Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- This Is My City (Tom Dylan)
I seem to have mentioned this before, Tom, but the impression it left in...
December 12th, 2024 18:19 - 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee)
Is that a progression or just progress, do you think? Despite all the...
December 12th, 2024 18:09 - Complicit (Rebellion_in_sanity)
As I try to write this one line, there\'s a clown on the radio who has...
December 12th, 2024 17:53 - Who Said I Had Anything to Add? (Cheeky Missy)
Your top sonnet is in just the right place, near Santas head - a realistic...
December 12th, 2024 17:43 - The Key (Tristan Robert Lange)
I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art,...
December 12th, 2024 17:32 - ~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk)
Excellent work once more (and I mean yours..) Thad -
Should the nose...
December 12th, 2024 17:25 - It Took Years (Thomas W Case)
You thought you knew it all and that it would never end.... the \'wisdom\'...
December 11th, 2024 22:30 - American Sport & English Poetry (Tom Dylan)
The odor of nationalism given a good spray of common sense and...
December 11th, 2024 17:56 - My Dog Got Loose This Morning (Teardrop)
It’s days like these…
I felt like the neighbour – I wasn’t...
December 11th, 2024 15:19 - `~ Read My Lips! ~` (Thad Wilk)
Give the dawg a chance, Thad:
I ain’t gonna be around here for long...
December 11th, 2024 14:56 - ~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse! (Thad Wilk)
Blood and gore all over the floor;
No culprit within a bull’s...
December 10th, 2024 15:16 - The Seeds were Sown (Dove)
I hesitate to write this, because......
Your smooth poem, so well...
December 10th, 2024 14:54 - Strategically Lost (Neville)
Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which...
December 10th, 2024 06:06 - Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan)
The main issue is having a secure roof, solid walls and foundations which...
December 10th, 2024 05:14 - Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence)
This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a...
December 10th, 2024 05:02 - We are not in Control (Ad Man) (Poetic Licence)
The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas.
I understand the...
December 9th, 2024 17:28 - ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk)
Hi Thad, read all about it - the full story here:
Ralphie is marking...
December 9th, 2024 17:15 - Driving Ambition (Cassie58)
That took me to a few places this morning:
Smooth poem which climbed...
December 9th, 2024 16:49 - Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A flow that\'s very meditative, Andy.
December 9th, 2024 09:24 - Paternity Test (Tom Dylan)
That single malt whisky - should go down as smooth as silk - with just two...
December 9th, 2024 09:17 - Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville)
I’m leaving the first; there’s too much of it about. Very little...
December 8th, 2024 18:05 - If I Knew THAT, I Wouldn\'t Be Here (Cheeky Missy)
What with having your foot (foot?) in your mouth whilst helping Robert out...
December 8th, 2024 17:37 - In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60)
Where I once lived, friends four doors down fed the birds (\'keats, cockys...
December 8th, 2024 16:22 - The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett)
Me? Imperfect.
December 8th, 2024 16:06 - Cure For Hiccups (Jerry Reynolds)
Stop
Breathing
Cure.
December 8th, 2024 16:02 - ~> Me And My Shadow (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad (not really, Is it?)
“The Devil take the...
December 8th, 2024 15:55 - Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan)
The most ingenious excuse for departure I\'ve come across, Tom. Moved on...
December 8th, 2024 00:57 - Tempus Fugit Once More (Kevin Hulme)
There right now - You speak a simple truth. You have it covered.
December 8th, 2024 00:23 - Can\'t Stand Those Bloody Kardashians (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You could just have something there.........................🤪
December 7th, 2024 17:28 - Reaching (Cassie58)
\'her voice rings out clear\' \"Who\'s nicked my bleedin shoe?\"...
December 7th, 2024 16:41 - a makar’s legacy (Arqios)
Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through...
December 7th, 2024 16:23 - ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk)
It\'s my day off -
But not to scoff.
Peace and take care, Thad.👍
December 7th, 2024 16:05 - UNLESS CONFIDENTIAL (Michael Edwards)
Backspace or delete anything funny;
Can\'t buy a pencil for love nor...
