Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
I\'m not aware enough of the game or personal circumstances to know why...
December 6th, 2024 06:58 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
“Seek, and ye shall find” -there you go, I’m not a bible person, but...
December 6th, 2024 06:41 - Natural Art. (Goldfinch60)
Word artistry. You have a rich word brush when in the midst of unsullied...
December 6th, 2024 02:42 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Hush! Hush! Whisper who dares!
Christopher Robin is saying his...
December 5th, 2024 19:47 - Creation of Life (Poetic Licence)
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous...
December 5th, 2024 19:33 - Watched (Neville)
Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford....
December 5th, 2024 19:09 - ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk)
Thad:
How I feel about much love poetry is exemplified here:
So let’s...
December 5th, 2024 18:52 - Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange)
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22 - Hidden Garden (reverse nonet) (Arqios)
Can you register the form? In terms of the way a picture gets painted, a...
December 5th, 2024 18:04 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
Passing strange from you, Cassie: \"don’t hide what you’re saying...
December 5th, 2024 07:57 - Numbers (Tristan Robert Lange)
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take...
December 4th, 2024 19:22 - ~> Elephant Insemination Workers \"A Tribute To Them\" (Thad Wilk)
Ah ha, Thad,
I think I might run a sex education class for male elephants...
December 4th, 2024 15:27 - The Old Flat Cap. (Chris Duffy)
I seem to have missed some of your pastes here, Chris and I\'m not...
December 4th, 2024 14:59 - Who reads this rubbish? (Orchidee)
I\'d vote with Soren on this one; though I\'m not sure how far \'beyond\'...
December 4th, 2024 07:25 - Off I drove (Maplespal)
PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?
December 4th, 2024 07:03 - Children Of War (Poetic Licence)
No responsible parent should produce a child into a world where there is...
December 4th, 2024 06:37 - Close Shaves and Final Cuts (Neville)
Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the...
December 4th, 2024 06:29 - Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s nothing I could possibly add to that - your river is the winner,...
December 4th, 2024 06:01 - Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave)
I didn’t manage to include the other places I sometimes visit…
The...
December 4th, 2024 05:49 - Shanty (Neville)
Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out...
December 3rd, 2024 17:04 - ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk)
Thad, you got it made………
Funky monkey,
Texas nexus –
There, go...
December 3rd, 2024 16:35 - The Witches\' pool (FrasMac)
A complex tale told of a complex environment, and I liked it very much.
December 3rd, 2024 16:15 - Christmas May Pass Them By (Poetic Licence)
A rough hard look at modern Christmas. Great write.
As for the rest......
December 3rd, 2024 08:22 - A RIFT IN TIME (Rawaneigh.99)
The first three letters of your name sum up the feel of your poem...
December 3rd, 2024 00:18 - Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having a Bit Too Much Fun, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy)
Daffynately enjoyable on a number of levels. We\'ll keep the actual count...
December 2nd, 2024 16:58 - Signs of Things to Come (Neville)
Thought I\'d stay clear...didn\'t want to get confused.....
December 2nd, 2024 16:35 - where I could no longer go home (Arqios)
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of...
December 2nd, 2024 16:23 - Now (2781)
Politician\'s delight...or lament?.....apology?... doubt it....
December 2nd, 2024 16:08 - When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58)
My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself,...
December 2nd, 2024 16:02 - ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk)
Some jobs don\'t bear thinking about -
I\'ve had enuf I\'m going...
December 2nd, 2024 15:57 - To The Gym. (Goldfinch60)
😜You do like to hand out the advice, don\'t ya.... and I resist...
December 2nd, 2024 08:06 - A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville)
Well then, where to from there?
December 2nd, 2024 07:49 - ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk)
Ralphie doesn\'t bear grudges,
But I bet he will tonight;
I\'d lock that...
December 1st, 2024 23:53 - The wedding (2781)
I have to say, sticking my neck out with a degree of ambivalence (story...
November 30th, 2024 18:12 - within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope) (Tristan Robert Lange)
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity...
November 30th, 2024 17:06 - ~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies (Thad Wilk)
I maintain a level of dignity not often found round here.....
Oh bugger...
