Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer)
A great illustration of the power of perspective, Fred, and the fact that...
September 20th, 2017 14:48 - MORE MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
What a great pick-up line that last one would make! Love it, Michael.
September 20th, 2017 14:43 - Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60)
Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.
September 20th, 2017 14:34 - Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.)
Congratulations on tapping into the \'oneness\' of all living things, ...
September 20th, 2017 14:29 - Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a blessed life you\'ve led, Goldie ... troubles and all. Nice...
September 19th, 2017 08:01 - Spain (Renzi)
Party on, girl!
September 18th, 2017 15:37 - THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph)
Interesting how such an early \'clean energy device\' has been...
September 18th, 2017 15:34 - The Gambler (FredPeyer)
A tough life-lesson well described in this one, Fred! Kudos.
September 18th, 2017 13:59 - I\'ll Be Seeing You. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, music has the power to speak our hearts for us, to connect with our...
September 16th, 2017 08:57 - Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60)
Those biscuit-eaters are the sneakiest of all ghosts! I\'d call on the...
September 15th, 2017 10:32 - My Baby Girl (FredPeyer)
You speak well for all of us who are privileged to be the fathers of...
September 15th, 2017 10:23 - WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards)
Of the two experiments, the painting is my favorite, Michael. I find it...
September 15th, 2017 10:11 - The water and the rock (Malubotelho)
I dig rocky love affairs. Enjoyed this one, Malu!
September 14th, 2017 16:08 - Something Greater. (Fay Slimm.)
The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining...
September 14th, 2017 08:14 - VISIONS OF SLUMBER (Lasergraph)
Sleep, our respite from this dark dream. Dreams, our contact with reality....
September 13th, 2017 12:17 - Ocean Swim (FredPeyer)
A great way to replicate the thrilling escape from gravity we experience...
September 13th, 2017 10:05 - What is Time? (Goldfinch60)
So glad you find time to share your poetry, Goldie! Always enjoyable.
September 13th, 2017 09:54 - How Many. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme...
September 13th, 2017 09:47 - A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards)
Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
September 13th, 2017 00:08 - Watch Me (Joy Fetherolf)
A spunky one, indeed! Well done, and welcome to MPS!
September 12th, 2017 16:34 - Thought (FredPeyer)
I had a fleeting thought on a clever response to this poem ... but, alas!...
September 12th, 2017 08:09 - THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards)
All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
September 12th, 2017 08:06 - What is the Time? (Goldfinch60)
Time serves to cue the players when to interact on the stage of life. Good...
September 12th, 2017 07:54 - OUR AUTUMN HOME (Lasergraph)
A fine poetic description of my favorite season as well. Thanks, lg!
September 11th, 2017 15:59 - Collateral of War (0ustpokenh3art)
If we analyze it too closely, the game might be over ... but that\'s not a...
September 11th, 2017 12:41 - Right Before (GMO1)
A stark poetic reminder of a stark and terrible day. Good write, GMO!...
September 11th, 2017 11:46 - SHE SOUGHT HER LIBERTY (Michael Edwards)
A strong poem, left open to interpretation as good poems often are,...
September 11th, 2017 10:28 - From Corncrake to God. (Goldfinch60)
A splendid depiction of your sacred place, Goldie! I had your experience...
September 11th, 2017 10:17 - Another Day Gone (FredPeyer)
Thornton Wilder\'s award winning play \"Our Town\", a production of which...
September 11th, 2017 10:06 - Winter-Clad. (Fay Slimm.)
Your poem reminds me of growing up in Chicago. These physical embodiments...
September 11th, 2017 09:47 - ()
Lucky you ... a second chance for a first love. Enjoyed this one, Santita!
September 11th, 2017 00:07 - Casualty of Words (Dark_energy)
A fine portrayal of the damaging power of words. Well done, d-e!
September 10th, 2017 07:01 - For the love of Autumn (Dark_energy)
Enjoyed your poetic portrayal of a Fall Fling, de. Welcome to MPS!
September 9th, 2017 10:49 - Innocence (Malmonte)
A brilliant and biting depiction of broken trust created by parental...
September 9th, 2017 08:54 - A THOUSAND WRECKS (Michael Edwards)
Interesting format, this intriguing poetic visual you\'ve created. Well...
September 9th, 2017 08:33 - The Artist Within. (Goldfinch60)
The muse can be elusive, and the artist can be unfocused, but always the...
