Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Haiku Attempts (Augustus)
I admire your courage giving Haiku a shot, Augustus. I wouldn\'t know a...
June 6th, 2017 16:39 - Deja Vu (Mkate0798)
Strong poem, well done!
June 6th, 2017 11:08 - Youth (Classicmister)
Splendid poem, Classicmister! Beautifully portrays our journey through...
June 6th, 2017 10:52 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that...
June 6th, 2017 10:47 - Poems (Definition) (Swingline)
Wow! A good Three-Line poem! You win the brevity prize, swingline.
June 6th, 2017 10:36 - Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60)
A short poem full of wisdom. Well done, Goldfinch!
June 6th, 2017 10:32 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you so much, Goldfinch and Raj! I truly appreciate your input.
June 6th, 2017 10:26 - But Traveler I Am Not (Ethan)
Dream on, Ethan ... that\'s what life is.
June 6th, 2017 10:20 - MATURITY (Michael Edwards)
As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a...
June 6th, 2017 09:36 - AT THE CEMETERY (RAJ NANDY)
Lovely narrative poem, Raj Nandy! I like that poetic form and make use of...
June 6th, 2017 09:28 - I Pretend (Grnteabug)
I second Invisible\'s comment. Good poem, Grnteabug!
June 5th, 2017 20:34 - every time we met (Mylittleheart)
Sounds like \'it\' stayed pretty wet there for a while before cooling off....
June 5th, 2017 17:59 - jabroni (Marylaine)
Your unstructured, unpunctuated style works in this poem. I like it. Well...
June 5th, 2017 17:47 - My face was not flushed (Harrington)
Beautiful, subtle, erotic poem, Harrington! Welcome to MPS. I look forward...
June 5th, 2017 16:02 - Relationship (Jessie Lee Brooks)
Much truth in this well written, four-line poem, Jessie. It is refreshing...
June 5th, 2017 14:57 - Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of...
June 5th, 2017 08:36 - The Cook. (Goldfinch60)
Delicious poem, Goldfinch! Enjoyed it almost as much as I would enjoy one...
June 5th, 2017 08:24 - FIVE THIRTY PM (Michael Edwards)
Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
June 5th, 2017 00:24 - London attacks (Mrs Middie)
Welcome to MPS, Middie! I like your poem, especially the repetitive line...
June 4th, 2017 14:04 - Voices Call (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fine four-line poem broken into eight. I like it, Kurt!
June 4th, 2017 13:56 - Clinical Trials (Augustus)
A noble, courageous fight you put up, my friend! You are admired.
June 4th, 2017 10:24 - Transformation. (Fay Slimm.)
Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion....
June 4th, 2017 10:11 - All of the Above (SSCR)
Very moving and well done poem, SSCR! You come across as strong and...
June 4th, 2017 09:52 - Americana (Grnteabug)
Congratulations, Grnteabug, on a fine first poem on this site, and...
June 3rd, 2017 22:16 - Exuberance (Augustus)
Babies are my favorite people in the world. I miss my volunteering in the...
June 3rd, 2017 13:34 - Word Wisdom. (Fay Slimm.)
I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our...
June 3rd, 2017 12:15 - AS YET UNWRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful poem, Michael! Thanks.
June 3rd, 2017 09:10 - 3:10 A M (Swingline)
Enjoyed your cute poem, swingline!
June 3rd, 2017 09:07 - 10 years Daddy. (Kayweejade)
Welcome to MPS, Kay. So sorry for your loss. The pain eventually subsides.
June 2nd, 2017 19:19 - Breathe (ShannonXx)
Nice poem, Shannon, I enjoyed it
June 2nd, 2017 16:03 - Eternity Set Free (Kurt Philip Behm)
Echoes the belief that time is but a construct of this dimension, and does...
June 2nd, 2017 13:52 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
June 2nd, 2017 13:47 - Treasured lust (Thehippiepoet)
Welcome to MPS, hippie! I\'ve been the \'older man\', by twenty years. It...
June 2nd, 2017 13:40 - Back of School. (Garry)
Uncommon as it is, your poem appeals to me a great deal, Garry. Well done!
June 2nd, 2017 10:57 - Thoughts (Puppylove17)
Puppy love will pass, you have much to look forward to, P.L.
June 2nd, 2017 10:52 - Exercise Program (Augustus)
Your exercise program wears me out thinking about it, Augustus! Slow down!
