Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Curious Glances and Cheeky Admiration (GeekSusie)
…….and so what of the ‘male gaze’ that so many women complain of? ...
June 13th, 2024 19:33 - martyrs (Bicicletta)
A new martyr for whom it can only ultimately be conjectured that their...
June 13th, 2024 00:58 - Sailing for Insanity (Thomas W Case)
Never say never - she may (emphasis on the \'may\') return....the...
June 13th, 2024 00:37 - Crisis of Perception (Bella Shepard)
Hey Bella – glad to see you back!
My contemplation re the vastness of...
June 12th, 2024 17:13 - Blip again (Orchidee)
Never mind orchi, you can always have another go tomorrow.
It seemed for...
June 12th, 2024 07:02 - Troll Time (satire) (Teddy.15)
Don\'t you be doing that finding stuff randomly any more, please Teddy....
June 12th, 2024 06:47 - A Rich Man (Thomas W Case)
Time shaves slices off me continually as I age, and I would hope (perhaps...
June 11th, 2024 19:53 - Relations (2781)
Depends on whether he feels under any obligation to \'strengthen...
June 11th, 2024 06:25 - Cloud Submarine. (Goldfinch60)
High time you disclosed more of your past, mate (Andy) that was great....
June 11th, 2024 06:16 - Minion Lisa (Teddy.15)
Have you, as tickle duster got the resilience to change the world, Teddy?...
June 11th, 2024 06:08 - Freefall (Peto)
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to...
June 11th, 2024 01:29 - Berate and Bully: The Masterclass in Persuasion Failure (GeekSusie)
Hear hear! Although I don\'t mind a little verbal (as in not physical)...
June 11th, 2024 01:06 - New Age Thinking (Tom Dylan)
Glad Tom, that you ‘refer to octogenarians as being a good age’ and...
June 10th, 2024 07:04 - The Things You\'ve Said (Zhangyuyouyu)
The other side of passion and Luurve..... Thanks for that....
June 10th, 2024 06:47 - Prayer Prosperings (Orchidee)
I don\'t see much evidence......
June 10th, 2024 06:03 - With Us To Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Far be it for me, D. Dave, atheistic agnostic, to be so presumptive as to...
June 10th, 2024 02:55 - So Very Well Ink-Lined (Neville)
It\'s quite a time since I\'ve managed to immerse myself in a book like...
June 10th, 2024 02:44 - At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line (ADarkerMind)
Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has...
June 9th, 2024 20:30 - Just Like Those Stains in The Sky (Neville)
I do not know, Neville. - repetitions in a complex wall paper design at a...
June 9th, 2024 20:11 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Now you’ve pondered, I’d suggest putting out tenders for a replacement...
June 9th, 2024 19:59 - Science (2781)
I wouldn\'t call it controversial........ Not going to respond in any...
June 9th, 2024 19:46 - Farewell! My Love! (Petrichor of Love)
Not the kind of subject matter I usually dwell on – yours. However an...
June 9th, 2024 19:38 - A Night At The Opera. (Goldfinch60)
An essence of opera, you have created there, Andy. Too rich for regular...
June 9th, 2024 02:34 - I am at war (ChristianGirl2005)
I have no religion. So I usually avoid pins which have religious...
June 8th, 2024 19:00 - Walking in Woodland (Cassie58)
The benign quality of English woodlands is something I miss - even if in...
June 8th, 2024 18:37 - Why not (Kylie the 7th grade female poet)
Don\'t wait, don\'t worry - get out into the world and all will resolve...
June 8th, 2024 07:59 - Starlink (2781)
Wot no NBN?
Sounds like a painful business all round.
June 8th, 2024 07:51 - Farcical Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
Just because you have a bad round of golf Andy, there\'s no need to give...
June 8th, 2024 02:49 - Sucker Punched (Neville)
Yep I got one of them, possibly slightly (but not much) lighter. A lesson...
June 7th, 2024 23:56 - Our Grandparents\' War (Tom Dylan)
And they wouldn\'t have had to do it at all, and I wouldn\'t have had to...
June 7th, 2024 23:45 - Ready For His Return (Orchidee)
Keep doing the shopping, mate - you may have a bit of a wait yet, and I...
June 7th, 2024 23:34 - You do it to yourself (Peto)
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further...
June 7th, 2024 23:26 - Conversing With Blake (Cassie58)
A rich write, Cassie . The composite thought of Blake and a pastoral...