September 9th, 2017 08:25 - Enchantment.. (Fay Slimm.)
If only all the world\'s young could enjoy their childhood. We are a long...
September 9th, 2017 08:09 - Life in the Rearview Mirror 101 (Accidental Poet)
Perspective is always clearer in the rear-view mirror. Well stated, AP!
September 9th, 2017 07:58 - Time Prisoner (John Prophet)
We find ourselves in different versions of consensus-realities over time...
September 9th, 2017 07:54 - Reality Bites (Mizzjewel)
As you observe, so well expressed in this poem, is simply mankind...
September 8th, 2017 12:21 - GOOD GUYS WON (Lasergraph)
A great reflection on the time in our lives that we still knew we were...
September 8th, 2017 12:13 - Star Trek Now. (Goldfinch60)
The future, the past, the now ... all the same ... \"simultaneous time\"...
September 8th, 2017 10:39 - Wordsmith (FredPeyer)
You have forged a masterful description of the \'process\' of creating...
September 8th, 2017 10:22 - Well hello (Renzi)
Life has been dull without you, dear Renzi! So glad to see you back. All...
September 7th, 2017 23:23 - WRITING (Lasergraph)
To the author, \"The end\" means, \"What to write next?\' We described,
September 7th, 2017 08:36 - This Side of Tomorrow (Accidental Poet)
\'Memories of tomorrow\' ... speaks to the concept of \'simultaneous...
September 7th, 2017 08:27 - The Dream (FredPeyer)
Did you have to wash the sheets? A hot one here, Fred! Enjoyed being a...
September 7th, 2017 06:43 - View of God. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve got to love the audacity of a confident young child! Some of the...
September 7th, 2017 06:36 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ! YIN & YANG DOUBLE ETHEREE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'ve experienced Lust at first sight ... Love took a little longer....
September 7th, 2017 06:30 - Home Hunting (Calling_alaska)
Reminds me of the saying; \"We are all alone, together\"....
September 6th, 2017 09:40 - Her Surface (Baylee)
A wise take on first impressions, Nicole. Well done poem! I enjoyed.
September 6th, 2017 09:27 - Emotion. (Myleealollar1945)
I like the affect of the two-word intros to each phrase ... a very...
September 6th, 2017 09:19 - Being Again, Tested (WriteBeLight)
It appears that Mother Nature is becoming more and more impatient with us,...
September 6th, 2017 08:54 - ODE\' TO COFFEE (Lasergraph)
Part of my morning ritual, for sure. Good write, lg!
September 6th, 2017 08:42 - ()
A dark and intriguing tale you tell, Santita. It held me all the way...
September 6th, 2017 07:02 - My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60)
The promise of new dawns are what keeps hope afloat. Well captured in your...
September 6th, 2017 06:35 - Ocean (FredPeyer)
A strikingly captured expression of the majesty of ocean waves upon the...
September 6th, 2017 06:28 - So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
Trees are nothing short of engineering marvels, the way that an invisible...
September 6th, 2017 06:15 - renzi (Dusk arising)
I share your concern for Renzi. She is a gifted poet and a very special...
September 4th, 2017 08:26 - Two into One. (Goldfinch60)
I see you are in touch with the dark side we all possess and explore from...
September 3rd, 2017 10:59 - My Soul (FredPeyer)
An interesting word, verisimilitude, used herein from the perspective of...
September 3rd, 2017 10:55 - Ticking Away. (Fay Slimm.)
The transition from dream-world to this world is momentarily confusing to...
September 3rd, 2017 10:40 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Life\'s journey ... from the innocence and exploration of childhood,...
September 2nd, 2017 09:05 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
\"Marveling at our capacity to stay young\" ... reflects my feelings ...
September 2nd, 2017 08:47 - Ignorance in Age. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a case of wisdom transplanting knowledge ... congratulations...
September 2nd, 2017 08:38 - EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards)
A splendid saline salute to love for sure, Michael! I could almost feel...
September 2nd, 2017 08:30 - My Dearest Mother (Elizabeth0967)
A lovely tribute poem, Elizabeth! Welcome to MPS.
September 1st, 2017 18:26 - HEY MATE ~ LET\'S GRADUATE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A well done example of branching out with success! Kudos, Brian.
September 1st, 2017 07:27 - Choices (FredPeyer)
Ah, but what if we Did actually not only choose to live, but also chose...