November 30th, 2024 16:52 - There, Are Ye Satisfied? (Cheeky Missy)
Take it easy, Missy. Don\'t overdo it. Not sure I\'ll ever feel hungry...
November 30th, 2024 16:33 - Flood (Cassie58)
Empathy aplenty from the east coast of Australia, as I try to decide when...
November 30th, 2024 09:03 - LATEST COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
If phantom farts were to be all the go,
Eat vegetarian then no one would...
November 30th, 2024 05:55 - Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett)
Yeh – the subtle connotations which can attach themselves to otherwise...
November 30th, 2024 05:39 - Amiable Andrew (Orchidee)
Wot a relief - hymns are definitely your forte,. orchi.
November 30th, 2024 05:25 - Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville)
En plein air?
November 30th, 2024 01:14 - Gossip (NafisaSB)
Having a wee bit of trouble with minions...but never mind, an old saw...
November 29th, 2024 21:43 - winter’s embrace (Arqios)
For me I try to extract something from a poem I\'ve read...but find it...
November 29th, 2024 17:34 - Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange)
This is the most all inclusive picture of Christmas as I\'ve ever tripped...
November 29th, 2024 17:23 - ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk)
Go Thad...
Imagery great -
Enjoyed it mate.
Please be there...
November 29th, 2024 17:08 - Bake Day Beth (Cassie58)
The kitchen smiled, the dishwasher worked overtime and the loader flaked...
November 29th, 2024 08:37 - A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity)
No, thanks for taking my efforts in the same direction seriously. These...
November 29th, 2024 08:13 - Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville)
Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some...
November 29th, 2024 07:01 - Buddha Says (Goldfinch60)
Seems like you are engaged in much reading lately, Andy, and if it means...
November 29th, 2024 06:29 - Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence)
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I...
November 29th, 2024 06:15 - A Thanksgiving Poem (Tristan Robert Lange)
Going to give this one a big miss lest I embroil myself in the mysteries...
November 28th, 2024 17:59 - ~> So Saith Brutus! - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Hey Ho Thad,
Brutus, it sounds like he could get upset.
Is that wot...
November 28th, 2024 17:35 - All American turkey (Sorenbarrett)
Am I looking at the same post? I felt that there was a subtle (not too...
November 28th, 2024 08:16 - Green Tangents (Neville)
Speaking of trees...it seems to me that the seasonal conflagrations which...
November 28th, 2024 08:08 - We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee)
Who gave \'em that name (whichever one it ended up being) anyway? You sure...
November 28th, 2024 07:55 - Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls (Cassie58)
It bought back learned images of boys up chimneys and the matchstick...
November 28th, 2024 07:49 - mateship’s duty of care (Arqios)
Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection...
November 28th, 2024 07:30 - Silent Poem (Orchidee)
Absence makes the heart grow fonder......And it would be fonder still if...
November 27th, 2024 16:19 - ~> A Voodoo Christmas (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad
Just a wee bit early for Christmas though:
Of course when...
November 27th, 2024 16:10 - Seen With Sadness (Cassie58)
It is apt that a poem via your sepia photograph should draw one back to a...
November 27th, 2024 15:49 - Farewell to Strangling (Rebellion_in_sanity)
The only solution was to career way the hell out of there.....
November 27th, 2024 05:58 - Writer\'s Cramp (Dan Williams)
\"Yet another plodding attempt at clever.\" - You\'re a masochist, ain\'t...
November 27th, 2024 05:49 - An Unreal Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Your only chance is to go back to sleep, Andy.
November 27th, 2024 05:40 - Unreasonable Logic (Neville)
Controlling others is far more self-validating than ….
I’d pop that...
November 27th, 2024 05:35 - UNKNOWN FACTS (Michael Edwards)
Facts - are there any?
November 27th, 2024 05:26 - Thousands (Tony36)
You\'fe said, or rather poemed it, Tony - thanks.
November 26th, 2024 20:24 - ~> Best Dressed, Halloween Contest! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
A roll about laugh this one:
Couldn’t’ stop
Thought I’d pop
Next...
November 26th, 2024 19:33 - ode to the broken dream (Arqios)
The rich quality of the dream I remember seems to fade gently, but the...
