Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- ~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad:
Now it seems for her you’d lost your cred;
But why did...
November 21st, 2024 18:08 - Architecture of Artifice (Tristan Robert Lange)
Prompts are something I\'ve never felt inclined to try. Can you convince...
November 21st, 2024 17:36 - Lockdown farewell (FrasMac)
I get it on one level, but on the other hand funeral for someone is really...
November 21st, 2024 04:27 - Oh, But Wouldn\'t You Like to Know? (Cheeky Missy)
Well what I wanna say is I intuit you are involved in a complex...
November 21st, 2024 04:20 - Pirates (Tony36)
Well dang me - you got better negotiating skills than many...
November 21st, 2024 00:11 - The Fall (Jerry Reynolds)
More \'unprecedented\' wild weather on the way, then Jerry?
November 21st, 2024 00:06 - Whenever (NafisaSB)
You have it made if you have mutually reliable relationships of what sound...
November 20th, 2024 23:58 - ~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk)
Modesty does not become you, tree-frog guy -
You got Thad going with his...
November 20th, 2024 20:52 - A Pirate From The Past (Cassie58)
Time passes; generational change, but continuity from the attic all neatly...
November 20th, 2024 18:10 - Snow Of Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Delightful - from a warm dwelling behind a clean window. Agreed under...
November 20th, 2024 09:06 - Crushed (Neville)
I\'ll go with the snow - or rather not.
Homeless? a careless society.
November 20th, 2024 08:58 - After the Army (Dan Williams)
Never been in the army (apart from schoolboy cadets) But as you point...
November 20th, 2024 08:50 - In Search of the Real Me (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Change is hard but that\'s no reason to be too hard on yourself. You...
November 20th, 2024 08:42 - Little bird (Sorenbarrett)
Now a memory, but a permanent part of you. Had a budgie in a cage as a...
November 20th, 2024 08:31 - We wait & Ahead (Maplespal)
Irony - nothing much to enjoy in the first, a clear gut wrenching picture.
November 20th, 2024 08:10 - Men\'s Mental Health Awareness Month (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Mental health is the poor relation when it comes to the budget, I feel....
November 20th, 2024 07:15 - Election Time is Here Again (Kevin Hulme)
Promises, promises - and the answer to your very last comments question:...
November 20th, 2024 00:15 - Laugh oneself blind (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ll pay that very last line for sure Soren, given my take on it....
November 19th, 2024 19:31 - A Losing Game (Cassie58)
You could, I think raise a wineglass without too much guilt as there were...
November 19th, 2024 19:22 - Archeology of Understanding (Arqios)
There are no time limits to those unexpected moments you mention in your...
November 19th, 2024 18:53 - order essay online cheap (Hannahwalters)
Need some material rewritten - how would I get in touch?
November 19th, 2024 18:30 - Her Presence is Heaven (Tharun)
I mostly don\'t respond to love poetry, But here the straightforward...
November 19th, 2024 02:36 - Culled (Neville)
A lengthy post would not cover this as immediately and comprehensively as...
November 19th, 2024 02:27 - My Granny wears her Pearls (FrasMac)
I feel richer for having met granny with all life\'s trials and...
November 18th, 2024 17:05 - Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60)
Was an anthem for me during the sixties and seventies. I wholeheartedly...
November 18th, 2024 16:42 - Yukiko Snow Child (Neville)
Not sure if I need to learn how to count or sign up for elocution...
November 18th, 2024 16:37 - Truth (Sorenbarrett)
A moveable feast, truth ....?
November 18th, 2024 16:30 - Getting To That Age (Tom Dylan)
Tell me about it....!
November 18th, 2024 16:25 - Jokers, Clowns, and Santa (Orchidee)
Mary should have found a different time of year to have a kid in that...
November 18th, 2024 16:14 - The God scope (EvenwheniLie)
We\'re here because we\'re here - That\'s all we can possibly know for...
November 18th, 2024 00:39 - Aha! Methinks I Spy A Chicken Clearly WITHOUT Its Head (Cheeky Missy)
My antennae really popped up when the topic of sleep came into view. I get...
November 17th, 2024 17:38 - ~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts! (Thad Wilk)
Presentation is All:
It’s all them customers to whom my bum is in...
November 17th, 2024 17:17 - When Words Bleed (Cassie58)
History is for me where all truth begins…. but not that early. Hard to...
November 17th, 2024 16:31 - A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville)
What happened, Neville? Having a good spew very much on those terms here...
