Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Poor Satan sonnet (Sorenbarrett) Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these...
  June 30th, 2025 06:11
• \'C\' (NafisaSB) \'It can stand for the ‘Creative’ Who will let their ideas take...
  June 30th, 2025 05:48
• Very Hot Sun Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Got enough out of your poem today to stay warm for about a minute and a...
  June 29th, 2025 18:00
• Who Still Tells The Truth? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Superficial interactions everywhere.....
  June 29th, 2025 17:56
• Stasis Will Replace Us (Tristan Robert Lange) I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual...
  June 29th, 2025 17:49
• Anyone But You (MendedFences27) I hate to be a party pooper (yeh?) but as it was getting real, I\'d just...
  June 29th, 2025 17:31
• The Fight (Thomas W Case) A great write. I felt I was there. But well out of range and trouble...
  June 28th, 2025 23:16
• Fun With Jack. (Poetic Licence) Organisation is the key when moving. One hopes Jack was organised enough...
  June 28th, 2025 20:36
• The Judge (Tristan Robert Lange) Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they,...
  June 28th, 2025 20:24
• Whose playbook is this (EvenwheniLie) Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady...
  June 28th, 2025 17:20
• Time to Cry. (MendedFences27) Yes Phil, I confess to what in retrospect was a mild form - though I have...
  June 28th, 2025 17:09
• Bunnies, Tigers, and...Yeah. (Cheeky Missy) Nah - Gotta ask now. I\'m anxious for bunny. Not clear - did you take him...
  June 28th, 2025 16:55
• Ladies Day. (Goldfinch60) \"play up play up and play the game\" -You did and not a drop of blood...
  June 28th, 2025 09:20
• Dang it! (Orchidee) Has time lengthened and/or expanded as you became lost in four dimensional...
  June 28th, 2025 09:11
• Nauseous and funny (2781) Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
  June 28th, 2025 09:03
• Thunder from the throne (Sorenbarrett) Nothing is unchanging in the universe, so...... should either or both of...
  June 28th, 2025 08:57
• peel back the neon (Arqios) Surfaces and superficiality a constant of modern city life. To peer past...
  June 27th, 2025 20:48
• The Exorcist (Tristan Robert Lange) Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic...
  June 27th, 2025 20:28
• Don\'t mix them up (Sorenbarrett) One of those buggers are going to get you one day if you continue to carry...
  June 27th, 2025 20:11
• Haiku (Kevin Hulme) Can be - no doubt It\'s deceptively simple.
  June 27th, 2025 20:01
• Children Had Fun. (Poetic Licence) Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside! I do like to be beside the...
  June 27th, 2025 06:04
• apologies (Arqios) Elements here - kitchen, interaction felt very real. Again the smooth...
  June 26th, 2025 16:15
• Dixiemix Jazz Band A Symphony Of Soul. (Goldfinch60) A fine paean presented in relishing detail and a riot of rhyme. I felt...
  June 26th, 2025 02:04
• The P\'s of Poetry (Tristan Robert Lange) Alliterative masterpiece, You know where I stand on the
  June 25th, 2025 23:53
• maga (2781) Evidently world leaders are flocking to his throne. Great write, man.
  June 25th, 2025 23:44
• in Wordsworth was my father\'s voice (Arqios) I can say nothing of the relationship, but the smoothness of the write...
  June 25th, 2025 08:32
• Mary\'s Fun Life. (Poetic Licence) Seems they got it together without the aid of a marriage counselor after...
  June 25th, 2025 08:14
• Visit with a dream (Sorenbarrett) \'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich...
  June 25th, 2025 08:07
• The Reverend Smalls. (Kevin Hulme) A well rounded figure of a bygone era, the Reverend Smalls. Sorry I can\'t...
  June 25th, 2025 07:55
• Fine Croquet Day. (Goldfinch60) After a game of YOUR croquet I always feel that there might be a time when...
  June 24th, 2025 20:36
• Chuckles Week (Part 2). (Poetic Licence) Arsehole poetry.😆
  June 24th, 2025 20:29
• Talking more rubbish! (Orchidee) How dare you cast aspersions at the antipodean lifestyle like that. I am...
  June 24th, 2025 19:48
• Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence) Chuckle? All I see are profound truths. (And I\'ve neva been married........
  June 24th, 2025 19:40
• To Jail He Went. (Goldfinch60) A😆wise😅decision😂mate🤣.
  June 22nd, 2025 17:04
• Can\'t get out! (Orchidee) Your relationship with KP is obviously evolving...Neva read that KP...
