Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• Indifference (Jabberwocky) A feigned, fabricated indifference is a man\'s default defense, as you so...
  August 12th, 2017 12:24
• molten silver (Draculazy) Dark and juicy, this one. I like it. Congratulations, and welcome to MPS!
  August 12th, 2017 12:19
• Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight) My enemy, my friend, this ego of mine. You serve your purpose in this...
  August 12th, 2017 12:16
• here comes the train (Stefan badham) By virtue of our survival instinct do we all wonder and not act. Well...
  August 12th, 2017 12:08
• Drained (Gina~) I sense an awakening of spirit here. Well expressed, Gina!
  August 12th, 2017 11:56
• So Full Of Dreams (Alf W) You paint a vivid picture here ... one which is a pleasure to share....
  August 12th, 2017 11:49
• Situationship (NOX) Well written, sad, and impactful, Nox. I really like it!
  August 12th, 2017 11:46
• WAR (Jamminblu) Wow! This may be the best description of the folly of war I\'ve ever seen....
  August 12th, 2017 11:42
• A Mirror (Kurt Philip Behm) A strong reprisal poem nicely presented, Kurt! Very well done.
  August 12th, 2017 11:37
• Cellblock D (Stephanie91) A fine introductory poem, Stephanie, and a brave one! You will find...
  August 12th, 2017 07:59
• CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your poem catches the lilt and flavor of the Caribbean exquisitely, Well...
  August 12th, 2017 07:49
• Enticing. (Fay Slimm.) Challenging in its fullness to comprehend completely upon initial review,...
  August 12th, 2017 07:43
• Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) I find both form and content quite pleasing, Goldie. Very satisfying to...
  August 12th, 2017 07:25
• WHISPERS ACROSS THE PILLOW (Lasergraph) A truly lovely poem, lg! I\'m sure she will appreciate it. Welcome to MPS!
  August 11th, 2017 20:10
• Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer) I love poems with a happy ending! I\'m sure your granddaughter will like...
  August 11th, 2017 20:06
• The sea she came (Shortyb) A fine introductory poem, Shorty. Keep then coming. Welcome to MPS!
  August 11th, 2017 20:03
• My Faith In Season (Kurt Philip Behm) I\'d settle for Words, Truth, and Space as well. A well stated poem, Kurt!
  August 11th, 2017 12:15
• A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee) I think we moved over from the same site when it shut down, orchidee ... a...
  August 11th, 2017 11:18
• Is It Worth It? (Edward Charles McDevitt) I, too, was the sibling who, by default, was the one who took care of our...
  August 11th, 2017 11:09
• Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight) Ah, the tragedy of life\'s disappointments! Cute poem, WBL!
  August 11th, 2017 08:02
• Hope (FredPeyer) One would hope that there is always hope, hopefully. Welcome back, Fred....
  August 11th, 2017 07:57
• The End (Jonnyc1) A worthy presentation of the end of a life, this poem. Well done, jonny!...
  August 10th, 2017 15:54
• Why Me? (Danny13) Some profound thinking here, Danny! A well presented, wise poem of...
  August 10th, 2017 15:50
• The Melding (John Prophet) A brilliant peek ahead, this fine poem! Explorative thinking well...
  August 10th, 2017 15:47
• Inaliable Write (LukeCoomer) Strong and well stated thoughts, Luke! Fortunately we all, in this...
  August 10th, 2017 11:06
• Creative State (Azura Nightsong) A stunning description of vision beyond this realm, this particular...
  August 10th, 2017 10:55
• Waning Will (WriteBeLight) The last line reveals your wisdom, WBL. You will be fine, I\'m sure. Good...
  August 10th, 2017 10:48
• Irony (Gina~) You draw an acute difference between functioning and living, Gina. Well...
  August 10th, 2017 10:43
• A New Beginning (Shahla Latifi) This is a beautiful, wise, poetic expression, Shahla. Hope can always be...
  August 10th, 2017 10:35
• My Time. (Goldfinch60) I whole-heartedly agree ... the first couple of hours in the morning are...
  August 10th, 2017 09:05
• Life (Edward Charles McDevitt) A strong, insightful poem for a teen-ager to write. Thanks for sharing it,...
  August 10th, 2017 08:54
• War Hero (Allan Fitzgerald) I wonder how many soldiers who have survived a war, if given the chance to...
  August 9th, 2017 18:45
• World of Songs (Poetboy123) You paint a lovely picture for us, p.b., with this one. Well done!
  August 9th, 2017 15:26
• Common Ground (Tony36) A beautiful sentiment, Tony! Thanks for sharing it.
