Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
Oops, I missed this! A fine write again Gold. I don\'t like being too...
July 23rd, 2019 01:58 - Facing Fear. (Goldfinch60)
A true write Gold. Erm, is this based partly on the fear of hearing me...
July 23rd, 2019 01:55 - Wedding Day (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. I\'m prone to swoons in me sheltered life. Some poems...
July 23rd, 2019 01:41 - dont ask me why (Dusk arising)
A fine write Dusk.
Meanwhile - Why? Oops, you said \'Don\'t ask me why!\'...
July 22nd, 2019 11:02 - I Talked to A Man (July 20th, 2019) (Nafis Light)
A fine write J.
July 22nd, 2019 10:59 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Oohh I\'m all jittery with some bridges if I can see the...
July 22nd, 2019 04:04 - UNTELLABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. I went delirious ages ago - upon the first \'swoony\'...
July 22nd, 2019 03:55 - She Sparkles (Neville)
Good write Neville. You got biscuits there?! heehee.
July 22nd, 2019 02:48 - Manic Monday (Christina8)
A good write Christina.
July 22nd, 2019 01:28 - ART (Michael Edwards)
A good write and pic M. You been round my way? There was a building that...
July 22nd, 2019 01:25 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
I never knew my singing caused all this trouble and upset! heehee. I\'m a...
July 21st, 2019 07:37 - A PURPOSE IN LIFE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 1 7 2 4 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good write B&A. I thought you wrote it originally in 1726?! heehee.
July 21st, 2019 07:36 - A PLEB\'S WHAT I AM (Michael Edwards)
I dunno any pleb-like lawyers?! heehee.
July 21st, 2019 07:33 - The Choir - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
And the words too entered their soul? A fine write Gold.
July 21st, 2019 07:31 - Regrets of Today, None of Tomorrow (JWKP98)
A fine write JW.
July 21st, 2019 01:28 - Stay With Me... (Nafis Light)
I knew ya wanted me to leave, cos I kept singing to ya! No one can bear me...
July 21st, 2019 01:17 - First Century of the Third Millennium (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. It would be slavery, if it was worship to any other god...
July 21st, 2019 01:16 - SENSE OF COLOUR ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Just pray it don\'t rain! But why? Cos it starts me singing:...
July 20th, 2019 05:53 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write Andrew.
July 20th, 2019 02:57 - The catapult clause (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write Andrew. Erm, I had a more negative version,...
July 20th, 2019 01:46 - Too Much Time... (Nafis Light)
Well, some say \'I should like to have the time to..... there do not seem...
July 20th, 2019 01:44 - Words Do Not Matter. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold. I try to match the words of my hymn-poems with...
July 20th, 2019 01:43 - SATURDAY (Michael Edwards)
Yes, you\'ve earned them. What, you\'re not doing any lawyer-ing on...
July 20th, 2019 01:39 - Falling (JWKP98)
I don\'t see us as being good in ourselves, but through Christ we are made...
July 19th, 2019 06:39 - Silent Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
And then the other day you saw someone who did not stop talking!
A fine...
July 19th, 2019 01:38 - JULY 1969 ~ MAN ON THE MOON ! ? ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Where did they go then, if not to the moon?! To a planet made of cheese?...
July 19th, 2019 01:36 - In The Kindness of Strangers (Nafis Light)
A fine write J.
July 19th, 2019 01:33 - The Error of a God. (Yorke)
I can\'t seem to guess what\'s going on here, but it\'s something very...
July 19th, 2019 01:32 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (6) (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Is that Slammy (Sammy) Berles? Them Berles get in...
July 19th, 2019 01:27 - Nature High (JWKP98)
A fine write JW.
July 18th, 2019 06:54 - THE OLD PIANO TUNER ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ FIVE TUNED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. An organist/pianist at one church shows off a bit I...
July 18th, 2019 03:49 - Untamed (Christina8)
A fine write Christina. There ain\'t no-one who forgets my singing, once...