November 17th, 2024 06:47 - Meanwhile.... (Orchidee)
Missed the last train home again did yer...nothing much left to do but...
November 17th, 2024 06:24 - The worst part & The waters\' view (Maplespal)
Might not be related, but they could both be categorised as disasters -...
November 17th, 2024 06:13 - Pirates’ Cove (Arqios)
And I\'d endorse yarns relating to the Golden Age of Piracy as well as...
November 17th, 2024 06:08 - Bonsai (Sorenbarrett)
For me it is tree by name only. Different entirely. Love and admire both....
November 16th, 2024 23:49 - ~> My Dawg Clyde! (Thad Wilk)
And once more with feeling, Thad:
Wot you’ve got there is a hound dog...
November 16th, 2024 18:41 - Our Universe (MendedFences27)
Yes, Phil; adolescence – infinity – dissociative state: been...
November 16th, 2024 17:45 - Selene of All Skies (Neville)
I\'m mooning away for more of her, and awaiting her return - she sounds...
November 16th, 2024 05:13 - Power (2781)
With you at \"Money is power, wealth a defence\". After that I was a...
November 16th, 2024 05:07 - Croquet Supper. (Goldfinch60)
\"Sometimes we even play croquet\" Sociability plus. 😊
November 16th, 2024 04:59 - RESIST (Tristan Robert Lange)
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31 - Fido speaks again (Orchidee)
Definitely a dog\'s life, orchi.
November 15th, 2024 19:56 - ~> Today Was Ma Lucky Day! (Thad Wilk)
How do, Thad
Her texting while you’re on the job ain’t no fun at...
November 15th, 2024 19:39 - The Trying (Kenny O\'Donnell)
If the underlying message is keep trying, pushing, then you\'ve got it...
November 15th, 2024 19:21 - No One / The Law (MendedFences27)
I admire your powerful commitment, Phil.
I have to ask, however, who\'s...
November 15th, 2024 19:10 - Essence (Neville)
An MPS centrefold....
November 15th, 2024 05:59 - 2 at once, enjoy (Maplespal)
Enjoy?? Really??
Never the less some rich imagery and prophetic...
November 15th, 2024 05:44 - This Is Me Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I think I do understand your position (though not necessarily entirely ...
November 15th, 2024 05:33 - The Look (Neville)
A smile - everything, access, a chance...or nothing. Little doubt which...
November 15th, 2024 05:25 - HATE (Tristan Robert Lange)
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate...
November 14th, 2024 16:36 - Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58)
I felt the depth of this. It lead me to wonder what of myself I should...
November 14th, 2024 16:26 - A word from Fido to me about Ch.... (Orchidee)
Carol is obviously your biggest fan, orchi - I\'d feel proud that someone...
November 14th, 2024 16:14 - ~`> If I Were Only One Inch Tall -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk)
One inch of nonsense goes a long long way
When the form is called...
November 14th, 2024 16:07 - They charge rent in heaven (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Well at least you sussed the joint out and made a fair and rational...
November 14th, 2024 15:39 - A restricted life (Maplespal)
Not much I can say either - other than \'sorry\'.
An insight into...
November 14th, 2024 07:23 - A Flash of Gordon (Arqios)
Worthy of a celebration mate - You\'ve done him proud.
Now I know he\'s...
November 14th, 2024 07:15 - Ants (Sorenbarrett)
In many ways, I\'d say.....
Worth thinking on, Soren.
November 14th, 2024 07:09 - Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60)
Nutrition facts
Sources include: USDA
Cream puff, eclair, iced
334...
November 14th, 2024 02:05 - If Only (MendedFences27)
Much propaganda glorifying war brainwashes.
Shrieks of horror at wars in...
November 14th, 2024 01:10 - I Am (Tony36)
I stumbled on this by accident. I\'m resistant to the method here (and you...
November 13th, 2024 23:24 - The Mingle Classes (Tom Dylan)
Fun not had by you along the way;
Up theirs is all I’d have to...
November 13th, 2024 18:21 - ~> Have No Fear, Santa Will Be Here! (Thad Wilk)
Never mind kiddo, Uncle Thad will get it sorted -
He’ll deliver your...
November 13th, 2024 18:18 - I told ya it\'s Ch....... (Orchidee)
Orchi - Is Carol the person you got two cards from? Sounds like she needs...
