Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- A Changing Stew (Kurt Philip Behm)
Interesting, isn\'t it, how time has a way of changing how we view the...
June 21st, 2017 10:33 - Take Another Look Around (Edthepoet)
Strong expression on the state of the world, Ed! It is a mess ... but...
June 21st, 2017 10:24 - Sinking [Better Off] (Cara)
Very nice, well written poem. I enjoyed it, Cara.
June 21st, 2017 08:46 - THE SHAMAN\'S HEART (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you all for your kind responses.
June 21st, 2017 08:42 - A Thousand Words (Punisher)
Very well expressed tribute poem, Punisher!
June 20th, 2017 10:05 - Grenfell Tower. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful tribute poem, Goldfinch! Captures the raw truth of this world
June 20th, 2017 09:54 - Transparent (P.X. Vexxus)
Very strong poem with a fine closing stanza! Well done, P.X.
June 20th, 2017 09:24 - Blind (ApolloEnjolras)
Touching poem, Apollo! Thanks for posting.
June 20th, 2017 09:20 - Behind The Mask (Kurt Philip Behm)
Short and sweet...very well done!
June 18th, 2017 10:06 - Woman-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always,...
June 18th, 2017 09:56 - Write You Down (SheWasTheSun)
Brilliant poem, SWTS! A great tribute to your mysterious Love.
June 18th, 2017 09:44 - dessert (Heather T)
I\'m not sure, but I think I\'m too young for this poem. Good write!
June 17th, 2017 18:40 - Small Plague (Augustus)
Enjoyed this subtly expressed ode to nature\'s way. It is so easy to take...
June 17th, 2017 11:30 - \'Escaping from Life\'s Prison. (Goldfinch60)
I agree, Goldfinch ...To thine own self be true, and let the chips fall...
June 17th, 2017 07:17 - lost all hope.... (Wanderlust)
A well presented poetic expression of your sadness, Eddie. Keep writing!
June 16th, 2017 11:11 - Even Between (Baylee)
A lovely, expressive, impactful short poem, Baylee. Kudos!
June 16th, 2017 11:07 - Captive. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity....
June 16th, 2017 11:03 - Reality of War (Poetboy123)
Such is the mad history of man\'s expressing through conflict. Nicely...
June 16th, 2017 10:55 - I just can\'t (Fluatist)
The word \'can\'t\' is but a meaningless, self imposed restriction we...
June 16th, 2017 10:49 - Solution or Truth. (Goldfinch60)
I concur fully with the wisdom of this fine poem, Goldfinch. Why else are...
June 16th, 2017 10:39 - Heartless (P.X. Vexxus)
I must plead ignorance to the history described herein, but that didn\'t...
June 16th, 2017 10:32 - The reunion. (Camille)
Kudos on this deep expression of self in an interesting poetic form,...
June 16th, 2017 10:27 - Blues Poem #11 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Really enjoyed your Blues Poem, Kurt. A unique expression!
June 16th, 2017 10:11 - This is Living (BloodPho3nix)
Well expressed first poem on this site, \'Blood\". Welcome to MPS.
June 15th, 2017 16:48 - In Not Enough (SheWasTheSun)
Deeply felt, well expressed poem, \"Sun\". I, too, look for more.
June 15th, 2017 16:41 - distorted reflections (Poetic distortions)
I like your little poem, mouse! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more...
June 15th, 2017 16:33 - Current Affairs (Augustus)
Well messaged verse, timely spoken. Thank you, Augustus.
June 15th, 2017 10:55 - A LIFE FULLY LIVED (Louis Gibbs)
Many thanks to all for your thoughts and comments.
June 15th, 2017 10:04 - Dementia - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing I can add. My heartfelt sympathy, Goldfinch.
June 15th, 2017 09:38 - Far More. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare...
June 15th, 2017 08:06 - STRINGS (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you one and all for your lovely comments. Here\'s to your favorite...
June 14th, 2017 18:17 - Follow the Sun (Baylee)
A well-versed description of depression, Baylee! At least you remain aware...
June 14th, 2017 14:03 - Auditions for life..Apply within. (Camille)
Profound words, Camille, and well expressed! I love the perspective this...
June 14th, 2017 08:37 - Strange Hobby (Garry)
Halloween every day, I see. Cute poem, Garry.
