Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• Words of Life. (Goldfinch60) I Like this poem, it speaks to me. As a matter of fact, I did write a book...
  June 12th, 2017 07:58
• Star Eater (Swingline) Wonderfully amusing poem, swingline! Thanks for sharing.
  June 12th, 2017 07:52
• First Love. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing,
  June 12th, 2017 07:48
• other day gray (Heather T) Dances on the edge of inscrutable, yet conveys something beautiful. Very...
  June 11th, 2017 16:33
• Nature\'s Timepiece - The Garden (Sue.evans) Beautiful ... the metaphoric passing of time in colors! Really enjoyed...
  June 11th, 2017 10:37
• Beyond The Gleam (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) To me, this describes beautifully the journey from ego to self, the...
  June 11th, 2017 10:31
• purple. (Ruth Fadairo) Purple is my favorite color as well, and this poem is a fine tribute one...
  June 11th, 2017 10:23
• The art of knowing who you are (Avigail) Coming into awareness of self is a beautiful process. Congratulations,...
  June 11th, 2017 10:16
• Stealing Mountains (Garry) I like this appealing, well formatted poem, Garry, and look forward to...
  June 11th, 2017 10:12
• Storm - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Finally a Haiku that I can fully appreciate. Good work, Goldfinch!
  June 11th, 2017 09:58
• midnight mass (Willyweed) Lovely poem, willyweed. Thanks for sharing it.
  June 10th, 2017 19:16
• SOCIETY IS CRACKED (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Strong, well written poem, Rachel. You did yourself proud!
  June 10th, 2017 19:12
• sticks, stones, and the futility of fingers (Heather T) My hope is that this poem provided some release from the experience for...
  June 10th, 2017 19:06
• THE GRACE OF GOD (PCC) Well spoken, PCC! Your poem is very nicely presented. Kudos!
  June 10th, 2017 17:22
• Woods On Fire (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Something intriguing and unsettling about the first one, Kurt, but It is...
  June 10th, 2017 09:16
• Line-Dancing (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as...
  June 10th, 2017 08:50
• Mensa (+3) (Augustus) Being a lifelong chess player, I\'d have to choose Chess Master as my...
  June 10th, 2017 08:41
• But it was not love (Mylittleheart) Sweet, insightful poem, mylittleheart. Love the phrase, \'intolerable...
  June 9th, 2017 18:17
• the kiss (Heather T) Whew! I need a cold shower! Lovely, sensuous poem, Heather.
  June 9th, 2017 16:08
• THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs) Thank you all for your valued comments!
  June 9th, 2017 16:01
• I’M (Tony36) This one reminds me of the poem I posted earlier today ... \"The Wisdom Of...
  June 9th, 2017 14:10
• Light Each Day (+ 4) (Augustus) Can\'t decide between Dark Beauty and Bent light as to which is my...
  June 9th, 2017 14:03
• Last (Baylee) Lovely couplet, Baylee!
  June 9th, 2017 13:48
• Twins We Pray (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) A beautiful stream of couplets, Kurt! Much enjoyed.
  June 9th, 2017 13:38
• I Dont Matter... (Writings From The Unknown13) It\'s called the journey to self ... discovering who we are. You will get...
  June 9th, 2017 13:30
• Teardrops (Sue.evans) Beautifully painted poem, Sue! I look forward to more.
  June 9th, 2017 13:25
• Story of my life (Renzi) Strong poem, slightly detracted from by a couple of glitches. Do you use...
  June 9th, 2017 13:17
• My Memories (Fluatist) Who would we be without our memories? I don\'t think they come back so...
  June 9th, 2017 13:03
• THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs) Thank you swingline, outback, and diamond for these kind comments.
  June 9th, 2017 11:26
• Answered. (Fay Slimm.) \"the music of duty\", What a wonderful, descriptive phrase! You have a...
  June 9th, 2017 11:22
• You (Krystal Brewington) Clever poem, Krystal! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more of your work.
  June 9th, 2017 11:12
• Scary Night. (Goldfinch60) The ghost of Halloween lives! Cute poem!
  June 9th, 2017 11:09
• What Makes A Poet (Swingline) A fine tribute to the \"true poet\'s heart\", swingline! Enjoyed your fine...
  June 9th, 2017 11:00
• SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6 (Michael Edwards) Clever, very clever, Michael. I enjoyed!
  June 9th, 2017 10:53
• Why Do I Matter ??? (Isabellecov) Welcome to MPS, Isabellecov. I look forward to more of your work as it...