July 18th, 2019 01:58 - Not Knowing (Suresh)
A fine write Suresh.
We say \'Why ask?\' as it is written that \'He knows...
July 18th, 2019 01:56 - To your new life (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine write Andy.
Meanwhile - I thought you was crying over my words,...
July 18th, 2019 01:54 - The Peace of Music. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write Gold.
July 18th, 2019 01:52 - Just A Little More (Nafis Light)
A good write J.
July 18th, 2019 01:52 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (5) (Michael Edwards)
A good write and pic M. Is there a Poppy Berles?
July 18th, 2019 01:51 - My favourite anecdote from Urdu (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A fine write zaynab. Another donkey tale in summary: A donkey fell into a...
July 18th, 2019 01:49 - UNDERGROUND EXPLORATION ~ CAVING ~ BRIAN ~ FIVE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I would be claustrophobic!
July 17th, 2019 02:48 - Awoken (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary.
July 17th, 2019 01:55 - My New Life. (Goldfinch60)
A sensitive write Gold. It\'s not quite the same, but I was reading of the...
July 17th, 2019 01:51 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (4) (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Is this Sisyphus Berles?!
July 17th, 2019 01:48 - Heartbeat & 4D of rainbow dragonfly (Poetic Dan)
A lovely write Dan.
July 16th, 2019 11:19 - TEN MOST POPULAR SPORTS ~ ANGELA ~ A DECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Who can explain the insanity of boxing? Two people...
July 16th, 2019 11:18 - PAINTED LADIES. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay.
July 16th, 2019 11:16 - Adrenaline (Christina8)
Well, I was in bed asleep! I missed all this! heehee. I tried to light my...
July 16th, 2019 01:54 - Never Lonely - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Needing time to take things in - and for us fellow-poets too...…. a sort...
July 16th, 2019 01:53 - I Seek to Understand... (Nafis Light)
How does he even know if his assumptions are true? That\'s what the yare -...
July 16th, 2019 01:30 - Untitled - II (Suresh)
Well, here\'s my counter proposal if you like: ….\'only light is...
July 16th, 2019 01:27 - No Hint of An End (Neville)
Good write Neville.
July 16th, 2019 01:23 - ENGLAND ~ WORLD CRICKET CHAMPIONS 2019 ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A.
July 15th, 2019 04:35 - The Whimbrel (Neville)
A fine write Neville.
July 15th, 2019 04:34 - A ballet (Suresh)
A fine write Suresh. There is in some hymns the phrase \'the dance of...
July 15th, 2019 02:06 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write Fay. Wing your flights, you hearts.... sounds like a line I...
July 15th, 2019 01:52 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (3) (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. One rather upper-class church found a new Vicar...
July 15th, 2019 01:51 - Forgotten. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, me too - if not having pen and paper ready, the words can go!
July 15th, 2019 01:48 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
And re Joker: Yep, I know - People do the same when I say \'I\'m about to...
July 14th, 2019 10:38 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
Gracias, and all that stuff too! I dunno what it all means. lol. A fine...
July 14th, 2019 10:37 - Miss Me Hard (Neville)
A fine write N.
July 14th, 2019 07:56 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold. The pecking order of doves?
July 14th, 2019 01:43 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M.
July 14th, 2019 01:42 - LANGUAGE OF ROSES ~ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4 - 10 Free Verse Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write and pic/clip B&A. Fido won\'t let me have any roses if...
July 13th, 2019 07:50 - Sunflowers (Neville)
A fine write N. Upload a clip of me singing then, if you\'re having...
July 13th, 2019 07:47 - FIRST SIGHTING (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. Miss Berles heard any cuckoos?
July 13th, 2019 02:13 - Action (Suresh)
You carried out the action of writing this fine poem!
July 13th, 2019 01:56 - Smaller Mouth. (Goldfinch60)
Oh lol, good write Gold.
July 13th, 2019 01:55 - My Little Prayer At This Moment (Nafis Light)
A fine write J.
