Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
You say it beautifully, as always!
Unfortunately I cannot relate, I must...
April 6th, 2020 12:54 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
I became unglued just reading it! You do have a beautiful way with words!
April 6th, 2020 12:50 - A Happy Life (FredPeyer)
Thanks Dove,
after the last two lines it\'s not problem anymore to...
April 5th, 2020 13:51 - A Happy Life (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much Claudelle. And I pray you will be healthy and safe as...
April 5th, 2020 12:57 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
I stopped reading in the middle, hanging in limbo with no end.
April 5th, 2020 12:13 - Until Darkness (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
To that first stanza of the second poem I can only say: If you don\'t know...
April 5th, 2020 12:09 - Voices (SorrowfullyHappy)
You are only listening to one side. Now listen to the other side: You are...
April 5th, 2020 12:04 - Flying Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
I am sure she was and will be always with you. And you will be flying one...
April 5th, 2020 12:02 - On The Royal Road (Orchidee)
Believer or not, we need your poems during these hard times, Orchi!
April 5th, 2020 12:00 - Delight! (Sue.evans)
Beautifully said, couldn\'t agree more!
April 5th, 2020 11:58 - Love\'s Effect. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Love\'s ever changing rainbow\' is something only you could dream up!...
April 5th, 2020 11:56 - Quarantine (Renzi)
Thanks Renzi, good to hear you are doing OK despite your evil...
April 5th, 2020 11:53 - Back Turned (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well said, Kurt. Stay healthy and safe!
March 29th, 2020 13:03 - Daddy (Afternoontea)
When a parent leaves it is usually the kids that get hurt the most. Very...
March 27th, 2020 03:32 - Unredeemed (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Tried to make up my mind of which one of the three I like best. Long story...
March 27th, 2020 03:27 - Uncertainty (Christina8)
Well said Christina, agree with you 100%!
March 27th, 2020 03:23 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Reads really well, but did not understand a word! :-)
Just what you...
March 27th, 2020 03:21 - A Walk to My Willow. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful tree - beautiful poem!
March 27th, 2020 03:16 - LOVE AN* MARRIAGE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congratulations to both of you! You can always have a huge party once this...
March 25th, 2020 13:53 - Tasting. (Fay Slimm.)
Love your poem, especially the last stanza!
March 25th, 2020 13:48 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Thank you, Saxon, for this uplifting poem. That is exactly what we all...
March 25th, 2020 13:45 - Past Memory (PoeticBiscuit)
Well written, PB! When memories are all that\'s left, off we go to make...
March 25th, 2020 13:44 - LOOK, LISTEN, LEARN (Mil57Man)
Love your rhyming!
March 25th, 2020 13:34 - Friday May 5th 2017 (Elsiewarrenswords)
Elsie, you came back with a bang! Very nicely written! You may ponder the...
March 25th, 2020 13:32 - silent waves of time (Crystal Hope)
beautifully written, Crystal. Love that word \'gander\', have not seen it...
March 25th, 2020 13:11 - what is love? (Scarlet poet)
What is though of as love could be infatuation. Well written, Scarlet!
March 22nd, 2020 12:54 - A Creative Night (A Boy With Roses)
I like this one very much, Jordan. Well written.
March 22nd, 2020 12:48 - HIDDEN BENEFITS (Michael Edwards)
It takes an artist like you, Michael, to find something positive in such a...
March 22nd, 2020 12:42 - My Road to Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Well said, no matter what happens around us, we always have music to make...
March 22nd, 2020 12:40 - Whatever The Way (Orchidee)
Well said, Orchie, we need your poems in these trying times.
March 22nd, 2020 12:37 - Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
Mothers are a special species, and you said it well. Like the picture too....
March 22nd, 2020 12:35 - Selfless Suffering (Orchidee)
You are right, I am kinda lost sometimes, but I don\'t think I am a sheep....
March 20th, 2020 21:33 - They Paved Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Great writing Goldie!
March 20th, 2020 21:30 - 3 MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
You must have been thinking of me when you wrote that first one!
The...
March 20th, 2020 21:29 - A Voice Now Gone (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
That first one packs a punch! It drew me in. The second one I like a lot.
