Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Friends With Benefits (Neville)
A day at a time, Neville...a day at a time....
July 28th, 2024 07:48 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
At last! One of your hymns I can almost understand. I\'ll vote for that -...
July 28th, 2024 07:43 - Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60)
What happened there, Andy is that you momentarily shape shifted (or...
July 28th, 2024 07:36 - One Side of Still (Dan Williams)
An experienced moment. Perfect harmony.
July 28th, 2024 00:52 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
A complete word picture of a very sensible move - might follow your...
July 27th, 2024 23:59 - Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod)
Believe it or not, much of the spirit of your poem applies to me, (though...
July 27th, 2024 19:16 - ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk)
Any account which includes a proclamation that it is no lie is normally...
July 27th, 2024 19:03 - Outsiders (Neville)
Yes - both metaphor and reality inextricably locked together Neville.
To...
July 27th, 2024 08:06 - Ceremony (2781)
Now that\'s entertainment!!👍😂
July 27th, 2024 07:59 - Perfect (Sorenbarrett)
Well poemed there, Soren. Enjoyed very much.
Leadership (and I feel...
July 27th, 2024 07:54 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
Another of your pastoral pieces well executed, Andy.
Hold onto them...
July 27th, 2024 02:03 - Kindness. (Doggerel Dave)
To whom it may concern:
Celebrating this five minute piece momentarily at...
July 26th, 2024 22:48 - ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk)
Do not panic folks just because Shakespeare is spinning in his grave like...
July 26th, 2024 17:05 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
No insight, full of contradictions - like far too many people.
When Is...
July 26th, 2024 16:36 - Meadows (MendedFences27)
I see you smoothly transitioning through time with past memories trailing...
July 26th, 2024 16:22 - Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60)
Andy – I’ve been wanting to tell you for a while now. I received a...
July 26th, 2024 01:50 - Shadows (MendedFences27)
That piece has more substance than those shadows, Phil. And I hope they...
July 25th, 2024 18:44 - Unoriginal (2781)
Well, if an old joke , I\'ve never heard it before....so I\'ve got to keep...
July 25th, 2024 08:31 - The Pirate (Thomas W Case)
Thomas, I’m not quite sure you properly understand what a serious...
July 25th, 2024 08:15 - Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
Smooth, Andy. (Sometimes music doesn\'t need the video utube...
July 25th, 2024 08:00 - The Seat by the Fire (Tom Dylan)
How did you know, Tom? That time - The Chancer\'s Arms (I think), pint of...
July 25th, 2024 07:48 - Jokes for everyone (Sorenbarrett)
Not sure I fully understand this one (that ain\'t nothing new) Soren....
July 25th, 2024 07:37 - Proverb Pieces 6 (Orchidee)
See all those diagonal lines throughout your reply at14:45, orchi? That\'s...
July 24th, 2024 18:01 - ~*` At The End Of My Rainbow `*~ (Thad Wilk)
Don\'t knock the gold, Thad - you could make an absolute fortune in the...
July 24th, 2024 17:55 - Prison wall (Goli.Standbypoet)
Understood completely. Lives curtailed in so many ways even outside prison...
July 24th, 2024 17:44 - Light Bites (Neville)
So this spider, in conformity with modern taste, has dispensed with the...
July 24th, 2024 08:49 - Brick by boring brick (Gloria Denise)
I know....I like the concept \'brick by boring brick\" ...evidence of some...
July 24th, 2024 08:46 - Another Day Arrives. (Goldfinch60)
If you get up? Go on, Andy - make the effort, LOL.
July 24th, 2024 08:23 - Funny Weed (Sorenbarrett)
Lawn? Neighbours?....who are they? Cool, Man, I\'ll do them a service...
July 24th, 2024 08:11 - Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27)
Champagne is well covered here, and yes I\'d agree. but I continue to be...
July 23rd, 2024 19:56 - ~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk)
Poker and passion - no wonder you were royally flushed, Thad.
July 23rd, 2024 19:42 - Hurt. (Goldfinch60)
Andy: Hear Hear – Johnny Cash was/is one of the greats.
That song –...
July 23rd, 2024 19:13 - Flat Petulance (Villanelle) (Paul W Conway)
Could be (I say \'could be\') funniest villanelle on record.
Do hang in...
July 23rd, 2024 18:57 - False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville)
Bitter, or merely observation, Neville?
July 23rd, 2024 09:28 - Sex well done (Sorenbarrett)
As I ponder the worlds population….. but many arrived not without the...
