamation is what now? Actually,...
  January 5th, 2026 16:06
• What we hold inside (Sorenbarrett) Soren, the metaphor carries real weight. Heat, sweetness, sting, and...
  January 5th, 2026 16:04
• Wolf Moon (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this piece balances dread and defiance well. You look up at the...
  January 5th, 2026 16:02
• Realize your dreams.. (NafisaSB) Safina, this is warm and grounding. You acknowledge hardship without...
  January 5th, 2026 16:00
• A Cave (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is stark and effective. The shadow devours everything vile,...
  January 5th, 2026 15:58
• Infant and innocent (Lore) Lore, this poem is quiet, precise, and crushing. The repetition of...
  January 5th, 2026 15:56
• The Prince (Tristan Robert Lange) That Batman biscuit image is brilliant, Orchi…exactly the kind of...
  January 4th, 2026 11:35
• The Golden Calf (Thomas W Case) You know you are getting a major hallelujah and amen out of me. This...
  January 4th, 2026 10:00
• Man Down on Main Street (Neville) Neville, this hit me hard. There’s tenderness and hunger pressed right...
  January 4th, 2026 09:55
• Different this time? (2781) My friend, this is sharp-eyed and restrained in the right way. Observation...
  January 4th, 2026 09:53
• Silent Scrolls\" I don\'t care, I\'m always gonna shine. (Friendship) Friendship, there’s strength in how calmly you name this and move on....
  January 4th, 2026 09:44
• Men In Black Going Down To Hell? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this reads like a snapshot of cultural whiplash...headlines,...
  January 4th, 2026 09:34
• a single drop (Arqios) This poem understands momentum without spectacle. Everything gathers...
  January 4th, 2026 09:31
• Did you know it\'s all true (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a poem of recognition. You reveal a world already...
  January 4th, 2026 09:30
• Returning Reconciliation (Orchidee) Excellent, Orchi. I really do love your hymn-poemns. Glug. Uh-oh....
  January 4th, 2026 09:26
• Killing Time (Neville) Oh...and Happy New Year, my friend!
  January 4th, 2026 09:23
• Killing Time (Neville) My friend, I feel this tension between scarcity and meaning…the sense...
  January 4th, 2026 09:23
• Mistress Of Deception (Kurt Philip Behm) My friend, I recognize this choice between motion and stillness, between...
  January 4th, 2026 09:22
• Ode to the Donkey’s Dignified Rear. (Friendship) Friendship, this is absurd, affectionate, and surprisingly well-crafted. I...
  January 4th, 2026 09:21
• The Treasure of Grace (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this is a devotional reflection grounded in encouragement. You...
  January 4th, 2026 09:19
• 2020Styx (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is a poem of internal authority. Mythic vision, bodily...
  January 3rd, 2026 13:37
• The Expansion (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this comes through as restless and searching. There’s urgency...
  January 3rd, 2026 13:36
• All Hail! Parliament Train (Arqios) My friend, this feels expansive and unsettled in the right way. It...
  January 3rd, 2026 13:34
• wanna be friends? (Isa kemmy) My friend, I recognize this posture of learning while being watched,...
  January 3rd, 2026 13:32
• Love your enemies (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a meditation on mercy without illusion. You name harm...
  January 3rd, 2026 13:23
• Restoration Rejoicing (Orchidee) Orchi, this is praise rooted in memory and hope together. You honor the...
  January 3rd, 2026 12:39
• \"The Burden\" (Kailey Henry) Kailey, thank you for trusting words with something this heavy. This poem...
  January 2nd, 2026 20:36
• The Battle Before Sleep (Isa kemmy) Oh...I so relate. Powerful write, my friend. Well done!...
  January 2nd, 2026 19:03
• Carried Away (Teddy.15) Dearest Teddy, this is a poem of agency and survival. You name the...
  January 2nd, 2026 19:02
• Wasted Breath (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, pairing these two pieces sharpens both. The meditation on wasted...
  January 2nd, 2026 18:58
• My Bus Ride Home to Stay (Friendship) Friendship, this is a poem about choosing home as an act of courage. You...
  January 2nd, 2026 09:10
• Moogerah spillway (Arqios) My friend, a poem of presence rather than proclamation, you let ordinary...
  January 2nd, 2026 09:09
• The Rebel Within You (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) 😂 This one sent my brain sideways. As long as the hologram isn’t in...
