Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- near the dark stream that flows through all hearts (Jon Nakapalau)
Great metaphors and visual design!
November 23rd, 2019 22:56 - Penny for your thoughts (Poetic Dan)
PD, where do you come up with these ideas? I love this poem.
November 23rd, 2019 22:54 - Supper (FredPeyer)
Thank you orchi! It\'s amazing how the body ages and the mind stays young.
November 23rd, 2019 14:10 - Patiently Impatient (G84)
Communication is the key, but sometimes we need to listen to the silence,...
November 23rd, 2019 14:01 - this year i have been a punching bag (Jon Nakapalau)
There are days when I would love to hear that bell!
Well said, Jon.
November 23rd, 2019 13:56 - Anxious (Addynicole)
Your poem pulled me in starting with that first line. Good writing...
November 23rd, 2019 13:54 - A Loving Side – Guitars Battle Violins (Nafis Light)
Great writing and great video, J44!
November 23rd, 2019 13:50 - Car Cleaned (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t know about England, but here they say getting hit by bird poop is...
November 23rd, 2019 13:37 - COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Forgot to ask: Where are the other two couplets?
November 23rd, 2019 13:10 - COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Read your couplet at the right time. Been raining all morning. And you are...
November 23rd, 2019 13:09 - HUMAN BRIDGES 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN A a a A POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nicely said, A&B. I guess you could have added a lot more stanzas. Build...
November 23rd, 2019 12:51 - Humility Before Honour (Orchidee)
Orchi,
a little bit of humility would do all of us good once in a while....
November 23rd, 2019 12:38 - PC OTT (Michael Edwards)
So you mean I cannot say \'Beached Whales\' anymore about the tourists...
November 22nd, 2019 22:08 - Is There No Hope? (Goldfinch60)
Congrats and happy 1000th!!! What a combination, a great wordsmith and a...
November 22nd, 2019 22:05 - Trapped (Poetic Dan)
PD, I think we all have trouble accepting ourselves for who we are. Life...
November 22nd, 2019 22:01 - Righteous Relationships (Orchidee)
Orchi, this world could use a lot more \'love each other\'. I am glad you...
November 22nd, 2019 21:55 - Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday) (Fay Slimm.)
Two great poems, Fay! And Unsub is right, it is a great final stanza!
November 22nd, 2019 21:52 - For Someone Who Loves My Way. (Kevin browne)
Well Kevin, here is someone who loves your way....the way you write, that...
November 22nd, 2019 21:42 - End Of All Ends (Kurt Philip Behm)
But death nonetheless. How many kinds of death are there? Is there such a...
November 22nd, 2019 21:39 - Love is all that matters (Aa Harvey)
Your last line says it all, Aa.
November 22nd, 2019 21:33 - The Start (Thoughts In Time)
Kelly, nice poem. Love the ending!
November 6th, 2019 13:50 - Unwilling subjects (Poetic Dan)
You have the royals, we have the movie stars! Unfortunately, there will...
November 6th, 2019 13:48 - The Meaning of Life (Aa Harvey)
A poem that makes one think!
November 6th, 2019 13:32 - Halfbreed (Thesunseeker)
Aloha Thesunseeker,
Your well written poem struck a note with me. I am...
November 6th, 2019 13:30 - The Bully (Jane Frye)
Jane, what a great poem! Love the subject matter, choice of words, and...
November 6th, 2019 01:37 - Sloth (M.E.M.)
Looks like you beat the challenge, M.E.M!
November 5th, 2019 11:07 - “I AM THE MOON” 🌙 (Shallsea)
\'...tasting each chakra as its prey...\'
You do have a beautiful way...
November 5th, 2019 11:03 - She is Not There. (Goldfinch60)
She may not be there, Goldie, but every line in your poem shows that the...
November 5th, 2019 10:58 - Hidden Smiles (Thoughts In Time)
Great opening and closure here, Kelly.
November 5th, 2019 10:53 - Voices Of Hope (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thanks Kurt for your poetry. Love Nexus!
November 5th, 2019 10:49 - Lens (Vanessa wallace)
hopeless and bleak, the message of \'it can\'t get any worse than that\'...
November 1st, 2019 11:51 - The Last Cut of the Year? (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, even if you have to cut five times, you are still better off than...
October 31st, 2019 10:21 - Benign Blessings (Orchidee)
Thanks Orchie, from the happy band of pilgrims to the happy band of poets!