  August 9th, 2017 15:23
• Reply (Gary Edward Geraci) I love this Buddhist-referencing poem, Gary, and agree whole-heartedly...
  August 9th, 2017 15:13
• The Kindest Hearts Bear The Deepest Scars: (Scottcole178) Your fine poem describes the heart of the poet quite well. We do tend to...
  August 9th, 2017 15:05
• \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt) You are blessed to have such a relationship with your mother, Edward. Fine...
  August 9th, 2017 12:00
• Thoughts (Malubotelho) Your poetic talent is expanding, mb, even as your poems have shrunk. These...
  August 9th, 2017 11:56
• Children (John Prophet) \"What a pivot indeed!\", and what a poem, indeed! You demonstrate great...
  August 9th, 2017 08:34
• Killed that one (Dulcinea91) Abortion must be one of the hardest decisions a woman is sometimes called...
  August 9th, 2017 08:26
• Is the Grass Really Greener? (Kbreinich) Brilliant poem, kb! Well presented and well thought out. Thanks for...
  August 9th, 2017 08:21
• Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight) Now that would be a wonderful gathering, to be sure! I can\'t wait. Save...
  August 9th, 2017 08:06
• Child of Night (Azura Nightsong) Yes, I enjoyed it quite a bit in fact. Very well written piece, Azura!
  August 9th, 2017 08:02
• Undiluted. (Fay Slimm.) The mind can become a beast to be mastered. So well described in this...
  August 9th, 2017 05:16
• GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I have many Guardian Angels who have saved my ass so many times ... too...
  August 9th, 2017 05:08
• Melancholy. (Goldfinch60) \"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of...
  August 9th, 2017 05:00
• HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards) Your words compete with the watercolor for the loveliest picture you have...
  August 9th, 2017 04:41
• My Existence (Unwanted666) A tough entry into this world described herein. Good poem, Miss Vana! No...
  August 8th, 2017 16:06
• Sad Life... Not So Sad (ACS) We all have a bad life or two ... or more ... now and then. Good poem,...
  August 8th, 2017 16:02
• Stranger (Thoughtxo) A good poem about a sad subject, \'thought\'! Welcome to MPS. Keep
  August 8th, 2017 15:59
• Future Love (Dangerdave89) Well done expression of the concept of \'future love\', Danger. Welcome to...
  August 8th, 2017 09:53
• It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt) A most generous tribute to this wonderful family of poets, Edward! It is...
  August 8th, 2017 09:41
• LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Cleverly constructed poem, Brian! I enjoyed it, as well as the picture of...
  August 8th, 2017 09:30
• Love from a Distance (Simplybeautiful) A poem of exquisite wisdom well expressed! Congratulations on this beauty,...
  August 8th, 2017 09:19
• The Beginning More Important.... (Kurt Philip Behm) This is a brilliant piece, Kurt! \"The questions more insightful than the...
  August 8th, 2017 09:05
• Smudge (Brycycle) A beautiful, sad poem, Brycycle. I love the line, \"mental plagued...
  August 8th, 2017 09:01
• Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight) Sometimes, rather than try to digest each word or phrase, I just try to...
  August 8th, 2017 08:56
• Blue paradise (Malubotelho) Absolutely beautiful, Malu! Your talent grows consistently.
  August 8th, 2017 08:44
• Smothering (Baylee) A lovely poem with attention to shape ... well done, Nicole!
  August 8th, 2017 08:41
• To be a Poet -- Revised (Hboo) \"To be a poet ... means to speak from the soul\" sums it up beautifully...
  August 8th, 2017 08:38
• The Path (WL Schuett) This is an absolute beauty, WL! Thank you for sharing it with us.
  August 8th, 2017 08:33
• Man in Orange. (Goldfinch60) Not something one sees every day. However, if I were walking down the...
  August 8th, 2017 08:29
• So Much. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully structured, lovely poem, Fay! I love and admire the way you...
  August 8th, 2017 08:14
• Dreamers (Michael Edwards) The watercolor, I guess that is what it is, is absolutely beautiful ... I...
  August 8th, 2017 08:08
• It\'s Monday (WriteBeLight) Your poem brings to mind the saying ... \"Do what you love and you\'ll...
  August 7th, 2017 16:00
• Grow Up (Unique) A beautiful poem, Unique, that stirs sad memories of when my daughter was...
  August 7th, 2017 15:47
• The Stories Flies Tell (RickyMcG) A lovely little \'thought poem\' Ricky. Enjoyed it. Welcome to MPS.
  August 7th, 2017 13:42
• wild horses (Heather T) \"knew when we were hungry we would always have the night\" ... beautiful...