March 20th, 2020 21:23 - time flies (Crystal Hope)
Beautifully written, Crystal. It would be awesome if somebody would write...
March 20th, 2020 21:14 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
Mahalo for your comment! Yes it is nice here, especially if you enjoy...
March 6th, 2020 15:44 - ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN (Michael Edwards)
They must have been awfully BIG cherries! I do like your humor, Michael.
March 6th, 2020 12:03 - Within Our Worlds. (Goldfinch60)
We have rainbows nearly every day. There is even one on our license...
March 6th, 2020 12:01 - Heard And Helped (Orchidee)
Good write, Orchie!
March 6th, 2020 11:59 - Only Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, from nature to human nature, you really know how to say it well....
March 6th, 2020 11:57 - I love your skinny legs (Tundrol)
As they say, beauty is only skin-deep. Well written tundrol!
March 6th, 2020 11:49 - Story of my life (Renzi)
So great to see, hear, and read you again Renzi! I have been away a bit...
March 6th, 2020 11:41 - NME (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well said, Kurt, but what the heck does NME stand for?
March 6th, 2020 11:35 - Tom Bowling. (Goldfinch60)
Well written Goldie, and a great song.
March 5th, 2020 12:56 - National Book Day (Orchidee)
Orchie, you shold put all your writing into a book!
March 5th, 2020 12:52 - I SAW A WORM (Michael Edwards)
Doing your good deed early in the morning sets you free for the whole day!...
March 5th, 2020 12:50 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
d a, you are a fine poet!
March 5th, 2020 12:47 - The Wind and Me (Saxon Crow)
So well written, Saxon. I was running right beside you.
March 5th, 2020 12:45 - Mischief. (Fay Slimm.)
Der Wind, der Wind, das himmlische Kind! Your poem really is full of...
March 5th, 2020 12:43 - A Blissful Fall (Xeina)
Very nice Xeina, reminds me of my teens a long long time ago.
March 5th, 2020 12:40 - Chosen Memories (Clara)
So well written Clara, yes we must savior the past even if it hurts...
March 5th, 2020 12:37 - A Deaf Ear (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another one of your \'deep thought\' shorties. Love it!
March 5th, 2020 12:34 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
The only thing that does not change is the fact that there will be change....
March 4th, 2020 18:03 - Losing The Loveliest Love (Adrianna Kjeld)
Well written, Adrianna!
March 4th, 2020 18:00 - It Could Have Been Me (Saxon Crow)
So well written, Saxon! I am sorry for your loss.
March 4th, 2020 17:57 - tower (Dusk arising)
d a, you treated this subject well. I like too many lines to mention them...
March 4th, 2020 17:54 - quench (Dusk arising)
d a, let that songbird of yours sing more often! Great writing.
March 4th, 2020 12:38 - Sweet Female (Clara)
Clara, great writing! Please keep on letting your words flow!!!
March 4th, 2020 12:36 - Wind (Myself and me)
well said m&m! Lately we had some stormy weather rather than the gentle...
March 4th, 2020 12:31 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Great write, Michael. At least the holes can be filled. Here a termite and...
March 4th, 2020 12:28 - First Rant of the Year! (Goldfinch60)
Goldie,
this is totally unacceptable! We all know Government sucks, but...
March 4th, 2020 12:25 - Night And Light (Orchidee)
Orchie, this beautiful poem is very up to date considering the terrible...
March 4th, 2020 12:21 - Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Love that last stanza, Fay! And according to quantum theory, all we are is...
March 4th, 2020 12:16 - Siamese Endowment (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
What can I say, Kurt? When you are good you are good!
March 4th, 2020 12:12 - Beginnings. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you wrote a very fine tribute to Kevin. I am going to miss his...
February 13th, 2020 02:33 - Good Enough (Caitlyn T)
Bravo!!! Well said! And it does not only go for girls. Guys too! Even old...
February 13th, 2020 02:25 - Ages Past? (Saxon Crow)
Welcome to MPS! From \'one grumpy old man\' to another, you hit the nail...
February 12th, 2020 18:05 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Intriguing with a surprise ending. Well done, d.a.!
February 12th, 2020 13:06 - I met him on here & now I give more than a tear. R.i.p (poet passed) (Poetic Dan)
PD, I am so sorry to hear that Kevin passed, but his words will keep on...
