Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- The Green Flash (FredPeyer)
Just curious, Fred ... what were you drinking when you saw the \'green...
February 8th, 2018 16:52 - Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.)
A thin veil it is, indeed! This poem is both beautifully constructed and...
February 8th, 2018 10:53 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: last escort (Frank Prem)
Intriguing tale well written, Frank. Most enjoyable!
February 7th, 2018 10:16 - Bad Luck (FredPeyer)
\"Luck\", to me, implies randomness ... not sure if I can accept that...
February 6th, 2018 10:19 - THE KNOWING. (Fay Slimm.)
A lofty and worthwhile goal ... being in the moment. This exquisite poem...
January 27th, 2018 11:25 - Watta Lotta Excrement. (Goldfinch60)
I\'d like some of what you\'ve been drinking, Goldie. Clever write!
January 26th, 2018 12:01 - A COMPILATION OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
The last one, Michael, hands down.
January 26th, 2018 11:51 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: an un-operatic shoe (Frank Prem)
Another compelling tale, Frank. Well done, as usual.
January 26th, 2018 11:49 - The Preacher (FredPeyer)
Your poem speaks for itself, Fred, and quite well indeed. Re your response...
January 26th, 2018 11:45 - Our Next Mission (FredPeyer)
Well penned portrayal of the unending journey, Fred! At least, if there is...
January 25th, 2018 19:41 - OLD MAN (Michael Edwards)
A well written tribute, Michael. I appreciate the expanding-stanza form...
January 25th, 2018 10:31 - Love-right (Aa Harvey)
Great advice, Aa, well expressed in this most enjoyable write!
January 25th, 2018 10:24 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: a trial of tuesdays (Frank Prem)
Captivating prose, Frank! You do have the gift of spinning a fascinating...
January 25th, 2018 10:20 - Cold Bum (FredPeyer)
Sounds to me like the process of spiritual awakening going on, Fred. My...
January 24th, 2018 09:50 - DIVERGENCE OF PARALLELS (Michael Edwards)
Powerful painting ... confounding poem. Both linger in my mind, so each...
January 24th, 2018 09:44 - Tuesday Night at Emile\'s: sing and be gone (Frank Prem)
Hey, a girl\'s got to make a living ... sometimes, as only a girl can do....
January 24th, 2018 09:39 - Little Things (FredPeyer)
Love the poem, and love the form of it ... quite interesting both, Fred!
January 23rd, 2018 22:44 - tuesday night at emile’s (Frank Prem)
Exquisite poem here, Frank! A true beauty, indeed, presented as only you...
January 23rd, 2018 09:13 - MELT (Michael Edwards)
Interesting poetic form, Michael. You do love a challenge, don\'t you.
January 23rd, 2018 09:01 - I Am Here. (Goldfinch60)
Here\'s to you still being here, Goldie! Have a sip for me. I appreciated...
January 23rd, 2018 08:58 - Pity Him. (Fay Slimm.)
War is the definition of insanity ... yet has remained a favorite pastime...
January 23rd, 2018 08:52 - Consiousness (FredPeyer)
A great existential write, Fred ... profound and deep. I hope you will let...
January 20th, 2018 21:30 - LUMBER (Michael Edwards)
Like everything else in nature, we all get the axe someday. At least trees...
January 19th, 2018 09:41 - Human Merchandise (FredPeyer)
A well written portrayal of the desperation and nobility of those who...
January 19th, 2018 09:32 - I didn\'t want to go (Renzi)
Looks like you are throwing in the towel, Honey. You chose a tough one...
January 18th, 2018 18:58 - Defunct Marriage (FredPeyer)
Been there, done that, a few times. Not a fun way for a relationship to...
January 18th, 2018 17:05 - Sing (Tony36)
Those who sing from the heart and soul are a gift to the world, indeed....
January 18th, 2018 09:54 - The Key of Life. (Goldfinch60)
As difficult as your experience is, be comforted in knowing that her new...
January 18th, 2018 09:43 - way poem #16: open to new (Frank Prem)
Boundless new worlds materialize with each new blink, indeed. So well put...
January 18th, 2018 09:37 - Dancing with the Dead (RK) (Lorna)
What a beautiful, tender, fanciful write this is, SR! I am compelled to...
January 18th, 2018 09:26 - This Chair. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, that wise old rocker has probably seen more butts than an ashtray....
January 18th, 2018 09:22 - Platform Four (FredPeyer)
A well portrayed snapshot of the human experience this is, Fred. I was...
January 17th, 2018 15:25 - way poem #15: I, creator (Frank Prem)
A beautiful description of the artist connecting with the muse in the...
January 17th, 2018 09:27 - LOVE\'S CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
Infatuation comes and goes. Love never really dies, though it may morph...
