Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Time to think (Starbuck Kentipoos Cruz)
Or is the \"reality\" we are caught in actually a dream? We all are...
July 25th, 2017 08:42 - Soldier and the Tree (PowerPoetry)
A good, strong introductory poem, this. Thanks for sharing it with us, and...
July 25th, 2017 08:35 - HAROLDS LAMENT (Michael Edwards)
A good laugh you\'ve provided me this morning, Michael. I love it! You are...
July 25th, 2017 08:28 - You (Private poet)
He exudes goodness and contentment, and reflects the qualities your poem...
July 25th, 2017 08:17 - Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations on your son\'s marriage, Goldie. I join you in wishing...
July 25th, 2017 08:12 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
Indeed it may be, so may we all spend our lives fully lived! Your fine...
July 25th, 2017 08:09 - Disposable (Stephanie Showers)
I\'m sure you have impacted the world more than you realize, but as they...
July 24th, 2017 13:04 - The Harbor (Ethan)
A beautiful submittal, both poem/prose and painting! Thank you for sharing...
July 24th, 2017 12:54 - \"Two Lovers\" (Micalina)
What a gift our creator gave us, indeed! Thanks for the found memories,...
July 24th, 2017 12:50 - Waiting For Dawn (Kurt Philip Behm)
A perfect summation of the never ending drama and folly of war ... man\'s...
July 24th, 2017 11:47 - Great weather (Renzi)
What better way to spend a day? A cute contribution to my day. Thanks,...
July 24th, 2017 09:39 - THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards)
Life is but a stage and we are the actors ... a theme about which I have...
July 24th, 2017 09:34 - Reading Man. (Goldfinch60)
A good book is a great place to get lost in. We\'ve all been to that...
July 24th, 2017 09:26 - Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer)
I\'m sorry, it is too deep for me to comprehend. Maybe something less...
July 24th, 2017 09:20 - Looking forward (Rubers76)
And what better way to \"share their thoughts with thee\" than this...
July 24th, 2017 09:14 - New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.)
A concise beauty, beautifully shaped! This one satisfies my order-driven...
July 24th, 2017 09:02 - Causes (Its Raskolnikov)
Indeed, why do we make a \'god\' the scapegoat for what we ourselves...
July 23rd, 2017 14:28 - To The Black Muse (Lucaso)
Wherever and why ever you are going, keep writing, my friend The world...
July 23rd, 2017 14:14 - Who is the MMM? (Avigail)
There is much to be gained by examining a dream immediately upon waking....
July 23rd, 2017 14:09 - \"When I Close My Eyes\" (Micalina)
You are well on your path with the questions you raise, Michele. Expand...
July 23rd, 2017 11:24 - Tranquility (Aa Harvey)
And for us, the Poet is \"painting the scene.\" So very well, I might add....
July 23rd, 2017 11:13 - Ewig. (Goldfinch60)
I can understand your appreciation of this talented and moving vocalist,...
July 23rd, 2017 10:58 - Stillness. (Fay Slimm.)
Stillness between lovers speaks ever more loudly and deeply as their love...
July 23rd, 2017 10:47 - This Moment Transcendent (Kurt Philip Behm)
On \"Betrothed\" ... \'Whatever we conquer is with us forever.\' On...
July 23rd, 2017 10:27 - To face one\'s demons (Q)
Bring on the rains! This one hits home at this particular moment in my...
July 22nd, 2017 11:33 - Mr Bordi (Joaquin Finn)
A bold, beautiful biographical write, tied up so neatly and profoundly in...
July 22nd, 2017 11:21 - Wisdom (FredPeyer)
A fine poem with attention to form, which I find quite pleasing. Well...
July 22nd, 2017 09:44 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
Fine, humorous poem and critique on poetry! Though not a Brit, I can still...
July 22nd, 2017 09:37 - Endings. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful poem with some stunning lines ... \"nature\'s calm requiem...
July 22nd, 2017 09:31 - Affliction (Renzi)
Your affliction is one to which I cannot relate, only observe and...
July 22nd, 2017 09:16 - boxes (Heather T)
One can never go back \'home\', can they, as your poem so well portrays to...
July 21st, 2017 16:09 - A New Life (The Influencer)
It can certainly be a long journey to Hope, indeed! Congratulations for...
July 21st, 2017 13:58 - Caged (Baylee)
Words have hearts and souls both, don\'t they. A fine short poem, Nicole!
