Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• The Ascender (Augustus) I, too, am intrigued by alliteration, but have never made the bold,...
  June 1st, 2017 10:12
• Dating Plan (Jabberwocky) Clever write, Jabberwacky. Well done.
  June 1st, 2017 09:56
• The Old Home (Swingline) Beautifully portrayed, swingline! I felt like I was in that house with...
  June 1st, 2017 09:52
• Beast (IDiedLastNight) I can relate, IDLN. I, too harbor a slumbering beast inside of me. I try...
  June 1st, 2017 09:47
• Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.) You paint a captivating picture, Fay. Kudos!
  June 1st, 2017 09:41
• PEACE (Louis Gibbs) Your kind comment is very much appreciated, my friend.
  June 1st, 2017 09:29
• The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60) We had similar events as this where I once lived, Gainesville GA. I have...
  June 1st, 2017 08:57
• LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards) Love your humor, Michael, and how it inspires more in the replies.
  June 1st, 2017 08:48
• Finding God: A Love Story (SSCR) Extremely moving, heart spawned poem, SSCR! Congratulations, I look...
  June 1st, 2017 08:45
• Enemies (Grindbaby16) Congratulations on the level of maturity you have clearly attained,...
  May 31st, 2017 21:25
• I Don’t Give a Fuck (Stephanie Showers) Succinctly put, Stephanie! Nice poem, keep them coming.
  May 31st, 2017 16:27
• Adoptive City \\\\\\\'67 (Mjmartguy) P.S., welcome to MPS.
  May 31st, 2017 16:24
• Adoptive City \\\\\\\'67 (Mjmartguy) Your \"unclassified\" poem is, in fact, quite classy! That was, indeed, a...
  May 31st, 2017 16:21
• Never....Not....Ever......Afraid (P.H.Rose) I love the short poems that convey so much. This is such a one, P.H.Rose....
  May 31st, 2017 10:11
• Karma (Tiffany_Arnold) Welcome to MPS, Tiffany. We can use all of the honest, \'life lessons\'...
  May 31st, 2017 10:03
• Which Path? (Goldfinch60) I guess, in my case, you could say I to0k \"the road less traveled\". It...
  May 31st, 2017 09:45
• Hell\'s angel gone (Herjourney) Your beautiful soul shines through this blunt, crude, powerful. poem,...
  May 31st, 2017 09:39
• MEN IN SHORTS (Michael Edwards) Aside from all the frivolity above, which I enjoyed thoroughly, Let me say...
  May 31st, 2017 09:30
• Don\'t bite your tongue (Mylittleheart) Masterful poem, indeed! Splendid, I would call it, mylittleheart.
  May 30th, 2017 22:15
• whats depression you ask? (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.
  May 30th, 2017 22:12
• May 3, 2017 (Jean Darc) Lovely analogies in your poem, Jean. Welcome to MPS!
  May 30th, 2017 22:07
• Thunderstorms (SSCR) Beautiful poem, well structured ... well done, SSCR! I, too, am a lover of...
  May 30th, 2017 21:55
• Fiction (Rayzul) This dimension can get a little tedious at times, I agree, Rayzul. I like...
  May 30th, 2017 21:49
• Kingdom of Rust (J.D. Treick) Dark, but intriguing poem, J.D. Welcome to the MPS group!
  May 30th, 2017 18:40
• Night (Magenta1) I envy you, Magenta. the sea of stars do not exist for those of us with...
  May 30th, 2017 18:30
• My Own Destruction (Nifty90) Welcome to the site, Nifty90! If this is indeed your own abusive...
  May 30th, 2017 18:24
• Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference (Avigail) Sounds like you have figured out the formula for success, Avigail. Well...
  May 30th, 2017 17:16
• Destiny Marked (Kurt Philip Behm) Well structured, intriguing poem, Kurt! Polished to a brilliance.
  May 30th, 2017 17:05
• Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose) Hopefully all these positive comments and encouragement have given you a...
  May 30th, 2017 16:52
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) Thank you all for your encouraging comments! I can\'t express how happy I...
  May 30th, 2017 16:34
• The Foley (Augustus) Been there, done that, my friend. It ain\'t for sissies. Brave poem!
  May 30th, 2017 11:07
• Why? (Liam Lawless) Why not? Give life a shot! Hang in there, anonamus!
  May 30th, 2017 09:33
• Colors ! (Swingline) Yours is certainly a colorful world, swingline. Enjoyed this poem.
  May 30th, 2017 09:30
• WOKE??!? (Dametre Williams) Nothing we say or do can adequately portray the fullness of who we really...
  May 30th, 2017 09:25
• Inner Peace? (Voicesecho88) Terrific message to all the young poets on this site who are struggling...
  May 30th, 2017 09:10
• Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.) Exquisite, beautifully structured poem, Fay. Most impressive work!
  May 30th, 2017 09:03
• Lunatics Mind (Dawn Von Rue) Your life is a gift you have given yourself. To squander it would be the...
