Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards) A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are,...
  September 11th, 2017 10:28
• From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60) A splendid depiction of your sacred place, Goldie! I had your experience...
  September 11th, 2017 10:17
• Another Day Gone (FredPeyer) Thornton Wilder\'s award winning play \"Our Town\", a production of which...
  September 11th, 2017 10:06
• Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.) Your poem reminds me of growing up in Chicago. These physical embodiments...
  September 11th, 2017 09:47
• () Lucky you ... a second chance for a first love. Enjoyed this one, Santita!
  September 11th, 2017 00:07
• Casualty of Words (Dark_energy) A fine portrayal of the damaging power of words. Well done, d-e!
  September 10th, 2017 07:01
• For the love of Autumn (Dark_energy) Enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a Fall Fling, de. Welcome to MPS!
  September 9th, 2017 10:49
• Innocence (Malmonte) A brilliant and biting depiction of broken trust created by parental...
  September 9th, 2017 08:54
• A THOUSAND WRECKS (Michael Edwards) Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well...
  September 9th, 2017 08:33
• The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60) The muse can be elusive, and the artist can be unfocused, but always the...
  September 9th, 2017 08:25
• Enchantment.. (Fay Slimm.) If only all the world\'s young could enjoy their childhood. We are a long...
  September 9th, 2017 08:09
• Time Prisoner (John Prophet) We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time...
  September 9th, 2017 07:54
• Reality Bites (Mizzjewel) As you observe, so well expressed in this poem, is simply mankind...
  September 8th, 2017 12:21
• GOOD GUYS WON (Lasergraph) A great reflection on the time in our lives that we still knew we were...
  September 8th, 2017 12:13
• Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60) The future, the past, the now ... all the same ... \"simultaneous time\"...
  September 8th, 2017 10:39
• Wordsmith (FredPeyer) You have forged a masterful description of the \'process\' of creating...
  September 8th, 2017 10:22
• Well hello (Renzi) Life has been dull without you, dear Renzi! So glad to see you back. All...
  September 7th, 2017 23:23
• WRITING (Lasergraph) To the author, \"The end\" means, \"What to write next?\' We described,
  September 7th, 2017 08:36
• The Dream (FredPeyer) Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a...
  September 7th, 2017 06:43
• View of God. (Goldfinch60) You\'ve got to love the audacity of a confident young child! Some of the...
  September 7th, 2017 06:36
• LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ! YIN & YANG DOUBLE ETHEREE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) I\'ve experienced Lust at first sight ... Love took a little longer....
  September 7th, 2017 06:30
• Home Hunting (Calling_alaska) Reminds me of the saying; \"We are all alone, together\"....
  September 6th, 2017 09:40
• Her Surface (Baylee) A wise take on first impressions, Nicole. Well done poem! I enjoyed.
  September 6th, 2017 09:27
• Emotion. (Myleealollar1945) I like the affect of the two-word intros to each phrase ... a very...
  September 6th, 2017 09:19
• Being Again, Tested (WriteBeLight) It appears that Mother Nature is becoming more and more impatient with us,...
  September 6th, 2017 08:54
• ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph) Part of my morning ritual, for sure. Good write, lg!
  September 6th, 2017 08:42
• () A dark and intriguing tale you tell, Santita. It held me all the way...
  September 6th, 2017 07:02
• My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60) The promise of new dawns are what keeps hope afloat. Well captured in your...
  September 6th, 2017 06:35
• Ocean (FredPeyer) A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the...
  September 6th, 2017 06:28
• So Met. (Fay Slimm.) Trees are nothing short of engineering marvels, the way that an invisible...
  September 6th, 2017 06:15
• renzi (Dusk arising) I share your concern for Renzi. She is a gifted poet and a very special...
  September 4th, 2017 08:26
• Two into One. (Goldfinch60) I see you are in touch with the dark side we all possess and explore from...
  September 3rd, 2017 10:59
• My Soul (FredPeyer) An interesting word, verisimilitude, used herein from the perspective of...
  September 3rd, 2017 10:55
• Ticking Away. (Fay Slimm.) The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to...
  September 3rd, 2017 10:40
• Lost. (Fay Slimm.) Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood,...
