Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Crucifixion Pending (Tristan Robert Lange) So there I am, slowly progressing up today’s offerings… Tristan! –...
  March 29th, 2026 18:43
• Sonnet to Rebirth (Thomas W Case) Never seen you in sonnet form before Thomas. The message/explanation comes...
  March 29th, 2026 18:20
• Two Love Tropes with a Metaphor Twist (Jerry Reynolds) I felt number one (Timing). Perfect.
  March 29th, 2026 18:13
• Who Rules You (Katie B.) \'I will not heed the call\' Neither should anyone else.... Short sharp...
  March 29th, 2026 18:06
• The Introvert’s Signal (Lilmoonxx) Only just bumped into you. Seems you specialise in short moments in...
  March 29th, 2026 17:58
• discontentment (Jjudaharts) A \'saying\' so far from a comprehension of social reality it beggars...
  March 29th, 2026 17:32
• More Questions (EvenwheniLie) The net result of all those questions is a blinding headache IMO. My...
  March 28th, 2026 18:33
• Palms of Peace (Orchidee) Memories of childhood - apart from my Sunday School attendance book filled...
  March 28th, 2026 18:22
• The Blasphemy of Holy War (Mohammad Younus) If I have you right (and even if I haven’t) I would argue that the...
  March 28th, 2026 06:34
• ONLY FLOWERS (Durdica Porobija) Limits, to be sorted and defined. Not a too difficult issue in that...
  March 28th, 2026 06:19
• this is not goodbye (Arqios) Good seats at the Opera House? your picture plus poem bought back a...
  March 28th, 2026 06:11
• The Flowers. (Goldfinch60) Could we not agree that was a brass band plus Andy? And to think if you...
  March 28th, 2026 05:41
• Night time tales (NafisaSB) I\'m very glad that, having woken at one, you are capable of returning to...
  March 28th, 2026 05:27
• Pain is all I feel (Jade_rbr) I don\'t know you, that is correct. Glad you shared - get it off your...
  March 28th, 2026 05:10
• Chess (Allie561) I have a vague notion of chess, however if I concentrate, I think I get...
  March 27th, 2026 14:58
• Alcohol Agnosia (Tristan Robert Lange) Well said, Sir. an ongoing respectful relationship with alcohol requires...
  March 27th, 2026 14:49
• soul-trained (Arqios) A solidly constructed account of unvarying routine. It’s the show, Just...
  March 27th, 2026 14:33
• My Beautiful Mary. (Goldfinch60) What? Mary gets to read it here because you are too tight to buy her a...
  March 27th, 2026 06:47
• Vending Machine Vendetta (Matthew R. Callies) If memory serves me correctly there has been much controversy over...
  March 27th, 2026 06:41
• The Truth of the Matter (Kevin Hulme) Humans -the biggest pollution (not merely polluter) on earth. I wonder...
  March 26th, 2026 21:00
• amen (Tristan Robert Lange) Nah, sorry Tristan: thinking alone isn\'t enough - it is the quality of...
  March 26th, 2026 17:33
• Long Gone Cursive (Gray0328) The agony of steel tipped pens and inkwells; now mastery of the...
  March 26th, 2026 17:18
• Charity (Sorenbarrett) Well said, Soren.
  March 26th, 2026 17:01
• Peace Possible? (Orchidee) What\'s the time frame on this, orchi? Completion date?
  March 26th, 2026 01:29
• Pay Them. Respect Them. Let Them Work. (GeekSusie) \"What does TSA mean in the United States? DEFINITION: “TBA” and...
  March 25th, 2026 18:53
• For Reference Purposes Only (Neville) Who took the bars and who took the safety net? Or did they make an...
  March 25th, 2026 18:35
• Terror in Gainesville (Matthew R. Callies) Thanks for both the poem and the Wikipedia reference. His history...
  March 25th, 2026 18:20
• unsigned horizon (Arqios) Great word painting. Can imagine this on my wall (sorry - if I had a...
  March 25th, 2026 18:04
• Power is Not Proof (Tristan Robert Lange) I do know, but have rarely heard, Tristan. A succinct reminder I\'ll vote...
  March 25th, 2026 17:52
• hedgehog fred (Jim56) There\'s another one - goes with the tadpole. Wish I could draw - I\'d do...
  March 25th, 2026 04:10
• Spring Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Totally appropriate it\'s a shortie - that might be all the spring you get...
  March 25th, 2026 03:55
• Reflective Pattern Reality (Thoughtless) I have a funny feeling you are pulling my leg, but then I have a very...
