Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Mortal-Hamas-ment (Israeli Shout) (Friend of Israel) (AuburnScribbler)
HI Ben - Is \'please do stay everyone\' a typo or intentional? Either way,...
January 30th, 2024 20:12 - My Advice To Poets (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
\' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm,...
January 29th, 2024 00:15 - Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard)
\"Ability\" = courage, because sometimes (not very often) a concept/idea...
January 28th, 2024 18:35 - When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken (Neville)
Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a...
January 28th, 2024 18:10 - Administrative Malfunction (Quemis)
A breakdown? You broke it down skilfully. Technology gone...
January 28th, 2024 17:59 - Poetic Injustice (Alan R)
I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have...
January 28th, 2024 00:37 - I\'m Closing The Books (Tom Dylan)
You are a change agent, Tom. A random phrase and you burst through into a...
January 27th, 2024 21:36 - No good deed goes unpunished (Sorenbarrett)
The rhyming’s great me old mate,
Not always easy to do;
It takes hard...
January 27th, 2024 18:19 - Can\'t argue (2781)
Got my attention - good one. More like this and you have a devoted reader
January 27th, 2024 17:40 - Now look.... woof! (Orchidee)
Arise, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur - off your knees; embrace the truth.....
January 27th, 2024 17:11 - Now look.... woof! (Orchidee)
This is absolute rubbish, orchi, and you know it. A bigger load of...
January 27th, 2024 05:16 - The Moon Looks Down. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoy it while you can, Andy - it is all going to be dug up...
January 26th, 2024 18:23 - Fruit Bats (Gray0328)
Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are...
January 26th, 2024 06:39 - How Many More Planets (Neville)
Maybe one or two….but it’s a very local issue – the Universe won’t...
January 26th, 2024 06:28 - \"9/11\" (Gray0328)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
January 26th, 2024 02:00 - A Songbird\'s Final Flight (GeekSusie)
“somehow I never noticed you before today, I’m afraid to say”
Joan...
January 25th, 2024 17:24 - Remember (M.E.M.)
Just don\'t sleep in......... 🛌🏻 !!!
January 25th, 2024 15:30 - Cloud cover (2781)
A rip roaring read, even if.......
January 25th, 2024 15:27 - America (Stormy)
I\'m overwhelmed. You don\'t mean \'enjoy\' literally, do you? \'Feel the...
January 25th, 2024 06:48 - Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie)
If it\'s not aliens in flying saucers, then something else.......ah! AI...
January 24th, 2024 22:01 - Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie)
This is the beginning. It will take time for the AI situation to shake...
January 24th, 2024 20:17 - With Phone in Hand (Tom Dylan)
I encounter these zombies every day. I alter my line of travel slightly...
January 24th, 2024 17:39 - A crime commited (Sorenbarrett)
Regrets? yeh - me too. Redemption in later life, but life\'s early...
January 24th, 2024 17:24 - The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana)
Hey Lorenz – give her a break. When I first responded to her piece (as...
January 23rd, 2024 23:15 - The Teenage Dream (Stormy)
\"Slowly managing\" is the most optimistic and realistic assurance you...
January 23rd, 2024 20:15 - That Beautiful Dress. (Goldfinch60)
I have an extremely strong suspicion that if she turned up in a totally...
January 23rd, 2024 19:36 - The Teenage Dream (Stormy)
Grit your teeth and hang in there. I would never under any circumstances...
January 23rd, 2024 19:20 - Wandering Thoughts in Ordinary Places (GeekSusie)
You make me feel better now - I think I\'ll mortify my flesh less often -...
January 22nd, 2024 23:53 - Nothing is Free (Neville)
The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation...
January 22nd, 2024 06:43 - The Poet\'s Birthdate (Tom Dylan)
So Tom, I know this will take some hard decision making, but stop fishing...
January 22nd, 2024 06:04 - Kensington 2050 (Lorenz)
My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire...
January 22nd, 2024 05:19 - Kensington 2050 (Lorenz)
I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following...
January 22nd, 2024 01:11 - Rue-anda (AuburnScribbler)
Yes - Australia has been at it too and has sometimes been cited as a...
January 22nd, 2024 01:00 - What Is Real? (Bella Shepard)
No argument from me whatsoever, Bella.
‘The truth The reality’ to be...
January 21st, 2024 18:14 - kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru (Neville)
Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc...