  September 2nd, 2017 09:05
• Getting Older (FredPeyer) \"Marveling at our capacity to stay young\" ... reflects my feelings ...
  September 2nd, 2017 08:47
• Ignorance in Age. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a case of wisdom transplanting knowledge ... congratulations...
  September 2nd, 2017 08:38
• EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards) A splendid saline salute to love for sure, Michael! I could almost feel...
  September 2nd, 2017 08:30
• My Dearest Mother (Elizabeth0967) A lovely tribute poem, Elizabeth! Welcome to MPS.
  September 1st, 2017 18:26
• HEY MATE ~ LET\'S GRADUATE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A well done example of branching out with success! Kudos, Brian.
  September 1st, 2017 07:27
• Choices (FredPeyer) Ah, but what if we Did actually not only choose to live, but also chose...
  September 1st, 2017 06:10
• PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards) A lovely ode to a scam, Michael. Any topic is fair game to the poet!
  September 1st, 2017 05:55
• Year\'s Yield. (Fay Slimm.) Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine...
  September 1st, 2017 05:45
• Entrapment (TN96) You, or your muse who has introduced itself to you this way, have tapped...
  August 30th, 2017 14:42
• THE SEASONS (Michael Edwards) The maestro rests his pen, having completed a masterwork. The effort was...
  August 30th, 2017 11:36
• Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.) An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed...
  August 30th, 2017 11:30
• Panoply and Flair (FredPeyer) Wring the good out of every new day! If only we could remember to do that...
  August 30th, 2017 09:48
• Look Closer (WriteBeLight) Wise advice portrayed here, WBL. I could use a pair of those glasses. But...
  August 30th, 2017 09:06
• ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story) (Lasergraph) Nothing more radiantly beautiful than a little girl greeting her world in...
  August 30th, 2017 08:50
• CNN - Canard News Network (Noquarter4) A fine commentary on the sorry state of slanted, biased \'news\' reporting...
  August 30th, 2017 08:31
• Death Walks Beside (Kurt Philip Behm) A fine philosophical poem here, Kurt! I really appreciated it ... well
  August 29th, 2017 15:42
• MEMORIES OF YOUTH (Lasergraph) We lived across the street from a huge cornfield and would get lost in it,...
  August 29th, 2017 09:18
• Meadow Meanderings (Orchidee) Your poem paints a relaxing picture for us, orchidee. Thanks for sharing...
  August 29th, 2017 09:13
• The Fog Did Its Job (WriteBeLight) Glad your rear end found the motivation to face the day ... or would that...
  August 29th, 2017 08:56
• Questions (Sara Storkson) A heart-felt expression with attention to form. Well done poem, Sara!
  August 29th, 2017 07:47
• My angel, she bleeds. (George C. Biester) Intriguing poem, TRO! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more.
  August 29th, 2017 07:30
• drive (Tjfly3) Always glad to welcome new poets on MPS, TJ! Thank you for this first...
  August 29th, 2017 07:24
• Life as a foster kid (Beyondvoid) Well expressed and heartfelt poem, bv! Glad you are aboard MPS. I look...
  August 29th, 2017 07:20
• Searching (FredPeyer) The journey to self is a difficult and non-ending one. You describe it...
  August 29th, 2017 07:12
• Enmeshed. (Fay Slimm.) Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an...
  August 29th, 2017 07:02
• INSPIRATION (Lasergraph) At times it seems my muse is asleep. I just keep hounding her until she...
  August 28th, 2017 20:53
• Marriage (FredPeyer) Having tasted the bliss of a happy marriage, I can certainly relate to...
  August 28th, 2017 20:48
• coffee creamer (Clark) I love this oblique one, Clark. Very erotic it is!
  August 28th, 2017 13:17
• Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60) The fear in the heart of so many today as they look upon the world we\'ve...
  August 28th, 2017 09:07
• Heart to heart ❤️ (Malubotelho) A well decorated poetic tribute, Malu! Lovely.
  August 28th, 2017 08:58
• MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Fine tribute to a wonderful site! Well spoken, Brian.
  August 28th, 2017 08:50
• Conceding. (Fay Slimm.) Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a...
  August 28th, 2017 08:30
• Wander While You Wait (WriteBeLight) If you notice my mind wandering around your neighborhood, please send it...