July 23rd, 2024 09:23 - The Best Medicine (Tom Dylan)
Felt to me like you needed the potty............ ........Tom (keeping my...
July 23rd, 2024 09:04 - ~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
Bargains everywhere - cut price transgender procedure.😂
July 22nd, 2024 18:12 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
Rich in the rottenness of two existences. An even spread of misery.
Well...
July 22nd, 2024 07:17 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe, on occasion, someone needs to be told......
July 22nd, 2024 07:09 - A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
There may quite possibly be a relevant entry in DSM5 - ask Neville , he...
July 22nd, 2024 07:05 - Witness Of The Word (Orchidee)
The only word is \'Hello\' as the Prodigal Son returns....
July 22nd, 2024 07:00 - Batteries (2781)
I cannot find anything to add to that. Great summary of the shit values...
July 22nd, 2024 06:57 - Living Like Ghosts (Neville)
..... without any question re the source of those secrets (opinions -...
July 22nd, 2024 06:53 - Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard)
You are the only one that knows? You’ve well and truly blown your cover...
July 21st, 2024 20:17 - Chuang Tzu (Sorenbarrett)
I think I\'d be alright with him... Fosters spontaneity? Anti cultures,...
July 21st, 2024 10:07 - Scatterbrained (Jerry Reynolds)
And thoughts fly past at warp speed.....
July 21st, 2024 09:52 - ~.> Little Miss Muffet ( Parody ) (Thad Wilk)
Ah that\'s a shame - there could have been a whole new movie franchise on...
July 21st, 2024 09:48 - The Age Of Innocence. (Goldfinch60)
Good point, Andy........ But it isn\'t, is it?
You paint a good picture,...
July 21st, 2024 02:27 - Glory Be! (Orchidee)
As in \"Glory be! the Prodigal Son has returned!???\"
July 21st, 2024 02:23 - I Will Rise (Thomas W Case)
The increasing strength gained from small beginnings.
Familiar experience...
July 20th, 2024 23:53 - My Main Mission (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
\"Demented to think we live in a democracy\"
Without going into a multi...
July 20th, 2024 17:27 - An Old Man all Over (Thoughtless)
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with...
July 20th, 2024 17:05 - Tissue Paper Hearts (Thoughtless)
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from...
July 20th, 2024 16:53 - Shrapnel in the Snow (Thoughtless)
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t...
July 20th, 2024 16:43 - Polite Enquiry: (Doggerel Dave)
I\'d like to plot the number of moves you\'ve made to avoid the Prodigal...
July 20th, 2024 06:21 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
Surely then it\'s time to focus on (wait for it!) The Prodigal Son......?
July 20th, 2024 06:01 - ~> I Can Explain Dis! (Thad Wilk)
Udder cat obviously has a propensity for lateral thinking.
It was a worry...
July 19th, 2024 18:13 - The Coronation of Trump (Raidoc)
I do hope reflection becomes the order of the day. Needed in large...
July 19th, 2024 17:48 - Is anybody out there? (2781)
I can easily read that without religious connotations; and having read can...
July 19th, 2024 07:47 - I React (Bella Shepard)
Can’t answer for you in the big bad world out there, Bella, but here at...
July 18th, 2024 20:29 - CUT THE CRAP ! (Sheryffat)
Seems to be several themes in your poem. And I’m of course unsure of the...
July 18th, 2024 20:21 - ~> It Was, A Female Fly (Thad Wilk)
I found it fun: but with the honourable exception of Cassie above, you\'ve...
July 18th, 2024 20:06 - The mob at a politician’s door (EvenwheniLie)
Promises, promises... A man for all seasons bullshit. Well writ.
July 18th, 2024 19:19 - If Your Face Doesn’t Fit (Cassie58)
Your verses always flow smoothly through for me, Cassie. And this one is...
July 18th, 2024 19:15 - The gospel according to Paul (2781)
Two points: I very nearly gave this a miss because I’ve been dealing...
July 18th, 2024 02:47 - Three Poppies (Neville)
Beautifully symbolic, Neville. The general stupidities which caused the...
July 18th, 2024 02:37 - ~> Tiny Todd My Diddle Wad (children\'s story) (Thad Wilk)
Take it easy, Thad the -writer, you\'ll be having me see them little...
July 17th, 2024 19:19 - Welcome to Miami (Neville)
A close comfortable encounter of the country kind continued with no...