July 21st, 2017 13:53 - New Pathway (Kurt Philip Behm)
The last phrase conveys much truth ... the pathway to eternity points...
July 21st, 2017 10:25 - Daughter (Edthepoet)
\"I only gave you life, now the living is up to you.\" What a beautiful,...
July 21st, 2017 10:19 - FOOD FOR THOUGHTS FOR ALL MEMBERS! (RAJ NANDY)
Point well taken, Raj! Thanks for this reminder.
July 21st, 2017 08:25 - AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards)
\'A demon trapped in the web of illusion\' ... what I see in your art...
July 21st, 2017 07:58 - TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well presented examination of time and how one spends it ... very...
July 21st, 2017 07:51 - Train to Nowhere (FredPeyer)
The past, \"to be gazed upon with acceptance\"; \"Any destination will...
July 21st, 2017 07:45 - Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations on your epiphany and on this fine poem, Goldie!
July 21st, 2017 07:39 - Hypnotic. (Fay Slimm.)
Your courageous, youthful spirit shines through this fine piece, Fay....
July 21st, 2017 07:31 - Levels of under-standing (Avigail)
To me, understanding is experiencing, which is the point to these many...
July 21st, 2017 07:14 - LADIES & THEIR PETS ! ~ Seven Micro Poems (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I enjoyed them all Briansodes. Very clever, indeed!
July 20th, 2017 16:05 - paper skin (Ummbree)
Amazing what we put ourselves through and still we live on, described so...
July 20th, 2017 11:46 - Testimonial of my healing session (Poetic Dan)
Interesting to me how poetry is spawned so often by suffering, and poets...
July 20th, 2017 08:53 - Kestrel - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, so that is what inspired the Harrier aircraft! Amazing footage and a...
July 20th, 2017 08:23 - HE NEVER DINED (Michael Edwards)
\'A decimated earth post-apocalypse\', is what the painting speaks to me....
July 20th, 2017 08:08 - Control (Renzi)
Your mind is so creative it\'s scary. It is interesting to me that...
July 20th, 2017 07:59 - Part alienated, part connected. (CaitEva)
A very deep and philosophical poem, laralove! Tremendous insights...
July 19th, 2017 21:26 - The stars are out tonight! (Ljneedham08)
A great initial contribution to the site! Welcome, Lj. This poem speaks...
July 19th, 2017 17:12 - My younger years (Christina8)
Wouldn\'t take anything for those years, but nothing could persuade me...
July 19th, 2017 16:24 - Thoughts (M.m)
Welcome to MPS, M.m. You are off to a good start with this poem!
I would...
July 19th, 2017 16:15 - Delusional? (Poetic Dan)
I can relate. My daughter hated me when she hit fourteen ... for trying to...
July 19th, 2017 16:05 - Love Is (Migithehp)
And it is all there is to life. Fine poem, Migi!
July 19th, 2017 15:46 - Remind Yourself: (Niallprideaux)
I hope Amanda has as much appreciation of this poem as I do, Niall. It is...
July 19th, 2017 15:43 - Beautiful (Q)
I love this one, Q! So well written, and so lovely a way to tell her how...
July 19th, 2017 15:36 - Scorching Sun (P.X. Vexxus)
A strong poem indeed, and well presented, P.X., about a sad chapter in our...
July 19th, 2017 15:31 - These Words That I Write (DyingDreams)
You elevate the stature of rhyming poems in my eyes with this fine one,...
July 19th, 2017 15:26 - A few four line verses - food for thought! (Sue.evans)
Short poems rock! These are some fine ones, Sue.
July 19th, 2017 15:06 - Every year (L)
And I share your awe of them, L. They are amazing creatures that we never...
July 19th, 2017 11:10 - Toll Mine To Pay (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\" The deeper I travel, newer endings begin\" ... what a captivating...
July 19th, 2017 11:02 - A part of the process (Aa Harvey)
A blessed process the depths of which a man can only try to imagine. A...
July 19th, 2017 10:44 - We don’t see it all (Avigail)
\"Are we doomed to blind spots of perception?\" A key question pertaining...
July 19th, 2017 10:22 - E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I will need no one\'s permission when my time has come, thank you. I have...
July 19th, 2017 08:45 - Dying Love (FredPeyer)
The agony and the ecstasy love reflected can bring ... beautifully...
