Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- THE SOLAR ECLIPSE OF 2017 (MyPoem4U)
A marvel of creation it is! Thanks for the fine tribute, MP!
August 21st, 2017 14:36 - Fun Bags (WriteBeLight)
A fine tribute to the fun-bags we men all love! Kudos, WBL.
August 21st, 2017 13:49 - the poetry in me (Clark)
A fine tribute to self-appreciation, both body and soul. An important step...
August 21st, 2017 13:37 - AS A GIRL (Diane)
Nothing more beautiful than the innocence we come in with ... the pure...
August 21st, 2017 13:32 - MY FATHER’S HANDS (Lasergraph)
A first class tribute poem, and presented in an interesting form. Well...
August 21st, 2017 09:29 - Making Love To The Muse (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a deep one, Kurt, with open interpretations. Had to read it more...
August 21st, 2017 09:25 - Mixed mind (Malubotelho)
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow,...
August 21st, 2017 09:18 - Old Man (LukeCoomer)
Good poetic tribute, Luke! I\'m sure he appreciates it.
August 21st, 2017 07:49 - Untitled (Sara Storkson)
A lot to be said for temporary diversions. Good write, Sara!
August 21st, 2017 07:44 - FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An intriguing one, this. Visually appealing. Kudos, Brian!
August 21st, 2017 07:32 - Panic Over. (Goldfinch60)
You had me going there, Goldie. Glad it turned out well. Enjoyed it!
August 21st, 2017 07:20 - Hard Day (FredPeyer)
I lost a sweet younger brother to drink, and saw what it did to his...
August 21st, 2017 07:17 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age,...
August 21st, 2017 07:01 - JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards)
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I...
August 21st, 2017 06:55 - Deal. (Nicholas Browning)
Peace does not appear to be a natural component of physical life, nor was...
August 19th, 2017 08:51 - My Life (John Prophet)
We come into this world, time and time again, the product of those many...
August 19th, 2017 08:31 - The storm (Notsad101)
A fine first offering on MPS, notsad! I Like your ending especially....
August 19th, 2017 07:14 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00 - DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love your poem, Brian. It is a fascinating subject, indeed. Thanks for...
August 19th, 2017 06:56 - The shapes of my life! (Sue.evans)
A fine geometric description of life\'s journey, Sue. Well done!
August 18th, 2017 12:12 - scared of insects (Curtis Hurst)
A stark, well done depiction of the Master ... addiction. Kudos, sgb!...
August 18th, 2017 12:03 - BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No place is sacred to those experiencing the dark side! And so it is, as...
August 18th, 2017 11:59 - Vessels (John Prophet)
Echoes the theme of the poem I posted today. Since there are no...
August 18th, 2017 11:49 - Safe Place (Caden)
Blissful, but risky, that feeling ... basing one\'s \"entire world\" on...
August 18th, 2017 11:43 - FADED LOOKS (Lasergraph)
Words of wisdom, lg! Appreciated it.
August 18th, 2017 11:37 - Love On The Run (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The evolution of a relationship ... so well expressed, Kurt!
August 18th, 2017 11:30 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
And a merry lunch it was! Certainly beats a burger at McDonalds. Enjoyed...
August 18th, 2017 10:14 - Expectations (FredPeyer)
Nothing wrong with expecting the best of outcomes. To expect less makes...
August 18th, 2017 10:08 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond...
August 18th, 2017 09:53 - Losing You. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases...
August 18th, 2017 09:39 - Essence of Time (Clock King)
A fine poem on time, and it running out on all of us, CK! welcome to MPS!
August 17th, 2017 15:30 - your name. (Lillian_Jean)
\"If we let them\" is the key, I agree. Thanks for this wise first...
August 17th, 2017 15:27 - Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87)
A long story, briefly but well told!
August 17th, 2017 10:12 - Damnation Defined (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Concise and well described corruption of purity. Excellent, Kurt!
August 17th, 2017 09:56 - Let It Be (Its Raskolnikov)
Wise counsel, R! \"Just let it be\", indeed!
