Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab)
An impassioned observation, Parisab. Children involved in war do carry...
October 26th, 2024 02:10 - Four Seasons of Love (MendedFences27)
The variable tempo of a relationship you have mirrored very neatly in...
October 25th, 2024 15:15 - in the mirror (Arqios)
I can relate. A smooth truth there, Rik.
Worth a fave easily.
October 25th, 2024 14:58 - ~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody- (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Why do clowns scare you...
October 25th, 2024 14:49 - This Time Last Year (Tom Dylan)
A clear statement of the depth of your loss, Tom. Not at all maudlin, It...
October 25th, 2024 14:20 - Inaudible Sounds (Neville)
As I increasingly deafen, I\'ve come up with the mantra \'Can\'t hear it,...
October 25th, 2024 05:57 - Home We Will Come Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Not long to wait \'til January. Try to distract yourself with a round of...
October 25th, 2024 05:49 - SHE AGREES (Michael Edwards)
Great, Michael - you are back. Don\'t make it so long next time.
The...
October 25th, 2024 05:40 - ~> When An Old Man Dies (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!)...
October 24th, 2024 17:02 - the new form of protest is not signs its knowledge (MR.apocalypse)
Wish I could fully agree (I cannot) since I’ve participated in more than...
October 24th, 2024 16:31 - Trovatori Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
And so you just dashed off a little rhymer acrostic early the following...
October 24th, 2024 09:06 - Bemused to Death (Neville)
Walkabout, hey? Certainly did help the avoidance of any confusion, for...
October 24th, 2024 08:50 - Left out (2781)
Reminds me of somewhere.......
October 24th, 2024 08:41 - The New Hip-Hop Hooray (Gray0328)
Not sure my back can take it - but still.....
October 24th, 2024 08:37 - Church, through the eyes of a child (Sorenbarrett)
Sunday School gone rong, I kid you not - good laugh which did bring back a...
October 24th, 2024 08:32 - Dark Angel (Tony36)
More creepy.
October 24th, 2024 08:27 - LIFEBLOOD (Nephilim56)
Could fill the space on many a plain white tombstone.
October 24th, 2024 08:26 - in poetry’s parish (Arqios)
This one goes to the top of the pile on the topic, Rik.
Many thanks.
October 24th, 2024 08:21 - Fallujah Iraq April 2007 (David Wakeling)
The price of war I know. Explores the personal heart of it.
October 24th, 2024 00:35 - Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville)
And two tunnels a metaphor for? Sorry Neville, much of what I find here...
October 23rd, 2024 22:06 - Housecleaning Mediation (Gray0328)
You put me to shame until I read your note above.
October 23rd, 2024 21:54 - Spooky Tales (Tony36)
Creepy write.
October 23rd, 2024 21:50 - ~> Oh, I need you so much! (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad.
Tomato it was – I’d never have known
If your comment...
October 23rd, 2024 15:07 - Mighty Words Meant for You (M.E.M.)
Alliteration always allocates alphabetic assonances attempting to...
October 23rd, 2024 14:42 - Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, I can relate to that, Andy.
October 23rd, 2024 05:07 - The All-Inclusive Breakfast (Tom Dylan)
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have...
October 23rd, 2024 01:26 - ~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days! (Thad Wilk)
The reaper geezer turns up here this time:
His visit means a finale will...
October 22nd, 2024 13:31 - Nursery rhyme just horsing around (Sorenbarrett)
\"I know it\'s not therapeutic to do so, but in this instance just humour...
October 21st, 2024 16:39 - In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville)
Pretty happy where I am right now...but don\'t want to go on for ever......
October 21st, 2024 16:32 - ~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch! (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
A ruck and a stink - they’re at it again;
The Estate...
October 21st, 2024 16:17 - Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t...
October 20th, 2024 14:50 - Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy)
\"Neither cameras nor words quite capture what the heart instinctively...
October 20th, 2024 14:26 - Subjugation (Phoud Gai)
I think I\'ll leave that one on hold until you make your case...
Welcome...
October 20th, 2024 06:09 - Dinner With Friends Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A rich picture of a harmonious gathering you sonnetise there, Andy. Warmth...
October 20th, 2024 06:02 - Rough Justice (Neville)
There’s a part of me which says ‘why worry? I will be out of here...
October 20th, 2024 05:52 - in whispers hush (Arqios)
Dedicated to all (everyone) who find their own pathways to deep...
