Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Grey Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Through all the mist and misery appeared......... not just optimism, but...
  December 13th, 2024 20:22
• Blind (2781) I think you have something there, but I can\'t see a way to comment on it...
  December 13th, 2024 19:57
• Once Upon A Time! (Thad Wilk) But a boner a day woulda kept Bowser happy: His master, she don’t have...
  December 13th, 2024 19:44
• One Out of Five (Tristan Robert Lange) This is rich and complex, Tristan. Seems your piece has thrown up many...
  December 13th, 2024 19:10
• Secrets (Rebellion_in_sanity) Depends on the secret, I suppose…. My feeling is that the excessive...
  December 13th, 2024 18:15
• Steps (NafisaSB) I missed your survivour dance - I\'ll catch up when I get the steps...
  December 12th, 2024 19:58
• Glimmer of Frost (Arqios) Beauty on a postcard; \'chills to the core\' - the reality . Noted that...
  December 12th, 2024 19:38
• Dementia’s Cruel Kiss (Neville) No \'me\' no \'I\' no........ \'soul\' ....nothing.
  December 12th, 2024 18:26
• This Is My City (Tom Dylan) I seem to have mentioned this before, Tom, but the impression it left in...
  December 12th, 2024 18:19
• 354 Presents - Doing the Maths! (Orchidee) Is that a progression or just progress, do you think? Despite all the...
  December 12th, 2024 18:09
• Complicit (Rebellion_in_sanity) As I try to write this one line, there\'s a clown on the radio who has...
  December 12th, 2024 17:53
• Who Said I Had Anything to Add? (Cheeky Missy) Your top sonnet is in just the right place, near Santas head - a realistic...
  December 12th, 2024 17:43
• The Key (Tristan Robert Lange) I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art,...
  December 12th, 2024 17:32
• ~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk) Excellent work once more (and I mean yours..) Thad - Should the nose...
  December 12th, 2024 17:25
• It Took Years (Thomas W Case) You thought you knew it all and that it would never end.... the \'wisdom\'...
  December 11th, 2024 22:30
• American Sport & English Poetry (Tom Dylan) The odor of nationalism given a good spray of common sense and...
  December 11th, 2024 17:56
• My Dog Got Loose This Morning (Teardrop) It’s days like these… I felt like the neighbour – I wasn’t...
  December 11th, 2024 15:19
• `~ Read My Lips! ~` (Thad Wilk) Give the dawg a chance, Thad: I ain’t gonna be around here for long...
  December 11th, 2024 14:56
• ~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse! (Thad Wilk) Blood and gore all over the floor; No culprit within a bull’s...
  December 10th, 2024 15:16
• The Seeds were Sown (Dove) I hesitate to write this, because...... Your smooth poem, so well...
  December 10th, 2024 14:54
• Strategically Lost (Neville) Right then Sir - if you persist. Cranberry is a really rich colour which...
  December 10th, 2024 06:06
• Reading Poetry (Tom Dylan) The main issue is having a secure roof, solid walls and foundations which...
  December 10th, 2024 05:14
• Imagianary Friends (Voices In My Head) (Poetic Licence) This feels very much like a psychosis (and I do hope Neville can lend a...
  December 10th, 2024 05:02
• We are not in Control (Ad Man) (Poetic Licence) The essence of much of Christmas in seven smart stanzas. I understand the...
  December 9th, 2024 17:28
• ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk) Hi Thad, read all about it - the full story here: Ralphie is marking...
  December 9th, 2024 17:15
• Driving Ambition (Cassie58) That took me to a few places this morning: Smooth poem which climbed...
  December 9th, 2024 16:49
• Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A flow that\'s very meditative, Andy.
  December 9th, 2024 09:24
• Paternity Test (Tom Dylan) That single malt whisky - should go down as smooth as silk - with just two...
  December 9th, 2024 09:17
• Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville) I’m leaving the first; there’s too much of it about. Very little...
  December 8th, 2024 18:05
• If I Knew THAT, I Wouldn\'t Be Here (Cheeky Missy) What with having your foot (foot?) in your mouth whilst helping Robert out...
  December 8th, 2024 17:37
• In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60) Where I once lived, friends four doors down fed the birds (\'keats, cockys...
  December 8th, 2024 16:22
• The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett) Me? Imperfect.
