Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- First Love (FredPeyer)
You captured the awkwardness of first love beautifully, Fred. Couldn\'t...
August 15th, 2017 07:31 - Love-Tongue. (Fay Slimm.)
A perfection of a poem, Fay, giving tribute to Creator and the exquisite...
August 15th, 2017 07:27 - If Not This........What? (Seeker)
A beautiful, classic poem, George. I especially like the last two lines,...
August 14th, 2017 11:08 - CRAYON ON THE WALL (Lasergraph)
Beautiful portrayal of the cycle of life, Laser! I enjoyed and related to...
August 14th, 2017 08:52 - Withdrawal\'s Lament (Azura Nightsong)
There\'s a theory that all wounds are self-inflicted, as part of learning...
August 14th, 2017 08:38 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight)
\"Time is relative\", and some relatives aren\'t worth our time. Good...
August 14th, 2017 08:32 - The Darkness (Hannah.Almatarneh)
Run, baby, run! You captured the realization of true character very well...
August 14th, 2017 07:16 - Oh please just let it rain (Eduanf)
Depression seems to be rampant among your age group, Eduanf. A sign of the...
August 14th, 2017 07:08 - Memories (Anthony R Chancellor)
Well described process of the mind processing pain and disappointment,...
August 14th, 2017 07:03 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A well done cute one, Briansodes! You caught the lingo beautifully.
August 14th, 2017 06:59 - Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60)
Faith doth have its limits, dothent it. Cute one, Goldie!
August 14th, 2017 06:53 - SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards)
A pleasurable, relaxing read In a tumultuous time, Michael. Thanks for...
August 14th, 2017 06:32 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
A beautiful job of imagining yourself in her shoes Fred ... so well...
August 14th, 2017 06:27 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed, \"As division trembles on time\'s very edge\", nature plods on at...
August 14th, 2017 06:17 - The Girl (CSS20013)
And you are the girl who is a poet. A touching, well expressed first poem...
August 13th, 2017 20:38 - My poetic Side (Accidental Poet)
Your response to Jane caught my eye. First let me say that your poem...
August 13th, 2017 10:41 - fractured picture (Stefan badham)
Insightful and subtle ... an exquisite poem, Stefan!
August 13th, 2017 10:25 - Rain (ItIsI)
A splendid introductory poem, Itisi! Welcome to MPS. Keep them coming.
August 13th, 2017 10:21 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho)
Ah, the mighty seductive power that women possess, against which a man...
August 13th, 2017 10:18 - Fight or Flight (Yosamite)
Your courageous spirit comes through in this very good, well-written poem,...
August 13th, 2017 10:13 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Your poem describes a larger problem in the work force ... machines and...
August 13th, 2017 10:09 - cory (ACS)
A well done tribute poem, ACS. Congrats!
August 13th, 2017 10:01 - Buckle Up (John Prophet)
A lofty goal for humanity you describe ... but then what would we do for...
August 13th, 2017 09:59 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
A whimsical write that brings to mind the aimless drifting of so many...
August 13th, 2017 07:52 - Redefining. (Fay Slimm.)
Your lovely poem radiates tranquility as does the pool, Fay. Thanks for...
August 13th, 2017 07:40 - Ethereal Perception (Kadesh Vega)
A very classical feeling Gothic poem, Kadesh. Well done, I enjoyed it!...
August 12th, 2017 20:47 - Underpinnings (John Prophet)
Brilliant, JG! You capture the essence of this imagined reality succinctly...
August 12th, 2017 19:17 - Michaelmas (AJ)
Your lovely poem envisions a lovely place for us, AJ. Nice work!
August 12th, 2017 19:13 - Seasons (Sugiura Asuna)
Nice little short one, Pinecone! I like!
August 12th, 2017 19:09 - I watched (Mel Marz)
You certainly have the necessary command of the language to be a good...
August 12th, 2017 18:59 - I\'ll be Here (Brie)
You sound like a good friend to have, Brie. Thanks for sharing this fine...
August 12th, 2017 18:56 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck)
A dark review of disasters well stated in your poem, Bibbeck! Strength...
August 12th, 2017 15:04 - Living (FredPeyer)
What ... you couldn\'t pick a simpler theme than the meaning of life? Like...
August 12th, 2017 13:00 - Addict (Crazycatlady)
May you someday find as much satisfaction in solitude, catlady!
