Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- A Hat For That (WriteBeLight)
I love it! A fine tribute to poets all, WBL!
August 3rd, 2017 13:07 - A Regret (Nicholas M. Langford)
A fine poem of remorse, Nick! Quite well done, sir.
August 3rd, 2017 13:05 - My Friend (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A poem any friend would appreciate! Well done, Edward.
August 3rd, 2017 13:03 - Flawed Paradigm (Noquarter4)
Brilliant, mind-provoking poem, N.Q. Isn\'t amazing how adopting a...
August 3rd, 2017 12:51 - Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose)
We humans are incredibly adaptive beings. Being night-blind from birth, I...
August 3rd, 2017 12:45 - It (Tia Davis/テイア)
A cleverly constructed poem using receding lines to emphasize diminishing...
August 3rd, 2017 09:38 - The Profound Man (Adri)
Your beautiful love poem describes a worthy companion to be sure. Enjoyed...
August 3rd, 2017 09:11 - Imagination (P.X. Vexxus)
An interesting take on imagination, this one. Love the last line! A...
August 3rd, 2017 07:33 - A Letter Left Unopened (Thewildfire)
Your poem strikes a chord, Ariana. Mine was self-centered as well,...
August 3rd, 2017 07:16 - Walking in Space. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem takes us on a lovely, peaceful journey to eternity, Goldie. A...
August 3rd, 2017 07:04 - Class Reunion (FredPeyer)
To me, nothing could be more pointless than a class reunion. I echo...
August 3rd, 2017 07:00 - THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards)
A love twice lost? Sad, indeed! Lost love is an integral experience of...
August 3rd, 2017 06:54 - A Lady Standing By A Gate (Alf W)
Your fine poem paints an intriguing picture, Alf. Thanks for sharing it!
August 3rd, 2017 06:45 - When will i ask (ModernDayShakespeare)
Enjoyed this light-hearted introductory poem, M-D-S! Welcome to MPS, glad...
August 2nd, 2017 18:31 - Beware the claws that catch... (Libbyabsolom)
A charming little poem, Libby! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Welcome to MPS. I...
August 2nd, 2017 18:27 - Summer Came (Alf W)
Sounds like you might live in Seattle, or on one of the islands off the...
August 2nd, 2017 13:58 - Not Our Last Goodbye (Demi)
A lovely tribute to your Nan, demi! I\'m sure she appreciates it. Welcome...
August 2nd, 2017 13:52 - Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose)
It is a valiant experiment you undertake, probing how the other senses...
August 2nd, 2017 12:53 - Projection (El Vonye)
Well done use of metaphors, El! Welcome to MPS! We look forward to more.
August 2nd, 2017 11:00 - Stuck at the train station (Carleymcnamara08)
A well expressed metaphor on life, carley! May the next train get closer...
August 2nd, 2017 10:56 - Thank you for raping me (NikkiiADTR)
My first real love had been date-raped, and I saw what it had done to her....
August 2nd, 2017 10:52 - Empty Shell (UniquelyMel)
A fine, heart-felt expression is this initial post, Mel! Congratulations...
August 2nd, 2017 10:45 - MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine tribute, Briansodes! Funny, but I was a minority of one, I suppose,...
August 2nd, 2017 08:14 - My Motorcycle (FredPeyer)
You nailed the glorious, therapeutic feeling of a good ride ... nothing...
August 2nd, 2017 07:56 - Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60)
It would be a shame to squander a good ponder, now wouldn\'t it? Enjoyed...
August 2nd, 2017 07:45 - Guitars in the night (Aa Harvey)
Dreamers are the ones who keep our world going, advancing. You are in good...
August 2nd, 2017 07:41 - 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
If Dawn and Eve ever do meet up, we all are in a lot of trouble! Cute...
August 2nd, 2017 07:30 - More Than. (Fay Slimm.)
And \"more than that\", this fine poem felt like a lovely prayer of ...
August 2nd, 2017 07:18 - Hope (Renzi)
Your strength shines through in this fine offering, Renzi. Keep your mind...
August 2nd, 2017 07:09 - The Quiet Ones. (Niallprideaux)
A wise one said ... \"If they don\'t understand your quiet, they probably...
August 1st, 2017 10:18 - One cent psychology: (Avigail)
The light and the dark both dwell within us. Life gives us opportunities...
August 1st, 2017 10:11 - Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose)
The first home I remember as a child is gone now too. Thanks for sharing...