November 13th, 2024 17:05 - Romp (acrostic) (Sorenbarrett)
Did civilization come later??😜
November 13th, 2024 08:08 - Superfluous Twists (Neville)
The ignominy.....
November 13th, 2024 07:55 - The Colour of Void (Cassie58)
At that early time my life, it\'s structure and relationships seemed so...
November 13th, 2024 07:47 - Potato Time Travel (Arqios)
I really like the symbolic link between the past and Patrick\'s way of...
November 13th, 2024 07:39 - Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27)
\"You\'re fired!\"
😂
November 12th, 2024 18:54 - Friday Night Hockey (Tom Dylan)
As team games go, ice hockey certainly seems one of the wildest (from what...
November 12th, 2024 17:42 - ~^ No More L-S-D For Me! (Thad Wilk)
‘Came down fast enough to write a sonnet;
Or was it written by the...
November 12th, 2024 17:28 - The Sun Shone On Us Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
(Warning: Misery response): It peed down all day, and did not let up. You...
November 12th, 2024 05:01 - Unless We Try... (DesertWords)
Not a good day to be posting a reasoned piece on peace and war when a...
November 11th, 2024 15:42 - The Soldier he killed (Kevin Hulme)
Yes:
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides,...
November 11th, 2024 15:26 - Another November (Neville)
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both...
November 11th, 2024 15:18 - Scarlet Skirts (Cassie58)
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both...
November 11th, 2024 15:17 - Remembrances (Orchidee)
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both...
November 11th, 2024 15:14 - Scarlet Skirts (Cassie58)
Cassie! At last you are back! Warmest greetings.
Now in response...
November 11th, 2024 08:14 - SLAVERY (Tristan Robert Lange)
I do believe you are not that keen on the result of a recent...
November 11th, 2024 08:07 - Another November (Neville)
Can\'t knock that, Neville...and all the rest yesterday, today and...
November 11th, 2024 07:58 - Ode to the Flying Spaghetti Monster (Matthew R. Callies)
You Pastafarian, you. Has intelligent design ever been more laughable,...
November 11th, 2024 07:51 - Admonitions for a young or emerging poet (Arqios)
Very kind, generous and rich advice, Rik.
As a postscript, do you mind...
November 11th, 2024 07:39 - Todays task (Maplespal)
More than \'just a thought\' (singular), You cover the issues more...
November 11th, 2024 07:28 - Lying In The Dark. (Goldfinch60)
“Salud” - I\'ll \'fess up - I consulted Prof Google...and...Save me a...
November 11th, 2024 07:15 - my daily dose of humanity (Arqios)
Hear Hear - precisely.👍(to both of you..)
November 10th, 2024 16:17 - ~> Before I Start - brevity- (Thad Wilk)
Nah – I give it whack to see what happens;
‘It’s only a poem’ I...
November 10th, 2024 16:09 - The Song of the Ages: A History of Poetry (Matthew R. Callies)
Matthew - I\'m full of admiration for the works you give us here - you...
November 10th, 2024 06:01 - Dirt (Dan Williams)
Sorry, but it does not remain dirt, it is as in the lines above that and...
November 10th, 2024 05:39 - Fatal attraction (2781)
I was going alright with that - until you flunked it and blamed your...
November 10th, 2024 05:33 - Work Out Better Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
.............................................................. so go for...
November 10th, 2024 05:21 - Protect the babies (EvenwheniLie)
I still remain totally uncomprehending as to why people choose to bring a...
November 10th, 2024 05:17 - CHILDREN (Tristan Robert Lange)
Neat and concise is something I can handle - many thanks.
Sometimes it...
November 9th, 2024 15:58 - ~` SOLAR ECLIPSE `~ (Thad Wilk)
The relief to actually pass out of the shadows into \'brighter days,...
November 9th, 2024 15:47 - in vino veritas (Arqios)
Pissed again?
(Don\'t look at me in that tone of voice - this turned...
November 9th, 2024 05:28 - Emophilia (Neville)
Don\'t need to spend time with Prof Google. I spends too much time in the...
November 9th, 2024 05:21 - She, and Not Me. (Dan Williams)
Half of me admires the self deprecation, but the other half of me finds it...
November 9th, 2024 05:09 - The Dentist (Kevin Hulme)
I know little of the orthodontist. However I have visited my dentist...
November 8th, 2024 21:57 - Wilderness (Neville)
No fact you haven\'t disclosed there....like you locked yourself in your...
November 8th, 2024 18:42
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