Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Pay Them. Respect Them. Let Them Work. (GeekSusie)
\"What does TSA mean in the United States?
DEFINITION: “TBA” and...
March 25th, 2026 18:53 - For Reference Purposes Only (Neville)
Who took the bars and who took the safety net? Or did they make an...
March 25th, 2026 18:35 - Terror in Gainesville (Matthew R. Callies)
Thanks for both the poem and the Wikipedia reference. His history...
March 25th, 2026 18:20 - unsigned horizon (Arqios)
Great word painting. Can imagine this on my wall (sorry - if I had a...
March 25th, 2026 18:04 - Power is Not Proof (Tristan Robert Lange)
I do know, but have rarely heard, Tristan. A succinct reminder I\'ll vote...
March 25th, 2026 17:52 - hedgehog fred (Jim56)
There\'s another one - goes with the tadpole. Wish I could draw - I\'d do...
March 25th, 2026 04:10 - Spring Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Totally appropriate it\'s a shortie - that might be all the spring you get...
March 25th, 2026 03:55 - Reflective Pattern Reality (Thoughtless)
I have a funny feeling you are pulling my leg, but then I have a very...
March 24th, 2026 23:54 - Held Hostage in Suits (GeekSusie)
Sounds about right, and I can feel the deep and abiding anger in a well...
March 24th, 2026 23:49 - Shred (2781)
Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the...
March 24th, 2026 23:29 - threshold (Tristan Robert Lange)
Too late, Mate😢
March 24th, 2026 22:43 - Mechanoids In March (Syd)
Let it continue to wander, mate -that\'s where poetry comes from, I\'m...
March 24th, 2026 22:36 - What\'s left (Sorenbarrett)
Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on......
March 24th, 2026 05:11 - Back To Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s the aliens - they are too bright to attempt to invade directly, they...
March 24th, 2026 05:00 - You Fed Me Forever While Planning Never (Entangled heart)
Not done this for a long while... but here presented once more with...
March 24th, 2026 04:45 - In The Shadow of Fast Clocks (Neville)
I attempt, fast or slow, to ignore it, Neville. What\'s that old corny...
March 23rd, 2026 16:42 - tadpole life (Jim56)
Fun piece - could be a great nursery rhyme. Very much enjoyed.
March 23rd, 2026 16:24 - An Ode To Earworms (Syd)
I wish my earworms were as upbeat and melodic as that, Syd. What is your...
March 23rd, 2026 04:08 - Enchou sareta senryu (Sorenbarrett)
Haven\'t seen that dilemma in a long long time, Soren. Still interesting....
March 23rd, 2026 04:02 - The Search has Ended (Thomas W Case)
Perhaps a necessary journey unable to be avoided, Thomas.
March 22nd, 2026 23:56 - Orbit of Oblivion (Tristan Robert Lange)
The political cliché, which over the years I\'ve heard more times than I...
March 22nd, 2026 16:23 - JULY FIRST 1916 (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Very real and atmospheric. I was obsessed by the trenches in WW1 once....
March 22nd, 2026 07:13 - Feeling Kinder. (Goldfinch60)
Love it, communing with nature....all the world\'s problems...
March 22nd, 2026 07:05 - Stairs to Nowhere (Matthew R. Callies)
The fascination I derived from Escher\'s drawings still lingers. Thanks...
March 21st, 2026 22:37 - Spring (Allie561)
Spring is sprung.... but if it is anything like where I live that day was...
March 21st, 2026 22:02 - The Library Girl (Kevin Hulme)
A likely story, but taking it on face value, in your position I would...
March 21st, 2026 21:56 - all she wanted was to dance. (DeadRose)
If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your...
March 21st, 2026 15:35 - A Short Series of Wonderings (Neville)
Obviously in precisely the right moment to give it that level of...
March 21st, 2026 15:24 - control burn (Tristan Robert Lange)
Definitely.
March 21st, 2026 15:14 - An emotional and contemplative man (Donteatmecows)
While your poems appear quite self revelatory demc, a basic bio on your...
March 21st, 2026 15:02 - Pull the Ripcord (Gray0328)
I like to believe that my parachute is open at all times - unless I...
March 21st, 2026 05:04 - End the wars (NafisaSB)
A beautifully simple question, requiring the equally simple answer - yes!...
March 21st, 2026 04:48 - What A Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60)
You extract all the juice, including the pips out of every thing you do...
March 21st, 2026 04:39 - The Intersection (Lilmoonxx)
I guess you are a driver....
