Comments on community poems by Alan .S. Jeeves
- Sakura Haiku (Alta H Mabin)
Great Haiku Ally, You are so good at these.
Ex animo, Alan
April 24th, 2021 09:05 - Mosaic Pieces (Alta H Mabin)
A poem about someone who has learned how to bend with the wind I think...
December 9th, 2020 04:07 - Water (Jackeggz)
This is a dark poem JE. However I think a lot of thought went into it. I...
November 23rd, 2020 16:46 - vacations (Jackeggz)
A happy day on the beach JE. Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
November 23rd, 2020 16:42 - go then (Dusk arising)
This is a wonderful tribute Dusk. You have found and used your words...
October 21st, 2020 06:43 - i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz)
Good to see you posting again jackeggz. A clever little poem ~ I realize...
August 15th, 2020 17:11 - Untying Yes. (Fay Slimm.)
Do I think that this is a wonderful piece Fay? An untying yes!
Ex...
July 9th, 2020 10:12 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
I love your use of syllabubbles here Fay ~ enchanting to my childs...
June 15th, 2020 14:40 - Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful piece by you Fay. Exactly as it happens.
I have entertained...
June 12th, 2020 02:58 - Chains. (Fay Slimm.)
A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together.
Ex animo, Alan
May 21st, 2020 14:59 - Timed. (Fay Slimm.)
This is equal to holding a conch shell to your ear and hearing the ocean...
May 18th, 2020 09:38 - Tartan Prayer (Alta H Mabin)
Well done Ally. Good to see you back.
Ex animo, Alan
May 12th, 2020 06:10 - Brief, (Fay Slimm.)
This is a very fine \'free verse\' poem Fay.
Very, very well done.
Ex...
May 12th, 2020 06:07 - The Glory of Life Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
Viewed in awe,
Ever teaching,
Rightly so
Your words are...
May 1st, 2020 05:00 - Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.)
Delightful and musing Fay.
Happy May Day,
Ex animo, Alan
May 1st, 2020 04:37 - Tree-Towns. (Fay Slimm.)
I love poems like this Fay. I can read them over and over again. I have a...
April 23rd, 2020 10:03 - What Life Should Be. (Goldfinch60)
Ever since WW2 people of this nation have been able to own their own...
April 22nd, 2020 04:21 - Virtually. (Goldfinch60)
Very cool write Andy. Politicians always did have to social distance ~ at...
April 17th, 2020 04:48 - Sequence. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine image of the morning\'s arrival Fay, with Pegasus leading the way...
April 17th, 2020 04:42 - Enchanted. (Fay Slimm.)
An enchanting write Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
April 10th, 2020 03:36 - Lockdowntown (Dusk arising)
Well observed DA. Where I live you don\'t see too many people at any time...
April 9th, 2020 02:19 - Perfection. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful theme Fay. These creatures are as beautiful at rest as they are...
April 3rd, 2020 08:24 - Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60)
You made me smile Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
April 3rd, 2020 08:17 - Treasure. (Fay Slimm.)
Treasure indeed Fay. A very fine composition from you.
Ex animo, Alan
March 31st, 2020 07:10 - Frustration. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah! A common mistake made by ladies like the one in the image ~ she is a...
March 27th, 2020 08:58 - Trama (Jackeggz)
Great message to others Jack. In this poem the narrator is very strong...
March 27th, 2020 02:03 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Maybe it was this time that you were wrong Michael.
Kind regards,...
March 26th, 2020 02:24 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
Sure Andy. A wonderful world in springtime.
Ex animo, Alan
March 25th, 2020 16:35 - Tasting. (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how...
March 25th, 2020 07:39 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
I have to say that this piece flows well Fay, as all good poems...
March 24th, 2020 10:39 - Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
A wake up call for anyone who has forgotten their mum today Fay. Well...
March 22nd, 2020 09:15 - Diversity. (Fay Slimm.)
What you say in your wonderful piece (and book) is quite right Fay. The...
March 20th, 2020 10:23 - Readied. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a nicely languaged piece Fay. A wonderful reading...
March 17th, 2020 15:39 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart...
March 16th, 2020 14:58 - LIMERICK No 64 (Michael Edwards)
A witty and humerous write Michael. Are you sure it wasn\'t inspired by...
