Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Do we act like robots? (Avigail)
I can believe that we attract everything that happens to us. Good food for...
June 25th, 2017 13:51 - Hurt (Duckykingy)
I like the advice you gave yourself in the last stanza ... \"Move on, it...
June 25th, 2017 12:07 - THE ARTIST RESPONDS (Michael Edwards)
I agree with Renzi\'s comment!
June 25th, 2017 11:54 - GOD KNOWS ME ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And what we make of ourselves is our gift to the world, as well. Would you...
June 25th, 2017 11:43 - Tears of Agony (P.X. Vexxus)
A noble poetic expression, P.X. Well written!
June 25th, 2017 11:35 - From Here to There. (Goldfinch60)
A fine definition of a Friend, Goldfinch! They are gold.
June 25th, 2017 11:30 - The heart of all things (David)
A beautiful, philosophical, interpretation of the unending role our heart...
June 25th, 2017 11:18 - All Scepters Disowned (Kurt Philip Behm)
Memory of truth to one\'s self ... those are the jewels in your crown? Do...
June 25th, 2017 10:54 - Gary (Renzi)
Brilliant comedic contribution, Renzi! I like your Irish style!
June 25th, 2017 10:22 - Mirror (FredPeyer)
How refreshing to read a well written poem with both structure and...
June 25th, 2017 10:12 - The Victim (Sue.evans)
A fine commentary on an age old problem ... Bullying. Well done, Sue!
June 25th, 2017 09:59 - Memories (McKinsey Rose Lynn)
But then, who would we be without our memories? Such is the tragedy of...
June 25th, 2017 09:55 - In love (Meno1972)
In the mean time, why not just enjoy it? Thanks for sharing, Meno.
June 25th, 2017 09:50 - From The Roof Tops (Edthepoet)
An insightful exploration into self, and what does and doesn\'t matter....
June 25th, 2017 09:45 - Elysium (Niallprideaux)
A fine poem that focuses on what seems to be a plague among so many today...
June 25th, 2017 09:40 - Crescented Magic. (Fay Slimm.)
Your poem requires much of nature\'s gift. I tend to settle on simple...
June 25th, 2017 08:04 - Shyless. (Fay Slimm.)
Another beauty, Fay. The hits keep coming!
June 24th, 2017 18:03 - Too old? (FredPeyer)
Well spoken on behalf of us \"men of a certain age\"! Personally, I...
June 24th, 2017 12:35 - ENGLISH SUMMER FRUIT ~ PERFECTION ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for introducing me to English haiku, Briansodes. Delicious poem!
June 24th, 2017 11:02 - Ink Into Wine (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely couplets and a fine poem. Thanks for posting, Kurt!
June 24th, 2017 10:30 - Never Again (Baylee)
A well stated \'shorty\' ... thanks for sharing, Nicole!
June 24th, 2017 10:16 - My dear brother (Borys)
I lost two brothers myself and can relate to this fine poem. Nice job,...
June 24th, 2017 10:05 - The survivors (Emile Dubois)
Well stated, insightful message poem. Kudos, Emile!
June 24th, 2017 09:51 - Ruins? (Garry)
Your few well chosen words speak volumes ... paint a nostalgic picture. I...
June 24th, 2017 09:42 - Parliamentary Truth. (Goldfinch60)
A strong commentary which, sadly, is generally true. I do sense a change...
June 24th, 2017 08:50 - I Am Always By Your Side (Krystal Brewington)
An obviously heartfelt expression of love. Can\'t have too much of that!
June 24th, 2017 08:42 - Domestic Terrorism (Wackyheartache4)
A sad but true commentary, well expressed. Thanks for sharing, Wacky
June 24th, 2017 08:37 - IN GRANDEUR (Michael Edwards)
A lovely portrait this poem creates! Thank you for sharing it with us,...
June 24th, 2017 08:32 - Half the world enslaved (Emile Dubois)
Sounds like you\'ve been peeking behind the curtain, Emile. Good poem!
June 23rd, 2017 21:24 - Degenerate (BloodPho3nix)
But consider ... what if it isn\'t over when you check out of this...
June 23rd, 2017 21:21 - What if you can? (Roudan)
I love your last stanza in particular. Good poem, well done, roudan!
June 23rd, 2017 21:13 - Acting as hypocrites (Malubotelho)
Just who IS the person behind the mask?? Well expressed poem that touches...
June 23rd, 2017 13:06 - Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer)
You are a fortunate man, and a wise one to appreciate what you have while...
