Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• B of E #17: when she walked it was a saunter (Frank Prem) Absolutely mesmerizing and beautiful, Frank. Reading it I could SEE that...
  February 25th, 2018 04:07
• Communion Commitment (Orchidee) Bread and wine, ever asked yourself why they don\'t serve sherry in
  February 25th, 2018 03:53
• The Intensity of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Sad, but true, Goldie! As time goes on the intensity will get louder and...
  February 25th, 2018 03:51
• FOG (Michael Edwards) Beautiful writing again, Michael. Makes me remember the foggy days in...
  February 25th, 2018 03:48
• Loneliness (Myself and me) Sometimes no matter what we do does not feel right, as you so eloquently...
  February 25th, 2018 03:44
• OMNIBUS ~ NO FUSS ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) These buses are fun. There are a lot of double-deckers in Waikiki. Never...
  February 25th, 2018 03:30
• Flame Of Faith (Orchidee) Faith is all you need. In your case, faith in your God, for others it may...
  February 25th, 2018 03:25
• Dancing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) You are not only a good writer, Goldie, you are an incredible guy....
  February 25th, 2018 03:14
• Dragons fight (Jooles) Where do I sign up? At the dragon lair? Read it twice, am ready to breath...
  February 25th, 2018 03:11
• RISING PAIN (Michael Edwards) Don\'t believe everything you hear, it might pain you.....as perceived by...
  February 25th, 2018 03:02
• Given Words (Kurt Philip Behm) This poem looks simple, but each stanza is filled with meaning hinted at...
  February 25th, 2018 02:56
• Oh, Wolf (Queer-with-a-pen) I like this poem, especially the last stanza!
  February 24th, 2018 15:13
• Time to enter not just look (Poetic Dan) That harmony is what we all seek! Nicely written, PD!
  February 24th, 2018 15:11
• Absence of Truth (Nicholas Browning) We ARE hideous! Very imaginative poem, great writing. Love that image of a...
  February 24th, 2018 15:02
• STILL CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful and imaginative writing, Fay! Love that last stanza!
  February 24th, 2018 14:30
• Compassionate Charis (grace) (Orchidee) Well done (again), Orchie! We\'ve got some quiet hills here. They gotta be...
  February 24th, 2018 14:28
• ONE CUBE OR TWO ? A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very well done, Brian, love both the picture and the poem!
  February 24th, 2018 14:25
• The Man in the Mirror. (Goldfinch60) Goldie, this is a beautiful tribute to your dad. Yes he does live on...
  February 24th, 2018 14:12
• Having To Let You Go (Lorna) Lorna, your poem is a gem. It is filled with gentleness, love, and regret....
  February 24th, 2018 14:06
• The Dance (Cynthia) By the time you get this comment, Cynthia, your dance is either in full...
  February 24th, 2018 13:53
• BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards) I keep on fighting for my breath and you keep on walking! Looks like we...
  February 24th, 2018 13:45
• Little Lost Love (Queer-with-a-pen) I like the way you structured this poem and the way you use the boots as a...
  February 24th, 2018 13:29
• My story (warning it’s long) (Lost-but-not-broken17) Quite a story! I do hope that all the worst part of your life is over now...
  February 23rd, 2018 20:42
• The Cycle (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes, Kurt, everything goes around in circles, and you said it very...
  February 23rd, 2018 17:22
• Not in Sync (FredPeyer) Thanks AP, actually, when I wake up in the morning and I am still...
  February 23rd, 2018 17:06
• Missing You (A__pott) Good poem and you finish with a great line!
  February 23rd, 2018 17:04
• Time For Battle. (Goldfinch60) You have your Pyracantha, I have my Bougainvillea! Same fight! You wrote a...
  February 23rd, 2018 16:57
• TRUE HISTORY (Michael Edwards) Oh, I agree so much with you here, Michael. If we look at documented...
  February 23rd, 2018 16:50
• Memories Flee (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) While I like all four, \'Memories flee\' is my favorite. So well written!
  February 23rd, 2018 16:44
• I’m sorry (A__pott) Sometimes not knowing why is worse than the loss. Sometimes there is no...
  February 23rd, 2018 16:28
• Shame And Doubt (Christina8) We\'ve got more sun and warm weather here than we can handle, so I\'m...
  February 21st, 2018 20:30
• Don\'t Be Surprised (Skyebellasario) This is a beautifully written declaration of revolution! And you are the...
  February 21st, 2018 11:11
• Double Edged Sword. (Kevin browne) I like both, title and poem! What I get from your poem is that just about...
