Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Winter Snow (Jerry Reynolds) How the hell in four short picturesque lines do you manage to throw in...
  February 16th, 2024 19:27
• Choices (Sorenbarrett) Solid build there, Soren. capped with the last four lines of which the...
  February 16th, 2024 19:21
• A Bizarre Naked Dance (Aloo Denish Obiero) If you delete all the embarrassment, then great fun for the punch...
  February 16th, 2024 19:08
• I AM AFRICA (Aloo Denish Obiero) As Parisab above, plus the hope that Africa is not beset by fresh...
  February 16th, 2024 18:59
• Fresh Coffee? (Goldfinch60) 😂🤣😂🤣 Well that finally settles that then Dr Crippen. I\'ve...
  February 15th, 2024 21:10
• Apathy Rules Okay (Neville) If life was once ‘nasty, brutish and short’ - today we can thank...
  February 15th, 2024 07:17
• Insurance (2781) Bushrangers came and went.... but their spirit lives on.....
  February 15th, 2024 07:03
• Prevarication (Sorenbarrett) I\'d give both an equal rating, Soren. Circumstances dictate...
  February 15th, 2024 00:34
• Rapture of my Heart (Teddy.15) Quite possibly a good enough excuse, Teddy...... 😇!!!
  February 14th, 2024 07:23
• No Comment (Neville) To hell with it - there\'s too much of this about - economic conditions...
  February 14th, 2024 07:17
• You know Val? (Orchidee) Yeh - I got the thought,, wrapped it up ready to send, but then what about...
  February 14th, 2024 07:10
• Pyracantha Battle. (Goldfinch60) This hasn\'t impinged upon my current knowledge base, Andy (can\'t you...
  February 13th, 2024 07:30
• Dante and I (Teddy.15) I feel I should know Dante\'s work (which I don\'t) in order to fully...
  February 13th, 2024 07:12
• Snow Ghost (Bella Shepard) Already has been highlighted that final stanza Bella, so all I can do is...
  February 12th, 2024 07:46
• Two Sisters (Neville) 🤣Too much Neville - reminded me of the old \"Where\'s the soap?\" joke...
  February 12th, 2024 07:24
• Prophets and Losses (Tom Dylan) You\'ve lightened up my evening with your whimsy, Tom. Ready for a sound...
  February 12th, 2024 07:17
• Dragonfly (Sorenbarrett) I\'m enraptured by a dragonfly when I rarely see them, Soren. And...
  February 12th, 2024 07:14
• Comforting Creator - Ye Olde Prayers series (18) (Orchidee) Same with hymns? Do you reach maturity at 18, or must you wait \'til 21?
  February 9th, 2024 08:00
• Senryu to Opera (Teddy.15) For some reason this reminds me of Milan - such a contradiction....
  February 9th, 2024 07:56
• The Late Great Hieronymus Bosch (Neville) So the CV of Hieronymus is free public knowledge, Neville, images of his...
  February 9th, 2024 07:51
• And It Rained. (Goldfinch60) Didn\'t know you lived on the east coast of Australia, Andy......You are...
  February 9th, 2024 07:13
• Altered Images (Neville) 😇The brain (and I\'m fully aware that I\'m trying to teach grannie to...
  February 8th, 2024 03:53
• Lighten Our Darkness - Ye Olde Prayers series (17) (Orchidee) \'17\' ??? - never ending is it: on to eternity via the scenic route?
  February 8th, 2024 03:40
• Chinese (2781) Defamed they are - constantly. A self fulfilling prophesy on the...
  February 8th, 2024 00:07
• The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60) This makes me laugh in the best possible way, Andy. It is so complete -...
  February 7th, 2024 22:01
• A Boy from another Gaza (Keith Jeffries) Born 1941 East End of London - the Anderson shelter - I slept there....
  February 7th, 2024 21:39
• Ouroboros (Neville) Oh you mean ...
  February 7th, 2024 08:03
• Hope Of Help 3 (Orchidee) Three times? Ain\'t no one listening? 😇!!!
  February 7th, 2024 07:40
• KNOWING AND WAITING (Nephilim56) Deeply felt I feel, but deeply relevant to us all. A universal experience...
  February 7th, 2024 07:29
• The Clear-Out (Tom Dylan) Wish I had your courage, Tom, but do heed the salutary warning however...
  February 7th, 2024 07:19
• Tares (Sorenbarrett) As Teddy above - even I managed the imagery and metaphor - you pinned the...
  February 7th, 2024 07:07
• Butterflies are rare (Teddy.15) Upstairs somewhere you said you were a \'doomsday writer\', Teddy, I...