October 19th, 2024 19:31 - ~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie! (Thad Wilk)
Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out...
October 19th, 2024 19:00 - Short Changed on A Long Greek Island (Neville)
Which island was it? (Ah, I know: a gentleman.....) but you never know....
October 19th, 2024 05:59 - The third trench (2781)
Thanks - I really got stuck in there, and no bad back or calloused hands....
October 19th, 2024 01:52 - Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60)
I reckon FOG stands for \'Fool On the Go\" What possessed you to get out...
October 19th, 2024 01:44 - in the shadows (Arqios)
Not sure how political you wanted to make this Rik, but to me it is the...
October 18th, 2024 21:36 - Deep Secrets (Neville)
As stated, it\'s the signature almost hidden away on a fine piece of art....
October 18th, 2024 21:12 - ~> I Fucking Hate Loving You (Thad Wilk)
Oh no. not you too;
I can\'t understand a word.
I\'m up and...
October 18th, 2024 21:05 - Have you? (Sorenbarrett)
Not quite all, no - but enough to know there\'s a richness out there if I...
October 18th, 2024 07:40 - The Repatriation of Shards (Neville)
Your words evoke memories of English cathedrals which I love. One of my...
October 17th, 2024 18:05 - ~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
‘Snot the smell of fear;
Dental visit (don’t...
October 17th, 2024 17:40 - Paranoid (Tallisman)
So I present to you a golden oldie (may still be current for all I know)...
October 17th, 2024 17:20 - Emancipation (NafisaSB)
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of...
October 17th, 2024 08:19 - What No Internet! (Goldfinch60)
As someone mentioned, when I bemoaned very similar circumstances - \'Been...
October 17th, 2024 01:29 - The Eagle and the Wolves (Tallisman)
Champion effort there, T. That \'s what you were doing while you were...
October 16th, 2024 15:13 - ~> A Shotgun Weddin\' - Redneck - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad.
Love sonnets I’m afraid aren’t my thing,
They’re wet...
October 16th, 2024 14:38 - I won\'t say the words (Maplespal)
The multisensorial nature of memory clear here in a rich tribute just long...
October 15th, 2024 23:08 - ~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
G’day, Thad
As a vegetarian I can’t find that much to say,
But if...
October 15th, 2024 15:41 - The Heist (Tallisman)
I can\'t be coming here every day!🙃
Another great yarn, Tallisman.
October 15th, 2024 15:26 - Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Lucky you so far mate. I, a few years your senior go with the stick, of...
October 15th, 2024 05:57 - Don\'t (Sorenbarrett)
You talking to me? No mask to that - It\'s clear.
PS: didn\'t stay away...
October 15th, 2024 05:35 - ginkgo (Arqios)
All of the above in a celebration of Ginkgo biloba. Been around for a...
October 15th, 2024 05:23 - \" IT \" (Thad Wilk)
Such cunning deception
Enforces the perception
That family life
Is...
October 14th, 2024 16:18 - The sea holds its secrets… (Tallisman)
If you continue in this fashion T, you will turn me into a cynic,...
October 14th, 2024 15:59 - If Anyone Enquires Just Tell Them... (Cheeky Missy)
\"I Still Like Nice Guys Better\" - wisdom beyond your years - however...
October 14th, 2024 06:10 - Upside down (Hzugman)
Always.
October 14th, 2024 06:02 - Destination\'s dream (Sorenbarrett)
All life, it seems Soren is propelled by a Random Generator.....
October 14th, 2024 05:56 - Orchi And Goldie At Hastings Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
History alas, is both the most relevant but contestable of the Social...
October 14th, 2024 05:51 - Rhyme Not Mine. (Doggerel Dave)
Golden oldie, Thad - Mr Anon knew a thing or two....
October 13th, 2024 19:29 - ~> A Crappy Day At Work (Thad Wilk)
Very good stuff that Bud Light from Walmart’s:
Turns out them bowel...
October 13th, 2024 17:59 - Ants (Sorenbarrett)
Very true, Soren: Organisation, exploitation, military might.
Text book...
October 13th, 2024 04:46 - The Boy Sat On The Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
Apparently there be a considerable number of boys standing on burning...
October 13th, 2024 01:17 - A Familiar Stranger (Arqios)
Works for me as son - father relationship over time, and as such has a...