November 26th, 2024 19:12 - Labeled (Tristan Robert Lange)
Yet it is not the word itself but the long oftimes maggoty connotations...
November 26th, 2024 18:39 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
Unsure if you are in dialogue with a single person, an entity or existence...
November 26th, 2024 05:36 - Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60)
This is profound, Andy - has it an antecedent?
November 26th, 2024 05:27 - ~> Even Death Can Be Replaced! - A Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad
With her in charge the future looks quite black.
There’s...
November 25th, 2024 19:51 - Drip from the tap (Sorenbarrett)
Wonder if that guy sleeping on the bench in the park....... go Soren?
November 25th, 2024 09:06 - My Bike (Tony36)
Big tick for the bicycle - hopefully battery free?
November 25th, 2024 08:26 - KP Nuts (Orchidee)
Thanks orchi, Getting into acronyms, I see ....
November 25th, 2024 08:20 - near or far of love (Arqios)
Either/or... there\'s a dearth of information online, and I\'m not paying...
November 25th, 2024 08:13 - Love is a Noun (Tharun)
Yes - love is strong, long standing, abiding, not a transient infatuation.
November 25th, 2024 07:55 - Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
\"Just\" - Really?
November 25th, 2024 07:50 - Team Building (Neville)
I object to you placing this herein in an attempt to even hint that I...
November 25th, 2024 07:45 - ~> The Vampiress - in three poetic forms - (Thad Wilk)
Got me completely – I’ll shut up
I cannot follow – I will let...
November 24th, 2024 16:30 - Old Navigation. (Goldfinch60)
Well it is really good to know how it all began - I see we are up to date...
November 24th, 2024 05:46 - “Play It Again, Sam” (Arqios)
A fitting tribute to a movie in most of our memories... Oh Ingrid (sigh) -...
November 24th, 2024 05:29 - THE CARELESS CARPENTER (Michael Edwards)
I nearly missed this one the way you nearly missed the chisel, Michael....
November 24th, 2024 00:36 - Kindness and Absent Friends (Neville)
Nothing much to contribute here, Neville - our seasons being all...
November 23rd, 2024 18:36 - All Things Considered (Cassie58)
Wind chime music can be beautiful and satisfying. I unfortunately live too...
November 23rd, 2024 18:13 - Icecream Alley (Jerry Reynolds)
The icecream would have probably been off anyway, coming all that way from...
November 23rd, 2024 17:54 - The Flood (R. Gordon Zyne)
Flooding and subsequent loss is an experience of many now. You made the...
November 23rd, 2024 17:47 - ~> This Evil Clown - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
Howdo Thad,
Mate, you make it look too easy;
I’m scratching around all...
November 23rd, 2024 17:38 - Chopin Fantasy Impromptu. (Goldfinch60)
I do wish you wouldn\'t ask so many questions, Andy...😊👍
November 23rd, 2024 05:36 - Obtuse (EvenwheniLie)
Denial (particularly if it is in your best interests to do so)
November 23rd, 2024 05:14 - T & P (MendedFences27)
\"Stirring the pot again, hey? - Phil A.\"
November 23rd, 2024 04:58 - Pizza Fit for a Queen (Arqios)
A great informative piece which enhanced a little my shriveled knowledge...
November 22nd, 2024 22:47 - Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan)
I understand the need for your own small space, I have that now. My...
November 22nd, 2024 17:36 - awakening (haiku cluster) (Arqios)
Beyond that you cannot persuade me to like anything to do with snow, I...
November 22nd, 2024 17:15 - Life\'s Never Ending Span. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll vote for that, Andy.
November 22nd, 2024 17:04 - Personal Paroxysm (Tristan Robert Lange)
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of...
November 22nd, 2024 16:57 - ~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
Howdee Thad,
I really feel something amiss;
It just don’t fill me with...
November 22nd, 2024 16:44 - The Road (MendedFences27)
Thought you had gone beyond that and given up completely. Phil - no...
November 22nd, 2024 00:16 - Amaterasu (Neville)
Close quarters, without an intervening veil or mist can be uncomfortable...
November 21st, 2024 18:52
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