March 21st, 2026 04:34 - I understand (Xqw)
So why?
March 21st, 2026 04:30 - The Puppet (Paddy)
Good luck here at MPS. Hope you enjoy your stay. And if you can get around...
March 21st, 2026 01:07 - Nine on the Field (Matthew R. Callies)
Action! You caught it. Never heard of this game before; where is it...
March 20th, 2026 12:18 - Abstraction Traction (Tristan Robert Lange)
Straightforward truth (inasmuch as I can know it) wins the day every time...
March 20th, 2026 12:08 - Three Things Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Hey Andy - you could write a Self Help book in the form of sonnets. Don\'t...
March 20th, 2026 11:58 - I\'m the guy who...... (Orchidee)
You speak for yourself; I do not intend to marry KP after you get a...
March 20th, 2026 09:53 - Weak (2781)
Hell Man....
March 19th, 2026 16:48 - Breaking the rules (Allie561)
Beyond my capacity to achieve most of those acts of defiance, but I sure...
March 19th, 2026 16:42 - The Static Reset (Lilmoonxx)
So that\'s what it must be like....
Well penned rhymer which gives me...
March 19th, 2026 16:33 - \"she\'s gutsy\" (Arqios)
Did you....................................... catch up? Gutsy? Reminds me...
March 19th, 2026 16:24 - Egregious Expectations (The Routine) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
“Always look on the bright side of life” – Being unemployed gives...
March 19th, 2026 16:04 - Mrudula (Neville)
Not one of the Mrudulas a Google search throws up is she?
I’ll freely...
March 18th, 2026 17:48 - Take those risks (Allie561)
Wish I had received that advice (and acted upon it) when I was...
March 18th, 2026 17:33 - At Knowing\'s Edge (Tristan Robert Lange)
Preemptive apologies for this, Tristan.
To challenge your last...
March 18th, 2026 17:23 - iNNOCENCE IMPARTED (Katie B.)
\'Time would best be served standing still\'. Great line. From your...
March 18th, 2026 16:27 - Search (2781)
Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there...
March 18th, 2026 16:17 - Enlightenment (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is...
March 18th, 2026 16:07 - Doing The Garden Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Got not too many illusions about yourself, have you Andy.
True right...
March 18th, 2026 15:56 - Glimpse into the eye of a needle (EvenwheniLie)
Existential wasting away....
March 18th, 2026 06:13 - Narc, Narc, Who\'s There? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
What with passive aggressives and now narcissists ever thought of changing...
March 17th, 2026 22:13 - My Grandfathers Hydrangeas (Neville)
Here there\'s a programme \'Gardening Australia\" Fridays 7.30 sharp on...
March 17th, 2026 20:52 - (un)held (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh the misery of it all! I don\'t believe a word of it.
(Try rustling...
March 17th, 2026 20:37 - \"she orders me about\" (Arqios)
Any rewards?
March 17th, 2026 20:28 - The 3 PM Sunlight (Lilmoonxx)
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I\'m sure you have more...
March 17th, 2026 20:05 - Not The Only One (Orchidee)
Best Wishes orchi.
(Now that may be the shortest message I\'ve ever...
March 17th, 2026 19:54 - Here\'s to St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan)
The mix of if not loyalties at least connections. I certainly can relate....
March 17th, 2026 18:31 - Sleepy Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Hypnotic. I\'m sure Shakespeare would have given this a pass mark -...
March 17th, 2026 17:36 - Smolder (Thomas W Case)
You have peeled the layers away, exposed your soul. Your attempt here to...
March 16th, 2026 18:58 - The Housefly\'s Final Flight (Gray0328)
Got yer!! Though think of the environment .. a fly swatter would have been...
March 16th, 2026 18:50 - Effectively impacted (EvenwheniLie)
I bounce around all over the place on this one.....There are times when I...
March 16th, 2026 18:38 - The hollow heart (Carmen Luca)
Never mind about it meaning a lot - got anyone in mind?
March 16th, 2026 18:23 - Washed for the Wilderness (Tristan Robert Lange)
To me now a meaningless ritual. I preemptively resigned.
A neat write...
March 16th, 2026 18:15 - hotHotHOT (2781)
My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this....
March 16th, 2026 18:08 - Cobalt (Katie B.)
Coffee would never taste the same in anything else. You have a deep...
March 16th, 2026 17:58 - Dismissed (Katie B.)
