Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58)
Hello Cassie - feels like a very attractive walk.
But how many sisters?...
September 14th, 2024 16:44 - Paper lantern (FrasMac)
Yes - can tell you are new - you haven\'t managed to beat the programme ...
September 14th, 2024 16:26 - Pretty in Purple and Pink (Neville)
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34 - On war.. (NafisaSB)
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed...
September 14th, 2024 01:55 - Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60)
You gonna become our new George Orwell and Aldous Huxley combined, Andy?...
September 14th, 2024 01:50 - Ten Thoughts on Freedom (MendedFences27)
Stirring the pot? Sorry - I\'ve just finished responding to you and...
September 13th, 2024 22:01 - The Tears (M.E.M.)
First time prompt free? That You? Sad that it is so sad, because it is...
September 13th, 2024 21:56 - ~> Tears In Ma Beer Tuesday! - Sad Song - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
I cannot with all certainty discern if this is you, or you...
September 13th, 2024 21:48 - Island Of Dreams Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Dunno how I missed this little gem when I keep a close eye on what you are...
September 13th, 2024 06:39 - Diplomacy (NafisaSB)
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess...
September 13th, 2024 06:24 - I Want so badly to live (Poetaldo)
God not climate change?
Climate change not God?
September 13th, 2024 06:08 - America’s glass jaw (EvenwheniLie)
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right...
September 13th, 2024 06:05 - Karmasutra (Teddy.15)
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel...
September 13th, 2024 06:00 - Dedication Delights (Orchidee)
I\'m very fond of abbeys and cathedrals (if not crowded with other...
September 13th, 2024 05:49 - Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan)
The tourist experience: I loved my trips when they showed me some of the...
September 12th, 2024 17:09 - The rusty nail (Sorenbarrett)
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail...
September 12th, 2024 16:56 - ~> Come Fly With Me (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad.
Those two will probably make a better go of it than many...
September 12th, 2024 16:28 - Crime Scene (Tony36)
Good write.
September 12th, 2024 00:15 - The Stare (Tristan Robert Lange)
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then...
September 11th, 2024 20:34 - ~> Take Me To Your Leader Bro! (Thad Wilk)
Ah What\'s up Doc? Doncha wanna drop that AK47 an try some of this extra...
September 11th, 2024 19:32 - Me described by-way-of “in & out” (Maplespal)
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme...
September 11th, 2024 07:20 - Almena Dreams (Thoughtless)
I don\'t understand all of the local references, to be quite honest,...
September 11th, 2024 07:09 - ~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Had to be Walmart didn’t it…… and with all that candy...
September 10th, 2024 19:00 - For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough (Neville)
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and...
September 10th, 2024 18:45 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent...
September 10th, 2024 08:59 - Giant Hamsters! (Orchidee)
They\'re humpsters, I keep telling you they will rapidly multiply given...
September 10th, 2024 08:51 - Rust and steel (Sorenbarrett)
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed,...
September 10th, 2024 08:41 - A stranger in foreign lands (Saleh Ben Saleh)
The rich tapestry of consciousness memory and existence. Your poem struck...
September 10th, 2024 08:21 - Understand (Goddess of the Mist)
Been away for a while...glad to see you floating down again.
September 9th, 2024 17:54 - > The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk)
Here in Oz, because I am of a certain vintage, I get to see these private...
September 9th, 2024 17:50 - im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse)
Part of me wants to argue and shout because some of the ideas that are...
September 9th, 2024 08:47 - Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
\'Nature\'s gentleman\' - no better tribute from another man and a son.
September 9th, 2024 08:31 - Worship Worthiness (Orchidee)
Didn\'t know you used incense - wot\'s the problem? Moths?
September 9th, 2024 08:28 - Home (Teddy.15)
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned.........
September 9th, 2024 08:22 - A thirsty dream (Sorenbarrett)
Certainly made me thirsty,...
