Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Dark days (Myself and me)
A fine introductory poem, \'myself\'! Welcome to MPS. For it not to be...
July 13th, 2017 15:23 - White light (Ali.louise)
Good first poetic contribution. ali! My only suggestion is that you chose...
July 13th, 2017 15:18 - It\'s not if... It\'s when... (Avigail)
I\'d never cared for poetry, never attempted to write a poem, until...
July 13th, 2017 10:51 - The Great American Novel (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow! What better description of a fine novel could there be? As a fellow...
July 13th, 2017 09:17 - Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to both you and your wife, Goldie! I hope sharing your...
July 13th, 2017 09:11 - THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA)
burning-embers makes a good point in his comment. The history of mankind...
July 13th, 2017 08:56 - Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose)
A lovely slant on a not-so-lovely day! Thanks for sharing this view of...
July 13th, 2017 08:37 - Memory\'s Pearl. (Fay Slimm.)
The lady has known the blessing of a true love in her full life ... what...
July 13th, 2017 08:16 - Starry Night (Rita_ehn)
Glad to have another fine poet aboard, Rita. I appreciated this, your...
July 12th, 2017 17:02 - Once Denied (Kurt Philip Behm)
The healing power of expressing the suppressed? Am I close? Regardless, I...
July 12th, 2017 16:37 - Searching Through Stillness (Augustus)
\"Not tonight\", where have I heard that before?? Seriously though, this...
July 12th, 2017 16:13 - Shooting Star (Adri)
A fine first contribution to MPS! welcome to our family of poets, Adri.
July 12th, 2017 13:58 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
The kiss, as it evolves over time in a relationship ... what an enchanting...
July 12th, 2017 13:54 - remembrance (Eldubbb)
A fine, thought-provoking poem, el! Welcome to MPS, I think you will like...
July 12th, 2017 13:39 - MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The picture is of my brain on good poetry, such as this clever one. We...
July 12th, 2017 09:31 - Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60)
The very definition of poetry, Sir. A precious way to capture part of our...
July 12th, 2017 09:20 - THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards)
A brilliant couplet, Michael! And love the fist being rammed down our...
July 12th, 2017 08:48 - Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you humble me with your poetic expression of philosophy ... the realm...
July 12th, 2017 08:42 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
A grim portrait, this one, and a commentary on the times. \"There but for...
July 11th, 2017 21:40 - 2nd shift (Jamesbackus)
A well put commentary on our wired world of today. I like your poem,
July 11th, 2017 21:33 - Hope Never Rests (Kurt Philip Behm)
It gives one pause, as you so skillfully state. I can\'t imagine a...
July 11th, 2017 17:08 - The decisions I made (Avigail)
I share your perspective on choosing \'this way or that\' and how...
July 11th, 2017 16:20 - Clouds (Sue.evans)
You portray well one of my very favorite features of nature in this fine...
July 11th, 2017 16:09 - A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
I like these one-liners, and Love the abstract! It really touches me,...
July 11th, 2017 08:46 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your...
July 11th, 2017 08:41 - Incoming. (Fay Slimm.)
Your title redefines and restores a word usually associated with the...
July 11th, 2017 08:25 - The Demon That Haunts Me (Moonflower15)
A stark and powerful commentary on the brutal crime of child abuse,...
July 10th, 2017 14:29 - WOMAN (David Grubb)
They are a thing of joy and beauty, are they not? Appreciated this fine...
July 10th, 2017 14:11 - My name is depression, cant you tell? (R.A.Brown)
Depression from loss, not fear, Is just as devastating. Whatever the...
July 10th, 2017 14:01 - Glisten (Nicholas Browning)
My muses consist of numerous personalities as well, I am convinced, and I...
July 10th, 2017 13:51 - Couplet (1) (Michael Edwards)
A fun posting, Michael, thanks for sharing.
July 10th, 2017 12:46 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
Good poem and a powerful last line, Fred! A home run! I love it when a...
July 10th, 2017 12:42 - To New Friends Gained..... (P.H.Rose)
I share in your tribute to the wonderful family of poets met on this site!...
July 10th, 2017 12:33 - An Artists Prayer (Kurt Philip Behm)
Oh, Snap! That would make all of us creative poet-types divine, would it...
July 10th, 2017 12:13 - Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus)
I believe that some very brave souls bite off more than they can chew, and...