August 12th, 2017 12:47 - Ruby Mountain (P.X. Vexxus)
Powerful imagery perfected in this dark poem, P.X. A chilly, chilling...
August 12th, 2017 12:42 - What could have been (Aa Harvey)
It could, and it can ... unless it isn\'t! Such is the crap-shoot that is...
August 12th, 2017 12:37 - Just A Tick In Time (Accidental Poet)
Procrastination is never a waste of time, I propose! That may be why I...
August 12th, 2017 12:32 - Indifference (Jabberwocky)
A feigned, fabricated indifference is a man\'s default defense, as you so...
August 12th, 2017 12:24 - molten silver (Draculazy)
Dark and juicy, this one. I like it. Congratulations, and welcome to MPS!
August 12th, 2017 12:19 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight)
My enemy, my friend, this ego of mine. You serve your purpose in this...
August 12th, 2017 12:16 - here comes the train (Stefan badham)
By virtue of our survival instinct do we all wonder and not act. Well...
August 12th, 2017 12:08 - Drained (Gina~)
I sense an awakening of spirit here. Well expressed, Gina!
August 12th, 2017 11:56 - So Full Of Dreams (Alf W)
You paint a vivid picture here ... one which is a pleasure to share....
August 12th, 2017 11:49 - Situationship (NOX)
Well written, sad, and impactful, Nox. I really like it!
August 12th, 2017 11:46 - WAR (Jamminblu)
Wow! This may be the best description of the folly of war I\'ve ever seen....
August 12th, 2017 11:42 - A Mirror (Kurt Philip Behm)
A strong reprisal poem nicely presented, Kurt! Very well done.
August 12th, 2017 11:37 - Cellblock D (Stephanie91)
A fine introductory poem, Stephanie, and a brave one! You will find...
August 12th, 2017 07:59 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your poem catches the lilt and flavor of the Caribbean exquisitely, Well...
August 12th, 2017 07:49 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review,...
August 12th, 2017 07:43 - Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
I find both form and content quite pleasing, Goldie. Very satisfying to...
August 12th, 2017 07:25 - WHISPERS ACROSS THE PILLOW (Lasergraph)
A truly lovely poem, lg! I\'m sure she will appreciate it. Welcome to MPS!
August 11th, 2017 20:10 - Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer)
I love poems with a happy ending! I\'m sure your granddaughter will like...
August 11th, 2017 20:06 - The sea she came (Shortyb)
A fine introductory poem, Shorty. Keep then coming. Welcome to MPS!
August 11th, 2017 20:03 - My Faith In Season (Kurt Philip Behm)
I\'d settle for Words, Truth, and Space as well. A well stated poem, Kurt!
August 11th, 2017 12:15 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
I think we moved over from the same site when it shut down, orchidee ... a...
August 11th, 2017 11:18 - Is It Worth It? (Edward Charles McDevitt)
I, too, was the sibling who, by default, was the one who took care of our...
August 11th, 2017 11:09 - Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight)
Ah, the tragedy of life\'s disappointments! Cute poem, WBL!
August 11th, 2017 08:02 - Hope (FredPeyer)
One would hope that there is always hope, hopefully. Welcome back, Fred....
August 11th, 2017 07:57 - Laugh In The Face Of Demons (Accidental Poet)
A brilliant dedication poem to a brilliant entertainer/comedian! Well...
August 11th, 2017 07:45 - The End (Jonnyc1)
A worthy presentation of the end of a life, this poem. Well done, jonny!...
August 10th, 2017 15:54 - Why Me? (Danny13)
Some profound thinking here, Danny! A well presented, wise poem of...
August 10th, 2017 15:50 - The Melding (John Prophet)
A brilliant peek ahead, this fine poem! Explorative thinking well...
August 10th, 2017 15:47 - Inaliable Write (LukeCoomer)
Strong and well stated thoughts, Luke! Fortunately we all, in this...
August 10th, 2017 11:06 - The Voice of Heaven (Accidental Poet)
I share the beliefs you express herein completely, AP! Very well described...
August 10th, 2017 10:59 - Creative State (Azura Nightsong)
A stunning description of vision beyond this realm, this particular...
August 10th, 2017 10:55 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight)
The last line reveals your wisdom, WBL. You will be fine, I\'m sure. Good...
August 10th, 2017 10:48 - Irony (Gina~)
You draw an acute difference between functioning and living, Gina. Well...