June 7th, 2024 23:11 - Death is Stalking Me (Thomas W Case)
Ain\'t mortality shit? However, necessary. But you did finish the poem -...
June 7th, 2024 23:02 - Love Makes a Family (GeekSusie)
In good parenting, not only the child, but the world owes you.
June 6th, 2024 20:19 - ~> \'Goofy\' Why? (Thad Wilk)
So you don\'t smoke pot and it ain\'t a haiku either.....entertaining non...
June 6th, 2024 06:42 - THE EULOGY OF MR. RHYMING WORDS (Raymond shawa)
Talkin\' to me or about me? 🤣
June 5th, 2024 19:42 - AI (Peto)
A piece I enjoyed which echoes my feelings of trepidation Peto, but I can...
June 5th, 2024 08:02 - Security and Safety (Orchidee)
Your songs, orchi have pretty much been examined by all concerned here,...
June 5th, 2024 07:55 - Sheep in Uniform (Teddy.15)
Jewish Museum, Berlin – same or similar feelings, although I was...
June 5th, 2024 07:42 - Valley (Alan R)
That AI at the bottom? Not You?
June 5th, 2024 07:16 - But It Is Wonderful. (Goldfinch60)
If you wanna be that close, let Mary do the teas and you do the coffees ,...
June 5th, 2024 07:12 - Peace Doves? (Goldfinch60)
Doves of peace? Blew the lid off that one, didn\'t yer......
June 5th, 2024 01:56 - Excess Baggage (Neville)
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations,...
June 5th, 2024 01:52 - Holocaust (Neville)
Australia, \'\"a harmonious multicultural country\" has its moments of...
June 4th, 2024 20:43 - Behind the Mask (GeekSusie)
As an adolescent, doubtless a difficult time.
As an adult, everyone\'s...
June 4th, 2024 20:23 - British Politics in a Nutshell (Teddy.15)
A little gem Teddy, shining with truth. Although the shit you chose as...
June 4th, 2024 20:15 - Trippin (Thomas W Case)
Those mushrooms were obviously not properly cooked, young Sir - I...
June 4th, 2024 00:43 - Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
Look here, young man, you got clean away with that one...Can\'t fault it...
June 3rd, 2024 23:28 - Eleven and A Half Minutes (Neville)
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21 - The Purity Patrol (GeekSusie)
Surely there\'s none left................ are there?
June 3rd, 2024 21:17 - Moonlight Sonata. (Goldfinch60)
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And...
June 3rd, 2024 05:48 - The Year\'s Adieu In Song (Orchidee)
A bit uncharacteristic for you orchi... I hope Alan, from whom we haven\'t...
June 3rd, 2024 05:39 - Do you see what I see? (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve covered a wide range of the themes there Dan, but overall your...
June 3rd, 2024 05:29 - Stars (Teddy.15)
Maybe don\'t come to the antipodes, Teddy - could be dangerous, You would...
June 3rd, 2024 05:20 - Disturbed (TJ7)
Only may be?
June 2nd, 2024 18:15 - Apology (TJ7)
A moderately timed apology would be of more worth than a hastily contrived...
June 2nd, 2024 18:14 - Different Measures (Neville)
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t...
June 2nd, 2024 17:52 - Omnipresent lurch toward authoritarianism... (Rew4er2nail)
\"not only self evident
across these United States of America,
but also...
June 2nd, 2024 17:40 - BMW Rant! (Goldfinch60)
I heard that it was Volvo drivers which other drivers did not...
June 2nd, 2024 08:48 - Descort Vision (Gary Edward Geraci)
Final sentence of your Comment: I have, somewhere between sometimes and...
June 1st, 2024 19:05 - Sandcastles (Cassie58)
A fitting tribute to a brother you so obviously miss, Cassie. A perfect...
June 1st, 2024 18:57 - You Broke Me (13LaurenD)
A \'what makes you stronger\' moral message. Well said.
June 1st, 2024 18:07 - Another Day. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know where you keep those \'sun shining brightly\' days - send a...
June 1st, 2024 08:40 - It is What it Is (Neville)
Sounds a bit competitive here, Neville.....
June 1st, 2024 08:25 - There Is An Angel Who Sits Upon My Shoulder Who Goes By The Name Of Death (ThoughtsFromB4)
I truly hope that someone somewhere will gain comfort or understand that...
May 31st, 2024 21:05 - If There Wasn\'t A Price....? (Goldfinch60)
Well writ, Andy.
May 31st, 2024 09:52 - Derbate (2781)
No laughing matter actually. On tenterhooks \'til November and quite...