August 17th, 2017 09:32 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60)
As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!
August 17th, 2017 08:23 - OPPORTUNITY (Lasergraph)
Beautifully depicted poem of regret. lg! Well done.
August 17th, 2017 08:01 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer)
A good poem, Fred, describing a cruel affliction. My sympathy! My hearing...
August 17th, 2017 07:56 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing,...
August 17th, 2017 07:39 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful...
August 17th, 2017 07:35 - After (Private poet)
You sing the sad song of the widow so sweetly herein, PP. Well expressed!
August 16th, 2017 13:12 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36)
A tender, beautiful tribute to a love, Tony! I enjoyed it.
August 16th, 2017 13:06 - counting sighs (Heather T)
A beautiful, poignant piece, Heather. Very well presented. I simply love...
August 16th, 2017 13:03 - Golden Rule (John Prophet)
You share my feelings and sum them up beautifully in this poem, JG! Well...
August 16th, 2017 12:59 - Four Shorts: Concupiscence / Longing / Old Couple / Love (FredPeyer)
Four brilliant, touching short ones, Fred. It takes a special poetic mind...
August 16th, 2017 09:34 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight)
A cute one, WBL! Thanks for the chuckle.
August 16th, 2017 09:28 - THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph)
The madness and sadness and futility of war! Well written account, lg!
August 16th, 2017 09:18 - Views from overseas (Eduanf)
Brilliant line; \"Don\'t they know we all came from the same different...
August 16th, 2017 09:15 - THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards)
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60)
Music, as well as anything that stirs emotions, is a great trigger for a...
August 16th, 2017 07:24 - CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another fine Caribbean-flavored poem, Brian, and a fine tribute. I enjoyed...
August 16th, 2017 07:17 - Rising tides (Malubotelho)
Sweet and sad. Thanks for sharing this one, Malu!
August 16th, 2017 07:00 - origami (Draculazy)
I think I may be too young to be reading this one, d! You paint a sensuous...
August 15th, 2017 16:40 - Itinerary (WriteBeLight)
Thanks for taking us with you on that lovely trip, WBL! I enjoyed it.
August 15th, 2017 16:28 - The Cycle (Caden)
Well done portrayal of the cycle, Caden! Nicely and neatly presented....
August 15th, 2017 16:25 - pretty (Heather T)
Wow! A real beauty, Heather. A breathtaking tribute to a lucky man.
August 15th, 2017 16:02 - Pain and Rain and Gain (Kylewriggs)
Indeed, we are all uniquely weird. It makes for an interesting world,...
August 15th, 2017 10:15 - My Granny (Jennylynn0324)
A sweet tribute poem to your grandmother, Jenny! Welcome to MPS!
August 15th, 2017 10:12 - ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
To blast and blame Trump for the riot, as does the American media,...
August 15th, 2017 10:07 - Mystery (Lakiea)
So true, so very true, this poem! It echoes one of my own, which I am...
August 15th, 2017 09:50 - ()
The mind contains the ego ... the heart contains the soul. I vote for the...
August 15th, 2017 09:42 - Low (Private poet)
A plight shared by so many, women and men alike, as we age. You nailed it...
August 15th, 2017 09:39 - A Mother\'s Love? (Edward Charles McDevitt)
My mother betrayed me after thirty years of my being the sole attendant to...
August 15th, 2017 09:35 - Milieu (John Prophet)
Your poem reflects the rising of consciousness in the world that it is,...
August 15th, 2017 09:24 - Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60)
A stunningly sad disease and its wrath captured so well in your poem,...
August 15th, 2017 07:41 - First Love (FredPeyer)
You captured the awkwardness of first love beautifully, Fred. Couldn\'t...
August 15th, 2017 07:31 - Love-Tongue. (Fay Slimm.)
A perfection of a poem, Fay, giving tribute to Creator and the exquisite...
August 15th, 2017 07:27 - If Not This........What? (Seeker)
A beautiful, classic poem, George. I especially like the last two lines,...
