Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Toasting Erich Fromm (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm) Like em all, but the last one stands out!
  March 1st, 2021 16:10
• I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones (L. B. Mek) So well written, Mek!
  March 1st, 2021 16:06
• Ooh Nina.... (Doggerel Dave) I gotta say\" Ooh Dave.... No matter how long it took you, this is a good...
  March 1st, 2021 16:03
• Readiness In Giving - Giving Series (5) (Orchidee) As long as the money does not go to the preacher man on TV, I am ok with...
  March 1st, 2021 16:00
• Love Is Forever. (Goldfinch60) It is amazing how the mind works. We look at something and right away the...
  March 1st, 2021 15:58
• Meant to be here (Birddie Jane) Beautifully said, Birddie! So often we think that giving advise is a good...
  March 1st, 2021 15:54
• The Big Bang Theory (Samer Amin) Samer, I do like this poem. Your \'non-existent\' mind came up with a...
  March 1st, 2021 15:51
• there (Dusk arising) We all need that place, d a. Beautiful!
  February 28th, 2021 20:48
• Songs of Hope and Peace (A Boy With Roses) Beautifully written, Jordan. I will have to read it a few more times to...
  February 28th, 2021 20:43
• The Miracle of Life (FredPeyer) Mahalo Dave, coming from a writer like you your comment means a lot!
  February 28th, 2021 17:54
• Bad Advise (FredPeyer) Thanks so much Neville! You are absolutely right, and I just realized that...
  February 28th, 2021 13:36
• Memories Distill (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) I honestly have no idea how you can maintain such a quality output of...
  February 27th, 2021 13:09
• Magical Memory (SunSearcher) Beautiful poem SS, and I just love your rhyme. Very well done, kudos!
  February 27th, 2021 13:06
• Let’s Talk Scars (Neville) I love your poem, Neville. I guess the only one without scars is a newborn...
  February 27th, 2021 13:01
• Shadow Flame (A Boy With Roses) \"Waiting for the loveless morning to appear\" How do you know it will be...
  February 26th, 2021 21:07
• Salty River (SunSearcher) Well written, SS. Somebody (can\'t remember who) once said something like:...
  February 26th, 2021 21:04
• What\'s The Point? (Merissa) Oh man, Merissa, that is kind of a Pandora\'s box. Do we care about...
  February 26th, 2021 14:55
• Goldie Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Been there, done that! :-)
  February 26th, 2021 14:48
• Mad Dark Humour (Orchidee) You should have tried drowning yourself, but you probably would have...
  February 26th, 2021 14:47
• When I Lose (Jerry Reynolds) Love this one, Jerry! You know what they call guy with two black eyes: A...
  February 26th, 2021 14:43
• Sarah Unleashed (Kurt Philip Behm) Like them all, but especially the third one.
  February 26th, 2021 14:42
• Nature\'s Memory (Merissa) This is a beautiful poem to honor your dad, Merissa!
  February 25th, 2021 13:47
• Home Sweet Home (Doggerel Dave) I truly enjoyed your poem Dave. And I think his final resting place is a...
  February 25th, 2021 13:45
• Disparate Love (Jerry Reynolds) Love it!
  February 25th, 2021 13:40
• Gracious Giving (Orchidee) Is that why you give to your church in a brown paper bag?
  February 25th, 2021 13:39
• Mind. (Goldfinch60) There are two things we must keep open: The mind and the heart!
  February 25th, 2021 13:29
• Working Mom (Merissa) Marissa, you said it well, and it happens to so many people.
  February 23rd, 2021 16:11
• My Children (Kevin Michael Bloor) Well written, Kevin. We all hope that our kids will remember us. At least...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:48
• silver and gold are getting old (GON) Nice rhyme, well written. Now, without that Covid problem, I could go out...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:46
• Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds) After reading it four times I realized that I am a simple man, lacking...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:43
• Too much water under the bridge (Olivia.) Don\'t worry Olivia, I was born confused and still am! :-)
  February 23rd, 2021 10:39
• Wonderment (John Prophet) Your poem reminds me that we have to get back to the wonderment we had as...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:38
• Bridged (Fay Slimm.) I sometimes wonder what all these animals would say to us if they could...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:36
• Testing Times (Orchidee) Oh man, orchie, thanks for the warning! Now I better bring an umbrella to...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:32
• A Good Day. (Goldfinch60) Love it Andy! At my age, every day I wake up and realize I am still here,...