  May 30th, 2017 08:58
• All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful gift you are giving your granddaughter, Goldfinch! She...
  May 30th, 2017 08:52
• Treasure This Life (Hannabal) What a pleasure to find a poem that celebrates life as this one does so...
  May 30th, 2017 08:45
• WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards) Beautiful poem, Michael! It is, indeed, a magical area, and I can see why...
  May 30th, 2017 08:41
• Ashes of Fireflies (Alex Trenwith) Very powerful piece, Alex! Trauma expressed often makes for the finest...
  May 30th, 2017 07:59
• An Entry + Someone Else (Little lay lay) Expressing ourselves through poetry is a great way to learn who we are,...
  May 30th, 2017 07:53
• A Clear Path In Sight (Brooklyn6timesplus) Really like the upbeat vibe of this poem! Keep them coming, Brooklyn Six.
  May 30th, 2017 07:48
• Authenticity dead no knowledge of self. (CaitEva) I\'m not sure even esoteric knowledge is a way out of what we have...
  May 29th, 2017 18:43
• A guy like me? (Thelonelywalker) I always enjoy a good twist at the end of a poem. Well done, lonelywalker!
  May 29th, 2017 18:38
• HeartStrings (Jamminblu) My God, but this brings back the shock and disbelief I experienced as a...
  May 29th, 2017 11:09
• Cancer Dying (Augustus) Having just recently met you here, Augustus, I am not familiar with your...
  May 29th, 2017 11:01
• The Parade (WriteBeLight) Good write, WriteBeLight!
  May 29th, 2017 09:16
• Doubt to my Friend ? (Rajkumar) Love ... not an easy thing to define, but you made a worthy attempt at it....
  May 29th, 2017 09:01
• THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) In my day, where I grew up, they were the \'Good Humor Man\',...
  May 29th, 2017 08:49
• The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60) .We, who give much, are often taken for granted it seems. I feel you,...
  May 29th, 2017 08:40
• LIMERICK 31 (Michael Edwards) Well done, Micheal! It\'s a pleasure to run across well written humor in...
  May 29th, 2017 08:33
• Before I Said Her Name (SSCR) Really enjoyed this piece, SSCR. Well done expression of the effect of...
  May 29th, 2017 08:29
• Scathing (Baylee) Wow! Powerful, beautiful piece, Baylee. The punch at the end really makes...
  May 29th, 2017 08:20
• Did it Overheat? (Edthepoet) I found this poetic expression well written and worthy, Ed! A poetic...
  May 28th, 2017 11:45
• Warrior Poet (Augustus) Here\'s to the power of poetry, and the courage of poets to express their...
  May 28th, 2017 11:33
• Meaning? (Joe.smith1) I believe t he search for meaning is a path we all are on, Joe. Enjoyed...
  May 28th, 2017 10:59
• Fear of God (Swingline) Enjoyed your four line poem very much, Swingline. A few well chosen words...
  May 28th, 2017 10:49
• Garden (Jabberwocky) I, too, have had a couple of gardens trampled, Jabberwocky. it is no fun,...
  May 28th, 2017 10:42
• Blue Painted Fingernails (SSCR) Lovely poem, SSCR! I look forward to more from you.
  May 28th, 2017 10:30
• Stillness Around Me (Goldfinch60) Beautiful poem, Goldfinch! One I can relate to, but my therapeutic choice...
  May 28th, 2017 10:22
• DISCHORDANCE (Louis Gibbs) Thanks for reading and commenting, Augustus
  May 27th, 2017 12:20
• Swings (Augustus) Really like this poem, Augustus! Brilliant insights. Love the...
  May 27th, 2017 10:57
• On the Nature of Daylight. (Goldfinch60) I share your love of this type of music, Goldfinch. The strings in...
  May 27th, 2017 10:35
• Intimate (Gencruz) Beautiful poem, g.c! Well written declaration of how under appreciated our...
  May 26th, 2017 14:32
• THE GREAT DEBATE (Louis Gibbs) Thanks for reading and commenting on my piece, Tony, Outback, and Diamond....
  May 26th, 2017 14:18
• \'GOODBYE\' (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) I love your \'New Beginning\', Kurt! So much can be conveyed in so few...
  May 26th, 2017 11:40
• THE PALM OF MY HAND (Louis Gibbs) Your comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you all, Frank, Rajkumar, and...
  May 26th, 2017 09:00
• Go Through The Adventure (Brooklyn6timesplus) Yes, ya gotta love those life lessons! Isn\'t that why we\'re here?
  May 25th, 2017 22:41
• My Daddy\'s Daughter (Lanaevans) Beauty comes from within, and you obviously have the soul of a poet, which...
  May 25th, 2017 22:37
• Why we won\'t last (Amelliawagg) Well written piece! Your relationship sounds all too familiar to me. But...
  May 25th, 2017 22:30
• THE PALM OF MY HAND (Louis Gibbs) Thank you Kathy, Esmeraldaya, James, and Gary for your encouraging...
  May 25th, 2017 22:17