Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• A snake? (HerTime) Quite lost as to how a snake (\'Green scales and a cold stare\') relates...
  March 10th, 2026 06:13
• ARENT WE WOMEN! (Ashayla) Some - like every other category of human it is possible to...
  March 10th, 2026 05:57
• Grant Us Graces (Orchidee) So how many Graces do you want, orchi? You sound a bit greedy to me......
  March 10th, 2026 04:17
• Terrible Or Beautiful. (Goldfinch60) So which of those two views is delusional, Andy?
  March 10th, 2026 04:11
• Tea with Mrs. Keeling (Jerry Reynolds) You\'ve done Mrs Keeling proud Jerry, with a preamble which set the scene,...
  March 10th, 2026 04:03
• Learning the Shape of Better (Matthew R. Callies) You have provided a poetic richness to what otherwise is sterile...
  March 9th, 2026 18:33
• My peace, my rules (Nicole Pritchard) That is maturity. I just hope it works when you engage with those folks...
  March 9th, 2026 18:21
• The Phantom Fingers of Sir Text-a-Lot (Gray0328) I wonder that young Soren upstairs hasn\'t introduced \'metaphor\' into...
  March 9th, 2026 17:21
• Let Him Play With Dolls (Aaron Roberson) Oh dear, we can\'t be having that! Wot do yer think socialisation is all...
  March 9th, 2026 16:40
• Rotterdam (Arqios) Amazing healing and resilience. A time portrait. Thanks Rik
  March 9th, 2026 16:32
• A word not needed (Sorenbarrett) The curse relieves stress and motivates evasive or corrective action? Is...
  March 9th, 2026 16:25
• My last supper (EvenwheniLie) Frosted Flakes weren\'t your last meal, were it? Reassure. Don\'t know...
  March 9th, 2026 04:46
• Never Clean [Haiku 4] (DeadRose) Cleaning my hole feels like this (I\'ve decided I won\'t bother).
  March 9th, 2026 04:41
• Awaited Mansoon !! (Grav27) Waiting for a bloke? Revise title spelling and then delete this if...
  March 8th, 2026 18:03
• Foundations of Revolution (Tristan Robert Lange) \"Yesterday’s ignorance still feeds today’s fears.\" - Yesterday\'s...
  March 8th, 2026 17:44
• The Old Scary Lady (Thomas W Case) \'And sometimes, just sometimes, I wonder if she was laughing, or...
  March 8th, 2026 17:16
• The Night\'s Ledger (Matthew R. Callies) I believe you really enjoyed that as you laid it out. I certainly...
  March 8th, 2026 16:48
• FROM A DISTANT LAND (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Not too many boots on the ground these days.... Traditional war poem...
  March 8th, 2026 16:31
• Aftertastes (Neville) Needed a new fridge if you were generating that amount of heat alongside....
  March 8th, 2026 16:26
• Somthin jus a little human (Sorenbarrett) You’ve certainly joined company with some widespread cultural beliefs...
  March 8th, 2026 16:12
• Can\'t, Cannot, Can. (Goldfinch60) Best you go for another kip, kip, kip, Andy (For anyone unfamiliar with...
  March 8th, 2026 03:06
• Depersonalization (Allie561) Snot that bad - I blow my nose regularly ...
  March 8th, 2026 02:58
• Jacobin paranoia (Arqios) \'It was the best of times, it was the worst of times....so far like the...
  March 8th, 2026 01:50
•     A Letter the Wind Might Carry (Efrain Cajar) As all commentary above. Good stuff.
  March 7th, 2026 16:00
• My friend (Sorenbarrett) Great yarn Soren. Each line a chapter.
  March 7th, 2026 15:43
• The Sparrow\'s Unfinished Lesson (Matthew R. Callies) Thanks Mathew - you responded to my request handsomely. Words have syntax,...
  March 7th, 2026 08:25
• passion dies (Lane.rowe) Glad to see it called \'passion\' rather than \'love\' (sorry - this is an...
  March 6th, 2026 17:52
• The Red Car in the Pines (Lane.rowe) A romantic space, a small safe home to crawl into.. painted vividly.
  March 6th, 2026 17:46
• Defining Still (Neville) Neville, many words have been expended over time here and elsewhere in...
  March 6th, 2026 17:26
• To Praise Or Not? (Orchidee) Orchi - do you think he needs all that praise? Is he really so very...
  March 6th, 2026 08:30
• Coin Return (Matthew R. Callies) I cannot see Tristan complaining about your piece Mathew, which has...
  March 6th, 2026 08:20
• The Good Wolf (Efrain Cajar) Well narrated fantasy that was an enjoyable read.
  March 6th, 2026 08:09
• The Heckler (Explicit) (Syd) Thanks for that, Syd – seen (from a distance and the further the better)...