  March 24th, 2026 23:54
• Held Hostage in Suits (GeekSusie) Sounds about right, and I can feel the deep and abiding anger in a well...
  March 24th, 2026 23:49
• Shred (2781) Terrified of digging deeper than the toaster, this is my thought of the...
  March 24th, 2026 23:29
• threshold (Tristan Robert Lange) Too late, Mate😢
  March 24th, 2026 22:43
• Mechanoids In March (Syd) Let it continue to wander, mate -that\'s where poetry comes from, I\'m...
  March 24th, 2026 22:36
• What\'s left (Sorenbarrett) Brilliant - not a metaphor in sight . could well appear on......
  March 24th, 2026 05:11
• Back To Croquet. (Goldfinch60) It\'s the aliens - they are too bright to attempt to invade directly, they...
  March 24th, 2026 05:00
• You Fed Me Forever While Planning Never (Entangled heart) Not done this for a long while... but here presented once more with...
  March 24th, 2026 04:45
• In The Shadow of Fast Clocks (Neville) I attempt, fast or slow, to ignore it, Neville. What\'s that old corny...
  March 23rd, 2026 16:42
• tadpole life (Jim56) Fun piece - could be a great nursery rhyme. Very much enjoyed.
  March 23rd, 2026 16:24
• An Ode To Earworms (Syd) I wish my earworms were as upbeat and melodic as that, Syd. What is your...
  March 23rd, 2026 04:08
• Enchou sareta senryu (Sorenbarrett) Haven\'t seen that dilemma in a long long time, Soren. Still interesting....
  March 23rd, 2026 04:02
• The Search has Ended (Thomas W Case) Perhaps a necessary journey unable to be avoided, Thomas.
  March 22nd, 2026 23:56
• Orbit of Oblivion (Tristan Robert Lange) The political cliché, which over the years I\'ve heard more times than I...
  March 22nd, 2026 16:23
• JULY FIRST 1916 (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Very real and atmospheric. I was obsessed by the trenches in WW1 once....
  March 22nd, 2026 07:13
• Feeling Kinder. (Goldfinch60) Love it, communing with nature....all the world\'s problems...
  March 22nd, 2026 07:05
• Stairs to Nowhere (Matthew R. Callies) The fascination I derived from Escher\'s drawings still lingers. Thanks...
  March 21st, 2026 22:37
• Spring (Allie561) Spring is sprung.... but if it is anything like where I live that day was...
  March 21st, 2026 22:02
• The Library Girl (Kevin Hulme) A likely story, but taking it on face value, in your position I would...
  March 21st, 2026 21:56
• all she wanted was to dance. (DeadRose) If you can time travel there are other worlds - even limiting your...
  March 21st, 2026 15:35
• A Short Series of Wonderings (Neville) Obviously in precisely the right moment to give it that level of...
  March 21st, 2026 15:24
• control burn (Tristan Robert Lange) Definitely.
  March 21st, 2026 15:14
• An emotional and contemplative man (Donteatmecows) While your poems appear quite self revelatory demc, a basic bio on your...
  March 21st, 2026 15:02
• Pull the Ripcord (Gray0328) I like to believe that my parachute is open at all times - unless I...
  March 21st, 2026 05:04
• End the wars (NafisaSB) A beautifully simple question, requiring the equally simple answer - yes!...
  March 21st, 2026 04:48
• What A Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60) You extract all the juice, including the pips out of every thing you do...
  March 21st, 2026 04:39
• The Intersection (Lilmoonxx) I guess you are a driver....
  March 21st, 2026 04:34
• I understand (Xqw) So why?
  March 21st, 2026 04:30
• The Puppet (Paddy) Good luck here at MPS. Hope you enjoy your stay. And if you can get around...
  March 21st, 2026 01:07
• Nine on the Field (Matthew R. Callies) Action! You caught it. Never heard of this game before; where is it...
  March 20th, 2026 12:18
• Abstraction Traction (Tristan Robert Lange) Straightforward truth (inasmuch as I can know it) wins the day every time...
  March 20th, 2026 12:08
• Three Things Lost. (Goldfinch60) Hey Andy - you could write a Self Help book in the form of sonnets. Don\'t...
  March 20th, 2026 11:58
• I\'m the guy who...... (Orchidee) You speak for yourself; I do not intend to marry KP after you get a...
  March 20th, 2026 09:53
• Weak (2781) Hell Man....
  March 19th, 2026 16:48
• Breaking the rules (Allie561) Beyond my capacity to achieve most of those acts of defiance, but I sure...
