Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Clash (John Prophet)
Biology indeed! Feelings generated by brain action based on hormones and...
October 3rd, 2019 18:23 - How dare you? (Sindhuja)
You say it as it is. We need more of you!
October 3rd, 2019 18:20 - The Rainbows Answer. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, looks like you did find the answer! What was the question again?
October 3rd, 2019 18:16 - Perfect Imperfections (Neville)
Since my wife is Chinese I tend to look at the epicanthic fold as a sign...
October 3rd, 2019 18:14 - love is the kindling (Jon Nakapalau)
A great shortie, Jon. Love it!
October 3rd, 2019 18:10 - Temporary nothing (Vanessa wallace)
In my humble opinion, the fact that you write, and how you write about...
October 3rd, 2019 18:08 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
This is an absolute gem, Fay!
October 3rd, 2019 18:04 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Never played croquet, never played golf either, but you make it sound...
October 3rd, 2019 18:03 - Ask, Seek, Knock (Orchidee)
Was asking for and seeking a hymn poem.....found it!
Another good one,...
October 3rd, 2019 18:02 - UNDER THE WEATHER? (Michael Edwards)
Sage advice from the master!
October 3rd, 2019 17:40 - Broken Dreams (Clara)
Haunting, mesmerizing, a gem!
I cannot imagine how hard it must be to...
October 3rd, 2019 17:39 - Seed (John Prophet)
Indeed, nothing is as it seems. Well written!
September 28th, 2019 16:31 - Girl, Your Charming Beauty (Brooklyn6timesplus)
This must be one classy woman. Well written.
September 28th, 2019 16:29 - The Zipless Fuck (FredPeyer)
I came across this quote by Erica Jong and just had to write something!
September 28th, 2019 16:29 - Help Never Forgotten. (Goldfinch60)
Paying forward is the way to go. You nailed it Goldie!
September 28th, 2019 14:52 - Acorn Valley (Poetic Dan)
\'Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage\'
I...
September 28th, 2019 14:50 - Angels in Disguise (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Never thought of myself as an angel, but your poem changed my mind. :-)
September 28th, 2019 14:46 - Golden Gathering (Orchidee)
Thanksgiving is just around the corner. A timely and well written reminder...
September 28th, 2019 14:44 - Chesnuts And Red Wine. (Kevin browne)
Great poem, Kevin. Can\'t wait for the chestnuts and the wine....
September 28th, 2019 14:42 - Ancient love (Alta H Mabin)
No matter how ancient, once love is in your heart, it stays. I like your...
September 28th, 2019 14:39 - Namaste (Clara)
And I bow to the divine in you!
Very well written.
September 28th, 2019 14:37 - Destiny Astride (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love that first one, especially the Greek mythology reference.
September 28th, 2019 14:31 - The Wild Gypsy (Thewayiwrite)
If it ain\'t a two-way street, it ain\'t nothing.
Another good write,...
September 28th, 2019 14:23 - different (Thewayiwrite)
Great poem! Reminds me a bit of the 60\'s Hippie movement where everybody...
September 28th, 2019 14:21 - So. (Goldfinch60)
So, finally somebody wrote about it!
September 27th, 2019 02:28 - Fight or Flight (Suicidekitten)
A sad poem, but I see power in it, the power to overcome. Keep on writing!
September 26th, 2019 21:17 - Serenity (Clara)
Well written, Clara. Love that last line!
September 26th, 2019 21:14 - Temples (IndisClaire)
Very powerful writing with a great ending.
September 26th, 2019 21:11 - Praise (Thewayiwrite)
A very intriguing poem and well written!
September 26th, 2019 21:07 - Letter to the Priviledged (SerenWise)
Really like your poem, SW. Powerful writing.
September 26th, 2019 21:04 - Summer feelings (Marijoy)
Your poem shows me again how easy we can get lost in nature\'s beauty.
September 26th, 2019 17:02 - The Child Who Stold My Heart (Jane Frye)
Nice, Jane. I have six grand-kids and they are all angels while they are...
September 26th, 2019 17:00 - Uncontained (Poetic Dan)
It\'s great to be a father, isn\'t it?
Beautiful baby and the writing...
September 26th, 2019 16:53 - First & Last (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
What held me captive were not orphaned moments, but your writing!
