Comments on community poems by Alan .S. Jeeves

• Sakura Haiku (Alta H Mabin) Great Haiku Ally, You are so good at these. Ex animo, Alan
  April 24th, 2021 09:05
• Mosaic Pieces (Alta H Mabin) A poem about someone who has learned how to bend with the wind I think...
  December 9th, 2020 04:07
• Water (Jackeggz) This is a dark poem JE. However I think a lot of thought went into it. I...
  November 23rd, 2020 16:46
• vacations (Jackeggz) A happy day on the beach JE. Well done. Ex animo, Alan
  November 23rd, 2020 16:42
• go then (Dusk arising) This is a wonderful tribute Dusk. You have found and used your words...
  October 21st, 2020 06:43
• i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz) Good to see you posting again jackeggz. A clever little poem ~ I realize...
  August 15th, 2020 17:11
• Untying Yes. (Fay Slimm.) Do I think that this is a wonderful piece Fay? An untying yes! Ex...
  July 9th, 2020 10:12
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) I love your use of syllabubbles here Fay ~ enchanting to my childs...
  June 15th, 2020 14:40
• Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful piece by you Fay. Exactly as it happens. I have entertained...
  June 12th, 2020 02:58
• Chains. (Fay Slimm.) A pensively fine poem Fay. Very well put together. Ex animo, Alan
  May 21st, 2020 14:59
• Timed. (Fay Slimm.) This is equal to holding a conch shell to your ear and hearing the ocean...
  May 18th, 2020 09:38
• Tartan Prayer (Alta H Mabin) Well done Ally. Good to see you back. Ex animo, Alan
  May 12th, 2020 06:10
• Brief, (Fay Slimm.) This is a very fine \'free verse\' poem Fay. Very, very well done. Ex...
  May 12th, 2020 06:07
• The Glory of Life Acrostic (Goldfinch60) Viewed in awe, Ever teaching, Rightly so Your words are...
  May 1st, 2020 05:00
• Twice Stirred. (Fay Slimm.) Delightful and musing Fay. Happy May Day, Ex animo, Alan
  May 1st, 2020 04:37
• Tree-Towns. (Fay Slimm.) I love poems like this Fay. I can read them over and over again. I have a...
  April 23rd, 2020 10:03
• What Life Should Be. (Goldfinch60) Ever since WW2 people of this nation have been able to own their own...
  April 22nd, 2020 04:21
• Virtually. (Goldfinch60) Very cool write Andy. Politicians always did have to social distance ~ at...
  April 17th, 2020 04:48
• Sequence. (Fay Slimm.) A fine image of the morning\'s arrival Fay, with Pegasus leading the way...
  April 17th, 2020 04:42
• Enchanted. (Fay Slimm.) An enchanting write Fay. Ex animo, Alan
  April 10th, 2020 03:36
• Lockdowntown (Dusk arising) Well observed DA. Where I live you don\'t see too many people at any time...
  April 9th, 2020 02:19
• Perfection. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful theme Fay. These creatures are as beautiful at rest as they are...
  April 3rd, 2020 08:24
• Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60) You made me smile Andy. Ex animo, Alan
  April 3rd, 2020 08:17
• Treasure. (Fay Slimm.) Treasure indeed Fay. A very fine composition from you. Ex animo, Alan
  March 31st, 2020 07:10
• Frustration. (Fay Slimm.) Ah! A common mistake made by ladies like the one in the image ~ she is a...
  March 27th, 2020 08:58
• Trama (Jackeggz) Great message to others Jack. In this poem the narrator is very strong...
  March 27th, 2020 02:03
• DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2) (Michael Edwards) Maybe it was this time that you were wrong Michael. Kind regards,...
  March 26th, 2020 02:24
• What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60) Sure Andy. A wonderful world in springtime. Ex animo, Alan
  March 25th, 2020 16:35
• Tasting. (Fay Slimm.) Sounds like my almost daily routine here in Yorkshire Fay. I wonder how...
  March 25th, 2020 07:39
• Lost. (Fay Slimm.) I have to say that this piece flows well Fay, as all good poems...
  March 24th, 2020 10:39
• Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.) A wake up call for anyone who has forgotten their mum today Fay. Well...
  March 22nd, 2020 09:15
• Diversity. (Fay Slimm.) What you say in your wonderful piece (and book) is quite right Fay. The...
  March 20th, 2020 10:23
• Readied. (Fay Slimm.) This is a nicely languaged piece Fay. A wonderful reading...
  March 17th, 2020 15:39
• Enticing. (Fay Slimm.) I always try to catch the sunrise Fay. We must see it from 300 miles apart...
