Comments on community poems by Alan .S. Jeeves
- Rivering. (Fay Slimm.)
This eloquent piece flows with the current Fay. What a wonderful title...
January 19th, 2020 08:20 - Challenge. (Fay Slimm.)
Good, good write Fay. Reminds me of a Neil Innes song from 1968:-
The...
January 16th, 2020 16:43 - Breaking Through. (Fay Slimm.)
A very happy and meaningful write I think Fay.
Ex animo, Alan
January 15th, 2020 07:17 - Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.)
A very vivid portrayal of coastal mightiness. Although 60 miles from the...
January 13th, 2020 07:30 - Mushrooms Again. (Goldfinch60)
This is the oldest joke in the world Andy:-
\'There\'s nothing like a...
January 13th, 2020 06:44 - BUTTERFLY ~ ANGEL 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There are many nice ways of composing a poem aren\'t there? Though one...
January 11th, 2020 14:57 - Folly (Fay Slimm.)
The earth is hushed, A silent chill,
Serene and blushed ~ calm and...
January 10th, 2020 05:05 - Another New Day. (Goldfinch60)
\'Write it on your heart that every day is the best day of the year. It\'s...
January 10th, 2020 04:51 - IF. (Fay Slimm.)
Another excellent composition Fay. This is how it should be...
January 9th, 2020 08:58 - Time? (Goldfinch60)
Good subject Andy. Leaves the reader with their own question to...
January 9th, 2020 02:56 - I am (Alta H Mabin)
Very beautiful Ally and very well done.
Ex animo, Alan
January 8th, 2020 03:24 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent Andy. We have buzzards near home and I can see them more or less...
January 8th, 2020 03:22 - Life Changes. (Goldfinch60)
A wealth of wealth here Andy. It\'s a rich man, he who owns the day.
Ex...
January 7th, 2020 05:51 - My Spaceman (Clara)
Good to see you back in harness on MPS Clara. I nice flowing poem to get...
January 4th, 2020 02:09 - Fragile memories (Alta H Mabin)
Why love when losing causes so much pain?
We love so as not to be...
January 2nd, 2020 16:11 - Bethlehem Birth (Orchidee)
A few more to go yet Steve ~ it seems it\'s the 365 days of Christmas...
January 2nd, 2020 16:01 - Winter\'s Low Sun. (Fay Slimm.)
I knew good things would come this year Fay. Excellent.
Ex animo, Alan
January 2nd, 2020 15:55 - Eventide Then Morning (Orchidee)
Kind and apt Steve. Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 14:52 - Happy New Year (Alta H Mabin)
First of many, hopefully, this year Ally.
Ex animo, Alan
January 1st, 2020 08:47 - New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.)
Good stuff Fay, I see that you\'re branching out (sorry).
HNY
Ex...
January 1st, 2020 08:39 - Pieces (Jackeggz)
I have to say there is no floor
If you\'re not strong then try some...
December 29th, 2019 18:30 - The New Watch. (Goldfinch60)
Ah but will his phone survive in the wet? Maybe it will!
Ex animo, Alan
December 29th, 2019 07:37 - Oh, what a morning! (Alta H Mabin)
This is a good write Ally, thank you for sharing it today.
Ex animo,...
December 23rd, 2019 14:28 - Birthday Trumpet. (Goldfinch60)
The notes of great musicians fill the air, even when they are gone Andy....
December 23rd, 2019 03:16 - SEE AMID THE WINTER SNOW 💜 BRIAN & ANGELA 💜 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A very nice seasonal piece. Lots of snow, yet still warm.
Angus dei ~...
December 23rd, 2019 03:11 - A Subaltern\'s Marriage. (Goldfinch60)
A Subaltern\'s Love Song is an astounding poem, Andy, poetic license of...
December 22nd, 2019 07:33 - Without you (Thewayiwrite)
I enjoyed this poem very much. I don\'t think it can be improved in any...
December 22nd, 2019 02:18 - Move Forward - Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Nice tanka here Andy, well done.
Ex animo, Alan
December 21st, 2019 06:06 - Littleness. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a very special poem I think Fay. \'Grass blades creak\' (why...
December 20th, 2019 12:43 - Shore-Song. (Fay Slimm.)
Can hear the music Fay. The timpani highlights the crashing waves.
Ex...
December 19th, 2019 15:01 - Sunday Drivers? (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like you are seeing red Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
December 19th, 2019 14:54 - Shine bright (Jackeggz)
This is more like it jackeggz!
Iowa, USA, is closer to Yorkshire, England...
December 16th, 2019 08:06 - Ol\' Blue Eyes. (Goldfinch60)
Good going Andy. I see Frank has made a comeback today.
Ex animo, \'ol...