July 13th, 2019 01:54 - THE SUNFLOWER. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay.
July 12th, 2019 10:51 - THINK (Michael Edwards)
I got me own problems on the path, with motorised wheelchairs - and some...
July 12th, 2019 10:50 - Life is the plan (Poetic Dan)
A fine write Dan. I had a plan to sing to everyone. Why they all run...
July 12th, 2019 03:43 - REFLECTIONS - SNOITCELFER ~ BRIAN ~ Reflected Double Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oohh a snoit-wotsit! Never heard of \'em. Well, maybe I have! I thought it...
July 12th, 2019 03:41 - Guilt Ridden. (Goldfinch60)
A painful write to read, and for you (and others) to experience Gold. If...
July 12th, 2019 01:53 - Servitude (Suresh)
Well yes, but they are not the same - one is good and one is evil, I say.
July 12th, 2019 01:35 - In My Spare Time (ForeverJesus7)
I fuss sometimes if I have not written at least something every day. But...
July 11th, 2019 10:55 - DREAM A LITTLE DREAM OF ME ! ANGELA ~ FOUR RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Aww, it seems a long year! it might go quicker later on. Does the time go...
July 11th, 2019 10:49 - Trying Hard (Suresh)
Or to earn a crust? as is said.
July 11th, 2019 03:01 - Chatterbox. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
July 11th, 2019 02:04 - THE VILLAGE HALL PACKAGE DEAL (Michael Edwards)
Good write and pic M. Miss Berles going?
July 11th, 2019 02:04 - Exposed (Suresh)
A fine write Suresh.
July 10th, 2019 11:01 - POP IN FOR A PIZZA ! ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 4 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A tasty write B&A.
July 10th, 2019 11:00 - PLANNED. (Fay Slimm.)
A good write Fay.
July 10th, 2019 02:39 - Baby girl (Song for my daughter) (IndisClaire)
A lovely write Claire.
July 10th, 2019 01:33 - Two Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold.
July 10th, 2019 01:31 - BELLS RING OUT (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M.
July 10th, 2019 01:30 - TENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
A good write Fay.
July 9th, 2019 03:41 - THE CARBON CYCLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Will it help if I breathe less? Should I try fasting from breathing for 24...
July 9th, 2019 03:41 - THE CARBON CYCLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. I\'m in me greenhouse. What effect will it have? C\'mon...
July 9th, 2019 03:39 - blue eyes (Dusk arising)
A fine write dusk. I\'m not a blue-eyed boy for nothing! I\'m not in the...
July 9th, 2019 01:37 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
A good write Gold.
July 9th, 2019 01:36 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and pic M. I\'ve gotten to read this poem. The word cropped...
July 9th, 2019 01:35 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
A fine write Suresh. Also: Love is... or a lovely feeling - not hearing me...
July 8th, 2019 13:35 - LOVE ALLIGATORS ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 10 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write B&A. Why yes, being prehistoric in age myself, oohh, I seen...
July 8th, 2019 05:11 - Home stretch (Poetic Dan)
In a light vein - but, what, if, maybe, perhaps, might do, then again I...
July 8th, 2019 02:05 - Mindful Ministry (Orchidee)
I don\'t mean the title to imply \'mindfulness\' - not any spooky kind of...
July 8th, 2019 01:54 - Holding Purses (Gary Edward Geraci)
A fine write Gary. yes, in places, clubs, etc, there can be those...
July 8th, 2019 01:46 - A Game of Tennis. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
July 8th, 2019 01:44 - THE GREATER GOOD (Michael Edwards)
A good write and pic M. I suppose we don\'t have to agree with everyone...
July 8th, 2019 01:39 - Musical Brass. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Gold.
July 7th, 2019 08:33 - The Glory Days (ForeverJesus7)
A fine write Forever.
July 7th, 2019 01:36 - Labours Of Love (Orchidee)
The original is a comforting evening hymn. It ascends to the final...
July 7th, 2019 01:25
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