Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Ubuntu (Poetic Dan)
I love, \"I am because we are\"! A true expression of our human identity....
August 27th, 2017 10:43 - And What A Time It Was (Accidental Poet)
Nostalgia expressed captivatingly, AP! Thoroughly enjoyed it.
August 27th, 2017 10:37 - Silence (Femlord)
Silence ... the most sacred sound of all! My sentiments exactly, Femlord....
August 27th, 2017 10:25 - Thunder in Summer (Flowers under the sun)
I share your feelings about thunder storms, well expressed in your poem....
August 27th, 2017 07:40 - A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell! (Sue.evans)
A beautifully painted poem of the season, and with rhyme so subtle it...
August 27th, 2017 07:29 - Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60)
A keen and accurate observation here, Goldie. Well put!
August 27th, 2017 07:14 - Love Haiku (FredPeyer)
Best definition of love I\'ve seen! Kudos, Fred.
August 27th, 2017 07:05 - Life (Malubotelho)
Words of wisdom concisely stated! Well done, Malu!
August 26th, 2017 12:48 - One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan)
\"When we are one, we are whole.\" A powerful philosophical statement!...
August 26th, 2017 09:42 - The Boy of Gold and Stone. (Niallprideaux)
Powerful metaphor, Niall! Creative and well done.
August 26th, 2017 09:33 - SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
I loved these one-liners, Michael, as well as the explosive art piece!
August 26th, 2017 07:50 - The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60)
To me, nothing conveys wisdom like an old tree. Well portrayed herein,...
August 26th, 2017 07:47 - Another Beautiful Day in Paradise (FredPeyer)
Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade,...
August 26th, 2017 07:38 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic...
August 26th, 2017 07:28 - Never Dreamed I’d be a Poet (Accidental Poet)
Expressing in poetry is a wonderful outlet, I agree, and can be very...
August 26th, 2017 07:16 - Let me uncomplicate us (Sara Storkson)
You express the beauty and passion of young love extremely well,...
August 25th, 2017 11:28 - Enamored (Malubotelho)
Phew! Who needs porn with poetry like this? So well done, Malu.
August 25th, 2017 11:21 - The Price Of Revenge (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Oh, how cynically true, Kurt! Good poem ... sad observation of revenge.
August 25th, 2017 09:31 - Grow A Pear (WriteBeLight)
Are we talking balls or boobs here? I guess either would apply to your...
August 25th, 2017 09:21 - Twin Flame (HEIDIKINS)
Congratulations on your good fortune in finding such a compatible mate,...
August 25th, 2017 07:39 - Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
And I would add \'architect\' to that list of artists. Maybe throw in...
August 25th, 2017 07:28 - The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant...
August 25th, 2017 07:14 - When We Were Nearly Five (StevieC)
Shattered dreams ... scuttled plans. A sad component of our experiences in...
August 24th, 2017 15:48 - The candy girl (Malubotelho)
Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl...
August 24th, 2017 10:19 - THE LETTER (Michael Edwards)
An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more?...
August 24th, 2017 08:07 - A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer)
Your poem describes well the process of surrendering our minds to our...
August 24th, 2017 08:00 - Questions. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the...
August 24th, 2017 07:35 - HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Intriguingly shaped poem, Brian! To me, as you have probably observed from...
August 23rd, 2017 06:57 - Naked (Malubotelho)
It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being...
August 22nd, 2017 16:03 - Birthday (FredPeyer)
Happy belated birthday, Fred! May you reach your goal of 100.
August 22nd, 2017 08:48 - Insignificance. (Goldfinch60)
Considering that the \"vastness of nature\" and the \"infinite universe\"...
August 22nd, 2017 08:42 - Read Rightly. (Fay Slimm.)
The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of...
August 22nd, 2017 08:14 - THE SOLAR ECLIPSE OF 2017 (MyPoem4U)
A marvel of creation it is! Thanks for the fine tribute, MP!
August 21st, 2017 14:36 - Fun Bags (WriteBeLight)
A fine tribute to the fun-bags we men all love! Kudos, WBL.