January 21st, 2024 05:34 - Life\'s People. (Goldfinch60)
Mirror mirror on the wall, who is the fairest...
Smile mate - the...
January 21st, 2024 05:20 - A Nation: Desolated, Dusted and Defeated (Petrichor of Love)
Apologies - I\'ve never clicked on your poetry before (I think your Nom De...
January 21st, 2024 05:07 - Technology (Sorenbarrett)
Neat ingenious write, Soren.
And for once (once only, mind) I\'m not...
January 20th, 2024 17:33 - Expulsion explosion (EvenwheniLie)
This is difficult to unpick, actually.
• I know nothing much about...
January 19th, 2024 21:43 - Phonies (2781)
Great comment - from whom or what are you protecting your rear...
January 19th, 2024 21:03 - To A Lesser Degree (Tom Dylan)
Stop moaning.🙂 Went to Uni age 36 and 46. A struggle - I\'m sure it is...
January 19th, 2024 16:21 - Noncence Geography (Teddy.15)
American Renée Zellweger did a good job of portraying a daffy English...
January 19th, 2024 16:08 - Another One of Those Café Moments (Neville)
That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within...
January 19th, 2024 15:53 - Past And Future. (Goldfinch60)
Definitely gets easier as you travel along, Andy.
January 19th, 2024 15:38 - Once (Sorenbarrett)
Not all life can be beautiful for many I suspect - certainly occasionally...
January 18th, 2024 17:03 - Again Upon Reflection (Neville)
Love yourself? Have I missed something?
You know I have trouble with...
January 18th, 2024 16:53 - Heart-Matters - Ye Olde Prayers Series (3) (Orchidee)
THREE of \'em? you could have at least called it a trilogy and then called...
January 18th, 2024 05:05 - The Mind of Her (Morgana)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895
Please note in particular,...
January 17th, 2024 15:35 - The Whole of A Woman Shared (Neville)
I\'ve been both gazumped and as the active agent gazumped in matters of...
January 17th, 2024 05:43 - Glorious Sunny Morn. (Goldfinch60)
Risk numb toes so that I don\'t have to......
You word painted a lovely...
January 16th, 2024 20:06 - Hope (Cassie58)
The entirety, especially your very short but telling Comment speaks of an...
January 16th, 2024 18:36 - The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana)
Men come in all kinds - a spectrum from good to bad and all points in...
January 16th, 2024 18:30 - Verses of My Everlast: A Queer Identity Etched in Ink (GeekSusie)
Those reflections on sexuality through one\'s life (whatever team you\'re...
January 16th, 2024 00:49 - The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana)
Got a problem there, haven\'t you?
January 16th, 2024 00:39 - Rolling along (Hzugman)
Tireless in your pursuit?
January 16th, 2024 00:36 - War (MendedFences27)
I.......... (You know what I would write, with respect to war, don\'t you...
January 16th, 2024 00:32 - Facial Recognition Blues (ElizabethMoroz)
Would you care to identify the source of your \'external review\'?
January 15th, 2024 08:38 - The Most Dangerous Animal In The World. (Goldfinch60)
Cryptic, candid, correct, Andy.
January 15th, 2024 08:31 - On a clear night like this (Tom Dylan)
🥹Gentle irony, a picture well painted in words. I will have to see what...
January 15th, 2024 04:38 - Architect (Teddy.15)
Apart from the surrealistic imagery, so typical of dream states (or at...
January 14th, 2024 17:32 - What Does Love Mean? (CST)
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135
I hope this is of some help.
January 14th, 2024 16:27 - As The Saying Goes (Bella Shepard)
Re Teddy , Above:
I\'ve objected to the use of \'we\' before - see my...
January 14th, 2024 16:10 - The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
ANY war defies justification.
January 14th, 2024 04:46 - A Night Time Stroll (Goddess of the Mist)
I liked this muchly, Goddess. Charged with expectation... Relief that the...
January 14th, 2024 04:39 - GENDER ROTATION (Bobby O)
Seen this before somewhere......
January 14th, 2024 00:51 - चुनावी खेल (Uglykavi)
If you are capable of delivering your commentary in English, why not the...
January 13th, 2024 19:45 - The Folding Chair (Aimee C Kay)
I understood this piece very well - an habitually used chair can retain...
January 13th, 2024 19:33 - One Real, one isn’t (Gary Edward Geraci)
As a piece of pulpitry this has no peer.
But the jolly old Deacon will...
