Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Man in Orange. (Goldfinch60)
Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the...
August 8th, 2017 08:29 - So Much. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you...
August 8th, 2017 08:14 - Dreamers (Michael Edwards)
The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I...
August 8th, 2017 08:08 - It\'s Monday (WriteBeLight)
Your poem brings to mind the saying ... \"Do what you love and you\'ll...
August 7th, 2017 16:00 - Grow Up (Unique)
A beautiful poem, Unique, that stirs sad memories of when my daughter was...
August 7th, 2017 15:47 - The Stories Flies Tell (RickyMcG)
A lovely little \'thought poem\' Ricky. Enjoyed it. Welcome to MPS.
August 7th, 2017 13:42 - wild horses (Heather T)
\"knew when we were hungry we would always have the night\" ... beautiful...
August 7th, 2017 12:26 - Tailgate for Two (Accidental Poet)
I thoroughly enjoyed this tailgate party, A.P. Well done poem!
August 7th, 2017 05:47 - Hats Off. (Fay Slimm.)
A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
August 7th, 2017 05:27 - A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really...
August 7th, 2017 05:15 - What Is Love? (Angelene.nicole)
A fine poem on love, Angelene! Welcome to MPS! Share some more.
August 6th, 2017 14:31 - Lost in the Dark (Jonnyc1)
A painful heartfelt poem as your first contribution to MPS. Welcome,...
August 6th, 2017 14:28 - Unto Forever (DyingDreams)
Beautifully expressed poem of remorse, DyingDreams! Congratulations on...
August 6th, 2017 11:31 - Shadow (Nicholas M. Langford)
Ah ... don\'t we all have a shadow, a dark side. Makes us all-the-more...
August 6th, 2017 11:26 - The Glass Shadow (Brycycle)
I really like the \"glass shadow\" metaphor, Brycycle. Well done poem!
August 6th, 2017 11:23 - Let Love Lead the Way (Accidental Poet)
Do lost loves ever leave our heart? I think not, and that is the way it...
August 6th, 2017 11:19 - Paris (Myself and me)
I share your love of this unique city, \'myself\'. Had the pleasure of a...
August 6th, 2017 11:13 - My unknown lover (Kesha)
A sad but beautiful plea, Kesha. Thank you for sharing it with us.
August 6th, 2017 11:08 - Sunday Morning, 2 a.m. (Allan Fitzgerald)
A fine introductory poem, Allan. Welcome to MPS, and I look forward to...
August 6th, 2017 11:01 - PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine sentiment well expressed, my friend, but if all this came to pass,...
August 6th, 2017 10:56 - I see (Aa Harvey)
You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I...
August 6th, 2017 10:49 - Right (Baylee)
Or perhaps what you describe is a relationship becoming natural,...
August 6th, 2017 10:44 - Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature (Michael Champion)
Nature starts immediately reclaiming whatever man builds. And so it is....
August 6th, 2017 10:40 - Don’t be so serious, seriously (Avigail)
A bit preachy, perhaps, but a good \'advice\' poem, Avigail. Thanks for...
August 6th, 2017 10:36 - Last Flight (FredPeyer)
Nice poem ... love the punch line, Fred! I look forward to your return.
August 6th, 2017 09:55 - Typical Sunday (Edward Charles McDevitt)
So many preachers and priests ... so many perverts! Is there a connection?...
August 6th, 2017 09:52 - Take One. (Fay Slimm.)
Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with...
August 6th, 2017 08:11 - Sitting at Heavens Door. (Goldfinch60)
I, too, was a big fan of jazz in the fifties, and loved Gerry Mulligan. I...
August 6th, 2017 08:00 - LIMERICK No40 (Michael Edwards)
An interesting observation of myself ... the picture is quite disturbing...
August 6th, 2017 07:44 - The Art of Living (Alissa)
A truly beautiful, wisdom-filled poem, BfB! Great understanding of the...
August 5th, 2017 19:34 - I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt)
I think you may have jumped to a conclusion. A response is evoked by...
August 5th, 2017 15:06 - So-Called Land of The Free (Kimberly Culpepper)
Welcome to MPS, Kimberley. I really like this poem, although you might...
August 5th, 2017 14:52 - Captain Twilley (Nicholas M. Langford)
A lovely, sad, tribute to what might have been. Well done, Nick!