May 31st, 2024 09:50 - Cooeee! (Orchidee)
It\'s a rumbling, rather regrettably.
May 31st, 2024 09:43 - Alive (Sorenbarrett)
Awareness of life itself - It may be the only one I have.
Great in its...
May 31st, 2024 09:38 - Palms Spring (Teddy.15)
“If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,” Some of those...
May 31st, 2024 01:02 - A Walk in the Sun (MendedFences27)
You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right...
May 31st, 2024 00:48 - Life Boat (M.E.M.)
Feels like a rich in detail allegory - so I hope you are really...
May 30th, 2024 18:57 - Too Long In the Tooth (Neville)
I like to assemble my own take with words I choose, Neville, but:
\"Let...
May 30th, 2024 07:05 - Poor Poet (Teddy.15)
Sometimes Teddy you creep me out a little…. You make odd connections...
May 30th, 2024 06:53 - Love Of My Life Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Clever and neat, Andy. Never tried an acrostic, and I don\'t think I will...
May 30th, 2024 01:29 - Virtuous Visitation (Orchidee)
Family troubles?
May 30th, 2024 01:27 - Forget Four Letter Words Redux (Plus Bonus....) (Doggerel Dave)
So I go: Thanks Neville - I\'ve now got a list in one place of irritants I...
May 29th, 2024 17:39 - Speak for Them who Cannot (Nah Hannah)
I\'m glad you think so.
May 29th, 2024 07:53 - F----d (Sorenbarrett)
Buggered……. if I know…. Or rather (just asking) why don’t mining...
May 29th, 2024 07:42 - So Very Lightly Hued (Neville)
Hallucinatory write, Neville.
May 29th, 2024 02:53 - A Leap In The Dark (Teddy.15)
Having mildly sociopathic (delete – I’m a wee bit antisocial)...
May 29th, 2024 02:51 - An Empty Space (Cassie58)
Your poem surrounds, encloses that empty space Cassie, and preserves it....
May 28th, 2024 19:35 - What\'s Up?! (Orchidee)
You posed the question \'what\'s up?\'
When I really want to know...
May 28th, 2024 09:04 - That Time of Year Again (Neville)
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does...
May 28th, 2024 08:58 - Shingles Shenanigans (Teddy.15)
Teddy, I’m so sorry to hear that you are still suffering.
I must thank...
May 28th, 2024 08:36 - Covered in a dream (Sorenbarrett)
I have encountered one or two of those freeloaders Soren, but never all at...
May 28th, 2024 08:17 - Spaces (Gary Edward Geraci)
\'many with much, much less, find far more\'. How true - however, for many...
May 27th, 2024 23:28 - Time of Blindness (MendedFences27)
Oh so ethereal but reality impinges.
Good to see you back, MF.
May 27th, 2024 23:21 - Unsolicited Sages (GeekSusie)
Lovely irony. Glad I don\'t do that shit. Don\'t go there..... unless...
May 27th, 2024 17:00 - A load of rubbish! (Orchidee)
There\'s hint in the correspondence above that the three has some special...
May 27th, 2024 06:09 - Osmanthus Fragrans (Samreen Firdaus)
Conventional beauty or attractiveness – nonsense which identifies the...
May 27th, 2024 05:52 - The Poem What I Wrote (Sorry Ernie). (Goldfinch60)
Gives me MORE than a bit, Andy.
Do banks have holidays? No wonder the...
May 27th, 2024 01:34 - Singing In Hindi. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ll find me near the food........
My singing is much like orchi\'s,...
May 26th, 2024 01:32 - Love isn\'t Unconditional (Meera Mere)
Not sure you have discovered what love is beyond a word to be used in a...
May 26th, 2024 00:14 - Congress or Chaos? (GeekSusie)
😅😂🤣Gone beyond anger at the futility.
Same where I live.
Not...
May 26th, 2024 00:07 - Havan For Shivani. (Goldfinch60)
To gladly accept the invitation is definitely neighourberliness at its...
May 25th, 2024 08:04 - The True Nature of Loss (Neville)
Olfactory sensations are for me some of the strongest memory prompts I...
May 25th, 2024 07:51 - It\'s a mystery (Sorenbarrett)
Agreed Soren – but I’ve banged on about history and not taking account...
May 25th, 2024 07:01 - Good Week / Bad Week (Tom Dylan)
This meeting, Tom? Eaters Anonymous?? LOL
May 24th, 2024 18:33
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