October 31st, 2019 10:19 - Thank Jack for my Russell (Poetic Dan)
Like your ode to dogs. They deserve it! Great pic too!
October 31st, 2019 10:17 - Peerless. (Fay Slimm.)
Love your poem and especially your picture. Reminded me of something...
October 31st, 2019 10:14 - It hurts as a human (FineB)
Great poem! If all of us would just do one good deed a day, this world...
October 31st, 2019 10:08 - The Coven (FineB)
Love this poem, FineB, \"motivated by greed, depravity, mayhem...\" sounds...
October 31st, 2019 10:02 - F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day (Poetic Dan)
PD, there are days where nothing goes right, but then what do I care, I am...
October 29th, 2019 20:13 - fear (Jon Nakapalau)
a very apt description. kudos!
October 29th, 2019 18:05 - A Captive Domain (Kurt Philip Behm)
You just cannot write something mediocre, can you? Kurt, thanks for...
October 24th, 2019 20:45 - Look at how I love you (Acaciaberry)
Great poem, full of happiness. Then I came to the last line. Did not...
October 24th, 2019 20:41 - Pull Back Your Face... (Kevin browne)
Wow! You bowled me over with this one. But here on MPS we all do what you...
October 24th, 2019 20:37 - I don\'t know ego but I know me (Poetic Dan)
Great poem, PD! Being a father is great. When the kids are little you are...
October 23rd, 2019 18:56 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
As a \'dumb\' American, I don\'t know anything about Morecombe and Wise,...
October 23rd, 2019 18:53 - Rapturous Return (Orchidee)
As far as I am concerned, no changes necessary. But then, what do I know?
October 23rd, 2019 18:50 - Contact. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Thru heaven\'s hole I taste contact\'...And there you met the...
October 23rd, 2019 18:48 - Searching (Jenny Wren)
Great poem, Jenny. We all search for that special place only to realize it...
October 23rd, 2019 18:45 - Empty Spaces (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt, you are truly an outstanding wordsmith! Enjoyed all three of them.
October 23rd, 2019 18:43 - I hold your hand (Alta H Mabin)
Alta, with friends like you our lives would be so much better and easier!...
October 23rd, 2019 18:40 - deeper than a mirror (Crystal Hope)
Well written, Crystal. We all are lost sometimes, but there is always that...
October 23rd, 2019 18:36 - Tuned in, Turned off (LMo)
Very well said, LMorgan! How did we ever live bsp (before smart phones)?
October 23rd, 2019 18:33 - Puzzles (SheWasTheSun)
Interesting, original, and well written. I never looked at my soul as a...
October 10th, 2019 22:32 - Innocence Skipped (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Enjoyed both of them, Kurt. And you are too good - not to be read.
October 10th, 2019 22:29 - Thirsting Tale (Orchidee)
Orchi, when I read the title I thought you were going to write about your...
October 10th, 2019 21:19 - First Light. (Fay Slimm.)
I am breathing, I am breathing, Fay!
Got dizzy with all that fresh early...
October 10th, 2019 21:15 - Lonely? Not I. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, you very aptly describe the difference between alone and lonely,...
October 10th, 2019 21:14 - THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards)
Enjoyed this one! If you ever come to Hawaii you would have even more fun...
October 10th, 2019 21:10 - ‘Choices Verse Voices’ (Thoughts In Time)
You said it well Kelly! Love the minimalist lines. Sometimes one word says...
October 10th, 2019 21:06 - Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin)
Alta, you are very good at putting the pain and melancholy into words that...
October 10th, 2019 21:03 - My Light Knight (Clara)
Clara, your poem drew me in. No matter who, what, where we are, there is...
October 10th, 2019 20:52 - i (Jon Nakapalau)
Jon, here in Hawaii I don\'t have to worry about being an early bird. We...
October 10th, 2019 20:48 - The Wait (SheWasTheSun)
Well written, that burning desire to be together again weaves its way...
October 10th, 2019 20:44 - Over and out (A passing lyric)
KK, love your poem. I tried to say something similar with my poem \'The...
October 10th, 2019 20:42 - THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am glad for both of you! Happy Togetherness!!!
October 10th, 2019 12:30 - All There Is (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Kurt,
I may be wrong, but don\'t verse 2 and 4 essentially mean the same?...
October 9th, 2019 15:32 - My Purple haired Queen (MrB)
When you\'re smitten, you\'re smitten. Sounds like you better hold on to...
October 9th, 2019 15:20 - Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin)
Alta, the only thing you missed are the wine tipped lips. Otherwise, a...
