Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Twin Fusion (Kurt Philip Behm)
We write for the future by invoking the past so they are joined (or
January 18th, 2021 21:21 - Memory Trace (Arobot)
I enjoyed both poems, arobot. Well penned!
January 18th, 2021 21:17 - Sunday Ways (Fay Slimm.)
You really are a wordsmith, Fay. Wonderful description of a lazy Sunday,...
January 18th, 2021 21:14 - Ears, pulsing beat (L. B. Mek)
L.B. I do like how you build up to the beginning of play, the pressure,...
January 18th, 2021 21:10 - Revelation - Trumpets One To Four (Orchidee)
orchie, I am not really getting it, but your writing as always is good!
January 18th, 2021 21:06 - In Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, this is such a wonderful tribute to your late wife. I know you two...
January 18th, 2021 21:01 - Running on the World (Robert Southwick Richmond)
I never ran along lac leman, but plenty of times along lake Zuerich, once...
January 17th, 2021 16:18 - A Piece of Cake (FredPeyer)
Thanks Neville, and I am glad you told me how to walk. My wife hardly...
January 17th, 2021 12:42 - The Apparition (Samer Amin)
Love is all there is! Well done Samer.
January 17th, 2021 12:38 - Comfort In Sadness (Canticle)
Well penned, Henry!
January 17th, 2021 12:36 - DAYS END (Michael Edwards)
Those were the days! Now it\'s stick it into the microwave!
January 17th, 2021 12:35 - Snooker Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t have a clue about snooker or pool or whatever.....but I do like...
January 17th, 2021 12:33 - Birdspeak (Neville)
Every morning there is so much noise from the tree beside my...
January 17th, 2021 12:26 - Omniscient Observations (Orchidee)
Well penned, orchi!
January 17th, 2021 12:23 - Could, Would n Should (Suresh)
Well done, short and to the point.
January 17th, 2021 12:21 - A Winter Morn (Alan .S. Jeeves)
I very much enjoyed this read, Alan. Well done!
January 17th, 2021 12:20 - 4 AM (John Prophet)
Well penned, John. Never thought about 4am this way since at that time I...
January 17th, 2021 12:14 - Flashpoint (Kurt Philip Behm)
What I like about your poems Kurt is that they make me think.
January 17th, 2021 12:07 - High Tea @ Low Tea (Arobot)
Nice arobot, that\'s why I like coffee!
January 17th, 2021 12:01 - who are we (FredPeyer)
Thanks Andy! And does the Universe care about that little speck?
January 17th, 2021 11:59 - who are we (FredPeyer)
Thanks Orchie, and you are absolutely right!
January 16th, 2021 14:09 - The Glorious Triumph (Samer Amin)
Samer, this is what life and love is all about!
January 16th, 2021 14:08 - Discovery (Julie B)
Well said Julie. You should see the night sky here in Hawaii! Wonderful,...
January 16th, 2021 14:07 - Laughter Acrostic, (Goldfinch60)
You are right Andy, laughter is so important, especially the ability to...
January 16th, 2021 14:05 - A Simple Life (Davefmus)
Well done Davefmus. Even feels a bit like a country song.
January 16th, 2021 14:03 - Looking To The Lamb (Orchidee)
Orchie, the last time I was \"Looking to the Lamb\" was right before...
January 16th, 2021 13:59 - RAIN (Michael Edwards)
You are really getting the hang of that haibun format, Michael. Well done.
January 16th, 2021 13:58 - Life is a risk, get over it! (Poetic Dan)
I understand you well P D. We haven\'t seen our kids and grand-kids for a...
January 16th, 2021 13:55 - no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising)
D A, I think you outdid yourself with this excellent poem! Well Done.
January 16th, 2021 13:50 - Two Hopes for Thee (Neville)
Very well said, Neville!
January 16th, 2021 13:48 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
Well written, Dave. You drew me in and I could feel the cold. Kudos!
January 16th, 2021 13:45 - Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2 (Nafis Light)
Sometimes you find your muse in the most unlikely places!
January 16th, 2021 13:35 - Writing Back – To All of You...Page 1 (Nafis Light)
You\'re welcome, and THANK YOU!
January 16th, 2021 13:34 - Trust Fund (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well said, Kurt, as usual!
The older I get the more I realize that the...
January 16th, 2021 13:32 - The Poet\'s Ploy (Kevin Michael Bloor)
That is exactly what we all are trying to do, Kevin. Well said.