  March 16th, 2020 14:58
• LIMERICK No 64 (Michael Edwards) A witty and humerous write Michael. Are you sure it wasn\'t inspired by...
  March 14th, 2020 17:28
• Tudor Love Note. (Fay Slimm.) I hope she gets a favourable reply Fay ~ the age of chivalry is not yet...
  March 12th, 2020 15:24
• Smitten. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, this is far too early for Valentine\'s day \'21. Guess you just...
  March 10th, 2020 14:19
• Protector. (Fay Slimm.) A colourful and Kaleidoscopic piece Fay. I enjoyed my visit. Ex animo,...
  March 9th, 2020 16:57
• LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes dear Dolly. Her music has brought much happiness ~ a clever girl too I...
  March 9th, 2020 16:17
• I rest my soul (Alta H Mabin) A nice romantic piece at which you excel Ally. Ex animo, Alan
  March 8th, 2020 12:01
• Little girls like me (Jackeggz) A strong poem from a strong person Jack. I hope that all is well with...
  March 7th, 2020 06:50
• Within Our Worlds. (Goldfinch60) You need rain for a rainbow Andy, but you also need sunshine. Ex animo,...
  March 6th, 2020 11:43
• Mischief. (Fay Slimm.) You have blown me away Fay. Love your blustery poem. Ex animo, Alan
  March 5th, 2020 10:59
• Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.) ...sets your mind to wandering, as a cloud. Yellow is the colour of the...
  March 4th, 2020 15:10
• Sweet Female (Clara) I see a sadness in this piece which causes me to worry somewhat about the...
  March 4th, 2020 15:00
• tower (Dusk arising) I enjoyed this piece very much DA. I have to say it is my kind of poem....
  March 4th, 2020 14:44
• Richer. (Fay Slimm.) This is priceless Fay. Thanks for presenting this poem today. Ex animo,...
  March 3rd, 2020 06:17
• His Masterpiece (Clara) You paint a vivid picture here, Clara, I think it will take a while for...
  March 2nd, 2020 15:15
• Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.) Very well conducted Fay. Great to read. Ex animo, Alan
  March 2nd, 2020 12:08
• Crossing Out/Thinking Again. (Goldfinch60) A good piece Andy ~ when I figure out what you mean. Ex animo, Alan
  March 2nd, 2020 07:06
• Starts with K (Jackeggz) This is an interesting piece Jack. Indeed, everything has to start...
  February 28th, 2020 01:07
• Battling. (Fay Slimm.) Poetry themed on the sea is always well received , isn\'t it Fay? This one...
  February 27th, 2020 15:07
• Spring Splendour. (Fay Slimm.) It is definitely the image of daffodils that form the catalyst for...
  February 26th, 2020 15:14
• Coloured Nonsense. (Goldfinch60) I nice rhyming poem from you, today, Andy. It is my understanding that...
  February 26th, 2020 04:45
• Life Song. (Fay Slimm.) Wisdom and philosophy go well together. A well written piece Fay. Ex...
  February 25th, 2020 08:53
• Four Words. (Goldfinch60) Best kind of news anyone could receive Andy. Deserves a poem. Ex animo,...
  February 25th, 2020 02:39
• She Rises. (Fay Slimm.) A warming write for today Fay, well done \'The blush of dawn may yet...
  February 21st, 2020 10:10
• Knowing. (Fay Slimm.) A very fine piece Fay and another delight to read. \'The most beautiful...
  February 20th, 2020 05:56
• Besting. (Fay Slimm.) Lots and lots of metaphors here Fay. Very cleverly executed. I doubt it...
  February 19th, 2020 14:09
• Scaled (Fay Slimm.) Truth in your words Fay. Another fine write. Ex animo, Alan
  February 18th, 2020 06:46
• Over ? (Fay Slimm.) You have done it again Fay. This is a truly wonderful piece. There are...
  February 17th, 2020 09:33
• Heavenly chakra (Alta H Mabin) A great first read of the day for me today. nicely composed. Ex animo,...
  February 17th, 2020 04:16
• For Unsub. (Goldfinch60) Hi Andy. The Shads was my first album also. I bought it October 1961 for...
  February 17th, 2020 03:59
• Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.) A nice offering today, Fay. A Byron quotation finds itself with me as I...
  February 15th, 2020 07:16
• Fido a Valentine? (Orchidee) No animals were harmed in the making of this poem. Ex animo, Alan
  February 13th, 2020 14:40
• Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.) Good poem of course Fay, Lovely subject from your silver tongue. Hope you...