August 1st, 2017 10:03 - help (Aksoul)
A marvel of rhyme as your introductory poem, aksoul! Welcome to MPS. Keep...
August 1st, 2017 08:51 - liar liar (Queer-with-a-pen)
A strong, sad, heart-felt introductory poem, Sebastian! Welcome to MPS. I...
August 1st, 2017 08:47 - They\'s a Daid Armydilly in the Road (ColBUSAF)
Thank you for sharing this cute poem to start my morning off right, and...
August 1st, 2017 08:40 - Understand (Dulcinea91)
Welcome to MPS, Dulcine, where we all share our afflictions without fear...
August 1st, 2017 08:36 - THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
You dedicated students of the fine art of poetry leave me feeling a little...
August 1st, 2017 08:11 - A Soldier of the Great War. (Goldfinch60)
War is hell indeed ... as if we need to create more of such unnecessarily....
August 1st, 2017 08:01 - On the Bus (FredPeyer)
Brilliant ... you had me from the time he got on the bus all the way to...
August 1st, 2017 07:56 - Today. (Fay Slimm.)
We are blessed indeed to be living in our personal paradises ... you in...
August 1st, 2017 07:38 - Rarity (Baylee)
Nicely stated, Nichole, without a waste of words!
July 31st, 2017 22:15 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
All good poets, as yourself, must have such a room in their mind to...
July 31st, 2017 07:29 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
A brilliant description of the writing process, Fay! Not only as it...
July 31st, 2017 07:16 - mortal (Heather T)
You do know how to close out a poem, Heather1 Beautifully done, thanks.
July 30th, 2017 14:58 - Who is She (Kaytay17)
Intriguing dame for sure, and an intriguing poem, Kaylon. Welcome to MPS!...
July 30th, 2017 10:21 - Lessons . (CherishMonai)
A well done sensual metaphor, C.M.! I really enjoyed it. Thank you, and...
July 30th, 2017 10:17 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
I told myself that if I waited long enough I might think of a clever...
July 30th, 2017 10:10 - Books? (Goldfinch60)
A truth so well stated, and so lost on the current generation ... sad....
July 30th, 2017 10:03 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
As we, your fellow poets, thank him for you, Fay. You\'ve shown us again...
July 30th, 2017 09:55 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
And he will carry memories of being with you for his lifetime. They really...
July 29th, 2017 13:48 - Fear (FredPeyer)
I can\'t imagine such hopeless fear, but you managed to quite well. Well...
July 29th, 2017 11:22 - LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee)
So few words and such an impactful message conveyed. A work of poetic art,...
July 29th, 2017 07:40 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
Couldn\'t wrap my brain around your poem, but get your point quite well. I...
July 29th, 2017 07:34 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Cute zinger, Goldie. Don\'t know that I\'ve ever heard the Nortumbrian...
July 29th, 2017 07:10 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
Again you prove to be a maestro of verbiage. Beautiful poem and picture,...
July 29th, 2017 07:03 - Arachnid On An Apricot (Noveyre)
Love the unique metaphors employed so well in this one, Noveyre! Very well...
July 28th, 2017 22:24 - It was never what it seemed (Dave poet)
A fine poem on a tough subject, Dave. Thank you for sharing it!
July 28th, 2017 20:30 - foolish heart (Heather T)
What a sad commentary on a disturbed individual who took me in as well,...
July 28th, 2017 20:26 - My MPS friends (Christina8)
I look forward to your writings upon your return, Christina.
July 28th, 2017 14:27 - Canvas (P.X. Vexxus)
After several readings, the only interpretation I could muster is; The...
July 28th, 2017 13:23 - Summertime (Harsbars12281953)
A refreshing summer poem, h.b.! Thank you for this enjoyable first piece,...
July 28th, 2017 13:13 - A Person is a Person (Jonas_marie)
An excellent introductory poem to MPS! Welcome, and I look forward to more...
July 28th, 2017 13:10 - A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose)
You both are truly blessed, as this fine poem conveys so well. Thanks for...
July 28th, 2017 10:36 - Six Months and Time (Azura Nightsong)
An excellent critique and reflection on time and how it is perceived from...
July 28th, 2017 10:31 - I see what I\'m doing (Poetic Dan)
I love it when our split personalities converse with each other, as you...
July 28th, 2017 10:16 - MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
For this fine poem to resonate with me, I would have to replace the word...
July 28th, 2017 10:07 - Smoke & Mirrors (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well stated, Kurt. \'Knowledge\' ain\'t where it\'s at. \'Wisdom\' is the...