  March 19th, 2026 16:42
• The Static Reset (Lilmoonxx) So that\'s what it must be like.... Well penned rhymer which gives me...
  March 19th, 2026 16:33
• \"she\'s gutsy\" (Arqios) Did you....................................... catch up? Gutsy? Reminds me...
  March 19th, 2026 16:24
• Egregious Expectations (The Routine) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) “Always look on the bright side of life” – Being unemployed gives...
  March 19th, 2026 16:04
• Mrudula (Neville) Not one of the Mrudulas a Google search throws up is she? I’ll freely...
  March 18th, 2026 17:48
• Take those risks (Allie561) Wish I had received that advice (and acted upon it) when I was...
  March 18th, 2026 17:33
• At Knowing\'s Edge (Tristan Robert Lange) Preemptive apologies for this, Tristan. To challenge your last...
  March 18th, 2026 17:23
• iNNOCENCE IMPARTED (Katie B.) \'Time would best be served standing still\'. Great line. From your...
  March 18th, 2026 16:27
• Search (2781) Gotta have Word or similar. I even bang out many of my comments there...
  March 18th, 2026 16:17
• Enlightenment (Sorenbarrett) Don\'t know how you find the time Soren, but clearly a tribute is...
  March 18th, 2026 16:07
• Doing The Garden Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Got not too many illusions about yourself, have you Andy. True right...
  March 18th, 2026 15:56
• Glimpse into the eye of a needle (EvenwheniLie) Existential wasting away....
  March 18th, 2026 06:13
• Narc, Narc, Who\'s There? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) What with passive aggressives and now narcissists ever thought of changing...
  March 17th, 2026 22:13
• My Grandfathers Hydrangeas (Neville) Here there\'s a programme \'Gardening Australia\" Fridays 7.30 sharp on...
  March 17th, 2026 20:52
• (un)held (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh the misery of it all! I don\'t believe a word of it. (Try rustling...
  March 17th, 2026 20:37
• \"she orders me about\" (Arqios) Any rewards?
  March 17th, 2026 20:28
• The 3 PM Sunlight (Lilmoonxx) You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot. I\'m sure you have more...
  March 17th, 2026 20:05
• Not The Only One (Orchidee) Best Wishes orchi. (Now that may be the shortest message I\'ve ever...
  March 17th, 2026 19:54
• Here\'s to St Patrick\'s Day (Tom Dylan) The mix of if not loyalties at least connections. I certainly can relate....
  March 17th, 2026 18:31
• Sleepy Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Hypnotic. I\'m sure Shakespeare would have given this a pass mark -...
  March 17th, 2026 17:36
• Smolder (Thomas W Case) You have peeled the layers away, exposed your soul. Your attempt here to...
  March 16th, 2026 18:58
• The Housefly\'s Final Flight (Gray0328) Got yer!! Though think of the environment .. a fly swatter would have been...
  March 16th, 2026 18:50
• Effectively impacted (EvenwheniLie) I bounce around all over the place on this one.....There are times when I...
  March 16th, 2026 18:38
• The hollow heart (Carmen Luca) Never mind about it meaning a lot - got anyone in mind?
  March 16th, 2026 18:23
• Washed for the Wilderness (Tristan Robert Lange) To me now a meaningless ritual. I preemptively resigned. A neat write...
  March 16th, 2026 18:15
• hotHotHOT (2781) My throat shrivelled and my fillings began to jangle just reading this....
  March 16th, 2026 18:08
• Cobalt (Katie B.) Coffee would never taste the same in anything else. You have a deep...
  March 16th, 2026 17:58
• Dismissed (Katie B.) A sketch of great veracity, not a spare word or line yet a complete truth....
  March 16th, 2026 17:37
• of witnesses (Arqios) If ever there were a picture of a mood painted in words, this is it.
  March 16th, 2026 17:20
• The British Empire (Atticus_made) Complete and utter satire. If it is not then you should feel more than...
  March 16th, 2026 17:14
• Hair Cut. (Goldfinch60) This is praise to the max - therapeutic encouragement and acknowledgement...
  March 16th, 2026 03:41
• One for Scotty (Thomas W Case) This yarn commands all the senses plus some pay attention. His forty...
  March 15th, 2026 16:57
• Miricale (Sorenbarrett) Great biology lesson writ up in poetic form, Sir. Enjoyed your...
  March 15th, 2026 16:39
• Ring Over Net (Matthew R. Callies) Little context provided by your link.
  March 15th, 2026 16:30
• Fleeting ideas (Carmen Luca) Most poetic justifications (with one or two honourable exceptions) of...
  March 14th, 2026 18:38