Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- These Words That I Write (DyingDreams)
You elevate the stature of rhyming poems in my eyes with this fine one,...
July 19th, 2017 15:26 - A few four line verses - food for thought! (Sue.evans)
Short poems rock! These are some fine ones, Sue.
July 19th, 2017 15:06 - Every year (L)
And I share your awe of them, L. They are amazing creatures that we never...
July 19th, 2017 11:10 - Toll Mine To Pay (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\" The deeper I travel, newer endings begin\" ... what a captivating...
July 19th, 2017 11:02 - A part of the process (Aa Harvey)
A blessed process the depths of which a man can only try to imagine. A...
July 19th, 2017 10:44 - We don’t see it all (Avigail)
\"Are we doomed to blind spots of perception?\" A key question pertaining...
July 19th, 2017 10:22 - E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I will need no one\'s permission when my time has come, thank you. I have...
July 19th, 2017 08:45 - Dying Love (FredPeyer)
The agony and the ecstasy love reflected can bring ... beautifully...
July 19th, 2017 08:19 - Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60)
I think your first two lines say it all; \"In this life you learn. As you...
July 19th, 2017 08:09 - IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Your poem, to me, a beautifully portrayed look back at the simpler time of...
July 19th, 2017 07:49 - Wednesday\'s child (Renzi)
Glad you are having a fun day. Mom said Sunday was the day I came in this...
July 19th, 2017 07:14 - Just Static (Lily_)
Your poem is a fine presentation of feeling numb, expressionless,...
July 18th, 2017 22:32 - An individual in a collective sea. (CaitEva)
I admire the depth expressed in this poem. Excellent, thoughtful piece,...
July 18th, 2017 22:25 - Verses Deboned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Dark and mysterious, an intriguing poem, Kurt. I enjoyed reading this one!
July 18th, 2017 18:44 - song of the hollow house (Heather T)
I really like the echoe-verses interspersed between phrases in your fine...
July 18th, 2017 13:56 - Rose Pedal (Domi)
A fine poetic expression of longing through analogy. Well done, Domi!
July 18th, 2017 13:51 - Sooner (Baylee)
Your splendid poem displays much wisdom, especially from one so young....
July 18th, 2017 13:42 - I Hate Mirrors (Ren)
Well done first offering, Ren! I like your \'reflective\' poem.
July 18th, 2017 10:46 - A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
\"They never sang nor spoke nor met yet in a dream she cradled him\"....
July 18th, 2017 09:16 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08 - Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60)
Point well taken in the last four lines ... food for thought! As an...
July 18th, 2017 09:01 - HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Classical guitar has always been a favorite instrument of mine too....
July 18th, 2017 08:54 - That time of the week (Renzi)
I can\'t watch as they draw my blood for fear of getting light headed....
July 18th, 2017 08:36 - Littleness. (Fay Slimm.)
So much of the miracle of nature goes unnoticed and taken for granted, as...
July 18th, 2017 08:29 - Until Eyes Close (Kurt Philip Behm)
It is a song without end, I believe. Fine poem, Kurt!
July 17th, 2017 12:59 - Goodbye (FredPeyer)
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather...
July 17th, 2017 08:35 - Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi)
With your feisty spunk I\'m sure you will make it through this, Renzi. I...
July 17th, 2017 08:18 - I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, I\'ve met the subject of your poem a few times. Damn powerful she is,...
July 17th, 2017 08:12 - Motley. (Fay Slimm.)
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in...
July 16th, 2017 10:17 - Spray (Daisychain)
What a beautiful entry into this family of poets, Daisy! Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2017 13:09 - Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem echoes mine of yesterday and I am in full accord with this...
July 15th, 2017 09:17 - Alone (FredPeyer)
I, too, cherish my solitude. Great expression of this creative space,
July 15th, 2017 09:11 - Slap my wrist (Renzi)
Raise a glass for me, Renzi! Have fun.
July 15th, 2017 09:04 - Hear Then Speak (Kurt Philip Behm)
You describe the process by which our Bards prompt our poems, I presume. I...
July 15th, 2017 09:01 - A sentinel (Aa Harvey)
Your poem paints a captivating picture ... one from which I couldn\'t...
July 14th, 2017 09:14 - Local Area Business Man (Rpgiii)
Very creative write, thanks for sharing, rpg!