July 10th, 2017 12:03 - Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60)
I choose Beethoven\'s \"Ode To Joy\", (ninth symphony,) to be played at my...
July 10th, 2017 09:02 - To the Next Woman (MissileOfUncertainty)
A fine first offering on this site, Miss. Your concern for the \"next...
July 10th, 2017 08:53 - Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine tribute to one of natures beautiful creations. Thanks for sharing,...
July 10th, 2017 08:40 - Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi)
Complicated old souls such as yours do tend to take on ever increasingly...
July 10th, 2017 08:34 - Your Move (Lost in Murphy)
I like the chess analogy. It is my favorite game. Good poem, \'Lost\'!
July 9th, 2017 22:18 - Youth (Ezra.mendoza)
A fine poem, well beyond your 16 years, Ezra. I enjoyed it and look for...
July 9th, 2017 22:15 - Behind The Glass (Dylan)
It is so good to welcome a fellow member of the autism spectrum to MPS,...
July 9th, 2017 19:33 - Numb (R.A.Brown)
Your poem is a fine expression of what we all seek, and I enjoyed it,...
July 9th, 2017 14:44 - Flowerless Thorn (Baylee)
Your poem, a well expressed quest for true love. I enjoyed it, thanks for...
July 9th, 2017 14:40 - reflection (Heather T)
A bit bewildering yet satisfying ... a characteristic of much great...
July 9th, 2017 13:35 - The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15)
A beautiful poem, Moonflower, but behind it I heard a subtle warning bell....
July 9th, 2017 13:25 - Words to the younger me (Poetic Dan)
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24 - Whom Could It Be (+2) ... long (Kurt Philip Behm)
Intriguing poem! Killer last line! Well done, Kurt.
July 9th, 2017 11:20 - Dignity (Jabberwocky)
Noble poem well spoken! Kudos, J.
July 9th, 2017 10:58 - A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose)
At least they are still old fashioned enough to get married! Sounds like a...
July 9th, 2017 10:53 - Heart Space (FredPeyer)
In the final analysis, what else is there to life but love? It is...
July 9th, 2017 10:47 - Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.)
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt...
July 9th, 2017 10:34 - Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful poem of appreciation, Goldfinch ... so much enjoyed it. I...
July 9th, 2017 10:24 - Soul (Trev)
Much wisdom expressed in this fine poem, Trev! Thanks for posting.
July 9th, 2017 10:18 - midnight cigarette (Velvetlascivious)
You paint a fine picture herein, with ever so subtle strokes, that held me...
July 9th, 2017 10:04 - Lost souls (Renzi)
Your beautiful warm heart pours out from this fine poem, Renzi! A wise old...
July 9th, 2017 09:25 - Memories Tender (Augustus)
I\'m sure he will be touched, as I was. Beautiful tribute!
July 9th, 2017 08:56 - Shadow Dog (Lostgirl24)
Lovely tribute to your pet and companion, Jack! Well presented, L.G.
July 8th, 2017 13:20 - Swamp (Augustus)
Damn developers! (I was once one.) Beautiful, captivating piece of prose,...
July 8th, 2017 11:12 - Mind (FredPeyer)
Your \'huge mind\' and \'old soul\' come across in this fine poem, Fred....
July 8th, 2017 11:04 - Tiger (Jabberwocky)
A profound little piece, Jabber! I thoroughly enjoyed it,
July 8th, 2017 10:52 - My name is on a list (Gary Edward Geraci)
Fine poem/prose, Gary. I love the exchange, \"You are my first\" ......
July 8th, 2017 10:32 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
July 8th, 2017 08:41 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful word painting, Fay! You are indeed an artist. Your gift with...
July 8th, 2017 08:40 - WAKENING (Michael Edwards)
Nice four-liner and an interesting assortment of trees, Michael. I\'m...
July 8th, 2017 08:25 - childhood prison (Rosebel)
A courageous, well written poem about abuse and betrayal. Well done ......
July 7th, 2017 15:28 - Multitasking or focus (Avigail)
My one-track-mind envies your multi-taking one, Avigail. Nice poem for a...
July 7th, 2017 13:30 - THE COW IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards)
Words to live by, oh philosophic one! Fun poem, Michael!