  June 22nd, 2025 16:57
• You Just Know (Thomas W Case) Great yarn - more than well told.
  June 22nd, 2025 16:46
• The Answer is No (Tristan Robert Lange) I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function...
  June 22nd, 2025 02:13
• Fido wants to know (Orchidee) Got a feeling I have been pulled (or perhaps pushed) into a parallel...
  June 22nd, 2025 01:39
• unyielding eyes (Arqios) I really like your message, mate. Feels about right to me...However...
  June 21st, 2025 18:27
• Be the first (NafisaSB) Great advice really. It\'s just a shame I fail in so many and don\'t...
  June 21st, 2025 17:44
• I Don`t Have To Agree. (Poetic Licence) Let’s get our definitions clear here, can we? If that gun is real, then...
  June 21st, 2025 17:34
• The Longest Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up...
  June 21st, 2025 17:04
• Gloomy Doom heehee (Orchidee) I\'m full of empathy for you. Wot a surprise! But I feel full of misery...
  June 20th, 2025 20:18
• Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence) An image now filed under \'tools\' and incorporated into a part of me now....
  June 20th, 2025 18:27
• Of Rain, and Tea, and Secrets, Eh?! (Cheeky Missy) Cat\'s? Ambivalent relationship with same; rain I don\'t want to discuss....
  June 20th, 2025 01:10
• Baby Baby… (Doggerel Dave) Come on - depletion of resources, the environment, climate change,...
  June 19th, 2025 23:55
• Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange) .....And as you so rightly say, you got that out, didn\'t...
  June 19th, 2025 11:32
• Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange) Teensy bit peeved today, was yer?
  June 19th, 2025 11:28
• The Scarlet Muse (Kevin Hulme) You\'ve muscled in on a pile of muse poems which turn up here from time to...
  June 19th, 2025 02:32
• Where Does Time Go? (Goldfinch60) For me after many many tries finally gave up 27/12/86 the day I returned...
  June 19th, 2025 02:11
• Regrets (Jerry Reynolds) Hell yes jerry - but what actually happened was engaging and in some cases...
  June 18th, 2025 23:09
• Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence) Thought this was personal advice directed at a civil engineer tasked with...
  June 18th, 2025 19:29
• Random Thoughts (MendedFences27) Prof Google confirms the truth of your penultimate random thought. I would...
  June 18th, 2025 19:10
• In the Legs of Loss (Tristan Robert Lange) Didn\'t quite work out, huh? Underneath there I do understand, really....
  June 18th, 2025 07:47
• My Friend (Sorenbarrett) A life unencumbered by convention but rich in generosity. And your first...
  June 18th, 2025 07:33
• still the earth breathes (Arqios) A hymn of hope for this earth beyond my words. I leave it to Soren above...
  June 18th, 2025 07:21
• What a man is (Sorenbarrett) Well at least one man somewhere........ You definitely have a way with...
  June 17th, 2025 04:29
• wild horses on asphalt (Gray0328) In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. ...
  June 16th, 2025 18:08
• Perfect Life. (Poetic Licence) If (big IF) they are living the perfect life then the most superlative...
  June 16th, 2025 07:23
• More News (Doggerel Dave) Made it! Top of the pops at Trending Now. Won\'t last long - some...
  June 16th, 2025 05:18
• veil of the known (Arqios) As I\'m not well versed (oh dear) in metaphor, I only saw an abused river...
  June 15th, 2025 17:37
• Weeds (Tony Grannell) I feel weeds are only weeds if they are so defined as such. Perhaps the...
  June 15th, 2025 17:14
• Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day (Poetic Licence) I\'m not a dad, but I\'ve managed to laugh - they are quality corn.
  June 14th, 2025 23:09
• Conversation with a ghost (Jerry Reynolds) I think it\'s quite possible you made the right decision there,
  June 14th, 2025 18:18
• The Flag (Tristan Robert Lange) Unfurled indeed - Bullshit sliced diced and analysed here. It delivered...
  June 14th, 2025 18:12
• Mountain Men (Tony Grannell) Would you be very much offended if I opted out of a trip to your...
  June 14th, 2025 17:56
• a lad\'s cards (Arqios) Facinating. I never knew. In my day (I mean kiddie day) and inherited from...
  June 14th, 2025 17:24
• Musk Vs Trump (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Bored with the witless wonders without social skills - or would be if what...