June 14th, 2017 08:31 - Glass and Stone... (P.H.Rose)
Well expressed message poem, P.H.Rose. Kudos!
June 14th, 2017 08:28 - Lottery (Jabberwocky)
Cute four-line poem, Jabberrwocky! Made me smile.
June 14th, 2017 08:24 - I don\\\\\\\'t like Blue eyes (Joaquin Finn)
I enjoyed this lovely poem, Joaquin. Well done! Welcome to MPS.
June 14th, 2017 08:20 - Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of...
June 14th, 2017 06:51 - My God My Tree (Augustus)
Beautiful poem, Augustus, and it brought back childhood memories. I...
June 13th, 2017 15:51 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
My gratitude for these kind words, everyone. Thanks for your comments.
June 12th, 2017 15:25 - Goodbye (Hali)
Impeccably beautiful poem, Harry! How satisfying to find this jewel today....
June 12th, 2017 14:08 - More than one story (Calbreezy)
I appreciate this exercise in form, a tool not all that many poets employ....
June 12th, 2017 14:03 - The Sky (Navyblue)
I really like your first poem, and look forward to more. Welcome to MPS,...
June 12th, 2017 09:46 - Words of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I Like this poem, it speaks to me. As a matter of fact, I did write a book...
June 12th, 2017 07:58 - Star Eater (Swingline)
Wonderfully amusing poem, swingline! Thanks for sharing.
June 12th, 2017 07:52 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely, colorful imagery. A very pleasant poem. Thank you for sharing,
June 12th, 2017 07:48 - other day gray (Heather T)
Dances on the edge of inscrutable, yet conveys something beautiful. Very...
June 11th, 2017 16:33 - Nature\'s Timepiece - The Garden (Sue.evans)
Beautiful ... the metaphoric passing of time in colors! Really enjoyed...
June 11th, 2017 10:37 - Beyond The Gleam (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
To me, this describes beautifully the journey from ego to self, the...
June 11th, 2017 10:31 - purple. (Ruth Fadairo)
Purple is my favorite color as well, and this poem is a fine tribute one...
June 11th, 2017 10:23 - The art of knowing who you are (Avigail)
Coming into awareness of self is a beautiful process. Congratulations,...
June 11th, 2017 10:16 - Stealing Mountains (Garry)
I like this appealing, well formatted poem, Garry, and look forward to...
June 11th, 2017 10:12 - Storm - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Finally a Haiku that I can fully appreciate. Good work, Goldfinch!
June 11th, 2017 09:58 - midnight mass (Willyweed)
Lovely poem, willyweed. Thanks for sharing it.
June 10th, 2017 19:16 - SOCIETY IS CRACKED (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...)
Strong, well written poem, Rachel. You did yourself proud!
June 10th, 2017 19:12 - sticks, stones, and the futility of fingers (Heather T)
My hope is that this poem provided some release from the experience for...
June 10th, 2017 19:06 - THE GRACE OF GOD (PCC)
Well spoken, PCC! Your poem is very nicely presented. Kudos!
June 10th, 2017 17:22 - Woods On Fire (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Something intriguing and unsettling about the first one, Kurt, but It is...
June 10th, 2017 09:16 - Line-Dancing (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as...
June 10th, 2017 08:50 - Mensa (+3) (Augustus)
Being a lifelong chess player, I\'d have to choose Chess Master as my...
June 10th, 2017 08:41 - But it was not love (Mylittleheart)
Sweet, insightful poem, mylittleheart. Love the phrase, \'intolerable...
June 9th, 2017 18:17 - the kiss (Heather T)
Whew! I need a cold shower! Lovely, sensuous poem, Heather.
June 9th, 2017 16:08 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you all for your valued comments!
June 9th, 2017 16:01 - I’M (Tony36)
This one reminds me of the poem I posted earlier today ... \"The Wisdom Of...
June 9th, 2017 14:10 - Light Each Day (+ 4) (Augustus)
Can\'t decide between Dark Beauty and Bent light as to which is my...
June 9th, 2017 14:03 - Last (Baylee)
Lovely couplet, Baylee!
June 9th, 2017 13:48 - Twins We Pray (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
A beautiful stream of couplets, Kurt! Much enjoyed.