  March 5th, 2026 17:33
• surprise (Tristan Robert Lange) There\'s a real truth there Tristan, a true representation of pain....
  March 5th, 2026 16:54
• Unreal (2781) Are you sure it is \'real is unreal\' and not \'unreal is real\'?
  March 5th, 2026 16:41
• Acceptance (Katie B.) You may have a point or two there....
  March 5th, 2026 16:37
• The Last Riddle Refuses an Answer (Matthew R. Callies) Agreed - \'the meaning of life is unknowable\' 👍 You have managed to...
  March 5th, 2026 00:54
• Dare Me the Difficult Thing (Matthew R. Callies) Category \'didactic\': \"Good Prose First, Then Poetry\"
  March 5th, 2026 00:14
• Forced choice (Sorenbarrett) This isn\'t an emotional thing at all, is it? You would by now have...
  March 4th, 2026 06:04
• The Moon At Dawn. (Goldfinch60) Sanguinity personified, Andy.
  March 4th, 2026 05:52
• Misplaced Things (Gray0328) \'memory’s frays\' just about sums it up. Words/terms missing just when...
  March 3rd, 2026 18:29
• The Math of Life (Thomas W Case) The likelihood of your survival and be left with the ability to document...
  March 3rd, 2026 18:03
• grimoire (Arqios) Too much for me, mate. Way beyond my level of understanding, or even wish...
  March 3rd, 2026 18:00
• The Whistle Blower Wonders Alone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Full whistleblower protection? Doubt it.
  March 3rd, 2026 17:17
• In the name of faith, in the name of nation (Devender Kumar) Becomes an almost universal plot. Certainly the \'birth\' of more than one...
  March 3rd, 2026 17:13
• Tuesday A.M. (Efrain Cajar) Longitudinal picture of a working day so very familiar portrayed in what...
  March 3rd, 2026 16:59
• Sunday Morning, Birmingham (Matthew R. Callies) I know nothing of the film or indeed the murder. Nevertheless your poem is...
  March 3rd, 2026 04:08
• Zelotypophobia (– NoeticNonsense) Curiosity got the better of me and I was forced to consult the Oracle in...
  March 3rd, 2026 04:01
• Epitaph (Kevin Hulme) Left the world with a smile on his face - not too sure of the advisability...
  March 3rd, 2026 03:52
• the Street (Paul Bell) I\'ve mentioned it before, I know...Settle down, write a novel and get it...
  March 2nd, 2026 06:52
• Garbage! (Orchidee) As I scanned the running sheet of todays poems, I happened upon \'3:36 -...
  March 2nd, 2026 06:38
• The Magic Vase, (Goldfinch60) Not typical of you Andy, but a great little fairytale never the less.
  March 2nd, 2026 06:20
• The Academic Survivor (Efrain Cajar) Yep - that felt it took about as long to read as it did to attain my...
  March 2nd, 2026 06:11
• Hate in the house (Allie561) Disputes of this kind take a terrible toll on the kids - they love both...
  March 2nd, 2026 05:55
• In nosocomio (Eugene S.) Action surprising; outcome unknown. Prediction impossible. Thanks for...
  March 1st, 2026 18:57
• Hope is a Junkyard Sparrow (Thomas W Case) One day at a time with hope slid just under the skin to shield from...
  March 1st, 2026 18:40
• Got My Kefir Gut Drink (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Also a health warning....evidently. A Public Service Announcement. I must...
  March 1st, 2026 18:28
• Peace Doves? (Goldfinch60) Of white doves I know nothing; of politicians..... \'Remember when and...
  March 1st, 2026 07:35
• The problem is the solution (Hzugman) Fun. I could happily enjoy another half dozen quatrains which revealed the...
  March 1st, 2026 05:09
• Love, According to Experts (Who Failed) (Efrain Cajar) I avoid love/relationship poetry like the plague. However having sampled...
  March 1st, 2026 04:42
• We Meet Again... (Doggerel Dave) \"Us\" ain\'t so very clever either...😊
  March 1st, 2026 01:19
• Wear and tear (NafisaSB) Safina, I\'m all sympathy and empathy when it comes to knee replacement...
  February 28th, 2026 17:40
• Contrast (Syd) A rainbow isn’t a rainbow without a grey background. Your argument re...
  February 28th, 2026 17:05
• Us (Sorenbarrett) So could we not be better than that these days? Usual enriched write,...
  February 28th, 2026 03:50
• The End Of Winter. (Goldfinch60) Happens it\'s end of summer, autumn a commin on here....
  February 28th, 2026 03:44
• It was Me (Ryan Willis) Keep going, Ryan/Finnerty - I\'m sure there\'s much more in your cache to...
