Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Instructions I Never Follow (Nev) This has proven so sometimes, and perhaps other times I\'ve chosen to...
  January 17th, 2026 00:27
• Crucible (Tristan Robert Lange) Only one question (I got a little claustrophobic, as I am wont to do, in...
  January 16th, 2026 17:43
• Tale of the Bucolic Buccaneer (Arqios) \"Pieces of apple, Pieces of apple\" - Obliquely took me back to playing...
  January 16th, 2026 17:24
• With Friends Like Me....... (Orchidee) Howl of ravening wolves in the night, dead horse\'s head in yer bed,...
  January 16th, 2026 17:12
• Swansong. (Goldfinch60) A fun, informative and heartening pin today Andy. Thanks for directing me...
  January 16th, 2026 17:01
• Sonnet to a Reese\'s (Matthew R. Callies) True sonnet form - which is a bit of a relief round here. Peanuts...
  January 16th, 2026 00:07
• Artifacts of Motion (Gray0328) A rich description of a life full of experiences as depicted in the well...
  January 15th, 2026 23:54
• Shattered Pieces (Paul Bell) An insight crept up unbidden as these can do, and hopefully the seed of...
  January 15th, 2026 18:05
• blisspoint (Arqios) It\'s just those moments, as I struggle through the mire of the mundane...
  January 15th, 2026 17:53
• Symphony Of Life. (Goldfinch60) As a thought I cannot fault it; though I know you only put the scotch in...
  January 15th, 2026 17:39
• persona non grata (Tristan Robert Lange) I wouldn’t call myself fearless by any means, but if a...
  January 14th, 2026 19:38
• He Happened to Her (M.E.M.) Followed her step by step easily. Sounds like she ended it (as she had...
  January 14th, 2026 19:24
• Mouse, you’re out! (Nicole Pritchard) Have known similar invasion. Just hope they can read poetry and take...
  January 13th, 2026 21:46
• Apostrophes (Doggerel Dave) Here\\\\\\\'s the way I\\\\\\\'m put upon
  January 13th, 2026 20:15
• Precious Life. (Goldfinch60) I\'ll try☺️
  January 13th, 2026 19:18
• Hear and Help (Orchidee) You telling me that God of yours is a bit tardy sometimes?
  January 13th, 2026 19:14
• con-flakes (Arqios) Ah - memories of childhood, and one of my father\'s favourite rants:...
  January 13th, 2026 19:01
• The Life in Your Years (Gray0328) All that measurement (birthdays etc) abandoned for the experiential...
  January 13th, 2026 18:45
• Inheritor Worm (Tristan Robert Lange) Technically brilliant, Tristan - how do you find the time?
  January 13th, 2026 18:39
• Sunday Aches (Thomas W Case) At one time Sunday always felt like doom was impending, and I felt that in...
  January 13th, 2026 10:44
• Never Done (Tristan Robert Lange) A transcendental trance I can almost experience through your words,...
  January 13th, 2026 00:09
• The song of the emigrant (Sami Mulaj) Well expressed. I can understand this, because to a much lesser degree...
  January 12th, 2026 23:52
• Magnetic Mind. (Goldfinch60) You don\'t need any Cognitive Behavioural Therapy, do you ,Andy - You\'re...
  January 12th, 2026 19:23
• The Scandal of Honesty (Tristan Robert Lange) Good read, Tristan. Organizations, corporations are mostly like that with...
  January 12th, 2026 02:06
• slowly turning (Arqios) Yes - I recognise this.... but then I\'ve been retired 25 years, while you...
  January 11th, 2026 07:54
• Leaders (NafisaSB) Not just your land, believe me. You nailed it. But is anyone listening?
  January 11th, 2026 00:14
• It\'s as you were (Kevin Hulme) Cold reality after festive cheer. As in your piece it slides back into our...
  January 11th, 2026 00:10
• Partner In Crime - Song Version 🎵 (Syd) Great stuff, Syd (join the lucky man club) - despite the slightly...
  January 10th, 2026 19:42
• The Parallax of Presentation (Tristan Robert Lange) Not going to investigate the mechanics of form, Tristan, as I don\'t...
  January 10th, 2026 19:38
• FASCISM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Missed this (despite the worthwhile capitalisation) definitely a fave as a...
  January 10th, 2026 18:45
• HOME SWEET HOME (Jerry Reynolds) Definitely reached the bone now? Or deeper still to go? This cuts through...
  January 9th, 2026 18:33
• Paying with my Time (NinjaGirl) Am I to decide precisely what you gave your time to? Or is that the point?
