Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Making Life More Difficult (Orchidee)
Maybe pessimism is the only option when you are in the state you are
August 8th, 2025 18:16 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:45 - Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme)
It\'s poor old Madam Clair I worry about. Quiet day really. When she has...
August 8th, 2025 17:43 - Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60)
What is it I\'m supposed to respect? Respect the human being, no matter...
August 7th, 2025 06:07 - An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind (Sorenbarrett)
I do believe bees have a class system: Queen - workers - drones; it works...
August 6th, 2025 19:26 - I have to be in El Paso Yesterday (Victor Bolshov)
It does (work).
Don\'t ever get there... the urgency of the trip and its...
August 6th, 2025 19:00 - Tariffs and Tantrums (Narayan Gadagkar)
Thanks for the clarity (and present truth) of your analysis in great...
August 6th, 2025 18:39 - The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328)
I shall follow the series with attention.... Thanks for putting it out...
August 6th, 2025 18:33 - This Morning (Lorna)
Where are you? you could be next door... the picture you paint feels...
August 4th, 2025 08:19 - Thought (Bella Shepard)
This 575 provides a simple truth with an admirable lack of complexity.
A...
August 3rd, 2025 17:30 - Innocent victims (NafisaSB)
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then...
August 1st, 2025 21:17 - All the Lonely People (Kevin Hulme)
A guilt with no remedy; a rich picture though.
July 31st, 2025 23:50 - The Cloak of Decency (Gray0328)
The descriptor/aphorism or whatever \'Manners maketh the man\' could only...
July 31st, 2025 23:39 - Clink (Tony36)
too
Edit and then delete this.
July 30th, 2025 20:27 - Well Inclined (Neville)
Purely observational without judgement - well done, Sir.
July 29th, 2025 21:24 - A Message in a Bottle (SureshG)
Good for you, Suresh. A tiresome idea. I weary of its mention everywhere.
July 29th, 2025 21:18 - The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60)
Memories... You\'ve filled in some gaps, Andy - many thanks...
July 29th, 2025 08:17 - The Illusion Of Cool (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
A totally correct analysis, I think... though to some degree most of us...
July 29th, 2025 08:08 - Weather Report (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah - chimes... I hanker for them, but live far too close to others, and am...
July 29th, 2025 07:57 - If I were a Man (Ladywithaquill)
Interesting list of behavioural constraints imposed upon some women via...
July 28th, 2025 17:44 - Vanity (Sorenbarrett)
Interspeces interaction can be a funny thing - and this certainly is; good...
July 28th, 2025 09:02 - Irony (Lorna)
I\'m lucky - lack of legacy won\'t worry me... only what I have...
July 28th, 2025 08:52 - At the Very End of It All (Neville)
Neville, in my carefully curated and quite short list of possibilities,...
July 28th, 2025 08:45 - Who ate all the pies? (Orchidee)
I think you are about to pass the Kardashians ....Your life and times so...
July 27th, 2025 19:31 - Wild Child (Tristan Robert Lange)
Empathy comes via my experience of reggae - the first time I could move at...
July 26th, 2025 17:07 - Sorting out Santa (Orchidee)
High time you got central heating, Son. I know you\'ve been around a long...
July 26th, 2025 07:18 - 5 Months (Orchidee)
Is Carol the pet name for the AI which writes your Xmas hymns, Orchi?
July 25th, 2025 19:17 - I Wrote. She Generated (Samuel)
A lot of it about - MPS is a good case study. How to cope with AI is one...
July 25th, 2025 19:11 - Invisible (Andy Hunter)
Well written rhymer which conveys an easily understood situation indeed.
...
July 23rd, 2025 18:53 - WHEN IS A WAR CRIME NOT A WAR CRIME ? (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A well written and constructed work.
However, questions remain:
What...
July 23rd, 2025 18:31 - Fido wants to know (Orchidee)
If Fido don\'t know who or what he is, and you, orchi suffer from periodic...
July 22nd, 2025 18:09 - I am left bear and open (Newt)
Bare.
Edit and then delete this.
July 22nd, 2025 17:55 - The Weasel (Tony Grannell)
Wot a luverly lad! Ain\'t he got class....
Got this small but nasty thing...
July 21st, 2025 17:46 - Is it funny? (Orchidee)
Deeply philosophical, orchi if yer read between the lines....
July 20th, 2025 17:43 - Use that brain cell or three (Orchidee)
Cryptic meanings = metaphors, in my book, Fido. Please include that in...