  February 7th, 2024 07:03
• The View from Coal Country (JBentley) Bumped into you on the poetic parade today. And despite my misgivings...
  February 6th, 2024 19:45
• Everything has a price (Sorenbarrett) That soul, Soren - it\'s a tribute to your poetic skill that you almost...
  February 6th, 2024 08:56
• The One Dreams are Made of (Teddy.15) You tell a good yarn, Teddy. As I read with one side of my brain (never...
  February 6th, 2024 08:51
• Days of Wine And...... (Orchidee) Don\'t get which you are humouring....KP or Fido..........
  February 6th, 2024 08:40
• At The End of The Line (Neville) You are only causing confusion here Neville; the end of the line is a full...
  February 6th, 2024 08:33
• Initially Speaking (Tom Dylan) Yeh -same deal here, only in reverse, if you get my drift...
  February 6th, 2024 08:24
• The mozzie (2781) Empathised with every line.... My old mate was the huntsman, although both...
  February 5th, 2024 07:14
• Crowned Creator (Orchidee) When you own the real estate, you\'ve got the power......
  February 5th, 2024 07:09
• Bigger Picture (Teddy.15) You tell us it was a bus, but i believe it might have been a carriage for...
  February 5th, 2024 06:57
• Monday morning office... (Tom Dylan) All things pass, my friend...all things pass. One day in the distant...
  February 5th, 2024 06:43
• Spillage (Neville) Difficult to determine precisely just what is the situation...
  February 5th, 2024 06:32
• Against all we want to believe (Sorenbarrett) An odd process, but you\'ve got its essence, I believe Soren. After its...
  February 5th, 2024 06:26
• Michael Jordan’s Boots (Doggerel Dave) Tool: \"An often disliked person who screws people over instead of using...
  February 4th, 2024 17:28
• Going Green. (Chris Duffy) PS: Last line coulda been \'greens\' - just remember to munch up your...
  February 4th, 2024 04:44
• Paraclete\'s Presence - Ye Olde Prayers series (16) (Orchidee) Definitely going to seek medical attention after that second stanza.
  February 4th, 2024 04:21
• Going Green. (Chris Duffy) Wonderfully surrealistic world you live in, Chris. neva mind - it won\'t...
  February 4th, 2024 04:17
• Michael Jordan’s Boots (Doggerel Dave) I do - but are you travelling incognito in order to evade detection during...
  February 4th, 2024 03:40
• Without (Peto) I may have mentioned somewhere that I\'m not very fond of love poetry...
  February 3rd, 2024 20:20
• senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15) The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an...
  February 3rd, 2024 20:05
• The Gagging of Gaza (Neville) Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
  February 3rd, 2024 16:47
• From time to time (Sorenbarrett) I\'m not skilled with metaphor, as I may have mentioned before once or...
  February 3rd, 2024 05:10
• Lost in the light (Tallisman) Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day) A...
  February 3rd, 2024 01:05
• Email Gmail (2781) Do the best you can - no one can ask anymore of you than that.....except...
  February 2nd, 2024 17:34
• Well Isn’t That Something? (Teddy.15) Well then, a preemptive Merry Birthday (I like \'Merry\' rather than...
  February 2nd, 2024 17:26
• The Gagging of Gaza (Neville) There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for...
  February 2nd, 2024 16:38
• Broken (Tallisman) What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you? Distance is a good...
  February 1st, 2024 21:57
• Immortal Music. (Goldfinch60) You\'ve got me. Now, whenever I hear a piece of music (esp. jazz or...
  February 1st, 2024 07:40
• From The Underside Of The Wild Roses (Teddy.15) I\'m still pondering the title - haven\'t got to the main meal...
  February 1st, 2024 07:32
• Poetry Competition (Tom Dylan) I\'m not sure I\'d like to go to one of your poetry groups, Tom. Much...
  February 1st, 2024 07:16
• Dare to Stray (Neville) Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat...
  February 1st, 2024 07:01
• Help For Humans - Ye Olde Prayers series (14) (Orchidee) This Master - he\'s deaf as a post, ain\'t he?
  February 1st, 2024 06:56
• Radicalisation Is Just Another Hate Definition (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That one deserves more recognition than it will quite possibly get -...
  January 31st, 2024 05:52
• One of the Lads (Tom Dylan) Cracked that one, mate.... machismo such a farce. Oh so well said....
  January 31st, 2024 05:44
• Service Shown - Ye Olde Prayers series (13) (Orchidee) I\'ve probably missed the point, but could not companionship involve a...