October 12th, 2024 13:49 - Pants (Neville)
Evidently here in Australia (a part of the world you omitted to mention,...
October 12th, 2024 06:35 - Again and again… (Tallisman)
Sinister given a tribute in some very rich poetry. A tale well...
October 11th, 2024 16:23 - Oh Dear! (Doggerel Dave)
Teddy15\'s view:
Notice of absence from Teddy.15
I\'ve decided to go...
October 10th, 2024 17:33 - 1969 (Tallisman)
Hunted around for an appropriate response, but couldn\'t find one - plenty...
October 10th, 2024 16:25 - Fit For Purpose (Neville)
Redolent with atmosphere here, Neville.
October 10th, 2024 05:22 - Hurricane (Sorenbarrett)
Poetic account of what I\'ve just watched through the safety of my TV...
October 10th, 2024 05:19 - 1969 (Tallisman)
Great to see you back, Tallisman.
As a \'tribute\' to the Troubles, that...
October 9th, 2024 23:49 - Oh Dear! (Doggerel Dave)
So the \'final word\' from me:
Let’s ignore the first half of T.15’s...
October 9th, 2024 17:45 - Stuck in Zagreb .. & A Few Notes to Self (Neville)
So all it takes is stopped rain (you should be so lucky) anchovies,...
October 9th, 2024 07:25 - A Rare Edition (Arqios)
I feel the history or virtually anything - how was it designed, how...
October 9th, 2024 07:13 - Tears of night (Sorenbarrett)
Feels like a recent afternoon, Soren.
October 9th, 2024 06:59 - Seeking Revenge (Dan Williams)
No comment...😁
October 7th, 2024 17:10 - Benign Bridges (Neville)
The bridge - architectural embodiment of peace and prosperity, Neville.
October 7th, 2024 07:38 - Mad Dog in America (Neville)
Furious agreement there, then......
October 6th, 2024 16:53 - ~> Yosemite Sam I am! (Thad Wilk)
Hors de combat right now - back later.
October 2nd, 2024 19:01 - ~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
That ad is real bad taste I’ll have you know;
But as...
October 1st, 2024 18:39 - Make Love Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A sonnet is obviously your thing - and then acrostic to top it off!
How...
October 1st, 2024 01:17 - ~> God If You\'re Listening, (Thad Wilk)
The lad is dyslexic, that’s all I can say;
Butch is dog but spelt the...
September 30th, 2024 16:44 - FROM CAD TO SAM (Nephilim56)
Like to elaborate in a couple of lines?
Thanks.
September 30th, 2024 16:25 - Comes the Day...... (Orchidee)
Good poem orchi.
September 30th, 2024 07:40 - Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s a richness in your sonnets Andy, you just keep them popping in...
September 30th, 2024 07:26 - Irksome Quandaries (Neville)
Have you heard of psychosis, perchance? During my adolescence I pondered ...
September 30th, 2024 07:14 - One With Everything (Tom Dylan)
Or....(sorry about this...) maybe not link them, but let each develop in...
September 30th, 2024 07:04 - Calling the Bluff (Neville)
Paranoia perpetuates protectiveness prodigiously providing proactively...
September 29th, 2024 20:32 - A warm meal (Sorenbarrett)
I don\'t know where that one came from Soren, but I had a good time here....
September 29th, 2024 20:11 - ~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Archie the alien knew his stuff -
Across the universe for weed not...
September 29th, 2024 19:12 - Fierce Longing (Dan Williams)
Try to stay cool (this advice from someone who doesn\'t some of the time)...
September 29th, 2024 01:40 - On Hiatus with a Praying Mantis (Gary Edward Geraci)
A good symbiotic relationship going on there, Gary.
Wishing both you and...
September 28th, 2024 18:47 - Well, Well, Well...Interesting, Eh? (Cheeky Missy)
\"Please, Do NOT Enquire What I\'m Thinking Nor How I Am\" I am going to...
September 28th, 2024 18:28 - All Growed Up (Tristan Robert Lange)
\'Puerility mixed with willful senility\' - I knowed people like...
September 28th, 2024 18:19 - ~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku ) (Thad Wilk)
Meaningful haiku, Thad. That\'ll learn him, and let\'s hope it changes his...
September 28th, 2024 18:01 - Clean Sheets (Neville)
It’s like you tore a page out of my nonexistent diary:
Regular visits,...
September 28th, 2024 17:37
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