  December 8th, 2024 16:06
• Cure For Hiccups (Jerry Reynolds) Stop Breathing Cure.
  December 8th, 2024 16:02
• ~> Me And My Shadow (Thad Wilk) G’day Thad (not really, Is it?) “The Devil take the...
  December 8th, 2024 15:55
• Test. I am struggling to post. (Without The Words) (Tom Dylan) The most ingenious excuse for departure I\'ve come across, Tom. Moved on...
  December 8th, 2024 00:57
• Tempus Fugit Once More (Kevin Hulme) There right now - You speak a simple truth. You have it covered.
  December 8th, 2024 00:23
• Can\'t Stand Those Bloody Kardashians (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You could just have something there.........................🤪
  December 7th, 2024 17:28
• Reaching (Cassie58) \'her voice rings out clear\' \"Who\'s nicked my bleedin shoe?\"...
  December 7th, 2024 16:41
• a makar’s legacy (Arqios) Och aye - your makar does what good poets aspire to do - navigate through...
  December 7th, 2024 16:23
• ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk) It\'s my day off - But not to scoff. Peace and take care, Thad.👍
  December 7th, 2024 16:05
• UNLESS CONFIDENTIAL (Michael Edwards) Backspace or delete anything funny; Can\'t buy a pencil for love nor...
  December 7th, 2024 07:58
• Possessed by a poet (EvenwheniLie) That\'s the kind of poetry I like - truth and clarity. Well put.
  December 7th, 2024 07:49
• Bad Tempered Alf (Kevin Hulme) A good larf...😂
  December 6th, 2024 21:05
• Silly (2781) Wonder who\'s joke you are messing with.... Occasionally necessary (...
  December 6th, 2024 16:06
• What’s Shaken? (Jerry Reynolds) Bit of local colour there, Jerry.
  December 6th, 2024 15:56
• The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios) A life form which has perfectly found its niche. A poem which perfectly...
  December 6th, 2024 15:54
• A Tale of Two Journeys (Tristan Robert Lange) Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable...
  December 6th, 2024 15:43
• ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk) Revlon resolved your emaciation; Although wot about the...
  December 6th, 2024 15:22
• Sunset and Wind Farms (Cassie58) From the very first sighting I loved the look of those graceful structures...
  December 6th, 2024 15:05
• Mother Nature is not innocent (EvenwheniLie) Lovely piece of rhetoric, but really BS. The world evolved as did humans...
  December 6th, 2024 07:12
• Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence) I\'m not aware enough of the game or personal circumstances to know why...
  December 6th, 2024 06:58
• Hidden in Sight (Neville) “Seek, and ye shall find” -there you go, I’m not a bible person, but...
  December 6th, 2024 06:41
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) Word artistry. You have a rich word brush when in the midst of unsullied...
  December 6th, 2024 02:42
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Hush! Hush! Whisper who dares! Christopher Robin is saying his...
  December 5th, 2024 19:47
• Creation of Life (Poetic Licence) Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous...
  December 5th, 2024 19:33
• Watched (Neville) Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford....
  December 5th, 2024 19:09
• ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk) Thad: How I feel about much love poetry is exemplified here: So let’s...
  December 5th, 2024 18:52
• Crowing Time (Tristan Robert Lange) The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
  December 5th, 2024 18:22
• Hidden Garden (reverse nonet) (Arqios) Can you register the form? In terms of the way a picture gets painted, a...
  December 5th, 2024 18:04
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) Passing strange from you, Cassie: \"don’t hide what you’re saying...
  December 5th, 2024 07:57
• Numbers (Tristan Robert Lange) Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0. Take...
  December 4th, 2024 19:22
• ~> Elephant Insemination Workers \"A Tribute To Them\" (Thad Wilk) Ah ha, Thad, I think I might run a sex education class for male elephants...
  December 4th, 2024 15:27
• The Old Flat Cap. (Chris Duffy) I seem to have missed some of your pastes here, Chris and I\'m not...
  December 4th, 2024 14:59
• Who reads this rubbish? (Orchidee) I\'d vote with Soren on this one; though I\'m not sure how far \'beyond\'...
  December 4th, 2024 07:25
• Off I drove (Maplespal) PTSD, mate. Do you feel you are working through it here OK?