  February 27th, 2026 17:04
• “snake eating its tale” (Arqios) Neva mind yer ouroboros, this post would not be complete (quite possibly...
  February 27th, 2026 16:48
• Awake At Six. (Goldfinch60) Funny you should mention that Andy.....
  February 27th, 2026 16:27
• Bright Future Stolen (Matthew R. Callies) The poem plus the two commentaries above constitute a complete dossier and...
  February 27th, 2026 16:24
• I Confess of Poetry (Kevin Hulme) I\'m not going to subject you to another of my rants on love poetry, or...
  February 26th, 2026 23:40
• Changing Days (Paul Bell) I need some jolly old tea and scones..... You\'ve vandalised my mind...
  February 26th, 2026 18:47
• Wrong write (2781) I don\'t watch footy, but do settle in for a game or two of State of...
  February 26th, 2026 16:08
• The great illusion (Sorenbarrett) Yes, I\'ll largely go along with that, Soren, with a couple of...
  February 26th, 2026 15:50
• five characters (Arqios) As I ignore the acrostic element and go after the message, I find myself...
  February 26th, 2026 06:15
• A THRONE TO GRACE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I have a special affinity with my old armchair and do wonder of it\'s fate...
  February 26th, 2026 06:00
• THE GREAT PREGNANT WOMEN (Durdica Porobija) Gosh - if child birth is so easy and beautiful, I think I might have a...
  February 26th, 2026 05:46
• Welcome To Your New Home Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Not for the homeless too? Great sonnet, Andy - Your daughter should...
  February 26th, 2026 05:42
• Practical Guide to Being an Adult (and Failing at It) (Efrain Cajar) You trying to burn me off? Entertained no end, but bugger it, I\'m...
  February 26th, 2026 05:32
• If (Neville) Hey Neville - without a response to any of us, you have still achieved...
  February 25th, 2026 23:44
• Residue for vultures (Sorenbarrett) I wonder if anyone reads the whole of a commentary thread below a poem?...
  February 25th, 2026 16:36
• The Fox, the Lion, and the River’s Mirror (Efrain Cajar) I confess I\'m not a fan of longform poetry as my concentration levels...
  February 25th, 2026 05:30
• The Couple Nextdoor (Kevin Hulme) With perdition on one side and some hell bent Harleys on the other , the...
  February 24th, 2026 22:51
• To big (2781) You are auditioning for a spot on Gardening Australia aren\'t you? I think...
  February 24th, 2026 18:10
• Debating the Sky (Thomas W Case) It\'s the location. I could well be your Dad, except my sometimes...
  February 24th, 2026 17:50
• American Séance (Tristan Robert Lange) The actual incident filtered through to the tranny atop my kitchen fridge,...
  February 24th, 2026 17:36
• Glowing Medallion & Silver Locket (Moonstruck_1310) Sometimes? Some days? At all times, at all days you are open to those...
  February 24th, 2026 17:27
• Mirror (Moonstruck_1310) Keep that mirror safe - it has much work to do yet.....
  February 24th, 2026 17:21
• Angels Touch (Paul Bell) Breast for women, prostate for men if unlucky. The read was smooth ,...
  February 24th, 2026 07:21
• If (Neville) That\'s a relief, I thought I might be subjected to an updated...
  February 24th, 2026 07:07
• Limited Edition. (Goldfinch60) Yay! yes!😂
  February 24th, 2026 03:36
• Swallowing Fire (Gray0328) So much there I recognise and can identify with. Your conclusion...
  February 23rd, 2026 17:57
• she that rides with the wind (Arqios) You have captured the almost subconscious personification of certain winds...
  February 23rd, 2026 17:41
• Wholesome Worship (Orchidee) You aren\'t singing there are you orchi? God\'s probably...
  February 23rd, 2026 17:36
• This was when (Doggerel Dave) If interested, there is also at February 23rd, 8:13 - When is enough...
  February 23rd, 2026 08:42
• This was when (Doggerel Dave) Friendship\'s tirade has been removed.... not so fast... returned here as...
  February 23rd, 2026 08:35
• Time Differences. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely Andy. Have you also noticed that the return from a previously...
  February 23rd, 2026 03:29
• Ode to the Biscuit Bringer (Matthew R. Callies) I had more than a passing suspicion that International Dog Biscuit...
  February 23rd, 2026 00:36
• Bebop on the Board (Thomas W Case) How is it you create such complexity in so few words?
  February 22nd, 2026 21:53
• This was when (Doggerel Dave) This relates to Friendship\'s tirade above (I cannot reply directly as she...
  February 22nd, 2026 19:29
• This was when (Doggerel Dave) And behold: GONE! You need some added detail – Friendship’s post...
  February 22nd, 2026 18:06