  January 2nd, 2026 09:07
• Prayer Plea (Orchidee) Great hymn-poem, Orchi! But good thing I didn\'t just look at the...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:56
• Hazard (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a stark reckoning with the cost of voice. You show how...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:54
• Real Heroes? (Dan Williams) Dan, this is a bleak but necessary reckoning. You trace how materialism...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:53
• Exhaust (Mutley Ravishes) You ain\'t kidding, my friend! A truth I know all too well. Powerful!...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:41
• no heart no face no purpose (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is spare, insistent, and deeply human. Each question strips...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:39
• Behind The Fuse Box (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is precise and quietly philosophical. You let wiring, color,...
  January 2nd, 2026 08:39
• A Beautiful Ending! (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Yay! First comment! My friend, this is a gentle and satisfying conclusion....
  January 1st, 2026 10:44
• Between the Lines (Thomas W Case) Superb poem, Thomas! Happy New Year, my friend!
  January 1st, 2026 09:43
• I am so psychotic (Friendship) Friendship, this is fierce and luminous. It doesn’t sanitize the...
  January 1st, 2026 09:42
• as I breathe in silent glow (Mourgana of the Fey) Well done, Mourgana! That image of feline flickering opal caught me...
  January 1st, 2026 09:40
• What (2781) My friend, this is concise and purposeful. You frame time’s urgency,...
  January 1st, 2026 09:39
• New Year (2026) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderfully written and a powerful poem! In terms of New Years and...
  January 1st, 2026 09:38
• Freedom in chains (Sorenbarrett) Soren, a wonderfully roaming meditation on distance, memory, and...
  January 1st, 2026 09:36
• 00:00, 2026 (Arqios) Powerful moment captured in haiku! Happy New Year my friend!...
  January 1st, 2026 09:35
• Ground Of Our Lives (Orchidee) A powerful poem and, yes, I concur on your note too. One thing is for...
  January 1st, 2026 09:33
• Adversary (Mutley Ravishes) My friend, this is reflective and hopeful in an understated way. You...
  December 31st, 2025 22:13
• Why Do You Hate Me? (Friendship) Friendship, this is a meditation on loss without blame. You let grief ask...
  December 31st, 2025 09:10
• farewell 2025 (Arqios) My friend, this is patient wisdom earned the hard way. You balance...
  December 31st, 2025 09:09
• Fresh Inspiration (Dan Williams) Dan, this feels weary in an honest way. Not defeated…just awake to the...
  December 31st, 2025 09:07
• Judas Bond (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is a confession wrapped in warning. You move between...
  December 31st, 2025 09:06
• For New Year... (Orchidee) LOL! Woof, woof, oof oof, glug glug...wait!?! That didn\'t rhyme...there...
  December 31st, 2025 09:05
• A Poet\'s View (Teddy.15) Great question...and the more one has, the seemingly less they ask it....
  December 31st, 2025 09:01
• Kobe beef (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a bleak and necessary observation. You move from personal...
  December 31st, 2025 08:58
• I Succumb (Katie B.) Katie, this is reflective and compassionate. You move through suffering...
  December 31st, 2025 08:57
• Beyond The Badge (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is memory distilled. The old western becomes backdrop to...
  December 31st, 2025 08:56
• That is That (Jerry Reynolds) Jerry, this reads like a quiet parable dressed in stormlight. Wit, menace,...
  December 31st, 2025 08:55
• cartography of echoes (Arqios) Wow, my dear friend, thank you for this. Truly. It landed at a moment when...
  December 30th, 2025 11:10
• Mood is a Bouncing Ball (Friendship) Oh...and good morning! Love the rabbit!
  December 30th, 2025 10:53
• Mood is a Bouncing Ball (Friendship) My friend, I feel this way of moving through a day where emotions aren’t...
  December 30th, 2025 10:52
• Closing Time (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Hayleigh, this is controlled, honest, and self-possessed. You name the...
  December 30th, 2025 10:51
• Guilt by association (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a steady dismantling of moral comfort. You line up everyday...
  December 30th, 2025 10:50
• Repentant Returning (Orchidee) Beautiful, Orchi! I am a fan of this series, though I wonder if maybe KP...
  December 30th, 2025 10:48
• Where\'s That Christmas Feeling? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Wonderful job...and yes, Krampus. Quite the cuddly guy. As for your...
  December 30th, 2025 10:45
• Shadow\'s Defining (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this feels hushed and unavoidable. It moves like a...
  December 29th, 2025 15:04
• \"Put a Quarter in My Slot\" (Friendship) My friend, this is charming, vulnerable, and quietly brave. You use humor...