July 14th, 2017 09:08 - Porch (Jabberwocky)
Not worth staying in a bad relationship, as this good poem so well...
July 14th, 2017 08:54 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
A very good couplet, \'M\'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There...
July 14th, 2017 08:46 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is...
July 14th, 2017 07:09 - Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer)
NOW you give me this advice! Where were you a couple of marriages ago? Oh...
July 14th, 2017 06:57 - Holiday Season (Renzi)
Live it up, sweetheart! Make many happy memories ... they come in handy...
July 14th, 2017 06:51 - Tainted (Brie)
The end of a relationship that just fades away can be a more difficult...
July 13th, 2017 15:39 - Dark days (Myself and me)
A fine introductory poem, \'myself\'! Welcome to MPS. For it not to be...
July 13th, 2017 15:23 - White light (Ali.louise)
Good first poetic contribution. ali! My only suggestion is that you chose...
July 13th, 2017 15:18 - It\'s not if... It\'s when... (Avigail)
I\'d never cared for poetry, never attempted to write a poem, until...
July 13th, 2017 10:51 - The Great American Novel (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wow! What better description of a fine novel could there be? As a fellow...
July 13th, 2017 09:17 - Why Her, Why? (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to both you and your wife, Goldie! I hope sharing your...
July 13th, 2017 09:11 - THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA)
burning-embers makes a good point in his comment. The history of mankind...
July 13th, 2017 08:56 - Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose)
A lovely slant on a not-so-lovely day! Thanks for sharing this view of...
July 13th, 2017 08:37 - Memory\'s Pearl. (Fay Slimm.)
The lady has known the blessing of a true love in her full life ... what...
July 13th, 2017 08:16 - Starry Night (Rita_ehn)
Glad to have another fine poet aboard, Rita. I appreciated this, your...
July 12th, 2017 17:02 - Once Denied (Kurt Philip Behm)
The healing power of expressing the suppressed? Am I close? Regardless, I...
July 12th, 2017 16:37 - Searching Through Stillness (Augustus)
\"Not tonight\", where have I heard that before?? Seriously though, this...
July 12th, 2017 16:13 - Shooting Star (Adri)
A fine first contribution to MPS! welcome to our family of poets, Adri.
July 12th, 2017 13:58 - The Kiss (FredPeyer)
The kiss, as it evolves over time in a relationship ... what an enchanting...
July 12th, 2017 13:54 - remembrance (Eldubbb)
A fine, thought-provoking poem, el! Welcome to MPS, I think you will like...
July 12th, 2017 13:39 - MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The picture is of my brain on good poetry, such as this clever one. We...
July 12th, 2017 09:31 - Words on a Page. (Goldfinch60)
The very definition of poetry, Sir. A precious way to capture part of our...
July 12th, 2017 09:20 - THE DECEPTION OF POLITICS (Michael Edwards)
A brilliant couplet, Michael! And love the fist being rammed down our...
July 12th, 2017 08:48 - Heaven-Held. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you humble me with your poetic expression of philosophy ... the realm...
July 12th, 2017 08:42 - Fuck this Live (FredPeyer)
A grim portrait, this one, and a commentary on the times. \"There but for...
July 11th, 2017 21:40 - 2nd shift (Jamesbackus)
A well put commentary on our wired world of today. I like your poem,
July 11th, 2017 21:33 - Hope Never Rests (Kurt Philip Behm)
It gives one pause, as you so skillfully state. I can\'t imagine a...
July 11th, 2017 17:08 - The decisions I made (Avigail)
I share your perspective on choosing \'this way or that\' and how...
July 11th, 2017 16:20 - Clouds (Sue.evans)
You portray well one of my very favorite features of nature in this fine...
July 11th, 2017 16:09 - A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
I like these one-liners, and Love the abstract! It really touches me,...
July 11th, 2017 08:46 - A cry for opinion (Malubotelho)
Your poem shouts concern for this life and this body. Know that you, your...
July 11th, 2017 08:41 - Incoming. (Fay Slimm.)
Your title redefines and restores a word usually associated with the...
July 11th, 2017 08:25 - The Demon That Haunts Me (Moonflower15)
A stark and powerful commentary on the brutal crime of child abuse,...