June 9th, 2017 13:38 - I Dont Matter... (Writings From The Unknown13)
It\'s called the journey to self ... discovering who we are. You will get...
June 9th, 2017 13:30 - Teardrops (Sue.evans)
Beautifully painted poem, Sue! I look forward to more.
June 9th, 2017 13:25 - Story of my life (Renzi)
Strong poem, slightly detracted from by a couple of glitches. Do you use...
June 9th, 2017 13:17 - My Memories (Fluatist)
Who would we be without our memories? I don\'t think they come back so...
June 9th, 2017 13:03 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you swingline, outback, and diamond for these kind comments.
June 9th, 2017 11:26 - Answered. (Fay Slimm.)
\"the music of duty\", What a wonderful, descriptive phrase! You have a...
June 9th, 2017 11:22 - You (Krystal Brewington)
Clever poem, Krystal! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more of your work.
June 9th, 2017 11:12 - Scary Night. (Goldfinch60)
The ghost of Halloween lives! Cute poem!
June 9th, 2017 11:09 - What Makes A Poet (Swingline)
A fine tribute to the \"true poet\'s heart\", swingline! Enjoyed your fine...
June 9th, 2017 11:00 - SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6 (Michael Edwards)
Clever, very clever, Michael. I enjoyed!
June 9th, 2017 10:53 - Why Do I Matter ??? (Isabellecov)
Welcome to MPS, Isabellecov. I look forward to more of your work as it...
June 9th, 2017 10:50 - wisp (Heather T)
Beautiful poem, beautifully presented. I found the unrestrained form ...
June 9th, 2017 10:32 - I Miss You (Hannabal)
Nice narrative poem, Hannabal, but I\'ve never been a fan of poems just...
June 8th, 2017 17:11 - The start was the end (Mylittleheart)
Nice example of an (almost) unpunctuated poem. Enjoyed it, mylittleheart!
June 8th, 2017 16:53 - DO YOU COME (Tony36)
I\'m not clear from your Author Comments, is this an original of yours? It...
June 8th, 2017 16:45 - Lymphedema (Augustus)
Maybe there will be a special corner there for poets. Let\'s meet there!...
June 8th, 2017 16:40 - Maybe (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice work, Kurt!
June 8th, 2017 16:34 - Happenings. (Fay Slimm.)
Another beauty, Fay, and I love the square format! Must be the engineer in...
June 8th, 2017 10:45 - Broken (MusicalRider)
Well constructed poem, MusicalRider! Congratulations.
June 8th, 2017 10:37 - Uplifting Sounds. (Goldfinch60)
I was captivated in the video by how unique was the one little boy who...
June 8th, 2017 10:32 - Toxic (Lex)
You have the basics for good poetry not many of the young poets have, a...
June 8th, 2017 09:50 - ON THE PSYCHIATRIST\'S COUCH ! (RAJ NANDY)
Cute poem, thanks for sharing, Raj.
June 8th, 2017 09:41 - An Ode To A River (Ethan)
Much potential here, but I believe your poetry would flow more freely and...
June 7th, 2017 14:51 - Unending Tomorrows (Augustus)
Momentous piece of work, my friend! I agree with Fay, that we must but...
June 7th, 2017 11:02 - My Last Fledgling (Jabberwocky)
Powerful last line! Well done poem, Jabberwocky.
June 7th, 2017 10:41 - Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.)
I love the free-flowing form of your poetry, Fay. This is another beauty!...
June 7th, 2017 10:35 - Dear Derry (P.S)
My only advise, which you asked for, would be to free yourself from the...
June 7th, 2017 10:09 - Max Richter. (Goldfinch60)
Haunting, powerful, captivating piece of music. Thanks for sharing. And...
June 7th, 2017 10:02 - Once upon a time I was emo (Sada_bear)
Well expressed poem, Sada! My preference ... you might want to try...
June 7th, 2017 08:53 - The Green Abode (MaddieJ)
Lovely poem, virago! Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2017 08:44 - Weeds (Wayne E)
Damn those dandelions! Cute poem, Ray.
June 6th, 2017 21:45 - A Peaceful Soul (Imnopoet)
My advice to you, since you did request some, would be the same as to all...
June 6th, 2017 17:01 - Being loved by you was painful. (P.S)
Wonderful poem, P.S! The structure is well presented, and the message well...
June 6th, 2017 16:49
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