February 12th, 2020 13:02 - This Is Our Life Now (Clara)
This poem is so GOOD! And REAL!
How did we live before cellphones? Do we...
February 11th, 2020 22:04 - I’m Fine (Caitlyn T)
Welcome to MPS Caytlin!
It is strange how everybody says \"I\'m fine\"...
February 11th, 2020 22:01 - Tell me (Aa Harvey)
Your well written poem reminds me that we should be much more open with...
February 11th, 2020 21:58 - Gentle Servant - 2 Timothy series (5) (Orchidee)
We are all servants, be it in a religious or wordly way. Good poem!
February 11th, 2020 21:56 - Today. (Goldfinch60)
Today I woke up to a beautiful rainbow and knew that the day will be...
February 11th, 2020 21:55 - Sing, Sign & Sea. Jorja, Maarii & Me (Poetic Dan)
Very well said (written) PD!
February 11th, 2020 21:53 - SHALL WE ? (Fay Slimm.)
There is definitely something to \"Silence is Golden\", and you wrote...
February 11th, 2020 21:52 - Beneath The Masque (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
So much food for thought!
I like all three, always a pleasure to read...
February 11th, 2020 21:48 - Don\'t be long (Poetic Dan)
Nice writing! Wishing all of you all the BEST and speedy recovery!
December 10th, 2019 22:17 - Will you marry me (Ron parrish aka wordman)
I think if I were a woman, after reading this I would drop everything and...
December 10th, 2019 22:15 - Don\'t Remind Me (SerenWise)
Beautifully written. Love that \'I\'ll live in hopeful future tense\'.
December 10th, 2019 22:12 - Lost in Transaltion. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, tres bon, maintenant un autre poem s\'il vous plait!!!
December 10th, 2019 22:10 - Discourse of Diligence (Orchidee)
The way things are right now, we could use that peace and return!
Well...
December 10th, 2019 22:07 - STRAWBERRIES AND CREAM (Michael Edwards)
Love the painting and your writing. Have no idea though where you come up...
December 10th, 2019 22:06 - Sick (Sylviasearcher)
Well written, Sylvia. I just hope that this is not your life!
December 10th, 2019 22:02 - Foolishly Yours (Jane Frye)
beautifully written, Jane! But never give up on dreams, no matter how...
December 10th, 2019 21:58 - I’m Done (M.E.M.)
Love your writing, M.E.M., honest and straight forward. But I don\'t agree...
December 6th, 2019 17:41 - When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Love your poem. With six grand-kids I am having the time of my life...
December 6th, 2019 17:35 - good morning (Noah Malice)
Beautiful words to start the day with!
December 3rd, 2019 11:56 - Lost (Sylviasearcher)
Very powerful writing, Sylvia... Well done.
November 28th, 2019 12:44 - Ballet of Nature (Sarahlynne)
Love that last line! I guess we are writing our way to nowhere.
November 28th, 2019 12:41 - Abandoned (Sarahlynne)
So well written! Not only could I see that house, I felt it.
November 28th, 2019 12:40 - Dog destiny (Poetic Dan)
And every dog in the world thanks you!
November 28th, 2019 12:37 - Risen to the Light (Goldfinch60)
Thanks Goldie, for a beautiful and meaningful poem! Writing does lift us...
November 28th, 2019 12:34 - Advent Awareness (Orchidee)
Well done, Orchi!
November 28th, 2019 12:31 - AUGURIES OF INNOCENCE 🧡 WILLIAM BLAKE 🧡 ECO~PHILOSOPHY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You are right, we do need to look at what was written before us.
November 28th, 2019 12:29 - Trust. (Fay Slimm.)
What can I say, Fay, you\'ve got it!
November 28th, 2019 12:25 - Nostalgia (Benevolentbluebabe)
Beautiful writing, tender, loving. I like it a lot.
November 28th, 2019 12:23 - Distance (Benevolentbluebabe)
Short and true, well written!
November 28th, 2019 12:21 - Elixir of Life . (Zuzanna Musial)
Welcome to MPS, Zuzanna.
It is amazing how you can capture this \'short...
November 23rd, 2019 23:02
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