August 5th, 2017 10:13 - Never (FredPeyer)
\"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
August 5th, 2017 08:42 - SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE (Michael Edwards)
A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective,...
August 5th, 2017 08:19 - Too Long. (Fay Slimm.)
An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come...
August 5th, 2017 08:01 - A Letter You Can Never See (Ettolrahc)
A fine poem of dedication to family! Well expressed ... thanks for
August 4th, 2017 09:34 - Tropical Rain (FredPeyer)
You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place...
August 4th, 2017 07:49 - The Graveyard Of Your Heart (Alf W)
A stunningly beautiful poem, Alf! Thank you for sharing it.
August 4th, 2017 07:12 - Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.)
You weave a fine tapestry with your words, Fay. I appreciate this poem as...
August 4th, 2017 07:09 - Dazzling Butterfly (GeraldineTaylor)
A charming ode, Geraldine! Thank you.
August 3rd, 2017 13:17 - A Hat For That (WriteBeLight)
I love it! A fine tribute to poets all, WBL!
August 3rd, 2017 13:07 - A Regret (Nicholas M. Langford)
A fine poem of remorse, Nick! Quite well done, sir.
August 3rd, 2017 13:05 - My Friend (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A poem any friend would appreciate! Well done, Edward.
August 3rd, 2017 13:03 - Flawed Paradigm (Noquarter4)
Brilliant, mind-provoking poem, N.Q. Isn\'t amazing how adopting a...
August 3rd, 2017 12:51 - Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose)
We humans are incredibly adaptive beings. Being night-blind from birth, I...
August 3rd, 2017 12:45 - It (Tia Davis/テイア)
A cleverly constructed poem using receding lines to emphasize diminishing...
August 3rd, 2017 09:38 - The Profound Man (Adri)
Your beautiful love poem describes a worthy companion to be sure. Enjoyed...
August 3rd, 2017 09:11 - Imagination (P.X. Vexxus)
An interesting take on imagination, this one. Love the last line! A...
August 3rd, 2017 07:33 - CAUTION: CONSTRUCTION ZONE (Accidental Poet)
As an ex-builder and fellow poet I can relate quite well to this fine...
August 3rd, 2017 07:27 - A Letter Left Unopened (Thewildfire)
Your poem strikes a chord, Ariana. Mine was self-centered as well,...
August 3rd, 2017 07:16 - Walking in Space. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem takes us on a lovely, peaceful journey to eternity, Goldie. A...
August 3rd, 2017 07:04 - Class Reunion (FredPeyer)
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo...
August 3rd, 2017 07:00 - THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards)
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of...
August 3rd, 2017 06:54 - A Lady Standing By A Gate (Alf W)
Your fine poem paints an intriguing picture, Alf. Thanks for sharing it!
August 3rd, 2017 06:45 - When will i ask (ModernDayShakespeare)
Enjoyed this light-hearted introductory poem, M-D-S! Welcome to MPS, glad...
August 2nd, 2017 18:31 - Beware the claws that catch... (Libbyabsolom)
A charming little poem, Libby! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Welcome to MPS. I...
August 2nd, 2017 18:27 - Summer Came (Alf W)
Sounds like you might live in Seattle, or on one of the islands off the...
August 2nd, 2017 13:58 - Not Our Last Goodbye (Demi)
A lovely tribute to your Nan, demi! I\'m sure she appreciates it. Welcome...
August 2nd, 2017 13:52 - Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose)
It is a valiant experiment you undertake, probing how the other senses...
August 2nd, 2017 12:53 - Projection (El Vonye)
Well done use of metaphors, El! Welcome to MPS! We look forward to more.
August 2nd, 2017 11:00 - Stuck at the train station (Carleymcnamara08)
A well expressed metaphor on life, carley! May the next train get closer...
August 2nd, 2017 10:56 - Thank you for raping me (NikkiiADTR)
My first real love had been date-raped, and I saw what it had done to her....
August 2nd, 2017 10:52 - Empty Shell (UniquelyMel)
A fine, heart-felt expression is this initial post, Mel! Congratulations...
August 2nd, 2017 10:45 - MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine tribute, Briansodes! Funny, but I was a minority of one, I suppose,...
August 2nd, 2017 08:14 - My Motorcycle (FredPeyer)
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing...