  August 7th, 2017 12:26
• Hats Off. (Fay Slimm.) A lovely tribute to those who keep our world patched together, Fay!
  August 7th, 2017 05:27
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) I, too, like the middle one a lot, but something about the last one really...
  August 7th, 2017 05:15
• What Is Love? (Angelene.nicole) A fine poem on love, Angelene! Welcome to MPS! Share some more.
  August 6th, 2017 14:31
• Lost in the Dark (Jonnyc1) A painful heartfelt poem as your first contribution to MPS. Welcome,...
  August 6th, 2017 14:28
• Unto Forever (DyingDreams) Beautifully expressed poem of remorse, DyingDreams! Congratulations on...
  August 6th, 2017 11:31
• Shadow (Nicholas M. Langford) Ah ... don\'t we all have a shadow, a dark side. Makes us all-the-more...
  August 6th, 2017 11:26
• The Glass Shadow (Brycycle) I really like the \"glass shadow\" metaphor, Brycycle. Well done poem!
  August 6th, 2017 11:23
• Paris (Myself and me) I share your love of this unique city, \'myself\'. Had the pleasure of a...
  August 6th, 2017 11:13
• My unknown lover (Kesha) A sad but beautiful plea, Kesha. Thank you for sharing it with us.
  August 6th, 2017 11:08
• Sunday Morning, 2 a.m. (Allan Fitzgerald) A fine introductory poem, Allan. Welcome to MPS, and I look forward to...
  August 6th, 2017 11:01
• PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine sentiment well expressed, my friend, but if all this came to pass,...
  August 6th, 2017 10:56
• I see (Aa Harvey) You see beyond the illusion that is this world ... congratulations! I...
  August 6th, 2017 10:49
• Right (Baylee) Or perhaps what you describe is a relationship becoming natural,...
  August 6th, 2017 10:44
• Pripyat: City Reverting to Nature (Michael Champion) Nature starts immediately reclaiming whatever man builds. And so it is....
  August 6th, 2017 10:40
• Don’t be so serious, seriously (Avigail) A bit preachy, perhaps, but a good \'advice\' poem, Avigail. Thanks for...
  August 6th, 2017 10:36
• Last Flight (FredPeyer) Nice poem ... love the punch line, Fred! I look forward to your return.
  August 6th, 2017 09:55
• Typical Sunday (Edward Charles McDevitt) So many preachers and priests ... so many perverts! Is there a connection?...
  August 6th, 2017 09:52
• Take One. (Fay Slimm.) Boy, does it ever hit with no compromise! Right in the heart and gut, with...
  August 6th, 2017 08:11
• Sitting at Heavens Door. (Goldfinch60) I, too, was a big fan of jazz in the fifties, and loved Gerry Mulligan. I...
  August 6th, 2017 08:00
• LIMERICK No40 (Michael Edwards) An interesting observation of myself ... the picture is quite disturbing...
  August 6th, 2017 07:44
• The Art of Living (Alissa) A truly beautiful, wisdom-filled poem, BfB! Great understanding of the...
  August 5th, 2017 19:34
• I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt) I think you may have jumped to a conclusion. A response is evoked by...
  August 5th, 2017 15:06
• So-Called Land of The Free (Kimberly Culpepper) Welcome to MPS, Kimberley. I really like this poem, although you might...
  August 5th, 2017 14:52
• Captain Twilley (Nicholas M. Langford) A lovely, sad, tribute to what might have been. Well done, Nick!
  August 5th, 2017 10:13
• Never (FredPeyer) \"Never meant\" to be Human, is what I read herein. Good one, Fred!
  August 5th, 2017 08:42
• SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE (Michael Edwards) A beauty, this one, Michael! The repeating last line is very effective,...
  August 5th, 2017 08:19
• Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) An exquisite rendition of the old phrase; \"Rain, rain, go away. Come...
  August 5th, 2017 08:01
• A Letter You Can Never See (Ettolrahc) A fine poem of dedication to family! Well expressed ... thanks for
  August 4th, 2017 09:34
• Tropical Rain (FredPeyer) You paint us a lovely, wet picture this morning, Fred! It\'s a tough place...
  August 4th, 2017 07:49
• The Graveyard Of Your Heart (Alf W) A stunningly beautiful poem, Alf! Thank you for sharing it.
  August 4th, 2017 07:12
• Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.) You weave a fine tapestry with your words, Fay. I appreciate this poem as...
  August 4th, 2017 07:09
• Dazzling Butterfly (GeraldineTaylor) A charming ode, Geraldine! Thank you.
  August 3rd, 2017 13:17