July 28th, 2017 09:57 - Depression (JAIA)
I wouldn\'t fire myself just yet ... maybe just probation? Things seem to...
July 28th, 2017 09:53 - Dig (Dxmenxque)
You \"patted it to smooth out the surface\", But was a more fundamental...
July 28th, 2017 09:44 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
Stunning flowers and a beautiful tribute to your Dad, Goldie. Thanks for...
July 28th, 2017 08:17 - AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards)
The mortality of man against the backdrop of nature\'s immortality ... a...
July 28th, 2017 08:13 - Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer)
\"A new exciting world in a cardboard tube,\" indeed ... and the one...
July 28th, 2017 08:02 - Cause Of Death (Joel Carpenter)
Sounds more like a \'Cause Of Life\' to me. Nice, no frills, to the point...
July 28th, 2017 07:53 - Life is True (Ariel Perez)
Much wisdom reflected in your poem, Ariel. We all are in charge of our...
July 28th, 2017 07:25 - Love-Smitten. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Seniors plod onwards, regaining a sense of lost value by homing a...
July 28th, 2017 07:09 - Epigrams For Epicures (Noveyre)
Extremely well written poem, Noveyre. I especially like the last stanza....
July 27th, 2017 17:11 - TV ads (Avigail)
That\'s exactly what I have to watch in graphic detail while I\'m trying...
July 27th, 2017 10:24 - Ken (Private poet)
Two faces that unmistakenly radiate the beauty of their souls! So sorry...
July 27th, 2017 10:14 - Enough (Charlesbarrett)
A beautiful poetic expression that all young girls should take to heart....
July 27th, 2017 09:47 - Looking for my Mind (FredPeyer)
Say, if you happen to stumble across my missing mind while you are...
July 27th, 2017 08:30 - What on Earth am I Here For? (GeraldineTaylor)
Your fine, inquisitive mind will lead you to the answers you seek. Your...
July 27th, 2017 08:25 - Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60)
As dads, all we can do is be there for them as they make their way through...
July 27th, 2017 08:18 - Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.)
Enchanting poetic interpretation of an intriguing piece if art, Fay. I...
July 27th, 2017 08:08 - Thank You (Dxmenxque)
Thank you for sharing this strong poem of appreciation, D.S. Your old soul...
July 27th, 2017 08:02 - our forum (Onepauly)
It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem...
July 27th, 2017 07:58 - S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A cleverly presented and important message, Briansodes. Thanks for
July 27th, 2017 07:48 - My house in Budapest (Joaquin Finn)
I will never forget the experience of beholding the splendor of the Blue...
July 27th, 2017 07:44 - A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards)
I\'m a little slow this morning. Read at first as a single poem it felt...
July 27th, 2017 07:16 - Paint With Soul (Myself and me)
Art and poetry, two beautiful means of expressing, as this fine poem...
July 26th, 2017 13:42 - Glass Half Empty (Charlesbarrett)
A great poem on the blessing of family, Charles. We who have shared this...
July 26th, 2017 13:37 - Oh, the dishes you will do! (Melissam0202)
What a precious poem, Melissa. I had to take turns with siblings doing all...
July 26th, 2017 13:22 - Death Never Quells (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful, insightful poem, Kurt! Thanks for sharing this fine one. Love...
July 26th, 2017 10:50 - Hot Girls Wanted (Noquarter4)
Well done poem describing a sad fact of life, Noquarter. Welcome to MPS!
July 26th, 2017 09:09 - Medicine (Gscrytoo)
A strong, descriptive poem describing an all to common affliction. Well...
July 26th, 2017 09:02 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
\"How many moments are there in each second\" ... Good thought-provoking...
July 26th, 2017 08:33 - Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer)
I watched a dear brother go down that path. Had to step in and help raise...
July 26th, 2017 08:27 - To Attessa on Her 42nd Birthday (Nancy akbari)
A beautiful poetic contribution to MPS, Nancy! Welcome, and I will look...
July 25th, 2017 14:12 - Marriage Vows (Sue.evans)
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful marriage, Sue. Congratulations!
July 25th, 2017 10:44 - \"Fade Away\" (Micalina)
Embrace the experiences that we came for ... what else is life about? Your...
July 25th, 2017 10:40 - Love (Oliviagc)
There is Love the word, and Love the heart knows. You fine poem speaks to...
July 25th, 2017 10:33
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