August 2nd, 2017 07:56 - Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60)
It would be a shame to squander a good ponder, now wouldn\'t it? Enjoyed...
August 2nd, 2017 07:45 - Guitars in the night (Aa Harvey)
Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good...
August 2nd, 2017 07:41 - 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
If Dawn and Eve ever do meet up, we all are in a lot of trouble! Cute...
August 2nd, 2017 07:30 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
And \"more than that\", this fine poem felt like a lovely prayer of ...
August 2nd, 2017 07:18 - Hope (Renzi)
Your strength shines through in this fine offering, Renzi. Keep your mind...
August 2nd, 2017 07:09 - The Quiet Ones. (Niallprideaux)
A wise one said ... \"If they don\'t understand your quiet, they probably...
August 1st, 2017 10:18 - One cent psychology: (Avigail)
The light and the dark both dwell within us. Life gives us opportunities...
August 1st, 2017 10:11 - Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose)
The first home I remember as a child is gone now too. Thanks for sharing...
August 1st, 2017 10:03 - help (Aksoul)
A marvel of rhyme as your introductory poem, aksoul! Welcome to MPS. Keep...
August 1st, 2017 08:51 - liar liar (Queer-with-a-pen)
A strong, sad, heart-felt introductory poem, Sebastian! Welcome to MPS. I...
August 1st, 2017 08:47 - They\'s a Daid Armydilly in the Road (ColBUSAF)
Thank you for sharing this cute poem to start my morning off right, and...
August 1st, 2017 08:40 - Understand (Dulcinea91)
Welcome to MPS, Dulcine, where we all share our afflictions without fear...
August 1st, 2017 08:36 - THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
You dedicated students of the fine art of poetry leave me feeling a little...
August 1st, 2017 08:11 - A Soldier of the Great War. (Goldfinch60)
War is hell indeed ... as if we need to create more of such unnecessarily....
August 1st, 2017 08:01 - On the Bus (FredPeyer)
Brilliant ... you had me from the time he got on the bus all the way to...
August 1st, 2017 07:56 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
We are blessed indeed to be living in our personal paradises ... you in...
August 1st, 2017 07:38 - Rarity (Baylee)
Nicely stated, Nichole, without a waste of words!
July 31st, 2017 22:15 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
All good poets, as yourself, must have such a room in their mind to...
July 31st, 2017 07:29 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
A brilliant description of the writing process, Fay! Not only as it...
July 31st, 2017 07:16 - mortal (Heather T)
You do know how to close out a poem, Heather1 Beautifully done, thanks.
July 30th, 2017 14:58 - Who is She (Kaytay17)
Intriguing dame for sure, and an intriguing poem, Kaylon. Welcome to MPS!...
July 30th, 2017 10:21 - Lessons . (CherishMonai)
A well done sensual metaphor, C.M.! I really enjoyed it. Thank you, and...
July 30th, 2017 10:17 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
I told myself that if I waited long enough I might think of a clever...
July 30th, 2017 10:10 - Books? (Goldfinch60)
A truth so well stated, and so lost on the current generation ... sad....
July 30th, 2017 10:03 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
As we, your fellow poets, thank him for you, Fay. You\'ve shown us again...
July 30th, 2017 09:55 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
And he will carry memories of being with you for his lifetime. They really...
July 29th, 2017 13:48 - Fear (FredPeyer)
I can\'t imagine such hopeless fear, but you managed to quite well. Well...
July 29th, 2017 11:22 - LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee)
So few words and such an impactful message conveyed. A work of poetic art,...
July 29th, 2017 07:40 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
Couldn\'t wrap my brain around your poem, but get your point quite well. I...
July 29th, 2017 07:34 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Cute zinger, Goldie. Don\'t know that I\'ve ever heard the Nortumbrian...
July 29th, 2017 07:10 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
Again you prove to be a maestro of verbiage. Beautiful poem and picture,...
July 29th, 2017 07:03 - Arachnid On An Apricot (Noveyre)
Love the unique metaphors employed so well in this one, Noveyre! Very well...
July 28th, 2017 22:24 - The Tradgedy of Laughter (Accidental Poet)
\"Saying good-bye to those blues is the tragedy of laughter\" ... What a...
July 28th, 2017 22:19 - It was never what it seemed (Dave poet)
A fine poem on a tough subject, Dave. Thank you for sharing it!
July 28th, 2017 20:30
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