  February 13th, 2020 08:02
• This Is Our Life Now (Clara) Yes Clara, a poem of today. Modern and up to date (not like me). I enjoyed...
  February 12th, 2020 02:13
• The only love she held onto (Dusk arising) Excellently composed DA. I really enjoyed reading this today. Kind...
  February 12th, 2020 02:07
• Him (Jackeggz) Good rhyming poem Jack. I hope that you like it yourself. Sounds like...
  February 12th, 2020 02:05
• SHALL WE ? (Fay Slimm.) Power in your words Fay. Delightfully composed, delightfully...
  February 11th, 2020 15:31
• That person (Jackeggz) Another really good poem Jack. You must keep writing pieces like this....
  February 11th, 2020 15:16
• Cowbell Chimings (Orchidee) Hi Steve. A fine job made of this. I hope that you had lots of fun with...
  February 8th, 2020 08:05
• Midnight light (Jackeggz) This is very atmospheric Jack. I wonder if it should read \'and how your...
  February 6th, 2020 15:08
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) So very nice, again, Fay. A most enjoyable read and the language is...
  February 5th, 2020 15:47
• Greeting. (Fay Slimm.) Greetings Fay, a wonderful and brave write as we are taught to avoid...
  February 4th, 2020 14:38
• A Hundred Years Ago. (Goldfinch60) A good piece Andy but a hundred years is just a drop in the ocean ~ I\'ve...
  February 4th, 2020 14:20
• Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) A wise subject to write about Fay. I live near a parliament of owls and...
  February 3rd, 2020 15:57
• NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards) This is a fine first read of the day Michael. Must save to read again and...
  February 3rd, 2020 02:12
• windy (Dusk arising) I enjoyed this DA, a very nice piece. Kind regards, Alan
  February 2nd, 2020 09:35
• Wishes (Clara) Good write today Clara. \'Do not seek to bring things to pass in...
  January 30th, 2020 15:36
• My Soul Twin (Jo March) I think that this is a wonderful poem Julia. I haven\'t, yet, read any of...
  January 30th, 2020 02:07
• Peaceful (Jackeggz) Sorry it\'s not the worst either Jack. Keep writing \'em like this and you...
  January 30th, 2020 01:55
• Notes. (Fay Slimm.) A wonderful bird-song to enhance anyone\'s day Fay. Thanks for passing on...
  January 29th, 2020 15:12
• It’s okay (Jackeggz) A nice little sexain Jack. I can see that you have thought about this. I...
  January 29th, 2020 01:52
• Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for the words of wisdom today Andy. I will take note. \'Never do...
  January 27th, 2020 07:03
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) Good to record this and play it back with closed eyes Fay. Reminds me of...
  January 27th, 2020 06:56
• Bumps in the road (Jackeggz) Good, good, good Jack. Folks are gonna like this. Rhyming is clever and...
  January 27th, 2020 06:29
• Screams (Jackeggz) The words of your poem do resonate for miles jack. I can hear them from...
  January 24th, 2020 20:01
• Unforgettable. (Fay Slimm.) It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual \'putting music to words...
  January 24th, 2020 14:45
• Final Parting. (Goldfinch60) Sub umbra alarum tuarum Ex animo, Alan
  January 24th, 2020 09:49
• WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards) This is a very special piece I think Michael, and one which I\'d like to...
  January 24th, 2020 09:40
• There come a day (Jackeggz) Good nine liner here Jack, not before time though, it\'s nearly a month...
  January 24th, 2020 09:27
• Your Praises (Clara) Same song as you quoted yesterday to me Clara. \'Hello darkness my old...
  January 23rd, 2020 16:47
• Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60) Listening to music helps when ironing, as I\'m sure you know Andy, but...
  January 23rd, 2020 08:09
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) One of life\'s lessons I think Fay. And so very well described. Ex...
  January 23rd, 2020 08:04
• Signed, The Devil (Clara) They may be dark words Clara but lighter, brighter ones are just around...
  January 22nd, 2020 18:02
• Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem (Jackeggz) Jackeggz ~ This poem is stunning. Only just gotten round to looking at it...
  January 22nd, 2020 17:57
• A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you for giving us the day...Fay. An endearing write, the cream of...
  January 22nd, 2020 15:05
• We There. (Fay Slimm.) A very nice quatorzain Fay. Well executed, in my view, and a pleasure to...
  January 20th, 2020 15:29
• The rain shower (Jeremy Leach) This is a nicely structured poem I think Jeremy. A wonderful subject...
  January 20th, 2020 15:02