August 21st, 2017 13:49 - the poetry in me (Clark)
A fine tribute to self-appreciation, both body and soul. An important step...
August 21st, 2017 13:37 - AS A GIRL (Diane)
Nothing more beautiful than the innocence we come in with ... the pure...
August 21st, 2017 13:32 - MY FATHER’S HANDS (Lasergraph)
A first class tribute poem, and presented in an interesting form. Well...
August 21st, 2017 09:29 - Making Love To The Muse (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a deep one, Kurt, with open interpretations. Had to read it more...
August 21st, 2017 09:25 - Mixed mind (Malubotelho)
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow,...
August 21st, 2017 09:18 - Old Man (LukeCoomer)
Good poetic tribute, Luke! I\'m sure he appreciates it.
August 21st, 2017 07:49 - Untitled (Sara Storkson)
A lot to be said for temporary diversions. Good write, Sara!
August 21st, 2017 07:44 - FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An intriguing one, this. Visually appealing. Kudos, Brian!
August 21st, 2017 07:32 - Panic Over. (Goldfinch60)
You had me going there, Goldie. Glad it turned out well. Enjoyed it!
August 21st, 2017 07:20 - Hard Day (FredPeyer)
I lost a sweet younger brother to drink, and saw what it did to his...
August 21st, 2017 07:17 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful description of the rekindling of love\'s fire at advanced age,...
August 21st, 2017 07:01 - JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards)
An intriguing picture you paint for us this morning, or two pictures I...
August 21st, 2017 06:55 - Deal. (Nicholas Browning)
Peace does not appear to be a natural component of physical life, nor was...
August 19th, 2017 08:51 - My Life (John Prophet)
We come into this world, time and time again, the product of those many...
August 19th, 2017 08:31 - The storm (Notsad101)
A fine first offering on MPS, notsad! I Like your ending especially....
August 19th, 2017 07:14 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00 - DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love your poem, Brian. It is a fascinating subject, indeed. Thanks for...
August 19th, 2017 06:56 - The shapes of my life! (Sue.evans)
A fine geometric description of life\'s journey, Sue. Well done!
August 18th, 2017 12:12 - scared of insects (Curtis Hurst)
A stark, well done depiction of the Master ... addiction. Kudos, sgb!...
August 18th, 2017 12:03 - BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No place is sacred to those experiencing the dark side! And so it is, as...
August 18th, 2017 11:59 - Vessels (John Prophet)
Echoes the theme of the poem I posted today. Since there are no...
August 18th, 2017 11:49 - Safe Place (Caden)
Blissful, but risky, that feeling ... basing one\'s \"entire world\" on...
August 18th, 2017 11:43 - FADED LOOKS (Lasergraph)
Words of wisdom, lg! Appreciated it.
August 18th, 2017 11:37 - Love On The Run (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
The evolution of a relationship ... so well expressed, Kurt!
August 18th, 2017 11:30 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
And a merry lunch it was! Certainly beats a burger at McDonalds. Enjoyed...
August 18th, 2017 10:14 - Expectations (FredPeyer)
Nothing wrong with expecting the best of outcomes. To expect less makes...
August 18th, 2017 10:08 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond...
August 18th, 2017 09:53 - Losing You. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh wow ... this touching poem, so beautifully shaped, hits all the bases...
August 18th, 2017 09:39 - Essence of Time (Clock King)
A fine poem on time, and it running out on all of us, CK! welcome to MPS!
August 17th, 2017 15:30 - your name. (Lillian_Jean)
\"If we let them\" is the key, I agree. Thanks for this wise first...
August 17th, 2017 15:27 - Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87)
A long story, briefly but well told!
August 17th, 2017 10:12 - Damnation Defined (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Concise and well described corruption of purity. Excellent, Kurt!
August 17th, 2017 09:56 - Let It Be (Its Raskolnikov)
Wise counsel, R! \"Just let it be\", indeed!
August 17th, 2017 09:32 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60)
As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!
August 17th, 2017 08:23 - Illusions Of Pain (Accidental Poet)
No one can know what lies behind the masks we wear, as your fine poem...