October 9th, 2019 15:15 - My Firework (Clara)
Clara, I love this poem. The lead-in, the structure, the tender feelings...
October 9th, 2019 13:50 - Floating (John Prophet)
Nice picture to go with the poem. As an old guy I know the wondering never...
October 9th, 2019 13:32 - The Party (FredPeyer)
Mahalo d a!
You have a point. But, when you are not happy with where you...
October 9th, 2019 13:26 - Rose (Aa Harvey)
Aa, I guess I better give my wife one of every color, just to be safe. No...
October 9th, 2019 12:07 - You\'re invited if....... (Orchidee)
I\'m coming and I\'m bringing William Tell with me. He is about 250 years...
October 9th, 2019 12:06 - Be the \"S\" in front of our word (Poetic Dan)
PD, you are Supercallifragilisticexpialidocious!
October 9th, 2019 12:02 - ‘Never never land’ (Thoughts In Time)
Kelly, what I got from your excellent poem is the feeling that your never...
October 9th, 2019 11:51 - WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards)
Naughty old man, loved it!
October 9th, 2019 11:45 - The Lady in White. (Goldfinch60)
An elegant poem for an elegant lady. Well done Goldie!
October 9th, 2019 11:43 - Girl, When We Put Our Hearts Together (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Love is beautiful, and you captured it well!
October 8th, 2019 13:24 - Mr Freedom (Dusk arising)
Great poem, d a! There are days when all of us who are in a relationship...
October 8th, 2019 11:45 - Tattooed (Poetic Dan)
These are wise words, and she is so lucky to have you, as you are to have...
October 8th, 2019 11:40 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
A picture is worth a thousand words, they say. Your poem conjures up that...
October 8th, 2019 11:35 - Fish Heads (Noquarter4)
I guess there are times when fish heads come in handy. You could also kill...
October 8th, 2019 11:27 - Life Lesson (She_was_torture)
Well written, s-w-t, you aptly describe the roller-coaster that is life,...
October 8th, 2019 11:22 - Last Choice (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well written as usual, Kurt. Last Choice somehow brought up Woody Allen\'s...
October 8th, 2019 04:07 - Silence. (Fay Slimm.)
Love your poem, Fay. Silence is definitely underrated. Unfortunately I...
October 8th, 2019 04:01 - A Name That Pleases (CindyB)
You really do have a way with words, Cindy. Especially like \"Galaxies...
October 8th, 2019 03:51 - We Do Not Bow (CindyB)
Cindy, I love your poem. Love that line \"We have always been more\", and...
October 8th, 2019 03:46 - To App or Not to App. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, a fine write and I am with you. Getting tired of all the apps....
October 8th, 2019 03:44 - Wholesome Words (Orchidee)
I\'m like you Orchi, an old dragon slayer. Still remember the good old...
October 8th, 2019 03:40 - To Fly (Kurt Philip Behm)
You beautifully describe a poet in action.
October 5th, 2019 14:11 - Lonely heart (Alta H Mabin)
Like it, Alta. We know that the sun is always shining somewhere. While it...
October 5th, 2019 14:10 - HE EARNS HIS FEE (Michael Edwards)
Your experiment worked, this is a truly non-inspiring work...except for...
October 5th, 2019 14:07 - Blind (Vanessa wallace)
A picture can be worth a thousand words......or it can take your breath...
October 4th, 2019 14:30 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
You are the \"dawn master\" Fay!
October 4th, 2019 01:56 - Struggle in happiness (Poetic Dan)
Happiness is there for the taking, PD. You should never struggle to enjoy...
October 4th, 2019 01:53 - Michele Marrulo. (Goldfinch60)
If you have to look at the price tag you know you cannot afford it!
October 4th, 2019 01:49 - I am a dreamer (Alta H Mabin)
We are all dreamers, Alta. At the end that is all we have left. Your great...
October 4th, 2019 01:47 - A KNOBBLY BONE (Michael Edwards)
What I need is a knobbly brain so the ideas don\'t fall off!
October 4th, 2019 01:45 - The Game (FredPeyer)
Thanks Fay, it is funny how people behave the way they think they should...
October 3rd, 2019 23:40 - Rhyme for life (Poetic Dan)
As a fellow rider I can only agree! On a bike you need to have 360 degrees...
October 3rd, 2019 22:53 - Thoughts of You (JV)
The woman you write about is not the only work of art here. So is your...
October 3rd, 2019 18:26
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