January 17th, 2018 09:22 - Artists. (Goldfinch60)
Creativity comes from within, indeed, but usually assisted by a muse, who...
January 17th, 2018 09:12 - Esteem. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the experimental construction of this one, Fay! It is fun to branch...
January 17th, 2018 09:05 - THINGS I HAVE LEARNED (Lasergraph)
I am working on exactly what your poem describes ... learning to chill...
January 16th, 2018 19:36 - The Youngest Old Man You’ll Ever Meet (AuburnScribbler)
Some never \'age\', they just grow older and hopefully wiser. Your poem...
January 16th, 2018 11:18 - No Regret (FredPeyer)
It is what it is, and is just what we signed up for, is it not? Nice work,...
January 16th, 2018 10:20 - way poem #14: conversation with three foxes (Frank Prem)
A charming exercise in imagination, Frank. I enjoyed it.
January 16th, 2018 10:17 - ANOTHER COUPLET COLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
All four are beauties, Michael! Well thought out.
January 16th, 2018 10:13 - Am I There Yet? (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like the stress of your situation has gotten to you, Goldie. Might...
January 16th, 2018 10:05 - ()
I truly hope all of that venting was helpful to you, Out. I know it can...
January 16th, 2018 09:54 - Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.)
The silent music of nature\'s beauty abounds and surrounds all so attuned....
January 12th, 2018 09:18 - Saved by the Light (FredPeyer)
In the final analysis, \'the light\', which we all are a part of, is all...
January 11th, 2018 16:30 - Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.)
So gratifying, both the shape and verbiage of this poetic beauty, Fay....
January 11th, 2018 10:52 - Ravishing Rioja. (Goldfinch60)
Not familiar with Rioja but now must try it. Enticing write, Goldie!
January 11th, 2018 10:46 - THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME (Michael Edwards)
Stark and strong, both poem and art! Each well presented, Michael.
January 11th, 2018 10:41 - way poem #09: poor saturations (Frank Prem)
A brutal addiction it is. I watched my father and a brother battle it and...
January 11th, 2018 10:38 - Wind-Demons. (Fay Slimm.)
Your well penned words made us feel the raging tempest, Fay. A powerful...
January 10th, 2018 11:05 - Climbing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
An appealing metaphor on true love here, Goldie! Well done, and...
January 10th, 2018 11:00 - Broken Me (FredPeyer)
Amazing how a good woman can make a broken man whole. Ya gotta love em!...
January 10th, 2018 10:57 - SHUT UP (Michael Edwards)
A well executed write, Michael, as only one with your background might be...
January 10th, 2018 10:49 - way poem #06: perhaps by questions (Frank Prem)
Continually asking questions, seeking answers ... such is the journey of...
January 10th, 2018 10:40 - IN ECSTASY (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful poetic description of the afterglow of love-making. Well penned,...
January 9th, 2018 11:34 - way poem #01: with your assistance (Frank Prem)
Intriguing poem, Frank. I interpret it as the death request of a child on...
January 9th, 2018 11:31 - Double Doors (FredPeyer)
A well portrayed example of emerging from a difficult life experience with...
January 9th, 2018 11:24 - Worst enemy (Renzi)
Just a thought, Renzi ... have you tried past-life hypnotherapy to see why...
January 8th, 2018 13:24 - way poem #05: the five steps to wheaten pecks (Frank Prem)
A well told story portrayed here, Frank. I am intrigued by a line...
January 8th, 2018 08:19 - A Moment in Time (FredPeyer)
Amazing what a smile from a stranger can do, isn\'t it. Well captured in...
January 8th, 2018 08:09 - Winter Sounds. (Fay Slimm.)
Nice experiment with form here, Fay. And a good write to boot! Kudos.
January 8th, 2018 08:02 - Law of my Mind (FredPeyer)
Sounds like your fertile mind is roaming outside of the box these days,...
January 7th, 2018 11:24 - Applause. (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliant usage of words, as only an accomplished poet can, Fay! Well
January 7th, 2018 11:13 - I am (FredPeyer)
A fine metaphor of mankind\'s resilience. Well penned, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 10:00 - One More. (Fay Slimm.)
Reminds me of a song lyric:
\"Yesterday, all my troubles seemed so far...
January 6th, 2018 09:49 - His Laughter. (Fay Slimm.)
So fortunate to have loving memories of one\'s parents. Kudos on this fine...
January 5th, 2018 10:31 - Backwards / Forward (FredPeyer)
A brilliantly done rhyme poem, Fred! It flows quite nicely, and speaks to...
January 4th, 2018 10:31 - BLUNDERS (Michael Edwards)
A poetic mathematical challenge well met, Michael! Kudos.