September 26th, 2019 13:03 - Breathe (Alta H Mabin)
Alta, thank you!
It is 8am here and your poem is exactly what I needed...
September 26th, 2019 13:01 - When the ship goes down (Aa Harvey)
Aa, this is the Titanic of poems! I like the way you wrote this.
September 26th, 2019 12:59 - Stones Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay,
the colloquialism was lost on me, but even though, I truly enjoyed...
September 26th, 2019 12:57 - Pensive Prosperings (Orchidee)
Good write, Orchi! You really should put them all in a book.
September 26th, 2019 12:53 - No Longer Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
The sadness of a disappointing night is hanging between your lines. Ah...
September 26th, 2019 12:49 - THE END YEARS (Michael Edwards)
This beautiful poem spoke to me. You are preaching to a believer.
September 26th, 2019 12:47 - Comfort (Marijoy)
Once you find that inner peace, everything changes.
Well written.
September 25th, 2019 13:47 - The Crossing (Clara)
I like this one. Sometimes we just have to let go.
September 25th, 2019 13:45 - Life Journey (Renu)
You say it well, the world is full of surprises, some good, some bad. We...
September 25th, 2019 13:40 - Crystal clear (Poetic Dan)
Love that last line. Well done, P D.
September 24th, 2019 13:04 - You May Go Through A Struggle (Brooklyn6timesplus)
You are right and said it well.
September 24th, 2019 12:52 - You (Clara)
Even though I am not religious, this beautifully written poem, and I mean...
September 24th, 2019 12:33 - Void (Clara)
Sounds like you have your own black hole. I do like the way you write!
September 24th, 2019 12:27 - the wall around your heart (Jon Nakapalau)
Jon you say it well. Too often all we see in another person is that wall...
September 24th, 2019 12:18 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
What I find most sad in this poem is how that self-assured, relaxed and...
September 24th, 2019 12:14 - No Longer In Doubt (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm)
And I am no longer in doubt your are a great writer!
September 24th, 2019 12:06 - Waiting (Alta H Mabin)
Great Haiku. Today I didn\'t have to wait for the rain, it started even...
September 23rd, 2019 19:53 - Placed in your hand (Poetic Dan)
Lovely poem, Dan. Make sure you keep all your poems so your child can one...
September 23rd, 2019 19:51 - Why Do You Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for a beautiful poem, Goldfinch! You said it well!
September 23rd, 2019 19:47 - I made a vow (Alta H Mabin)
Are you saying that opposites attract?
Beautiful poem!
September 23rd, 2019 19:45 - Absentia (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
#3 explains perfectly why I stay clear of politics!
#1 usually happens...
September 23rd, 2019 19:42 - The beauty in pain (Alta H Mabin)
I do like your poem. True beauty comes from the inside. The beauty emerges...
September 23rd, 2019 19:37 - Acceptance. (Goldfinch60)
Fully agree with you Goldfinch! But sometimes it is hard to accept people...
September 20th, 2019 02:12 - Presenting Praises (Orchidee)
And you Orchie, also bear a kidnly heart! Thanks for the write!
September 20th, 2019 02:11 - Kintsugi (金継ぎ) (SerenWise)
Beautiful writing. I like the jigsaw parable.
September 20th, 2019 01:42 - Scars of Hope (WL Schuett)
Great poem. I heard that scars make you stronger. Not so sure about that...
September 20th, 2019 01:37 - PEGGITY PEG (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful abstract! But you got me with the word \'peggity\'. Have no clue...
September 20th, 2019 01:31 - To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin)
This one took my breath away! Thanks for the \'inhale...exhale\' lines!
September 20th, 2019 00:56 - My son, Jaden (Alta H Mabin)
After three kids and now six grand children I agree with you one 100%....
September 20th, 2019 00:50 - je t\'aime (Alta H Mabin)
Et moi j\'aime ton poeme!
September 20th, 2019 00:48 - Perky pyramids (Alta H Mabin)
Alta, your short poem really got me thinking. Maybe I am overthinking...
September 20th, 2019 00:47 - Midnight Ride (CindyB)
Great writing Cindy! A midnight ride to nowhere indeed.
September 20th, 2019 00:36 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
Thanks Dusk!
Once in a while I get sentimental. This was one of these...