December 15th, 2019 04:08 - Fall leaves (Jackeggz)
I wish you hadn\'t writ this,
When you are just thirteen;
You don\'t, at...
December 14th, 2019 11:58 - Infamy! Infamy! (Goldfinch60)
What a carry on Andy!
Ex animo, Alan
December 14th, 2019 04:26 - Hermit (Jabberwocky)
This poem has everything for me. Very well done. Yes.
I would like to...
December 12th, 2019 15:41 - Lost in Transaltion. (Goldfinch60)
Noscitur a sociis
A word is known by the company it keeps
Ex animo,...
December 10th, 2019 03:14 - Melodic Memories (Orchidee)
Very nice too Steve. Nice choice of words if I may say so.
I have a...
December 8th, 2019 06:14 - Alternate Facts. (Goldfinch60)
Is what you write really true Andy?
Good number though, Ah! Joe...
December 7th, 2019 11:25 - School Daze (Bragee)
Good observation put into words.
Reads like my school days!
Kind...
December 6th, 2019 13:02 - Doctor Respect. (Goldfinch60)
Intelligenti pauca
(A few words suffice for those who understand)
Ex...
December 5th, 2019 07:56 - Stunning Unique Patterns. (Goldfinch60)
I find ice patterns on my bedroom window Andy ~ but they\'re on the...
December 4th, 2019 05:02 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
Another wonderful voicing Fay, thank you.
Ex animo, Alan
December 2nd, 2019 11:32 - Robophobia (SabreLi)
Good rhyming sabreLi, important (I think). I would have liked to have seen...
November 30th, 2019 09:59 - An Unused Side – Discarded Memories (Nafis Light)
I think this is you at your best (up until now) Joker. I enjoyed my...
November 29th, 2019 04:59 - Trust. (Fay Slimm.)
Out of a million words you always know which ones to select Fay....
November 28th, 2019 06:56 - Advent Awareness (Orchidee)
More notes than words on this one Steve, a bit like my instrumentals. Mark...
November 28th, 2019 06:51 - Risen to the Light (Goldfinch60)
You are always right when you write, Andy ~ right?
Ex animo, Alan
November 28th, 2019 06:37 - Boredom Personified. (Goldfinch60)
These days when I play, Andy, I look up and the audience is exactly as you...
November 27th, 2019 05:48 - If these walls could talk (Alta H Mabin)
Good to see you back Ally. Nice write ~ sad but nice.
Ex animo, Alan
November 25th, 2019 15:19 - Lost in Fiction. (Goldfinch60)
Hope you weren\'t reading The Doomsday Book there Andy!
Ex animo. Alan
November 25th, 2019 14:40 - DRY STONE WALLS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I love this poem A&B. Where I live I am surrounded by dry-stone walls...
November 24th, 2019 03:05 - Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday) (Fay Slimm.)
Two for the price of one Fay. Always good but Doubly Bubbly good this...
November 22nd, 2019 10:39 - Is There No Hope? (Goldfinch60)
Very good 1st.poem Andy ~ keep at it!
Ex animo, Alan
November 22nd, 2019 10:29 - No Chance (Fay Slimm.)
This is a credit to yourself and MPS. Some words when cocktailed with...
November 21st, 2019 06:33 - the mother who I used to know (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Wonderfully structured and presented Kevin. Great rhythm and sentiment ~ a...
November 17th, 2019 07:38 - Lord Now Let..... (Orchidee)
Nunc dimittis servum tuum, Domine
Amicum tuum, Alan
November 16th, 2019 02:58 - A Loving Side – Like A Flower (Nafis Light)
A very nice poem to read at the beggining of a new day. I enjoyed this...
November 16th, 2019 02:42 - Gone To Glory - In Memory of J.W. (Orchidee)
An excellent poem and tribute Steve. I also like to use \'thee\' and...
November 12th, 2019 05:41 - Kids Eh? (Goldfinch60)
If you had anything about you Andy you would move into the garage and let...
November 12th, 2019 02:44 - Strange Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Bridge over troubled water it seems Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
November 9th, 2019 02:41 - The Coffee Angel. (Goldfinch60)
Jean Kelly and the two boys do a good job of this routine Andy. I think...
November 8th, 2019 06:39 - Flying to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Happy anivo for 07 November 1981. a fine record to marry to (the \'B\'...
November 7th, 2019 02:55 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
Excellent words Fay, A pleasure to read.
Ex animo, Alan
November 6th, 2019 12:16 - Far More. (Fay Slimm.)
Very nicely composed Fay. The atmosphere is with me as I read. Sounds a...
November 4th, 2019 06:58 - Words to Page. (Goldfinch60)
I suppose I should challenge you, Andy, to compose a poem to be set to the...