July 19th, 2017 08:19 - Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60)
I think your first two lines say it all; \"In this life you learn. As you...
July 19th, 2017 08:09 - IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Your poem, to me, a beautifully portrayed look back at the simpler time of...
July 19th, 2017 07:49 - Wednesday\'s child (Renzi)
Glad you are having a fun day. Mom said Sunday was the day I came in this...
July 19th, 2017 07:14 - Just Static (Lily_)
Your poem is a fine presentation of feeling numb, expressionless,...
July 18th, 2017 22:32 - An individual in a collective sea. (CaitEva)
I admire the depth expressed in this poem. Excellent, thoughtful piece,...
July 18th, 2017 22:25 - Verses Deboned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Dark and mysterious, an intriguing poem, Kurt. I enjoyed reading this one!
July 18th, 2017 18:44 - song of the hollow house (Heather T)
I really like the echoe-verses interspersed between phrases in your fine...
July 18th, 2017 13:56 - Rose Pedal (Domi)
A fine poetic expression of longing through analogy. Well done, Domi!
July 18th, 2017 13:51 - Sooner (Baylee)
Your splendid poem displays much wisdom, especially from one so young....
July 18th, 2017 13:42 - I Hate Mirrors (Ren)
Well done first offering, Ren! I like your \'reflective\' poem.
July 18th, 2017 10:46 - A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
\"They never sang nor spoke nor met yet in a dream she cradled him\"....
July 18th, 2017 09:16 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
A poignant poem very well presented, Fred! Excellent write!
July 18th, 2017 09:08 - Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60)
Point well taken in the last four lines ... food for thought! As an...
July 18th, 2017 09:01 - HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Classical guitar has always been a favorite instrument of mine too....
July 18th, 2017 08:54 - That time of the week (Renzi)
I can\'t watch as they draw my blood for fear of getting light headed....
July 18th, 2017 08:36 - Littleness. (Fay Slimm.)
So much of the miracle of nature goes unnoticed and taken for granted, as...
July 18th, 2017 08:29 - Until Eyes Close (Kurt Philip Behm)
It is a song without end, I believe. Fine poem, Kurt!
July 17th, 2017 12:59 - Goodbye (FredPeyer)
Interesting that both Kat and Renzi assumed that you wrote the note rather...
July 17th, 2017 08:35 - Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi)
With your feisty spunk I\'m sure you will make it through this, Renzi. I...
July 17th, 2017 08:18 - I Am Desire. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, I\'ve met the subject of your poem a few times. Damn powerful she is,...
July 17th, 2017 08:12 - Motley. (Fay Slimm.)
I envy your fluent familiarity words I\'ve never met. There are several in...
July 16th, 2017 10:17 - Spray (Daisychain)
What a beautiful entry into this family of poets, Daisy! Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2017 13:09 - Parallel Universes. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem echoes mine of yesterday and I am in full accord with this...
July 15th, 2017 09:17 - Alone (FredPeyer)
I, too, cherish my solitude. Great expression of this creative space,
July 15th, 2017 09:11 - Slap my wrist (Renzi)
Raise a glass for me, Renzi! Have fun.
July 15th, 2017 09:04 - Hear Then Speak (Kurt Philip Behm)
You describe the process by which our Bards prompt our poems, I presume. I...
July 15th, 2017 09:01 - A sentinel (Aa Harvey)
Your poem paints a captivating picture ... one from which I couldn\'t...
July 14th, 2017 09:14 - Local Area Business Man (Rpgiii)
Very creative write, thanks for sharing, rpg!
July 14th, 2017 09:08 - Porch (Jabberwocky)
Not worth staying in a bad relationship, as this good poem so well...
July 14th, 2017 08:54 - Epiphany (Malubotelho)
A very good couplet, \'M\'! I appreciate it, thanks for sharing. There...
July 14th, 2017 08:46 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Classic couplets, Michael! Well done. Thanks for sharing.
July 14th, 2017 07:19 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
A moving poem throughout, but that last line really got to me! My heart is...
July 14th, 2017 07:09 - Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer)
NOW you give me this advice! Where were you a couple of marriages ago? Oh...
July 14th, 2017 06:57 - Holiday Season (Renzi)
Live it up, sweetheart! Make many happy memories ... they come in handy...
July 14th, 2017 06:51 - Tainted (Brie)
The end of a relationship that just fades away can be a more difficult...
July 13th, 2017 15:39
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