  January 9th, 2026 18:27
• descent (Arqios) As a side thought - the mountain didn\'t manage to get you on the way...
  January 9th, 2026 18:15
• Ogden Nash (Kevin Hulme) That is a piece on poetry/verse I can relate to. Seems I\'ve missed out on...
  January 9th, 2026 17:51
• The Death of I (Tristan Robert Lange) (It is being so cheerful wot keep you going, Tristan😂) Your structure...
  January 9th, 2026 15:59
• Big Things in 2026 (M.E.M.) A strategy well worth the effort, I feel. There have been points in my...
  January 9th, 2026 15:39
• The EX (Paul Bell) Charts attitudinal change with your usual dexterity.
  January 9th, 2026 05:21
• into stillness (Arqios) Years since rabbits got a good writeup. To place them in such a moment in...
  January 8th, 2026 20:28
• How Many....Before? (MendedFences27) Relax into it a little or give it up; them\'s your stark choices.....
  January 8th, 2026 17:34
• I survived (Maplespal) That\'s the way all life should be managed - work out your best choice and...
  January 8th, 2026 17:25
• Loneliness is loving you. (Chris Duffy) A relationship full of contradictions, Chris.
  January 8th, 2026 10:07
• Social Flu Shot (Matthew R. Callies) Have not the slightest idea what DMV stands for, but have a notion that...
  January 7th, 2026 21:02
• worm (Tristan Robert Lange) That worm certainly illustrated that Real Estate is not ultimate reality,...
  January 7th, 2026 17:16
• The White Snow Of Nature Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Your sonnet up to your usual impeccable standard, Andy... Nice to know you...
  January 7th, 2026 16:54
• snake incident, 3:14pm (Arqios) Perfect picture of ignorance and incompetence, there, Rik. Made for some...
  January 7th, 2026 08:28
• Palindrome (Andrew Deaton) Neat one.
  January 7th, 2026 05:10
• do i? (Tristan Robert Lange) I detest advice dispensed in poetic form to others, Tristan. However here...
  January 6th, 2026 21:53
• Finding Peace Of Mind. (Goldfinch60) Sorry to be a voice of dissent here Andy, but I find that to square the...
  January 6th, 2026 19:03
• The Golden Calf (Thomas W Case) \'Nothing will come of nothing\' - maybe that\'s out of context, but for...
  January 6th, 2026 01:03
• The Bottle (Paul Bell) You\'ve got the bottle to tell it like it is...
  January 5th, 2026 20:02
• Amid The Echo of Doves (Neville) Atmosphere there in spades; the cooing is enough, without the added...
  January 5th, 2026 19:56
• The Cork (Tristan Robert Lange) Aah Tristan, on initial reading this was the story of a cork which in the...
  January 5th, 2026 19:41
• Magnificat Munificence (Orchidee) Hasn\'t she had her baby yet? better hurry up - You must be exhausted...
  December 22nd, 2025 18:58
• Hannah (Paul Bell) Get yourself together and write a novel and/or short stories then find a...
  December 22nd, 2025 18:48
• Christmas (NafisaSB) Have a good festive season, Nafisa.
  December 21st, 2025 01:37
• The brand you buy (Sorenbarrett) Charity shops keep me sartorially elegant....
  December 20th, 2025 06:24
• Apathy. (Goldfinch60) Apathy or indifference is a perfect counter to attempts at control and is...
  December 19th, 2025 17:22
• Wear a Glove (Tristan Robert Lange) How difficult was it to obtain a blessing (subclass terminology), Tristan?...
  December 19th, 2025 17:00
• Teddy (Paul Bell) Teddy feels like an independent self willed being.....
  December 18th, 2025 17:01
• The Night the Dark Was Given a Map (Matthew R. Callies) A great sonnet writ about a lovely legend.
  December 18th, 2025 16:53
• The Year Santa Wore Mr. Bruno\'s Boots (Gray0328) The birth of scepticism in a young child - a landmark growth...
  December 17th, 2025 17:34
• I\'ve grown (Maplespal) Muscular and enigmatic your words may be, but they would describe much of...
  December 17th, 2025 17:28
• Solstices on the Meadow of Time (Jerry Reynolds) I now see the seasons like I\'ve never seen them before, Jerry , and from...
  December 16th, 2025 17:04
• Another Form of Abuse (Gray0328) \"calls it cleansing care\' \'care\' as real help in time of need, yes;...
  December 16th, 2025 16:55
• Heavenly Help (Orchidee) Reward/repay - slithery use of terminology here, Sire. Even as...
  December 16th, 2025 16:39
• Heart breaking (Sorenbarrett) A great tribute borne of experience of what must count as one of the most...