November 3rd, 2019 09:26 - Extended Ripples of Life. (Goldfinch60)
This is excellent Andy. Will pool it in my fave\'s if I may.
Ex animo,...
October 27th, 2019 07:38 - Morecombe (Goldfinch60)
Three funny, witty men.
October 24th, 2019 08:07 - Oh no.....! (Orchidee)
I\'m sure you sing all the right notes.....
Melodically, Alan
October 24th, 2019 04:23 - Human hues (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Hello dear wordsmith.
I enjoy how you include at least one of the...
October 23rd, 2019 06:58 - Contact. (Fay Slimm.)
Once more, an excellent piece Fay. I promise I will read again this...
October 23rd, 2019 05:44 - Rapturous Return (Orchidee)
Hi orchi. I think changing round the last two verses has the edge (for...
October 23rd, 2019 05:37 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie) (Goldfinch60)
I\'m just sorry Andre Preview can\'t now be here to put music to it ~...
October 23rd, 2019 05:23 - Nelson Went to Battle. (Goldfinch60)
I salute your wit,
I think it\'s.....clever.
Good day Andy.
Ex...
October 21st, 2019 01:20 - COMES AUTUMN. (Fay Slimm.)
What can I say Fay? Outstanding? ~ yes! outstanding. May I list this...
October 17th, 2019 05:23 - Imagining. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve played on this song many times (with different singers). The solo...
October 17th, 2019 05:11 - You are (Alta H Mabin)
Nicely done Ally ~ very nice.
Ex animo, Alan
October 16th, 2019 13:14 - ‘Smile A While’ (Thoughts In Time)
Where on earth did you get this true likeness of our new dappled grey mare...
October 13th, 2019 04:54 - Croquet Prize. (Goldfinch60)
Pete Seeger\'s sister, Peggy, was married to Ewan Mccoll who, in 1957,...
October 13th, 2019 04:45 - Sightless. (Fay Slimm.)
Your words are clear as Cornish air
They cause you want to dream;
Your...
October 12th, 2019 05:36 - THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards)
Yes ~ the odd one out is carp because it is the only to carry a gun and...
October 10th, 2019 11:37 - First Light. (Fay Slimm.)
I breath in every fine word Fay. Thanks for starting my day so well. I...
October 10th, 2019 01:53 - Lonely? Not I. (Goldfinch60)
I can\'t ever remember being alone in my life Andy and your words remind...
October 10th, 2019 01:37 - My Firework (Clara)
Sparkling images explode in your words Clara ~ well done.
Kind regards,...
October 9th, 2019 06:08 - The Lady in White. (Goldfinch60)
.....Never seen you shine so bright....
Ex animo, Alan
October 9th, 2019 01:50 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Excellent, excellent, excellent. May I grab it as a fave\' ?
Kind...
October 8th, 2019 04:57 - Shriek (Dusk arising)
The seaside gulls have progressed to chips nowadays, I understand....
October 7th, 2019 07:27 - Silence. (Fay Slimm.)
Noises can be good or bad but silence is always silence. We can be so...
October 7th, 2019 05:59 - Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Highest compliments on your birthday Andy and on your wonderful words...
October 7th, 2019 02:09 - Definitions in Music. (Goldfinch60)
\'76 trombones\' will sound awesome Andy.
Ex animo, Alan
October 6th, 2019 01:31 - Tears And Old Bitterness Of Fortune (ForeverJesus7)
What if your brother was proud to do this for you Dion?
Ex animo, Alan
October 6th, 2019 01:26 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely done Andy. Stanza 1 describes where I live perfectly. I looked out...
October 3rd, 2019 06:55 - THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi A&B. Love roses poems. Rabbie Burns\' Red, Red one is delicious. As you...
October 2nd, 2019 10:13 - Angels in Disguise (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Wonderful words Kevin. Will save as fave.
Kind regards Alan
September 28th, 2019 05:34 - Ancient love (Alta H Mabin)
Beautifully written and presented work, Ally, 8.00 am Saturday morning...
September 28th, 2019 02:04 - So. (Goldfinch60)
If you need help with this, Andy, just send me an SOs
Ex animo, Alan
September 27th, 2019 01:59 - Breathe (Alta H Mabin)
You know, Ally, actuALLY every morning the dawn rises in order to greet...
September 26th, 2019 08:37 - No Longer Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
As a session electric guitar player one of my favourite \'jobs\' is to...
September 26th, 2019 05:37 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
Better to dine alone, Ally, than dine with the devil.
Ex animo, Alan
September 24th, 2019 05:07 - Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.)
Pianissimo ~ pp.
Nay, pianississimo ~ ppp.
Ex animo, Alan
September 11th, 2019 03:18
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