August 10th, 2017 10:43 - A New Beginning (Shahla Latifi)
This is a beautiful, wise, poetic expression, Shahla. Hope can always be...
August 10th, 2017 10:35 - My Time. (Goldfinch60)
I whole-heartedly agree ... the first couple of hours in the morning are...
August 10th, 2017 09:05 - Life (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A strong, insightful poem for a teen-ager to write. Thanks for sharing it,...
August 10th, 2017 08:54 - War Hero (Allan Fitzgerald)
I wonder how many soldiers who have survived a war, if given the chance to...
August 9th, 2017 18:45 - World of Songs (Poetboy123)
You paint a lovely picture for us, p.b., with this one. Well done!
August 9th, 2017 15:26 - Common Ground (Tony36)
A beautiful sentiment, Tony! Thanks for sharing it.
August 9th, 2017 15:23 - Reply (Gary Edward Geraci)
I love this Buddhist-referencing poem, Gary, and agree whole-heartedly...
August 9th, 2017 15:13 - The Kindest Hearts Bear The Deepest Scars: (Scottcole178)
Your fine poem describes the heart of the poet quite well. We do tend to...
August 9th, 2017 15:05 - \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt)
You are blessed to have such a relationship with your mother, Edward. Fine...
August 9th, 2017 12:00 - Thoughts (Malubotelho)
Your poetic talent is expanding, mb, even as your poems have shrunk. These...
August 9th, 2017 11:56 - Children (John Prophet)
\"What a pivot indeed!\", and what a poem, indeed! You demonstrate great...
August 9th, 2017 08:34 - Killed that one (Dulcinea91)
Abortion must be one of the hardest decisions a woman is sometimes called...
August 9th, 2017 08:26 - Is the Grass Really Greener? (Kbreinich)
Brilliant poem, kb! Well presented and well thought out. Thanks for...
August 9th, 2017 08:21 - Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight)
Now that would be a wonderful gathering, to be sure! I can\'t wait. Save...
August 9th, 2017 08:06 - Child of Night (Azura Nightsong)
Yes, I enjoyed it quite a bit in fact. Very well written piece, Azura!
August 9th, 2017 08:02 - Undiluted. (Fay Slimm.)
The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this...
August 9th, 2017 05:16 - GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I have many Guardian Angels who have saved my ass so many times ... too...
August 9th, 2017 05:08 - Melancholy. (Goldfinch60)
\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of...
August 9th, 2017 05:00 - HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards)
Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have...
August 9th, 2017 04:41 - My Existence (Unwanted666)
A tough entry into this world described herein. Good poem, Miss Vana! No...
August 8th, 2017 16:06 - Sad Life... Not So Sad (ACS)
We all have a bad life or two ... or more ... now and then. Good poem,...
August 8th, 2017 16:02 - Stranger (Thoughtxo)
A good poem about a sad subject, \'thought\'! Welcome to MPS. Keep
August 8th, 2017 15:59 - Future Love (Dangerdave89)
Well done expression of the concept of \'future love\', Danger. Welcome to...
August 8th, 2017 09:53 - It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A most generous tribute to this wonderful family of poets, Edward! It is...
August 8th, 2017 09:41 - LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Cleverly constructed poem, Brian! I enjoyed it, as well as the picture of...
August 8th, 2017 09:30 - Love from a Distance (Simplybeautiful)
A poem of exquisite wisdom well expressed! Congratulations on this beauty,...
August 8th, 2017 09:19 - The Beginning More Important.... (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is a brilliant piece, Kurt! \"The questions more insightful than the...
August 8th, 2017 09:05 - Smudge (Brycycle)
A beautiful, sad poem, Brycycle. I love the line, \"mental plagued...
August 8th, 2017 09:01 - Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight)
Sometimes, rather than try to digest each word or phrase, I just try to...
August 8th, 2017 08:56 - Blue paradise (Malubotelho)
Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.
August 8th, 2017 08:44 - Smothering (Baylee)
A lovely poem with attention to shape ... well done, Nicole!
August 8th, 2017 08:41 - To be a Poet -- Revised (Hboo)
\"To be a poet ... means to speak from the soul\" sums it up beautifully...
August 8th, 2017 08:38 - The Path (WL Schuett)
This is an absolute beauty, WL! Thank you for sharing it with us.
August 8th, 2017 08:33
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