June 2nd, 2017 10:45 - The Note (MusicalRider)
If you are still with us ... this too shall pass. Welcome to MPS, M>R>.
June 2nd, 2017 10:40 - when you love another (Mylittleheart)
Very well put together poem, mlh! Enjoyed it thoroughly.
June 2nd, 2017 10:31 - Tree (Jabberwocky)
Powerful piece, J ... Kudos!
June 2nd, 2017 10:26 - BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I once had an amazing experience with a Great White Owl in the mountains...
June 2nd, 2017 10:14 - My Love (Grayc8814)
Welcome to MPS, grayc! Your poem is too beautiful to be distracted from by...
June 2nd, 2017 09:55 - Thirty Years Later (Swingline)
Beautiful, heart-rendering poem, swingline! I can relate to the experience...
June 2nd, 2017 09:43 - Worthwhile (Eric)
Welcome to MPS, Eric, glad to have you aboard! Keep the good work coming.
June 1st, 2017 15:57 - The Ascender (Augustus)
I, too, am intrigued by alliteration, but have never made the bold,...
June 1st, 2017 10:12 - Dating Plan (Jabberwocky)
Clever write, Jabberwacky. Well done.
June 1st, 2017 09:56 - The Old Home (Swingline)
Beautifully portrayed, swingline! I felt like I was in that house with...
June 1st, 2017 09:52 - Beast (IDiedLastNight)
I can relate, IDLN. I, too harbor a slumbering beast inside of me. I try...
June 1st, 2017 09:47 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
You paint a captivating picture, Fay. Kudos!
June 1st, 2017 09:41 - PEACE (Louis Gibbs)
Your kind comment is very much appreciated, my friend.
June 1st, 2017 09:29 - The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
We had similar events as this where I once lived, Gainesville GA.
I have...
June 1st, 2017 08:57 - LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards)
Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
June 1st, 2017 08:48 - Finding God: A Love Story (SSCR)
Extremely moving, heart spawned poem, SSCR! Congratulations, I look...
June 1st, 2017 08:45 - Enemies (Grindbaby16)
Congratulations on the level of maturity you have clearly attained,...
May 31st, 2017 21:25 - I Don’t Give a Fuck (Stephanie Showers)
Succinctly put, Stephanie! Nice poem, keep them coming.
May 31st, 2017 16:27 - Adoptive City \\\\\\\'67 (Mjmartguy)
P.S., welcome to MPS.
May 31st, 2017 16:24 - Adoptive City \\\\\\\'67 (Mjmartguy)
Your \"unclassified\" poem is, in fact, quite classy! That was, indeed, a...
May 31st, 2017 16:21 - Never....Not....Ever......Afraid (P.H.Rose)
I love the short poems that convey so much. This is such a one, P.H.Rose....
May 31st, 2017 10:11 - Karma (Tiffany_Arnold)
Welcome to MPS, Tiffany. We can use all of the honest, \'life lessons\'...
May 31st, 2017 10:03 - Which Path? (Goldfinch60)
I guess, in my case, you could say I to0k \"the road less traveled\". It...
May 31st, 2017 09:45 - Hell\'s angel gone (Herjourney)
Your beautiful soul shines through this blunt, crude, powerful. poem,...
May 31st, 2017 09:39 - MEN IN SHORTS (Michael Edwards)
Aside from all the frivolity above, which I enjoyed thoroughly, Let me say...
May 31st, 2017 09:30 - Don\'t bite your tongue (Mylittleheart)
Masterful poem, indeed! Splendid, I would call it, mylittleheart.
May 30th, 2017 22:15 - whats depression you ask? (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.
May 30th, 2017 22:12 - May 3, 2017 (Jean Darc)
Lovely analogies in your poem, Jean. Welcome to MPS!
May 30th, 2017 22:07 - Thunderstorms (SSCR)
Beautiful poem, well structured ... well done, SSCR! I, too, am a lover of...
May 30th, 2017 21:55 - Fiction (Rayzul)
This dimension can get a little tedious at times, I agree, Rayzul. I like...
May 30th, 2017 21:49 - Kingdom of Rust (J.D. Treick)
Dark, but intriguing poem, J.D. Welcome to the MPS group!