January 12th, 2021 13:01 - Words (Classicmister)
A wonderful description of the wonder of books! You nailed it,...
January 12th, 2021 12:58 - Cafe Conversations (Classicmister)
very clever, well written, fun to read, and uplifting as well.
I do like...
January 12th, 2021 12:55 - REMEMBERED (Michael Edwards)
Michael, the heck with all the technical interpretations. I just love your...
January 9th, 2021 15:11 - Just a clip or is it? believe what you wish (Poetic Dan)
I like this one P D! Maybe the world IS spinning faster. It seems to me...
January 9th, 2021 15:09 - Maybe I Am Old. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, you are not getting old, you are getting ripe.
January 9th, 2021 15:06 - Where ? (Julie B)
You are not only heard, you are read too! Wonderful writing that makes one...
January 9th, 2021 15:02 - Realise (Julie B)
The perfect read for one of \"those\" days! Well written Julie!
January 9th, 2021 15:00 - The Back Side (Kurt Philip Behm)
Good ones, Kurt! I too laid out these traps, but as with everything else,...
January 9th, 2021 14:56 - existence (Arianna Smith)
Arianna, I am glad you exist and hopefully keep on existing, that way we...
December 30th, 2020 16:58 - Enforcement (Fay Slimm.)
So well written, Fay! As the brothers Grimm said a long time ago: Der...
December 30th, 2020 16:56 - River of thoughts to an ocean of dreams (Poetic Dan)
I like your poem, P D, and I think it sounds much nicer to say that I am...
December 30th, 2020 16:52 - Who Else? (Msa)
if this doesn\'t get his/her attention, nothing will! Well written!
December 30th, 2020 16:45 - One Fry Short (Jerry Reynolds)
good one, Jerry!
December 30th, 2020 16:42 - A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
And the same to you and yours, my MPS friend! Mele Kalikimaka!
December 23rd, 2020 10:43 - Faith Through Fears (Orchidee)
Very well penned, orchie! It is all about faith isn\'t it?
December 23rd, 2020 10:41 - Love Through The Pages (Clara)
You do have a way with words, Clara. Beautiful poem!
December 23rd, 2020 10:38 - The Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written, Fay. We should stop more often to smell the roses.
December 23rd, 2020 10:36 - Our Relief (Clara)
Clara, your eloquent words express the meaning of \'making love\'...
December 22nd, 2020 11:32 - Killing People! (Goldfinch60)
Andy, there are smart people and there are stupid people. There are good...
December 21st, 2020 12:43 - Smile (Hpoetry)
eli, thank goodness you were not too weak to write about it. Well done!!!
December 21st, 2020 12:35 - Fearless (Alta H Mabin)
Perfectly expressed, Alta! Here comes the queen, and don\'t you dare to...
December 20th, 2020 17:35 - Dandelion haiku (Robert Southwick Richmond)
Robert, I am not a technical writer, I just know what I like. And I do...
December 20th, 2020 12:10 - I LOVE ME (Shearonder1987)
Shearonder, Robert and Orchie are right, it is a little hard to read. But...
December 20th, 2020 12:07 - Gender Equality and F*ck the Patriarchy (Maria_)
Maria, when you are right, you are right! Well said.
December 20th, 2020 12:03 - New Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
Orchi, I don\'t have a clue about meters, 8-7, 15-21, or any other...
December 20th, 2020 12:01 - A PAIR OF ANTIQUES (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
your sense of humor does light up this site!
December 20th, 2020 11:57 - Strange Lady. (Goldfinch60)
Good one Andy! I guess since she recognized you, robbing a bank with that...
December 20th, 2020 11:55 - Her Ride (Goddess of the Mist)
Am so glad I came across your Haiku. Incredible picture, beautiful words!
December 20th, 2020 11:49 - Love\'s Regret (Kurt Philip Behm)
Two more good ones, Kurt!
December 19th, 2020 20:16 - You (Stephanieh1996)
Stephanie, my heart goes out to you. This is something no parent should...
December 19th, 2020 20:06 - Weak for your mind (Shearonder1987)
Shearonder, you said it well. Intellectual love can be intoxicating.
December 19th, 2020 12:27 - pomegranate (Tylerintheclouds)
Well said Tyler! The mind is a curious thing. While reading your poem an...
December 19th, 2020 12:24 - Lovesick lines composed on a rainy day (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Well written, Kevin, one can feel the pain.