September 9th, 2024 08:13 - A complaint (NafisaSB)
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35 - ~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the...
September 8th, 2024 21:22 - Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\'Or it\'s telling you to charge forth and do something really adventurous...
September 8th, 2024 07:00 - Psalm Praise (Orchidee)
Think this style suits you orchi.......
September 8th, 2024 06:55 - Bricks of hope (Sorenbarrett)
Precisely - \'the same end\'
Faved for its truth and concision.
That\'s...
September 8th, 2024 06:50 - Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I never categorise my rubbish, but in your case here, I do believe you...
September 8th, 2024 06:24 - Council elections (2781)
Cannot avoid a response to this. What a pain in the arse the whole...
September 7th, 2024 07:25 - Jazzers List. (Goldfinch60)
Must work through that list myself, Andy – there’s one or two...
September 7th, 2024 02:27 - Fusions? (Orchidee)
I\'ve never understood fusioned poems - it takes much too much sweat and...
September 7th, 2024 01:07 - A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15)
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me...
September 6th, 2024 23:12 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
Cassie, loved the poem sans the last two stanzas.
September 6th, 2024 22:51 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies,...
September 6th, 2024 20:22 - ~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free...
September 6th, 2024 20:07 - Mystery Girl (Tony36)
Good write.
September 6th, 2024 19:49 - Rainbows and Waterfalls (MendedFences27)
OK – so you couldn’t be bothered putting it on canvas, you mislaid...
September 6th, 2024 19:35 - Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett)
Yes Soren - if anyone is going to pierce my skin it has to be a fully...
September 6th, 2024 11:55 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
They\'re teetering on the edge of adversity....
September 6th, 2024 01:57 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
Wot\'s wrong with hymns? They seem to keep you occupied, and (mostly) out...
September 6th, 2024 01:45 - The Tempest\'s Strike (Tristan Robert Lange)
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful...
September 5th, 2024 21:20 - guess what this poem is? (MR.apocalypse)
Teenage angst?
September 5th, 2024 20:00 - A Whale of a Time (senryu) (Teddy.15)
And guess what, Teddy - I had initial trouble with this, but having taken...
September 5th, 2024 17:35 - The Christmas Card (MendedFences27)
You kept me in suspenders the whole way Phil, despite that I had this...
September 5th, 2024 17:23 - ~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the...
September 5th, 2024 16:52 - Point of View (Tony36)
Great write.
September 5th, 2024 07:07 - Against The Flow/ (Goldfinch60)
A very satisfying summation of retirement and freedom, Andy - I can relate...
September 5th, 2024 06:42 - Hula Hooping Thru Insignificance (Rocky Lagou)
Daydream for a while (but not too long). You\'ll make it,...
September 4th, 2024 23:46 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
In the late sixties and early seventies tin badges were all the go –...
September 4th, 2024 17:13 - Cats Comforts (Orchidee)
So those humpsters you have.....
Good plea - you can extrapolate your...
September 4th, 2024 16:53 - From A Distance. (Goldfinch60)
Have to abandon TV, radio, all media to keep it at a distance, Andy. You...
September 4th, 2024 16:45 - And All That\'s Gold (Teddy.15)
Couldn\'t agree with your love of Autumn more, Teddy
An added note: I...
September 3rd, 2024 23:17 - The day that broke our hearts (Pappy155)
My sympathy. Innocent people die in war.
September 3rd, 2024 17:42 - An Incredibly Short Poem (Finley Oaktree)
You will have to work very much harder to convince me it is worth the...
September 3rd, 2024 17:38 - Clay (Skye-777)
Final departure, separation, the mixed emotions just under the surface,...
September 3rd, 2024 17:35 - - Blue Dragon And Viking Boy - (Thad Wilk)
Fight the good fight with all your might; let them villains know what\'s...