July 17th, 2024 08:00 - Infinite (Bella Shepard)
Just enjoy, Bella. There\'s no knowing what it\'s all about really.
The...
July 16th, 2024 19:00 - Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave)
The Guardian has been elaborating on the theme....
July 16th, 2024 18:47 - Friends, Republicans, Countrymen (Sorenbarrett)
For days in far off Oz the airwaves have been clogged with accounts,...
July 16th, 2024 18:16 - ~> Growing Older ( thoughts ) (Thad Wilk)
Got that right Thad.- Every day on the news I hear of folks who checked...
July 16th, 2024 07:56 - The Flaming Obvious. (Goldfinch60)
You are irresistible, Andy. They want to chat you up. You gotta mention...
July 16th, 2024 07:49 - Trebrimar (Neville)
Google ducked out when it came to Trebrimar. Little matter...I\'ve...
July 16th, 2024 07:36 - Timeless (Sorenbarrett)
Another memory: My grandmother owned a very old, battered bedside clock...
July 15th, 2024 18:10 - What Else is A Metaphor (Neville)
Line one: I do, often.
Line Two: Now when I worked at Bletchley Park…....
July 15th, 2024 17:45 - If I was A Mirror (Teddy.15)
Nothing like some positive self talk, Teddy. A strong foundation with...
July 15th, 2024 17:31 - What\'s your story, Morning glory? (Weep little lion girl)
Not too crazy, not too whiny - By the time you hit mid twenties it will...
July 15th, 2024 17:26 - ~> Lets All Join Hands For Peace (Thad Wilk)
I do hope you are right, Thad. It\'s getting just a little scary over...
July 15th, 2024 00:51 - Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58)
With some smooth rich poetry you bring us to absolute reality with
\"no...
July 14th, 2024 17:50 - Moonlight (Bella Shepard)
Great work by your granddaughter, Bella. Now both you and she should get...
July 14th, 2024 17:38 - Bag Lady. (Goldfinch60)
And some folks are at a loss with what to do with their time when they...
July 14th, 2024 06:17 - What\'s up doc (2781)
Nearly......
July 14th, 2024 06:07 - HOPE OR ROPE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A cannot remotely hope to understand the anguish you must feel with...
July 14th, 2024 06:04 - Over Easy (Neville)
Be prepared, that\'s the Girl Guide\'s marching song...
(Apologies to Tom...
July 14th, 2024 01:05 - Nicky no friends (2781)
I enjoyed this even as I lost my grip a couple of times....
July 13th, 2024 17:31 - The Way of Us (Neville)
I\'m a nothing speck in eternity or infinity. Unremembered, unremarkable....
July 13th, 2024 17:17 - ~* Cinder My Pussycat (Thad Wilk)
My (non-resident) partner took in an emaciated bedraggled cat who...
July 13th, 2024 17:06 - A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case)
Feels like inspiration ain\'t...hard...to come by. Well writ Thomas.
July 13th, 2024 06:23 - Sheep Story (Orchidee)
Didn\'t the Prodigal Son show more initiative?
July 13th, 2024 06:17 - Living In A Quieter World. (Goldfinch60)
Ditto difficulties, it is recorded (please Google) experienced with people...
July 13th, 2024 06:11 - What Women Want (Neville)
Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion,...
July 12th, 2024 18:19 - ~> She Shan\'t Forget That Day (Thad Wilk)
Shakespeare not just turning, but spinning in his grave…. That energy...
July 12th, 2024 17:58 - On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15)
Fire ignited years ago - I don\'t think it\'s magnificent, but is...
July 12th, 2024 17:45 - WFH (Tom Dylan)
Hard to know what you actually do, Tom to induce the office to cough up on...
July 12th, 2024 09:06 - MY GENDER (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Gender inequality everywhere. Just a matter of degree...
July 12th, 2024 02:18 - Summer Love (MendedFences27)
Petty pulchritude? Hot holiday hedonism. Raw reality.
Enjoyed once I...
July 12th, 2024 02:03 - My Two Cents Worth (Accidental Poet)
Spend it wisely or start a revolution, AP.
July 12th, 2024 01:44 - I Fell in Love with a Dream (Thomas W Case)
Succinct and sad.
July 12th, 2024 01:41 - COWARD ( EXECUTED WW1 ) (Nephilim56)
I can remember a time, many years ago when I dwelt on this topic a lot....
July 11th, 2024 19:35
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