March 14th, 2020 17:28 - Tudor Love Note. (Fay Slimm.)
I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet...
March 12th, 2020 15:24 - Smitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just...
March 10th, 2020 14:19 - Protector. (Fay Slimm.)
A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit.
Ex animo,...
March 9th, 2020 16:57 - LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes dear Dolly. Her music has brought much happiness ~ a clever girl too I...
March 9th, 2020 16:17 - I rest my soul (Alta H Mabin)
A nice romantic piece at which you excel Ally.
Ex animo, Alan
March 8th, 2020 12:01 - Little girls like me (Jackeggz)
A strong poem from a strong person Jack.
I hope that all is well with...
March 7th, 2020 06:50 - Within Our Worlds. (Goldfinch60)
You need rain for a rainbow Andy, but you also need sunshine.
Ex animo,...
March 6th, 2020 11:43 - Mischief. (Fay Slimm.)
You have blown me away Fay. Love your blustery poem.
Ex animo, Alan
March 5th, 2020 10:59 - Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.)
...sets your mind to wandering, as a cloud. Yellow is the colour of the...
March 4th, 2020 15:10 - Sweet Female (Clara)
I see a sadness in this piece which causes me to worry somewhat about the...
March 4th, 2020 15:00 - tower (Dusk arising)
I enjoyed this piece very much DA. I have to say it is my kind of poem....
March 4th, 2020 14:44 - Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
This is priceless Fay. Thanks for presenting this poem today.
Ex animo,...
March 3rd, 2020 06:17 - His Masterpiece (Clara)
You paint a vivid picture here, Clara, I think it will take a while for...
March 2nd, 2020 15:15 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
Very well conducted Fay. Great to read.
Ex animo, Alan
March 2nd, 2020 12:08 - Crossing Out/Thinking Again. (Goldfinch60)
A good piece Andy ~ when I figure out what you mean.
Ex animo, Alan
March 2nd, 2020 07:06 - Starts with K (Jackeggz)
This is an interesting piece Jack. Indeed, everything has to start...
February 28th, 2020 01:07 - Battling. (Fay Slimm.)
Poetry themed on the sea is always well received , isn\'t it Fay? This one...
February 27th, 2020 15:07 - Spring Splendour. (Fay Slimm.)
It is definitely the image of daffodils that form the catalyst for...
February 26th, 2020 15:14 - Coloured Nonsense. (Goldfinch60)
I nice rhyming poem from you, today, Andy. It is my understanding that...
February 26th, 2020 04:45 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
Wisdom and philosophy go well together. A well written piece Fay.
Ex...
February 25th, 2020 08:53 - Four Words. (Goldfinch60)
Best kind of news anyone could receive Andy. Deserves a poem.
Ex animo,...
February 25th, 2020 02:39 - She Rises. (Fay Slimm.)
A warming write for today Fay, well done
\'The blush of dawn may yet...
February 21st, 2020 10:10 - Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
A very fine piece Fay and another delight to read.
\'The most beautiful...
February 20th, 2020 05:56 - Besting. (Fay Slimm.)
Lots and lots of metaphors here Fay.
Very cleverly executed. I doubt it...
February 19th, 2020 14:09 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
Truth in your words Fay.
Another fine write.
Ex animo, Alan
February 18th, 2020 06:46 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
You have done it again Fay. This is a truly wonderful piece.
There are...
February 17th, 2020 09:33 - Heavenly chakra (Alta H Mabin)
A great first read of the day for me today. nicely composed.
Ex animo,...
February 17th, 2020 04:16 - For Unsub. (Goldfinch60)
Hi Andy.
The Shads was my first album also. I bought it October 1961 for...
February 17th, 2020 03:59 - Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.)
A nice offering today, Fay.
A Byron quotation finds itself with me as I...
February 15th, 2020 07:16 - Fido a Valentine? (Orchidee)
No animals were harmed in the making of this poem.
Ex animo, Alan
February 13th, 2020 14:40 - Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.)
Good poem of course Fay, Lovely subject from your silver tongue. Hope you...
February 13th, 2020 08:02 - This Is Our Life Now (Clara)
Yes Clara, a poem of today. Modern and up to date (not like me). I enjoyed...