June 23rd, 2017 13:01 - Flourish (Baylee)
Another of my favorite short poems! Well written, Baylee.
June 23rd, 2017 11:33 - Its Scar Now Yours To Love (Blues Poem #12) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Yes, we all have our scars to learn to love. I appreciated this piece
June 23rd, 2017 10:28 - Extortion 17. (Lars Persson)
A noble, moving, tribute poem, Lars. Appreciated it!
June 23rd, 2017 10:20 - INNES\'S YAK 1961VXC (Terry Collett)
I love this whimsical piece, Terry. Very well done!
June 23rd, 2017 09:44 - Trust in Nature. (Goldfinch60)
A fine narrative, Goldfinch! I enjoyed experiencing it with you.
June 23rd, 2017 09:36 - Salvation (P.X. Vexxus)
A well written tribute poem, P.X.!
June 23rd, 2017 09:27 - Scars (MelanieA)
A fine tribute to the love, acceptance, and compassion we all seek, and...
June 23rd, 2017 09:24 - Bin Day (Sue.evans)
A very clever and most enjoyable poem, sue!
June 23rd, 2017 09:18 - spirit over matter (Avigail)
That still, small voice within contains much wisdom ... if only we\'d...
June 23rd, 2017 09:16 - Informed. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful tribute to the most beautiful of men ever to walk our way!...
June 23rd, 2017 09:09 - ICE CREAM ROUNDABOUT (Michael Edwards)
Cute presentation, made me smile. A good way to start a day!
June 23rd, 2017 08:56 - Channel (Jabberwocky)
I like this one a lot, Jabberwocky, and can certainly relate!
June 22nd, 2017 10:01 - Demon (Renzi)
Beautifully expressed, impactful poem, Renzi! Good work.
June 22nd, 2017 09:56 - Grandmother White..... (P.H.Rose)
I, too, share your fascination with clouds ... beautiful creations,...
June 22nd, 2017 09:53 - These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU! (FredPeyer)
Charming poems, Fred. Certainly worth sharing!
June 22nd, 2017 09:29 - DESERTED GRAVEYARD (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful piece, Michael! Thanks for sharing it.
June 22nd, 2017 09:25 - In love with me? (Anora_aragon)
I agree with Fred, the shape of the poem captured me as much or more than...
June 22nd, 2017 09:19 - Our Chicago (Naya13)
Brutally frank picture of my old home town! Born there. Good write, Naya.
June 21st, 2017 18:38 - A BAD REVIEW (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you for your unique comments, Outback!
June 21st, 2017 15:09 - Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer)
I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!
June 21st, 2017 11:57 - FESTIVAL OF ST ANTHONY - LISBON (Michael Edwards)
Makes me want to go see Lisbon! Fine write, Michael.
June 21st, 2017 11:53 - Darkest corners (Renzi)
Excellent poem, Renzi! Short and to the point. Well done!
June 21st, 2017 11:35 - Just write. (Bella cortez)
The best poetry comes from going inside any portraying the feelings...
June 21st, 2017 11:32 - Whirlpools. (Cara)
I love a good short poem, and this is such a one. Good write, Cara!
June 21st, 2017 11:01 - A Changing Stew (Kurt Philip Behm)
Interesting, isn\'t it, how time has a way of changing how we view the...
June 21st, 2017 10:33 - Take Another Look Around (Edthepoet)
Strong expression on the state of the world, Ed! It is a mess ... but...
June 21st, 2017 10:24 - Sinking [Better Off] (Cara)
Very nice, well written poem. I enjoyed it, Cara.
June 21st, 2017 08:46 - THE SHAMAN\'S HEART (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you all for your kind responses.
June 21st, 2017 08:42 - A Thousand Words (Punisher)
Very well expressed tribute poem, Punisher!
June 20th, 2017 10:05 - Grenfell Tower. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful tribute poem, Goldfinch! Captures the raw truth of this world
June 20th, 2017 09:54 - Transparent (P.X. Vexxus)
Very strong poem with a fine closing stanza! Well done, P.X.
June 20th, 2017 09:24 - Blind (ApolloEnjolras)
Touching poem, Apollo! Thanks for posting.
June 20th, 2017 09:20 - Behind The Mask (Kurt Philip Behm)
Short and sweet...very well done!
June 18th, 2017 10:06 - Woman-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
As always, you make me work at an understanding of your poems. As always,...