  January 31st, 2024 05:38
• Just a Few Odd Diary Notes (Neville) I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well...
  January 31st, 2024 05:34
• A Lesson Learned (Tom Dylan) They\'ve told you the truth above, but with you I always feel that you...
  January 30th, 2024 22:12
• When I Found Myself on eBay (Neville) I do tend to agree..... Amazon (damn \'em)are very swift, whereas with...
  January 30th, 2024 21:12
• The Edimpost (by two) (Michael Edwards) The road to nowhere is precisely the way we all are going, I...
  January 30th, 2024 21:04
• A Mantra of Life & Death (Tom Dylan) It\'s the way you tell \'em, Tom - had me in to the very end. I would...
  January 30th, 2024 20:56
• Trash to treasure (Sorenbarrett) Because much of that is bull shit (the \'Many think my poems are trash\'),...
  January 30th, 2024 20:34
• Mortal-Hamas-ment (Israeli Shout) (Friend of Israel) (AuburnScribbler) HI Ben - Is \'please do stay everyone\' a typo or intentional? Either way,...
  January 30th, 2024 20:12
• My Advice To Poets (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) \' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm,...
  January 29th, 2024 00:15
• Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard) \"Ability\" = courage, because sometimes (not very often) a concept/idea...
  January 28th, 2024 18:35
• When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken (Neville) Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a...
  January 28th, 2024 18:10
• Administrative Malfunction (Quemis) A breakdown? You broke it down skilfully. Technology gone...
  January 28th, 2024 17:59
• Poetic Injustice (Alan R) I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have...
  January 28th, 2024 00:37
• I\'m Closing The Books (Tom Dylan) You are a change agent, Tom. A random phrase and you burst through into a...
  January 27th, 2024 21:36
• No good deed goes unpunished (Sorenbarrett) The rhyming’s great me old mate, Not always easy to do; It takes hard...
  January 27th, 2024 18:19
• Can\'t argue (2781) Got my attention - good one. More like this and you have a devoted reader
  January 27th, 2024 17:40
• Now look.... woof! (Orchidee) Arise, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur - off your knees; embrace the truth.....
  January 27th, 2024 17:11
• Now look.... woof! (Orchidee) This is absolute rubbish, orchi, and you know it. A bigger load of...
  January 27th, 2024 05:16
• The Moon Looks Down. (Goldfinch60) Enjoy it while you can, Andy - it is all going to be dug up...
  January 26th, 2024 18:23
• Fruit Bats (Gray0328) Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are...
  January 26th, 2024 06:39
• How Many More Planets (Neville) Maybe one or two….but it’s a very local issue – the Universe won’t...
  January 26th, 2024 06:28
• \"9/11\" (Gray0328) Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
  January 26th, 2024 02:00
• A Songbird\'s Final Flight (GeekSusie) “somehow I never noticed you before today, I’m afraid to say” Joan...
  January 25th, 2024 17:24
• Remember (M.E.M.) Just don\'t sleep in......... 🛌🏻 !!!
  January 25th, 2024 15:30
• Cloud cover (2781) A rip roaring read, even if.......
  January 25th, 2024 15:27
• America (Stormy) I\'m overwhelmed. You don\'t mean \'enjoy\' literally, do you? \'Feel the...
  January 25th, 2024 06:48
• Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie) If it\'s not aliens in flying saucers, then something else.......ah! AI...
  January 24th, 2024 22:01
• Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie) This is the beginning. It will take time for the AI situation to shake...
  January 24th, 2024 20:17
• With Phone in Hand (Tom Dylan) I encounter these zombies every day. I alter my line of travel slightly...
  January 24th, 2024 17:39
• A crime commited (Sorenbarrett) Regrets? yeh - me too. Redemption in later life, but life\'s early...
  January 24th, 2024 17:24
• The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana) Hey Lorenz – give her a break. When I first responded to her piece (as...
  January 23rd, 2024 23:15
• The Teenage Dream (Stormy) \"Slowly managing\" is the most optimistic and realistic assurance you...
  January 23rd, 2024 20:15
• That Beautiful Dress. (Goldfinch60) I have an extremely strong suspicion that if she turned up in a totally...
  January 23rd, 2024 19:36
• The Teenage Dream (Stormy) Grit your teeth and hang in there. I would never under any circumstances...
  January 23rd, 2024 19:20
• Wandering Thoughts in Ordinary Places (GeekSusie) You make me feel better now - I think I\'ll mortify my flesh less often -...
  January 22nd, 2024 23:53