December 7th, 2024 07:58 - Possessed by a poet (EvenwheniLie)
That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
December 7th, 2024 07:49 - Bad Tempered Alf (Kevin Hulme)
A good larf...😂
December 6th, 2024 21:05 - Silly (2781)
Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with....
Occasionally necessary (...
December 6th, 2024 16:06 - What’s Shaken? (Jerry Reynolds)
Bit of local colour there, Jerry.
December 6th, 2024 15:56 - The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios)
A life form which has perfectly found its niche.
A poem which perfectly...
December 6th, 2024 15:54 - A Tale of Two Journeys (Tristan Robert Lange)
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable...
December 6th, 2024 15:43 - ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk)
Revlon resolved your emaciation;
Although wot about the...
December 6th, 2024 15:22 - Sunset and Wind Farms (Cassie58)
From the very first sighting I loved the look of those graceful structures...
December 6th, 2024 15:05 - Mother Nature is not innocent (EvenwheniLie)
Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans...
December 6th, 2024 07:12 - Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
I\'m not aware enough of the game or personal circumstances to know why...
December 6th, 2024 06:58 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
“Seek, and ye shall find” -there you go, I’m not a bible person, but...
December 6th, 2024 06:41 - Natural Art. (Goldfinch60)
Word artistry. You have a rich word brush when in the midst of unsullied...
December 6th, 2024 02:42 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Hush! Hush! Whisper who dares!
Christopher Robin is saying his...
December 5th, 2024 19:47 - Creation of Life (Poetic Licence)
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous...
December 5th, 2024 19:33 - Watched (Neville)
Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford....
December 5th, 2024 19:09 - ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk)
Thad:
How I feel about much love poetry is exemplified here:
So let’s...
December 5th, 2024 18:52 - Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange)
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22 - Hidden Garden (reverse nonet) (Arqios)
Can you register the form? In terms of the way a picture gets painted, a...
December 5th, 2024 18:04 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
Passing strange from you, Cassie: \"don’t hide what you’re saying...
December 5th, 2024 07:57 - Numbers (Tristan Robert Lange)
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take...
December 4th, 2024 19:22 - ~> Elephant Insemination Workers \"A Tribute To Them\" (Thad Wilk)
Ah ha, Thad,
I think I might run a sex education class for male elephants...
December 4th, 2024 15:27 - The Old Flat Cap. (Chris Duffy)
I seem to have missed some of your pastes here, Chris and I\'m not...
December 4th, 2024 14:59 - Who reads this rubbish? (Orchidee)
I\'d vote with Soren on this one; though I\'m not sure how far \'beyond\'...
December 4th, 2024 07:25 - Off I drove (Maplespal)
PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?
December 4th, 2024 07:03 - Children Of War (Poetic Licence)
No responsible parent should produce a child into a world where there is...
December 4th, 2024 06:37 - Close Shaves and Final Cuts (Neville)
Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the...
December 4th, 2024 06:29 - Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s nothing I could possibly add to that - your river is the winner,...
December 4th, 2024 06:01 - Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave)
I didn’t manage to include the other places I sometimes visit…
The...
December 4th, 2024 05:49 - Shanty (Neville)
Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out...
December 3rd, 2024 17:04 - ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk)
Thad, you got it made………
Funky monkey,
Texas nexus –
There, go...
December 3rd, 2024 16:35 - The Witches\' pool (FrasMac)
A complex tale told of a complex environment, and I liked it very much.
December 3rd, 2024 16:15 - Christmas May Pass Them By (Poetic Licence)
A rough hard look at modern Christmas. Great write.
As for the rest......
December 3rd, 2024 08:22 - A RIFT IN TIME (Rawaneigh.99)
The first three letters of your name sum up the feel of your poem...
December 3rd, 2024 00:18 - Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having a Bit Too Much Fun, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy)
Daffynately enjoyable on a number of levels. We\'ll keep the actual count...
December 2nd, 2024 16:58 - Signs of Things to Come (Neville)
Thought I\'d stay clear...didn\'t want to get confused.....