  June 9th, 2017 10:50
• wisp (Heather T) Beautiful poem, beautifully presented. I found the unrestrained form ...
  June 9th, 2017 10:32
• I Miss You (Hannabal) Nice narrative poem, Hannabal, but I\'ve never been a fan of poems just...
  June 8th, 2017 17:11
• The start was the end (Mylittleheart) Nice example of an (almost) unpunctuated poem. Enjoyed it, mylittleheart!
  June 8th, 2017 16:53
• DO YOU COME (Tony36) I\'m not clear from your Author Comments, is this an original of yours? It...
  June 8th, 2017 16:45
• Lymphedema (Augustus) Maybe there will be a special corner there for poets. Let\'s meet there!...
  June 8th, 2017 16:40
• Maybe (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Nice work, Kurt!
  June 8th, 2017 16:34
• Happenings. (Fay Slimm.) Another beauty, Fay, and I love the square format! Must be the engineer in...
  June 8th, 2017 10:45
• Broken (MusicalRider) Well constructed poem, MusicalRider! Congratulations.
  June 8th, 2017 10:37
• Uplifting Sounds. (Goldfinch60) I was captivated in the video by how unique was the one little boy who...
  June 8th, 2017 10:32
• Toxic (Lex) You have the basics for good poetry not many of the young poets have, a...
  June 8th, 2017 09:50
• ON THE PSYCHIATRIST\'S COUCH ! (RAJ NANDY) Cute poem, thanks for sharing, Raj.
  June 8th, 2017 09:41
• An Ode To A River (Ethan) Much potential here, but I believe your poetry would flow more freely and...
  June 7th, 2017 14:51
• Unending Tomorrows (Augustus) Momentous piece of work, my friend! I agree with Fay, that we must but...
  June 7th, 2017 11:02
• My Last Fledgling (Jabberwocky) Powerful last line! Well done poem, Jabberwocky.
  June 7th, 2017 10:41
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) I love the free-flowing form of your poetry, Fay. This is another beauty!...
  June 7th, 2017 10:35
• Dear Derry (P.S) My only advise, which you asked for, would be to free yourself from the...
  June 7th, 2017 10:09
• Max Richter. (Goldfinch60) Haunting, powerful, captivating piece of music. Thanks for sharing. And...
  June 7th, 2017 10:02
• Once upon a time I was emo (Sada_bear) Well expressed poem, Sada! My preference ... you might want to try...
  June 7th, 2017 08:53
• The Green Abode (MaddieJ) Lovely poem, virago! Thank you for sharing.
  June 7th, 2017 08:44
• Weeds (Wayne E) Damn those dandelions! Cute poem, Ray.
  June 6th, 2017 21:45
• A Peaceful Soul (Imnopoet) My advice to you, since you did request some, would be the same as to all...
  June 6th, 2017 17:01
• Being loved by you was painful. (P.S) Wonderful poem, P.S! The structure is well presented, and the message well...
  June 6th, 2017 16:49
• Haiku Attempts (Augustus) I admire your courage giving Haiku a shot, Augustus. I wouldn\'t know a...
  June 6th, 2017 16:39
• Deja Vu (Mkate0798) Strong poem, well done!
  June 6th, 2017 11:08
• Youth (Classicmister) Splendid poem, Classicmister! Beautifully portrays our journey through...
  June 6th, 2017 10:52
• Reminders. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem, Fay, summed up nicely in the last two lines. I submit that...
  June 6th, 2017 10:47
• Poems (Definition) (Swingline) Wow! A good Three-Line poem! You win the brevity prize, swingline.
  June 6th, 2017 10:36
• Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60) A short poem full of wisdom. Well done, Goldfinch!
  June 6th, 2017 10:32
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) Thank you so much, Goldfinch and Raj! I truly appreciate your input.
  June 6th, 2017 10:26
• But Traveler I Am Not (Ethan) Dream on, Ethan ... that\'s what life is.
  June 6th, 2017 10:20
• MATURITY (Michael Edwards) As you know by now, I am a big fan of the four line poem, and this is a...
  June 6th, 2017 09:36
• AT THE CEMETERY (RAJ NANDY) Lovely narrative poem, Raj Nandy! I like that poetic form and make use of...
  June 6th, 2017 09:28
• I Pretend (Grnteabug) I second Invisible\'s comment. Good poem, Grnteabug!