  December 4th, 2024 07:03
• Children Of War (Poetic Licence) No responsible parent should produce a child into a world where there is...
  December 4th, 2024 06:37
• Close Shaves and Final Cuts (Neville) Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the...
  December 4th, 2024 06:29
• Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60) There\'s nothing I could possibly add to that - your river is the winner,...
  December 4th, 2024 06:01
• Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave) I didn’t manage to include the other places I sometimes visit… The...
  December 4th, 2024 05:49
• Shanty (Neville) Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out...
  December 3rd, 2024 17:04
• ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk) Thad, you got it made……… Funky monkey, Texas nexus – There, go...
  December 3rd, 2024 16:35
• The Witches\' pool (FrasMac) A complex tale told of a complex environment, and I liked it very much.
  December 3rd, 2024 16:15
• Christmas May Pass Them By (Poetic Licence) A rough hard look at modern Christmas. Great write. As for the rest......
  December 3rd, 2024 08:22
• A RIFT IN TIME (Rawaneigh.99) The first three letters of your name sum up the feel of your poem...
  December 3rd, 2024 00:18
• Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having a Bit Too Much Fun, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) Daffynately enjoyable on a number of levels. We\'ll keep the actual count...
  December 2nd, 2024 16:58
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) Thought I\'d stay clear...didn\'t want to get confused.....
  December 2nd, 2024 16:35
• where I could no longer go home (Arqios) A polished write. ....I cannot relate that to myself but as a reminder of...
  December 2nd, 2024 16:23
• Now (2781) Politician\'s delight...or lament?.....apology?... doubt it....
  December 2nd, 2024 16:08
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself,...
  December 2nd, 2024 16:02
• ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk) Some jobs don\'t bear thinking about - I\'ve had enuf I\'m going...
  December 2nd, 2024 15:57
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) 😜You do like to hand out the advice, don\'t ya.... and I resist...
  December 2nd, 2024 08:06
• A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville) Well then, where to from there?
  December 2nd, 2024 07:49
• ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk) Ralphie doesn\'t bear grudges, But I bet he will tonight; I\'d lock that...
  December 1st, 2024 23:53
• The wedding (2781) I have to say, sticking my neck out with a degree of ambivalence (story...
  November 30th, 2024 18:12
• within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope) (Tristan Robert Lange) Thoughts on your piece, Tristan: 1. Stunning ingenuity...
  November 30th, 2024 17:06
• ~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies (Thad Wilk) I maintain a level of dignity not often found round here..... Oh bugger...
  November 30th, 2024 16:52
• There, Are Ye Satisfied? (Cheeky Missy) Take it easy, Missy. Don\'t overdo it. Not sure I\'ll ever feel hungry...
  November 30th, 2024 16:33
• Flood (Cassie58) Empathy aplenty from the east coast of Australia, as I try to decide when...
  November 30th, 2024 09:03
• LATEST COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) If phantom farts were to be all the go, Eat vegetarian then no one would...
  November 30th, 2024 05:55
• Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett) Yeh – the subtle connotations which can attach themselves to otherwise...
  November 30th, 2024 05:39
• Amiable Andrew (Orchidee) Wot a relief - hymns are definitely your forte,. orchi.
  November 30th, 2024 05:25
• Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville) En plein air?
  November 30th, 2024 01:14
• Gossip (NafisaSB) Having a wee bit of trouble with minions...but never mind, an old saw...
  November 29th, 2024 21:43
• winter’s embrace (Arqios) For me I try to extract something from a poem I\'ve read...but find it...
  November 29th, 2024 17:34
• Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange) This is the most all inclusive picture of Christmas as I\'ve ever tripped...
  November 29th, 2024 17:23
• ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk) Go Thad... Imagery great - Enjoyed it mate. Please be there...
  November 29th, 2024 17:08
• Bake Day Beth (Cassie58) The kitchen smiled, the dishwasher worked overtime and the loader flaked...
  November 29th, 2024 08:37
• A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity) No, thanks for taking my efforts in the same direction seriously. These...
  November 29th, 2024 08:13
• Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville) Never (or is that neva?) put it in writing - You never know what some...
  November 29th, 2024 07:01
• Buddha Says (Goldfinch60) Seems like you are engaged in much reading lately, Andy, and if it means...
  November 29th, 2024 06:29