December 2nd, 2024 16:35 - where I could no longer go home (Arqios)
A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of...
December 2nd, 2024 16:23 - Now (2781)
Politician\'s delight...or lament?.....apology?... doubt it....
December 2nd, 2024 16:08 - When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58)
My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself,...
December 2nd, 2024 16:02 - ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk)
Some jobs don\'t bear thinking about -
I\'ve had enuf I\'m going...
December 2nd, 2024 15:57 - To The Gym. (Goldfinch60)
😜You do like to hand out the advice, don\'t ya.... and I resist...
December 2nd, 2024 08:06 - A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville)
Well then, where to from there?
December 2nd, 2024 07:49 - ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk)
Ralphie doesn\'t bear grudges,
But I bet he will tonight;
I\'d lock that...
December 1st, 2024 23:53 - The wedding (2781)
I have to say, sticking my neck out with a degree of ambivalence (story...
November 30th, 2024 18:12 - within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope) (Tristan Robert Lange)
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity...
November 30th, 2024 17:06 - ~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies (Thad Wilk)
I maintain a level of dignity not often found round here.....
Oh bugger...
November 30th, 2024 16:52 - There, Are Ye Satisfied? (Cheeky Missy)
Take it easy, Missy. Don\'t overdo it. Not sure I\'ll ever feel hungry...
November 30th, 2024 16:33 - Flood (Cassie58)
Empathy aplenty from the east coast of Australia, as I try to decide when...
November 30th, 2024 09:03 - LATEST COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
If phantom farts were to be all the go,
Eat vegetarian then no one would...
November 30th, 2024 05:55 - Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett)
Yeh – the subtle connotations which can attach themselves to otherwise...
November 30th, 2024 05:39 - Amiable Andrew (Orchidee)
Wot a relief - hymns are definitely your forte,. orchi.
November 30th, 2024 05:25 - Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville)
En plein air?
November 30th, 2024 01:14 - Gossip (NafisaSB)
Having a wee bit of trouble with minions...but never mind, an old saw...
November 29th, 2024 21:43 - winter’s embrace (Arqios)
For me I try to extract something from a poem I\'ve read...but find it...
November 29th, 2024 17:34 - Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange)
This is the most all inclusive picture of Christmas as I\'ve ever tripped...
November 29th, 2024 17:23 - ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk)
Go Thad...
Imagery great -
Enjoyed it mate.
Please be there...
November 29th, 2024 17:08 - Bake Day Beth (Cassie58)
The kitchen smiled, the dishwasher worked overtime and the loader flaked...
November 29th, 2024 08:37 - A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity)
No, thanks for taking my efforts in the same direction seriously. These...
November 29th, 2024 08:13 - Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville)
Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some...
November 29th, 2024 07:01 - Buddha Says (Goldfinch60)
Seems like you are engaged in much reading lately, Andy, and if it means...
November 29th, 2024 06:29 - Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence)
Sad it sounds, but by now a distant memory. Glad to know you survived. I...
November 29th, 2024 06:15 - A Thanksgiving Poem (Tristan Robert Lange)
Going to give this one a big miss lest I embroil myself in the mysteries...
November 28th, 2024 17:59 - ~> So Saith Brutus! - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Hey Ho Thad,
Brutus, it sounds like he could get upset.
Is that wot...
November 28th, 2024 17:35 - All American turkey (Sorenbarrett)
Am I looking at the same post? I felt that there was a subtle (not too...
November 28th, 2024 08:16 - Green Tangents (Neville)
Speaking of trees...it seems to me that the seasonal conflagrations which...
November 28th, 2024 08:08 - We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee)
Who gave \'em that name (whichever one it ended up being) anyway? You sure...
November 28th, 2024 07:55 - Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls (Cassie58)
It bought back learned images of boys up chimneys and the matchstick...
November 28th, 2024 07:49 - mateship’s duty of care (Arqios)
Kinship, mateship, brother doesn\'t necessarily have to imply a connection...
November 28th, 2024 07:30
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