August 17th, 2017 08:13 - OPPORTUNITY (Lasergraph)
Beautifully depicted poem of regret. lg! Well done.
August 17th, 2017 08:01 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer)
A good poem, Fred, describing a cruel affliction. My sympathy! My hearing...
August 17th, 2017 07:56 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
Your art drew me in ... I love it!
Cute limerick too! Thanks for sharing,...
August 17th, 2017 07:39 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for this timely prayer which reflects your wisdom and beautiful...
August 17th, 2017 07:35 - After (Private poet)
You sing the sad song of the widow so sweetly herein, PP. Well expressed!
August 16th, 2017 13:12 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36)
A tender, beautiful tribute to a love, Tony! I enjoyed it.
August 16th, 2017 13:06 - counting sighs (Heather T)
A beautiful, poignant piece, Heather. Very well presented. I simply love...
August 16th, 2017 13:03 - Golden Rule (John Prophet)
You share my feelings and sum them up beautifully in this poem, JG! Well...
August 16th, 2017 12:59 - Four Shorts: Concupiscence / Longing / Old Couple / Love (FredPeyer)
Four brilliant, touching short ones, Fred. It takes a special poetic mind...
August 16th, 2017 09:34 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight)
A cute one, WBL! Thanks for the chuckle.
August 16th, 2017 09:28 - Hiding In The Rain (Accidental Poet)
A well described process we all go through, AP! Some of our best work...
August 16th, 2017 09:24 - THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph)
The madness and sadness and futility of war! Well written account, lg!
August 16th, 2017 09:18 - Views from overseas (Eduanf)
Brilliant line; \"Don\'t they know we all came from the same different...
August 16th, 2017 09:15 - THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards)
A splendid piece of free verse it is, Michael! Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 07:33 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60)
Music, as well as anything that stirs emotions, is a great trigger for a...
August 16th, 2017 07:24 - CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another fine Caribbean-flavored poem, Brian, and a fine tribute. I enjoyed...
August 16th, 2017 07:17 - Rising tides (Malubotelho)
Sweet and sad. Thanks for sharing this one, Malu!
August 16th, 2017 07:00 - Ten Feet From The Ledge (Accidental Poet)
Each and every one of our lives are a precious gift, to be explored and...
August 15th, 2017 16:44 - origami (Draculazy)
I think I may be too young to be reading this one, d! You paint a sensuous...
August 15th, 2017 16:40 - Itinerary (WriteBeLight)
Thanks for taking us with you on that lovely trip, WBL! I enjoyed it.
August 15th, 2017 16:28 - The Cycle (Caden)
Well done portrayal of the cycle, Caden! Nicely and neatly presented....
August 15th, 2017 16:25 - pretty (Heather T)
Wow! A real beauty, Heather. A breathtaking tribute to a lucky man.
August 15th, 2017 16:02 - Pain and Rain and Gain (Kylewriggs)
Indeed, we are all uniquely weird. It makes for an interesting world,...
August 15th, 2017 10:15 - My Granny (Jennylynn0324)
A sweet tribute poem to your grandmother, Jenny! Welcome to MPS!
August 15th, 2017 10:12 - ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
To blast and blame Trump for the riot, as does the American media,...
August 15th, 2017 10:07 - Mystery (Lakiea)
So true, so very true, this poem! It echoes one of my own, which I am...
August 15th, 2017 09:50 - ()
The mind contains the ego ... the heart contains the soul. I vote for the...
August 15th, 2017 09:42 - Low (Private poet)
A plight shared by so many, women and men alike, as we age. You nailed it...
August 15th, 2017 09:39 - A Mother\'s Love? (Edward Charles McDevitt)
My mother betrayed me after thirty years of my being the sole attendant to...
August 15th, 2017 09:35 - Milieu (John Prophet)
Your poem reflects the rising of consciousness in the world that it is,...
August 15th, 2017 09:24 - Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60)
A stunningly sad disease and its wrath captured so well in your poem,...
August 15th, 2017 07:41
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