  December 16th, 2025 16:23
• Stuffed Peppers (Megan Blaney) Complete unto itself. defines/sketches your situation perfectly. Although...
  December 16th, 2025 16:09
• This Fight Chose Me (JBentley) Reality from the inside.
  December 14th, 2025 18:08
• winter palette (Arqios) Picture and piece in perfect harmony. Simple, very pleasing Rik.
  December 14th, 2025 08:02
• The Twelve days Of Christmas (Paul Bell) Methought there woz only one day of Christmas and dang me, I thought I\'d...
  December 14th, 2025 06:04
• The George. (Goldfinch60) Both evoked very good memories, rich with nostalgia and almost reduced me...
  December 14th, 2025 05:34
• The Greatest Commandments - OT/NT Series 15 (Orchidee) Always obey the eleventh commandment....😂
  December 14th, 2025 05:14
• Thorns In The Wilderness: The Rise Of Injustice (Oputa Samuel Daberechukwu) \"‎But wisdom was scarce and scanty,\" so you say and I\'m prepared to...
  December 14th, 2025 05:03
• Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love (Thomas W Case) An episodic sketch of a messy life, if not well lived, most certainly...
  December 13th, 2025 22:55
• Labyrinth for the Living (Tristan Robert Lange) Don\'t bother to thank me - all the work, the prodigious work Tristan,...
  December 13th, 2025 21:06
• Dream of the rich, nightmare of the poor (Sorenbarrett) Well placed Soren: Metaphor free, coherent – I’ll give you a...
  December 13th, 2025 20:28
• My thoughts (NafisaSB) Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel...
  December 13th, 2025 07:37
• Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down! (Friendship) Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very...
  December 12th, 2025 17:36
• Stillness Doesn’t Shout (Syd) Long spaces - they continue to get longer, for which I cannot be more...
  December 12th, 2025 17:25
• My body and You (NinjaGirl) Your trauma remains and causes much pain. (Beyond acknowledgement there...
  December 12th, 2025 17:16
• Lady Earth (Yazz) Open and shut case of rape, no question. Well poemed.
  December 12th, 2025 17:09
• Why (Vanna) Good question. So I would suggest you forget about you for a while. and...
  December 12th, 2025 07:20
• Bulldozer (Awam) No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The...
  December 12th, 2025 07:10
• Our Wonderful Game. (Goldfinch60) This is all very well, but wot about the rulz of the game in verse, much...
  December 12th, 2025 07:02
• Dead Or Living? - OT/NT Series 13 (Orchidee) \'Dead or living?\' You tell me.......
  December 12th, 2025 06:54
• The Mark (Sorenbarrett) Been there - squatting was never romantic or easy.
  December 12th, 2025 06:50
• Dragonflies (Megan Blaney) That last stanza speaks of a tragic misinterpretation. Was what could have...
  December 11th, 2025 22:15
• Lonely (Amethyste) Obviously bots is not the answer....
  December 11th, 2025 22:05
• I’m Cold, Why Won’t Anyone Care (Aaron Roberson) Could conceivably care if I knew the actual circumstances involved and...
  December 11th, 2025 22:02
• A Revolutionary Call (Jyoti Verma) I would hope this message (as is) has been spread much wider than the...
  December 11th, 2025 17:17
• Wandering (Sorenbarrett) I confess to that almost mystical pull exerted over me when close by the...
  December 11th, 2025 17:09
• the line (Tristan Robert Lange) Apprentice labyrinth (content though very relatable for me) Keep up the...
  December 11th, 2025 16:51
• One Night (M.E.M.) Sometimes, perhaps occasionally a one night stand can have a rare...
  December 11th, 2025 16:43
• Man\'s Infinite Appetite (Gray0328) Electronic babel and an infinite appetite for this.. Infinite stupidity...
  December 11th, 2025 16:36
• a story from my life or my life\'s story? (NinjaGirl) Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
  December 11th, 2025 00:12
• OO7 - Me? (Chris Duffy) 008 calling: Shift over sunshine , you\'ve been on the job too long, time...
  December 11th, 2025 00:10
• Poison Plant: Oleander (M.E.M.) So no point in advice relating to contact with police, medical...
  December 10th, 2025 18:24
• Aisle twenty four (Sorenbarrett) Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that...
  December 10th, 2025 06:16
• The Chuckle Brothers (Paul Bell) The veracity of your reportage is astounding. Each character given an...
  December 10th, 2025 06:08
• Dopamine Indulgence (Gray0328) Addictions (of so many kinds) do have their rewards short term....
  December 10th, 2025 01:22