  February 21st, 2018 10:49
• INVENTION. (Fay Slimm.) And I thought all I am doing is simply putting words on paper. But you...
  February 21st, 2018 10:44
• SALUKI ~ A Dog for all Seasons ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice one, Brian! And the picture is gorgeous.
  February 21st, 2018 10:38
• Deity Designings (Orchidee) Orchie, and blessings to you too!
  February 21st, 2018 10:36
• Dispatcher - Table Down! (Lorna) Lorna, you just made my day! While all stanzas are good, I especially like...
  February 21st, 2018 10:32
• LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards) Thank you so much, Michael, I got exactly four (4) smiles, so you should...
  February 21st, 2018 02:02
• The Devil\'s Throne (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm) All I can say, Kurt, great writing!
  February 21st, 2018 01:58
• Madonna\'s Last Hymn (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Love your poem, Kurt, but it makes me think. How many \'lifelines\' do we...
  February 21st, 2018 01:56
• God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60) I do love your conversations with God, Goldie! You bring up a serious...
  February 20th, 2018 21:57
• Seriously (A__pott) Alex, it seems as if you wrote this poem about me, or for me. It fits so...
  February 20th, 2018 21:45
• The Great Poetry Or the Highest Part of Life (Mottakeenur Rehman) Well written. Like the line \'I often hear the tunes of poetry\'. Poetry...
  February 20th, 2018 21:41
• SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Love the whole poem, Fay, but that last stanza is pure magic and delight!
  February 19th, 2018 12:14
• Skiing for Life. (Goldfinch60) Beautifully said, Goldie! And may that one tree, the one that attracts...
  February 19th, 2018 12:09
• A Wish Unfulfilled (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm) Both are amazing poems, Kurt. Especially the first one made me think. As I...
  February 19th, 2018 12:05
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) What is amazing is not only this poem, but when you say you will do...
  February 19th, 2018 11:59
• Untitled (Its Raskolnikov) You\'re not gonna die, your writing makes you immortal!
  February 19th, 2018 11:56
• Always trying to learn more (Poetic Dan) Agree with poetboy5454! Your writing is getting better and better as well!
  February 19th, 2018 11:49
• A Lakota Mothers Prayer (+5) (Kurt Philip Behm) \'Wana hin gle\' is such a beautifully written Indian tale! Reminded me a...
  February 19th, 2018 11:42
• 21 again?! (Orchidee) I\'ll send over some pretty hula girls to get you leied!!! And before you...
  February 19th, 2018 11:30
• Laptop Man. (Goldfinch60) That\'s good one Goldie. Reminds me of that question how can one tell...
  February 18th, 2018 23:06
• MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards) The shorter they are the harder they are to write. But you mastered the...
  February 18th, 2018 23:03
• Wisdom\'s Workings (Orchidee) I guess, orchie, YOU could have used some of that wisdom BEFORE you...
  February 18th, 2018 13:52
• Doors. (Goldfinch60) Beautifully written, orchie! And I do love the two quotes.
  February 18th, 2018 13:49
• HAVE A NICE DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice poem, Brian. While time is a given, each hour with 60 minutes, each...
  February 18th, 2018 13:47
• KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards) Judging from this shorty, maybe you should write a whole history book! It...
  February 18th, 2018 13:41
• That Final Skin (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Ah, Kurt, all four are great, but are getting too close for comfort. Your...
  February 18th, 2018 13:34
• Just one look (Aa Harvey) Well written Aa! Sounds nearly like a fata morgana.
  February 18th, 2018 13:25
• Charity Begins at Home (Mottakeenur Rehman) You said it, MR, and you said it quite well! Charity does begin at home....
  February 18th, 2018 13:21
• More Than. (Fay Slimm.) That light is what it is all about. Without it our lives would not be...
  February 18th, 2018 06:50
• Bridges. (Goldfinch60) I love that metaphor of the river, Goldie! You are saying it beautifully,...
  February 18th, 2018 06:47
• Omniscient Observations (Orchidee) Orchie, a fine poem. Love the ending. Don\'t know though if my thoughts...
  February 18th, 2018 06:43
• LIFE\'S LITTLE JOYS (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, your poem is so to the point. Every stanza is great. Spending...
  February 18th, 2018 06:40
• Maybe (Myself and me) While the message is sad, I like the feel of the poem. You may have been...
  February 16th, 2018 22:52
• hate me love (Heather T) Incredible writing, Heather! If there were a poem Olympics, you would...
  February 16th, 2018 19:55
• IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards) Michael, I could not have said it better myself! Seems to me the USA are...