February 12th, 2020 02:13 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Excellently composed DA. I really enjoyed reading this today.
Kind...
February 12th, 2020 02:07 - Him (Jackeggz)
Good rhyming poem Jack. I hope that you like it yourself.
Sounds like...
February 12th, 2020 02:05 - SHALL WE ? (Fay Slimm.)
Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully...
February 11th, 2020 15:31 - That person (Jackeggz)
Another really good poem Jack. You must keep writing pieces like this....
February 11th, 2020 15:16 - Cowbell Chimings (Orchidee)
Hi Steve.
A fine job made of this. I hope that you had lots of fun with...
February 8th, 2020 08:05 - Midnight light (Jackeggz)
This is very atmospheric Jack. I wonder if it should read \'and how your...
February 6th, 2020 15:08 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
So very nice, again, Fay. A most enjoyable read and the language is...
February 5th, 2020 15:47 - Greeting. (Fay Slimm.)
Greetings Fay, a wonderful and brave write as we are taught to avoid...
February 4th, 2020 14:38 - A Hundred Years Ago. (Goldfinch60)
A good piece Andy but a hundred years is just a drop in the ocean ~ I\'ve...
February 4th, 2020 14:20 - Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
A wise subject to write about Fay. I live near a parliament of owls and...
February 3rd, 2020 15:57 - NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards)
This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and...
February 3rd, 2020 02:12 - windy (Dusk arising)
I enjoyed this DA, a very nice piece.
Kind regards, Alan
February 2nd, 2020 09:35 - Wishes (Clara)
Good write today Clara.
\'Do not seek to bring things to pass in...
January 30th, 2020 15:36 - My Soul Twin (Jo March)
I think that this is a wonderful poem Julia. I haven\'t, yet, read any of...
January 30th, 2020 02:07 - Peaceful (Jackeggz)
Sorry it\'s not the worst either Jack. Keep writing \'em like this and you...
January 30th, 2020 01:55 - Notes. (Fay Slimm.)
A wonderful bird-song to enhance anyone\'s day Fay. Thanks for passing on...
January 29th, 2020 15:12 - It’s okay (Jackeggz)
A nice little sexain Jack. I can see that you have thought about this.
I...
January 29th, 2020 01:52 - Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for the words of wisdom today Andy. I will take note.
\'Never do...
January 27th, 2020 07:03 - Musing (Fay Slimm.)
Good to record this and play it back with closed eyes Fay.
Reminds me of...
January 27th, 2020 06:56 - Bumps in the road (Jackeggz)
Good, good, good Jack. Folks are gonna like this. Rhyming is clever and...
January 27th, 2020 06:29 - Screams (Jackeggz)
The words of your poem do resonate for miles jack. I can hear them from...
January 24th, 2020 20:01 - Unforgettable. (Fay Slimm.)
It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words...
January 24th, 2020 14:45 - Final Parting. (Goldfinch60)
Sub umbra alarum tuarum
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 09:49 - WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards)
This is a very special piece I think Michael, and one which I\'d like to...
January 24th, 2020 09:40 - There come a day (Jackeggz)
Good nine liner here Jack, not before time though, it\'s nearly a month...
January 24th, 2020 09:27 - Your Praises (Clara)
Same song as you quoted yesterday to me Clara. \'Hello darkness my old...
January 23rd, 2020 16:47 - Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60)
Listening to music helps when ironing, as I\'m sure you know Andy, but...
January 23rd, 2020 08:09 - Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.)
One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described.
Ex...
January 23rd, 2020 08:04 - Signed, The Devil (Clara)
They may be dark words Clara but lighter, brighter ones are just around...
January 22nd, 2020 18:02 - Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem (Jackeggz)
Jackeggz ~ This poem is stunning. Only just gotten round to looking at it...
January 22nd, 2020 17:57 - A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you for giving us the day...Fay.
An endearing write, the cream of...
January 22nd, 2020 15:05 - We There. (Fay Slimm.)
A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to...
January 20th, 2020 15:29 - The rain shower (Jeremy Leach)
This is a nicely structured poem I think Jeremy. A wonderful subject...
January 20th, 2020 15:02
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