  June 5th, 2017 20:34
• every time we met (Mylittleheart) Sounds like \'it\' stayed pretty wet there for a while before cooling off....
  June 5th, 2017 17:59
• jabroni (Marylaine) Your unstructured, unpunctuated style works in this poem. I like it. Well...
  June 5th, 2017 17:47
• My face was not flushed (Harrington) Beautiful, subtle, erotic poem, Harrington! Welcome to MPS. I look forward...
  June 5th, 2017 16:02
• Relationship (Jessie Lee Brooks) Much truth in this well written, four-line poem, Jessie. It is refreshing...
  June 5th, 2017 14:57
• Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.) Ah, the beauty of silence! It so typically gets lost in the dance of...
  June 5th, 2017 08:36
• The Cook. (Goldfinch60) Delicious poem, Goldfinch! Enjoyed it almost as much as I would enjoy one...
  June 5th, 2017 08:24
• FIVE THIRTY PM (Michael Edwards) Nice poem to start off this day, Michael! Very descriptive phrases.
  June 5th, 2017 00:24
• London attacks (Mrs Middie) Welcome to MPS, Middie! I like your poem, especially the repetitive line...
  June 4th, 2017 14:04
• Voices Call (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) A fine four-line poem broken into eight. I like it, Kurt!
  June 4th, 2017 13:56
• Clinical Trials (Augustus) A noble, courageous fight you put up, my friend! You are admired.
  June 4th, 2017 10:24
• Transformation. (Fay Slimm.) Methinks the lady sees that which most cannot, the world beyond illusion....
  June 4th, 2017 10:11
• All of the Above (SSCR) Very moving and well done poem, SSCR! You come across as strong and...
  June 4th, 2017 09:52
• Americana (Grnteabug) Congratulations, Grnteabug, on a fine first poem on this site, and...
  June 3rd, 2017 22:16
• Exuberance (Augustus) Babies are my favorite people in the world. I miss my volunteering in the...
  June 3rd, 2017 13:34
• Word Wisdom. (Fay Slimm.) I agree that we often are sharing the wisdom of another reality in our...
  June 3rd, 2017 12:15
• AS YET UNWRITTEN (Michael Edwards) Beautiful poem, Michael! Thanks.
  June 3rd, 2017 09:10
• 3:10 A M (Swingline) Enjoyed your cute poem, swingline!
  June 3rd, 2017 09:07
• 10 years Daddy. (Kayweejade) Welcome to MPS, Kay. So sorry for your loss. The pain eventually subsides.
  June 2nd, 2017 19:19
• Breathe (ShannonXx) Nice poem, Shannon, I enjoyed it
  June 2nd, 2017 16:03
• Eternity Set Free (Kurt Philip Behm) Echoes the belief that time is but a construct of this dimension, and does...
  June 2nd, 2017 13:52
• Awayness. (Fay Slimm.) Wow! Maybe someday I can write like that. A jewel, Fay!
  June 2nd, 2017 13:47
• Treasured lust (Thehippiepoet) Welcome to MPS, hippie! I\'ve been the \'older man\', by twenty years. It...
  June 2nd, 2017 13:40
• Back of School. (Garry) Uncommon as it is, your poem appeals to me a great deal, Garry. Well done!
  June 2nd, 2017 10:57
• Thoughts (Puppylove17) Puppy love will pass, you have much to look forward to, P.L.
  June 2nd, 2017 10:52
• Exercise Program (Augustus) Your exercise program wears me out thinking about it, Augustus! Slow down!
  June 2nd, 2017 10:45
• The Note (MusicalRider) If you are still with us ... this too shall pass. Welcome to MPS, M>R>.
  June 2nd, 2017 10:40
• when you love another (Mylittleheart) Very well put together poem, mlh! Enjoyed it thoroughly.
  June 2nd, 2017 10:31
• Tree (Jabberwocky) Powerful piece, J ... Kudos!
  June 2nd, 2017 10:26
• BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I once had an amazing experience with a Great White Owl in the mountains...
  June 2nd, 2017 10:14
• My Love (Grayc8814) Welcome to MPS, grayc! Your poem is too beautiful to be distracted from by...
  June 2nd, 2017 09:55
• Thirty Years Later (Swingline) Beautiful, heart-rendering poem, swingline! I can relate to the experience...
  June 2nd, 2017 09:43
• Worthwhile (Eric) Welcome to MPS, Eric, glad to have you aboard! Keep the good work coming.
  June 1st, 2017 15:57