A sketch of great veracity, not a spare word or line yet a complete truth....
March 16th, 2026 17:37 - of witnesses (Arqios)
If ever there were a picture of a mood painted in words, this is it.
March 16th, 2026 17:20 - The British Empire (Atticus_made)
Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than...
March 16th, 2026 17:14 - Hair Cut. (Goldfinch60)
This is praise to the max - therapeutic encouragement and acknowledgement...
March 16th, 2026 03:41 - One for Scotty (Thomas W Case)
This yarn commands all the senses plus some pay attention. His forty...
March 15th, 2026 16:57 - Miricale (Sorenbarrett)
Great biology lesson writ up in poetic form, Sir.
Enjoyed your...
March 15th, 2026 16:39 - Ring Over Net (Matthew R. Callies)
Little context provided by your link.
March 15th, 2026 16:30 - Fleeting ideas (Carmen Luca)
Most poetic justifications (with one or two honourable exceptions) of...
March 14th, 2026 18:38 - Spilt criticism (Sorenbarrett)
On the evidence presented here, I think your heart\'s in the right place,...
March 14th, 2026 18:23 - The Making of An Appetite (Neville)
Jolly old mirror mirror on the ceiling,
You be reflective of the way...
March 14th, 2026 06:04 - \"she” poem number 8 (Arqios)
Drips with references I recognise and have various meanings for me. There...
March 14th, 2026 05:56 - Remembering PG (Orchidee)
Troubled times, orchi (no place for fun just here) You hint of other...
March 14th, 2026 03:49 - Prioritize yourself (NafisaSB)
High time you wrote a self improvement book. Tell it like it is, Safina....
March 14th, 2026 01:11 - Sinsiesta (Matthew R. Callies)
It is five PM local time and that is completely correct. My afternoon nap...
March 14th, 2026 01:03 - Not Waving but Cleaning the Windows (Kevin Hulme)
I\'d be adamant in his position; too much responsibility having a label...
March 13th, 2026 22:22 - Lolita (Matthew R. Callies)
\"For stories that disturb the walls we build
are the ones that teach...
March 13th, 2026 20:45 - Fingertips (Syd)
Tess Parks lyrics
Dripping purple lilac
They are the...
March 13th, 2026 15:57 - Meet My Rocks (Tristan Robert Lange)
Just given me the best, by example, piece of advice I\'ve had for a very...
March 13th, 2026 09:38 - God\'s Conspiracy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You are going to wait a bloody long time for some of those answers,...
March 13th, 2026 09:04 - More Than Just A Contented Man (Neville)
Strategy: wait for possibly one more comment and then fill this space with...
March 13th, 2026 08:55 - Before the Bark, the Howl (Matthew R. Callies)
Villanelle form suits the wolf\'s existence perfectly - cyclic the way...
March 12th, 2026 09:53 - Sonnet For Gill And Gordon. (Goldfinch60)
Not going to mention your sonneteering skills again - that just gets...
March 12th, 2026 09:33 - Salvation Secured (Orchidee)
Nah - get it in writing...
(I just go by the title, I don\'t read the...
March 11th, 2026 20:51 - Summer Break :) (Grav27)
No more demands upon you - at least for today.
Portrait of a free day I...
March 11th, 2026 20:49 - The Shape of Their Assumptions (GeekSusie)
So did ya fuck a bloke (guy) or did ya make love to a turkey...
March 11th, 2026 04:15 - Let Us Pray... (Kevin Hulme)
All granted, my Son.
(You have about the same chance with me....)
March 10th, 2026 23:29 - The Stubborn Stench of Consensus (Gray0328)
I drink - alone (it is safer that way; I have perfect control)
(About...
March 10th, 2026 23:12 - Bypass The Passive Aggressive People (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Manipulative, a pain in the arse! I will give no quarter.
👍👍for...
March 10th, 2026 23:04 - Arrival in Nod (Thomas W Case)
Was it preordained, inevitable you would get there? I\'m not absolutely...
March 10th, 2026 18:11 - cost of tomorrow (Tristan Robert Lange)
I’m here. Now. No, I’m now in a same similar moment. Tomorrow another...
March 10th, 2026 17:52 - A Medieval Mishap (Matthew R. Callies)
Honestly I had no idea that politician\'s arguments over shit had such a...
March 10th, 2026 08:58 - Things to be grateful for (Allie561)
You are moody in the poem, and then sunshine in your comments; which are...
March 10th, 2026 06:25
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