  June 13th, 2025 17:01
• Since when was..... (Orchidee) Obvioously a letter from a totally different culture time and space. You...
  June 13th, 2025 16:55
• CONFIDENCE (Twizzle48) Much depth to a poem which is really engineered towards an argument I can...
  June 13th, 2025 06:10
• Summer (NafisaSB) Since the tea I am addicted to comes from India, I hesitate to upset you...
  June 13th, 2025 06:00
• The Maid (Sorenbarrett) Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through...
  June 13th, 2025 05:47
• Strawberry Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You\'ve got a way with sonnets that I admire greatly, Andy. Couldn\'t you...
  June 12th, 2025 17:37
• The World We Live In (Ezekiel Olayemi) As good a picture of modern society, its pressures and controls as I\'ve...
  June 12th, 2025 16:58
• Greggs Desciple. (Poetic Licence) Fat shaming are yer? Only joking - I don\'t understand obesity either.
  June 12th, 2025 16:51
• Spinning Hoops (Poetic Licence) Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand...
  June 11th, 2025 17:34
• Neighbor Reveals Why Police Recently Surrounded This Abandoned Home (Matthew R. Callies) Passivity and apathy, and anyway it is better to not get involved - Great...
  June 11th, 2025 17:23
• No, Guess I Musta Followed Peter Pan (Cheeky Missy) Wot only three? Too much food slowed you down? Was almost nearly a...
  June 9th, 2025 17:14
• We Evacuate To Where. (Poetic Licence) Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children...
  June 9th, 2025 16:59
• Cake and strawberries (Orchidee) All that gorging - sounds like displacement activity to me. From what are...
  June 9th, 2025 16:35
• Curiosity (Shahla Latifi) Nothing wrong with being alone, it can consolidate one\'s own identity....
  June 8th, 2025 18:04
• Three Topics (Shahla Latifi) Hard to respond to in one small box - however, the truth of it all shines...
  June 8th, 2025 17:42
• Calligraphy. (Goldfinch60) A poem a day, a walk by the river, a round or two of croquet and now cali...
  June 8th, 2025 17:29
• Cup o\' tea and....... (Orchidee) Provided you can limit your hyperglycemic indulgencies to those specific...
  June 8th, 2025 17:05
• Drear Love (Gray0328) I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
  June 8th, 2025 16:57
• The eyes of a lover (Tallisman) Used all your tale telling skills to draw me in Tallisman. Good to see...
  June 8th, 2025 16:50
• Jack and Jill (Poetic Licence) Too late for a marriage counsellor and veterinarian? Neva mind it takes...
  June 7th, 2025 17:56
• Damaged (Sorenbarrett) Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree...
  June 7th, 2025 17:46
• Once Upon The End of-- and...! (Cheeky Missy) The only commonalities I can feasibly find in your extraordinarily diverse...
  June 7th, 2025 17:32
• Judgment Day (Shahla Latifi) I feel privileged to read it, and to borrow from another faith\'s imagery,...
  June 7th, 2025 17:17
• Eating the moon (Orchidee) Leave the thing alone! It should be admired but not eaten; just like a...
  June 7th, 2025 16:57
• Act now (NafisaSB) I\'ll remember \'The tea/coffee may get cold But then you can add ice\'....
  June 7th, 2025 02:37
• Of Cold Pizza for Breakfast and Other Oddities (Cheeky Missy) And enjoy I did. I\'ve got to try Barry\'s tea one day - won\'t be a...
  June 7th, 2025 02:20
• Jogging Pete (Kevin Hulme) Well you could try getting those old dogs clipped🙃.... thoroughly...
  June 7th, 2025 02:01
• I need answers (Orchidee) No, yes, yes. No, no, no. Slept through it. Made up the difference in cost...
  June 6th, 2025 17:53
• Habit or addiction (Sorenbarrett) Most of what we ingest have therapeutic windows.... Good \'un Soren.
  June 5th, 2025 18:20
• Rome, Africa’s disobedient child (EvenwheniLie) Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly...
  June 5th, 2025 18:14
• False Impressions. (Poetic Licence) Are You sure??😉
  June 4th, 2025 16:55
• I Human (Kevin Hulme) Neva been asked so I\'m........*/%*$+*.... Bloody fuse has gone again....
  June 3rd, 2025 22:30
• Poam One Hundred and Twenty-Three. (Kevin Hulme) Best \'Muse Gone Bush\' (Aussi inf - gone away, missing) I think I\'ve...
  June 3rd, 2025 22:24