September 20th, 2019 00:33 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
Love the painting! And the poem ain\'t bad either! :-)
Never was on...
September 20th, 2019 00:31 - All Was Right. (Goldfinch60)
So beautiful, Orchie! We know the angels are there, but getting a sign...
September 20th, 2019 00:28 - Revival Request (Orchidee)
Orchi, you nailed it!
September 20th, 2019 00:27 - Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
You do have a way with words, Fay. Beautiful opening and I also like that...
September 20th, 2019 00:26 - Pillar in my world (Poetic Dan)
A new baby is just about the most wonderful thing in the world, and you...
September 20th, 2019 00:23 - Days Of Reflection. (Kevin browne)
Had to read it twice. Great writing!
September 20th, 2019 00:20 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising)
You gotta have faith! I do like your poem.
September 20th, 2019 00:18 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
Aloha Michael,
I guess you do need help. :-) Reminds me of an old song...
September 18th, 2019 20:45 - Light After The Darkness (Meg)
Aloha Meg,
You are so right. One thing I learned in my many years on this...
September 18th, 2019 20:24 - Outs. (Fay Slimm.)
Aloha Fay,
I love my sunrises here in Hawaii (the sunsets too!), but...
September 18th, 2019 20:18 - Three Parables. (Goldfinch60)
Aloha Goldfinch,
just wanted to let you know that I still enjoy your...
September 18th, 2019 20:15 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
Aloha Orchidee,
made a little time to drop in once again and just had to...
September 18th, 2019 20:13 - Verbal Malice (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Great writing, Kurt, as always!
September 18th, 2019 16:07 - Your Soul\'s Release (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
So many intriguing questions! Yes to everything except the last stanza!...
March 4th, 2018 00:25 - On The Line (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm)
You are an incredibly gifted writer, Kurt. Your poems are a pleasure to...
March 3rd, 2018 17:32 - Death is Overrated (A Humorous Short Story) (FredPeyer)
Thank you skye! There is always a first, isn\'t there?
March 3rd, 2018 00:56 - Death is Overrated (A Humorous Short Story) (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much m&m! Yes, math is important and the fun part with...
March 2nd, 2018 13:58 - WOULD SHE SURVIVE ? (Michael Edwards)
Michael, in your answer to Goldie you mentioned the word \'masorchistic\',...
March 2nd, 2018 01:40 - Circles in the Pool. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poem, Goldie, it really got me thinking. Maybe what we have to...
March 2nd, 2018 01:35 - Dancing in the Kitchen With the Day (Lorna)
What a wonderful poem! I wonder if anybody in the world ever wrote...
March 2nd, 2018 01:32 - Priest, Judge, King Prophecy (Orchidee)
Well done, orchie. This one looks like it was not easy to write.
February 26th, 2018 19:08 - The Beginning Of The End (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, amazing read, but after I finished reading I was dizzy! :-)
February 26th, 2018 15:22 - In Defense of the Realm (Lorna)
Lorna, this is a great poem. So many people are exactly like that and you...
February 26th, 2018 05:14 - The Painting of Love (Goldfinch60)
I admire the painting and love the poem. My daughter went through some...
February 26th, 2018 05:09 - A WOMAN OF DIGNITY (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully written, Michael. But she does sound a little bit stuck up. Or...
February 26th, 2018 03:04 - Quarry (Edthepoet)
Well written, Ed.
February 25th, 2018 19:24 - Eliminate Don’t Fake (Gina~)
Gina, your well written poem touches on some deep truth. We all see the...
February 25th, 2018 19:20 - Forgive Me, I Beg (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sad and regretful, touching on something not many people want to talk...
February 25th, 2018 15:01 - Stealing Looks (Accidental Poet)
Without all the confusion, hurt, happiness, love, emotions, and fears of...
February 25th, 2018 14:54 - LOVE\'S GLOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Love, fire, heat, warmth, glow....they all go together and you presented...
February 25th, 2018 14:36 - The Renaissance Lover (Lorna)
You and Kat are early risers, and I am staying up late. But before I turn...
February 25th, 2018 04:38 - The evil that wakes you (Jooles)
Great little write, Jooles! The last time I visited with my grandkids, got...
February 25th, 2018 04:30 - Roaming around (Poetic Dan)
Nicely written with quite a bit of meaning.
February 25th, 2018 04:27
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