July 10th, 2017 14:29 - WOMAN (David Grubb)
They are a thing of joy and beauty, are they not? Appreciated this fine...
July 10th, 2017 14:11 - My name is depression, cant you tell? (R.A.Brown)
Depression from loss, not fear, Is just as devastating. Whatever the...
July 10th, 2017 14:01 - Glisten (Nicholas Browning)
My muses consist of numerous personalities as well, I am convinced, and I...
July 10th, 2017 13:51 - Couplet (1) (Michael Edwards)
A fun posting, Michael, thanks for sharing.
July 10th, 2017 12:46 - Hoping (FredPeyer)
Good poem and a powerful last line, Fred! A home run! I love it when a...
July 10th, 2017 12:42 - To New Friends Gained..... (P.H.Rose)
I share in your tribute to the wonderful family of poets met on this site!...
July 10th, 2017 12:33 - An Artists Prayer (Kurt Philip Behm)
Oh, Snap! That would make all of us creative poet-types divine, would it...
July 10th, 2017 12:13 - Good Bye Geoffrey (Augustus)
I believe that some very brave souls bite off more than they can chew, and...
July 10th, 2017 12:03 - Dancing Like an Idiot. (Goldfinch60)
I choose Beethoven\'s \"Ode To Joy\", (ninth symphony,) to be played at my...
July 10th, 2017 09:02 - To the Next Woman (MissileOfUncertainty)
A fine first offering on this site, Miss. Your concern for the \"next...
July 10th, 2017 08:53 - Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine tribute to one of natures beautiful creations. Thanks for sharing,...
July 10th, 2017 08:40 - Monday morning, gone eleven (Renzi)
Complicated old souls such as yours do tend to take on ever increasingly...
July 10th, 2017 08:34 - Your Move (Lost in Murphy)
I like the chess analogy. It is my favorite game. Good poem, \'Lost\'!
July 9th, 2017 22:18 - Youth (Ezra.mendoza)
A fine poem, well beyond your 16 years, Ezra. I enjoyed it and look for...
July 9th, 2017 22:15 - Behind The Glass (Dylan)
It is so good to welcome a fellow member of the autism spectrum to MPS,...
July 9th, 2017 19:33 - Numb (R.A.Brown)
Your poem is a fine expression of what we all seek, and I enjoyed it,...
July 9th, 2017 14:44 - Flowerless Thorn (Baylee)
Your poem, a well expressed quest for true love. I enjoyed it, thanks for...
July 9th, 2017 14:40 - reflection (Heather T)
A bit bewildering yet satisfying ... a characteristic of much great...
July 9th, 2017 13:35 - The Warmth of Your Gaze (Moonflower15)
A beautiful poem, Moonflower, but behind it I heard a subtle warning bell....
July 9th, 2017 13:25 - Words to the younger me (Poetic Dan)
A good poem ... made great by the last phrase! Well done, Dan!
July 9th, 2017 11:24 - Whom Could It Be (+2) ... long (Kurt Philip Behm)
Intriguing poem! Killer last line! Well done, Kurt.
July 9th, 2017 11:20 - Dignity (Jabberwocky)
Noble poem well spoken! Kudos, J.
July 9th, 2017 10:58 - A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose)
At least they are still old fashioned enough to get married! Sounds like a...
July 9th, 2017 10:53 - Heart Space (FredPeyer)
In the final analysis, what else is there to life but love? It is...
July 9th, 2017 10:47 - Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.)
I hear the sound your poem portrays so well, Fay. I can smell the salt...
July 9th, 2017 10:34 - Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful poem of appreciation, Goldfinch ... so much enjoyed it. I...
July 9th, 2017 10:24 - Soul (Trev)
Much wisdom expressed in this fine poem, Trev! Thanks for posting.
July 9th, 2017 10:18 - midnight cigarette (Velvetlascivious)
You paint a fine picture herein, with ever so subtle strokes, that held me...
July 9th, 2017 10:04 - Lost souls (Renzi)
Your beautiful warm heart pours out from this fine poem, Renzi! A wise old...
July 9th, 2017 09:25 - Memories Tender (Augustus)
I\'m sure he will be touched, as I was. Beautiful tribute!
July 9th, 2017 08:56
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