September 3rd, 2024 17:20 - Ten Small Poems 5 (MendedFences27)
You get away with murder, here sometimes by quickly moving on...😂
At...
September 3rd, 2024 17:14 - We are builders (Emptypot)
Neva mind the grandkids...I got it!😂
September 3rd, 2024 17:03 - To Be Voted Out (Emptypot)
Let you know? Let who Know? We haven\'t been properly introduced. You can...
September 3rd, 2024 16:53 - Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan)
A line which I discovered quite early came from a play/film (1957/1960...
September 3rd, 2024 07:58 - Gifts In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - occasionally someone doesn\'t assume and talks - how about you,
September 3rd, 2024 07:43 - Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe....
September 3rd, 2024 07:41 - The Magpies (Thepoetman1234)
\'Whitechapel, London, 1888\' - talking Jack here? Got that, but it\'s the...
September 3rd, 2024 07:19 - Inferno (Sorenbarrett)
Climate change really getting to you is it , Soren?
September 3rd, 2024 06:58 - ~ Bloody Red Riding Hood! (Thad Wilk)
Ah, morning tea.. Lace tablecloth.. scones.. clotted cream.. and.....
September 2nd, 2024 17:14 - Windy (2781)
Stop press: can confirm was a little draughty today....
September 2nd, 2024 09:42 - The Sell-Out Gig (Tom Dylan)
Please note 2781above, Tom. Ticket agencies can be manipulative rip offs,...
September 2nd, 2024 09:34 - The Arcade (DLewis88)
Nostalgia plus. Thank you.
September 1st, 2024 18:17 - I know nothing (2781)
I enjoyed that - however I feel sure that you have all the filters in...
September 1st, 2024 18:11 - ~> I Am A Troll! (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Modesty forbids, but I do consider myself a troll wrangler...
September 1st, 2024 17:34 - Polished news (Sorenbarrett)
Still available to those with motivation persistence and...
August 31st, 2024 16:42 - How Does God Feel? (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Despite my lack of belief or interest in \'God\', I can relate to this....
August 31st, 2024 16:31 - To Sing Or Not.. (Orchidee)
Not..
August 31st, 2024 02:45 - Urbanization (Thepoetman1234)
Don\'t go away. I gave you a hard time on the British Empire. I\'ll not...
August 31st, 2024 01:19 - Ten Small Poems 2 (MendedFences27)
Bite sized prompts to much (I was going to write \'deep\', but of that...
August 30th, 2024 19:37 - ~> Stan The Man? [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk)
Despite the OTT (Over The Top) attire, Stan could be OK when you get to...
August 30th, 2024 19:25 - Can you tell? (Neilton)
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does....
August 30th, 2024 18:48 - What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan)
😅😂🤣 Wot is poetry if it is not playing with words? Kept me amused...
August 30th, 2024 05:47 - The British Empire (Thepoetman1234)
Nah - you go on. You have two totally undemanding supporters above who...
August 30th, 2024 05:35 - Sonnet For Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
And you have done Autumn justice, Andy.
August 30th, 2024 01:40 - The British Empire (Thepoetman1234)
Exploitation, slavery, a class system..........
August 29th, 2024 22:00 - `~> Cheech AND Chong [ Limericks] (Thad Wilk)
This stuff they call weed,
I ain’t never seed;
I deny it all -
You go...
August 29th, 2024 17:33 - Mankind\'s Evolution (MendedFences27)
Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil....
August 29th, 2024 16:47 - Sandbags (Chris Duffy)
You\'ve been away too long Chris - going to stay round for a while?
The...
August 29th, 2024 07:29 - Fool (2781)
A rich experience you led me through, mate. More than glad you had such a...
August 29th, 2024 07:19 - Two Now... (Orchidee)
Whatever gets you through the night.
August 29th, 2024 07:16 - A scroll of paper (Fanita530)
you prompted me to look - You have a firm grasp of what is going on in the...
August 29th, 2024 07:04
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