June 18th, 2017 09:56 - Write You Down (SheWasTheSun)
Brilliant poem, SWTS! A great tribute to your mysterious Love.
June 18th, 2017 09:44 - dessert (Heather T)
I\'m not sure, but I think I\'m too young for this poem. Good write!
June 17th, 2017 18:40 - Small Plague (Augustus)
Enjoyed this subtly expressed ode to nature\'s way. It is so easy to take...
June 17th, 2017 11:30 - \'Escaping from Life\'s Prison. (Goldfinch60)
I agree, Goldfinch ...To thine own self be true, and let the chips fall...
June 17th, 2017 07:17 - lost all hope.... (Wanderlust)
A well presented poetic expression of your sadness, Eddie. Keep writing!
June 16th, 2017 11:11 - Even Between (Baylee)
A lovely, expressive, impactful short poem, Baylee. Kudos!
June 16th, 2017 11:07 - Captive. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve done it again, Fay, with this captivating expression of captivity....
June 16th, 2017 11:03 - Reality of War (Poetboy123)
Such is the mad history of man\'s expressing through conflict. Nicely...
June 16th, 2017 10:55 - I just can\'t (Fluatist)
The word \'can\'t\' is but a meaningless, self imposed restriction we...
June 16th, 2017 10:49 - Solution or Truth. (Goldfinch60)
I concur fully with the wisdom of this fine poem, Goldfinch. Why else are...
June 16th, 2017 10:39 - Heartless (P.X. Vexxus)
I must plead ignorance to the history described herein, but that didn\'t...
June 16th, 2017 10:32 - The reunion. (Camille)
Kudos on this deep expression of self in an interesting poetic form,...
June 16th, 2017 10:27 - Blues Poem #11 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Really enjoyed your Blues Poem, Kurt. A unique expression!
June 16th, 2017 10:11 - This is Living (BloodPho3nix)
Well expressed first poem on this site, \'Blood\". Welcome to MPS.
June 15th, 2017 16:48 - In Not Enough (SheWasTheSun)
Deeply felt, well expressed poem, \"Sun\". I, too, look for more.
June 15th, 2017 16:41 - distorted reflections (Poetic distortions)
I like your little poem, mouse! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more...
June 15th, 2017 16:33 - Current Affairs (Augustus)
Well messaged verse, timely spoken. Thank you, Augustus.
June 15th, 2017 10:55 - A LIFE FULLY LIVED (Louis Gibbs)
Many thanks to all for your thoughts and comments.
June 15th, 2017 10:04 - Dementia - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing I can add. My heartfelt sympathy, Goldfinch.
June 15th, 2017 09:38 - Far More. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, another one of your finest, as only you can compose. You have a rare...
June 15th, 2017 08:06 - STRINGS (Louis Gibbs)
Thank you one and all for your lovely comments. Here\'s to your favorite...
June 14th, 2017 18:17 - Follow the Sun (Baylee)
A well-versed description of depression, Baylee! At least you remain aware...
June 14th, 2017 14:03 - Auditions for life..Apply within. (Camille)
Profound words, Camille, and well expressed! I love the perspective this...
June 14th, 2017 08:37 - Strange Hobby (Garry)
Halloween every day, I see. Cute poem, Garry.
June 14th, 2017 08:31 - Glass and Stone... (P.H.Rose)
Well expressed message poem, P.H.Rose. Kudos!
June 14th, 2017 08:28 - Lottery (Jabberwocky)
Cute four-line poem, Jabberrwocky! Made me smile.
June 14th, 2017 08:24 - I don\\\\\\\'t like Blue eyes (Joaquin Finn)
I enjoyed this lovely poem, Joaquin. Well done! Welcome to MPS.
June 14th, 2017 08:20 - Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
I see we are both expressing on the lighter side today. Nice example of...
June 14th, 2017 06:51 - My God My Tree (Augustus)
Beautiful poem, Augustus, and it brought back childhood memories. I...
June 13th, 2017 15:51 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
My gratitude for these kind words, everyone. Thanks for your comments.
June 12th, 2017 15:25 - Goodbye (Hali)
Impeccably beautiful poem, Harry! How satisfying to find this jewel today....
June 12th, 2017 14:08 - More than one story (Calbreezy)
I appreciate this exercise in form, a tool not all that many poets employ....
June 12th, 2017 14:03 - The Sky (Navyblue)
I really like your first poem, and look forward to more. Welcome to MPS,...
June 12th, 2017 09:46
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