January 13th, 2024 19:02 - Some Things are Best Left (Neville)
A salutary reminder to stay shtum and keep my shit in order.
Well writ,...
January 13th, 2024 00:29 - Hemingway\'s Hideaway (Teddy.15)
Two weeks in Venice was nowhere near enough for me, Teddy.....and...
January 12th, 2024 05:35 - Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Golly - gosh, a rhymer. What has got into you, Andy? 🙂
Great write...
January 12th, 2024 05:14 - Crude and rude (Sorenbarrett)
Not Gregory P Smith are you?
https://drgregorypsmith.com/
Either way, a...
January 10th, 2024 06:04 - Feasting Upon Leftovers (Neville)
Felt like that once, but the fools at the feast didn\'t finish me and...
January 10th, 2024 05:48 - To Be In Love (Teddy.15)
\"now faded into forgotten.\" Wouldn\'t take much to turn that into solid...
January 10th, 2024 05:42 - Together As One. (Goldfinch60)
All my most loyal and supportive wishes, Sir. No need to waste precious...
January 10th, 2024 05:31 - Unvoiced Opinions: Fear and Judgment\'s Reign (GeekSusie)
Until people tire of social media, or formulate an etiquette it would be...
January 10th, 2024 05:16 - Mother GAZA (Joseph C Ogbonna)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
January 10th, 2024 05:09 - If (2781)
Cracked it I think - each to their own, but certainly I \'m not a \' blue...
January 9th, 2024 18:20 - \"Whispers of Tranquility: A Symphony in Retirement\" (Sunil64)
Welcome to the ranks. Go for it - with that kind of vision you will have...
January 8th, 2024 23:26 - You Can Always Tell .. (Neville)
Reassurance sometimes obligatory.
January 8th, 2024 17:12 - Darth (Sorenbarrett)
Darth gave me a good larf. Vader go as a proud dog owner.
January 8th, 2024 17:04 - Lunchtime Discussion. (Goldfinch60)
😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣. 82, always on time, but haven\'t...
January 8th, 2024 16:57 - Twisted Doughnut Shop (Kinsley Lee)
I certainly smelt that one...mmm....mmm...
January 8th, 2024 01:46 - Stop the warmongers and aggressors (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Why when and how indeed.
Your passion, anger and sickness at this and all...
January 8th, 2024 01:43 - # Poem for Palestine (Labeebah)
Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
January 7th, 2024 23:28 - Revolution Day (Chris Duffy)
Well writ - full approval from me, Chris.
Feel your rant could be...
January 7th, 2024 23:24 - Sunny Winter Morn. (Goldfinch60)
Short but rich piece there, Andy.
However, the news, if I\'m careful to...
January 7th, 2024 06:57 - Paradise (John Prophet)
On the way to a psychosis?
Stay clear and focus, my friend....
January 7th, 2024 03:29 - BACK AND BETTER THAN EVER (Rocky Lagou)
Good for you, Rocky. Not going to say \'Best Wishes\' as it has undertones...
January 7th, 2024 02:01 - “I am the bread of life.” (Gary Edward Geraci)
If I understand you correctly Gary, \'ritual\' is not to your...
January 6th, 2024 20:12 - In dreams (Sorenbarrett)
A parable about world events, I think. They happen, I don\'t witness them,...
January 6th, 2024 20:03 - Cruise Snobs (Neville)
Nothing there to cause the slightest disturbance down...
January 5th, 2024 20:21 - It’s Not What it Used to Be (Neville)
I\'ll pass on this one, man - Antipodean Blues......
January 5th, 2024 20:05 - Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap (Neville)
Now you’ve got me going….. A topic which fascinates me,...
January 5th, 2024 05:15 - UK TODAY (Nephilim56)
Thought you described Australia for a moment...
Well said.
December 21st, 2023 17:19 - Rank Order (Neville)
Yeh - I\'ll slide in at the bottom and give certain needy folks above (not...
December 20th, 2023 19:15 - Eagles sing a requiem (Tallisman)
The bonds that can exist between friends; the loss. Only mountains could...
December 20th, 2023 19:06 - Glow (Neville)
Crossed wires here I feel, but this is the way language expands to...
December 20th, 2023 18:41 - Glow (Neville)
Quite possibly fun while it lasted... I hope the \'disciples\' weren\'t...
December 19th, 2023 20:32 - Questions of another type (Sorenbarrett)
Took more than one read to get into the core/cores of your...
December 19th, 2023 20:21
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