July 7th, 2017 11:18 - Defiance (FredPeyer)
A respite from routine helps recharge the soul. Good, well presented poem,...
July 7th, 2017 11:14 - He is from pain (Xxxplicit)
I admire your courage as conveyed in this poem, XXX.
If I may make a...
July 7th, 2017 11:09 - Here\'s Johnnie! (Bibbeck)
Ouch! Cute poem, Bibbeck.
July 7th, 2017 10:39 - Jelly Fish (MaddieJ)
Beautiful imagery here, virago! A well written poem, indeed.
July 7th, 2017 10:16 - Passage (Butterfly Eyes)
Lovely poem, Butterly! Indeed, love and peace cast us free. Well spoken!
July 7th, 2017 10:13 - Audience Of One (Kurt Philip Behm)
A brilliant two-liner, Kurt! You made me laugh out loud. Thanks for this...
July 7th, 2017 10:05 - Shame Revealed (+3) (Augustus)
Yes, shame can be useful, or a deadly device used as a weapon.
The...
July 7th, 2017 08:30 - Walk with me (Cerianb123)
A sad but beautiful poem, cerianb! Well and strongly presented. Welcome to...
July 7th, 2017 08:06 - Misery (P.X. Vexxus)
Wow! The power of the storm comes through this fine poem, P.X. ... Well...
July 7th, 2017 07:59 - Poetry and Music (Meno1972)
Me too, Meno! I appreciate this poem, thanks.
July 7th, 2017 07:54 - Regeneration. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you blew me away this morning with this beautiful poem. Thank you for...
July 7th, 2017 07:14 - It\'s a good day to have a good day? (Renzi)
Your smiley-faced picture started my day with a good laugh! Thank you. And...
July 7th, 2017 07:01 - all of this and more (Meno1972)
I, too, have had a taste of performing, and the feeling of the connection...
July 6th, 2017 16:46 - Two Faces (Seeker123)
I had a spiritual teacher who would often say; \"The dark and the light,...
July 6th, 2017 16:13 - Screaming Loud (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well spoken truths, Kurt. Thanks for sharing.
July 6th, 2017 11:02 - Better Days. (Goldfinch60)
And in my acknowledged minority view ... \'And to make each Life, better...
July 6th, 2017 09:37 - J3 (Jacob8t5)
We fathers of daughters have all been there. Good poem, Jacob! Welcome to...
July 6th, 2017 09:24 - A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer)
These bodies may be a \"sad symphony\" of our former selves, but the mind...
July 6th, 2017 09:14 - My poetic side (Renzi)
You reflect my feelings exactly and so well about this great site and the...
July 6th, 2017 07:49 - Scented Solutions. (Fay Slimm.)
As your poem states so well, love requires \"Being tenderly constant\" in...
July 6th, 2017 07:41 - THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs)
I\'m surprised that no one has commented on the atrocity described in the...
July 5th, 2017 21:52 - Found Love Again (Lanejamesc)
Amazing how that can happen, isn\'t it? I like your fine poem, Lane!
July 5th, 2017 20:51 - The Journey to Loving Myself (Judy Booler)
Ah, one of life\'s greatest and hardest lessons, learning to love...
July 5th, 2017 17:15 - THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs)
Oops, that does appear to be a hole, doesn\'t it. It could have been an...
July 5th, 2017 15:19 - A Cup of Tea (TiffanyR)
Your poem just might make a tea lover out of this coffee drinker. Fine...
July 5th, 2017 11:42 - Decay (P.X. Vexxus)
Nothing in our history as a species is more consistent than war, is it?...
July 5th, 2017 11:29 - Front tooth (Renzi)
Another fine poem, Renzi! it brought a smile.
July 5th, 2017 11:18 - The Nature of the Cursed and the Curser (Inexplicablyme)
What a beautiful poem, Jaelynn! I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.
July 5th, 2017 11:10 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
I agree, one of your finest, Fay, and it goes into my favorites as well....
July 5th, 2017 11:05 - THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY (Louis Gibbs)
No need to apologize, b-e, but thank you just the same. Apologies are in...
July 5th, 2017 10:47 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
Superman does have a strange sense of humor one could say. Cute poem,...
July 5th, 2017 08:35 - US INDEPENDENCE ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love your clever poem, Briansodes! Thanks for starting my day with a
July 5th, 2017 08:26
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