January 4th, 2018 10:24 - Eternity Calls - FIB, (Goldfinch60)
Ah, another fabulous display of shaped poetry, Goldie. Seems to be the...
January 4th, 2018 10:21 - New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.)
A masterful display of shaped poetry here, Fay! A most clever form. Well...
January 4th, 2018 10:16 - Unfulfilled Dreams (FredPeyer)
\"Unfulfilled dreams\" ... that phrase triggered one I wrote a while back,...
January 3rd, 2018 10:17 - on an axis wheeling (Frank Prem)
Would that I could share the experience you describe, Frank, but...
January 3rd, 2018 09:57 - Contented Wealth. (Goldfinch60)
When is \'enough\', enough ... therein lies the key to contentment. It can...
January 3rd, 2018 09:51 - Into Forever. (Fay Slimm.)
The human spirit is indomitable, indeed. Well portrayed here, Fay!
January 3rd, 2018 09:34 - Death Rattle (Tristan Robert Lange)
An enticing, enigmatic write, TR. I enjoyed reading it.
January 2nd, 2018 10:20 - Before The Dawn (Kadesh Vega)
Where, indeed, does it end? Does it ever end? A beautiful, surreal write,...
January 2nd, 2018 10:11 - way poem #02: who knew the way (Frank Prem)
A well written reflection of inner peace, Frank. Kudos!
January 2nd, 2018 10:07 - Smile at a Stranger. (Goldfinch60)
Great advice, Goldie! And well put.
January 2nd, 2018 10:04 - THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards)
A lovely setting, portrayed both by brush and pen! Well done, Michael.
January 2nd, 2018 10:01 - Death Deja Vu (Seeker)
Yeah, I think Dali was definitely on to something. I love his work. Good...
January 2nd, 2018 09:57 - In the Air between LA and Honolulu (FredPeyer)
Glad I got my traveling in before all this madness. I find it no longer...
January 2nd, 2018 09:53 - Colours of Change. (Fay Slimm.)
True, nothing fascinates us more than man-created starbursts in the sky...
January 2nd, 2018 09:47 - If I Knew The Words... (W c)
When the words just won\'t come ... frustrating, indeed! Well expressed by...
January 1st, 2018 10:31 - way poem #04: the poet (Frank Prem)
Not easy ... the curse and blessing of being a poet! Well captured in this...
January 1st, 2018 10:26 - FROM COMMENTS AND FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
Indeed, \"Nothing can evade the poet\'s pen\". Well expressed, Michael.
January 1st, 2018 10:20 - New Year Shower. (Goldfinch60)
A symbolic shower to mark the passing of time ... what better ritual for...
January 1st, 2018 10:15 - The Ballad of Janus (The Two Faces) – A Poem at New Year’s (AuburnScribbler)
A fine poem depicting the balancing act that is life experienced. Well...
January 1st, 2018 10:09 - Woman (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Sadness is a source of great poetry. Perhaps this was the lesson she was...
January 1st, 2018 10:01 - The last Day of the Year (FredPeyer)
A fine tribute to the symbolic point in the progress of conceived time,...
January 1st, 2018 09:55 - The New Year. (Goldfinch60)
May you continue to find the strength to appreciate life\'s blessings in...
December 31st, 2017 07:43 - RACHEL (Michael Edwards)
A fine tribute to a unique talent, Michael. As all artists and poets know,...
December 31st, 2017 07:34 - OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.)
Nature\'s process of renewal ... the cycles of life ... beautifully...
December 31st, 2017 07:23 - way poem #03: to a higher place (Frank Prem)
The coffee brewing ritual honed to the level of art! Well portrayed,...
December 31st, 2017 07:18 - Loneliness (Jean R. R. Branson)
A common malady well described, Jean!
December 29th, 2017 09:41 - Losing Sleep About Perfection (Frank Prem)
The level of perfection in a man\'s work describes him ... in this I agree...
December 29th, 2017 09:38 - RUMOURS (Michael Edwards)
I see you\'ve been watching the news. Well put, Michael! Lovely
December 29th, 2017 09:31 - Condemned (SunSearcher)
Always in search of our elusive \'Home\". Good write, Sun!
December 29th, 2017 09:23 - Wisdom\"s Tree (Poelove)
The fruit of experience is sweet, indeed. Well penned, poelove!
December 29th, 2017 09:19 - Shakespeare verses Conan Doyle. (Goldfinch60)
I too spent Christmas day with an abundance of love and family. A great...
December 26th, 2017 12:28 - hidden (Frank Prem)
The words, over time, reveal the writer, indeed. One cannot hide behind...
December 26th, 2017 12:25
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