  February 23rd, 2021 10:25
• You must write (Thewayiwrite) You said it well! It doesn\'t matter what you write, or how good you...
  February 22nd, 2021 22:00
• Dreams (Merissa) Very well done Merissa!
  February 22nd, 2021 21:57
• Mid-February 2021 (Trenz Pruca) I love your writing Trenz!
  February 22nd, 2021 21:53
• fantastic things | draft 2 (GON) Go for it Noah, all it takes is that first step. Well written!
  February 22nd, 2021 21:52
• I am worth more (Olivia.) A beautiful poem again, Olivia! I don\'t know you, but anybody who can...
  February 22nd, 2021 21:50
• Stirring The Pot (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Prisoner of Time sounds like the onset of Alzheimers! Beautiful poetry!
  February 22nd, 2021 21:46
• Understanding (John Prophet) As John Archibald Wheeler said: We live on an island surrounded by a sea...
  February 22nd, 2021 21:44
• Politics-Policies (Jerry Reynolds) I\'m at bat in the 9th with bases loaded and for the 1st time hit it out...
  February 22nd, 2021 21:38
• Funny girl life (A passing lyric) While you used the word \'funny\' nine times, it seems to me that this...
  February 22nd, 2021 15:06
• Sundayness (Fay Slimm.) The picture and poem remind me so much of the 60\'s, when life was so full...
  February 22nd, 2021 15:01
• Redeemed By The Son (Orchidee) Very interesting and beautiful composition! Well done, orchie!
  February 22nd, 2021 14:57
• Mastication (Neville) I am amazed how you can conjure up a multitude of feelings and images with...
  February 22nd, 2021 14:56
• Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60) Well said, Andy. I too wonder sometimes where these words come from. At...
  February 22nd, 2021 14:53
• Pillow talks. (Chick) Well written Evangaline. I hope it helped your friend too.
  February 21st, 2021 22:43
• Testing the Waters (TS) Beautiful writing, TS!
  February 21st, 2021 22:37
• I pray (Thewayiwrite) So you love him/her with all your heart, no matter the lies, illusions, or...
  February 21st, 2021 22:36
• The Fountain. (Goldfinch60) Very well said, Andy.
  February 21st, 2021 19:29
• Afflictions Assistings (Orchidee) Laws and more laws. I am probably breaking a bunch of them every day, not...
  February 21st, 2021 19:28
• Ode to Piss-Poor Poet (Kevin Michael Bloor) You nailed it Kevin!
  February 21st, 2021 19:26
• Things We Do (Jerry Reynolds) I agree with you, Dave. But I think we might add \'fear\' as another...
  February 21st, 2021 19:22
• The Garden Path (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Jekill and Hyde, finding a balance is as you write, a difficult...
  February 21st, 2021 19:20
• Relationships (Merissa) You said it well Merissa, relationships can be very contradictive but also...
  February 21st, 2021 19:16
• Backdoors (Mary Peters) Welcome to MPS, Mary. You do have a beautiful way with words.
  February 21st, 2021 19:13
• breaking your heart in 4 lines (Mysleze) There are always two sides to a story!
  February 21st, 2021 19:10
• beyond the door........ (Dusk arising) I too sometimes wonder about that last door. The problem is that you...
  February 21st, 2021 19:06
• Enjoying my own company (Olivia.) Beautiful, Olivia! I am with you about having some \'alone time\'. And you...
  February 21st, 2021 18:56
• Just sitting around (FredPeyer) Thanks orchie, I knew you water down your wine, but didn\'t know you ruin...
  February 21st, 2021 18:53
• Cheap Soup (FredPeyer) Mahalo G M! You are so right. One thing we need to be careful though is...
  February 20th, 2021 15:32
• Solitude (FredPeyer) Thanks G M, if you cannot enjoy your own company I guess you are sh.. out...
  February 20th, 2021 15:30
• Policies In Giving - Giving Series (4) (Orchidee) I guess they didn\'t have the Salvation Army around then.
  February 20th, 2021 11:30
• This changed my life (Poetic Dan) I guess, since I am a \'Lefty\', I never had tension in my life! :-)
  February 20th, 2021 11:24
• New Door. (Goldfinch60) You said it well, Andy. We do have to start each new day with a positive...
  February 20th, 2021 11:18
• Hypnotic (Goddess of the Mist) Well, you did it again! A beautiful poem. It drew me in. And aren\'t we...