  August 28th, 2017 08:19
• One Day... (Diamond gal) A sad but well written tribute to your dog, Diamond. Welcome to MPS! Hope...
  August 27th, 2017 18:39
• Shadow (BloodPho3nix) It sounds like a moment of escape from ego to me, which is a rare and...
  August 27th, 2017 10:55
• Ubuntu (Poetic Dan) I love, \"I am because we are\"! A true expression of our human identity....
  August 27th, 2017 10:43
• Silence (Femlord) Silence ... the most sacred sound of all! My sentiments exactly, Femlord....
  August 27th, 2017 10:25
• Thunder in Summer (Flowers under the sun) I share your feelings about thunder storms, well expressed in your poem....
  August 27th, 2017 07:40
• A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell! (Sue.evans) A beautifully painted poem of the season, and with rhyme so subtle it...
  August 27th, 2017 07:29
• Said and Unsaid. (Goldfinch60) A keen and accurate observation here, Goldie. Well put!
  August 27th, 2017 07:14
• Love Haiku (FredPeyer) Best definition of love I\'ve seen! Kudos, Fred.
  August 27th, 2017 07:05
• Life (Malubotelho) Words of wisdom concisely stated! Well done, Malu!
  August 26th, 2017 12:48
• One part of the fractal (Poetic Dan) \"When we are one, we are whole.\" A powerful philosophical statement!...
  August 26th, 2017 09:42
• The Boy of Gold and Stone. (Niallprideaux) Powerful metaphor, Niall! Creative and well done.
  August 26th, 2017 09:33
• SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) I loved these one-liners, Michael, as well as the explosive art piece!
  August 26th, 2017 07:50
• The Lone Tree. (Goldfinch60) To me, nothing conveys wisdom like an old tree. Well portrayed herein,...
  August 26th, 2017 07:47
• Another Beautiful Day in Paradise (FredPeyer) Well written description of a couple of working girls plying their trade,...
  August 26th, 2017 07:38
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) A classic poem, classically formed with expanding phrases. An artistic...
  August 26th, 2017 07:28
• Let me uncomplicate us (Sara Storkson) You express the beauty and passion of young love extremely well,...
  August 25th, 2017 11:28
• Enamored (Malubotelho) Phew! Who needs porn with poetry like this? So well done, Malu.
  August 25th, 2017 11:21
• The Price Of Revenge (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Oh, how cynically true, Kurt! Good poem ... sad observation of revenge.
  August 25th, 2017 09:31
• Grow A Pear (WriteBeLight) Are we talking balls or boobs here? I guess either would apply to your...
  August 25th, 2017 09:21
• Twin Flame (HEIDIKINS) Congratulations on your good fortune in finding such a compatible mate,...
  August 25th, 2017 07:39
• Art is Feeling. (Goldfinch60) And I would add \'architect\' to that list of artists. Maybe throw in...
  August 25th, 2017 07:28
• The Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) The ordered form this poem takes adds to the calm it exudes. A pleasant...
  August 25th, 2017 07:14
• When We Were Nearly Five (StevieC) Shattered dreams ... scuttled plans. A sad component of our experiences in...
  August 24th, 2017 15:48
• The candy girl (Malubotelho) Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl...
  August 24th, 2017 10:19
• THE LETTER (Michael Edwards) An enchanting piece, nicely presented visually. Who could ask for more?...
  August 24th, 2017 08:07
• A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer) Your poem describes well the process of surrendering our minds to our...
  August 24th, 2017 08:00
• Questions. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful lament of lost love, Fay. Nothing is more crushing to the...
  August 24th, 2017 07:35
• HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Intriguingly shaped poem, Brian! To me, as you have probably observed from...
  August 23rd, 2017 06:57
• Naked (Malubotelho) It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being...
  August 22nd, 2017 16:03
• Birthday (FredPeyer) Happy belated birthday, Fred! May you reach your goal of 100.
  August 22nd, 2017 08:48
• Insignificance. (Goldfinch60) Considering that the \"vastness of nature\" and the \"infinite universe\"...
  August 22nd, 2017 08:42
• Read Rightly. (Fay Slimm.) The need for conflict has always been an integral element in the plot of...
  August 22nd, 2017 08:14