July 19th, 2025 20:33 - Password Day. (Goldfinch60)
Before I eliminated the buggers, I had a very small but effective number...
July 19th, 2025 20:10 - Fishers of Men (Tony Grannell)
Mystery in the land of deep poetic rhythms.
Ne\'er to be solved, just...
July 18th, 2025 19:50 - Spiraling out of Control (Thomas W Case)
Great piece. Somebody knows, but where\'s the percentage in letting you...
July 16th, 2025 16:39 - Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy)
When I visit a friend here, I do wonder if it might be you in a completely...
July 16th, 2025 07:25 - A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
If you feel strong where your are now, man - stay with it.
July 16th, 2025 06:54 - I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell)
😆Ah now that\'s a poem on poetry I can relate to and even fave. A real...
July 16th, 2025 01:59 - Ode To An Olive. (Goldfinch60)
So you\'ve never busted a tooth on one of their stones? All that salt and...
July 16th, 2025 01:38 - Color Blind? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Subtle crafting meant I, wrapped in the pleasant way in which the science...
July 15th, 2025 20:16 - What do You Think of when you Think about Death? (M.E.M.)
Yes Yalom is an interesting writer if you are at all interested in...
July 15th, 2025 19:02 - The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz)
I believe I\'ve said what I had to say about your poetry previously, and I...
July 15th, 2025 06:50 - CHOKE ! (Chris Duffy)
Not typical of your stuff Chris - what happened?
I look forward to your...
July 15th, 2025 06:31 - an orchard’s lament (Arqios)
Surely I have no need to know the complexities of Chekov\'s play to...
July 15th, 2025 05:54 - Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell)
Was he a naughty boy, then?
Your rhyme rhythm and flow just make for an...
July 14th, 2025 08:44 - Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
As a long term vegetarian, what can I tell ya?
Keep going. I enjoy your...
July 14th, 2025 08:31 - The Age of Lies (ElizabethMoroz)
As usual, lost in the rhyme and rhythm of your piece and the ideas that...
July 14th, 2025 07:54 - FIGHTING AN INVISIBLE BATTLE- INTERSTITAL CYSTITIS (PassionatePoetess)
do that mean you got stingy piddle?
July 14th, 2025 06:59 - NOT YOUR CINDERELLA (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
Jolly good darling......
July 14th, 2025 06:32 - Favourites? (Orchidee)
Nah that\'s too obvious - name appears.....\'Likes\' is more sneaky,...
July 14th, 2025 02:36 - Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy)
Definitely fed me well enough to see me through.
Pinned with a certain...
July 13th, 2025 20:30 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
This theme can continue - on to my next, \'Oracle\'.
July 13th, 2025 08:44 - from the Archives of the Sunbeam (Arqios)
Nothing quite like a cat (well the one I have a sometime acquaintance with...
July 13th, 2025 08:19 - The storm (NafisaSB)
A rich descriptive piece, timely inasmuch as I believe events such as that...
July 13th, 2025 02:14 - Don\'t Say That Word! (Goldfinch60)
Evokes heat sweat and pain - and that\'s just from the seat you were...
July 13th, 2025 01:55 - I never knew.... (Orchidee)
Orchi - what you need is an AI assistant. There\'s one on my PC hanging...
July 12th, 2025 07:39 - Trying To Be Honest In A Land Full Of Liars (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Lies produced when they don\'t know they\'re lying:
Go for it man, go on...
July 12th, 2025 07:24 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
Please also note \"I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!\" by...
July 11th, 2025 20:35 - NO RETURN (SureshG)
I think I couldn\'t agree more. If I read you right, then more people need...
July 11th, 2025 20:14 - An Angler\'s Morn (Tony Grannell)
Fishing lines I see as poetic lines here. (you\'ll get no fancy stuff...
July 11th, 2025 20:03 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
Seems I\'ve lost a fave and a contribution here. Where did you go, my...
July 11th, 2025 08:23 - drive on by (Arqios)
\'This country\' being of course Australia where I don\'t own a car. But...
July 11th, 2025 08:11 - Not too smart (Sorenbarrett)
😆🤣Indeed - pertinent question presented in rhymic form, Sir.
July 11th, 2025 05:41 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
So at the end of the day (my day!) no one has at this point asked me: if...
July 11th, 2025 02:21 - Chilling out (2781)
Can confirm chilly and cold, that\'s for sure
Logging on can be a...