  February 20th, 2021 11:16
• the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising) beautifully written, d a. Love the lines \'Of yesterdays truth departed\'!
  February 20th, 2021 11:08
• Natural Selection (Samer Amin) Your poem reminded me again how exceptional and important bees are....
  February 20th, 2021 11:05
• If you were here with me. (Jorge serra) You expressed the feeling of missing somebody very well, jorge!
  February 19th, 2021 21:31
• Sister (Olivia.) What a great tribute to your sister, Olivia. I am sure she liked it!
  February 19th, 2021 20:59
• Born (Merissa) Bravo!!! Great writing. You got it, Merissa!
  February 19th, 2021 20:57
• My Lovely Lass (Kevin Michael Bloor) Beautifully written, Kevin!
  February 19th, 2021 20:56
• Legacy\'s Birthright (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) There are times I wish I could have such an output of high quality poems...
  February 19th, 2021 20:54
• Eyes Wide Open (Anthony M.J Butler) Anthony, I agree with you that sometimes we should not believe what we see...
  February 19th, 2021 20:48
• Predict or live? (Poetry_Lover) Great shortie, PL. I guess we wonder about the future the same way we ask...
  February 19th, 2021 11:28
• Up on my Roof (Daydreaming) Well written Ed, but reading that last line I wonder if that is true all...
  February 19th, 2021 11:25
• Past And Present (Orchidee) Well done orchie, but tell me what were we in times past if we were \'not...
  February 19th, 2021 11:23
• Two heads are better than one when love becomes higher than us (Poetic Dan) Great write Dan, now if we could only recognize that \'higher purpose\'....
  February 19th, 2021 11:19
• Is It Art? (Goldfinch60) This is a deep question, Andy. I just think that art is in the eye of the...
  February 19th, 2021 11:14
• Inside the Belly of the Whale (Samer Amin) Good write, Samer, enjoyed it!
  February 19th, 2021 11:09
• My Star Of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Now, if we could magically transform Earth into that star, all our...
  February 18th, 2021 21:48
• No Ashes This Year (DesertWords) Well written, and I love the layout. Kudos!
  February 18th, 2021 21:46
• Truth.. (AlitaOpal) Truth and honesty are the basis of every relationship. You expressed it...
  February 18th, 2021 21:43
• The Maiden and the rat (AlitaOpal) And I too always want the \'underdog\' to win. Truly enjoyed this poem.
  February 18th, 2021 21:40
• Sometimes (AlitaOpal) This image is great, the young girl and the old woman. And so is your poem...
  February 18th, 2021 21:37
• 59th (TS) And I gaze on your beautiful poem, TS!
  February 18th, 2021 21:31
• Beautiful River. (Goldfinch60) Very beautiful poem, Andy. You are so lucky to have that river close by.
  February 18th, 2021 20:44
• 21 Again? That Old Chestnut (Orchidee) A good one orchie, maybe you should deviate from the hymn-poems more...
  February 18th, 2021 20:42
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Very much appreciate this poem, Dave. Our lives are full of cliches and...
  February 18th, 2021 20:39
• ON THE RUSH (Fay Slimm.) Love that last line, Fay! While I enjoy city life, I do prefer being away...
  February 18th, 2021 20:34
• Snow and ice (Jerry Reynolds) these three shorties say it all! I got cold just reading them....
  February 18th, 2021 20:26
• The Final Equation (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Or: Humanity + Divinity = Love I do like \'Another\'. Great poem!
  February 18th, 2021 20:23
• A fine line between love and hate (Olivia.) There certainly is, Olivia. But as you so aptly said: move on!
  February 18th, 2021 20:17
• Unwanted Feelings (Merissa) Very well written, Merissa. The heart is a strange thing and honestly, we...
  February 18th, 2021 20:16
• Bestfriend (Merissa) What a beautiful poem. You are lucky to have mom like that. But I guess...
  February 18th, 2021 20:08
• Cruising on the Red Line (Daydreaming) Nicely done, Ed! Your writing drew me in, made me want to know more. Sad...
  February 18th, 2021 20:03
• Amazingly Perfect (Shearonder1987) A beautiful Valentine\'s day poem! Well done!
  February 18th, 2021 19:57
• Hope In Chains (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Really like \'Lip Service\', especially the second paragraph.
  February 17th, 2021 21:15