September 1st, 2017 06:10 - PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards)
A lovely ode to a scam, Michael. Any topic is fair game to the poet!
September 1st, 2017 05:55 - Year\'s Yield. (Fay Slimm.)
Nothing like a garden to gauge the seasons for us. Enjoyed this fine...
September 1st, 2017 05:45 - Entrapment (TN96)
You, or your muse who has introduced itself to you this way, have tapped...
August 30th, 2017 14:42 - That Maternal Touch (Accidental Poet)
A fine tribute to the mythical mother of pure, unselfish love....
August 30th, 2017 11:55 - THE SEASONS (Michael Edwards)
The maestro rests his pen, having completed a masterwork. The effort was...
August 30th, 2017 11:36 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
An elegant expression of the natural rhythm of nature, Fay. Well observed...
August 30th, 2017 11:30 - Panoply and Flair (FredPeyer)
Wring the good out of every new day! If only we could remember to do that...
August 30th, 2017 09:48 - Look Closer (WriteBeLight)
Wise advice portrayed here, WBL. I could use a pair of those glasses. But...
August 30th, 2017 09:06 - ANOTHER TIME (Grand daughter story) (Lasergraph)
Nothing more radiantly beautiful than a little girl greeting her world in...
August 30th, 2017 08:50 - CNN - Canard News Network (Noquarter4)
A fine commentary on the sorry state of slanted, biased \'news\' reporting...
August 30th, 2017 08:31 - Death Walks Beside (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fine philosophical poem here, Kurt! I really appreciated it ... well
August 29th, 2017 15:42 - MEMORIES OF YOUTH (Lasergraph)
We lived across the street from a huge cornfield and would get lost in it,...
August 29th, 2017 09:18 - Meadow Meanderings (Orchidee)
Your poem paints a relaxing picture for us, orchidee. Thanks for sharing...
August 29th, 2017 09:13 - The Fog Did Its Job (WriteBeLight)
Glad your rear end found the motivation to face the day ... or would that...
August 29th, 2017 08:56 - Questions (Sara Storkson)
A heart-felt expression with attention to form. Well done poem, Sara!
August 29th, 2017 07:47 - My angel, she bleeds. (George C. Biester)
Intriguing poem, TRO! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more.
August 29th, 2017 07:30 - drive (Tjfly3)
Always glad to welcome new poets on MPS, TJ! Thank you for this first...
August 29th, 2017 07:24 - Life as a foster kid (Beyondvoid)
Well expressed and heartfelt poem, bv! Glad you are aboard MPS. I look...
August 29th, 2017 07:20 - Searching (FredPeyer)
The journey to self is a difficult and non-ending one. You describe it...
August 29th, 2017 07:12 - Enmeshed. (Fay Slimm.)
Some of the world\'s greatest engineers, indeed, and I speak as an...
August 29th, 2017 07:02 - INSPIRATION (Lasergraph)
At times it seems my muse is asleep. I just keep hounding her until she...
August 28th, 2017 20:53 - Marriage (FredPeyer)
Having tasted the bliss of a happy marriage, I can certainly relate to...
August 28th, 2017 20:48 - coffee creamer (Clark)
I love this oblique one, Clark. Very erotic it is!
August 28th, 2017 13:17 - Is there no hope? (Goldfinch60)
The fear in the heart of so many today as they look upon the world we\'ve...
August 28th, 2017 09:07 - Heart to heart ❤️ (Malubotelho)
A well decorated poetic tribute, Malu! Lovely.
August 28th, 2017 08:58 - MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fine tribute to a wonderful site! Well spoken, Brian.
August 28th, 2017 08:50 - Born To Be Driven (Accidental Poet)
A classic for sure, the Cuda! Brings huge bucks on the auction block...
August 28th, 2017 08:45 - Conceding. (Fay Slimm.)
Sensing and surrendering to the vastness of the universe displayed in a...
August 28th, 2017 08:30 - Wander While You Wait (WriteBeLight)
If you notice my mind wandering around your neighborhood, please send it...
August 28th, 2017 08:19 - One Day... (Diamond gal)
A sad but well written tribute to your dog, Diamond. Welcome to MPS! Hope...
August 27th, 2017 18:39 - Shadow (BloodPho3nix)
It sounds like a moment of escape from ego to me, which is a rare and...
August 27th, 2017 10:55
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