December 19th, 2020 12:19 - Angelic Alighting (Orchidee)
Orchi, I can see you are getting ready for Christmas!
December 19th, 2020 12:12 - Death Is A Moment. Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Well said, Andy! Just like crossing a threshold. It only takes a moment.
December 19th, 2020 12:11 - Twin Flame (Malayzia)
Well written, Malayzia. Like that expression \'twin flame\' to maybe...
December 19th, 2020 11:55 - One Phone Call Away (Rebecca Anne)
Nowadays everybody seems to be on the phone 24/7, but are we telling our...
December 19th, 2020 11:50 - Night Necklaces (Dlherrmann)
dl, really like the \'necklaces\' comparison. Well written!
December 19th, 2020 11:46 - Hey you, Senryu (Rebecca Anne)
Well written, Rebecca!
December 18th, 2020 22:16 - Love (Msa)
Well written msa, and there will come a time when you will spell the word,...
December 18th, 2020 22:13 - Be Proud of Being Called Old. (Trenz Pruca)
I like your poem, Trenz, but you forgot when...
- sex is only a futile...
December 18th, 2020 22:08 - Battling Diversity (Harry Atkinson)
Nicely said, Harry, art has no limitations indeed, and neither does your...
December 18th, 2020 21:59 - Value of respect (Shearonder1987)
Well written Shearonder. Sounds like superman or superwoman though. Easier...
December 18th, 2020 21:56 - El Essentia (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Time x Time = Time2
Square root of Time2 = Time
Just kidding around....
December 18th, 2020 21:53 - Web (John Prophet)
What a great description of the world-wide web. You nailed it John!
December 18th, 2020 21:41 - Laurelled Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Well said, Kevin! Nice pic too!
December 18th, 2020 21:37 - Winter Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Beautifully said, Jerry. Brings back memories from the time I lived in...
December 18th, 2020 21:34 - Soulless (Jaayx3)
Well written, Jaay, and the last line says it all.
December 18th, 2020 21:33 - Fusion inspired to no longer survive (Poetic Dan)
P D, my dance card still has some open dates. You are welcome to that...
December 18th, 2020 21:22 - Bethlehem Birth (Orchidee)
Looks like you are finished with your ranting and back to hymning! Well...
December 18th, 2020 20:58 - Kept Away? (Goldfinch60)
We live in troubled times Andy. I don\'t want to visit anybody, I don\'t...
December 18th, 2020 20:55 - Dark Love (Clara)
Very well written Clara, very compelling. I am wondering if you are...
December 18th, 2020 20:42 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 9 (Michael Edwards)
Thank you so much Michael for this wonderful watercolor. Absolutely love...
December 18th, 2020 20:27 - The Lyric\'s Unborn (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful Kurt, I like both of them. And I think we all should be more...
December 17th, 2020 21:40 - nails (Tylerintheclouds)
Love everything about this poem. The words and the layout. Well done!
December 17th, 2020 15:02 - Barbara\'s Garden (Jerry Reynolds)
Jerry, I do like the \'pardon of spring\'
Well written!
December 17th, 2020 15:01 - Farewell to Stromness. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, your poem drew me in just like the music did. Well done!
December 17th, 2020 13:12 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 8 (Michael Edwards)
Good one Michael, and I do like your painting too. But throw in another of...
December 17th, 2020 13:07 - Hello There (Molly Eli)
Aloha Molly, welcome to MPS. Nice writing! There is an old joke: If you...
December 17th, 2020 13:01 - Mary (Tayama)
Very well said, Tayama, but sad. There is not much anyone can say that...
December 16th, 2020 14:21 - Changing the Ending. (Goldfinch60)
Could have, should have, would have... we all go through that. But you are...
December 16th, 2020 12:13 - THE CHIC MURRAY COLLECTION 7 (Michael Edwards)
So, you\'re an archer with a boiled neck now?
December 16th, 2020 12:10 - Timeless Not Temporal (Orchidee)
And the writer of this hymn will be a poet laureate one day!
December 16th, 2020 12:08 - Changing times & still a need to rhyme! (Poetic Dan)
Three kids and I only slapped one of them once after he said something bad...
December 16th, 2020 12:04 - Hmmm (Sylviasearcher)
A great write, sylvia, it is still rambling through my mind after reading...
December 16th, 2020 12:00
« Return to the profile of FredPeyer