May 30th, 2017 18:40 - Night (Magenta1)
I envy you, Magenta. the sea of stars do not exist for those of us with...
May 30th, 2017 18:30 - My Own Destruction (Nifty90)
Welcome to the site, Nifty90! If this is indeed your own abusive...
May 30th, 2017 18:24 - Catching attention, delivering effective messages that make the difference (Avigail)
Sounds like you have figured out the formula for success, Avigail. Well...
May 30th, 2017 17:16 - Destiny Marked (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well structured, intriguing poem, Kurt! Polished to a brilliance.
May 30th, 2017 17:05 - Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose)
Hopefully all these positive comments and encouragement have given you a...
May 30th, 2017 16:52 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you all for your encouraging comments! I can\'t express how happy I...
May 30th, 2017 16:34 - The Foley (Augustus)
Been there, done that, my friend. It ain\'t for sissies. Brave poem!
May 30th, 2017 11:07 - Why? (Liam Lawless)
Why not? Give life a shot! Hang in there, anonamus!
May 30th, 2017 09:33 - Colors ! (Swingline)
Yours is certainly a colorful world, swingline. Enjoyed this poem.
May 30th, 2017 09:30 - WOKE??!? (Dametre Williams)
Nothing we say or do can adequately portray the fullness of who we really...
May 30th, 2017 09:25 - Inner Peace? (Voicesecho88)
Terrific message to all the young poets on this site who are struggling...
May 30th, 2017 09:10 - Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
May 30th, 2017 09:03 - Lunatics Mind (Dawn Von Rue)
Your life is a gift you have given yourself. To squander it would be the...
May 30th, 2017 08:58 - All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful gift you are giving your granddaughter, Goldfinch! She...
May 30th, 2017 08:52 - Treasure This Life (Hannabal)
What a pleasure to find a poem that celebrates life as this one does so...
May 30th, 2017 08:45 - WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful poem, Michael! It is, indeed, a magical area, and I can see why...
May 30th, 2017 08:41 - Ashes of Fireflies (Alex Trenwith)
Very powerful piece, Alex! Trauma expressed often makes for the finest...
May 30th, 2017 07:59 - An Entry + Someone Else (Little lay lay)
Expressing ourselves through poetry is a great way to learn who we are,...
May 30th, 2017 07:53 - A Clear Path In Sight (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Really like the upbeat vibe of this poem! Keep them coming, Brooklyn Six.
May 30th, 2017 07:48 - Authenticity dead no knowledge of self. (CaitEva)
I\'m not sure even esoteric knowledge is a way out of what we have...
May 29th, 2017 18:43 - A guy like me? (Thelonelywalker)
I always enjoy a good twist at the end of a poem. Well done, lonelywalker!
May 29th, 2017 18:38 - HeartStrings (Jamminblu)
My God, but this brings back the shock and disbelief I experienced as a...
May 29th, 2017 11:09 - Cancer Dying (Augustus)
Having just recently met you here, Augustus, I am not familiar with your...
May 29th, 2017 11:01 - The Parade (WriteBeLight)
Good write, WriteBeLight!
May 29th, 2017 09:16 - Doubt to my Friend ? (Rajkumar)
Love ... not an easy thing to define, but you made a worthy attempt at it....
May 29th, 2017 09:01 - THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
In my day, where I grew up, they were the \'Good Humor Man\',...
May 29th, 2017 08:49 - The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60)
.We, who give much, are often taken for granted it seems. I feel you,...
May 29th, 2017 08:40 - LIMERICK 31 (Michael Edwards)
Well done, Micheal! It\'s a pleasure to run across well written humor in...
May 29th, 2017 08:33 - Before I Said Her Name (SSCR)
Really enjoyed this piece, SSCR. Well done expression of the effect of...
May 29th, 2017 08:29 - Scathing (Baylee)
Wow! Powerful, beautiful piece, Baylee. The punch at the end really makes...
May 29th, 2017 08:20 - Did it Overheat? (Edthepoet)
I found this poetic expression well written and worthy, Ed!
A poetic...
May 28th, 2017 11:45 - Warrior Poet (Augustus)
Here\'s to the power of poetry, and the courage of poets to express their...
May 28th, 2017 11:33 - Meaning? (Joe.smith1)
I believe t he search for meaning is a path we all are on, Joe. Enjoyed...
May 28th, 2017 10:59
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