  December 29th, 2025 15:03
• Trade (2781) My friend, this reads like a warning spoken calmly while everything...
  December 29th, 2025 15:02
• endurings (Arqios) My friend, this settles into the body slowly. It’s patient, restrained,...
  December 29th, 2025 15:01
• My People And Mercy (Orchidee) Wonderful hymn-poem, Orchi! As for mercy, with all the glugging going...
  December 29th, 2025 14:59
• What we are left (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a quiet tribute to labor and lineage. You trace creation...
  December 29th, 2025 14:57
• Am Angry (ADarkerMind) My friend, I recognize this voice that argues with nothing because...
  December 29th, 2025 14:55
• Finishing Touches and the Secrets Out! (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) My friend, this chapter holds community, continuity, and earned trust. The...
  December 28th, 2025 08:09
• Astro-naughts (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Shaun, this is confrontational and deliberately unsettled. The wordplay,...
  December 28th, 2025 08:08
• \"Currency of Touch\" (Friendship) My friend, I feel the insistence here on being seen whole, not summarized....
  December 28th, 2025 08:07
• the bridge at dusk (Arqios) My friend, what patient, weathered, and deeply human write! The grit in...
  December 28th, 2025 08:05
• Silent Nights (Teddy.15) LOVE THIS! And love the picture! Oh, dearest Teddy. I am happy your raven...
  December 28th, 2025 08:02
• Ire Against Innocents (Orchidee) One of my favorite carols is the Coventry Carol. Such a horrific event,...
  December 28th, 2025 08:00
• Eden had no fences until man came (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is direct, uncompromising, and necessary. You weave ancient...
  December 28th, 2025 07:57
• Odette\'s Lament (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) My friend, I’ve known that space where pain gets misread as play and...
  December 28th, 2025 07:56
• Maybe, I\'ll get It Right (Thomas W Case) Thomas, this hit me hard. There’s a quiet desperation running through...
  December 28th, 2025 07:54
• \"It\'s Okay to Love Yourself\" (Friendship) Reading this feels like being spoken to slowly, with intention. I connect...
  December 27th, 2025 10:54
• The third seal (2781) ValiantStar, this is a concise, scripturally grounded meditation that...
  December 27th, 2025 10:14
• The Torch Passed (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, this is a quiet meditation on legacy done right. You let lineage...
  December 27th, 2025 10:13
• Pancras Pancakes (Arqios) arqios, this is clever without being clever-for-its-own-sake. You let...
  December 27th, 2025 10:12
• Have I Grown Too Complacent? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Great job Shaun! What really lands is the tension between plotting change...
  December 27th, 2025 10:11
• I Know Her (Katie B.) Katie, this is self-portraiture without vanity. You let yourself be...
  December 27th, 2025 10:02
• Dark passion (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a fearless meditation on desire entangled with death. You...
  December 27th, 2025 09:58
• Light of Love (Orchidee) Beautiful hymn-poem, Orchi! The light is on, God\'s glory (LOVE and...
  December 27th, 2025 09:56
• God\'s No Fairy-tale (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Well done on this, my friend! I concur wholeheartedly!...
  December 27th, 2025 09:54
• Verbal 19 (Kurt Philip Behm) Reading this makes me think about how easily rhetoric spreads and how hard...
  December 26th, 2025 10:35
• SPINNING TIME (Isa kemmy) My friend, this poem holds repetition, identity, and fracture in a steady...
  December 26th, 2025 10:34
• The Trees Are Talking So Loudly Today (Friendship) Friendship, this poem honors listening as an act of love. You let the...
  December 26th, 2025 10:32
• wintergreen (Arqios) I love this and, being that I know you are currently in your summer time,...
  December 26th, 2025 10:31
• Martyr\'s Ministry (Orchidee) Ah...you thought that was it. Awkwardly scratched your head. Said, gee,...
  December 26th, 2025 10:26
• Martyr\'s Ministry (Orchidee) Excellent hymn-poem, Orchi! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
  December 26th, 2025 10:25
• Nothing of nothing (Sorenbarrett) Soren, this is a meditation on time, loss, and the fragility of record....
  December 26th, 2025 10:24
• Why does the moon..? (NafisaSB) Safina, this is a tender meditation on beauty, exhaustion, and constancy....
  December 26th, 2025 10:24
• Plumage (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Great job, Kurt. What really lands is the contrast between surface and...
  December 24th, 2025 11:19