  February 16th, 2018 16:03
• Fed Up (Cynthia) Cynthia, you are a very good writer. This poem grabbed me right from the...
  February 16th, 2018 15:09
• Self Torment - Specialite de la Maison (Lorna) Great poem Lorna. Just be yourself, judging from the way you write, you...
  February 16th, 2018 05:58
• Feelings (Christina K) People all through the ages have grappled with that exact question. What...
  February 16th, 2018 01:44
• Inspiration (Christina K) Great!!! I think you spoke for all of us!
  February 16th, 2018 01:41
• Love and the Universe (Christina K) Christina, you are so right, love is all there is. Everywhere. Love is...
  February 16th, 2018 01:40
• The Next Morning (Christina K) Incredibly well written, Christina. With just a few words and lines you...
  February 16th, 2018 01:36
• of Teacups and Nothingness (Anais) Great metaphor. I see a lot more behind this poem than is visible to the...
  February 15th, 2018 21:20
• Just One Touch (Notapoet) Love your poem. Very well written, great rhyming, nice flow, beautiful...
  February 15th, 2018 19:54
• Leaking Clock (WL Schuett) Wonderful writing. All the stanzas are great, but that last one is magic....
  February 15th, 2018 19:50
• CAGELESS. (Fay Slimm.) First of all you are absolutely right, Fay! And secondly you expressed it...
  February 15th, 2018 17:09
• HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian (and Michael), yes Fred does appreciate the highway. Heard that joke...
  February 15th, 2018 17:05
• Tito Gobbi (Goldfinch60) I think Tito Gobi would be more than pleased to know that he is in your...
  February 15th, 2018 17:03
• Wedding Wonderful - Valentines (Orchidee) Sounds like one heck of a wedding, orchie! I bet you would swoon if you...
  February 15th, 2018 17:00
• WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards) Yes, Michael, this poem is \'a tad sad\' (great expression!), but exciting...
  February 15th, 2018 16:56
• The Most Wonderful Things. (Kevin browne) Great poem, even greater lines -For our image of life, there seems to be...
  February 15th, 2018 16:43
• The Analysis of Relationship (Mottakeenur Rehman) Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
  February 15th, 2018 16:38
• ANGELA VALENTINE ~ A SUPA SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) You beautifully expressed what Valentines Day is all about!
  February 15th, 2018 16:36
• REAL (Resa71) Well written, Resa, tender, loving, compassionate. While reading I can...
  February 15th, 2018 16:33
• Dreams (Olivergreenwood19) Sometimes the dreams and memories are all we have. Well penned, Oliver!
  February 15th, 2018 16:29
• Glories for the Groom - Valentines (Orchidee) You are not only a good poet, orchie, you are also a good story teller!
  February 15th, 2018 16:24
• Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me) (Niallprideaux) Great poem, great advise! Hope you had a great valentine with yourself!
  February 15th, 2018 16:22
• Magic Blue (Michael J. Schaeffer) Magic picture, magic poem!
  February 15th, 2018 16:20
• A philosophical question for anyone who has an idea. (Aa Harvey) My right hand is holding my love for her, and my left hand is holding her...
  February 15th, 2018 16:16
• The shape of loneliness (Myself and me) m&m, I am awed by the power of your poem, the way you use these metaphors...
  February 15th, 2018 16:08
• One Last Choice (+9) (Kurt Philip Behm) One last choice: With each stanza I was getting more and more curious what...
  February 15th, 2018 15:59
• B of E #8: special occasion (Frank Prem) I just love your book of evenings, Frank. This one starts out with the...
  February 15th, 2018 15:41
• Addicted (Theskyisnotblue) There is a contradiction here, Billie-Jade. Nobody with a \'blank mind\'...
  February 15th, 2018 15:37
• Completion (Theskyisnotblue) Wow! Short, but powerful. I do like your straight forward writing. Well...
  February 15th, 2018 15:33
• Just for You (Lorna) Your beautiful poem paints a very loving and tender picture and does say a...
  February 15th, 2018 15:24
• B of E #7: digging water and kissing clouds (Frank Prem) Your mind and imagination are amazing, Frank. The whole poem is just...
  February 14th, 2018 15:23
• What Valentine\'s Card? (Goldfinch60) Great writing, Goldie! I guess I am the lucky one. My love does not want a...
  February 14th, 2018 14:53
• Crystal Clarity (A__pott) Love the twists and turns in this poem. Alex, this sounds like magic. You...
  February 14th, 2018 14:50
• For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho) Where have you been, Malu?! Missed your writing. Happy Valentine\'s...
  February 14th, 2018 14:25