August 14th, 2017 11:08 - CRAYON ON THE WALL (Lasergraph)
Beautiful portrayal of the cycle of life, Laser! I enjoyed and related to...
August 14th, 2017 08:52 - Withdrawal\'s Lament (Azura Nightsong)
There\'s a theory that all wounds are self-inflicted, as part of learning...
August 14th, 2017 08:38 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight)
\"Time is relative\", and some relatives aren\'t worth our time. Good...
August 14th, 2017 08:32 - The Darkness (Hannah.Almatarneh)
Run, baby, run! You captured the realization of true character very well...
August 14th, 2017 07:16 - Oh please just let it rain (Eduanf)
Depression seems to be rampant among your age group, Eduanf. A sign of the...
August 14th, 2017 07:08 - Memories (Anthony R Chancellor)
Well described process of the mind processing pain and disappointment,...
August 14th, 2017 07:03 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A well done cute one, Briansodes! You caught the lingo beautifully.
August 14th, 2017 06:59 - Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60)
Faith doth have its limits, dothent it. Cute one, Goldie!
August 14th, 2017 06:53 - SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards)
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for...
August 14th, 2017 06:32 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
A beautiful job of imagining yourself in her shoes Fred ... so well...
August 14th, 2017 06:27 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed, \"As division trembles on time\'s very edge\", nature plods on at...
August 14th, 2017 06:17 - The Girl (CSS20013)
And you are the girl who is a poet. A touching, well expressed first poem...
August 13th, 2017 20:38 - fractured picture (Stefan badham)
Insightful and subtle ... an exquisite poem, Stefan!
August 13th, 2017 10:25 - Rain (ItIsI)
A splendid introductory poem, Itisi! Welcome to MPS. Keep them coming.
August 13th, 2017 10:21 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho)
Ah, the mighty seductive power that women possess, against which a man...
August 13th, 2017 10:18 - Fight or Flight (Yosamite)
Your courageous spirit comes through in this very good, well-written poem,...
August 13th, 2017 10:13 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Your poem describes a larger problem in the work force ... machines and...
August 13th, 2017 10:09 - cory (ACS)
A well done tribute poem, ACS. Congrats!
August 13th, 2017 10:01 - Buckle Up (John Prophet)
A lofty goal for humanity you describe ... but then what would we do for...
August 13th, 2017 09:59 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
A whimsical write that brings to mind the aimless drifting of so many...
August 13th, 2017 07:52 - Redefining. (Fay Slimm.)
Your lovely poem radiates tranquility as does the pool, Fay. Thanks for...
August 13th, 2017 07:40 - Ethereal Perception (Kadesh Vega)
A very classical feeling Gothic poem, Kadesh. Well done, I enjoyed it!...
August 12th, 2017 20:47 - Underpinnings (John Prophet)
Brilliant, JG! You capture the essence of this imagined reality succinctly...
August 12th, 2017 19:17 - Michaelmas (AJ)
Your lovely poem envisions a lovely place for us, AJ. Nice work!
August 12th, 2017 19:13 - Seasons (Sugiura Asuna)
Nice little short one, Pinecone! I like!
August 12th, 2017 19:09 - I watched (Mel Marz)
You certainly have the necessary command of the language to be a good...
August 12th, 2017 18:59 - I\'ll be Here (Brie)
You sound like a good friend to have, Brie. Thanks for sharing this fine...
August 12th, 2017 18:56 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck)
A dark review of disasters well stated in your poem, Bibbeck! Strength...
August 12th, 2017 15:04 - Living (FredPeyer)
What ... you couldn\'t pick a simpler theme than the meaning of life? Like...
August 12th, 2017 13:00 - Addict (Crazycatlady)
May you someday find as much satisfaction in solitude, catlady!
August 12th, 2017 12:47 - Ruby Mountain (P.X. Vexxus)
Powerful imagery perfected in this dark poem, P.X. A chilly, chilling...
August 12th, 2017 12:42 - What could have been (Aa Harvey)
It could, and it can ... unless it isn\'t! Such is the crap-shoot that is...
August 12th, 2017 12:37
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