July 10th, 2025 08:34 - The Storm (Tristan Robert Lange)
Daffinateley overthinking at age 15, Tristan. With age comes wisdom (or so...
July 10th, 2025 08:13 - The Keys To Happiness Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I think I\'ve exhausted my vocabulary when it comes to your sonnets, Andy....
July 10th, 2025 02:45 - Raging Sea (Tony Grannell)
With a trio of rich affirmations above, what more could I possibly add?...
July 10th, 2025 00:22 - REALIST NOT A ROYALIST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Patriotism, Nationalism, Jingoism and their connection to war. I\'ve...
July 9th, 2025 20:24 - Accept Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Will /have/do, Andy....but is mine yours? I like to contribute to that...
July 9th, 2025 20:04 - It Shant Be In Vain (Tristan Robert Lange)
Can\'t tell me a thing about flies that as a resident of Australia I...
July 9th, 2025 19:11 - Some Kind of African Life (Neville)
More scratching around ...and...found ya... Matters Arising: To be clear...
July 9th, 2025 18:52 - nev (Arqios)
Well then, where? How?
July 9th, 2025 08:23 - Union Members (Kevin Hulme)
Solidarity forever!👍
July 7th, 2025 23:32 - Butterfly. (Poetic Licence)
Nature\'s artwork in mobile form. Compelled to be fascinated by a...
July 7th, 2025 17:38 - Tattered Tattoos (Tristan Robert Lange)
You\'ve obviously caught today\'s zeitgeist here, Tristan, and by the look...
July 7th, 2025 17:19 - A Demoralising World (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Neat idea in neat form. Well worth the effort.
July 7th, 2025 17:04 - At what point? (Sorenbarrett)
Each of those lines could be extended, explored in their own right. You...
July 7th, 2025 04:48 - The Influencer (Doggerel Dave)
Well thanks for the fave, Soren - can\'t let that go. However, not quite...
July 7th, 2025 04:36 - Doctor Doctor (2781)
😂Could well happen to an overworked Registrar.
July 7th, 2025 01:48 - The Blank Page Is Before Me. (Goldfinch60)
A bit OTT, but enjoyable too, Andy.
July 7th, 2025 01:45 - Why me? (Sorenbarrett)
No accounting for it, Soren. My thought when I see a wheelchair just tells...
July 6th, 2025 19:05 - Home Again (Bella Shepard)
Thought you were lost and gone forever, Bella. Can I stop mourning...
July 6th, 2025 18:44 - Bet on It (Dyslexic.gun)
Can I gather from your comment that this was a case of experiential...
July 6th, 2025 18:33 - A time for everything (NafisaSB)
Optimistic advice you are dishing out there, N. I hope someone benefits....
July 6th, 2025 01:40 - Inside the Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
While I\'ve never had any problem in that direction (beyond the occasional...
July 5th, 2025 19:05 - Can ye not..... (Orchidee)
Go on lead \'em up the garden path - some entrants here will get more life...
July 5th, 2025 18:56 - [What I Really Wanna Know is WHY?] (Cheeky Missy)
If I get to your sonnets before breakfast, I find I don\'t need any, Missy...
July 5th, 2025 18:50 - Gaza (Help). (Poetic Licence)
Couldn’t agree more with most of your sentiments, Tobani. I have stated...
July 5th, 2025 07:10 - What were they thinking? (Sorenbarrett)
Yes - inappropriate name inflicted should be an indicator to the recipient...
July 5th, 2025 06:21 - Turn out the lights (Sorenbarrett)
All been said above, actually. As usual, I came late to the party. I...
July 5th, 2025 03:03 - Excremental (Doggerel Dave)
Thanks for the fave, Missy.
July 5th, 2025 02:52 - the art of the pause (Gray0328)
By far preferable to incessant input.
Understood completely.
July 4th, 2025 19:38 - The Usual Please (Kevin Hulme)
Randy Frankie - remember him well....often wondered...
July 4th, 2025 19:32 - Kisses, Tea, and Why Granny Lost Her Balls-- (Cheeky Missy)
When a Puss takes control, It\'s all over really. Something quite amusing...
July 3rd, 2025 21:24 - Redux - Child Care 14/5/25 (Doggerel Dave)
In the best country in the world (our PM) a male child care worker has...
July 3rd, 2025 17:30 - Born In A Dream. (Poetic Licence)
I truly hope they can provide the opportunity for the child to complete...
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
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